Post /d/-related Captions.
>>270257
this is still wanted
>7270257
i forget how to connect to older thread
>>7277692
I tried making one, what do you guys think about it?
>>7277992
notbad/10
>>7277692
were you the one who asked to make this girl have a bulge? I remember that thread.
trying to get this captioned with BE(and possible multibreast) milking/lactation, mindbreak/addiction or bimbofication(and maybe cowgirl TF) and slimes
Would love if someone made a caption for this femdom escort.
>>7278017
Yeah, that was me. I didn't write the caption though.
>>7278017
>i remember that thread
That thread is still up.
weird question, since I don't normally come into these threads, do people keep more transformation oriented ones and where are they coming from these days? The old sites I used to see with that stuff, like TFmedia, are long dead
>>7278037
I got a little carried away.
>>7278788
i didn't think of that, they look like the poyo pop things
>>7278452
>The Securities
>>7278911
they are those things anon
>>7278911
the character is from puyo pop
>>7278925
i thought they were slimes from DQ
>>7279493
Welp, that's about the creepiest thing I'll read today.
Wrote another mommy caption.
>>7279754
>no lactation
It's shit.
>>7277692
who's the artist of this picture?
>>7279754
I don't frequent these threads, can you post more?
>>7279997
I was JUST thinking of this.
>>7277692
I know this isn't /r/, but does anyone have the caption of the two futas dressed in skimpy medieval armor and the text has something to do with your parents selling you to them as their sex toy?
>>7279833
Artists name is "23". Girl in picture is a recurring character that is a married lesbian. You can see the ring on her left hand.
anyone want to caption this with cock growth,BE and corruption?
>>7280442
I can post some more of my stuff I guess.
Wish I got more comments/critiques on these. Hard to know what I'm doing wrong.
>>7281619
this one is short and generic
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>>7281624
>>7281625
>>7281628
some futadom
>>7281632
>>7277692
I absolutely adore that kind of caption. Screw all that NTR dom abuse stuff, I want a girl to tell me how much she loves and admires me. This is a fantasy, I'm entitled this!
>>7281834
Couldn't agree with you more.
>>7281625
This is really amazing.
>>7277704
does anyone have the one where it's the same pic, but instead it's muscle and size stealing?
Does anybody have any captions of petrification? preferably with a mtf aspect of it?
>>7281625
Who wrote this and is there more?
>ctrl+f "vore"
>0/0
>too much of an autist to write anything on my own.
Wat do?
>>7282470
Do it anyway. Only way you'll get better is if you practice.
Also, does anyone have the caption that has a latex girl sitting on some gimped catgirl's back but it's actually a dude or something?
>>7277692
> taking 23's cute muscle lesbian who is married to a girl and making a husband caption
fuck yourself, op
>>7277992
>not a giant wall of text
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3NuFVQk_CCs
>>7282898
lul
>>7282909
MORE
Two questions:
1. Does anyone have any omorashi captions?
2. Would anyone be interested if I were to make some omorashi captions?
>>7283019
Here's another caption by the same guy.
>>7281071
done
It'd be cool if someone could write a quick caption for this involving D.Va getting hacked along with her mech, and Widow doing what she was trained to do- seduce the opposition.
Also: How do you writefags go about making a caption? Which tools do you use for it?
>>7282674
This one's pretty good.
>>7283542
Just paint, senpai
Also Widow seduces the opposition but falls for the mech hack? Your story sounds confusing
>>7282708
You are right, they aren't the best. They seem to have been written by someone who had English as a third or fourth language.
>>7278452
is this a caption or a novel with pictures
>>7283127
No and very interested.
