>Recently inherited house from parents due to unforseen circumstances
>Nice place, but yard is a bit overgrown due to not having seen much attention in about a year
>One day hear muttering outside
>The unmistakable sound of baby talk
>I've been on the internet enough to know the stories
>Look out the window and my fears were correct
>Fluffies, a whole herd of em "babbehs" and all
>As I'm prepared to go out and deal with this pest infestation I notice something
>In the far corner an Alicorn lying on a rock overlooking the herd
>White fur with a Gold mane, decent colors
>Everytime the other fluffies attempt to graze on anything besides the grass it snaps at them
>It's too far away to make out what it says
>Without fail though, any fluffy the Alicorn spoke to would sulk back to the grass patches
>"I thought Alicorns were seen as monsters, this one seems to be leading with an iron fist though"
>Figuring this was worth investigating, and with more curiosity than anger I head outside
>As soon as I close my door all the fluffies look up at me
>Instead of the "Nyu daddeh?" or "Hoomin wan pway?" which litters all the stories i've read
>The fluffies just turn their head to look at the Alicorn
>It stands up and proceeds to make it's way up to me
>As it's walking I see it has a very noticeable limp
>When it get's closer I also begin to realize that it is larger than the other fluffies
>Not by a huge margin, but noticeable enough for a fluffy
>Soon enough it gets to be about 3-4 feet infront of me
>The first thought the goes through my mind before it speaks is
>"This fluffy has been to hell and back"
>It looks like it's lost use of it's right eye, it's fur it's missing in many spot replaced with sizeable scars
>This fluffy has been through some fights
>Then it speaks
>"Fluffy sowwy if hewd intwuding on hooman land, but yawd have lots of extwa gwass"
>This is nothing like the stories you've heard of smarties
>First of all this fluffy is obviously a mare, which you find shockingly strange
>Secondly, it's very courteous not at all what you were expecting from the leader of a fluffy herd
>And lastly, did it just "fluffy" instead of "fwuffy"
Sorry for the wait, browser crashed on me
>"You're rather courteous for a smarty"
>"Fluffy no like the tewm smawty, it make fluffy seem like bad fluffy"
>Ignoring the fact this fluffy is able to pronounce it's L sounds without issue for now
>"I also thought fluffy herds were led by males not mares"
>"Hewd used to have smawty, but he only thought he smawt"
>"In defense of hewd I fought him fow wight to be nyu smawty"
>This fluffy seems to have more inteeligence than you thought possible
>It also seems to show genuine affection for others of it's kind, despite being a natural outcast
>You decide you need to learn more about this fluffy
>"You're a strange fluffy, I have more questions I wish to ask you."
>"Fluffy will answer quwestion willing if hewd can eat gwass"
>Seems fair enough
>"Alright, but only the grass"
>The ALicorn turns to face the rest of it's herd
>"Hooman says hewd can eat gwass, but noffing else. Any fluffy who eats othew plants deals wif meh"
>With a nod of a respect and some muttering here and there the fluffies go back to grazing
>"Also wemembew wules of poopies, only undew dat twee ovew der!"
>With that the fluffy turns to face me again
>"Fluffy now free to ansew quwestions."
>I open the door and motion for the fluffy to follow me inside
God this is the most retarded shit i've ever seen
This is like cringe festa holy shit
Ikr, what good is fluffy if it isn't suffering?
>Inside I sit down trying to wrap my head around this abnormality infront of me
>The fluffy calmly lays down facing me
>"What fings does hooman want to know?"
>"Hmm, I guess some formalities might make things easier. Do you have a name?"
>"Otha fluffies call fluffy Scaw, so dat name wowk fow fluffy."
>Cringing a bit at the middle school edginess of that name
>But with fluffies having a habit of naming things based on defining features, you understand
>"One of the biggest questions on my mind is, where did you learn to speak like that?"
>"Old daddeh was a school teahew, he spend a lot of time twying to teach fluffy"
>"Fluffy not learn evewything but he quwite smawt, teach fluffy many things"
>"You say old daddeh, what happened?"
>The bluntness of that statement cathes you off guard, you thought fluffies called it "forever sleepies"
>"That's a bit of a blunt way of putting it, I thought fluffies refferred to it as "forever sleepies"
>"Most do, but daddeh was very stewn about the "cold hawd truths of life""
>"Befowe he died he was vewy pewsistent that I call it as such"
>"He tell Scaw that "Evwebody dies someday, and that Fowevew Sleepies makes it sound nicer than it is""
>"Scaw vewy sad when daddeh died, but Scaw knows it would've happened eventually"
>Implying that traps are bad
I don't either, I've thought about even giving it a try since the abuse is such a guilty pleasure but it in no way gets me going sexually. When ever I see a human fucking a fluffy art I don't see it crossing a line but it's still a gross thing to me
Personally, i don't even mind them, but these threads are just cringe. Like it's the same shit every time whenever I see it in catalog.
