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>>7482347
>780x3780

>>>/tg/53818562

Ignore >>7482380, use >>>/tg/53818665 instead.

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Posting MUW.

Anyone have the resident evil infected cyoa?

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>>7482389

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>>7482394

>>7482375

Free soul to start with (+1/1)
Light beating (+1/2)
Collar (+1/3)
Force feeding (+1/4)
Gentle breathplay (+1/5)
Non consensual sex (+1/6)
Not so gentle breathplay (+2/8)
Not at all gentle breathplay (+3/11)
Body worship (+3/14)
Face sitting (+2/16)

Be the dominant (-5/11)
Most rich person in country (-3/8)
Harem (No cost, apparently?) [Total of three women.]
Customize personality (-1/7) [She's strong/confident/classy in public, but is a submissive masochist privately - she enjoys it. Likes sharing me with other members of harem and reinforcing whatever degenerate roles I've assigned to each member. Will help me find other subs to temporarily include in their group, but never permanently. Also facefucking because always, always facefucking.]
Shapeshifting (-2/5)
I don't want to be in this world anymore (-1/4) [This world is bullshit. Maybe we could kill each other a little less? I'm just throwing that out there. Everyone has an innate desire to spend some fraction of their effort to help make the world a better place. Yes, according to whatever my own narrow-minded definition of "a better place" is.]
Superhuman speed (-1/3)
Superhuman intelligence (-1/2)
Superhuman regeneration (-1/1)
Superhuman health (-1/0) [disease resistance, graceful ageing, etc.]
Superhuman strength not chosen, don't want to permanently hurt anyone during BDSM/breath play.

>>7482389

Sure, I'll bite. Normal mode.
Money, tier 2 (-5/-5)
Immortality, tier 2 (-6/-11)
Beauty (-2/-13)
Hearth and home, tier 2 (-3/-16)
Comfort (-2/-18)
Luck, tier 2 (-7/-25)

Appearance: Shallow as fuck (-2/-27)

Delusional (+1/-26)
Narcissist (+1/-25)
Exhibitionist, tier 2 (+2/-23)
Twin sister (+1/-22)
Favorite toy, tier 2 (+2/-20) [collar/leash]
Piercings (+1/-19)
Fertility, Tier 0
Snug fit (+1/-18)
Desserts (+1/-17) [breast milk]
NEET (+1/-16)
Sleepyhead (+1/-15)
Phone sex (+1/-14)
Favorite color (+1/-13) [blue]
Super masochist (+1/-12)
Let Go! (+1/-11)
Milk lover (+1/-10)
Horny (+1/-9)
Milking (+1/-8)
Daddy Issues (+1/-7)
Hungry (+1/-6)
Sweaty (+1/-5)
Junkie (+1/-4) [pot]
Favorite Hole (+1/-3) [mouth]
Sensitive (+1/-2)
Blunt (+1/-1)
Unique Style (+1/0)

For "argumentative anons" in last thread.

Lewd (subconsciously)
Catgirl (good at naps, better sleep, sensitive ears and tail)
Immortality through making people happy
Pleasant girl, ignore tastes, (No preg, STIs, or period, can turn straight girls)
Shampoo of headpats, (People are inclined to reward me with petting, feels amazing)
Gloves of flexibility (tendency to do things in fun bendy ways)
Ropes of arousal (Stronger orgasms when tied up, cat’s gotta have her twine)
Feminisation (gets used to female body, start thinking of sex with boys as more normal than sex with girls)
No release (at least, not without some help)
Good girl (super strong conscience)
(Boarding) School – Supernatural (Academy of Monsters and Mages)
Friend – Trainer (Fit monstergirl roomie who makes me exercise and spar with her)
Sibling – M-me? (The one who did all of this to me, but plans to spoil me and show me off)

I wasn’t arguing, I was just lurking, but saying so apparently counted as arguing, so…

I got turned into a teenage cat-girl, immortal, with a few other quirks, and a handful of magic artifacts, at a boarding school full of other strange and supernatural people.

I miss my family, my old family, big sis said they won’t remember me, so that’s a mercy, and yeah, I can settle in here, I know I’ll be happy about it in a few weeks. I shouted at her about plucking me out of my life, without asking but, I get so guilty about being mean now, I just started sobbing, and let her hold me. Do you know what it’s like to hate someone but desperately hope they won’t let go?

Then she started stroking my head, running her fingertips down the base of my ears. I stiffened, annoyed again, but she kept on petting me, and a warm pleasure twitched my ears. I didn’t know I could purr, but it’s like this deep, low tremor runs through my body, and I just knew things would be okay.

>>7482389
>>7482392
>>7482394
Is it possible to have Twin sister but set them each up with different quirks?

Like, only getting 1/2 point for each quirk, but being able to customize each one individually?

Because there are some really fun combos that I want to take, like having one with Milk Lover and one with Milking, or one with with Favorite Hole - Anal and one with Favorite Hole - Oral.

>>7482547
You can diverge on three quirks.

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>>7482389
>>7482392
>>7482394
>not posting the newest version
TokHaar's Google Drive is listed in the pastebin, so you don't even have an excuse.

Page 1/3.

>>7482547
The author made an updated version where each of them were allowed 3 unique perks to themselves in the case of twins/tripplets, but whomever keeps reposting this isn't posting the newest version.

I don't have said newest version saved to post myself.

You can probably just make your build anyway, possibly an additional rulebend where there's that original cap of 2-3 unique physical quirks, but I think it's perfectly reasonable to give them whatever different personal quirks you like.

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>>7482579
Page 2/3.

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>>7482583
Page 3/3.

>>7482348
Small, Horny, Nudist, Clumsy, Stacked
Cute, Nimble, Sensitive
Sex Toy

I wound up captured by a powerful lesbian Sorceress with a taste for BDSM and a tegular need for Goblin fluids as an alchemy ingredient. I'm now her lassistant," which mostly means I'm her guinea pig and favorite thing to torment. She loves finding any excuse to punish me, and "rewards" me by binding me with her magic and forcing me to orgasm into unconsciousness.

Not the worst life a little Goblin can have, I suppose.

>>7482547
Not mine, but I don't think so.

I'd love to have one futa and one female, one meek and one bossy, etc

>>7482579
>>7482582
Yeah, I just grabbed it from the previous thread.

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>>7482674
>>7482678
>making the CYOA smol
>keeping it in two pages
Have a bigger one. Page1/2.

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>>7482698
Page 2/2.

>>7482570
Well, three is certainly better than none, I suppose.

>Normal Mode
>Divergent perks (3)
Waifu 1
>Favorite Hole - Oral
>Neet
>Cum Addict
Waifu 2
>Favorite Hole - Anal
>Meek
>Milking

>Twin Sister (4)
>High Libido +1 (5)
>Clingy (6)
>Sex Marathon (7)
>Favorite toy 2 - Leather choker (9)
>Fertility 0 (9)
>Snug Fit (10) (Only one dick, but two girls who both want to be sitting on it. I'm a genius.)
>Cum Plugged (11)
>Desserts - sexual fluids (12) (No saliva? I'm disappointed)
>Nightmares (13) (I can let Zynthia have some fun every once in a while, at least until she gets a husbando of her own.
>Milk Lover (14)
>Scarred (15)
>Sensitive (16)
>Futanari (17)
>Exhibitonist (18)

>Picky (number 11) (17)
>Immortality 2 (11)
>Money 2 (6)
>Adventure - High Fantasy (3)
>Change (0)
I wish that over the course of the next two decades, sexy monstergirls of all kinds will appear all across the world, with a total population at the end equal to the human race's population. While their diet and caloric intake varies based on the species, they require significantly less food than a being of their size and activity level normally would. They are aroused by the smell of human pheromones, and are very willing to share mates, both with each other and with other humans that are in a relationship with their mate.

They will claim mates through a process where they hold hands with and tenderly kiss the human while bringing the human to orgasm. A mated monstergirl is from then on only affected by the pheromones of the human she's mated to, and is mentally linked to also become aroused whenever her mate is. All species can breed with humans, and give birth to monstergirls, human males, and human females, in ratios that preserve the 2:1:1 split within a 5% range of error. It is possible for monstergirls to rarely be born with both sets of functioning genitals, and they are both able to impregnate and be impregnated by humans, although they cannot successfully impregnate monstergirls.

Does anyone have the mind control CYOA?

>>7482756
You'll have to be a bit more specific than that.

It was one created recently, within the last two months. Had different forms of mind control, from telepathicly, contracts, branding, etc. Had different ways it took place: if they keep their personality during the process or even noticed it was happening at all. And then had different boons you could add to the mind controled people.

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>>7482768
Probably this, then. Page 1/3.

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>>7482773
Page 2/3.

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>>7482774
Page 3/3.

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Posted some answers to questions about my CYOA in the last thread.

>>7482772


>>7482756
I do, in fact. Mind control is the best. I'll repost mine and post that one right after.

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>>7482756
Have the original Mind Control CYOA anyway.

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>>7482786

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>>7482790
This is the incomplete final page which should fit right here.

>>7482786
>I'll repost mine and post that one right after.
The one that was requested has already been posted, from what I can tell.

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>>7482791
Drawbacks page, this is done now.

>>7482792
Ha, nope. The real one is pretty long. That was a prototype or something.

>>7482352
>Collar

>Endocrine Control
>Stockholm syndrome
>Maid
>Love Potion
>Addict
>Orgasm

>Sam
>Aubree
>Kirrie
>Jill

Who says a slavemaster can't have morals? I'm only taking the girls who genuinely want me to, not taking any slaves in the future unless they ask me to, and I'm going to use the full extent of my powers to make them all as happy and loved as possible.

Fuck you, anonymous narrator dude.

>>7482795
Are you talking about this one?
>>7482787
I would post a more complete version, but ... it's a pdf.

>>7482756
>>7482787
>>7482800
I thought I had it, and I do, but it's all chopped up because I got it from someone's porn story rather than a CYOA thread. the pdf is probably better. Someone can break it down into pictures and post it, I'm sure.

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>>7482787

>>7482786
>>7482789
>>7482790
>>7482791
>>7482795
Is this going to get pdfed or consolidated at any point? Five pages is quite sizable for a non pdf cyoa

>>7482803
MCCYOAA was notorious for two things.

1. The Disney Princess fiasco

2. Making his cyoa ridiculously wide, to the point where inline expansion makes it unreadable.

You have to open it in a new tab and scroll horizontally.

>>7482803
The original is too big for /d/, so I tried to make it smaller ... and overdid it, it seems.

>>7482795
>Ha, nope.
No, this is the full CYOA:
>>7482773
>>7482774
>>7482775
Remember that the request CYOA was specified to have been made within the last two months. This one was made early last month.

>>7482802
There you go, the pdf:
>>>/tg/53823506

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>>7482804
Honestly hadn't thought about it. I just make these in clip studio paint. I had to buy it for work, so might as well use it.

>>7482813
I'm pretty sure they're talking about this one, but I don't have all of it. It's super duper long.

>>7482791
How about one that turns folks into Kimonomimi/monstergirls by sticking a tail buttplug up their kiester? Obviously it can only turn them into a creature with a tail and a human ass, but other than that creativity's the limit.

Your call if "Like an Animal" or "Doggy Style" is the better name.