>>7283624
They're done by some one who normally just does TG captions but they did hentai for a while but I think they stopped due to low response. I think they're still around I haven't looked in a long time. I'd hope they've improved lol
>>7283406
pretty good, how many captions have you done before?
this would be interesting, female to futa then mutating a horse cock, and BE, maybe end up addicted to breeding humans and stuff or constant masterbation, then mutating duel cock and quad balls
>>7284428
maybe ten or so, most are posted in this thread already
>>7283778
I think a novel with pictures, as I'm pretty sure there are several others connected (including a couple I had but opted not to post)
>>7284624
cool
>>7281628
your best work imo
i like the theme and the lack of "porn words"
for that reason i really think the quality takes a sharp drop when you hit the word "smother"
that being said, some are unavoidable. "goddess therapy" is very porn-y (too close to "femdom" therapy) but it sounds mysterious enough that i wanna read more of it.
still, maybe something less direct
you do "imminence" well - building up expectations at the beginning, letting me fill in the blanks and all - when you mention "money running out" and "cancelled your plans"
i like that you tie in elements from the picture without just restating them
>"we need money for new clothes as you can see"
i like the slow shift in focus to *me* culminating at the end of the second paragraph
i skip over words like umm and mm and ellipses for the most part - it makes me aware that i'm reading something instead of watching it or listening to it
and of course having the common background and the soft text really draws you in
i look forward to wanking to your future works
>>7285081
Woah, an actual review?
Thanks anon. I really appreciate it.
>>7282708
Any source on the author?
>>7285331
http://opheliagmtg.blogspot.com/
>>7285382
it's all real life shit :(
are there no captions where "me" isn't (made into) submissive?
>>7285436
What are you, gay?
>>7285452
You say that as if something's wrong with it.
>>7285453
>>7285483
would anyone caption this with futa on male
>>7279516
What are you fuckin gay??
>>7285453
>female-to-shemale
>emphasis on physiological maleness
>girlfriend-to-boyfriend
Oh, god, right in my fetish.
>hohoho!
Also kek.
>>7285712
I came.
>>7285712
you da real mvp
>>7285712
well except for the fact that it's an actual pic not an edit
>>7285732
Look at the caption closely. There is a huge "WTF" waiting for you.
>>7285810
Not the same person, but I'm not seeing it.
>>7281628
This one is really subtle
But I'm a little lost at what exactly is going on here
requesting male to cuntboy transformation and humiliation
>>7281632
>*giggle*
requesting a futa on male caption on this pic instead of the organ rupturing one.
Can someone do a caption for this pic? Where this girl's been outed as a futanari in an all girls school. But in exchange for not telling everyone these girls have been teasing and toying with her for months without letting her cum
>>7286081
I tried to make the existing edits look slightly less awful, but I doubt it looks much better. Shame Siegbert had to be cut out at all, really.
Also, there's not really much for humiliation, I guess, sorry.
anyone interested in doing a super-trap.
>>7285452
Oh hey, my submission from eightchan.
Glad you liked it, got a request?
>>7285453
love this sort of thing.
I've made a few, so I'll dump anything relevant.
First off is a couple of old ones regarding Succubi.
>>7286717
>>7286721
Whoops, my konosuba one's already in the thread, so here's an old bimbofication caption.
>>7286731
I don't know if fit girls count as /d/, but enjoy.
That's all of the captions I've made that are remotely /d/worthy. Request a picture and an idea and I'll make a caption if I'm interested.
>>7286734
I posted a couple others, but realized they were highly likely to be western art.
>>7284441
Public service message: Do not seek out radioactive water in hopes of growing an extra set of genitalia
>>7286081
I would dig a series of Captions about Ranma undergoing a cuntboy tf, slowly genderswapping fully over time.
>>7286929
Specifically, his curse leaking into his male form, slowly making him Ranko.
>>7286847
Could you do an asset stealing caption?
>>7286938
Depends on the art and premise, I can be finnicky sometimes
>>7286442
had a bit of fun with this one, it's anyone's guess whether you can actually fap to it
I found this gem in a tongue thread, so I decided to make a caption for it. Enjoy!
Could someone write a case file type caption of a woman's vagina slowly turning into a dick over time?
>>7286934
Not your request, but ...
