This quest will take place in a world where slavery is legal. In respectable countries at least it is however strictly regulated. Each slave has a contract, which stipulates the rights and responsibilities of their owner and the slave, as well as the length of the enslavement.
Breaching a slave’s contract, or trying to force someone into slavery is a serious crime in such places. This is because historically, giving the rights to enslave to private individuals, either by law, or by non-enforcement, always seems to lead to serious civil disorder.
The standard punishment for non-trivial crimes, by the way, is enslavement, the nature and length of which varies with the crime and the sentence. Usually auctioned off, although some places give their victims the right of first refusal.
Some people become slaves voluntarily, seeing it as their place in life or as a way to achieve happiness. They usually have a lot of options in customising their own contracts and often sell themselves directly to a specific person.
The last group are people who sell themselves into slavery by necessity. Finding oneself in debt, or unemployable as a free person, or both is a common story. These slaves still have some control over their contracts, and thus often aren’t full use, but since they are desperate, they often have to compromise on it to get a good price. Often sell themselves through a broker, who takes on their debt, or guarantees a minimal price. Most often sold at auction.
It is possible to transform a person mentally or physically, but such transformations aren’t instant. Comprehensive transformations may need as long as a month before they are complete and stable. Slaves are commonly processed in this way before being sold to raise their price, and their contract may allow the owner to transform them to their wishes.
I prefer magic, it seems more confusing for the victim and the "inworld set" limit is the imagination but why not something between? a hybrid transformation like magical technocraft or organic technology
>>5511475 Magical technocraft I might be against, I want either magic or high technology in the setting. Magitek (magic with a technological aesthetic) would be fine, and organic technology would be fine too, if people express interest.
[x] The method of transformation is technological.
[ ] the daughter of the owner and CEO of one of the world’s biggest corporate conglomerates. Your mother is one of the richest and most powerful people in the world. You were genetically engineered from your mother’s DNA and several donors.
[ ] the daughter of a whore. Your mother voluntarily sold herself into slavery and had herself turned into a nymphomaniac bimbo. While you live with her and your sister as a family, you are a ward of the state. You don’t know who your father is.
You are 16 years old.
Name: [ ] Default: Anya [ ] Write-In.
Chime in on machines/surgery vs organic biotech, if you have a preference.
I need to go to the gym so I’ll be back in a few hours.
>>5511503 [x] the daughter of a whore. Your mother voluntarily sold herself into slavery and had herself turned into a nymphomaniac bimbo. While you live with her and your sister as a family, you are a ward of the state. You don’t know who your father is. Hooray for family funtime!
>>5511503 [x] the daughter of the owner and CEO of one of the world’s biggest corporate conglomerates. Your mother is one of the richest and most powerful people in the world. You were genetically engineered from your mother’s DNA and several donors.
Bimbo mom seems like life would be just too weird.
As for name, I like Anya just fine
When it comes to transformation, Machines, particularly nanomachines.
>>5511503 >[ ] the daughter of the owner and CEO of one of the world’s biggest corporate conglomerates. Your mother is one of the richest and most powerful people in the world. You were genetically engineered from your mother’s DNA and several donors.
>>5511503 >[ ] the daughter of the owner and CEO of one of the world’s biggest corporate conglomerates. Your mother is one of the richest and most powerful people in the world. You were genetically engineered from your mother’s DNA and several donors.
and as for how the transformation happens, machines would be best. Biotech doesn't let us have people hooked up to machines screaming in pleasure as their body shifts and changes
>>5511503 >[ ] the daughter of the owner and CEO of one of the world’s biggest corporate conglomerates. Your mother is one of the richest and most powerful people in the world. You were genetically engineered from your mother’s DNA and several donors. I'd like to own the slaves rather than be one of them
question for OP-can people who aren't slaves modify their bodies, or is it seen as a sign of slavery? Because I would love to see our MC turn into a succubus with a harem of slaves or something similar
>>5511503 [X] the daughter of the owner and CEO of one of the world’s biggest corporate conglomerates. Your mother is one of the richest and most powerful people in the world. You were genetically engineered from your mother’s DNA and several donors. [X] Default: Anya
>>5511614 They can, and fairly often do, especially ones that are purely aesthetic, or for pleasure. Even more submissive modifications to the mind or body are sometimes found on free individuals, since submission and enslavement are some of the most common sexual fantasies, even amongst those who aren't interested in being actual slaves. These are often kept subtle, however.
>>5511636 nah, the pics just need to be /d/ worthy, they don't neccessarily need to be on topic.
>>5511679 I'm just back from the gym. That feel when your masochistic side starts acting up while you're pushing yourself (???)
This seems to have won: [X] the daughter of the owner and CEO of one of the world’s biggest corporate conglomerates. Your mother is one of the richest and most powerful people in the world. You were genetically engineered from your mother’s DNA and several donors. [X] Default: Anya
[x] the daughter of the owner and CEO of one of the world’s biggest corporate conglomerates. Your mother is one of the richest and most powerful people in the world. You were genetically engineered from your mother’s DNA and several donors. [x] Default: Anya
You are Anya von Domme. Your mother owns Bio Concepts, the premiere producer of body and mind modification devices, often referred to as Domme Pods, or just pods, after your mother’s own company's production line. These devices combine the capabilities to modify a person’s body in any biologically viable way, and shape their minds as well.
