Hey guys and girls. Making a planche for a school project, but

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>>236968
what are words?

>>236970
The thing is in danish and they have to be there.

Ofcourse they could be arranged differently.

>>236971
Am I the only confused by your request? Are you asking us for tips on the design or to add more bulletpoints about Rainforests? Even though only a minority of us knows what the bulletpoints say right now.

Not trying to push you off, but I have a hard time understanding your request.

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>>236974
Just mainly looking for tips on the layout itself

I.e Text should be placed different, or more rectangles are needed.

just FYI the planche is about the Rainforest and how deforestation is critical to the climate on earth.

This is what I made now, i'm just trying things out.

>>236968
title do not catch attention enough, there is no real composition.
also this >>236974

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>>236979
Tried changing the text up a bit, changing the fonts and such

Thoughts?

>>236982
Better
Is this the only text you have ? maybe you should show more about deforestatation, because this look like every random ecologic communication

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>>236982
>lose the bevel on the white bullets
>give everything more room from the art board edges (margins)
>maybe add an additional color to make it a bit more interesting

>>236982
Add pictures of deforesting gore, tree massacre and forest terrorism. Also, the tree and and the square aren't the same color right now, and I would advise against a lower opacity as overlap gets a different color then. And yeah, make the bullets plain white, maybe add the same kind of drop shadow as the title has, but not sure if that will work.

>>236983
I am in the making of a graph showing how much rainforest is lost every year, that will be added aswell

Pictures.