>>7286576
Can you do one about an elf girl who comes back from a trip to a human settlement with new clothes and a slutty personality?
>>7286966
Around the elves, watch yourselves. Enjoy.
>>7286997
Muh dick! And it's kinda humorous too.
Thanks anon.
>>7287093
No problem.
I found this pic somewhere (Can't remember), with a request involving possession or something. So I did a little something. Hope you all enjoy.
Found this picture and pictured a world-building caption, so I gave it a shot. Enjoy.
>>7287114
I like it
>>7287136
Then hopefully you'll like this.
>>7285680
damn this is good wouldn't mind reading a continuation
>>7278452
WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS
>>7287170
is there more like this? sex-ed themed stuff. because this is amazing
>>7287569
Not that guy, but I have a prompt in mind. I'd like it to be focused on her just having male genitalia though.
The night before your wedding, your bride inexplicably has her vagina replaced with a turgid cock and a plump pair of balls. She feels very ashamed that she's gone from being your wife to your husband. But much to her relief, you tell her that you'll still love her no matter what. Your kind words can't help but arouse her. She tells you that she looks forward to the both of you fucking and sucking each other 24/7 during the honeymoon.
>>7287569
If you'd be interested, I've got a prompt kicking around I've been thinking about working with myself, though haven't gotten around to.
A guy draws up a contract with a demon to partially possess his girlfriend in order to make her more more sexually active, more aggressive in bed, and utterly sexually devoted to him.
When it comes time to actually summon the demon, though, it seems he got a few minor details wrong—instead of the succubus he intended to summon, he finds himself contracted to an incubus.
While his girlfriend remains in control of herself under the contract, she finds that between her new libido and the presence of the incubus in her body, her femininity is corroded away, turning her body into that of a pre-op MtF, with "her" mind quickly becoming a man's—one very eager to enjoy his boyfriend's body, one way or another.
>>7287501
Um, yeah. It's a caption thread...
>>7287824
It's a caption thread, not a novella thread.
>>7287824
Personally for me its not so much the length that bothers me but how it's formatted. It's an almost solid wall of text. Shit like that is painful to read. Add some paragraphs people.
We really need some short captions
If you put together all the pics here you could make the bible
>>7287539
I did enjoy making that one. Well, I haven't made any other sex-ed themed stuff, but gimme a picture and an idea and maybe I'll make one for you.
Here's a bit of a different one. Guy has a run in with Cupid and makes a very poor (Or great, depending on your view) decision in where to hide. Enjoy.
>>7288149
This was awesome. If you're up for more mother/son incest, would you be willing to write this?
Your mom calls you into her room over some indecent photos she's discovered of herself on your tablet. She isn't angry, but wishes that you told her sooner. She invites you to have lots of sex with her so you can see it in person.
If possible, I'd love for there to be allusions to impregnating her and/or marriage.
Hey, does any one have the caption pictures of the blonde trap who summons demons to get railed by them? One as in a pumpkin patch and he fucked a pumpkin while a demon fucked him.
>>7288168
May have gotten a bit carried away, but enjoy.
>>7288205
Anon, please keep getting carried away.
>>7288205
Absolutely fantastic! Feel free to keep getting carried away. If you don't mind, I'd love to see a follow-up with this image.
After an entire week of dumping your seed inside your mom, she feels like rewarding you. After noticing how you'd always stare at her bare feet, whenever she wasn't looking, your mom concluded that you had a foot fetish. Your mom gives you a chance to indulge in this desire by letting you rub your face against her feet. As you kiss her soles, she feels the tip of your cock poking her through her panties. This sends her into an uncontrollable fit of lust, and she tells you that you'll definitely be spending another week alongside her.
>>7285810
I am the same person and I'm not seeing it. It's not implying the guy is going to put her to sleep in the morning, at least very strongly.
>>7286847
awesome work
>>7287636
Have the incubus cum slowly convert the guy into an Alp, and it's gold.