You are soon to start at a prestigious private high school, and have moved into a new home to be closer to it. The mansion is quite spacious and well appointed, and comes with a staff of slave maids to keep it in order. Your personal maid, Elizabeth, has of course come with you. You have a state of the art modification device.
You are [ ] Default: A girl with blonde curls cascading down to the middle of your back. Your eyes are vivid green, and you have delicate facial features. You are a little over four feet tall, and your figure has only begun to bud. ...You blame the longevity treatments. [ ] Write-In
Your mother has personally instructed you in modifications, the point that you are certified as a body and mind technician, and can legally perform modifications yourself. She did so by demonstrating on her own slaves, and you as well, citing that a good mistress knows the game from both sides. She undid the transformations afterwards, most of the time. Calling it an extra credit assignment she left you with some traits, and since she didn’t use the standard templates but created personalised ones, they’re more difficult than normal to remove.
Select either [ ]One or [ ]Five traits. They can be from the list below or you can suggest new ones. If votes for one trait are prevalent, the first on the lists for five traits will be also be considered, so put the one you want most on top.
Traits: -Nymphomania: You find yourself near constantly ready and willing to have sex -Anal Cravings: You need a good reaming every ten or so hours, otherwise it gets too distracting. -Oral Cravings: Ditto. -Elastic Orifices: Your orifices are unusually elastic. -Clothing Allergy: You find it difficult and distracting to wear much cloth against your skin. Underwear are practically impossible. Luckily the climate is pretty warm year round. -Painslut: Your body gets very aroused by pain. -Heel adjusted: You can walk in the highest heels without problem, but find it impossible to wear normal shoes. -Can’t cum without permission: You find it impossible to peak, unless someone, anyone gives you permission. -Increased Sensitivity (specify): A part (or the whole) of your body is extraordinarily sensitive to stimulation. -Heat: Once a month you go into heat for a day. -Multiorgasmic: Once you go into orgasm, any additional stimulation keeps you cumming and cumming and... -Dick: You have one (specify size, special shapes?) -Strange bodyparts (specify what: ears, tail, tongue, tentacles, etc.): You have a body part not usually found on humans.
>>5511804 I like the default body with a A or B cup (loli) Traits: Nymphomania Elastic Orifices increased Sensitivity (throat and mouth) Multiorgasmic Dick that grows out of your clit at will and gets bigger the hornier you get
>>5511798 >[ ] Write-In Take the default, but make her a little taller, more filled out >>5511804 gonna go with 5 -Dick: You have one (specify size, special shapes?) 9 or so inches, pretty hefty balls. It's been designed to maximize pleasure, so it's ribbed and has a knot at the base
-Strange bodyparts: A very long, prehensile, snakelike tongue. This also resulted in our pupils being slightly slitted
-New Perk Idea Sadist: You get aroused by controlling others
-Painslut: Your body gets very aroused by pain. -Heel adjusted: You can walk in the highest heels without problem, but find it impossible to wear normal shoes. -Can’t cum without permission: You find it impossible to peak, unless someone, anyone gives you permission.
[x] Taller and curvier. [x] Five Traits: -Heel Adjusted -Multiorgasmic -Demon Tail -Elastic Orifices -Dick
Floating on dream-clouds, you drift slowly, but steadily into wakefulness, drawn by a warm sensation spreading through your core. Opening your eyes and smacking your lips, you look up at an unfamiliar ceiling. The canopy of your bed at your new home in Eiselpol. Raising your upper body up on your elbows, you throw off the silk sheets revealing your personal maid Elizabeth lying between your legs. Her scarlet lips are wrapped around the head of your penis and her gentle suction is the source of the warmth spreading through your body.
Noticing that you have awoken, she greets you with a “Gwod mowning mwistress,” without taking your cock out of her mouth. lifting herself up, so that her head is over your crotch, she grasps your penis firmly around the base with one hand, and descends.
In one smooth motion your entirety slides into her mouth and throat, pressing her nose against your pubis, her tongue lapping at it’s base, where your lower lips meet. . As her throat ripples around you, you feel it engorging and lengthening, pushing further down her throat. She begins to gently bob her head and suck more firmly, and you collapse onto your back with a groan, your hands seeking out the erect nipples that top your soft breasts, and rolling them gently between your fingers.
The motion of Elizabeth’s head accelerates more and more until your penis almost slips out from between her lips on the upstroke, only for her to almost slam it back into her welcoming throat. It has grown to it’s full 14 inches by now and is making a very noticeable bulge in Elizabeth's throat as it ravages almost to her stomach.
Your hands have abandoned your nipples to grasp at the sheets as you squirm under your maid’s skillful ministrations. You can feel yourself so close when her fingers brush gently against your sopping and neglected pussy.
White fireworks go off behind your eyes as she pushes her entire hand, fingers in a wedge, into your vagina, encountering little resistance. Your hips rise off the bed as your back contorts from the pleasure, pushing deep into her throat and exploding . She seals her lips around the base of your cock and sucks, stronger than she has before, making sure none of your seed goes astray.
