This is the go-to place to discuss (and produce) erotic fiction of all types, from the fap-and-go fics to porn with a substantial plot. Drawfags are also welcome- illustrated stories are the best ones! For drawing requests also check out the /d/raw thread:
https://boards.4chan.org/d/catalog#s=/d/raw
Writefags, consider pastebin/titanpad rather than dumping for your stories. You can also use 1d4chan for /tg/-related smut
You are advised to tag your stories so that people know what they're looking at. This will attract more feedback from people interested in the themes you're exploring. Consider quoting the OP when delivering. This will make it easier to find (and critique!) the new stories in a thread.
People appreciate it a lot when you give them constructive feedback and criticism, so make sure to do so. We thrive on it. Don't be afraid to speak your mind about a story that caught your attention. This will help everyone in the long run.
Requests are encouraged to promote a steady flow of new content.There's nothing like a good request to get the creative juices flowing. Try to expand your ideas - a bare-bones request doesn't give us much of a good idea as to what you want. Have fun with it! Keep in mind that it might take some time to get to yours, and each writefag is interested in different kinds of things.
Remember to post pictures when possible to keep the thread alive, but keep image dumps to a minimum so that more OC can be posted.
Master smut list:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ccAAmGecQiEE5ywZc4S4d1347WuMPEsF3DbSNAS4LRo/edit
Recent entries
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1i7J7K_YNvIemfZ7p4rYB7kJMdvzrqSeAuYkj_Bb9uyw/edit#gid=1806897118
Unfilled request list:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nyDKegfYhIvlv7ZvGoxswIVkiG5lw1lrOeDFvZbw_WU/edit?pli=1
Previous thread: >>7434776
Clock is still ticking Snek!
Reposting since I caught the tail end of the last thread:
3000 word update, new content at “Sounds like you need somebody to show you around"
Friendly Competition:
https://pastebin.com/HsLMqTi6
tags so far:
>kissing, long tongue, femdom, gentle femdom, drinking, smoking, large breasts, size difference
>>7452707
We'll see what happens!
>>7378916
Anchoring for part 2 of Bel Chandra spanking story
Part 1:
https://pastebin.com/XtGin19A
If you need an outline:
Guy fights monsters with sword or gunfire
Belchandra does little help if at all during fight, preferring to laze around and chastise him for sloppy fight techniques n shit.
He comes up with a plan to separate her from her joy and pride: arms.
He does so, and outs the struggling lady onto his lap to spank her juicy blue jiggling ass red (or purple, whichever one works)
She swears and rants throughout the spanking while he simply enjoys the feeling of dominance and her blue ass.
He gets friskier as it goes on, fingering her asshole to her shock.
She bargains mercy, but he rejects and fucks her ass as punishment.
Throughout ass fuck he gropes and spanks her blue booty until he cums inside.
This is what I have in mind, but feel free to modify outline to your preference. Thank you so much for your hard work anon!
can i plug some previously written smut here? i write touhou fanfic centering around 2hus with weiners, and have been in a slump for like two years. i tried to stretch a plot over the porn and it's gone to hell ;_;
>>7452966
I'm sure nobody will complain, the more the merrier.
Done with a request I got off some dude on Discord!
Being a mostly-vanilla nerd, writing some more dubcon-centric material was interesting.
>Title: Merlus & The Sphinx
>Link: https://pastebin.com/kyE57XKV
>Tags: Fantasy, Vaginal sex, F/M, Dubcon, Monster girl, Sphinx, Creampie, Impregnation, Pregnant, Action, Light bondage, Exotic vagina, Vaginal fingering
>>7452969
cool. pastebin seems to be the medium of choice so I'll link the first chapter
https://pastebin.com/30VdQkSu
futanari is the main focus, exclusively f/f. thanks in advance to anyone who takes the time to have a look!
>>7452818
Hey Snek, did you have any thoughts on the 'Male Borealan pirate getting slowly dommed by Human female' thing that got thrown out a few threads ago? If it's not something that interests you, would you be open to another writer doing something with it - assuming one would be interested, of course.
>>7452818
The wait for this was worth it.
>>7452677
I own that book. I have nothing to contribute to the thread but I found it interesting to see it pop up on /d/ of all places
Got something I wrote a month or so back.
https://pastebin.com/3EsfngM4
Tags are at the top under the title, I haven't gotten a lot of feedback on the other couple sites I submitted it to so that's welcome. Either way, enjoy.
>>7453604
Well you gave me a good cum so there's that. Ending could of used a longer wind-down but at that point I was too horny to care maybe.
>>7452992
Bit short, but I liked it.
>>7453604
I mean, it's a very generic story
It's written well enough, it's just that there's a vast array of stories that it is nearly identical to, so there really isn't much to say
Also, I gotta ask why you bothered making the girl a futa if the dick didn't actually get any use in the story
>>7453903
The plan was to make more short stories with the character (so plenty of opportunities to utilize the futa aspect) but desu I'm a lazy bastard so who knows with that.
>>7454041
That's kinda what I figured
Well, I'd encourage you to write more, but if you want more responses, use a plot that stands out more
>>7454084
Any writing tips then? I kinda figured since I'm doing smut and my primary goal is just fap material that a simpler plot is ok.
>>7454104
>I kinda figured since I'm doing smut and my primary goal is just fap material that a simpler plot is ok.
If that's all you wanna do, you're good to go.
It's just that things tend to get more interest if they move beyond pure jack stuff, that's all
>>7453491
2000 word update, new content at “It's plain to see which approach he prefers"
Friendly Competition:
https://pastebin.com/HsLMqTi6
>no new tags
(sorry it's a bit late today, Warframe is a cruel mistress)
>>7453165
That's a similar dynamic to what I did with Splashdown, so at least for the moment I don't have any plans to write that one.
Sure, other people can write in the setting if they want to, I'd only ask that they credit me if they post it anywhere.
>>7448139
Alright so I'm fleshing out the potential plot a bit more for the latter and I ran into one conflict for the Drakengard/NieR Automata crossover: Angelus, Caim's pact dragon.
Should she too be revived alongside Caim or should she be separated from him? Should she be a pod or an android, or even a machine to recreate their first encounter? Should she even be included at all?
>>7454655
Femdom writers are a dime a dozen here, as are monstergirl writers. Have you even looked?
>>7454660
Futa is gay, Snekguy actually writes a story that the sex happens to be a part of.
I'm weird I know
>>7454670
Yeah, because he's not the only writer who writes stories that sex happens to be a part of on this thread. You gotta open your mind up, man.
>>7454678
If you mean liking the trannies and futa then no, I'll pass
>>7454736
Are you blind? Trannies and futa are actually rather rare here.
Though maybe you'd see more things which aren't tranny or futa more often and by more people if you'd be a little bit less of a dick about requesting them, hm?
>>7454736
I'm with this guy. This futa shit is just repressed gays and I tired of seeing it. I might be in the minority but I could go the rest of my life without seeing another trap or futa
>>7454747
I've only been on this board for like, 4 months and it's in every fucking thread.
For the assholes complaining about futa: have you considered that maybe you should actually try requesting non-futa fics instead of bitching about the supposed lack of same? Nobody wants to satisfy a whiner.
I've been thinking about a story about a lonely man who, out of desperation, summons a succubus. He doesn't summon her for sex, but rather he summons her and asks her to be his friend. He would then show her all sorts of different hobbies such and video games and anime. My biggest issue is that I don't really know where to go with it, and I've always been an idea guy when it comes to things like this.
>>7454801
She tries to seduce him (or not, i dunno), they eventually fall in love like humans and then fuck like rabbits. That good enough for you?
>>7454774
Here's the summary for a request for some trapxmonster girl. I can give more detail if anyone wants.
>Recount of a Monstergirl porn video being shot, both the behind-the-scenes elements and the actual video.
>Plot of the video is that a 18-19 year old member of the paladin Order has been captured, and a monster is forcing him to cum against his will.
>There's a lot of light femdom, pretend nonconsent, and an eventual forced orgasm.
>In the video, the guy acts scared as hell and like he hates monsters.
>On set, he's completely hedonistic. Turning people on, jerking himself off, and acting completely differently than he does in the video.
It'd be bisexual and focus on that contrast between how he acts and how he is.
>>7452992
I normally like when the monstergirl stays with her parner but this is great if short. You have anything else?
>>7454455
I love these foreplay sections, because I can run a word filter on it to turn them f/f without it sounding silly.
>>7454908
No other monster girl stuff since this if my first time doing anything related to it. I do have another impregnation-related fic on my pastebin called Witch Kisses.
Don't know if I should do another part for this one or not. You have any ideas?
Some time ago I posted the first seven chapters of a Shadman fanfic. I finally updated and plan to do so more often. I put it on Deviantart. Chapter 8 is new.
tags overall: MxF, MxM, electricity, bondage, homophobia.
tags for Ch8: MxF, oral rape, puke, bondage, dirty talking.
>>7455001
>electricity, bondage, homophobia.
Mike Pence is that you?
>>7454455
>Sure, other people can write in the setting if they want to, I'd only ask that they credit me if they post it anywhere.