>>7288270
I'll be honest; I don't have a foot fetish. Nothing against you for it, I just don't think I'll do it justice since I don't know the appeal of it. Anything else?
>>7288574
That's totally understandable.I hope this prompt works better:
Your mother takes you on a lengthy vacation on a foreign beach resort. Once you realize that your hotel room only has one bed, you begin to realize your mom's true intentions. While on a secluded beach, she tells you that she organized this trip as a surefire way to have you impregnate her through endless amounts of sex. Your erect cock tells her that you're on board with that plan.
>>7287539
I had an image and thought maybe I'd take inspiration and give making one a try.
Are there any captions where the talked-to first person is female?
>>7288595
How can I refuse? Especially with a Maidoll picture. Saeko was best HotD girl, too. Enjoy.
>>7288664
Sounds like an interesting idea. Give us a picture and idea, and I'll see what I can do.
futanari on guy please
>>7288726
sorry forgot
>>7286517
Well, this one was made a while back...
>>7288713
This is fantastic. Thank you!
>>7287636
i did a thing
>>7287636
Well, I was beaten to the punch but here's my take on it. I think I wrote too much.
>>7286943
Not that anon, but I had a good fap and a good laugh. My only complain is that the formatting is a bit packed.
>>7289803
Thanks for the feedback, I'll work on that
Elzi's Mogudan recolours are something else, and I've wanted to make something out of it for a while.
Here's the first two parts of a story I thought up for it. Enjoy.
>>7289974
Had a bit of a formatting change with the second one.
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>>7289976
These captions are amazing! I especially liked how you described her body as "fertile" and she wants you to sow your seed in her body. I'd really enjoy it if you could do a caption with a similar tone using this image. Maybe something about two girls hearing rumors about your extremely virile semen, and how they desperately want to try it out while they're ovulating.
>>7284441
Is this Shadman's work?
Does anyone have the one with the tentacle sarcophagus that sucks the victims cock and shoves tentacles up their butt and out through their mouth?
>>7290059
Yes.
>>7289976
And here's part two! Aizen-Myou claims a few more.
Part 3/4
>>7290126
>>7290023
I like the cut of your jib. Enjoy for now, part 2 coming soon.
Can anyone caption this with muscle growth and daydreaming?
A new one - Photoshop is so cool.
>>7290192
And here's part 2. Mogudan's stuff is so good, gives me a bunch of ideas. Enjoy!
>>7289722
don't worry, i quite liked it.
>>7290624
>wothless
>>7290626
...fuck
>>7290624
>I never wore
"I've never worn"
>>7290626
>>7290630
Thanks, sorry you had to see that.
Caption this image for masturbation gone BE? Nipple stroking self suck etc
>>7291258
Sorry to piggyback, but would you consider doing male to shemale captions as well?
>>7288070
What do you consider too long?
Requesting f/f corruption, bullying, hypnosis or mind break caption. You can use whatever pic you like.
>>7291542
Sure! Here's a prompt:
You receive a letter from your childhood friend. You haven't seen him in more than a decade, but he really wants to get reacquainted. When you return to his lavish home, you're shocked to find a beautiful woman with a hard cock there.
Much to your surprise, your childhood friend is now an incredibly attractive shemale. She explains how her rich family had no qualms with making her as feminine as possible. However, she decided to keep the cock. This was because she vividly remembers you admitting that you had a thing for girls with penises, and knew that you'd be happy with how she turned out.
Finally, she eagerly invites you to take her virginity, which she's been saving just for you. After you're both too tired to fuck anymore, she wants to start planning the wedding.
>>7291581
There was a small editing error in the image.
Here's a caption to try out the new texts I got, courtesy of Elzi.
Fun fact: It was only when I saved this pic and realized it had 'trap' in its name that it was meant to be a trap. Does that mean I fell for it?
Enjoy.