>>7482818
https://fiction.live/stories/Mind-Control-Quest/TxQWThJJcXSJ264d4/home

There's the story that has most of it.

Honestly there seems to be more than one mind control CYOA. Neat.

Hmm. I bet this one is on the hub.

>>7482800
Huh, I have a .pdf but it's version .95 as well and just has all the same stuff. I'd be very interested in a more complete version. Any chance it can be posted on /tg/? .95 is safe enough.

>>7482829
Sorry, that's the last version he did before disappearing. Never got further than .95.

>>7482795
>Booty Enthused
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MRoAroipx2s

Got it - this one isn't the one they asked for - guess it's the hypnofetish CYOA. It's too big to post so I just put it on mega.

https://mega.nz/#!zkhVHAbQ!-8osF9jXkyyaaJYjOicu9Y_PywCplHm4-mtsUejQ2BM

>>7482818
>I'm pretty sure they're talking about this one
Nope, that's much older than the three-pager, also from what I recall of it, the hypnofetish one doesn't even function how the request described the CYOA.

>>7482819
>Kimonomimi
...They have kimonos (traditional Japanese dress dealie) instead of ears?

>>7482836
Huh, never seen this one before. Understandable because it's FUCKING HUGE. What's the maximum image height on this board? I can get it chopped down real quick.

>>7482855
>What's the maximum image height on this board?
10000 (ten thousand) pixels. Same for width, but people generally prefer not having to bother with horizontal scrolling. Also filesize limit of 4MB.

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>>7482372
newer version

>>7482866
Why is Laura so clearly the best choice?

>>7482866
What is new about it?

>>7482869
>Laura
That is not how you spell Susie

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Hopefully this attached correctly. It always allows for amusing outcomes when choices a and e given you options that shouldn't be possible. Speaking of, I choose A).

>>7482873
>Susie
That is not how you spell Gretel

>>7482873
But I don't have a necrophilia fetish.

>>7482698
Body Type: Curvy
Breast Size: Big
Hips, Butt and Thighs: Thicc
Type of Yandere: Delusional +4, Stalking +4, Worshipping +1

Personality and Traits:
Confident,Optimist,Girly Girl,Wealthy (-3),Short, Gifted, Filthy, Submissive, Scarred

Gifts:

Youthful (-3), Motherly (-2), Beautiful (-6), Together Forever (-16), Good Taste (-4)
Quirks:
Religious (+2), Connections (+3), Genetic (+7), Hers forever (+5), Charisma (+2), True Friends (+3)

Origin: Miracle, I have saved her from the car crash that scarred her.

Dream: A Family: She wants as many children, in all of our incarnations.

>>7482870
>Whats new with Seven Sexy Sins 1.4 compared to 1.1?
Each description is longer and Laura got a better ability.

>>7482862
Well first I trimmed it, then I realized the breakpoints I selected made the filesize too big. This is going to be a bit of an awkward hack job since it wasn't designed to be split in suitable spots.

>>7482895
>Well first I trimmed it, then I realized the breakpoints I selected made the filesize too big.
A proper editor software (and some viewing applications, e.g. IrfanView with the plugins) lets you choose the compression level (and through that, filesize) when saving as JPEG.

>>7482895
Actually, on a second look it seems that there isn't any drop in quality by lowering the settings. It's not like the art is particularly compelling in this CYOA anyway

>>7482888
Ohey, Tok. How's the RuneScape vacation / progress on the infection CYOA?

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>>7482903
Kind of a hack job, but it works.

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>>7482906

>>7482903
>>7482906
Thanks.

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>>7482914
fin

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>>7482901
>How's the RuneScape vacation / progress on the infection CYOA?
Glorious! its glorious! I'm really loving the Egyptian theme on Menaphos. While I have been playing I have brainstormed out most of the design and content in the Infected CYOA and when I fap I have found several images for infected as well (pic related). I might do Infected sooner then I expected, since everything has pretty much fallen into place by itself.

>>7482919
Well then, divine inspiration to you!

... will you introduce a new god? A god of (erotic) disease, perhaps?

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I think someone asked for this in the previous thread. Page 1/2.

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>>7482927
Page 2/2.

>>7482791
perhaps a Be the Girl option to make it a "True" CYOA where for the hour you get turned into a girl and attract whoever to ravage your ass.

>>7482931
I thought about including that as a drawback because it squicks the hell out of me, but honestly it squicks the hell out of me.

For me Gender Change is a nightmare scenario so I don't really want it included.

>>7482933
It could still be a spell so it's only one hour?

>>7482931
>>7482933
>>7482937
Wouldn't "Extra Thicc" be a generic shapeshifting spell, meaning it'd include the possibility of switching your gender?

>>7482940
It gives you sliders, not a solution, but you could probably make yourself into something like a gender-swapped version of yourself with some work.

Like I said, I prefer to be indirect.

>>7482925
I donno, I lean towards explaining the D-virus with Illuminati scientists or perhaps Golthuem.

>>7482948
I prefer the Illuminati scientists, it doesn't seem like an eldritch present. Not eldritch enough. By the way, I may or may not be basing antagonistic cults in my current call of cthulhu campaign on them. Golthuem confuses the hell out of them.

>>7482348
Traits: Small, Clumsy, Horny, Size Queen, Stacked, Nudist, Cum Addict and Brood Queen.
Reward: Cute, Nimble, Alchemy, Magic Lipstick, Flexible and Sensitive. So all the rewards.
Life: Villain.

After falling into the new world I did what anyone would do and find a place to stay safe. Thankfully I was found by a Warlock who needs his army of Orcs, Ogres and Goblins to expand if he's going to conquer any kingdoms. My only payment would be a roof over my head, food and the pick of any male to be "personal assistants."

Only thing that could go wrong is if adventures stopped us and made me a sex toy, but what are the chances of that happening?

>>7482787
Not really complete enough for a proper build, but what the hell

>Method
Psionics

Chemistry is a "sexier" method of control to me but the utter convenience and overall usefulness of psionics is hard to beat. Could combine them but I'll stick with Psionics for now and mind control a chemist if I want to drug anyone.

>Base
Club -1
Lair -2

A seedy club in the rough part of town that nevertheless somehow manages to attract some upper class clientele. The basement opens up to a series of corridors in seeming disrepair, with office furniture piled up in the corners and flickering lights in the ceiling, but eventually leads to my secret lair.

>Expansions
Defense Structures -1
Processing Hold -1
Harem (Research) -1

All of the defense are interior, between the lair and the surface level of the club. My Harem girls are my choice targets for practicing my psionic technique, greatly increasing my Research. Mental burnout leads to some high turnover in the position, meaning that there's always room for advancement for any ambitious slave.

>Unique Slaves
The Falcon -1
The Alleycat -1
The Manager -1
The Butterfly -1

The Falcon and Alleycat are my personal favorite playthings, though I'm careful to leave enough of their mind undamaged that their personalities and skills remain useful to me. The Manager and Butterfly are mostly left to their own devices to do their things, but of course their minds and bodies fully belong to me as well.

Assault: 11
Defense: 8
Information: 8
Research: 8
Recruiting: 12
Processing: 11
Training: 7

>>7482773
Means of Control: Familiar (She never gives a name, but has helped countless mindslavers. She sees all this as a cute game for kids and the mindslavers as her "little darlings." She has a plump motherly figure and a mature face, but she's not saying if she has children.)

Slave Types: Conditioned Slave

Boons:
Sensitivity
Libido
Lactation
Age Manipulation
Futanari
Gender Swap
Mass Control
Immortality
Cum Production
Fertility

Powers:
Pocket Dimension
Telekinesis

Drawbacks:
Permanent Changes
Rapey Slaves
Deus Vault
Power of Chaos (Be nice guys)

Pacts: Pact of Comfyness

>>7482773

Drawbacks
>Eldritch horror (16)
Similar to my normal appearance, except with pale grey skin and two retractable tentacles in my upper back that can extend up to ten feet in length.
>Deus Vult (17)
>Unnatural Aura (18)
Pacts
>Slavers Pact (21)

>Telepathy (18)
>Conditioned Slave (17)
>Unaware Slave (16)
Boons
>Sensitivity (15)
>Immortality (13
>Induce Fetish (12)
>Mass Control (9)
>Orgasm control (8)
Powers
>Summoning (7)
>Planeswalker (1)

Slaves
>Alexandra Archibald
>Fukawa Miyo (0)

First step in my plan: Get captured.

Second step: Quote Bane nonstop while being interrogated

Third step: Use telepathy to make nuns my slaves, then poof them away with Summoning. After I get all of the ones in that group, I question the leader after putting her in Unaware Mode, question her about any other cells of the ninja nuns and the normal duties that they have other than hunting down mind controllers, then resummon all of the nuns and have them resume normal operations, only ignoring anything evil that I'm doing.

I then repeat the process with any other cabals of nuns, then panic and rush to train and modify my 5 yearly slaves before the boss finds out that I've been slacking off and telling my captors that I'm a big guy for them the last couple months.

Then, I spend the next year conditioning all of my nuns until they happily serve me out of "free will", send off the five that I least like to the boss, and then expand my slave empire across every universe I hop to.

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>>7483079
I am a generous god

>>7483196
Can such a generous god provide sauce?

>>7482773
>Means of Control
Telepathy of course, mind control's maximum potential!

>Slave type
Happy slave, I like multiple types, but if I have to choose, devoted slaves are top tier.

>Boons
Rewrite personality, Mass Control, Immortality, Self-Hypnosis, Charm. Self hypnosis for that immortality, mass control to conquer the planet faster, rewrite personality to further customize slaves, and charm to have some lovers

>Powers
Telekinesis, Flesh Sculptor, Planeswalker. Who wouldn't want to enslave any fictional character? Flesh sculptor to produce unique, sexy slaves, telekinesis cuz it's dope

>Drawbacks
Permanent changes, Laura, Rapey slaves, Eldritch Horror, Deus Vult, Sign of Influence (spiral eyes), Unnatural aura. None of these are that bad.

>Pact
Slaver's Pact, get a good gift and with my boons and power's I'll totally be able to make some unique, interesting, and fun slaves (but my finest creations are mine)

>Slave
Zynthia, because I'm pretty sure I could waifu her up regardless. I could release her and become her husbando, or use her as a meat toilet. Either's fun.

I'm gonna conquer Earth, live in a gigantic mansion/palace with my huge harem. Maybe I'll try to conquer other worlds with planeswalker, at the very least I'll grab some waifus and become a pokemon trainer.

>>7483196
That's a picture by Medri. Does a lot of mind control stuff.

>>7482342
Male [0]
Petite [5]
A Perfect Fit [10]
Heavenly Voice [20]
Five Finger Discount [25]
Naughty Dreams [35]
Induce Arousal [45]
Domination [55]
Submission [60]
Skilled [70]
Innuendo [80]
Valerie / Allie

I'm an adorable cutie who uses his cuteness to get cuddles and get into bed for a sex-free night. That night I use Naughty Dreams, then when they wake up I use Induce Arousal and see what happens. :3

Valerie is a good friend to help plan out corrupting people using my cuteness, and Allie is good for testing ideas on. :D

>>7483220
On second thought, happy slaves can get a bit old after thousands of years, I'll take abyssal girls as a drawback for another 2 points, one I'll spend to get the boon tireless slave, so that I can always be prepared for their attacks with self hypnosis, then I'll use the other to get conditioned slaves, so I can have top tier waifu's keep their personality. I think telekinesis is enough to handle a few abyssals, and once I build up a sizeable harem of them and other combat efficient slaves with planeswalker, I'll let them handle the abyssal girls.