You shake as you squirt down her throat, every drop dutifully swallowed, and just as your orgasm seems to be subsiding, Elizabeth forms her hand into a fist and rams it in deeper. Fireworks go off in your head again, as your eyes roll back into your head with a yell. Elizabeth’s fist ruthlessly slams your deepest hidden pleasure spots igniting your orgasm again and again.
Your hips collapse back onto the bed, as you lose all strength, but your maids head follows them down as if glued to your crotch. Her fist doesn't miss a beat continually pounding fresh orgasms out of your pussy and up your spine to explode in your brain.
You come close to slipping back into unconsciousness, but she stops just short. A miniature orgasm shudders through you as her hand withdraws from your depts, leaving with a pop, as your lips contract, looking as tight as if they had never been touched.
She withdraws the cock from her throat slowly, gently sucking on it in a way that sends electric tingles up your spine, until it exits her mouth, spotlessly clean. She gently places it on your stomach, where it begins to contract back into a one inch clit, and sits up into a kneeling position, awaiting further instructions with a gentle smile and bright eyes.
As you lie back, panting for breath, you can’t help but pity the poor plebs, who have to be woken by alarm-clocks.
>>5512117 Your personal maid Elizabeth, is a black haired beauty of modest curves, dressed in an immaculate white and black maid uniform. She was the graduation project for your instruction in the art of transformation. Once she was a criminal so foul, that her entire personality had to be erased, but now she serves a nobler purpose. Since she is also meant to be your head maid, you programmed her with a slight dominant and sadistic side to her personality. This can be easily roused or suppressed with a verbal trigger, but it is also supposed to activate intelligently to the situation.
Gathering yourself you swing your feet of the bed, so that you are sitting on the edge. Elizabeth smoothly retreats and moves to kneel by your feet. “I have prepared a bath, mistress,” she says, as she places your six inch heels onto your feet. To most others, these would be for special occasions, but to you they’re the equivalent of slipper to wear around the house.
Because of your mother’s modification, your feet are permanently extended, so that you stand on your toes. You can walk without shoes. Slowly. But heels feel perfectly natural, more so than having bare feet.
As you stand, Elizabeth moves to drape a silk robe over your shoulders. She goes to fasten it, but you wave her off, slipping your arms into the sleeves, but leaving it open in the front.
You approach your mirror, where you see beautiful blonde, with curls cascading down her back. Her eyes are vivid green, and her facial features are delicate. Her body is slender with breasts just over a good handful, and a juicy peach bottom. Completely hairless from the head down, a flash of pink can be seen between her perfectly formed vaginal lips. Her clit pushes out from between them, slightly, waiting to grow into a bitch tamer of a cock.
Spinning around you eye your smooth tail with a spade shaped end emerging from the base of your spine, just above the junction of your buttocks. It tends to swing to and fro with your movements, and sometimes you forget about it and end up knocking something over, or feeling someone up.
After refreshing yourself in the baths, while Elizabeth tends to your hair you ponder on the last thing your mother mentioned before she sent you off to your new school. She started by pointing out that scientists have been talking about the improving longevity treatments eventually leading to biological immortality for those that received them. She informed you that with her access to the cutting edge treatments, she is predicted to be one of the first to be able to stay ahead of the aging curve. Potentially forever.
With that weighty matter dropped on your mind, it’s not surprising that your thought have been turning to the future. You are passing into adulthood, and it’s time you started establishing yourself as your own person.
Your staff for example is woefully bare. Most of the maids currently employed at this mansion are not full use slaves, nor of any particular quality outside their jobs. It’s important that you assemble an entourage befitting your position and dignity.
The state of the art Domme Pod, lying yet untouched in the laboratory also calls to you to break it in.
[ ] Look for a personal slave: -[ ] Look amongst your maids, perhaps there’s a gem in the rough? -[ ] Go to a slave auction. -[ ] Wait until the start of school and look amongst your classmates.
[ ] Go mess around with your Domme Pod. -[ ] Try to figure out how to remove one of the traits your mother gave you. --[ ] Which? -[ ] Give yourself a trait. --[ ] Which? -[ ] Give or remove a trait to Elizabeth. --[ ] Which?
[ ] Ah, screw making decisions this early in the morning, there’s a new spa opening, lets get pampered.
>>5512185 [X] Look for a personal slave [X] Go to a slave auction. We need a pet. Maybe a cute little twink boy we can walk around on a leash with nothing more then the mind of a stupid animal. Mother said we could never have one but since we are out on our own we make the rules now!
>>5512469 wow forgot to vote >>5512185 >[ ] Give or remove a trait to Elizabeth. I'm for either oral or anal cravings. Be 'nice' about it and make her pick though. Ask if she'd rather be unable to go a day without Mistress's cock in her ass, or if she'd prefer to cum uncontrollably every time we shoot a hot, sticky load of cum down her throat
>>5512614 that sounds good. If we can, make the tongue really sensitive as well. >>5512185 Also voting to wait until class to find slaves. This early we wouldn't find much at auction, maybe the worst leftovers of last night. And we'll pay more attention to our maids when we're fully awake
One question OP- how well do we know Elizabeth? Are we close, would we consider her a friend, do we know her mods, has she told us much about herself,etc.