I'm wondering if anyone would be willing to caption this, either as a fanfic where something happened during a synchronization test and Asuka and Rei are blaming it on Shinji so he has to take care of their needs now, or as an original futadom caption.
>>7291581
>>7291583
Not him, but I took a shot at it. A little different to your prompt, but enjoy.
>>7291722
I actually think you did a great job of fulfilling the prompt. Thanks!
>>7291726
No probs. If you have any others, lemme know
>>7291770
I have another idea, but it's father/son (shemale) incest. Would that be too weird for you?
>>7291837
Hmm, that should be alright. Pitch the idea and I'll let you know.
In the meantime, hopefully you guys enjoy this one.
>>7291581
>>7291583
Am him, here's the one I made.
>>7291860
Your take on this was great! I really liked how you got creative with the story.
>>7291842
Now that I think about it, the caption doesn't necessarily have to involve MtS. It could just be incest with a futa daughter if you'd prefer. Anyway, here it is:
After a lengthy dinner party, you're finally able to spend some intimate time alone with your "daughter." She's relieved that you're finally able to satisfy your sexual appetite, because all the attention she was getting from partygoers was getting her hard, and she was afraid that her secret would be revealed.
But now that she's safe with daddy, she's eager to have her balls licked, her tits fondled, and her asshole pounded all night long.
Alright, I'll give it a shot.
Meanwhile, I decided to try something a bit different.
>>7291901
>>7291869
There we go. Enjoy.
>>7281834
SOMEONE GETS IT!!!!
>>7291930
Excellent stuff as always! I'll let you know if I have any other prompts in mind.
>>7291593
For some reason all elzi's images have one of like 3 filenames followed by nonsense
Fresh content for the content gods, dongs for the dong throne
>>7292022
I'm pretty sure I'm aroused?
Mostly confused, though.
So, I've come up with a really fun idea. I'll be making updates to this every so often, but here's part 1 to start with.
Enjoy the ouija's curse.
>>7291461
n-no one wants to do my request.. ;_;
>>7283128
>Ywn have a cute trap lust after you
>>7288070
Holy fuck this is hot.
>>7290648
insecure new slave is tight
>>7292442
It was pretty vague and open ended.
>>7292442
Advice for requests: 1-2 things only. Provide an image to use. It's not necessary to do these, but if you make it more specific, people are more likely to go for it. As a result:
Can we get the image from >>7291461 as an F/F hypnosis caption please?
I'd do it myself, but I'm not so sure of my capability. How do you guys do your captions, writing-idea wise?
>>7292990
Usually I'll look at the request, look at the picture, and then throw words at the screen that sort of fits both until I have about 500-1000 to work with. Go back, save anything usable and expand on it. Chuck the rest. Have a dictionary/thesaurus open in a browser somewhere and take a few moments to make your sentences more titillating. Re-read for grammar and punctuation.
>>7282909
Do you know where I could find the source image that was used for this?
>>7293163
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=61493804
Did a request for someone on The Other /d/.
Feedback welcome.
>>7293317
And a horizontal version after the text at the bottom turned out longer than I thought.
>>7291258
>>7291542
So I was planning on requesting a caption involving a Poison cosplayer turning into an actual shemale, but it took longer than I expected to find a picture I liked because I kept finding other pictures that were making me come up with new prompts.
So here's a collection of ten female-to-shemale prompts with corresponding pictures. I'd be very happy if anyone wanted to do even one!
Prompts: http://pastebin.com/7FPEVxPz
Pictures: http://imgur.com/a/IT7Ym
>>7293364
The language you used is really evocative, and the horizontal caption makes it easier to see both the caption and the image at the same time, but as a rule of a thumb I'd suggest against ever trying to explain your magic.
Also, I don't know what the original request was, but using the vampire racism and both MtF and FtP transformation seems a bit complex for a caption of this length. I think that king being turned into girl and raped by a futa vampire, or the queen growing a penis and giving her husband the heir he always bugged her about, would allow you to make the caption more focused and give everything more detail.