Cool! Well, in case anyone wants it, here's the relevant prompt:
How about a male space pirate rape cat who has to deal with being subordinate to a human woman, but is smart enough not to try and maul her as he knows working for her is the best he could hope for. Then learning to cope with her ordering him around, and finding his thoughts turning from pinning her down and having his way with her, to the opposite, with her dominating him despite her diminutive stature.
Cue some bonding, followed by her surprising him by joining him in the showers when he's trying to relieve some stress - less so revealing that she has a thing for him, than simply confirming his suspicions. Maybe a follow up where people wonder how she's got a 'wild' Borealan at her beck and call.
>>7454774
Well, I got a non-futa request then.
A female is lost in a forest and is ambushed by a group of worms/snakes with heads for penis and proceeds to rape her (excuse that they feed of sexual energy or something). But eventually she takes a liking to them, and brings some home to keep as pets/fucktoys
>>7454801
>>7454807
I could do this as a short, but I wouldn't want to do this as series until I've wrapped up some of the stuff in progress.
And of course, my succubi are always, in my head, quantum futa, depending on what they want to be at that particular moment. If that's not what you want, I could leave that out.
>>7455409
Shit, forgot my name.
>>7455409
I know this is /d/, but I would prefer no futa.
>>7455492
You're the original requester?
OK. No futa it is.
But the guy won't have a penis, either. It's only fair.
>>7455508
Dude, seriously. Don't take requests if you don't want to write them, and stop injecting your fetish everywhere.
>>7455531
I wasn't serious about the guy not having a penis. I thought that was obvious. And I might legit take this one on. Why would I take a request I didn't want to write? That makes no sense. That's why I asked if they minded if she was a futa. I've written some non-futa and even some M/F stuff before.
>>7455534
Hey D, what's the status report on the stuff you're currently writing?
>>7455554
GFH: On hold temporarily.
The group sex one: I'll try to get back to it if something else doesn't grab my attention first.
PWA8: Haven't started it. Not sure what I want to happen in it. Need to think on that.
The Long Pull: I finished it a few minutes ago.
The Long Pull
https://pastebin.com/bqS5un4A
>tags: futanari, futa-on-futa, big ejaculation, eating come, come in food, handjobs, masturbation, blowjobs, public nudity, exhibitionism, buttplugs, coffee
Enjoy. It's the best part of waking up.
Unless anyone can think of a way to use the currently PLACEHOLDER community section of fourleaffics for anything, I'm going to replace it in a small overhaul of thr homepage.
Any ideas?
>>7455885
A link to the /efg/ Discord is an idea I've had.
>>7455885
Perhaps that's a sign we should start to build something resembling a community first. It would be a welcome change from complaining about each others' fetishes and waiting for new fics to trickle in.
>>7455921
Good suggestion, any ideas?
>>7455947
Interesting. Maybe I'm still new here, but I always got a sense of community in the threads themselves already, but maybe that's just because of the tripcodes.
>>7455988
Look at my name, matey, I've had this on the whole time I've been here and it's never made any difference.
Probably because /d/ has never really needed tripcodes as much.
>>7455947
I wish. Honestly, I've been trying to come up with ways to bring together a community, but what worked well enough on a weekend thread on /tg/ just doesn't apply to a /d/ general that never stops going.
More drawfags wouldn't hurt either, I still remember how Lewdanon's tendency to show up unexpected was guaranteed to delight.
>>7455988
Community's more than just tripcodes and recognizable names, it's about the sense of belonging, shared interests, and all that stuff.
>>7455921
My original ideas for what the community section would link to:
1. Requests. I can't figure out the best way to handle fic requests on the wiki. There might be some plugins that are good for it.
2. Contests. I know they've been organised before. Might be a bit easier to organise through a wiki.
3. Links to writing guides. That's already doable, but it's not worth having an entire box for community if this is all we do with it.
4. A way to co-ordinate tagging cleanup.
The point of the community section isn't to try to use the wiki as a way to hold the discussions that are held here or on the discord. That's not what wikis are good for.
>>7456033
I agree with your points, except the first one. It will be pretty messy, like the request portion of the Google document. Besides, dropping a request here, having multiple people discuss it until one takes it just feels more natural and it's good to read brainstorms.
However a page where the writers themselves could show that they are open for commissions would be handy.
3000 word update, new content at “Oh fine,” she conceded"
Friendly Competition:
https://pastebin.com/HsLMqTi6
new tags:
>blowjob, boobjob, denial, light bondage
>>7455508
Kek. Not OR, but I could do futa if the summoner was a NEET girl who wanted a friend.
Even better if they have some dialogue eventually (like post-coital pillow talk) about how succubi were thought to steal lifeforce but it was only so because of the Medieval belief that some went out with semen.
But mostly I'd like to see f/f -> f/futa when the summoner chick begins to want more.
I like the idea of a girl trying to summon a incubus and getting a futa succubus instead because of a paperwork screwup in hell
Here's my mockup for an updated homepage after replacing the "Community" section. https://fourleaffics.miraheze.org/wiki/User:Startle_Stars/New_homepage
Changes:
Links to browse By Author, By Length, By Setting, for fics with Audio and for guides
Number of relationship types listed increased from 3 to 7
Number of popular tags increased from 7 to 18.
Unfortunately, this makes deficiencies with tagging certain fics much, much more apparent. We have approximately 203 fics catalogued, but there are 517 tags for these.... That's an average of 2.55 unique tags per fic. I realise we deal with a lot of niche stuff but still. I'm CERTAIN many of these are duplicates, or tags that don't make sense, or tags that are too vague. Many of them also either have no description or really bad descriptions.
I also need to make sure that all author tags are put into the author category and all setting tags are put into the setting category.
Before I do a big tag cleanup I will not replace the homepage. Consider that an opportunity to figure out a use for the Community section in that time.
>>7456677
Here's an example of duplicate category:
https://fourleaffics.miraheze.org/wiki/Category:Dubious_consent
https://fourleaffics.miraheze.org/wiki/Category:Dubcon
The correct choice here is that Category:Dubious_consent should take priority.
>>7455264
You've made this request before, why do they have to be worms/snakes and not tentacles or whatever?
>>7452677
>ashens
kek
>>7455110
I might try doing something for this, though it probably won't be done in a normal human timeframe or be up to the usual standards.
I was thinking the majority of the story would take place on a mostly-human crewed privateer/corsair ship, maybe in the employ of a (company of) Broker engaging in aggressive capitalism along a contested and pirate-infested trade route that cuts close to several opportune asteroid/planet clusters. If you'd like to change something about the prompt, or if you or anyone else has any extra input, now would be the time.
>>7454455
Also, while I can't guarantee quality, I'd want to at least be as setting accurate as I can, so if you'd be cool with giving me an overview of anything and everything you can think of that'd be relevant, I'd be grateful. Space vessel designs; Stellar trade and how FTL affects it in your setting; the viability of piracy; Spacer culture; and racial naming conventions spring to mind, but really anything at all would be super helpful. The more detail the better.
>>7454801
>>7454807
I've been thinking about this idea more and more, and... I've been having trouble finding the 'smut' in it. I think it could be a thing that, so long as they don't have sex, she can't take his soul back to Hell. If I were writing that, I'd probably call it Before The Devil Gives You Head or something like that.
Maybe they DO have sex, but somehow, he doesn't have a soul, and she thinks he's bound it to some important object in his life. So thus why she feigns interest in his hobbies to see if he attached his soul to the XBOX or whatever.
This could even be a collaboration series like Olympic Beasts and Where To Fuck Them. We only got a few of those, but I thought that was fun.
Anyone else interested?
>>7457117
>collaboration
It's time to give up on the dream, most named writers like snek, cynical, and others are usually busy with their own stuff
>>7456800
There are a few differences between tentacles and these snakes/worms, despite the two being wriggling masses of things to penetrate women.
For tentacles, in terms of the relationship dynamic, they are generally portrayed as being more powerful and more capable of making woman more helpless, like being able to lift them in air or restraining them. So in this case the control is almost solely in favor of the tentacles.
On the other hand, the relationship dynamic involving the snakes/worms swing in favor of women, as humans in this scenario is the stronger being and is capable of fighting back (tossing them aside, stepping on one, wrangling one, etc). I mean we are also strong enough to throw aside or wrangle snakes too (minus the pythons and anacondas).I imagine that their main strategy is to swarm, so make up for their individual weakness.
So in my request, what I would like to see is the struggling woman being able to fight back, even during sex scenes, but eventually overwhelmed by the numbers of these creatures. If possible I would also like an ending, where she grows to like them, even keeping some as pets/fucktoys
https://pastebin.com/VBd5ina9
Feedback is appreciated, especially for the girl.
>>7457130
How hard is it to read the op. tag your shit
I don't have a pastebin, but I have a HF for my erofics.
https://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/Umbrelloid/24628/MATOI-RYUKO-Pt.1.
My newest one. It's pretty good. Huge cock shemales, stomach bulging, sloppy throatfucking - the works.
>>7456147
I try to defend equatorials but man it kind of hard to. They just use dudes and abandon them most of the time.
>>7457133
There's no mention of diapers in this. It just seems pretty vanilla?
>>7457280
Sorry, this all happened like a month ago and it all kind of blends together.
Tag cleanup advice needed.