>>5512185 Could we give Elizabeth a mental and physical mod? if we can, give her a long tongue and make it so she can't cum without permission. if we can only do one, go with permission to cum >>5512678 >>5512724 images, guys
>>5512185 [x] Go mess around with your Domme Pod. -[x] Give yourself a trait. --[x] Which? Sensitive tail. I also want elongated tongue, and sensitive tongue, and sensitive lips, though I suppose those can wait. It isn't so much about giving great oral that is really pleasurable to us, as it is about making kissing awesome.
I say we let Elizabeth pick from all the things we suggested for her. That's how we'll make our slaves and servants loyal to us-we'll give them their deepest, most carnal wishes, over and over again; all we as is subservience. What, you though the demon tail was for show?
Pretty sure modding Elizabeth has won. Vote is split between giving her a craving, or making it so she can't come without permission, with long tongue close behind. If someone still cares to vote, or choose between these, if your vote didn't make it, please do. Otherwise I'll flip a coin or something.
I'm going to go with only a single trait modified at a time, but some traits can be combined into one, like giving her a sensitive tongue.
>>5512193 >See how possible >>5512167 is. Our feet will barely touch the ground! You could try it, but with an imperfect understanding of what your mother did, there's a chance of unintended effects.
Same with the other traits she gave you.
>>5512540 She has a constructed personality, to make her an ideal head maid. She has a trigger to manually control her dominant personality aspect. Her orifices are slightly stretchy, but not to the same extent as yours.
>>5512633 When your mother got her for you two years ago, Elizabeth was a Blank, her memories and entire personality had been erased, and her body changed into a doll featureless form. This is usually done only for very serious criminals, but you don't know who she was before.
She was the subject for your practice with the pod, and her you gradually constructed her current appearance under your mother's tutelage and supervision.
>>5513632 >Vote is split between giving her a craving, or making it so she can't come without permission, with long tongue close behind. If someone still cares to vote, or choose between these, if your vote didn't make it, please do. Otherwise I'll flip a coin or something. voting to give her can't come without permission, if possible requiring our permission, specifically
>>5513661 Why? the mods we have aren't indicative of her being mean, they are just puzzles for us to figure out. >>5513663 I'm more interested in effectively being a princess and body modding specialist, if she runs the company well I don't see any reason to get rid of her.
[x] Modify Elizabeth -[x] No cumming without permission.
You decide to break in your new ‘pod, and who better to test it on than your usual partner Elizabeth. You give orders for everything to be prepared, and Elizabeth disappears for a moment to pass it on to the Mansion staff.
When you ask her about it, Elizabeth expresses a desire for modifications that would allow her to serve you better. She has a small smile on her face as she remembers her previous sessions in the device.
After morning ablutions and breakfast are done you walk to the mansion’s laboratory. Your heels click against the tiles, while Elizabeth follows behind and slightly to your left. It is a room dedicated to supporting the state of the art Domme Pod your mother gave you. This one is a version not yet available on the open market.
The device is a white cuboid with rounded edges, the size of a room. Openings on two sides permit access into the interior of the hollow cube. In the center are the restraints, white like the rest of the device, with pink padding, they are currently in a chair configuration.
You can see a large number of seams on the interior walls of the room, and know from experience that those hide robotic arms and the variety of tools and substances the device uses to transform it’s patients.
While Elizabeth’s professionalism is impressive you notice that she’s trying to discretely rub her thighs together. Smirking, you run your tail up under her skirt and swipe it’s tip against the front of her panties, eliciting a slight gasp. You’re surprised her juices haven’t dripped down her thighs yet, considering how wet she is
“I was going to ask, if like the idea of me fucking with your pretty little head, but I guess this is answer enough.”
You absently lick of the tip of your tail. She’s tasty, just like you designed her to be.
“Strip slave, and assume the position,” you order, while moving to the device's control console.
>>5513687 >When you ask her about it, Elizabeth expresses a desire for modifications that would allow her to serve you better.
Could we modify her to lay large, nutritious eggs? She can serve us by providing us with breakfast. Ideally she should lay LOTS of eggs, in case we have guests over. Extra eggs can be eaten by the serving staff.
Even better, we can also modify her to be unable to start laying without permission. If she upsets us, we can wait until she's waddling around bulging with eggs before we accept her apology and let her push them all out.\
...Even if we don't do this to Elizabeth, we need to do it to someone.
>>5513687 Elizabeth immediately removes her maid’s uniform and folds it neatly before putting it away. Once she approaches the center of the device, you flag her as the patient to it’s systems. She sits down on the chair, and immediately the restraints begin preparing her.
Clamps close around her wrist, moving her forearm against the armrests, which close, enveloping her from fingers to elbows. Simultaneously, restraints grasp her ankles, and move her legs into stirrups. Those too lock around her, and part her legs giving you a clear view of her molten core.
Your displays cheerfully point out her elevated breathing rate, her lubrication, and other signs of her arousal.
The seat reclines her slightly backwards, raising her legs at the same time, as a restraint is fastened around her neck. Long arms emerge from the ceiling and apply a gel to three spots around her head, to which electrodes promptly apply themselves.
A visor emerges to cover her eyes and ears, and several more electrodes are applied to her body to better monitor her state. Finally a pair of long pink probes plug up her lower holes. She immediately tries to buck against them, but a restraint closes around her waist holding her still, and drawing a frustrated groan.