>>7293444
Thanks! I'm trying to get myself into the habit of writing a bit every day, and a few of these are right up my alley, so expect them in the near future.
>>7293460
Thanks for the critique. I do see what you mean about lack of detail.
(Incidentally, this was the request:
>1. An upstart witch turned the King into a girl, and is now trying to impregnate him with the cock and cum she transformed his wife into.
As you can see, "witch" became "vampire" for obvious reasons.)
anyone got that one of the elf prince that turns more feminine as he jacks off?
>>7292917
I'm thoroughly confused by the tone of this one. First it seems like she's gonna dominate and humiliate him, then the talks about how virile and sexually aggressive she is, and then she gets all reasonable, apologetic, and asking for consent to things... And then she talks like they are so perfect together they'll never need anyone else AND about how they should fuck other people as well.
There are some minor grammar mistakes as well, but mostly I'm just lacking a consistent tone in the text.
>>7291860
I like this one. All the feelings are real and personal. The thoughts and reactions are all as natural as they can be in a situation like this, and even without the porn aspect it would still be a good story about two friends reuniting. Really good job.
>>7293481
Looking forward to it!
>>7288633
Aggressive and submissive, not my favorite combination, but you used it quite well. My critique would be how she goes from talking like a horny teacher, to talking like a bimbo in the third and first half of the fourth paragraph. Otherwise it's all legitimately seductive.
>>7293337
The picture isn't very sexual and it holds back the fapping potential. The last two paragraphs change tone too abruptly.
>>7293364
Do you have a version without the armpit hair?
>>7290668
MAKE IT A SHRUNKEN MAN BEING PUSHED INTO THE NIPPLE BY THE OTHER NIPPLE
>>7293670
Sorry, no. Here's the original image, if you can get it edited by someone else it wouldn't be any trouble to slot in.
>>7293547
It really feels like he had ideas for about 4 different captions and just hammered them all into one.
>>7293533
This one?
>>7293630
Thanks for the criticism.
>>7293902
I think having an attractive woman in a sensible, non sexual, outfit is perfect for the caption. A more sexualized picture would turn me off of it, honestly.
This picture does it for me, and I couldn't help but make a caption. Enjoy!
im searching for one about foot fetish
it was his childhood friend and before he came he had to shout he was a slave for her feet and after he shouted that the friend pulled up an audio recorder
>>7282898
>not a giant wall of text
yeah, so completely pointless.
>>7294419
Hate it.
>>7278452
only good one so far (haven't read any below)
>>7293444
>#5
Good taste, anon. I actually wrote a caption for that image a long time ago with a similar premise, but I've never been too happy with the result. Looking at your prompt and thinking back on it, I just really wanted to write a lot about it, so it was more of a short story than a caption, haha.
>>7285452
That's strangely comfy.
It's funny how when the fapping mood isn't present, the urge to lewd up a caption also isn't present. Image is from TurnBase in the drawfriend thread.
>>7293787
>>7292917
No bully!
>>7294883
Don't worry, I like your captions! If you don't mind doing another one, I have a request.
You've recently moved to a remote Japanese island for a lucrative office job that nobody else seemed to be willing to take. Once you arrive, you notice that there's a festival going on. A festival goer approaches you, and decides to show you around. Suddenlty, you come to the realization that you've seen significantly more women than you have men.
Your guide explains to you that this is because this island has been populated solely by futanari for centuries, and few outsiders dared to enter as a result. You get an erection upon learning this, and she gets hard as well. Bashfully, she explains that she's never been with a male, and politely asks to spend the rest of the night with you.
>>7294419
10/10 qt caption
>>7293444
'Can’t boys control themselves?'
apparently not, because I had to have a shot at #2. Enjoy.
>>7295000
Bueno.
>>7293444
Here's a caption for prompt number 1. The buildup got away from me a bit...
>>7293444
I did my interpretation of #6. Again, I probably wrote too much. I really have to work on that.
