So what do you think of Bottom's Butte's pilot? h

Just a genderbent version of Regular Show.

>>90483985
>Bottom
>Butt
Who wrote this? A five year old?

>>90483985
Mediocre

But I want to fuck the alpaca so I'd greenlight it for a few seasons

I'm so fucking tired of that art style

>>90484016
Minty Lewis

So yes

>>90483993
Not as funny as that though.

>Kids' cartoon about a woman who pretty much has brain damage.

What the actual fuck?

i like her butte

>>90483985
It's absolutely terrible, and I'm completely incapable of finding that alpaca attractive in any way.

I hate it. Just by looking at OP's picture I can tell it was made by some blue haired tart who claims to be non-binary, or some shit

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>>90484042
same

i'm just a degenerate who wants more porn, so at least 2 seasons please

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Apple and onion was better

I have no problem with this being greenlit

>Will help oversaturate this shitty house style with it's uninspired concept and design, and will be cancelled quickly ala Sanjay and Craig due to this
>Will pave the way for more original ideas and styles
>porn of the alpaca

>>90484864
>>cancelled quickly ala Sanjay and Craig

Wait, shit, really? Huh.

>>90484864
>>Will help oversaturate this shitty house style with it's uninspired concept and design, and will be cancelled quickly ala Sanjay and Craig due to this
i really hope the bubble will burst soon and people in the business will start complaining about the monotonous and samey artstyle that shows on CN have

>>90484281
I'm deeply amused. Like, you know how many cartoons feature ambiguously aged adults acting retarded? Well, this time, she's literally retarded!

>>90483985
Premise is moronic, execution is bland. It's shit.

I'm gonna need some art of that llama.

>>90483985
Brain damage isn't funny.

Like that's not even me being a virtue signaler, brain damage literally is not funny and the whole idea is awful. It's like having a comedy show about old yeller.

>>90483985
more like Bottom's BUTT

>>90484864
>>Will pave the way for more original ideas and styles
That's a risky assumption.

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OKAY

GUYS

YOU LISTENING

SERIOUSLY

GUYS

I HAVE THIS IDEA FOR A CARTOON

ITS KIND OF LIKE REGULAR SHOW BUT WITH GIRLS

OKAY

HERE GOES

SO LIKE, THERES THIS ALPACA LADY THATS A TEACHER

BUT SHE GETS BRAIN DAMAGE

OKAY

AND SHE LIVES IN A MANSION WITH HER MOM

AND HER BEST FRIENDS A TALKING PEANUT WITH A BOWL CUT WHO SOUNDS LIKE EILEEN FORM REGULAR SHOW, BUT THIS SHOW ISNT LIKE REGULAR HSOW AT ALL OKAY

AND THEY HAVE A SWIMMING POOL FILLED WITH GREEN GOO

AND A ROBOT BARTENDER THAT MAKES THEM DRINKS

OKAY

GET THAT

CAN I GET SOME FUNDING?

>>90483993
Of course Eileen was responsible for it.

>>90489550
AND THE MANSION IS DILAPIDATED BECAUSE THEY ARE POOR

BUT, BUT,

WHEN THEY GET MONEY, THEY SPEND IT ON SOMETHING ELSE

>>90483985
>>90483993
>>90489550
It's honestly kind of pathetic how multiple pilots from RS alumni ended up being so similar to the show their creators stemmed from:

>Paranormal Roommates (this one especially)
>AJ's Infinite Summer
>Bottom's Butte

I gotta congratulate Sean Szeles and Owen Dennis for taking things in slightly different directions even if Long Live The Royals was pretty damn bland, thus quickly drifting into brutal obscurity.

Here's hoping that Calvin Wong's pilot turns out to feel fresh: >>90483664

I want to fuck the pink retard.

>>90483985
>that part where she's dressed like a escort
That's some really good rule 34 potential if someone used that as the image context and maybe change up her design a bit, little more humanoid or something.

>>90489690
Let's be honest, we are all here because we saw the pink retard and thought "Yeah, I would."

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>Brain damage

My little cousin has brain damage as a result of a drunk driver hitting our car last 4th of July.

She can't respond as fast and silly as she used to and she fights to finish her sentences, she's only 11. For Christmas she asked Santa for a time machine. I could have easily guessed what for, but my Uncle who dressed up as Santa at the time asked her, "Why?"

All she could do was cry. All I could do was cry.

I'm in college trying to become a speech-language pathologist. I'm sorry /co/. I find humor in the dumbest of things, but I can't find humor in this.

I'm

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>>90490100
Fuck, man. I just wanted to be angry at cartoons

Best of luck to your cousin, make her proud

>>90490100
>that last I'm
You better not toying with my emotions faggot, I like dark humor but fuck.