Putting her in the right mental state is the next step. Deep throbbing bass begins playing in her ears, seeming to move around her, accompanied by barely audible whispers. The visor displays relaxing abstract images, and the probes gently heat up. All to put her in a pliable state.
When she seems to melt into the chair, you know she’s ready for the trigger to be implanted. You seize a microphone and add your voice to her headphones.
“Mistress controls your orgasms,” you whisper.
“Mistress decides when you cum,” and this time a picture of you flashes across briefly across her visor.
“You need mistress’ permission to cum,” this time it’s also accompanied by a thrum from the probes.
Maybe we should look into modifications to ourselves that are for more than purely for sex. Such as improved/photographic memory, so we don't have to study much in school and have more time for lewd. Or enhanced hearing so we can spy on our classmates, learn their secrets and blackmail them into becoming our pets. you can probably think of more
Depending on how this quest is going, we may or may not have to deal with challenges that can't be solved through sex (don't know how the GM is going to handle this) so maybe we should give our maid some upgrades to turn her into a ninja-maid so she can protect us from being kidnapped or something, assuming she isn't one already. (If my hentais are accurate, then a spoiled heiress has something like a 30% chance of being kidnapped and raped to teach her a lesson about not being a bitch.)
>>5514128 I like the idea of a battle maid and a dedicated bodyguard slave.
As for self mods supper memory is cool as is improved hearing. I think that goat walking idea from before coupled with an improved sense of balance would be fun and functional. we could also reduce our need for sleep to give us an unfair time advantage on other people and improve our endurance. I like the idea of of giving our tail the power to secrete various drugs we are immune to as well as making it more nimble and flexible so we can use it to pick up and hold things. Plus on the lewd side that would let us give "hand Jobs" with our tail. We could also based on >>5512185 use a little more passive awareness of our tail and what we are doing with it which we could couple with increasing its sensitivity. also expanding on the elastic orifices we could make ourself super flexible which would help us escape any unwanted bondage as well as offer lots of fun.
>>5514408 we can already fuck them though giving a womb or a prostate a gentle squeeze or caress with or without drug application is hot. We should also make our fertility cycle something we need to consciously activate so that we don't need to worry about pregnancy and if we want to have a kid we just will ourself fertile Plus no periods as those suck.
>>5514415 I think you misunderstand we can already fuck with our tail and dick as evidenced in >>5513687 but my impression is that our tail is not dexterous enough to say wrap around a pen and hold it so we could take notes with our tail or give anything as precise as a hand job but is is dexterous enough to be equivalent to a foot job or fist a hole.
>>5514436 also as a security feature we could improve our ability to hold our breath and or also breath water. Then we could add wings and design them not for flight but for swimming in water and 0g use as well as ascetics. >>5514438 its cool I get why you misunderstood me I may be underestimating our current ability in which case we already have what i want and you were in the right to say i was adding nothing.
so how dose this list of tail drug secretions sound. male only aphrodisiac female only aphrodisiac stamina booster drug that prevents orgasm & antidote a sleep drug & antidote paralysis drug & antidote suggestibility drug & antidote of coarse we are immune to most of our own drugs and have a separate aphrodisiac for ourself.
as for pheromone i think a universal aphrodisiac and a separate suggestibility one will do the trick the second is mostly a safety tool in case we are kidnapped.
>>5514456 addendum all of the drugs and pheromone are under conscious control >>5514461 I like it. it sholden't interfere with the aphrodisiac making them horny only getting it up. do we want a antidote on tail for that?
>>5514493 that's why they ware off and the tail juices and pheromone are under conscious control. I would think the aphrodisiacs especially the pheromones would be best if hey lasted a short duration and if we wanted a long session we just keep the pheromones up.
>>5514513 Well duh we just also need our own super powers for fun and prophet as well.
Cool quest bro. A little feedback from one OP to another.
- Unless you're an amazing writer MC devoid of conflict will always feel pretty flat. You can use the character's own cognitive dissonance even if it's consensual. - Get a twitter, or a schedule, or something. Unless you're Kiku you can't expect people to lurk endlessly waiting for updates. There's no point in writing in a quest format if you don't have a player base that actually follows the story. - Your prose are actually really solid for quest level stuff, but I noticed you have one of the same problems as me. You are a habitual comma abuser, and the first step to recovery is admitting it.
“I was going to ask, if like the idea of me fucking with your pretty little head, but I guess this is answer enough.”
Sentences like that sound really stilted, particularly in dialogue. I only mention it because I wish people would tell me when I'm doing shit like that.
Anyways, hope to see you run again. Have some monstergirl.
>>5514860 I think I'll have time on friday. Besides I need to decide on some actual plot.
>>5516470 I'm probably not going to get a twitter yet, since I'm fine with few voters.
The commas I know >.< My mother tongue has pretty solid rules for when you use a comma, but in English is just like "whatever man," so I end up defaulting to the wrong language's rule when I'm not thinking. If I read it out I can get better, but I'm a lazy bum...
>>5516888 Trust me anon, plot makes everything better, even if it's shitty. It gives the characters a reasoning for their actions, rather than just "Fuck it, i was bored to day, so I went and did this."
>>5516779 Fin/d/er's Fee is still running, if you want to check it out
>>5516988 Seems more up Marcellus' alley but I could see it. If gelbooru is any indicator it's a fairly popular notion.