>>7295000
I like the idea behind the caption. Getting both a story and direct speech is unusual, but interesting. The difference in fonts shows a difference between his cold thinking, and her passionate talking.
My criticism though would be that it's repetitive. Both columns repeat the same thing, showing it multiple times. While stylistically different, it doesn't give me a new perspective, or reveal any secrets other than "yup, she's got a dick now", which I already knew that from the image.
Other than that, the quality of writing is pretty good.
>>7295132
The build up is way too long and to be honest, boring. The cashier gets up more character development than Dave, and since she's not the one who gets fucked at the end, that's a bad thing. You should either skip the first half, and show Dave's reaction to his girlfriend growing a cock... or have Cheryl put the wig on immediately like the bimbo she is, and rape the cashier because she's the first thing in sight.
I loved the personality shift she had when she put the wig on and grew a penis, but it happened too late and there wasn't enough of it for me to enjoy properly. The descriptions are pretty good as well, second to last paragraph is my favorite.
>>7295170
It hurts my eyes trying to read a font that small, doubly so without contrasting colors, and zooming in makes all the letters blurry instead. Not a good job.
>>7295289
>It hurts my eyes trying to read a font that small, doubly so without contrasting colors, and zooming in makes all the letters blurry instead. Not a good job.
That's like a 10 second fix
>>7295000
>>7295132
>>7295170
OR here, thanks to both of you! They turned out really well. And I have cake for days now.
>>7295000
The change in attitude was exactly what I was looking for, though, and the dialogue was excellent—really well written and a perfect match in tone for the picture. I felt like there could have been a little more focus on the transformation, though that's just my own fetishes speaking—overall it hits a lot of sweet spots. Also nice trips.
>>7295132
That's alright. It's certainly long for a caption, but I love a good set up, and while the finish seems a bit short in comparison, I love the way the situation ends.
>>7295170
I was actually kinda worried this prompt wouldn't translate into a very sensible progression, but you really made it flow very smoothly. Long for a caption, certainly, but the build up was great.
>>7294771
I've always felt like there should be some kind of story behind why she's wearing that male festival outfit, myself. I'd be interested in seeing what you came up with, even if it doesn't work that well as a caption.
>>7294883
Loved the theme, loved the story, loved the execution.There's nothing bad I can say about this.
>>7295300
Much better.
Now that I can actually read it, I have to say it's good. Especially the first half, I really feel the love and loneliness. "I'll drug her to help her feel happy" usually comes across as creepy, but you managed made it feel entirely genuine.
In the second half, her dialogue was off, especially the "oh my, you're the boy from the next door!". I know you didn't want to use a specific name to let everyone self-insert, but that's just not how she would greet someone she's known closely for months!
Other than the dialogue, It was an emotional story of love and acceptance. I didn't fap, but it made me feel warm and fuzzy inside, and I thank you for that.
>>7295330
I feel like she would have been turned into a shemale by coming into contact with the penis idol, so now she has to participate in the festival if she has any hopes of returning to normal. Like you mentioned in the prompt, the village elder explains that she has to carry the idol in a shrine to a sacred spot with three other men. Of course, it's a festival for males, so the traditional garb is designed for men. There'd be a bit about her being embarrassed/ashamed about how the outfit is so ill fitting for her still mostly female body.
Here's the one I wrote, for reference.
your shemale demon classmates want to paint eachother with cum and invite you to join in on the perverted fun. they want everyone involved to smell like cum
New thread:
>>7295390
>>7295289
>>7295132
That's a really good critique, so here's an alternate version with the initial setup trimmed just a tad and the shop girl as the victim.
Also the thread's in autosage, someone should probably make a new one.
>>7285670
How has anyone not said what in the FUCK for this?!
>>7285986
Nice
>>7294883
Bruh it feels so wrong jerking to Gothmog lord of balrogs
keep it alive!
>>7296817
>Trying to bump an autosaged thread
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