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>>90490100

God. Fuck everything.

>>90483985
CN right now is not in a very good state.
This may actually get a pass.

There are so many pilots that actually deserved a serialisation, but such is life.

>>90484864
>Will pave the way for more original ideas and styles
Never assume things get better as a default.
From nothing comes nothing.

>>90490100
Is she hot?

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>>90490100

>>90483985
I'm surprised more people didn't find it kind of tasteless/depressing. I mean, the main character has brain damage and her best friend is an enabler for fuck's sake. I was amazed at the fact that the only people who seemed repulsed at the idea were from 4chan or YouTube, Tumblr didn't even notice.

I can guarantee you that if the show was greenlit we'd get a fucking depressing "wow a moment of clarity" episode.

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>>90490100

>>90484091
and without the charm

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>>90490100
Now that's how you derail a thread.

>>90490100
its just a cartoon

>>90492939
it doesn't stray far from other cartoons with similar premises involving retarded adults, like spongebob or regular show, it's just upfront about it.

>>90493180
When mordo and rigby did terrible things and saw people suffering for it they would realize it and try and fix things.

This is just a bitchy retard and her friend from pickle and peanut.

>>90483985
>Lemon $300

That was a good joke. Too bad the rest was a grating, run of the mill Regular Show clone.

>>90493180
Spongebob and Regular Show's protagonists are fucking retarded, sure, but it's never implied that it's because of brain damage/mental disability, they're just manchildren who never matured.

This pilot, on the other hand, implies the protagonist is a fucking retard because of brain damage, not because she's a womanchild.

That peanut looks like Lena Dunham.

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>>90490100

>>90484042

Yup, I also enjoyed the frequent costume changes

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>>90490100

>>90483985
can someone write out the whole lyrics to the opening? some of the words get muffled and are hard to make out

>>90493586
Hoo Beverly you were
a lonely teacher 'till your bun got so tight
that it made your brain like a teenager's (living with Mom now)

In this decrepit mansion
losing grip is tough, but hey

Since I've got my best friend Peanut
life is awesome, OK
Bottom's Butte

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>>90490100
W-wew lad

>>90483985
This show looks degenerate.

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>>90490100

I am a stand-up comedian who has been working on a cartoon show for like 7 years now. I can't draw at all, so I've just been writing and rewriting the scripts.

The premise is that Dave, an uptight workhorse, and Kate, a spacey goof, take in their totally spazzed out friend Ted after his girlfriend dumps him.

Ted, who has always been fascinated by conspiracy, begins a spiral of depression and anger that makes him decide his calling in life is to fight the moon. Many of the characters point out that this is not a possible goal.

Eventually, Ted embroils himself into a legitimate government conspiracy and has to figure out how to be the leader that he wishes he were when he's placed as the head of a government agency that plans on fighting the moon.

Is this a decent premise or should I scrap this.

>>90490100
I'm sorry to hear it, man.

>>90490100
but is she hot?

>>90497418
It sounds like the premise for an indie foreign film. Not that that's a bad thing, I just don't think it'd work for as a series.

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>>90490100
>All she could do was cry. All I could do was cry.

>>90483985

Why does it have to be literally "lol so random"?

Adventure Time (which I've only watched a couple episodes of) and other shit like that feel a lot more cohesive in their (whacky) world building, this just feels purely random

Also that Alpaca is pretty hot, and the fact that you could probably talk her into really nasty sex without much trouble, is kinda hot too (but you'd definitely need to double wrap your dick)

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>>90489550
This isn't a bad idea at all but it can be improved

Make the peanut guy a human or an animal to blend more with the world

change the art style

Make it a adult drama /comedy about how the alpaca girl can have short lucid moments and realizes she's wasting her life being a crazy lady and she can do nothing about it

make some episode about her mom struggling to keep the familys mansion and she can't keep her daughter because of the poor condition they live in

her daughter is taken to a special home with people like her because of this

the rest of the episodes is a alternate between "#yolo with my retarded friends" or "omg wtf i'm an doing with my life "

she escape with the help of peanut and start traveling states having crazy drugs adventure ,robbing churches ,meeting a paranoiac of zombies bunker guy ,get a job in a bdsm basement just to steal bracelet (aka dickring)that she thinks has a link to her past wen she wasn't crezy

ends up wanting to get money so her mom can keep the mansion

Becomes a street prostitute and give her customers all the diseases imaginable that somehow it doesn't affect her at all....

that's all the autistic i have to make a "better plot" then the sauce material what do think

>>90490100
I'm so sorry to hear that anon...

>>90484043
This.

So much.

>>90490100
dubs for FAKE AND GAY!!!

>>90490100
Boo hoo go fuck yourself.