Hey, if you're itching for it, run it! If I've learned anything here it's that there's always at least a few weirdos out there into the same bizarrely niche porn as you.
>>5517023 And then has to foil an insidious human plot to make the monster people dress sensibly and restrict themselves to heterosexual sex in the missionary position for the sole purpose of reproduction.
>>5517042 >And then has to foil an insidious human plot to make the monster people dress sensibly and restrict themselves to heterosexual sex in the missionary position for the sole purpose of reproduction.
Well I was thinking he/she has to leave the nest in order to explore their sexuality and to maybe breed. Kinda like a coming of age story (Your hitting puberty now my child... GO FUCK!) and then you go make monster friends/enemies and discover ancient magical ruins and other humans and stuff...
>>5516470 >I only mention it because I wish people would tell me when I'm doing shit like that. Dear god am I with you there. I've had the issue basically my whole life and all school and things would ever point out was, "you use a lot of run-on sentences." It's fucking hard to figure out what to fix when it's not pointed out, especially when English is a stupid language with fairly nonsense rules at times.
>>5517372 Then make your own asshole, no one's stopping you. If you aren't going to take initiative then you have no reason to complain. Honestly, you faggots who bitch over everything that doesn't pander to you are the most annoying thing on this website.
Why don't you fuck off and make your own thing, then let us see it so we can shit all over it?
>>5519796 I'm not surprised, it's just that I've seen scat threads last longer than that did, which pisses me off quite a bit. I've actually lurked for quite awhile, I'm just not one for posting out of my comfort-zone
>>5521043 Don't be so negative. He'll be back. Unlike other OPs, he didn't stop because of the quest going in a bad direction or not enough voters or life crap. All he needs is to find some spare time.
I was the OP of the (extremely breif) monstergirl university quest a week or so ago, which died due to a bunch of computer issues and a 3-day ban when a friend called one of the mods a 'giganigga' on my computer. My question is this-should I try to revive that quest, or should I do what a lot of the players suggested and do Shadowrun with monstergirls?
>>5522357 Well that's... a relief, I guess. Do whatever you want man, it's your quest not mine. I hate to sound salty too, but let's hope you an keep up with it this time as well. Ded threads are depressing.
So has enough time passed to where we can assume OP is kill?
>>5524228 >>5525122 >tfw no one acknowledges that I run on a regular basis too Naw, I'm just joking, but it's getting really annoying lately. Though, I hope someone (who actually has time and is a decent writer) takes over for OP.
>>5530360 I've thought about them, but it's really hard to have a sub as a main character in this game. I remember there was a point and click game with combat on here a while back. Some people wanted to be able to sub. Several of us though about how it could be implemented, but we weren't able to come up with anything better than a power bottom.
Questwise though, I think it might be possible to have a two main characters. Have one character a dom who also moves the plot forward, and another character that is a sub and gets used by various people, creatures, and things. I haven't thought this through at all, so if anyone wants to ponder this idea for a while and even try it out, I'm all for it.
>>5530714 rather than gets used by everything being the focus, I want to play a sub becuase I want to go on the journey of enslavement. besides who says that slaves do not have agency? just because you are owned completely by someone doesn't mean you get to make no choices in how you go about some things. Imagine you where enslaved recently, your owner brings you to the home, and tells you to get started cleaning. so syou clean and clean untill you find something mysterious, something impluasible or impossible, or something to investigate, Maybe master is in some kind of trouble, maybe s/he _is_ the trouble, or maybe the thing you find is just some really important document that could change everything for you and master.
theres plenty of wiggle room in that kind of story to keep it from getting identical
>>5530714 The character could try to escape difficult situations, with the risk of their submissiveness keeping them trapped. An obstacle they have to work around, like they're not allowed to fight a dominant rival, but have to find a subtle or diplomatic answer or avoid the conflict.
If the quest is run on /tg/, you could even have the players roll dice in the thread to overcome submissive urges. That way they still have the choice to try it, but the most reliable route will be thinking of an answer that doesn't require asserting dominance and therefore doesn't need rolls.
>>5530547 >>5530714 >>5530725 In almost every lewd quest there's people complaining about exactly that, but they always lose the votes, so you're just a (vocal?) minority. The only way you'll get what you want is to start a quest with no dom options at all (and by making this clear in the OP)
>>5530834 I feel like one thing I'd need to enjoy a sub quest would be a likable dom that isn't a complete asshole/disgusting pig.
For example in Kiku's most recent quest the relationship between the MC and her dom made me d'aww and you could see that they care about each other. I don't think I would read it if the dom was someone like Giori.
>>5530894 Actually both Maeve and Giori were written as little more than bit villains when I started. Players just enthusiastically embraced the former and have been incredibly circumspect about their desire to kill the latter.
I enjoy sadistic doms, and I'm committed to the theme at this point, but the next thing thing I run will probably hue more towards comedy or d'aww. Probably.
Jesus H Christ he didn't leave any choices, OK I'm going to set up a few choices before starting in earnest.)
"Anya von Domme!"
There aren't many people you've given the password to turn on your home monitor, and only one with a voice like that, you look back into the pod where Elizabeth sits withing in discomfort while you await the program to finish, it appears by the annoyed tone the call came through shortly before you entered and missed the beginning.