>>7483251
Why couldn't you just drop Charm for the extra point?

If you've set them to Happy slave, it doesn't matter whether or not you've used it on them, because they'll be happy and loving regardless, and if you've set them to Conditioned, it's because you want to train them somewhat naturally and not just flip a switch and make them love you unconditionally.

Abyssal girls mean that the second the sun sets, you have to be constantly paranoid at all times until you've spent years, if not decades building up your stockpile of combat slaves.

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>>7482866
>>7482869
>>7482873
Hmmm, Laura allows me to live out my fetish, but Susie clearly has the best personality. Should I follow my dick or my heart?

>>7483268
Well ... it'll be forever and ever and happily ever after. Choose wisely.

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>>7483270
>being with a whore but getting to satisfy my fetish
vs.
>never satisfying my fetish but having a 10/10 waifu

Also the CYOA says "I should probably warn you that your waifus sisters will come and visit from time to time."

I wonder what that could mean for me. Either way I guess I'd have to go with Susie. It was a tough choice though.

>>7482364
Random.org 89

House:
Girly -25

Food:
Chief girl -20

Hygiene:
Luxury bathroom -25
Maid -15
Bath girl -20
Essentials -5
Luxury supplies -10

Entertainment:
Manga/anime -15
PC -30
Library -10
Teacher -15
Musical eq -15
Toys -10
sex eq -20

Job:
Barista +5

Owners:
Succubus +30
Little girl's pet +20
Engineer +25

Clothing:
Shoes -3
Panties -2
Bacis -15

Punishments:
Sensitivity +10
Spanking +5
Lactation with drug +25
Almost fu (mouse) +10

Body:
Acups +1
Skinny +2
Fem face +3
Pussy +6
Small ass +2
Child voice +2
Height (72,5''-12") +5
Hair removal +5

Total = 1

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>>7482579
>Normal mode
I don't want to be crazy.
>Tier 2 money
I can now buy whatever worthless shit I want
>Beauty
I can stop being a fat fuck and start being a Chad
>Tier 2 Hearth and Home
Oh the things I can do with my own dimension
>Change
God shows himself and unequivocally tells everybody exactly which religion is right to the everlasting butthurt of atheists.
>Immortality
Infinite time to do whatever

>Shallow as fuck!
And I want her to be tall enough that if we're both standing straight that her breasts will comfortably rest on the top of my head.

>Tier 2 exhibitionist
Covering just a bit is hotter than pure nudity
>Tier 3 Twin sister
The more the merrier
>Tier 2 clingy
They're merely asserting their dominance
>Fertility
It's always been a fetish of mine and I certainly have the money to pay for them
>Tier 2 Snug fit
Not certain if I'll be able to see around her but whatever.
>Desserts
Breast milk obviously.
>Milking
I never have to worry about it going bad.
>Urinary incontinence
Just hoping she doesn't accidentally go on me.
>Super tight
Considering her overall size I want to make sure she's still tight down there.
>Sensitive
I want her to enjoy it too.
>I say stop
If there's three of them I'm going to spend a lot of time in bed.
>Dripping wet
If she wets herself she can pretend she's just horny.

And since there's three of them I can choose unique traits

Waifu 1
>Idiot savant
She is an absolutely marvelous artist
>Sleepyhead
Art is exhausting

Waifu 2
>Talkative
Even she doesn't know what she's on about
>Extremist
A Kekistani whose been banned from Twitter at least eight times.

Waifu 3
>Quiet
She just doesn't have much to say
>Somnophilia
She associates both love and sleep with relaxation. Is fond of having me sandwiched between her and Waifu 1.

>>7483265
Charm only makes a slave fall in love with you, Happy slave suppresses their personality and replaces it with happy obedience. With charm and conditioned slave, a girl will keep her full personality, but she'll be in love with me. So I could make any fictional waifus I have actually love me. And really, abyssal girls aren't gonna be that taxing. I have tireless slave, so slaves and I suffer no ill effect from lack of sleep, and it should be pretty easy finding combat efficient slaves to be bodyguards with planeswalker. Plus, any abyssal girl defeated is another slave, and another bodyguard. I've got telekinesis too, and with it, I can fling any girls who get too close away, and throw things at them/throw them into stuff to knock them out. In the end I get a horde of monstergirl slaves, which continuously grows, and I get to have my fictional waifus keep their personality while also being in love with me.

>>7482364
rolling fo this

>>7482579
Why not try this out, so I guess
Normal mode
for "compensation"

power tier 2 (complete control over time)
immortality

for appearance

choosy (cum addict picture)

for quirks

delusional
emotionless
snug fit tier 2
seductive
serial killer
non-sensitive
cum addict
blunt tier 2
body swap
favorite hole (mouth)

>>7483360
delet this

>>7482773
>Means of Control
Telepathy (3)
>Slave Type
Unaware (1)
>Boons
Rewrite Memory (1)
Rewrite Personality (1)
Normalize (1)
Body Swap (1)
Induce Fetish (1)
Immortality (2)
Self Hypnosis (1)
>Powers
Flesh Sculpture (5)
>Drawback
Slave Limit (+2)
>Slave
Gwedillth Everglade

Basically I'm playing the long game. I got a bi-sexual wife and erasing Gwed's memories of a shit world should make her happier by default (otherwise I would have gone with the trap). I have two others in mind already for my immortal harem, my sister and my wife's sister. In short, me and the wife have fun with the new human Gwed (who will have a different name after a time) as she becomes a happy member of our world. Meanwhile, I will be slowly manipulating our sisters to the harem, so when it's time for people to start "dying", we'll have the "new life initiative" in place. Finally, we start our new immortal family and constantly switch between parents and kids as we go through time collecting money and power over the years. I'll need the personality and memory rewrite only in the beginning, but it can be a tool for later use if need be.

>>7482948
different anon, in the Deus Vult CYOA, does Half-Angel's, Sealed Demon's and Miracle's power boosts stack, and if so, how ridiculous are we talking about?

>>7482335
I'm working on a BBW/SSBBW CYOA. It's text only right now and it's on Google Docs. Here's a link to it:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1asdU6nevCPRe5qaHTuMgvd8VeIh-mkeJNcYOJLsA8WM/edit?usp=sharing
If anyone wants, they may suggest or contribute a thing to add to it. It's still a work in progress and I would very much like to see it widely used. Thank you fellow Anons, and please enjoy.

>>7483679
>It's text only right now
Have you even fucking started working on making it an image because you post this shit way to fucking often to have not started it by now and still have any intent to actualy begin.

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>>7482903
>Mode
Harem Builder

>Character Mode
Big Damn You

>Tech Level
Atoms and Adverts

>Magic Level
Advanced Arcana

>Psionic Level
The Quiet Cortex

>Superpower level
Superhuman Start

>Furry level
Mix and Match

>Tone
Medium

>Bonus
1 Control point, 4 character points

>Character
Reincarnation plus, a mostly cybernetic cyborg, only parts that are still 100% natural are my senses, my dick and my balls. Irresistible, Crazy rich, Superb Athlete, upgraded Shapeshifting, and skills in both robotics and computers.

>Control
6 points in Psionics and 5 points in Magic

>Posse
Teacher (I'll be reborn as a student), The Cape, The Ghost, The Swim Team, The Ninja, The Wallflower, The Amazon, and The Catgirl.

I'm gonna be a fucking psychic magical cyborg

>>7482803
Open it in a new tab

>>7482808
>The Disney Princess fiasco
The what?

>>7482873
This man gets it
>>7482876
That's some good taste, but and eternity blueballs would probably get old after a while
>>7482878
She just needs some training

>>7483685
Filesize is one of the many issues I've encountered developing the "image" version. Got a good idea for general guidelines?

>>7483268
>>7483286
>Susie clearly has the best personality
>a 10/10 waifu
You know, if she's too lazy to even move a millimeter while getting fucked that probably mean's she's too lazy to even get up to take a shit or wipe her ass.

I dunno if even a magical holodeck dimension is worth putting up with someone who lies in a puddle of their own filth all day unless you take care of them. That shit gets old real quick.

>>7482876 has the right idea. Go for the hot waifu who doesn't have any utterly crippling personality defects.

Even if her power kinda blows, at least you'll have a nice woman who wants to cook you delicious food and suck you off on command.

>>7483685
Course he hasn't. He wants attention.

>>7483829
>if she's too lazy to even move a millimeter while getting fucked that probably mean's she's too lazy to even get up to take a shit or wipe her ass
I mean, according to the pictures she's active enough to browse the computer and probably put on headphones, plus she'd probably be pretty embarrassed to have me wipe her ass. I'd probably have to carry her to the bathroom, but I think she'd be willing to take it from there.

>>7483829
Considering what Tok has said about being able to train her, she probably trained herself out of that a long time ago. Assuming that an archdemon of hell has to worry about any of that, anyway, which doesn't seem like all that safe an assumption.

>>7483829
Lazy people don't do things that are uncomfortable or unpleasant. Sitting in a pile of shit and piss, even if you don't get bedsores, is going to be unpleasant.

>>7483754
>Got a good idea for general guidelines?
Height up to 10000 (10k, ten thousand) pixels per page, width preferrably within the 1200-1900 pixel range (also suggesting that you keep the width uniform between pages).
If you have trouble keeping it under 4MB, just save it with lower quality / higher compression (or if you're using MSPaint or some other feature-poor drawing application, open and re-save the finished pages with an image viewer that can do it - e.g. IrfanView with the plugins).

>>7483903
>huge boobs
>appear to be the same size as big boobs, if not smaller

>>7483481
Half-Angel+Sealed Demon+Miracle=power level?
With upgraded Half-Angel, Sealed Demon and Miracle (fighting power) you would be able to fight a god on equal terms. However once the boost from Miracle runs out you would be pretty much screwed if you are fighting a god.

>>7483971
>huge boobs
>appear to be the same size as big boobs, if not smaller
Seconded

>>7482372
tfw you can't choose between the two best waifus. Gwendolyn is loaded, sadistic and maid abuse galore. Priscilla is the smugest tsundere and shes both sub and dom.

>>7482773
Means of Control: Contract ("Allow me to introduce myself//I'm a man of wealth and taste...")

Slave Type: Conditioned Slave

Boons:
>Sensitivity
>Libido
>Lactation
>Rewrite Memory
>Rewrite Personality
>Age Manipulation
>Induce Fetish
>Gender Swap
>Immortality
>Tireless Servant
>Charm
>Fertility

Powers:
>Expanded Mind
>Alchemy

Drawbacks:
>Laura (I see no downside to this)

Pact: Pact of Hell (can test them with Laura)

Summary: Make LOADSAMONEY by selling potions of my various boons (except for Immortality, Age Manipulation, and Charm) to discerning buyers. Tireless Servant is marketed as a temporary energy boost, Lactation as a replacement for breast implants/reductions, Fertility as both birth control and fertility treatment (at the customer's option), etc. Once I get regulars who know I'm the real deal (probably mostly from the fetish community), I can break out my secret weapon: The Contract. I offer eternal life and youth in exchange for such a paltry thing as their soul. Hell, I'll even throw in a job offer: work for me for 3 years and promise never to betray me (on pain of losing your immortality and aging to dust), and at the end of that time we can renegotiate the terms of your employment as you see fit.
I will, of course, conveniently fail to mention the bit about them *wanting* to be my slave for eternity.