Right now the tag used for boob-to-dick is "Paizuri", but "Titjob" has also been used. This is one of the cases where there's no clear choice of what tag should be chosen to be the correct tag and which the duplicates.
I've already cleaned up from 517 to 504 tags.
>>7457362
Pazuri is a more apt term
"Titjob" has no tact to it
>>7457362
>>7457381
I would avoid using Japanese terms where possible.
Nothing that we write here really has much to do with hentai/anime, as that denotes a specific art style or country of origin which is irrelevant in written works. Similarly all of the /tg/ content is of Western origin.
I suggest "boobjob".
>>7457386
what about breastplay?
>>7457386
Tit pussy
>>7457386
Boobjob it is for now then. Less informal than titjob, and breastjob just isn't even a used term.
>>7456147
Welp, James has engaged Snek's patented "become a helpless pushover in the face of someone treating him like a literal piece of meat" mode again.
You can't have ALL of your male characters react that way to being treated like garbage. Change it up sometimes!(outside of commissions) I know you like that a bunch but it's appeared so many times already, I feel it's starting to get stale
>>7457495
But how can he possibly get off if the woman suggests that she feels empathy at all?
>>7457495
If he resists too seriously and is visibly not enjoying what's happening, then it just becomes a rape scenario, which isn't what I'm trying to portray here.
He put up a little resistance but now he's melting, which I guess I'm almost alone in liking ITT lol.
>>7457111
How familiar are you with the setting? I have a PDF with pictures that goes over the basics of the physical characteristics, culture and behavior of the Borealans.
https://www.patreon.com/file?h=7752394&i=773404
Hair and skin color can be anything you want, and naming conventions use a lot of hard Ks, Zs and Xs, eg:
Xhe
Raz
Beltza
Korza
Chaka
Azi
Zagza
Space travel is slow and inconvenient, ships that can make superlight jumps are large as they require several nuclear plants onboard to generate the power required, once a ship gets small enough that it can't reasonable house one nuclear reactor then it can't jump, and the fewer they have the shorter the jump range. Jumps are very strenuous and cause all kinds of interference with the nervous system, from headaches to temporary insanity, and people are usually secured in their seats during.
Pirates would be targeting civilian jump freighters and they wouldn't have access to a jump-capable ship, so they'd be using a skiff or a similar small vessel to intercept freighters at the edge of the system and board them after they exit superlight. This would only happen near outlying colonies, if you need more information on those read the first chapter of 'Or Die Alone'.
A jump freighter will look like two large blobs, the cockpit and hab module towards the front, and the engines and generators towards the back, linked by a skeletal frame upon which the cargo containers are secured. Imagine a scaffold covered in shipping containers, and the whole thing would be about the size of an aircraft carrier.
A skiff is probably going to be a retired UNN gunship or a lander illegally sold rather than being scrapped, basically a Pelican from Halo.
>>7457615
There are tons on scenarios where he can resist more and still have things not end in rape. You want some examples?
>>7457386
>Nothing that we write here really has much to do with hentai
>Similarly all of /tg/ content is of Western origin
You say that you don't write hentai, but that you rather write stuff that belongs on /tg/ or is related to it. The problem with that is that this isn't /tg/, this is /d/ - alternative hentai.
Hell, implying that what is written is /tg/ and not hentai is a contradiction, as monster girls sure as fuck aren't western, which you say /tg/ is.
Monster girls were practically born from hentai, with MSQ making the popularity explode.
Stop it with the anti-weeaboo shit, I mean, isn't boobjob just a term for breast implants? How is that any better than paizuri?
>>7457637
"Monstergirls" in media have existed since at least the 60s, there have been catgirls and demi-humans in literature and movies for at least that long. Hell you could argue that things like harpies and centaurs qualify as monstergirls and those date back to ancient Greece and earlier. There's no difference between Medusa and a Lamia, that Japan popularized their recent incarnations really isn't relevant.
Races like the Kzinti and the Caitians pre-date the Japanese concept of Nekomimi by decades for example, so I don't think it would make sense to tag my stories as 'Neko'.
I've argued with the /tg/ crowd plenty about adapting to /d/'s content and embracing the wider rage of fetishes here, but what I write isn't hentai any more than their D&D inspired stories are. I can see 'futanari' being a more frequently searched term than 'tranny' for example, but I don't see a reason to replace English terms with Japanese ones where it's not relevant to the stories.
Sure, use Japanese tags where they're relevant, and when they pertain to Japanese concepts like for example shibari or bukkake, but I don't think they should be the defaults. Changing the name of a mundane sex act from English to Japanese is more likely to confuse most visitors and just make it harder to find, I think.
>>7457632
Sure.
>>7457130
Jess is a cutie, not sure what Artemis' deal is though. Is this pokemon stuff?
>>7457675
I'm at work but I'll have 2 for you as soon as I can
>>7457675
>popularized
When you're talking about standardizing tags and definitions, what's popular is pretty important.
Monster girls aren't eastern, but the sexualizeation of them is, at least like 90%. Thus it makes sense some of that is translated to tags revolving around monster girls.
>comparing futanari and tranny
Futanari means two-gendered, tranny is just game of pretend.
>I don't think it would make sense to tag my stories as 'Neko'.
Well, they are feline, and as "neko" means cat it sort of does make sense. But as "neko" usually refers to just cat ears, I can see why it would be weird to tag it as such.
The problem here is that western monster girls are quite closely related to furries, and having lived through 2008, and seen the downfall of fenoxo, I've found furry communities to be shit on a large scale. Thus, using the eastern term "kemono" is a far better choice - it describes the same content without carrying any of the stigma.
>likely to confuse most visitors
This IS 4chan
>just make it harder to find
Who are you writing for? This is a rhetorical question, but you should probably consider who you want to read what you write.
>>7457780
You know he uploads to way more places than just 4chan right?
>>7457123
Perhaps. It might also be having less writers around than the previous entries.
To the OR, I'm not really into doing anything long anymore, so if you want something where they slowly fall in love, I can't dedicate that kind of time right now. I could write an intro with this setup if you wanted.
>>7457780
No, see 'kemono' is another term that only applies to Japanese content. In my case if you tagged my stories as kemono, it would imply a Japanese origin or theme that isn't present, it would be misleading.
Hentai implies both an art style and an origin, both of which are irrelevant when discussing literature. Unless you're specifically writing about anime characters or in a Japanese setting, and you go to lengths to describe it as such, I just don't see that these terms have a place.
I'm not going to get into the newhalf/tranny/trap/futa argument, but where chicks with dicks are concerned most people I think will refer to that as futanari and that's the search term they'll use to find it. That's a case where the Japanese term is clearly dominant and appropriate to use.
>you should probably consider who you want to read what you write
You should consider who you want to visit the wiki, is this intended just for this thread? Just for 4chan? For a broad audience who might be interested in the content outside of 4chan? Each of those carries different implications and each audience is going to be increasingly less familiar with such niche terms.
For example if someone wanted to search for fics involving a Khajit from TES, they aren't going to use the term kemono to do that, contextually it makes no sense as the subject matter is not Japanese and they might not even be familar with the term. If someone who frequents /tg/ wanted to find a story involving a Dragonborn from D&D, 'monstergirl' is an equally non-descriptive term.
Of course this is just my opinion, as I don't run the wiki and I have no say in what terms are used, I just think that broader terms are going to be better.
>>7457818
>You should consider who you want to visit the wiki, is this intended just for this thread? Just for 4chan? For a broad audience who might be interested in the content outside of 4chan? Each of those carries different implications and each audience is going to be increasingly less familiar with such niche terms.
Wiki is pretty much for all of 4chan. It's primary purpose is to catalogue fic posted on 4chan. Of course people who don't browse 4chan can use it if they want.
>newhalf/tranny/trap/futa argument
Trap is considered distinct from futa, and trans is considered distinct from both. I don't think anyone would dispute that. At the very least, they aren't duplicates. What might be a duplicate is hermaphrodite and futa.
>
Of course this is just my opinion, as I don't run the wiki and I have no say in what terms are used, I just think that broader terms are going to be better.
I am not the tag dictator. If there's a good reason to rename a tag, you can do it. It's just time consuming.
>>7457123
A collab setting might be able to draw in more writers than a standard collab.
>>7457818
My only fear is that broader terms might destabilize things. The last thing I would want is for any of this to become popular too fast - the second it does, drama will be involved, and drama tears apart communities like nothing else.
Using obscure terms might make the community more isolated for some time, allowing memes to be created and a sense of belonging coming into existence. Otherwise, it's just a repository for erotic fiction without any community to it.
>>7457902
Honestly, I doubt many people even use the 4whatever site here. Most probably forget it even exits until the one guy brings it up.
Regarding stuff like Kzinti or Caitians, named races aren't duplicates. Even if it's something like Hyur from FFXIV. This is because named races indicate a combination of race, setting and culture from a specific IP. "Cat girl" and "Catgirl" would however be a duplicate.
>>7457130
Jess comes off as like, that kind of kid who was homeschooled because otherwise they'd be put in special Ed. Artemis is either a saint or a statutory rapist. If diapers come into this down the line then I'm kind of disappointed because he seems like a better big brother than daddy or whatever.