You sigh and give your slave just one last look, wondering if it's to late to go back in. then again it wouldn't be wise to ignore the one paying your tuition.
"Coming mother!" You call out walking into the living area still naked, it's nothing that she hasn't seen before, or made more like. your tail wraping around your waist.
You mother looks similar to you but far more professional, dressed in a tailored suit befitting her position. "I expect you to attend your classes, you've got a history young lady of having elizabeth do it for you so you can do what you want."
She isn't wrong, but you fail to see how it matters, you always catch up with your slave later and do well on your tests, still she wants you to attend. "Alright mother." she nods and hangs up, she's busy andmore than likely wasted time waiting for you to answer the call. Still, class is usually boring.
choices are. [ ] Attend class (with Elizabeth or alone, specify) [ ] attend class via recording allowing you to do whatever you like in your home. [ ] have Elizabeth attend your class for you regardless.
(picture voting rule still in place because i'm lazy)
>>5531115 > [X] Attend class with Elizabeth We may as well check our class out, see if there's anyone worth fucking / fucking with. And besides, since we've only got Elizabeth atm, we could use a little muscle just in case anything dangerous happens.
We should brainwash some buff grill as a personal bodyguard asap.
>>5531219 I think that's what people picked. >[X] Attend class (with Elizabeth)
>>5531201 Yeah still behind that. Once it's done though >>5531199 We could buy some tatted up gang girl off a prison. She'll probably be mouthy for a while, but I'm sure with our von Domme training (and some von Dickings) we can smooth out her edges.
>>5531219 >>5531231 Von Domme was the name op gave us when we didn't speechify one. I think it fits our characters mother to make up a name like that on the other hand I wouldn't mind changing it I suggest Dérant with or without the Von i derived it from part of a French translation of the word dominant though i am uncertain what that word fragment means if anything on its own. Or maybe we could go all German with Von Herrschend. see link for translations http://www.wordhippo.com/what-is/the-meaning-of/german-word-herrschend.html
>>5517388 i'm not that guy, but lets assume he does. how could he possibly fairly allow something like this, but say "but no dick girls". that in and of itself may cause a shitstorm and kill the thread, because dickgirl lovers are our vocal portion. it may not even be a majority. just a very vocal portion
also >Honestly, you faggots who bitch over everything that doesn't pander to you are the most annoying thing on this website
theres a difference between this and not liking dicks. not everyone has a thing for dicks. this isn't an issue of "not liking everything" or "not liking anything that doesn't pander to you", its a matter of "there are dicks in literally every thread, and i can't seem to get away from it". its pretty much the exact opposite.
if he complained about every single thing he didn't like, i'd probably agree with you, but i feel the vote for the D was a bit skewed just due to the nature of the board, and this will inevitably upset people who don't like dicks. considering this place is one of the best places to get this kind of thing, and keep it going in a relatively friendly environment(that doesn't get extremely creepy at some point), it IS a bit sad that over 70% of the board is literally just chicks with dicks in one fashion or another, without rhyme or reason. threads like elzi's are fine, he puts some good effort into what he does. but the several random "post chick with dick" threads, are a bit tiresome.
>>5531518 >Dérant Er, it either sounds like a shortening of "dérangé", which means mad, fool (or having diarrhea. http://www.cnrtl.fr/definition/d%C3%A9rang%C3%A9 ), or like a derivative for the common name Durant (from "endurant", tough).
[x] Attend class (with Elizabeth) You sigh and nod, it really would be prudent to at least show up on your first day of classes this year, and since slaves are allowed on the premises, even if promiscuous activity is banned on school grounds, it gives you the perfect opportunity to show off you're prized pet Elizabeth. Speaking of she's nearly done in the machine it would be best to retrieve her before over expose can break her mind. It's a rare occurance to be sure but known to happen when an owner carelessly leaves a machine running for to long after the new training has taken. When you reenter the machine her moans can be heard quite clearly, repeating her command like a manta as she strains her bonds. Not in any effort to truely escape them but simply due to the raw pleasure running through her body, there's a tone of desperation as you turn of the machine and remove her restraints. "M-mistress, please.... I need to cum so badly, it's all I can think about..." She pleads pressing her thighs together desperately chasing one last orgasm that lies just out of reach. The thought to mess with her comes to mind, she is so very lovely when she squirms and mewls in such desperation but you remind yourself of your obligation and pat her on the head. "Go ahead and cum, then wash up and get ready we're going to attend class today in person." She nods and even as you turn with a wide grin you can hear her desterately rubbing herself permission now secure to cum it happens rapidly sending echoing cries through your empty home. The echos do bring you a touch of annoyance though, the home has more than enough room for more than just you and Elizabeth yet is completely empty when you are both gone, something will have to be done about that, it wouldn't do to have your things left unattended while you are away and it's inconveinient to leave Elizabeth behind.