>>7483903
>first sentence is a run on sentence
>second sentence also is one and it has a typo
>actually every fucking sentence is a run on sentence
>usage of mana and magica for the same purpose
>patreon watermarks everywhere
-4/10, made me reply

Maybe I should make an Intersex Turboslut CYOA.
Since the other one is so small and frankly not that /d/.

>>7483903
You're gonna want to spell check that again

>>7484272
Dooo iiiiit

>>7482773
>Points: 0/22

Means of Control: Telepathy (-3)
Slave Types: Unaware, Conditioned (-2)

Boons: Libido (-1), Rewrite Memory (-1), Rewrite Personality (-1), Induce Fetish (-1), Immortality (-2), Tireless servant (-1), Self-hypnosis (-1), Maid Training (-1)

Powers: Expanded Mind (-3), Telekinesis, (-3),

Drawbacks: Permanent Changes (+1), Mind Fucked (+2),

Pact: Comfy (+3)

Slave: Nope. Don't need a starter.

OK, today has been interesting. And a lot to take in. I'll... take a short vacation. Somewhere nice. Somewhere where a major political party is holding a fundraiser for their next national campaign. Some handshaking between tasty finger foods, a little telepathy, and I'll have a half dozen major corporations putting me on retainer as a 'consultant'. Make my own hours and basically get paid to do nothing. Occasionally criticize some business practice or something. Nothing stressful. Oh, and the worst elements of those political parties? The most toxic racists and old-money douchebags? Their personalities are getting rewritten into self-destructive masochistic murder-hobos with uncontrollable fetishes for public humiliation and punishment. Pretty much this entire list: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_United_States_political_families . All destroyed. That's in-breeding for you. Never know what kind of psychological bullshit will crop up. Good riddance.

With politics back on track and my word taken as gospel in dozens of megacorporations, I'll just pay to have a modest mansion built. With a small plantation attached. I freaking LOVE fresh Satsumas and strawberries. Then I'll just travel to the four closest colleges and 'convince' the most attractive and bitchiest young women to be my personal fetish sluts. The ones that acclimate well to the conditioning can be released. The ones that make a fight of it get made Immortal and placed in permanent Mind-Fuck and I'll just use them as breeding stock.

>>7482791
Perhaps there should be an spell that gets girls of your liking to sit on you whenever, whenever
Your Lap, your face, the choice is yours!

>>7484425
>Designates a certain spot as a chair in the mind of the victim
>Gives them an uncontrollable urge to sit down and rest for a while
>Called Chair Force

>>7482773
How do you play this if you want to be the slave?

>>7484485
I'll assume a male master, but please don't take that the wrong way if you'd prefer a mistress.

>Means of control
List the type, then talk about how your master came to own you using it.
>Slave types
List the type or types, then tell us what type your master uses on you. Use the type as the general tone of the rest of your build (i.e Happy or conditioned would speak of their master in an overwhelmingly positive way, regardless of how he actually is, mindless in a strict and factual way, as if reading off a report, ect. If under pet, don't just meow or bark at us, but speak from the perspective of a pet that the master owns)
>Boons
List the boons that your master chose, and tell us about how he used them on you and your fellow slaves. Spare no details, I plan on getting off to this.
>Powers
List the ones your master chose, and talk about how he's used them thus far. Has he just used them to toy with your body and mind even more, or is he using them ambitiously to change the world?
>Drawbacks
List them, and speak about them as if revealing a big secret that you probably shouldn't. Remember, many of them are, or are supposed to be crippling problems and weaknesses, your master probably wants to limit the number of people who know or find out.
>Pact
Say which pact your master took, how you believe he feels about the choice he made, how you feel about it (if you're allowed any opinion on the matter that's not his), and what steps he's taken to fulfill his end of the bargain.
>Slaves
If your master decided to take any of the starter slaves, tell us how he's trained them and what your opinion on them is. Do you feel bad for Gwedillth and hope that your master takes good care of her? Do you distrust Melissa and her attempts to slip the master's control? Are you jealous that Miyo is hogging all of the attention by luring in new girls and gets to sleep in your master's bed almost every single night?

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Saw this a few threads ago and saved it, thought it was pretty cool. The opening mentions a character dlc, does anyone know anything about that? Anyway, I'll post my build I made earlier today with this cyoa in the next comment

>>7484570
>The opening mentions a character dlc, does anyone know anything about that?
The CYOA is a WIP, and the author hasn't been seen for quite a while, IIRC.

>>7484570
I did a roll only run, and here are my results
158 - town slut
214 - detachable limbs (and dicks and breasts)
297 - sensitive breasts
143 - sensitivity = 3
304 - Endurance. Last an extremely long time in bed
176 - Orgasm control (only works on others)
231 - Missing limb (left arm)
314 - Eager to please
181 - Time rewind
342 - Bondage
317 - Oral fixation
292 - anal addict
036 - Personality - self assured (up one)
240 - Storage
073 - Skin tone (medium)

I allowed myself one reroll, and originally had green skin. I rerolled it, and got skin tone again, but this time it was medium. Everything else basically makes me a super male slut, which I guess I'm ok with. Good thing I live in a city, so I always have access to more dick.

>>7484582
Yeah, that's kind of what I figured. Was hoping that maybe there'd be an update. Still, this one by itself is pretty complete (I only recall one option that wasn't finished), so I'm pretty happy with it.

>>7482342
Always wondered why Aphrodite makes you pay more to be a woman, given who she is...

>>7484604
The assumption is that the reader is already male, so there would be no need to pay for becoming one.

>>7484604
The majority of people on 4chan and /d/ and /tg/ are male.
Alternatively, it's assumed anyone that doesn't "btw am grillXD" is male.

>>7484570
It's pretty clearly unfinished, given there's at least one option (regression) which doesn't say what happens. Still looks like fun when it's done.

When it is complete, it'd be nice to see a number between 1 and 16, 4 and 19, 16 and 20, and 19 and 20. Just for that close to mono-gendered society with herms as the rare gender.

>>7484631
>Still looks like fun when it's done.
it was abandoned a while ago

>>7484529
Holy shit! You went above and beyond.
Gold star! I'll run through it with your comments in mind!
Thank you so much.

>>7484636
That's a shame. I might make a build for what we have, though.

Out of curiosity, what do you think happens if you pick a mono-gendered male or female society? Do women impregnate each other through tribalism? Do men give each other assbabies? Or is humanity doomed in a single generation?

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reposting for new thread (which was made a little early if you haven't been bitched at enough already)

https://pastebin.com/1xnAZsvw
html contains a few spelling corrections not in the images.

as before, looking for more content, balance issues, and typos. Next version is at least another week out and I'm expecting a lot of changes

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>>7484658

>>7484652
We're doomed.

>>7484652
I figured that you could head cannon it however you want, but if you wanted to join in, you'd have to pick something that gave you that ability. So, in an all male society, if you wanted to have an assbaby, you'd have to pick "fertile everywhere"

>>7484658
So with Battery + Hive Queen, you'd produce approximately 24 servitors a day, and adding Ovipositor to that would increase it to about 144 per day. Does the servitor population plateau at some point, or does it depend solely on what kinds of servitors you choose to have?

>>7484676
They'd have a die off rate and they aren't fertile, so yeah there would be a maximum somewhere, with the details depending on the exact rates for both. I was also tempted to include that your egg laying rate would depend on food intake (which would be part of why the things would try to feed you), but decided it was already wordy enough. I left what sort deliberately vague so they could be tailored to the other parts of someone's build but figure that said exact form shouldn't have a major impact on those rates and I would expect them to live no more than a couple of years

>>7482873
>susie
that's not how you spell wendy

>>7483903
>aprendice
AAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGHHHHH!!!!!

>>7484700
Any chance of getting to have one (or few) of them as longer-lived (basically living as long as you would) and smarter (more akin to smart pet than human) variants?
Also, have you considered expanding the tree with further things that'd make the servitors into a full-on hive-like collective (with or without castes, potentially even digging/constructing a hive/nest for the colony to live in)?

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>>7482773
My master uses an anchor (1 point), more specifically a choker to control me. He put it on me when I answered an ad that would give me a certain thing I wanted. Or was there something I wanted? He gave me that choker and he said to put it on and then I kinda forgot why I was there but I remember feeling all warm inside when I did it.

Now, obviously I am a good slave to my master, and I want to be a good slave. It's no fun if I lose my mind right? Then I would die and my body would do as he wants!
That's why master made me both a Conditioned, Happy and Unaware slave (4 points)!
[really good idea to write like this kind of slave, anon!]

[I'm really turned on reading the questions you want me to answer. I hope I don't screw up the points]

I remember when I put on the choker I started feeling all hot and bothered inside. I started breathing so hard and I had to squeeze my eyes shut not to think about my master mounting me right then and there! My Libido (5 points) went all crazy and when he grazed my arm I was so Sensitive (6 points) I came right then and there and held on to his arm so tight.
I was shaking all over and panting so hard I thought I was going to pass out.
While my mind was in a haze I felt like my Memories were Rewritten (7 points) or something... I hadn't had my Gender Swapped (8 points) right? I was always this short and cute right?
My mind was clouded when we left his apartment, it was liked parts of my Personality were Rewritten (9 points). I started wanting to impress my master, and I was glued to his side. I didn't ever and I still don't ever want to leave my master. I feel safe here and I feel good when I do what he says.
If I've been good all day he lets me sleep with him in his bed and wake him up next morning with a blowjob and I can't fall asleep that easily! But I can't breathe so loudly or master can't fall asleep and I would be a horrible slave!

>>7484728
I was assuming a more universal build for them, but that could be added by elaborating the text more. As to more complicated ones, you can still breed normally and I phrased the care for young broadly to imply that they'd care for your actual children too. Doing some of that by upgrades might be a better idea though (gaining more points for making your life less human), I'll probably do that

>>7484485
TokHaar said when I asked that you could use self-hypnosis to enslave yourself to a slave for a period of time. Getting contact in addition to any other control method might be the best in that case. If you want permanent I guess you could extend it indefinitely. You just have to pick the powers as normal. You would just be doing them to yourself on your slaves orders.

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>>7484730
My master has a funny way with words. When he touches my elbow and says "now" I drop everything I'm doing, I'm instantly wet and I open my mouth all the way I can. There are also other Triggers (10 points) he can do, like I feel bad and like I'm not doing enough when he tells me to sleep in the other room. Sometimes there are things he does that make me do or feel things but then the next time he does it nothing happens. It's very weird indeed!
But one thing I love about master is how I somehow cum when he does too! When he shoots cum in my mouth and it touches the back of my throat I immediately cum too. He's so good at making me cum it's like he can Control my Orgasms (11 points).
I can never seem to get off on my own when I'm in the other bed. Not that I've tried (often)! I think my body knows I'm only allowed to have an orgasm when master says I can.
Sometimes master orders me to stay up all night. It might be to sit on his lap and have him fuck me all the time, or if he has to write a report he has me sit under his desk and suck him off every so often. It doesn't hurt me at all, I'm Tireless when I'm his Servant (12 points)!
Because I know I should be good to master because master is good to me.
Did I mention how Charming (13 points) my master is? I knew I would never fall in love with anyone else, and I fall more in love every day.