Also, good job swallowing your first load.
2000 word update, new content at “Railha misses the point,”
Friendly Competition:
https://pastebin.com/HsLMqTi6
new tags:
>face sitting, oral, female ejaculation, muscle, abs, sweat, tailjob
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>>7457900
> It's primary purpose is to catalogue fic posted on 4chan
In that case I would recommend using more general terms that might be more accessible to people from other boards who may not be familiar with the Japanese terms.
>>7457908
The other Anon seemed to be implying that the Japanese invented monstergirls et al, when such concepts have existed in sci-fi and fantasy for going on 70 years.
>>7458018
If people from /tg/ went to /d/, you'd expect them to educate themselves, vice versa.
If someone from /v/ goes to /jp/ and greentexts, they should expect someone to say "who are you quoting?"
Fuck other boards, this is /d/. When I'm on /jp/, I say "fuck other boards, this is /jp/". Unless it's a collab, boards shouldn't mix. What makes 4chan good is the board culture, don't dilute it.
And the monster girl thing, I meant it in the context of erotic literature, ergo erotic monster girls, something the nips made popular.
Jesus Christ, when there are multiple options for tag names just flip a coin. They're just there to make finding stuff easy, and all of those names are pretty self explanatory regardless of witch ones you go with. It's not that big a deal.
Hell you could even use multiple for the same thing and just put a slash between them:
"Paizuri/boobjob" or "Pazuzu/titjob" could be a single entry, for example.
>>7458036
>"who are you quoting?"
I've seen people get their posts deleted for saying that.
>>7458102
>Hell you could even use multiple for the same thing and just put a slash between them:
That seems the most logical option.
>>7458144
Not the most sane solution actually.
Nobody who submits content to the wiki is going to be familiar with every tag, and will just guess at what it will be. Most of the time this is correct. The purpose of preventing tag duplication is to not have a scenario where something like 60% are tagged under one and 40% under another. Just requires some maintenance.
Nobody is ever going to successfully guess that the correct tag for a boobjob is [[Category:Paizuri/Boobjob]]
Anyone interested in some kind of master list for futa on male stories?
I think I have like 30+ stories I could share in a list
Also, since I think I've read them all, any place where there could be more, except from FutanariPalace, HentaiFoundry, Litterotica?
What is the best way to write about female genitals?
Pussy sounds too rough
Vagina sounds too clinical
Nethers is confusing
>>7458178
>What is the best way to write about female genitals?
From a first person perspective.
>>7458178
I like using loins, vulva, tunnel, passage, entrance, lips.
>>7458218
I also like 'slit.' The rough version of that would be 'gash.' Not sure I ever used that.
>>7458245
Don't forget "axe wound".
>>7458250
That's up there with 'roast beef curtains' and 'baby chamber.'
>>7458250
>>7458264
>>7458264
and an Australian classic "kid shitter"
worse than said bookisms tbqh
If you use "ministrations" I will stop reading right there.
>>7458018
>>7458264
Do people actually use these in smut? I mean, why.
Flower stuff is probably my least favorite of the weird ones that show up occasionally.
I wrote a thing. A short, shitty thing with little context or detail but eh, everyone starts somewhere.
Futa-on-You, POV, impreg/mpreg?
https://pastebin.com/wyFGa3zW
As promised, the first of two scenarios where James can do more than just autopilot to "helpless pushover who likes it after 3 seconds of resisting an impending rapecat". I want to see how Snek feels about this one before proceeding to the next(and you guys feel free to tell me how garbage the scenario is)
Scenario A: James does Find Datz hot and would gladly let her ravish him on a good day, but not after all that time spent treating him like a piece of meat. He resists solely because she's a piece of shit and he wants to spite her, despite the fact that he's still into it. Realizing he can't just overpower Datz, he becomes submissive long enough to get Datz to drop her guard a bit, then violently struggles at the last second, making her drunk self lose her balance and continue to have trouble pinning him. This of course starts to piss her off, but the moment she whips out her claws and death threats, Railha politely reminds her that clawing up marines who don't want it is the perfect way to land herself in the brig for a few years. (Complete with smug look on her face from knowing Datz basically will lose for sure at this point.
>>7458816
(continued)
Not to be so easily outsmarted, Datz decides to just wear him out through brute strength and massive bulk and tries to grab him for a deathhug. But, all that raises the hair is really kicking in, and Dats finds herself constantly missing and tripping over herself, much to Railha's amusement She manages to accidentally flop on top of James, only to have him wriggle free from her grasp and accidentally rip her top off in the process. It turned out she was absolutely drenched in sweat from all the drunken exertion and heat of the room, and everything on her upper body practically popped off of her.
Datz is no quitter of course, and despite being so drunk that she's having trouble walking straight, she continues to catch James, try to squeeze the life out of him, and send him skidding across the floor as her sweaty, glistening body continues to betray her and her normally iron grip. Even though he's escaping, Jame's body is exhausted from being manhandled so much, and the two of them go from drunken cat and mouse to Datz just straight up smothering his face into her glistening abs and sweat-drenched breasts. This turns him on so hard that even with Datz being the piece of shit that she is, he cant help but let her have her way, as she's no resisting that perfect body anymore. No rape actual rape required.
>>7458817
As per tradition, there are typos everywhere because I accidentally hit submit before finishing proofreading.
fuck
'Sup all. Miraheze staff member here. Just wanted to let you all know we're aware of your project and generally cool with it. Though one of the other staff said that he was going to drop the database unless there were more stories in https://fourleaffics.miraheze.org/wiki/Category:Pet_play So uh, fair warning I guess lol. But it's cool to see people using the wiki. Keep writing everyone!
>>7452677
This next chapter of my Nier fanfic turned out to be rather romantic than lewd, but I'm still posting it just to keep up the continuity.
https://pastebin.com/6EJeUtLY
http://archiveofourown.org/works/11081142
Tags:
>handholding, cuddling, slice of life
Might add a second chapter later with erotic scenes, but for now I'll take a break and start that manticore story. >>7446269
>>7458863
Senpai noticed us
First time poster here. I've been considering writing a DnD smutfic about a socially awkward Oozemaster fucking her crush, but I've already hit a roadblock: not having any fucking ideas. What do you take inspiration from when you've got writer's block?
>>7459226
Just about anything, from a sexual fantasy to one of the threads on here.
>>7459226
What helps me get ideas is refraining from masturbation for a while. That'll get the ideas running. Most of The Long Pull's opening was during an almost agonizing dry spell that left me thinking about it almost throughout my whole day. Maybe it comes across in the text, or maybe I was just horny.
Nobody's commented on The Long Pull yet. I hope people are reading it, and I hope they like it.
>>7459328
A lot of fics here don't seem to get any comments whatsoever. Really sucks when you can't get feedback without practically begging for it.
>>7459328
It was well done, I really enjoyed the characters. I actually want to use your implant idea in a story of mine.
>>7459520
Being a namefag helps. I know I am going to read a Snekguy immediately when I see his name. I read every straight fic here but it's hard to keep track of people when they don't have a common name.
>>7459328
Link?
>>7457615
>If he resists too seriously and is visibly not enjoying what's happening, then it just becomes a rape scenario, which isn't what I'm trying to portray here.
>He put up a little resistance but now he's melting, which I guess I'm almost alone in liking ITT lol.
I enjoy this but it's becoming almost clockwork in some of your stories I guess. For every one guy who did the "melty" thing to an equatorial's lightweight verbal abuse or a polar's comforting, there'd be at least one who gives as good as they get on the dirty talk or makes sultry remarks about what they can do for the polar themselves and schmoozes right back at them.
From a Borealan perspective, the first approach with the human occasionally reasserting themselves might be a kind of extremely erotic teasing, while the second style would be crazy intense.
Hey guys. I have added another route to the following interactive erotica I was recently shown.
http://www.bearchive.com/~addventure/game1/docs/812/812647.html
I signed the parts I have just written with an 'l'. I'd appreciate any feedback. I'm still rather bored, as there isn't anything for me to do this weekend, so let me know if there are any possible routes you would like me to write about, or any fetishes you would like to see.
English is not my first language, but I like to think I'm very good at it. Thanks for reading.
>>7458018
>all this bickering
they're totally into each other right
>>7459607
Shhh, you're not supposed to know that yet!
>>7459616
They can find a femdom middle ground through the power of love! And/or their shared human fetish, like the filthy degenerates they are.
jesus fucking christ even /d/ has generals now?
this website is truly doomed
Does anyone know of any good Master PC stories made after they stopped updating the website?
>>7459687
/d/ has had generals for years now
>>7459687
I fail to see how could a general ruin the site.
>>7459687
>being this new
We've had general for a couple years, anon
>>7459683
I'll address the comments, just getting the update done, bit pressed for time today.
>“You should know,” Railha commented from across the room, “Alphas don't usually end up at the bar on their own.”
VULNERABILITY DETECTED
Comfort her about her not really being an alpha
That doesn't matter in the same way around humans and polars
Now all that remains is a way to get Railha more on board with aggressive sex every now and again, and then they can kiss and make up
>>7459721
>>7458495
2000 word update, new content at "Railha had finished the rest"
Friendly Competition:
https://pastebin.com/HsLMqTi6
new tags:
>girl-on-girl, vaginal, group sex
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>>7458816
>>7458817
I did have him get some revenge via giving head and showing her up, but I can go back and add a few more instances of Datz being too drunk to dominate him properly maybe.