>>90483985

OMG WOW---LIKE SO TOTALLY LE QUIRKY!

SOMEONE GET THIS SHOW 64 EPISODES NOW!

oy vey.... thanks Cal Arts.

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Why does this pilot feel so... Californian?

I have a strong feeling that kids would have no interest in it.

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Concept is awful

But on the other hand, THICC

>>90494721
thank you so much senpai!

>>90484042
This guy gets it.

>>90483985
Seems pretty bad. Also I Agree with this thread about the brain damage thing being kinda shitty. I don't know, I much prefer "character never grew up" over "character was an employed person that suffered brain damage and now just fucks off with her friends all day.

Granted, they aren't playing this brain damage thing straight, either. It's more like when a character gets bonked on the head and changes personalities. Or sneezes and changes personalities. It's not meant to be a legitimate (oh wow this woman's severely disabled). It's more of a wow that bun incident made this boring old teacher lady fun-loving! It doesn't seem to affect her cognitively or physically, it just altered her personality.

>>90500787
I know it's said in-canon that she became very dumb, but she doesn't act mentally retarded, just goofy. I doubt a CN pilot would ever actually play a cognitive disability straight like that. Well I guess Clarence kind of did.

>>90484016
>pink-haired alpaca isn't a flamboyant gay man, but instead a very immature former schoolteacher

Give the writer a bit of credit, they're at least eight.

>>90500787
Fun fact (?): The character is based on Minty's alcoholic aunt.

>>90501557
Really? My alcoholic relatives aren't NEARLY as goofy, but they can fix damn near anything you give them.

>>90490100
is she a virgin?

>>90500787
anything can be done if its done right.
hell, we've had plenty of cartoons with murder, depression, attempted suicide, sexual harassment, addiction, blackmail and so forth (like looney toons and tom& jerry)

>>90483985
I swear to god if someone already made porn of the alpaca I'll be glad something good came out of this shit pilot

>>90492939
Searching for it on Tumblr only gives porn gifs.

>>90502898
Somehow, imagining Ernie saying that first comment made me laugh again

>>90483985
Alpaca design is kinda hot

Everything else is not

>>90483985
I just want to say that I'm pretty sure everything that could be considered bad with modern cartoons was just in that video

I couldnt make it past the intro

>>90484043
people used to say that about the thick outlines style of the 1990s and 2000s

that is how we got the current style

>>90490100
ffuck

>>90483985
you know, after seeing this, a question entered my mind like a salty hooker.

Do you think that kids will watch anything, even if it's shit? And, if you agree, do you think they know it's shit, but watch it anyway because there's nothing else? For now, let's assume yes to both points, in that case, is it the responsible of show creators to make something that shapes kids tastes into something better? Or at the very least give them something good if they're gonna sit down in front of whatever is playing?

>>90483985
>/CO/ LITERALLY BELIEVES THIS PILOT DESERVES TO BE PICKED-UP MORE THAN INFINITY TRAIN, TWELVE FOREVER, OR VICTOR AND VALENTINO

you all must burn in hell

>>90503322
no, kids wont watch anything
but they will watch shit, and they wont care

they will watch anything that is sufficiently colorful and loud
they do not care about the quality

>>90490100
put me in le epic sad screencap

>>90503322
I was completely oblivious to how shitty Rocket Power and CatDog was as a kid.
I image there is a point where it is so bad that even a kid wont watch it though.
Show creators only responsibility is to make money.

>>90503330
Who even said that?

I sure as fuck didn't!

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>>90484644
my nigga

>>90503457
allot of the threads about CN pilots end-up with everyone trashing Infinity Train and Twelve Forever as being "tumblr shit", and instead demanding stuff like Bottom's Butte or Apple & Onion to be picked-up instead

>>90503545
Apparently I've missed a lot of threads.

We need more R34 of the alpaca.

>>90503545
I have never seen this, I thought people here loved infinity train

>>90503545
>Anon is so delusional, he sees threads that don't exist
I think your bun is on too tight.

Somewhere, someone is teaching a class called something along the lines of 'Quirky Cartoon Design 1000'.

This show is the result.

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>>90504589
>um, Miss Peach, why isn't the class called '101'-
>um, BECAUSE you wouldn't expect a starter course to call itself 1000! And THAT free-spirited 'anarchic' mindset is what I want to teach all of you this semester!

>>90483985
I do wonder sometimes how much thought goes into these things.

>>90503322
I remember watching the Cramp twins, feeling annoyed with it but kept watching anyway in the hopes I'd grow to like it.
Or just some shows that I watched because I sort of liked one random side-character but found the rest of the show "off".

That said I think kids can recognise a great show. The series that actually had effort put into them where the ones that got recorded on VHS.