My master isn't the most ambitious man even when I know he would be the best person to rule the world...
He does have an Expanded Mind and knows Alchemy (-3 points). I love being his guinea pig, even moreso when he adds some... special ingredients. Some very delicious fluids.
He sometimes talks to himself about making a potion that changes the world but he's trying to figure out how to supply it and what it should do.
I suggested adding it to the water supply. He smiled and fucked me many times that night. I got to sleep in his bed for a week.
He still isn't sure what to do, but is thinking of making people docile to him

>>7484738
By the by, once you add in the non-standard pregnancy stuff, will you also make it so you don't need to pick vagina for Egg-laying if you have the relevant drawback(s)?

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>>7484768
maybe

I actually might have done that accidentally already by including a phrase in the ball pregnancy one that says you qualify for fertility-based drawbacks (ie that tree) that require a vagina. As skeptical as I am about doing that, I still kind of want to have that more general functionality for weird egg laying (if you remember, I changed the text on egg laying to the more general "orifice", mostly to allow for something like birdo)

anyway this is what that area looks like right now, but I'm not real happy with what I have for the odd pregnancy ones, I feel like the tier one for each isn't bad enough for a point and the names could use improvement.

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>>7484763
-3
Master said he wants to learn how to use his alchemy on more people because "there's a Limit to how many Slaves I can get" (-1 points). What is master talking about? Why would he want more slaves.
Sometimes he seems to be a little concerned about me. He looks at me all funny and whispers about how the "Changes are Permanent" (0 points) but I don't know what he's talking about. What changes? Changes to me? I've always been like this, I've always loved my master so much.
In the beginning he didn't let me go on errands on myself. He wanted to keep me on a "Short Leash" (1 point) so to speak. But now he's okay with it, he said there's nothing to worry about because I "didn't run away". I was confused. Then he gave me a head pat and my knees started wobbling and I forgot what we were talking about.

Oh right... I think I overheard master talk about... was it called the "Pact of Domination" (3 points)? I asked about it but he just patted my head (which I loved) but then he shook his head and told me not to worry.
Maybe that's what he wants to use his alchemy for? The pact, whatever it is?

First slave? Well, that's me!
Oh, other slaves, that's what you meant. I wanted my master all to myself but it seems I'm not enough. It can be hard to please him sometimes but how can I say no to him! He needs to be happy.
He picked up Fukawa Miyo (2 points) actually... was it before me? Or right after? I'm not sure. I think she was kinda just... there.
I love master but I hate her. She's awful. She's so popular and smart and I'm afraid he loves her more than he loves me. I swear she gets to sleep in his bed more than I do.
And when we share the bed with master? I know she pushes me away! And her boobs are way bigger which isn't fair because he stares at them more than at mine...
Then there's how she tries to get master more slaves. And I'm okay with that but it hurts so much when he gives them more attention than me, and they make him laugh and I don't...

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>>7484814
Master is planning to get a new slave. Her name is Victoria Valentine (1 point) and she's a real piece of work, but he says that's why she's so good.
She's rich, and she's a snobby, spoiled brat that needs to be taught a lesson. He'll do that. But first he says he'll let me and Fukawa Miyo "break her in" so to speak.
He wants to see if we can do a good job and if we do he can entrust us with more plans. So we have to do it right!


~~FIN~~
[That was great. Thank you so much for the questions and what to think about, anon!
I hope someone enjoyed my long post]

>>7484794
>I actually might have done that accidentally already by including a phrase in the ball pregnancy one that says you qualify for fertility-based drawbacks (ie that tree) that require a vagina. As skeptical as I am about doing that, I still kind of want to have that more general functionality for weird egg laying (if you remember, I changed the text on egg laying to the more general "orifice", mostly to allow for something like birdo)
I'd still suggest replacing "vagina" with "fertile orifice" (or "pregnancy-supporting orifice" or something along those lines).

>>7484839
I'll look in to it, unfortunately it will probably be worder than that. I have been trying to avoid the super long entries, but its hard to make them clear otherwise, this is a big part of why I'm adding the new symbols, I can define a set of rules in one entry at the beginning instead of having it listed every time it matters.

>>7484730
>>7484763
>>7484814
>>7484829
You sound like an adorable slave.

Your master is lucky to have you.

Anybody have the perverted wizard CYOA where you become his apprentice in return for lewdness?

>>7484658
While I do have a few content ideas, most of my stuff at this point is clarification on the exact meaning of stuff. Sorry, battery of mechanical questions incoming. In the Guardian tree, if you outgrow your guardians (especially with Age Appropriate, which is oddly named for what it does maybe) or they die, what happens? Sanguine Debauchery explicitly has a clause about your master getting replaced if they're out of the picture for whatever reason, but Guardian/Love don't--is that intentional? If you take Baby Life + Age Appropriate, how does that interact? Would that mean you basically have to start as a baby, but age out of it? Under Powers, Magic, Magus, and Archmage aren't terribly clear in relation to each other. Does Magic mean you're less skilled but can be developed? Are Magus and Archmage max potential? If so, does that mean you could actually get more mileage out of Magic than Archmage? If Magic needs a teacher/practice to be fully realized as its downside, how would Gifted (Magic) + Magic compare to the higher order options? How broad is Gifted? For example, could I choose "Science" or would I have to choose...iunno, "Bioengineering". Could I choose "Sex and Seduction" or would it be "Kissing"? How strong is Strength? It just says "superhuman", which could be almost anything. It could mean I'm as strong as a top bodybuilder despite my build, it could mean I'm 2x as strong as the strongest person, and it could mean I'm Silver Age Superman, pulling 25 billion planets at once to the other side of the universe with just my muscles and a sturdy chain. How creative can someone get with base Submissive? Sure the commands have to be sexual only, but could they make me kill myself/someone else while having sex, for example by using a poisoned sex toy on someone while intimate?

There are a LOT of questions like this and the descriptors are really brief (understandably). Might I recommend a FAQ page?

>>7484660
Would you mind/bother changing the Small Fit / Bad Fit to perhaps be more along the lines of the "Dick Too Swole" drawback in >>7482795? That is, the first tier could make it so regardless of what you're penetrating, you'd be large (or tight) enough that the dick would barely fit (requiring sufficient lubrication and easing it in), and the second tier could make it so the dick would barely fit the orifice when it's been stretched out as loose as it physically can (meaning that in most cases you'd need to stretch your partner out before you could actually have sex - or if you're the vagina-haver, maybe you'd need to stretch yourself out, perhaps even for each penis separately? Potentially an upgrade where each time you have sex, the vagina starts out unstretched), with or without the "hard (but not impossible) to get it up"?

>>7484846
I wish it were real...

Thank you for reading it all! I know I wrote a lot.

>>7484850
You mean >>7482368?

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Yandere Guy around? How's that Trigger/Reaction section coming along?

>>7484860
Not Slug Guy, but think this would completely change the drawback and make it far less significant, which would mess up the points. That said, this is the sort of situation that I think drawback corruptions could work, where you accept a friendlier version of a drawback for fewer points. Or, in some cases, for a net loss of points.

>>7484867
Yes! How did I miss it? But thanks!

>>7484855
(disclaimer, I didn't write any of the ones you're asking about and I might not be giving you the best interpretation)
>guardians
no, I read it to be that they treat you as if you're underaged, even when you aren't.

>sanguine debauchery
guardian specifies they find you, so it wouldn't need to have any sort of abandonment clause

>baby life
They have a lot of overlap, which I should probably fix. As written, you wouldn't age out of it, so you'd always have those limits

>magic
I had assumed it meant that magic gave you aptitude but no training, the other two set a starting point for you (like a free training montage).

>Gifted
If you took gifted I'd assume you'd have some theoretic knowledge of magic rather than actual casting from it. I had assumed it meant instant phd level knowledge, so I'd imagine that if you narrowed it, you'd get extra depth.

>strength
its one that needs quantification but doesn't have it, and I'm not sure how to do that. Its something that needs to be addressed. I was debating giving it the same measure as Force of Mind (lift up to 80 tons) which would be less than superman but more than double the governator.

>submissive
there's a note at the top of drawbacks:
>Unless you want to, the drawbacks won’t affect your life at large: they won’t make you lose important possessions or amounts of money, or receive any permanent damage.
which I need to edit to "unless specified" for the torture ones. That said I could see editing the text of Safe Drawbacks to specify that across the board that they won't kill you with them.

In general I'm trying to find a balance between being very strict and detailed and keeping it brief and flexible, I suspect my desired balance is a little more strict than lactofork's was based on what I keep seeing myself doing with these. I've added a bit to the rules section for the upcoming version for my new symbols which should have a little bit of rule clearing in them

>>7484860
assuming you're the one who asked me about this when I started, I basically came to this conclusion:
>>7484876
the big problem that it had originally was that it was a requirement for machine output, which made little sense. I feel like this problem is already solved by having split them up. Its a lot easier to not take that drawback now, which appears to have been designed as "you can't have normal sex because your organs are not the right size". Also I'm sorry that I think I've been ignoring you the last few threads when its come up, I kept forgetting to explain that.

>>7484895
Thankee very much for responding to the wall! You can probably guess who this is from previous writing styles/questions. Yeah, you didn't write the originals, which makes it a lot rougher for you since you have to just guesstimate, interpret, then decide if you want to replace. But way I see it, you're the one calling the shots now--like when there's a new edition of a P&P by a different team. At least for this version, your interpretation is the correct interpretation by definition.

A note on Guardians--as worded, they don't necessarily treat you as underaged. Age Appropriate half implies this, but honestly it seems like standard Asian parent fare (I speak from experience) with extra financial control and forcing you to study near home. Though Age Appropriate seems like a total misnomer. Maybe something like Age-Locked or Age-Stuck, but snappier?

If Love and Guardian auto-refresh themselves if your target dies/becomes invalid/is thrown in prison/loses your admiration, perhaps the definition of "Upon Activation" needs to be clarified for Permanent rings? 'cuz as written, reads like a one-time thing.

As for gifted and focused vs spread out, that sounds like a solid way to balance. Unfortunately, the text is "as competent as the most competent person...is or has ever been", which does not convey that at the moment.

And 'twas not I you were ignoring, you've responded astonishingly promptly to all mine.

>>7484902
>assuming you're the one who asked me about this when I started
I probably am, yes.
>the big problem that it had originally was that it was a requirement for machine output, which made little sense. I feel like this problem is already solved by having split them up.
I don't really see that as having been a problem, but then, I didn't really see much of a point in the Machine Output drawback to begin with.
>Its a lot easier to not take that drawback now, which appears to have been designed as "you can't have normal sex because your organs are not the right size".
Actually, I was also one of the people (or just the one person) who were asking for a "too big" sort of drawback when Lactofork was taking suggestions, and if I recall correctly, my reaction to what we got was along the lines of "I suppose that's the best I can expect".
>Also I'm sorry that I think I've been ignoring you the last few threads when its come up, I kept forgetting to explain that.
You've at least said that what you saw as the main problem with the drawback has been solved. I'm probably just stubborn in my opinion that the drawback could be more "enjoyable inconvenience" and less "lol no sex for you".