You dress in the schools uniform, a simple vest over a white shirt with a plaid skirt reaching down to your knees. your tail hanging out from underneath the back. you've tried many times in the past to change your clothing so it go straight through but you were always chastised for ruining your clothes by putting holes in them when you were younger. now it's become almost second nature to keep just enough control over it to keep it from lifting up your skirt to flash strangers your ass. of course most people adjust their uniforms in some way to make themselves stand out as individuals. You of course, where your red sillettos as your own little splash. you look around and grin at Elizabeth's coller and leash, it's not really necessary but fun at times, it's staying for now but maybe another time. Elizabeth dresses as a maid, and stands respectfully behind you, this outfit being quite common for slaves in public, usually if you see someone in such a get up these days they're either a slave or pretending to be one. When you're ready the pair of you head out and ride comfortably in a company car to your school, a large prestigeous building built in an old brick style and modernized inside with an expansive lawn straight out of old university movies.
You would think that on a calm peaceful morning like this nothing could possibly happen to ruin it, and everyone who has ever said something like that is a moron, something always happens to shatter the pretty picture. in this instance it's the sickly sweet voice that calls out from somewhere to your right just before you can enter the main building. "If it isn't little Anya von Don't. I thought you'd given up trying to socialize with people short stuff." A Girl with shortcut, dark red, hair says. Athletically built, runner, gymnist, and terror of short blonde girls back at your old school. this one was actually the reason you stopped showing up in person her name is Jessica Marlins, you're pretty certain the only reason she started picking on you at all is because she has a thing for you but you can't really be certain. Elizabeth seems rather perturbed and it might be best to simply ignore your old bully before you can do anything to make it worse.
[ ] Ignore Jessica and walk through the door as intended [ ] Confront Jessica or allow Elizabeth to do so for you (specify) [ ] smile at your former bully and play nice, it's never to late to make a friend.
>>5532784 >[X] smile at your former bully and play nice, it's never to late to make a friend. And by friend I mean slave
>>5532779 >The echos do bring you a touch of annoyance though, the home has more than enough room for more than just you and Elizabeth yet is completely empty when you are both gone, something will have to be done about that, we actually have a staff of other maids >>5511798 >The mansion is quite spacious and well appointed, and comes with a staff of slave maids to keep it in order. Your personal maid, Elizabeth, has of course come with you.
>>5532385 >but say "but no dick girls". I actually ran a quest maybe two years back. I think it was called nanite quest. I tried to find my save of the threads, but I can't find it. It was unfortunately deleted by the mods fairly quickly and I gave up after two threads. However, I did state that rule up front (coprocessors that proposed giving our host a dick had their blackbox cause them to self-destruct). I think it worked out fairly well, except for the fact that the mods weren't at all friendly to quests on /d/ back then.
>[X] smile at your former bully and play nice, it's never to late to make a friend. You smile softly, yes she was a terror for you but running away now would set a precident in her mind, and argueing with her would be unbecomming of someone with your upbringing, there really is only one option left and maybe if you're right then she really only does make fun of you because she's upset by her own feelings.
Your tail sways slowly behind you as you release the door handle and turn to the entitled red-head. "Jessica! Oh my, I was afraid I wouldn't know anybody here. at least that worry has been put to rest. Are you still in the athletics programs? I remember you were really impressive last time I saw you perform, maybe you'll be willing to let me watch you practice?" you ask closing some of the distance between you and her and taking her hand in a friendly gesture.
It seems to work well, she's off guard and blinking rapidly, clearly not the response she was looking for. she stammers for a second as her mind works to catch up with the conversation but she seems to manage. "Uh... yea alright, My friends couldn't really afford to come here with me either so I guess I don't mind you comming to watch." she replies with more than a little suspicion.
Good, she seems amicable... or she did until both you and her realize your tails slowly running along her outer thigh. Her eyes turn to saucers and she swats it away leaving you to clear your throat. "Sorry about that." you say and only just notice the light blush on her cheeks. seems you were right about her after all. she waves it away before answering. "yea, whatever, just you know... keep it to yourself. I gotta go but uh... after class maybe?" she says before hopping from foot to foot putting a bit of distance between yourself and her before she turns around and starts jogging off. when you're alone again Elizabeth finally speaks.
>>5534528 "Mistress, are you sure you should be making such a friend? I don't like how she talks to you..." The lovely slave asks, is that the sound of jealousy? you can't tell yet but you can still answer. "Maybe if we're nice then she'll return it, in any case she might be useful to me even if we don't become exactly close." you rationalize and Elizabeth seems to accept it. Not that she had a choice but a happy slave is generally the best kind.
When you arrive in class you look around and see that a majority of your classmates are absent, preferring to attend remotely, still a few can be seen, a thin boy with short dark hair wearing thin wire frame glasses and a tall girl with long hair, dyed platinum blonde. Those are the only two who really stick out to you at the moment, It seems like you're not sharing classes with Jessica, a pity at least then you'd have someone to talk to during the lecture. Boring and reminding you exactly why you started making Elizabeth attend your classes for you.
After class the platinum one gets up and is the first out the door, the boy though seems to be busy revising his notes. You know Elizabeth has been taking her own notes to help you study with later, what a good slave she is, as she finishes up you can decide what to do now.
[ ]look around campus for Jessica, she seemed to be interested in meeting up. [ ]Talk to your classmate before heading home, he's still there and hard at work. [ ]Leave campus and head to the market to peruse availible slaves, maybe one will catch your eye.
>>5534530 >[ ]Talk to your classmate before heading home, he's still there and hard at work. Jesica seems strong-willed enough to either be a later slave or not be one at all. We need to look at prospective ones in the short term and start expanding our influence
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