>fluffy piece of trash has babies
>fluffy piece of trash shits on them
>they die or some shit
>fluffy is sad
>cuts limbs off
Maybe I just don't understand, and I absolutely have no idea how somebody finds any of this sexually arousing in the slightest.
It's mind boggling.
Most people don't actually get off to it sexually though that's the thing.
>Scar gets a very somber look on her face before sighing and looking back up at you
>"What else hooman want know?"
>"What about your herd, how did that happen?"
>"Well, when daddeh passed away his housie was given to a new lady"
>"New lady no like Scaw and Scaw was thrown out onto the stweet"
>"Scaw see the state of otha fwuffies and begin to undastand why lady no like fluffies"
>"Scaw also begin to understand how meanie otha fluffies can be"
>As she says that last part she looks back towards her many scars all over her body
>"I've heard fluffies don't take kindly to Alicorns"
>She sighs a little before continuing to speak
>"Dat, dey do not"
>"Eventually Scaw found hewd headed by old smawty"
>"Smawty no like Scaw because is "Dummeh monsta fwuffy""
>"Howevew hewd don't have many toughies at de time"
>"Scaw no proud of having to fight otha fluffies"
>"And missing see place is gud weminder of dawk times"
>"Eventually toughies no wan fight no mowe and smawty accepts Scaw as nyu toughie"
>"However smawty is just like all da otha smawties"
>"Vewy gweedy dummeh fluffy, maybe nevew had mummah or daddeh"
>"Maybe nevah cawed, but ahways annoyed otha hoomans and put hewds lives in dangeh"
>"Eventually Scaw get sick of dummeh smawty and challenge smawty to a fight"
>"Smawty was not actually a vewy tough fluffy, but smawties are qwick to fight and qwick to wun"
>"Aftew fight Scaw tell smawty to leave hewd and not come bak"
>"Scaw been in chawge evah since"
>You sense a bit of pride in Scar words, but her tone also carries a strong hint of remorse
>"You don't seem all too happy about that"
>"As Scaw said, no like fighting otha fwuffies"
>"Ah, sowwy fluffies"
> It seems like even a well trained fluffy can still slip up
>"Scaw happy herd is safeh since smawty leave, but still not happy smawty had to be fowced"
>"Fluffies awe fow fwiends not fights"
>Despite this fluffies rough and tough exterior it seems to have a very strong opinion against fighting
>"So how is the herd safer now that you're in charge?"
>"Scaw leawned many things fwom how hoomans weacted to fluffies"
>"Most impowtanly though Scaw lleawned hoomans no liked smawty attitude"
>"Scaw leawned, with a few attempts, dat hoomans are much nicew when Scaw was wespectful"
>"If Scaw no demand things fwom hoomans and simply asked to eat gwass den hoomans wewe much nicew to Scaw"
>"Scaw also leawn hoomans no like it when fluffies eat pwetty pwants, or make poopie all over the yawd"
>"So Scaw always set wules for hewd, only eat gwass and only make poopies at the base of twees"
>"Why only at the base of trees?"
>"That something daddeh also teach scaw"
>"Daddeh tell Scaw that poopies make soil betteh fow twees and help the gwow big and stwong"
>"I see, and what happens if a fwuffy breaks one of your rules."
>"The Scaw punish bad fwuffy"
>"That seems a bit against what you said about fighting fluffies"
>"Whateveh Scaw do is not neaw as bad as what angwy hooman do"
I'm too lazy to delete things, honestly that's just the tip of the autismberg
But i've got a story to type so i won't go into that.
Also i want to fight whoever made this captcha system
>"Scaw once see fwuffy mummah choked on own babbeh"
>"Scaw also heaw stowies fwom otha fluffies who met angwy hoomans"
>"Many stowies of special fwiends being huwt, ow dying at da hands of angwy hoomans"
>"Scaw kno Scaw must pwotect hewd, even if it means being mean to otha fwuffies every now and den"
>"That's a rather valiant thought for a fluffy"
>"Scaw kno is stwange fwuffy, but no cawe if Scaw can hewp hewd den thewe no need to be nowmal"
>"You said you had a smawty, but he was kicked out"
>"Then how do you deal with any smarties who attempt to take over?"
>"Or any babies who show signs of being smarties?"