>>7484922
that makes more sense on the guardian thing. Also I'll probably add some "they're replaced if anything happens to them" statement.

I should add some text to permanent for that, because there are a lot of things with "at activation" that might need something clearer

I might edit the text on gifted to quantify how learned

I see. Anywhere when I first started working on this I got two fix requests, one was balance on impairment and the other was the abomination that was the way bad fit was structured. I fixed both in my first version I believe, but I saw the same request for the bad fit on a couple times after that and kept forgetting to address the guy about it.

also on the topic of guardian, I added an upgrade a couple days ago "protective":
"Your Guardian regards your consentual partners as not being good enough for you. They will attempt to subvert your relationships. " (+1)

>>7484924
okay, at that point it would be more of a middle layer in the two, not sure how that would look or how necessary it is.

that said I was thinking of a functional hyper cock one as an alternative to bad fit (both branch off small fit with text saying you can't do both, bad fit would be the more realistic that it stops working because of its size, hyper would adjust your body so it can work), but again I wasn't sure how to get that to work right.

>>7484924
>>7484948
Yeah, you're a lot like me in this regard. You're hoping to tweak a drawback into a mixed blessing, where that's not really a thing under the current system. One of the biggest problems is that the t1 drawback, the one you want to co-opt, is +1 point. If it were a 3 point drawback, it'd be easier to create a mixed blessing variant for fewer points. As is, you'd have to do all sorts of weirdness and it'd probably end up being a 0 or even -1 option, and what's the point in that?

Your line of thinking is exactly why I like Warped Taste--though it turns an -8 point power into a -6 point mixed blessing, which seems not worth. And also only works in the first place because powers have such high #s to work down from, in contrast with drawbacks.

>>7484869
Right here anon. Typing away.

>>7484967
>One of the biggest problems is that the t1 drawback, the one you want to co-opt
Actually, I suggested replacements for both of them.

>>7484972
You're doing lewd god's work, we appreciate your content

>>7484982
Don't compliment me anon, I'm a lazy fuck, I should have done this months ago desu

>>7484981
Same problem, though. If you replace a 1-point drawback with something much less bad, well... I'm not even sure if your upgraded version is as bad as the 1-point drawback. Given how punitive the current system is, what you're asking for might even be a power that costs points (always fits) with a corruption (barely fits). That's the problem with mixed blessing corruptions in a system where the drawbacks are such low point #s.

Actually yeah, that's probably the way to do it. Ask him to make an "Always Fits" power. It would clear all this right up.

>>7484986
Okay, I'm insult you in an inspirational manner, you lazy anon, you do good work, but not fast enough. No real yandere would kidnap an anon that works at such a leisurely pace

>>7484967
basically, and I originally planned a counter part to corruptions for drawbacks, but the numbers issue made that seem unworkable.

Like I said last thread, I am still considering a more general thing, like "complex interactions" where I might be able to do that by pooling multiple drawbacks and/or powers in a way that would get the total points modified large enough to be more comfortable to mess with.

>>7484991
That's all the motivation I need, anon.

>>7484730
This pleases me.

>>7485061
Tok, can you make >>7484730 into one of the starter slaves?

She's perfect and I want her.

>>7485109
Unfortunately there is no space left in Mindslaver, so I can't add anything without adding a 4th page.

>>7484658

Maybe split Living Headless, the first level would allow usually keeping your head on your neck still viable due to a strong force of attraction, the second level would make the force of attraction weak enough for light pushing or a strong breeze to knock it off.

>>7485122
>so I can't add anything without adding a 4th page.
There's still two and a half months of Menaphos amnesty left.

You can do it, I believe in you.

>>7485122
For Messed Up Waifu, the twins option allows for up to three sister-specific quirks. I assume that's in addition to the quirks needed just to take that option, but how do points work for quirks that only apply to one waifu?

>>7485154
>how do points work for quirks that only apply to one waifu?
AFAIK, they work normally (i.e. you gain the same amount of points as you would if they'd affect all of them).

>>7484660
Since >>7485130 mentioned Living Headless, have you considered a version where instead of the head being magically in place, it'd be one of those neck-dick-in-shoulder-vagina things?

>>7485143
I would rather work on Infected then do a 4th page for Mindlslaver since I don't even know what to add to fill out a 4th page for mindslaver.

>>7485163
It works like normal just like >>7485163 describes.

>>7483903
I don't hate this, but a few complaints:
>Images aren't aligned
>Body selection is only boobs
>Font is hard to read, though not the worst I've seen in a CYOA
>"Recharge" section is basically pick a sex act, but only 4 options. Not enough.
>Nudism option and public exposure option in different sections.
>Suddenly switches from horizontally aligned images to vertically aligned images.

>Many spelling and grammar errors
>Forbiden
>an
>an infinite loop.
>Maintained
>Virtually
>Immortal
>Wounds BIG SPAAACE .
I don't have the will to continue, but please for the love of god proofreading is necessary.

>>7485130
I'll look in to it

>>7485175
I've seen that stuff before, no promises I can get something to work for this. that said I'm thinking about adding a power for multiple sex organs (adding like 1-4, futa already giving you a second if you took that) and making fuckface a corruption for it as a tree with demon man, I could potentially work something like that in to it.

>>7485224
>I don't even know what to add to fill out a 4th page for mindslaver.
All I can think of would be some specific enemies that would be after you, but that if you defeat you would gain a benefit. Such as a Superheroine that would be very dangerous but also make for a very powerful slave if you defeat them. Not that I think it would really be worth it to figure out a page's worth of stuff along those lines, Mindslaver is pretty good as is.

Though I have an odd question about Deus Vult, would a Mindslaver count as a Witch for Judgments? and their slaves as Possessed? I've just been curious about how Deus Vult's system would qualify them.

>>7485281
A mindslaver would defiantly count as a witch and slaves would count as possessed. If you would judge a slave they would be freed from the mindslavers control.

>>7485224
A mission pack. Like something to deal with the Star Guardians once and for all.

>>7485109
Holy shit that would be amazing!
But I'm a lot like Miyo but less about giving master more slaves and more about changing to like what he likes.

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>>7482579
Normie Mode.

_______ <(Change) (Current)
Skill 1 >(-2) (-2)
Luck 2 >(-7) (-9)
Shallow AF >(-2) (-11)
Refer to pic related

Dirty Mouth 1 >(+1) (-10)
Exhibitionist 2 >(+2) (-8)
Snug Fit 2 >(+2) (-6)
Emasculation >(+1) (-5)
Yo, become cute AND it's a "Bane"?
Horny >(+1) (-4)
Urinary Incontinence >(+1) (-3)
Where's tier 2?
Scarred 1 >(+1) (-2)
Blunt 2 >(+2) (0)

Desserts 1 >(+1) (+1)
Milking >(+1) (+2)
Weapon Obsession 1 >(+1) (-1)
Entertainment 2 >(-3) (0)
Only if that "Use as sex toys" statement is redacted.

>>7483868
Well yeah I want attention! I gotta test market this shit before I go public with it!

>>7482786
Anal interdiction seems like the most straightforward and useful one.
Sub-Mint seems like the most fun over long-term.
Super-Duper Super Suggestible, for the synergy.
Honestly those are the best ones.

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>>7482698
>>7482699
>Would be a loving partner and give the yandere a loving home.
>Hate myself and the way I look, preventing me from loving them
This is suffering

>>7484570
Hard mode: just roll five.

Best of Both Worlds (364) which I guess is fine.
Sexual Role (44), and rolled a dom.
Wet Dreams (326) A minor annoyance.
Eye color (98) is now brown (12)
Water gun (257)

It could be a good CYOA if not for the confusing and limiting format.

>>7485753
Got sauce on that image by any chance?

>>7482389
>fuck you, you're a fake goddess leads to be the girl mode
>image is Tanya
Kek

>>7485730
Did you miss the part where it says "pick ten", or are you picking one or more of those three options multiple times?

>>7482348
Traits: Small, Weak, Stacked, Brood Mother

Rewards: Cute, Alchemy

Life: Villain, a powerful warlord wants me to make new goblin soldiers for his army and I oblige, getting a pretty comfortable life in exchange. I like the thought of not really being into sex, but still having it fequently because of the intense need to reproduce.

>>7484570
Doing RYOA Hard Mode Build
Picks will be in quotes, rolls will be normal

Int Up (3 to 4)
Sexual Orientation (Bi to Guy Curious)
Milky (Flat to A cup)
Penis Size Down (5.5" to 4.5")
Breasts Up (A Cup to B Cup)
>Sexual Orientation (Guy Curious to Bi)
Femininity
-No Dick/Balls
-Vagina
-Breasts Up (B to C Cup)
-Girly Face
-Curvy Body
-Shy Personality
-Sexual Orientation (Bi to Guys)
-Hair Up (Back Length to Knee Length)
-Height Down (6'2" to 5'10")
-Girly Name (im thinking Kayla)
>Sexual Orientation (Guys to Bi) (literally just fixed this one ffs)
Lewdness Up (2 to 3)
>Time Rewind (Go big or go home)
Lust Aura
Red Skin Tone
Breasts Up (C cup to D cup)
Bad Hearing
Height Up (5'10" to 6'2")
Penis Up (1")
>Succubus (Go big or go home)
>-No Penis
>-G Cup Breasts
>-Bat Wings
>-Horns
>-Purple Skin
>-Feminine Face
>-Curvy Body
>-Feed on Lust
>-Indicator Pupils
>-Shape Shifting
>-Induce Lust
>-5 Lewdness
Balls
-2" penis
Penis Size Down (2" to 1")
>Penis Size Down (1" to 0") (Random.org really wants me to have a microdick)
Pheromones


Not too shabby, i end up a hot succubus with giant tits and my personality is mostly intact

>>7484570
There needs to be a way to stop events
I ended on the becoming a girl multiple times so I kept buying a dick back, and even then I landed in the bimbofication and shortstack events so many times I ended up a 8 years old with a 30 inch dick and M cup tits without wanting them(wanting to fix the -5 intelligence took priority over fixing age)
This is okay because it was just bad luck, the problem is that I landed on subpar, meaning that now a 30 inch dick and M cup tits(without taking into account the growth caused by puberty) will be the smallest dick in the world, which goes beyond fucking up me but also fucking up the entire world

>>7484570

Fuck it, I'm feeling Hard Mode today.

First 5 rolls:
Height, shrink by 4" (57, 1)
Flight (163)
Lewd tattoo, only visible when naked (154, 5)
Ovary type, heat (133, 14) [also BAMPF, sudden vagina]
Freak (21). God damnit. Fine.

Choose Time rewind.
Foot fetish (329)
Milky (235) [herm transformation complete]
Eye color, brown (95, 10)
Oral fixation (316)
Feed on lust (320)
Indicator pupils (203)

Well now I'm fucked (or rather, not fucked and starve to death) if I leave freak on. Turning freak off.
Basic income (145)
Corrupted past (24)
Rape-able face (162) [FUCK. Fine, that's basically like someone force feeding me a meal, and I can rewind if things get too bad.]

