Help me out /fa/

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this is kind of the aesthetic of the mixtape

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this is the rough cut of the cover art

The pure white shirts look like shit.

The jacket is nice but reverse the splat colors on one of the sides if you are going for a gun shot vibe. Also use the cross letters instead of to be titled on the back

Hat is pretty good.

Off white tee the back is kinda shit but can improve with some changes.

In general the off white red blue scheme is really strong.

>>11348392
Lose the "YZY" text on the shoe and add the lines on the outsole. It will make the art stronger.

The design of the cover overall is bland. Maybe have him actually in a space instead of just floating in a white void. But it should be a very simple line drawing. You could even be cheeky and have him sitting on the parental advisory logo.


Visit /gd/. They can help guide you a bit.

I think you need a change of font. This one looks really cheap. If you want people to take you serious I'd recommend a different one. Whats your soundcloud btw?

>>11348401
>>11348412
Awesome advice guys, thank you

>>11348419
https://soundcloud.com/yourboyhennyd

Literally not worth listening to right now, only one joke track my friends and I wrote produced and recorded in under an hour.

The mixtape is a lot better and 12 tracks- june 30th

autopsy said a nigga mash

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>>11348412
very very rough edited concept

>>11348478
I have a few random ideas
1) have him sit on a needle of a record player
2) your hometown's or city's landmark (the more random the better) like VIEWS
3) space/ galaxy like >>11348412 said