I do want him to be into it though, some people just have that reaction and personally I find it 10/10.
>>7459579
I can give him a few more snarky comments, but being new to the station and generally unsure of himself at this point, I don't want to make him a Casanova, I feel like the older Marines would absolutely behave in the way you describe though. I'm sure there are some total experts in dealing with Borealans, like Moralez or McGregor. I do have the pirate story coming up in the future too, which is going to be a case of the human resisting and just escalating things further and further.
That is a good point though and it can be resolved by using some more confident and experienced male characters rather than rookies.
>>7459821
Do keep in mind I said pretty early on that he is still into it, it's just that wanting to spite her over how much of a piece of shit she was being was taking priority
>>7459821
>“I'm just drunk enough that a threesome is starting to sound like a good idea.”
From what we've seen of polars previously, I would have assumed that was in the game plan from the start
>>7459842
The caveat being it's a threesome with an equatorial. Polars wouldn't even care about multiple people if they were human or other polars.
>>7459821
>“That is an apt expression, yes. She starts fights that she can't win, she drinks more than she can handle, and I'm usually the doctor on call when she ends up in the ER. We've spent enough time together, gotten to know eachother, I guess that makes us friends in a manner of speaking. When you're stuck in a room with someone for a couple of hours, trying to rehydrate them with an intravenous drip, you don't have much of a choice but to chat and get to know them.”
they met after Datz tried to hook up with a cute human by challenging him to a drinking contest
she is still sensitive that it took four repeat incidents before she learned that all humans have an unnatural alcohol tolerance
they both seem to have whatever the space-cat-on-human version of jungle fever though, so at least they had some common ground for a relationship
>>7459864
I get the feeling the main problem was Datz being too much of a dork rather than anything else
>>7459821
>>7459688
Check Literotica.
Good lord.
8/10 fics I tried to read had major grammatical errors in the first sentence. What a shit hole.
>>7459956
Care to back up your extraordinary claims with extraordinary evidence?
>>7459548
>Being a namefag helps.
It doesn't help that much. Even then, an occasional "pretty good" is about the most feedback you can expect.
>>7459963
And god help you if you want them to give more than two sentences' worth of feedback if you don't have a massive fan club like Snek. You might as well try posting them on some other imageboard with a quarter of the population, since it'll be just as likely that you'll find someone to care.
>>7459821
While we're on the subject, I'm going to tell you right now, so you know before the writing starts
For the zagza/pilot story?
She should be an absolute all-out cock enthusiast who is absolutely stoked at the opportunity to take giant alien dick and very eager to get it, not hesitant or surprised or reluctant or any of that crap, just happy she's finally getting to live out her exceedingly lewd dreams
>>7455556
>finished
>melanie didn't get to see stella again
I really wish you made lengthier sex scenes. As it is, it feels like going through the motions because it ends before the the head of steam is really built up.
>>7459966
I usually post half a paragraph when I comment. Of course, it's usually nitpicking, and some flavor of "play my fucking song kuma", but I also mention which elements worked for me that I hope to see more of.
The problem is that my tastes are almost exlusively futas & traps, and good stories with those are few and far between.
Musclebound jock gets cursed by a gypsy, making all his masculinity slowly drain into his cock, ultimately leaving him a really hung femboi.
His GF actually likes the change and slowly becomes the dominant in the relationship.
>>7459842
>>7459864
>>7459887
Yeah maybe I should make that clearer.
>>7459987
No problem, like I said, Polars aren't rapey. Equatorials are my personal rape containment solution.
>>7459966
If you read the stories that generate a lot of discussion, they all have one common thread, they focus on plot as much as sex. Now, I'm not saying that's inherently better, especially when it comes to porn, but a story with more plot is necessarily going to have more character development and be more complex.
People discuss lore, character interactions, what-if scenarios, they don't really go into detail about the minutia of the sex scenes, which is what fap fics mostly comprise of.
If you write a short fap fic, there's just a lot less to discuss, that doesn't speak to its quality by any means, just that besides the technical aspects of the writing there's not a lot to talk about.
You either like the porn or you don't, and there isn't much to say besides that.
D. for example, is good at creating characters that people like, their interactions generate discussion and people speculate about their relationships and what might happen if X met Y.
Cynical has a very long story going where he's meticulously developing the relationship between two characters, and that generates speculation concerning where they'll end up.
I'm good at worldbuilding, so when people discuss my stories they're usually coming up with what-if scenarios or speculating about the setting.
Although sex is a component of all these stories, it isn't what drives discussion, it's incidental. If you want to generate a lot of discussion, then you need something that holds people's interest after they're done jerking off.
Now, that might not be your intention, maybe you just want to write some smokin' hot porn and that's as far as you need to take it, but if you feel that your story is being overlooked then that's probably why.
>>7460102
I can see that. I was exhausted by the end, but I also didn't want to luxuriate in the scenes, either, since they'd no doubt go really fast in the story itself. Maybe I'll gently revise this one sometime down the line and see if I think the ending is too abrupt.
I don't think I ever intended to follow up the Melanie-Stella thing because... I thought the Melanie-Vanna thing was going to be... a thing.
>>7459532
What kind of story?
>>7459552
Link is up here:
>>7455556
Is anyone of you guys familiar with the "Master PC" smut stories?
>>7460183
Yes.
https://www.literotica.com/s/masterpc-ch-01
https://www.literotica.com/s/master-pc-compile-error
https://www.literotica.com/s/master-pc-the-possibilities-ch-01
>>7459590
>ablidges
It's "obliges".
Troll aliens (plot device) show up and randomize the sexual preference of everyone on earth.
We follow the life of a group of friends coping with their new urges, and the societal changes across the world.
>>7460224
It's like Kokoro Connect but with more fucking.
>>7460148
I figured I'd be specific on account of you haven't ever written an active, enthusiastic participant human character, and I reckoned you would default to the usual if I didn't specify otherwise
Incidentally, I've got ideas for other outpost-related scenes with this character, but I'll probably end up writing them my own self because they have probably more butt stuff than you care for
>>7459001
>Tags:
>handholding, cuddling
You tag shit like that and then tell us it's not lewd?
As the fuck if
Hey authors.
What is the best smut you've ever read? I mean the kind of stuff you still read sometimes years after the first time. (No touting your own work)
>>7460409
the lewd is subjective.
>>7460276
Thank you for showing me that.
>>7460410
I really can't say as to "best", but this is certainly the comfiest, nicest and most wholesome I've ever read
https://www.literotica.com/s/nothing-between-us
>>7460431
Inaba best girl
Hey, long time lurker, first time requester here
I'm just really interested in like the idea of the classic trap doujin plot, but with a reverse trap and the only mostly gay best friend she has a crush on
If anyone's interested in the idea I can add more details
>>7460458
What would you do if a qt told you that?
>herm world where an alternate reality /d/ is obsessed with these fictional beings that have a single reproductory organ and sexual diphormism.
>>7460581
Now that could be funny.
>>7460410
Cthulu Cheerleader Massacre by Dracthuus
Spider Attack by TDM
>>7460410
My Sister is A Dickgirl. First piece of erotica literature I ever nutted to.
>>7461106
I agree, that is a pretty awesome one. I always wished the original writer finished it.
W-who wants gay stuff
I'm writing gay stuff
>>7452677
Would it be illegal to write a story like Lolita in this day and age? Would it be labeled under cp?
>>7461181
fuck off, cunt
>>7461181
I'll take some gay stuff, sure
What you got?
>>7461181
How gay?
>>7461189
One would hope not, but it depends on how draconian your country's laws are, I guess.
Though if it's obviously porn, a lot of companies aren't going to let you sell it through them.
>>7461214
balls touch
>>7461181
I've been trying to get a gay, militant student/teacher story written for awhile now. Think song the lines of the Ancient Greeks or samurai, with an older veteran soldier/warrior taking a yonder man on as an apprentice and lover, with the veteran "on top" during sex.
I'd like to request something like that.
>>7461473
Absolutely dreadful
>>7461498
>he doesnt like traps
>>7461504
Traps work best with tomboys
"Older daddy" shit is horrid, and you should delete your story since it's probably nothing of worth
>>7461181
Just post it already, stop being a tease.
>>7461511
No
Im gonna post it and you're gonna like it
A-as soon as its finished
>>7461520
stutter posting proves that you're nothing but an attentionwhore, and this thread already has too many of those.
Unironically kill yourself
>>7460480
I'd probably wake up by that point
>>7461473
>older
I bet he's faceless and brown as well. Shame on you.
>>7461645
When he refuses to even post it, does it even matter?
>but it's not done yet!
Then post a WIP, just show something to prove that this fic isn't another load of hot air and lies for once on this thread.
Hey D!
Liked your last Witch story. Interesting to see where it's going with that magical viagra corp.