Choose Suggestion.
Exhibitionist (338)
Sex addict (285) [Fine. I needed it to survive anyway.]
Nutritious (238)
Personality, switched to cute (35, 2)

Choose Immune.
No refractory period (265)
Cock tongue (353) [noooooo]

Remove cock tongue.
Endurance (305) [I fucked up. Should have stopped when I had a chance.]
Subpar (19)
Induce lust (171)

Remove endurance.
Hair length, neck length (89, 2)
Endurance (305) [lol]
Age, two years younger (49)

Remove endurance *again*.
Cock tongue (354)
Sensitive breasts (297)
Sexual dynamic, switch to friendly (11, 2)

Remove cock tongue again.
Hair length, back to ear length (91, 1)
Masculinity (357) [Well! That tidies things up. Except now I'm bald.]
Skin tone, medium (70, 5)

Aaaand stop. I can work with that. I'm a flying, mind-bending, time-bending, exhibitionist freak of a man with some weird fetishes that everyone wants to fuck whether I like it or not, and I need sex to survive. I have a huge tattoo on my chest that says "THE FLYING FUCKER" with silly dick art tattooed around it, and I never wear clothes.

>>7486006
>never wear clothes
Scratch that, I wear a cape because I'm just that awesome.

>>7485273
Why do you call yourself The Slug Guy?

>>7486006

In one of the oddities of that CYOA, Freak is not a Toggle but an Event. Therefore, you can't turn it off.

>>7486026
When he was little he fell down an old borded up well.
He was attacked by slugs. That day changed him forever.
Now he calls himself Slugman.

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>>7485984
>Summoner lvl 1
>Familiar articfact X2
>Summon familiar lvl 2

Three full time familiars plus two out of a rotating cast of five at no Mana cost due to passive regen.

Time to move out to the country with my horse wife, our house cat, and a lewd pantry spider. Don't even need spells, just use all my Mana immortality I guess.

>>7486195
Porn Physics 2 is really powerful, since then you can solve all problem by whipping your dick out. Transform or Summon Toy should help if you have problems with someone you would prefer not to fuck. Alter World to get a free house, might take couple casting to change the world so that people give you free stuff. Pleasure is nice too.

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>>7486245
>Alter World to get a free house, might take couple casting to change the world so that people give you free stuff.
No no, you see I'm shooting for some realism here. I imagine life would get boring after a few years of sitting around all day fucking your small harem of familiars. Give me a farm to tend, village to visit, mortgage to pay, wife to impregnate, kids to raise, etc.

Comfy simple life is my fetish.

>>7485753
That doesn't matter anon, your yandere would love you and give you the self confidence you need to love yourself.

>>7482584
>-12 (immortality, pocket dimension, pleasure, all topped off)
>-5 money
>-2 beauty
>-2 comfort
>-1 (picky) -- 7

>+6 high libido X
>+2 exhibitionist
>+1 let's try that
>0 fertility
>+1 seductive
>+1 nymphomaniac
>+1 milk lover
>+1 horny
>+1 milking
>+1 sweaty
>+1 super tight
>+1 sensitive
>+1 cum addict
>+2 blunt
>+1 dripping wet

Be the girl mode:
>be about to sleep at home
>suddenly the "godess" appears
>if she is a godess, then she must have come into existence at some point in time
>ask her how she came to be
>"God made me, duh"
>then, if there's a real God that made her, then she is simply a manifestation of his will, so it follows she is not a godess
>plus, the whole infinite hierarchy of gods trouble appears
>"then you're not a godess, you're more like an angel, a manifestation of his will. You should work in your entrance, it's misleading"
>"no, it's not"
>it turns into a nuh-huh, yuh-huh argument
>gets offended and makes me a woman

PS: google captcha sucks

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Monster's Den remake remade.
As I mentioned before, I'll be checking some posts and drop a hotfix if necessary. Then, onwards with the new CYOA.
Apologies it took me this long to put it out.

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>>7482346
This image is complete bullshit, if you pardon the pun.

It is not much more effective to use a milk robot compared to milking by hand in a proper milking booth if you have a smaller amount of cows. It is in fact not profitable to do so because the TCO of the milk robot is higher than the value of labour saved.

That's not to say that milking robots are bad, but they're good for larger herds of cattle. So therefore, any good farmer would stick to using your hands unless you're afraid of touching the udders for some fucked up reason.

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>>7486404

>>7486406
It's kind of fetish thing... I know, i have it too. (well milking by hand is a lot stronger fetish than the machine one.)

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>>7486407
As I know the question might come up, let me clarify.
Khulman Aswar community + the diffferent devils:
Lust: Breeds birth triple the children and sold progeny brings 2 extra G.
Wrath: Breeds lose fat at triple the rate.
Fallen: Breeds will mature 4 years earlier instead of 3.
Gluttony: Breeds gain fat at triple.
Envy: All breeds will produce 1 extra product of any type (sellable, valuable or luxury) as long as they can produce it already.
Greed: Buildables and items cost 50% and breeds cost 3G less to buy and 3G more to sell.
Pride: Breeds will produce 2 extra G per year.
Sloth: Breeds will bring 25% less if assigned and 75% more if unassigned.
Feel free to ask anything, if there are still any doubts.

>>7486404
Neat. I liked the first version well enough. I'll check this one out in a while.

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>>7486404
The Rozen Cult has their list of traits cut off. It says:
-Your farm is immune to disasters of any sort.
-Your farm has a Cave & 1 Mirror. It cannot have

We don't see what you're not allow to have. Also under "Elegy Commune" underneath the traits there's a random word "Room" that doesn't go with the rest of the sentence.

Other than that it looks good. I think a description of the monstergirl's personality would help it a lot, because right now the only monstergirls that feel fleshed out are the Abyssal Breeds that the Rozen Cult gets.

>>7486462
I can see why you'd think those things.
>Rozen Cult:
It cannot have - any other building.
>Elegy Commune
Private - Room.
You're reading the paragraph for the Cult as if it was for the Commune. Spacing issues, so, as I said, I get why you'd do that. My mistake.
>Personality
I tried that with the non-remade version. Problem is it didn't leave much space to add other details. EG: The Kraken, right now, has no space for personality. Same thing with most other breeds. Specially the most expensive ones.

>>7485835
>Did you miss the part where it says "pick ten"
Yes. Where is that?

>>7486484
In >>7482786, between the top of the orange border and the two top-most options (Bunny Butt Bounce and Analrousal).

>>7486434
How much does each item of produce sell for, and is it produced on a lifetime basis or a yearly basis.

>>7486434
The buildings subtext and breed subtext list different timeframes for trust/fat gains/losses (6 months vs 5 years). If this is not a mistake, I'd suggest noting that the 6 months is from buildings and the 5 years is naturally.

>>7486404
How does mirror exactly work? Is it a consumable?
>>7486434
Nice to see that disasters got reworked and that the ntr event got removed.

>>7486404
I really do like that you've 'gamified' this more than the previous version by adding stats to things that were previously only mentioned. However, there are some ways I feel it falls short.

The breed descriptions would really benefit from a lot more space for you to go into more detail. Give yourself an extra page if necessary. The personality traits were great and just having a rundown of their financial status makes it seem a lot more impersonal. Also, while the sellable/valuable/luxury thing is kinda neat, in practice it obfuscates the value of the breeds and takes up some extra wordspace. Instead of "The also produce 1 batch of sellable scales." why not say "They also produce 1 batch of 1g scales."

I also miss some of the unique mechanics like mixing bees and plants causes them both to grow faster.

I'm still not clear on what age we buy the breeds at. Are they all newborns when we get them? The fact that some breeds say they're already mature seems to imply that but it also makes the first several years of farming much more risky. That could be intentional though.

I didn't keep track of everything I saw, but there were a number of times when price modifiers seemed too vague to me. For example, Pride Devil says, "A breed will produce 1 extra G per every 2 years." Does this mean I get a flat 1G in my pocket every 2 years? That hardly seems worth it. Does it mean that each of a breed's produce goes up in value by 1G every 2 years? Does it mean that the sum total of a breed's produce goes up in value by 1G every 2 years? These are all very different scenarios.

You put a lot of emphasis on the fat/muscle mechanics but I have a few thoughts on that. First, do we have enough control over our breeds to keep them in the middle ground somewhere or do they just slowly increase to the extremes? Also it seems like only a few Mammal breeds have any modifiers to fat/muscle production where I remember several breeds in almost all categories having extra effects.

>>7482786
I'd like the temporary and permanent effects to be clearer on these triggerwords, perhaps a separate section or symbol. Like it's either describing as Bootyline being cumulative on each use and requires mutiple uses across a week to reach a sufficient level, but any amount past that runs the risk of being an hour-long hyper sensitivity that is unusable as a sensitivity increase and more an orgasm inducer. Also of which it states triggers can hit multiple targets at once, but would also be paired with the sensitivity increase? This is still frustrating and I can't tell if this is supposed to be a negative or the multiple aspect just isn't explained.

It's also hard to read as the dark red and black text hardly draw any contrast.

>>7486578
On the descriptions, I'd honestly have the people attribute their preferred personality to the breeds. As is, right now, I got the time to do little more than a single hotfix. If someone wants to add those, I guess I could pass them the PSD for each page.
On the insects & Plants, I had to sacrifice some things to get things properly spaced, unfortunately.
On the maturity thing, yes. You do get them when they're newborns unless you get them through the Friendship or Inheritance motivation.
On the Pride Devil, every 2 years, the cost of the produce will permanently increase in 1.
Fat/muscle, as long as there's nothing that would cause them to gain or lose fat, they remain average. I was thinking to add those modifiers to the Anaconda and a few more breeds, but it was not making much sense to me. I guess that I could add that to the squid, now that I think about it.
>>7486559
Mirrors are not a consumable, but they sort of do. You can put 1 breed per mirror, as the inside of the mirror is supposed to replicate their ecosystem. You'll still recieve the yearly G that their produce gives.
>>7486534
The trust/fat subtext was under Buildings at first, but then I moved it under breeds. I forgot to delete the old text when I did. Quite the oversight. It'd be 1 rank every 5 years.

>>7486404
>Alraune produce batches of any fruit you feed them
>Lura Berry is a type of fruit that sells for 10G

Can we feed Alraune Lura Berries to produce 5 of them each year?

Dick Deity is nearing completion. About 10-15 more options to write.
Unfortunately I will not be able to work on it for some time. May be weeks before I can finish, or after summer.

>>7486404
Community: Elegy
>Sounds nice
Previous Job: Questing
>roll....sweet, a 6
Interests: Half-breeds, farming, cooking
Items: Lura Berry and Blue Print
Buildings:
>Barns x2, 54 space increases
>Cellar
>Garden
>Brothel
>Private Room
Breeds:
50 cows
6 stallions
Devil Breed: Gluttony Devil

Income before taxes:
(+1 to produce from farming, +4 produce from Gluttony Devil, +4g to sale from Elegy bonus, +1g to sale from farming )
Cows produce 8 jugs at 6g per jug for total of 48g per year per cow.