>"Any fwuffy is allowed to join hewd, but if new smawties want to twy and take hewd"
>"Dey also have to fight Scaw, if a smawty can beat Scaw then dey stwong enough to lead"
>"If Scaw beat smawty den dey cast out just like fiwst smawty"
>"And foals who shown signs of being smarties?"
>"Many mummahs and soon mummahs are weminded to tweat all babbehs the same"
>"Scaw can onwy wemembew one smawty babbeh, mummah decided it was hew "bestest babbeh""
>"When the mummah wefused to tweat it like all the otha babbehs, they was taken and given to a new mummah"
>"Eventually the mummah bwoke and agweed to tweat all hew babbehs the same."
>"Der have been no otha pwoblems since"
>"That's a rather direct way of dealing with the problem."
>"Scaw leawn alot mowe fwom hoomans den you think"
>"Scaw know dat when hooman mummah can't tweat babbehs wight they taken and given new mummah"
>"That reminds me, you're a mare aren't you?"
>"Yes, Scaw am mawe."
>"How come you don't have "babbehs"?"
You can post pics yourself and you don't have to read the stories. However you want to sit there be a lazy cunt and bitch when someone is contributing OC. That's fine and all and you're within your right to do so, but i'm well within my right to tell you to fuck off and go fuck yourself.
Some people are enjoying the story and want me to continue so I damn well will
Pic Very related
Am I the only who finds it a wee bit hypocritical that people who say that threads about abusing cartoon animals are bad, but sometimes take pleasure in rekt and gore threads?
Cmon let's get this thing going
>"Scaw no can, Scaw am "Fixed" as daddeh called it"
>"I see. It doesn't seem like this bothers you?"
>"It did at fiwst, but daddeh told Scaw stowies of how much twouble babbehs can be"
>"Scaw eventually decided it was fine if no haf babbehs"
>"When Scaw join hewd many toughies attempted to have special huggies with Scaw"
>"But most back down when Scaw tell them no, too afwaid of Scaw"
>"When Scaw took oveh heawd Scaw finally leawn what daddeh meant about babbehs"
>"Scaw see all da soon mummahs having twouble and needing help just to move"
>"Aftew taking ovew heawd Scaw neveh happieh that Scaw can't have babbehs"
>"Would just be a distwaction"
>"That's a very adult thing to say"
>"I'm used to hearing stories of fluffies who throw tantrums over not having babbehs"
>"Dose fluffies just no know what it weally like to haf babbehs"
>"Only think it good because they see otha fluffies wif good babbehs"
>"You know what, I like you Scar. What if I became your new daddy?"
>"Scaw no can accept that, unless you willing to accept entiwe hewd."
>"Scaw need think of hewd befowe self"
>You contemplate what this fluffy says before you look back out the window
>You notice the areas where the fluffies have been grazing have started to become much lower
>And thanks to scars very strict ruling the yard is relatively clean of fluffy shit
>Save for the area around the big oak tree
>"Very well Scar, I think we can come to an agreement"
>"As long as you keep your strict rules enforced on your herd, you all can set up a nest in the garage"
>"You guys and eat all the grass you want as long as the grass is higher than your hooves"
>"However, you aren't allowed around any of the flower bushes in front of the house"
>"Also, you're the only fluffy allowed inside the house"
>"And finally, if I catch a single fluffy breaking one of my rules then i'm allowed to punish them"
>"Sound like a deal?"
>"Scaw think that sound faiw, but no killing fluffies."
>"Alright then we have a deal"
I see these threads constantly but I've never understood them or looked at them. Can you guys fill me in? Is it something for edgy people to look at that can't handle gore? I just don't get it.
>With our deal made I lead scar back to the front door and let her out
>When we return The other fluffies look up from what they were doing
>Scar walks back towards her herd before saying in a commanding tone, for a fluffy
>"Dis hooman will let hewd make nest in gawage"
>"We can eat wiffout wowwy as long as we follow hiw wules"
>"Make suwe the gwass does not get too low"
>"Don't num on da pwetty plants"
>"And make poopies in the wight spots"
>"If any fluffy bweaks dese wules behind Scaws back, dis hooman is allowed to punish dem"
>"So hope Scaw catches you befowe he does"
>With Scar speech over with the fluffies stay silent for a few moments
>Before cheers of "Yay" and "nyu Housie" and "Su happy"
>A couple of young looking fluffies run up to me
>"Tank yu nice mistah"
>"Fwuffy wuv nice hooman"
>With that you spend the rest of the evening helping the fluffies get situated in their new nest
Crap ending i know, but i'm certainly not done with this. I've grown rather fond of this character. As for uploading to the booru i'll definitely consider it, at least after i've gotten some sleep that is. I'll continue lurking and responding to any comments til this 404s or 15 minutes passes, whichever comes first, this is /b/ after all
Thanks anon, hopefully I can contribute more later after work.
nice story but if you don't mind me pointing out two things..