FINISHED
3600 word update, buried in big busty Borealan boobs edition, new content at "James felt Railha move, leaning forward to kiss the rowdy Equatorial"
Friendly Competition:
https://pastebin.com/HsLMqTi6
final tags:
>kissing, long tongue, femdom, gentle femdom, drinking, smoking, large breasts, size difference, blowjob, boobjob, denial, light bondage, face sitting, oral, female ejaculation, muscle, abs, sweat, tailjob, girl-on-girl, vaginal, group sex, messy, leg locking, creampie
Feeling a bit overworked so I may take a day off tomorrow before I start work on the Outpost stories. Gotta do some minor editing and then I'll have an Ebook ready soon.
>>7461825
>Hey D!
> Liked your last Witch story. Interesting to see where it's going with that magical viagra corp.
Thank you very much. I've... sort of got myself stuck with that one. I know some of the stuff that has to happen, but not all of it.
I envision thirteen chapters of PWA, and I really want to stick with that. So I have to plan the last six carefully.
>>7460410
http://stuff-z.deviantart.com/art/Mari-s-Most-Amazing-Stuffing-592160331
https://www.literotica.com/s/the-aphrodisiac-compound
>>7461857
I would recommend you take tomorrow to do some homoconsulting before starting the writing, since it's not really your thing and the outpost requesters seem to have some fairly specific ideas
>>7462199
Only a single part of it would be m/m and the two other parts are straight. Also, those people need to remember if you want something very specific you should write it yourself. That's why writers skip over very specific story requests since they come off has the requester having everything already figured out for themselves.
>>7461857
Had a thought, several Borealens, most likely polars, might end up becoming foreign language teachers/professors. A polar might get a kick out of having a class of human students to work on and tease. She could teach them about Borealen culture/history too. And for shits and giggles she could bring in equatorial to mess with them a little. Could even have the final exam be dropping off her students in the polar nation and having them go out and apply what they learned to talk to other Borealens and inevitably get fucked by them.
>>7458178
i say charlie brown when i'm talking about genitals
Does anyone know what /ss/ is? The wiki allegedly has 9 fics from it https://fourleaffics.miraheze.org/wiki/Category:/ss/ but there's no description for the category.
>>7462292
straight shota
>>7462292
schutzstaffel
>>7462292
sloppy seconds
>>7462292
salisbury steak
>>7462292
/ss/ is straight shota, simply put, an underage boy has sex with with a woman. Her age is irrelevant for the real definition,but most /ss/ stories involve and older woman with a boy. The ket factor is it has to be a woman for it to be considered *straight* shota specifically
>>7462379
Worst abbreviation possible - formatted as if it were a board or a thread. I shall un-abbreviate this tag.
>>7462766
>being this much of a newfag
>>7458566
The weird ones are ok conversationally, I think. When they appear outside of dialogue it takes me out of the moment
>>7461525
Well I better get in on that attention whoring action before everyone spills their attention on to the other whores.
I'm just having a hard time picking a species to go with. In the story some elvish magic users create what are called specters. Most are mad by using magic to animate a statue, puppet etc. The main chick has animated a stuffed animal sort of thing. Can't decide if I want it be feline or canine... if feline lion or tiger... definitely something on the larger end
>>7462292
Go canine, they're less common.
>>7462909
Think you may have meant that for me as it doesn't make sense as a response to the post you tagged.
I suppose canines aren't seen as much here, since Snek is the most productive here and he has a cat thing going on. Canine dicks are pretty fun
>>7462913
Whoops, my mistake. But yeah, we've got a ton of felines but barely any canines.
>>7462913
>since Snek is the most productive
Just because other writers aren't posting 5 billion updates a thread doesn't mean they arent productive
>>7462938
>Today, we'll be learning the meaning of the word "most"
>>Greater in amount or degree; the majority of
>There are 10 words written on a board
>If Jimmy wrote 8 words, and Sally wrote 2, who wrote the "most" words?
>>7462938
Only if you follow the dictionary definition of the term 'productive'.
>>7462978
Is it their fault Snek is a NEET who has literally nothing else to do with his life but write smut?
>>7463029
Hey, that's unfair, I'm also MR23 in Warframe.
Also, the 'Friendly Competition' Ebook is ready:
https://www.patreon.com/file?h=11582401&i=1096127
>>7462199
>>7462204
>>7462256
Hit me with your gay ideas then.
>>7462316
If you have any suggestions for the Runt/Schaffer scene now's the time Shiny.
>>7463036
>MR23
How many mastery fodder is that?
Did you ever write wf smut?
>>7463057
I've maxed out everything that's currently obtainable besides founder gear. All weapons, including all vandals, wraiths and prismas. All frames, pets, sentinels and archwings. Only thing I haven't completed is the Silva & Aegis Prime, still farming for that.
I should, maybe something with Valkyr breaking her bonds and fucking the Operator or some nearby Crewman ragged, could be fun.
I have an extremely odd idea.
Basically this American (think Iowa from Kancolle) transfers into a Japanese school. Somehow she somehow magically corrupts all the girls in her class to become "American-like" (Blond hair, big boobs, love burgers, slutty, love freedom, unreserved etc). It'd be better if the American girl was unaware or was aware but wasn't actively trying to encourage or stop it, she was just helping spread the word of her awesome country.
What do you think? Too weird?
>>7463121
Sounds too American patriotism circle jerky to me.
This is /d, no such thing as too weird. If anything, it might be too vanilla for this place.
>>7463128
It'll be a parody though. Plus I'm not American so it's okay. And yeah I am relatively vanilla, and I'm open to suggestions to make it more /d/.
I HAVE A REQUEST.
A down-on-her-luck woman gets a job beta-testing sex-bots. A company has been designing realistic androids for people to sex up, and they finally have a few models ready for testing with a real human.
I could see it starting with an awkward laboratory test (recording devices, observers, statistics, etc) that goes poorly due to the terrible mood but culminating in her taking one of the bots home with a promise to tell the brainy people the result after the fact.
How human and/or intelligent the android acts is up to the writer as I'm not sure what would work best. Might be fun to have the android actually try seducing her, or vice versa. Guess that would come down to whether they're supposed to be plain sex bots or some sort of artificial companion.
>>7463134
You don't necessarily have to add anything. You may be able to make it /d with a strong description of the corruption that is occurring.
I'm probably not the right person to suggest much, since parody style porn isn't really my thing either. So I'll juts leave it at make sure you work out all those delicious details of how things work before you start writing. This place has a massive hard on for world building.
>>7463140
Hmm, I'm not sure how to explain how an American girl has magic powers to Americanize women. But I'll try.
>>7463121
Only tangentially related, but Hot Shit High is an amusing read.
>>7462978
that's a bit disheartening. I'm writing stuff, whether or not I'm putting it out there at the moment doesn't mean I'm not productive
>>7463252
Don't listen to them, some people only care about the sheer number of words being written.
>>7463252
I really just meant that Snek is putting out the most stuff on this board... My intent was in no way to imply that others are somehow being lazy or anything of the sort
>>7463262
my bad then, fa'm.
Is the word, arachne, plural or singular? The Monster Girl Wiki uses it as it is plural, but I'm not sure. Can I say "arachnes" or would that be unnatural like saying fishes or informations?
>>7463088
S&A Prime is 9/10. Can't quite hold its ground against GalP or memeing strike Atterax, but still great, sortie viable and fun to use. Also, the half-charged strike (shield toss) into E mash has amazing mobility. I still think the Feyark skin looks better than the prime default, though. Same thing for Brobie prime.
Any chance your clan is looking for new members, btw? Besides a few remaining diehards mine is dead as a doornail so I'm stuck pubsquadding far too often.
Ps: Some wf themed stories would be a good switchup from Borealans if you get tired of those, though Valk feels like a slightly cheaty way of still doing catgirls. Maybe branch out a little further from the comfort zone?
>>7463262
And yet, that's (unsurprisingly) exacly how it was taken.
But keep going, you'll manage to make the few other remaining writefag fuck off.
>>7463373
I didn't take it that way, if anything you should drop the attitude that the success of one person somehow diminishes that of others Praise of one person is not covert criticism of other unnamed parties. We're not competing here, nobody is keeping score.
I feel like we've had this conversation before.
>>7463397
>I feel like we've had this conversation before.
Why are you surprised by that? if other writefags keep getting the impression that they're being ignored then of course they'll be touchy.
Expecting everyone to be able to make constant updates like Snek is unrealistic and is only good for making writefags burn out. It would be nice if they could do it, but I'm sure most of them have jobs and real world affairs to look after so they can't spare every free second churning out smut on command.
desu sempai making this a daily general was a mistake, it was better as a weekly thing
>>7463408
Issue is /d/ is too dead and slow now so a single thread can last for a week or more now.
>>7463408
A thread is up for almost a week, so I don't see your point. Discussions like the above is pretty rare. For most of the time it's just request dropping or reporting in about finished works or progress.
It's still the chillest creative general I know of.
>>7463416
but on the other hand, daily threads have little content in each one, even snek is more likely to post updates for existing stories than new fics. i'd be tempted to consider making the thread happen once every 2 weeks or something but odds are someone is going to fuck it up somewhere.
>>7463402
>Why are you surprised by that?