50x48g = 2,400g per year
>Quite an operation

>Storytime:
There are bold adventurers and there are old adventurers, but there are no old, bold adventurers. Finally there came a day when I realized that most of the people who entered the game when I did were dead, crippled, or for a lucky few retired. At some point I became the old man, watching the starry eyed greenhorns planning to take on the world. So when I of my uncle's passing I decided it was time to retire back to the farm.

Using the gold from my uncle's will and everything I had saved from my quests I managed to fix up the farm and purchase 50 heads of cattle and a team of stallions to breed them and pull the milk to market. Within a couple years I made back more than 20x what I invested. Things keep going the way they've been and I might be able to set myself up as a true cattle baron, buy out other dairies and corner the market.

>>7486658
Your cows start as babies and don't start gaining weight until they mature. It'll be 11 years until they start producing and another 5 until they switch from average weight to max weight. Q.E.D, you get no income for 11 years, and get only 3g per cow for the next 5.

>>7486688
Where does it say all breeds you buy start off as babies? It says it takes cows 11 years to mature but where explicitly does it say that all bough breeds aren't mature?

And since I'm raising them for 11 years they be fat before they mature and already idolized me.

>>7486404
How do production bonuses figure against things with multiple products?

I.E., If someone with a farming interest (+1 production) has a black lotus (3 1G items, 1 5G item), does the lotus then produce 4 of the 1G pollen and 2 of the 5G lotus flowers?

>>7486702
In your example, Lotus would produce 3 pollen and 1 lotus on the first year. 4 pollen and 2 lotus on the second year, and so on. This only starts after maturity, though.

>>7486699
For the mature part, see here for clarity >>7486618
>On the maturity thing, yes. You do get them when they're newborns unless you get them through the Friendship or Inheritance motivation.

If you check the friendship motivation, it even explicitly mentions that allows them to start at fully mature. I do agree Onion needs to make this more explicit, though.

As for the weight gain, it was similarly hidden, though I can't find it right now.

>>7486705
So farming works best for things that have multiple produce types. Cool. Does the gluttony demon do the same? I.E., would a black lotus produce 3 pollen, 1 lotus for the first 5 years and then 5 pollen and 3 lotus for the next 5 when the weight shifts up two categories?

>>7486404
Can "Already Mature" breeds be impregnated? Do they give birth to already mature children? Succubi presumably give birth to Imps and Green Oni to Ogres, but what about Familiars?

>>7486708
>For the mature part, see here for clarity >>7486618
Next update should really mention that in the breeds section, when the motivations mentioned matured breeds I assumed it meant for the oni and imp breeds.

>Fucking... hell everyone. I justed wanted to make a fun lewd farming sim and now everyone's nitpicking the everloving shit out of it instead of having fun
- Onion, probably

>>7486731
I'm fine with that. Nitpicking's harmless.
>>7486722
No. Already mature breeds cannot be impregnated unless they are Onis or Succubi.
I mean, I don't think a ghost giving birth to another ghost would make a lot of sense. It'd be like a skelleton getting impregnated and giving birth to a smaller skelleton.

>>7486731
Onion said >>7486434
>Feel free to ask anything, if there are still any doubts.

I've been looking forward to this for several threads, so I view it as helping Onion find bugs. (I've been behind probably half of these request for clarification posts)

>>7486735
Speaking of ghosts, you could call their produce ectoplasm instead of miscellaneous resources if you need an idea for that.

>>7486735
Yeah, that makes sense. I just wanted to knock up some Xiaolongs for the production bonuses.

>>7486751
Page 1 says "Sellable" is 1G, "Valuable" is 3G, and "Luxury" is 5G.

>>7486752
In regards to the Xialongs, which is something that's mentioned (partially) on their description in the non-reworked version is that there are as many Xialongs as there can be. Unless a Xialong dies, there can't be any more brought into this world, but they're so valuable nobody really wants to kill them.
>>7486748
Yeah, I've been thinking on that. I was in a bit of a rush when I wrote that part.
>>7486742
And I appreciate the help. Specially since it's probably the last thing Imma do with Monster's Den for a long time and I want to leave things as clear as possible.

>>7486769
A few more questions, then:

If you have a half-breed interest (maturation time -2) do lilies and seaweed (maturation time 2 years) reach maturity instantly?

As I mentioned earlier, the Alraune mentions that it can produce any fruit fed to it. Does this include the 10G cost Lura Berry Trinket?

To clarify on trinkets:
I assume that the map protects you from the 'Collector' disaster, though it might be best to mention this specifically.
However, I'm not sure on which disasters the old weaponry is good against. Does it protect against bandit raids, wandering ferals and angry mobs?

Do Narcolya produce 2 valuable drugs per year, or 2 valuable aphrodiasiacs, 2 valuable opiates, and 2 valuable narcotics?

What do abyssals produce?

Several breeds produce eggs after impregnation. Is this in addition to offspring?

>>7486404
Did you mean to call the insect building a groove and not a grove? The first is basically dancing whereas the second is a bunch of trees.

>>7486790
On the Half-Breed interest, yes.
On the Alraune, it's one of the things that I would like for other people to notice by themselves, but yes.
On the Old Weaponry, yes. And the Owl also helps with the Collector disaster.
Narcolya produce 2 batches of valuable drugs, among which you can find aprhodisiacs, opiates and narcotics.
Abyssals don't "produce" per se. They bring money to their farmer through other methods, such as research in the Abyss. In the Rozen Cult, the farmer is essentially a sacrifice in case they summon a very dangerous creature. That's why they get paid.
In case you refer to the Aquatic and Avian breeds, the eggs are the offspring. 1 batch of eggs equates 1 child, as many of the others die before birth since the breed's womb is not evolved to the point where oviposition is sustainable.
>>7486800
Yeah, that was a typo. Or, rather, I wasn't sure about the difference between groove and grove. It still was some sort of mistake.

>>7486804
is there a place that explains how many S is in one G

the standard is 100, but the cyoa makes me think 10 is more likely

>>7486404
>>7486407
>>7486434
Does greed devil make breeds that are 2g free?
Does revelatory mirror give me permanent idolized trust with all breeds?
Does wall negate the penalty from thunderstorms but still confer the bonus?

I feel like there are way too many ways to break the system here.

>>7486828
That's a thing that was on the non-remade version. There were three currencies. Copper, Silver and Gold. 10 Copper = 1 Silver. 10 Silver = 1 Gold. EG: 35S = 3G+5S
>>7486836
Yes, there are plenty of ways to break the system. They are just not outright stated because I'd rather have people notice them by themselves.

>>7486836
The wall says that natural disasters (I.E., thunderstorm and flood) are stopped, but require 7g of repair to the wall after.

>>7486845
so put it in the cyoa

>>7486847
But the question was if i still got the bonus after it prevents it

>>7486404
A childhood friend and I realized we both had similar voracious sexual appetites and decided to move to Naver's Cross in order to breed and profit off our own personal sex toys. The other residents aren't very happy about a half-breed holding partial ownership of the farm but they have to admit she knows how to treat her own kind right.

>Community
Naver's Cross

>Job
Cartographer

>Motivation
Friendship

>Items
Map
Ivory Liquor
Lura Berry -10

>Interests
Half-Breeds
Vices
Poetry

>Buildings
Market
Milker
Wall
Brothel -8
Arcaneum -5
Barn -6
Garden -3
Dungeon -4

>Breeds
Stallion
Fox -4
Tiger -6
Monkey King - 4
Cow -2.5
Rabbit -.5
Lilly -2
Berry Bush -4
Alraune -5
Narcolyum -6
Succubus -7
Green Oni -6
Viper -2.5
Boa -3.5
Quetzal -10
Lust Devil

At first I was going to have a bunch of Rabbits as the Lust Devil makes them amazing moneymakers, churning out 30G litters every 9 months, but then I noticed that Vices reduces their cost by 2, meaning I'd have to pay people 5 silver to take them away. Good idea for another build though. Otters would be even better, too.

The brothel really goes hard for the prison/dungeon motif with the girls locked and chained up in various positions inviting the guests to rape them however they want. However, as all my girls Idolize me thanks to my interests, I assume they're all very onboard with it as well. Additionally, in 4 years the Narcolyum will be available to provide interesting drugs for the more insidious patrons to force on their toys. With each breed bringing in 10.5G every year I'll have more than enough money to keep the wall repaired and continue expanding my farm to make new and exciting whores available to my loyal customers.

Come to think of it, I'm not sure that even the prospect of rape will make the snake girls appeal to the citizens of Naver's Cross but they can be for my enjoyment if nothing else.

>>7486850
It only protects your breeds, it doesn't stop the disaster. You get the bonus.

>>7486404
>>7486880
Gonna go ahead and make that Otter Factory build.

>Community
Lilyum Church

>Jobs
Cartography

>Motivation
Riches

>Items
Map
Ivory Liquor
Lura Berry -10

>Interests
Half-Breeds
Poetry
Rest

>Buildings
Home
Barn
Private Room
Basement
Wall
Pond -6
-Extra Room x15 -15
Arcaneum -5

>Breeds
Otter x21 -63
Red Oni -6
Lust Devil

So a virgin Otter pup sells for 3 + 2 + 1 * 1.5 = 9G each. Each (non-virgin) Otter produces around 12 virgin Otter pups every 3 months. With 21 Otters that's a yearly income of about 9 * 12 * 21 * 4 = 9072G. Now, of course, the hard part is going to be actually selling 1008 virgin Otter pups a year. That's where my Cartographer contacts come in handy. I hope to sell them as far and as fast as I can, and I can definitely afford to discount the product quite drastically.

The Red Oni is around mostly to provide an easy answer to anyone asking who's impregnating all these Otters. I'll be doing most of the work myself but she's free to have as much Otter pussy as she wants.

Finally, since I didn't mention it in my other build, the Lura Berry and Ivory Liquor are for myself in both builds. Shape up my body a bit and up my production so I can keep up with the physical demands of my gruelling jobs.

>>7486404
Well, here's my garden build: So far, it looks like I'll have 140 mature lilies by the end of year 3 thanks to them maturing instantly. I am afraid.

>Reality Difficulty
>Elegy Commune
+1gold/produce/fat rank
+1 garden, brothel, and private room

>Job:
>Cartography
+60G, Map

>Motivation:
>Riches
+2 gold/produce and +2 gold/sale

>Trinkets:
>Map (From Job)
>Old Weaponry
This gives me protection from non-natural disasters.

>Interests:
>Half-breeds, Cooking, Farming
+1 Base trust, -2 maturation time
+2 Trust while fat, +1 fat/5 years
+1 produce/type produced/year, +1 G/produce

>Buildings: (100 Starting gold)
1xGarden (free) with upgrade (1G)
4xGarden+Upgrades (20G)
1xWall (15G)
1xBrothel (Free)
1xPrivate Room (Free)

>Breeds (100-36=64G Available. 40 Garden Slots Available.)
1xBlack Lotus (8G) [Matures in 8 Years]
4xAlraune (20G) [Matures in 6 Years]
18xLilies (36G) [Mature, 2 produce/year, 4G/produce(1 Base + 1 Farmer +2 Riches), Trusting]
17 slots left open

>Devil Breed
>Gluttony Devil
x2 Fat Rate, +1 produce/fat rank