1. the possessive of "it" is "its", not "it's". it's an absurdly common and an eye-gouging mistake for me and many others. don't want to be a grammar nazi but this one is really simple to fix
2. Scar's speech is often way too complex even as for a very smart fluffy it's meant to be. the gap between object thinking typical of fluffies and babies, and abstract thinking of an adult man is too huge to just simply forget about it. it can be diluted easily enough in the context of the story, however, things like "correct" instead of "yes", and starting sentences with pauses like "well," make the character unbelievable and incoherent. You've produced a fluffy whose intelligence varies from sentence to sentence. It's simply too much. She sometimes thinks like a fluffy, and sometimes like an >adult< human
and on a side note, if she had a caring owner for a long time, she must have some other name than Scar. fluffies tend to flaunt their names and there's no reason why Scar wouldn't do the same.
and on a side note for a side note, the most canonical naming scheme for ferals goes by the pattern of color-characteristic, in this case "Whitey Scawy" (or Green Grassy, Reddie Toughie, and notably, poopie babeh, dancie babeh and so on)
All in all, it's really good and bears promise of decent continuation. It also motivated me to pick up my own story that lies around abandoned with almost ~80% of the story already done
Yes. It's a side-effect from them being larger and thus having larger brains in general.
It's a reference to 2001: A Space Odyssey, the monolith that supposedly gave early humanity enough intelligence to go from simple ape to, well, us in the film but I guess it overloaded the fluffy's mind and caused it to bleed from all its orifices.
Trips don't lie.
I'm posting my collection.
Fuck off newfag with your some newfag every day questions.
So I get the Comedy references, but why is everyone killing themselves at the end?
Hell is full, hence you go to heaven.
Serena Valentina is my alltime favorite.
Shame her dick doesn't have any shape to it anymore, because pounding a big dicked tranny is my dream, especially with a face and body as good as that
NU AM MAWE!
Fwuffy instawwed hot bwockfee mod.
He's not really there, he turns a bot loose on the thread.
One chocobo every 4 image posts.
Plus one chocobo for every reply he gets.
this asshole again.
I wish you die slowly with maximum pain. And after, i'll shat on your grave.
Nobody like you, that's why your mother never call you. A fucking pathetic NEET.
DIE, it's my wish for 2017
Or get hit by a truck.
You don't deserve to live. Just Die
It's ok for inactive threads to fall of the board. That is work as intended and it is better than off topic life support.
Loved the ending, and how smart scar was asit gives you an idea of how fluffies would've been if hasbio finished making them
Also I think it is a bit weird for his owner not to give scar a name, considering he wasn't abusive and how he spent time with scar teaching her
I love how you stayed away from the cheap abuse and gory ending and rather focused on the fluffy and its life and character development
The booru definitely needs more content like this
this fucktard chocobo asshole. He have no life, no friends, no family. He Wake up, go to 4chan to annoy people by thinking he is the mastertrolle, posting shit because he jiggling like a 12yr girl thinking is the best joke ever made.
By being hated this tard think to be important.
The only joy to his miserable life, it's posting chocobos, annoy people. He can't post Original content or draws (made himself).
No he can't. Why would this guy want to use a pen, draw something and post ?
no, why... coz he will lost time to do this. But's more funny to lost time to post shitty annoying shits.
By eating doritos and drink coke all the day and shitposting, he can't think about future, he don't care, mom and dad give money, why work or do something creative, he have a little money to survive (thanks mommy), no friends, no girlfriend (why, he have his computer, he can masturbate to birds), but he can eat on my desktop.
Mommy clean his room too.
He is just pathetic, with a low IQ.
Protip: he can't have a good idea for something funny, it's better to stole from others.
hey chocofag, don't reply to me, you will reply to me kwak. the proof is you can't have a normal conversation, because you have a mental illness. Consult a psy. or do something.
Yeah, i'll try and pay attention to that more in the future I was typing rather fast and tried to catch as many mistakes as I could.
Also the grammar and speech patterns were partially on purpose, partially my just lack of practice with writing in fluffy speak. I tried to give myself a bit of an out with the part where she said fwuffy instead of fluffy but I'm still aware I could use some practice.
Also I do plan to do more backstory and work on this a bit more later. And I hope to explain what happened and why she stopped using her real name.