I'm surprised that you've brought up the same complaints yet again and you've still not given up, you had been quiet for a few months and I thought we were past this. Here's how the conversation goes every time:
>you have a problem with Snek's daily updates or people's discussion of his stuff
>you come up with a contrived plan to disrupt it, either through trying to force people to only post on certain days, or by trying to redistribute the discussion and feedback like its bread under Communism
>Snek says he's gonna keep posting updates, everyone ignores you, and the general continues on as usual because you can't actually do anything about it besides complaining
>repeat every couple of months
>>7463439
Sounds more like it's the general lack of discussion that's the problem, and that Snek is the exception to the rule..
>>7463439
>an explanation of why people might be upset by a badly worded comment implying they're lazy and unproductive and that they don't deserve feedback is now a sign of a grudge
How on earth did you come to that conclusion?
>>7463454
>badly worded
Project harder faggot. If you go jumping at shadows, that's your own fault.
>>7463457
>posts a vaguely dismissive comment after someone points out you don't need to post a shitload of updates in a thread to be productive
>gets pissy when called out on being an asshole after another writefag is offended by said comment
If you want more people to contribute to the thread, you're doing a horrible job of motivating them.
>>7463454
If you have such a strong knee-jerk reaction to hearing someone else be praised, then you're the one with the problem. You reading an offhand comment about how one writefag produces a lot of content (which is factually correct, he does), and interpreting that to mean that every other writer is in your own words " lazy and unproductive and they don't deserve feedback" is not proof of anything besides your own neurosis.
Nobody said that besides you.
>>7463497
Why should people have to mask blatant facts just to dance around your staggeringly fragile ego?
And this is why nobody discusses anything here anymore, everyone would rather bicker about semantics than post new smut.
Even reddit is better able to get shit done than this, it's pathetic.
It's like to request a story about a man who's employed to find and hire attractive peasant girls to be either concubines for nobles, or simply brothels if that doesn't work out.
He also tried to maximize his profits by training his charges in sex, but without actually having sex with them.
>>7463533
How do you train them in sex without actually fucking them? If this is taking place in your typical fantasy setting, porn vids are right out.
Any good genderbend smut?
>>7463519
Why are you acting as if there's no discussion? There's daily content, frequent updates from several writefags besides Snek, and lots of requests and discussion going on.
The community is very much active, a few people complaining about it being the wrong kind of discussion, or the wrong kind of updates, doesn't change that fact.
>>7463539
Try "Freaky Faerun".
Is parallax still busy will RL stuff?
I'm hoping he'll be able to finish Orc Trouble, there needs to be more gay stuff abut the pig-like orcs
Does this thread include ERP? There is a distinct lack of that on this board
>>7463551
No, but /trash/ has a general for that.
>>7463538
You can do a lot without vaginal penetration, and that's not even limited to butt stuff.
Think about it, how to walk and dress and undress, that sort of thing.
>>7463567
dog, this is modern 4chan, it's got more generals than a shitty junta's inner circle
>>7458791
This is good, you should do more.
>>7458791
I don't like second person, but I sure like your writing here
>>7458791
10/10
I have to thank the others for pointing it out, I'd have missed it otherwise.
>>7463812
Is that from Otoyomegatari?
Joining in on the conversation. My productivity suffers greatly from trying to build up a Patreonage (which means a 10k/month as patron rewards), working through commissions (who don't want me to share things which is why I'm stopping that), and editing Derik's Luck (the next novel, it's tg/mm fantasy romance). Every little thing sucks up my time (plus that whole family/work thing) that I can't get ahead to write something directly for here.
However, I start releasing Puppy Mill 2 as a weekly series. I'm only 98k words into it (about a quarter done).
I've also been thinking it's been half a year since I shared a temporary code to http://tsade.com/ If you want to check it out use "4chan" as the username and "d5cb5e9e2ed9fa" as the password. The most interesting stories are Puppy Mill 2, Omelas 2, and Unpleasant Diversion (web-of-stars/unpleasant-diversion). This also gives you access to "Mummy's Girl" and "Eliza and the Raptor" (my dino porn).
>>7463823
Yes.
>>7463837
Wait shit Puppy Mill finished?
Also what kind of rude comissioners don't want to share the smut. Like I get keeping it exclusive for a while or maybe patreon only but it seems rude to have it be private.
>>7463862
The first Puppy Mill (nine-sisters/puppy-mill/puppy-mill-01/) was finished. A commissioner (one of the nice ones who wants to share) basically gave me a long-term commission (about $5k but monthly payments of $30, e.g., never gonna pay me) to write a sequel of how Merrie ceased to be dead, got into a lot of fights, sent to prison, fucked a god, and eventually got better. That's PM2 and my current "big" piece. :)
I know, not sharing sucks. One of them (Omelas 1, which is really hot) didn't want to share but then they were awesome and asked for Omelas 2 which I was allowed to share. The other big one is a series of Card Captor lesbian cannibalism. I'm seeing if the third recent one is willing to share but I haven't gotten a response.
The problem with private commissions is that I can't use them to get more readers. :( No branding, no furthering myself. That's why I'm winding them down (though they are the bulk of my writing income).
>>7463884
That's the situation I ended up in too, a lot of the commissions I've been offered wanted exclusivity so I've had to turn them down, doesn't work for my daily update model if I can't share them.
I've just been doing mostly my own unpaid stories (props to Shiny for funding so much Pinwheel stuff) in the hopes of building a larger readership, I guess I'll try to cash in on that down the line in some way.
I met one guy who says he sells compilations of his stories on Amazon, that might be a solution. Offer all the stories for free individually on my Patreon but bundle them together into super-Ebooks and try to sell those. Maybe get some art for them and make them presentable.
Might work for you because your series are so damned large, but I don't know if potential readers are attracted to longer or shorter stories.
>>7463343
Nah sorry, I run a Storm clan but we're full right now. Got space in my alliance though if your clan wants to join.
I like Ember a lot, so maybe something with her.
>>7463911
My topic choice pretty much screws me for Amazon. I like monsters, non-con, and violence too much. Blame Overfiend for that.
My "nicer" stuff (Mummy's Girl, Eliza and the Raptor, and soon to be Derik's Luck) are there as is the vanilla stuff (D. Dancer, Katie Sebastian stories) but they really don't gather attention.
Patreon is the only thing right now that seems to work for me. So focusing on that because I don't have to worry about the content as much.
I'd like to get back to unpaid. There is a request from here to do a solar superhero one that I really want to write, plus I have a ton of other little stories that are rattling in my head.
>>7460410
"All' Fair in Love and War" by some dude I don't remember, it was HFY, but not really.
Featured MC Max being roped into ambassadorship & fucking the shit out of a local blue girl. Really well done on all fronts, but the writer took it down for a re-write & I haven't seen it since.
>>7463911
Commissioning an artist or writer and expecting it to stay private is an insult to the creator, honestly. Commissions are advertisement, theyre how the creator gets their name around.
If someone really needs privacy, they can just commission as an anon.
>>7464371
What if the commissionee WANTS their art to be private?
>>7464384
That's fine, it's a sacrifice they make for whatever reason. What's uncool is the commissioner deciding that for them.
>>7464389
that's why you them pay more to keep it private
Alright homos, hit me with your gay ideas for the Runt/Schaffer sex scene.
I figure I'll get pretty much straight into that sex scene and have the shuttle pilot turn up around 1/3 of the way in.
>>7464934
What was the size difference between runt and schaffer again?
Both sizes.
>>7465009
Runt is a little over six feet, so not noticeably taller than Schaffer.
>>7465020
And the "other" size?
>>7465026
Oh you're talking about BIG FAT COCKS?
I actually hadn't specified any sizes, though Borealans are not dramatically more endowed than humans. Someone of Runt's stature would probably be slightly larger than average, and Schaffer is probably around average.
If you want me to bring out the big guns we can use Zagza.
>>7464934
They had to shut down the heat one day for maintenance. Runt accompanies him while he does the repairs, but sees him shivering and decides to "help him out"
>>7464934
I've got some ideas
>starts with Schafer sitting in Runt's lap, reading something, Idk what
>runt starts to get hard, which gets Schafer hard, and he starts jacking them both off a bit, and kisses runt a bit before sliding down to blow him
>after deepthroating and maybe snowballing runt a bit, the two of them head for a bed or pile of furs or whatever, and Schafer starts riding him cowboy
>after a bit of this, runt decides to change things up a bit, picks Schafer up and brings him over to a table or something that's the right height and absolutely goes to town on his ass while kissing him silly
>Schafer blows hands-free all over his own chest while leglocking runt, who can't handle it and unloads a massive amount into Schafer's ass
>runt licks his chest clean and carries him to bed, still balls deep, for some postcoutal cuddling
>>7465032
I remember a well-received suggestion that runt actually be very well hung, and just a grower rather than a shower
Shiny liked it, even, and I am 300% sure that the people reading this story would, too
>>7465062
Can confirm this is a good idea
>>7464934
Loincloths being tented by erections make everything hotter.
All noted, and how do you guys feel about the other pack members either being present to watch them or assisting in some small ways that don't really involve them in the sex?
For example right now I've got Runt waking Schaffer up with a BJ while they're all buried in a pile, if I have Osha wake up and just kind of watch with amusement, or have her let Runt fuck Schaffer up against her, is that going to ruin it for you?
