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>>83669245
Here's my thoughts:
-Surpringly fluid animation considering the art quality.
-The sound clips taken from the game were a tad bit too loud, and the original dialogue was a tad bit too quiet.
-Although they were taken straight from the game, the conflicting art style between the Rayman characters and everyone else was slightly jarring. It would be better to draw them next time, even if it wouldn't look as nice.
-Not too great choice of voice clips, I would've recommended Rayman's and Ly's gibberish voice clips from Rayman 2 for Rayman and Betilla, respectively.
-Humor could've been better, then again I'm not a fan of dirty jokes.
-Pacing was a bit too fast, everything was rather rushed. The plot you chose for the episode can't really be done in a 3 minute time frame.

To sum it up, good animating, but your art and writing could use some work. The best solution for art is simply practice. Draw all the time, force yourself to draw, draw until you no longer need to force yourself to, and try to find your own style instead of using shape tools. Most importantly, make certain YOU genuinely love and are proud of it. Put in all the little details and time into making everything, from the backgrounds to the characters, into something you really like. Your animating is actually not too bad, while some things could be worked on, like character lip movements and regular movements, which were extraordinarily stiff, things look well on their way to being nicely animated. Take the sidewalk scene for example, aside from that one meme character, everything in it was pretty fluid and flowed nicely. Which leaves the writing, now I don't know exactly what you're trying to go for tone or style wise, so I can't be too specific, but one suggestion that comes to mind would be to try to think of the best gags and jokes that you really think are great, and animate a story around those. Go wild with your writing, try to be original, and don't forget that animation is a visual medium

>>83669827
so try to incorporate that aspect into things. Make the visuals just as funny as the actual dialogue.

I'm in no way trying to be mean or critical, in fact quite the opposite, I'm giving you this advice so you can improve. Overall, while this doesn't stand out now, it shows a lot of promise, and if you work at it, I'm sure it'll be fantastic.

P.S. Forgot to mention, don't be afraid to use whatever kind of characters you want, even if they're very complex to draw. A great character design can improve everything drastically.

>>83669827
>>83669954
anon I think you took too much time criticizing something that might not be even from the creator. some times dudes just look for low view animations and post them here because they think we would make fun of them or something.

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also this character as a Belmont/Samus combo (metroidvania)

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Here is the alt. for the first one but i really think it works better making direct references.

>>83669184
>>83669239
They look look nothing alike. At all.
Based on this logic, Nintendo could sue me for making a PowerPC-based rectangular white console due to it's similarity to the Wii.

He had a stupid dog.

Mommy issues.

His mom was verbally abusive

>>83668793
That's why she's the key.

>>83668793
If she did then she might've caught a glimpse of a Superman movie that didn't suck on some other Earth.

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>>83668793
What if MoS was a good movie

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I am also a fan of silent panels

>>83669120
Why is Tony such a man child now?

>>83669152

They are trying to make him more like the movie version. It's part of the reason they gave his books to Bendis, to be more humorous and quippy

I have no idea how this has affected sales so far

>>83668169
That's not Legend of Korra, OP.

>>83668169
It's not for you man

>>83668632
Are you sure?

>there was somebody behind the squad above Waller
I'm annoyed by this development and I hope to hell they reveal he was just a higher up who decided to join in on what was already happening

>>83668286
Oh right yeah that's ok

I'm still dripping it having finished the second volume though the sleeper agent shit was to fucking stupid and the constant single enemy over so Manny issues was getting insane.

It started off so promising

I'm gonna give the original a try

Hasn't pretty much every Netflix original?

>>83667893
The second half of the season order still has to air

>>83667893
All Netflix shows are ordered with two seasons.

>>83667865
I remember when they used Courage Wolf.

And they used him wrong.

The dawn is your enemy

O Canada definitely
Used to freak the shit out me, it and watching Bill Plympton cartoons on late night HBO really contributed to me enjoying and seeking out more abstract and surreal media as I got older

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>>83666790
Hey, Shredder, cut it out.

>>83666790
What the fuck was with the NYPD referring to Shredder, Bebop, and Rocksteady by their villain names and never once by their actual names?

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>>83666790
Do they ever explain why he went from a mecha suit to a normal suit in the film or how he came back to life?

>>83666713
It's less landis and more because it doesn't have the retarded bunch of Superman editors DC usually uses.

I'm not going to shit on you for liking it but it was pretty mediocre in execution. Not really better than Unchained even.

>>83666713
I remember bits of his confrontation with Deathstroke

>>83666588
Thor god of thunder: god butcher/ god bomb

Alan Moores run on swamp thing.
Grant Morrison on Animal man.

Really, all the early Vertigo superhero comics.

And the entire run of James Robinson's Starman. The whole thing.

>>83667304
get better taste before you start telling others what to read.

>>83666412
So that's why it started coming out again

>>83666412
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Where were you when Bendis won.

>>83666412
Well I'm hoping this is better than his Powers TV show.

>>83665941
Bump

>>83665831
No, it was ruined by the pedophilia.

>>83665952
Explain.

It has the best black character since Cyborg in it though.