>>7465105
I'm voting for just the two of them hanging out alone when they start
>>7464934
Schaffer wants to help Runt to become more dominant because he kinda feels bad for the little guy being at the bottom of the totem pole.
The plan works too well and Schaffer ends in the reciving end of an over-enthusiastic Runt.
>>7465105
that behavior does fit polars
>>7465105
I'd say give them a little time alone, but there's no way in hell that alone time will last long before a few curious pack members catch the scent of their funtimes so count me in for additional pack member interaction
>>7465116
>>7465123
>>7465125
Ok what I'll do is have the opening take place in the pile, then move them away for some alone time.
>>7465120
This fits perfectly, I can have Runt give him the most doting BJ imaginable and then have Schaffer be irked at how submissive he is, so then he leads him away and encourage him to be more assertive, thus turning him into Zagza-lite.
>>7465105
I'd say the two of them alone
The absolute most of other characters I'd like would be Scarface watching them, though they don't notice till the end
>>7464934
I humbly request a 69 at some point.
>>7463837
May I ask how did you build your customer base? How do you even get your first paying job? I mean, I've got paid for writing before, but not in a way that people patronized me or directly told me they are going to pay me X amount if I deliver what they seek.
>>7463911
How does the Amazon thing work? When I checked it said that they don't accept pornography. Or erotic fictions, fictions with explicit sex scenes are a different thing?
>>7465132
I like that. Maybe like shafer encouraging runt to basically outright facefuck him during the blowjob?
>>7465132
Runt turning into Zagza lite also fits well with the huge cock idea too so this is looking better and better by the second.
Loling at the thought of zagza-lite Runt plowing into Schaefer and he's all like "dear god what have I unleashed"
>>7465132
>>7465148
Too much zagza lite would kinda ruin what people like about runt IMO
More assertive runt, absolutely.
Runt taking the lead in bed, 200% yes
But he should still act like himself, and very obviously show that he really likes Schaeffer in a romantical sort of way, rather than just more boring dom stuff
>>7465211
So, less dom, more unbridled lust?
>>7465211
Hence the lite part. It'll still clearly be Runt, just more assertive and less shy. I imagine he'd realize being assertive will help anyone who was stuck in his previous situation, naturally giving him the confidence he needs
>>7465227
dom BECAUSE unbridled lust
First 2000 words are done.
Outpost 2: Snowed In:
https://pastebin.com/C4LVP0fQ
>blowjob, gay, deepthroat, messy, voyeurism
>>7465474
Snek I'm going to strangle you if you don't stop using the word paunchy to describe every polar ever's belly. Change it up!
>>7464371
It wasn't until (relatively) recently that I had commissions that were private. I haven't liked it but I needed the money at the time so I didn't fight. Unfortunately, it built up from there and I had to either lose my currently best commissioner or not get paid. I stuck with the money for a while but then realized it was sucking the life out of me because I didn't want to do it. It's also why I finally decided to take the hit in pay and stop doing commissions, it will give me a chance to reset when/if I resume to require they are always public (though the names of specific people changed, of course).
>>7464384
I found that most of the ones who wanted it private were using specific named people in their commissions. They wanted their own little piece of material to enjoy their fantasy but didn't like the other ideas jerking off to it.
>>7465143
Back before the Internet was really popular (Fidonet/BBS), I used to write stories. As the Internet was in the process of losing its collective virginity (early 90's), I joined on and kept writing with the communities that moved. I ended up posting a lot of stories (including a Harry Potter slash) that built up a reasonable corpus. As I wandered from fetish to fetish, I stumbled on the Dolcett/erotic cann group. For some reason, it was a community that was so starved for people willing to write for it that I started getting commissions, even for ones that had nothing to do with Dolcett. I meandered off those groups but that opened up the gates and I've had a steady stream of commissions since. I'll admit, the Urot fan-fiction commissioner came from my Tapestry/furry days.
I guess I just hit critical mass. Also, I try not to be a dick and I'm willing to write almost anything. My willingness to go to the more violent/darker fetishes probably helped a little. I also have almost 30 years of porn online. :)
As for Amazon, they'll kick you for extreme stuff. For just explicit puts you in the non-searchable dungeon.
>>7465474
Oh boy, this is going to be good
>>7465714
If you haven't noticed, he's very bad at variety.
>>7465772
Well he has written 30 stories in the space of like a year.
I can forgive a few familiar words and phrases in the sex scenes.
>>7465788
>running out of plot ideas
What? There isn't even a plot yet, this story consists of one sex scene so far.
>>7465792
Sorry, meant to say smut ideas. In all seriousness, he's practically copypasting his old scenes now. You think we burned him out?
>>7465792
That brings up another thing, why jump straight into a sex scene? I'd prefer some set up honestly
>>7465794
We've literally just had a huge conversation about all the sex acts this one is going to feature, most of which he has never written before, so no.
>>7465801
Weird, maybe it's just how same-y it's all starting to feel.
>>7465474
>tfw no submissive catboy BF to wake me up with blowies
>>7465819
Please fuck off, you're not contributing to thread
>>7465823
I'm giving Snekkers my feedback that I enjoy his portrayal of submissive catboy BFs waking people up with blowies.
>>7465830
>Snekkers
people like you are the reason why this general greatly declined in quality
>>7465772
I've seen for myself that he can be great at it, he just needs the issue brought to his attention in order to fix it.
>>7465835
The general is fine and has been fine, despite several people trying to say otherwise and actually trying to make it happen themselves. It's here to discuss erotic fiction, which we do every day.
>>7465835
Yeah the increase in content and new writers lately promoting more lively discussions has just been crippling this community.
A quick question for anyone's whose read my story. Have there been too many OR not enough, I guess, "in-between" scenes where the plot doesn't so much advance.
Like I know in a slice of life story the plot isn't expected to be off the rails always full action, but I've been worrying if readers, have been getting tired of short cutesy scenes or not. Writing the newest chapter, I've planned out 3 separate scenes that'll play out before a significant one rolls around.
The last thing I want is my story feeling like a chore to read
>>7465841
What new writers?
>>7465928
There have been like three stories posted in this thread from authors I've never seen before.
>>7465851
If you don't mind seeing furry art, I can link you a Japanese slice of life web comic that keeps the plot interesting without being full on action all the time. The plot is pretty far off of yours, but still gives great examples of how to keep things interesting in a slice of life plot
>>7465947
I probably won't have any time to read stuff like that (plus it's not my sort of thing). I'm just hoping that readers aren't finding too little or too much of it in my own work
I don't do character writing but I do like doing a ton of world building. I just started on a new thing and I want to see what do everyone think about it
https://pastebin.com/0vD7nUhR
The Q&A style works for me to get my ideas on paper, what I'm really looking for questions about the setting I can add to this but I'll take whatever else you have to say about it.
>>7465928
Me but I like to keep to myself. I should probably stop that, but nobody asks me questions so eh.
>>7465990
Is this based on the Monster Rancher games or something? Not that I've played them, but I'm familiar with the title and am curious.
>there is a real danger that all ranchers face of getting “countertamed” by more powerful monsters
What does this taming look like? Does this mean that one can basically "tame" another human by giving them orgasms? Could smarter monsters tame other monsters by doing this same thing (allowing the build up of an army or servants or whatever)?
What is the point of CD's to summon monsters but also having magic? Or is it just the magic tech form it takes?
>>7466250
>Is this based on the Monster Rancher games or something? Not that I've played them, but I'm familiar with the title and am curious.
Kind of it, it's a joke that I quickly added to the setting but I could take it out
>What does this taming look like? Does this mean that one can basically "tame" another human by giving them orgasms? Could smarter monsters tame other monsters by doing this same thing (allowing the build up of an army or servants or whatever)?
Everyone has a little bit of monster in them, humans are one of more "purer" races so they could get tamed by a powerful enough fucking and yeah, the threat of smarter monsters like dragons, dark elves, and even fairies taming humans make "tamers" (people train themselves to just tame the more powerful and dangerous monsters) worthwhile bodyguards
>What is the point of CD's to summon monsters but also having magic? Or is it just the magic tech form it takes?
I'm thinking I could go with the ancient future trope where in the past was filled with superscience and something happened, now magic is the norm but again, I made the monster rancher connection as a joke so I could just drop that whole plotline
>>7465795
I couldn't think of anything to add at the start that wouldn't be filler, as all these characters and their relationships have already been established. The pilot won't arrive until after the Runt/Schaffer scenes are finished.
>>7466742
There isn't much for anyone who hasn't read anything else. Even a little context would be helpful to readers who haven't read previous works
>>7466785
To be fair it is titled "Outpost 2" and they should probably read the first entry if they're interested in more than just the sex scenes. I did add some basic exposition as to where he is, why he's there and what his relationship with the aliens is, but since I'm pressed for time I won't be doing a full recap of the first story.
>>7465990
What happens when a monster tames a human? The human is fucked senseless, and then they... become the monsters slave? Become more bestial? Are the effects dependant on race or is it a universal result?
>>7467015
They become more monster like, simple minded and easy to control, generally. Had an idea for a race of monster clown girls that tames men and turn them into circus animal men, not sure if I want that to be "canon" or not.