Posting a porn comic I wrote and drew in which a teenaged boy rapes and enslaves the most beautiful women in the Marvel Universe, turning heroines into sluts and whores.
Let me know what you think. Any and all feedback appreciated.
First up: The Enchantress
>>604090915
Oh hell yes I was lurking when you first posted it
Good shit, op
tell me more OP
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>>604091123
OP you talented motherfucker
inb4 spoilsports
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>>604090915
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KpiEZfjf7lQ
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anyone reading?
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>>604092184
yep
>>604092184
lurking
>>604091331
Your art is great OP, but your profiles can be a little weird sometimes, like in the bottom panel here.
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>>604092309
You guys enjoying it? Any thoughts/feedback?
>>604092184
here
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>>604092319
Thanks for the tip I will work on that.
These can be a little rushed sometime.
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>>604092184
yessir good ish
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>>604092184
yeah good shit
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>>604092561
Aside from that you could probably use a little more practice on the guy's face but that's about all I can say. Your artwork is incredible.
>>604092878
Enchantress has had the superiority fucked out of her and is bound to her Master's will. She, a goddess, will now serve a young boy for all time, his devoted concubine and slave.
Thoughts?
Shall I continue?
Great artwork, man.
>>604093128
bump
>>604093128
Continue.
>>604093128
Here's Mary Jane Watson
>>604093128
Pegasus, right? Been working on much recently?
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>>604093613
just finished the enchantress chapter, working on a Black Widow chapter now.
>>604093627
Ooh shit. Fuck yes.
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>>604093803
great work
I downloaded and faved all of your comics on g.e-hentai
Keep up the good work
>>604093731
Ever thought about doing any DC characters?
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>>604093745
Fan of MJ?
>>604093906
I have several dc stories. wonder woman, powergirl, starfire
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>>604093919
Definitely. The aesthetic rubs me in all the right ways.
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>>604094049
I don't think you've transferred any of them into comic form? Unless I'm just blanking. I'm pretty sure I've read all of them.
>>604094111
how so?
you're the same guy who did those darkseid comics right?
your art style gets me rock fucking hard dude
>>604094234
check benchleyfan01.imgur.com
>>604090915
How does a teenage boy accomplish this? I'm lost.
>>604094341
Awesome. Any particular likes or dislikes? What about the style?
>>604094377
read on player
>>604090915
>op traces: the thread
;^ )
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>>604094259
Girl next door thing, the red hair, straight-cut bangs are always a +1 for me. You're doing her justice, OP.
>>604094643
This is great dude
>>604094657
awesome, good to hear.
i'm just amazed you can draw fingers.
did you learn more from hentai or western adult comics?
>>604094443
The women are great, curvy with great tits and everything. Not really sure about specifics, I'm no artist.
I'm also pretty partial to this type of corruption story so that's also a big plus
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thanks, what about it?
>>604094774
both I'd say, equally. Both have taught me important things.
>>604094792
Cool man, glad you enjoy.
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>>604090915
op you got talent, find a way to make this a business.
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>>604095104
Hey if anyone cums while reading this, do me a favor and let me know where. Like, down to page and panel if possible.
It helps me know what to aim for in future comics.
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>>604095162
How are you a Marvel comics fan and don't know that it's spelled "DAMMIT"
Love your stuff, OP.
Ever gonna continue your Darkseid comic? You neglected Raven, Zatanna, Black Canary - a whole cadre of eligible victims.
Also, what drew you to this kind of work? Rape-fantasies and such? Does your significant other know about it?
>>604095449
Fuuuuuck that bottom panel. I need more of this side profile missionary shit.
>>604095449
Mary Jane, a mere mortal woman, stood no chance of resisting. She is now addicted to the semen of her Master. She will serve him forever, happily.
Next: Black Cat
>>604095591
>implying this person has a significant other
Captcha: Guars
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Black Cat, co-starring Scarlet Witch
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It's great stuff
>>604095591
She knows, she doesn't know the extent to which I produce them.
I'll finish Darkseid at some point. Black Canary, Zatanna, Supergirl still to come.
I just got into this stuff at an early age and it stuck.
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KEEP GOING
>>604096101
>No Raven
Okay.jpeg
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>>604094234
>I'm pretty sure I've read all of them.
I assumed that they were always in comic form, with no text versions?
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>>604094364
Oh yes of course, the Darkseid comics. They were a tad rape-y for my taste, but still very good in terms of artwork.
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Anyone still reading? Keep those comments coming!
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>>604097224
Will you be continuing with Gotham Siren Singing any time soon?
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>>604097224
Still here.
You should add some villains some day. Catwoman, Ivy, etc.
>>604097345
I have a few chapters done, but nothing solid.
>>604092399
You asked and you shall receive. Have to run, though, so I didn't check to see if anyone else made similar comments.
First off, impressed that anyone on /b/ has actual talent. You must be new here.
Secondly, his dialog seems out of place with his power. It's crass...that of a kid with a toy instead of a master with a plan. It's fine if he's actually a kid, but I think the phrasing could be more intelligent instead of frat boy.
Also, he dove into this whole "fuck you in the ass" thing too quickly. Again, like a kid with a new toy or a virgin getting laid for the first time. Despite being in control, her body clearly has more control over him than he does over her. He can't *wait* to fuck her, like a giddy school boy....again, not powerful or masterful.
The art is great and emotions are excellent. Her face on the edge of tears was amazing.
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Good enough for me, as long as it'll be coming at some point. Thanks
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>7489â–¶
Fair enough, thank you for the feedback. He is supposed to be somewhat immature, as he's just a teenager, and has this ridiculous power that makes him arrogant.
>>604097489
Also, that's the frame where I stopped reading...oddly because I'm going to go play Marvel Heroes with a friend. So, no idea if it changes in later chapters. Keep up the good work!
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which frame?
>>604097380
Me nit picking, but it would look really hot if you had here panties to the side and had her pussy still be wet, I mean she was being vigorously fingered two pages back.
This is really good OP.
Keep em coming!
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fair
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Felicia's mind is broken, her body violated, her life in tatters. The only way for her to survive will be to devote herself, body and soul, to the man she now calls "Master."
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Rogue
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>>604097489
yeah I gotta agree, the expressions on the women's faces are always really well done
Fuck yes!!
>>604098604
Keep those comments coming! Any and all feedback welcome.
Again, if any of my comics made you cum, let me know where!
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>>604098168
Also another nit-pick: every girl sounds the same once they're broken. Maybe that's intentional, like they're all interchangeable, but it kinds of ruins it. It'd be nice if they kept their personality afterwards, it's just completely turned to his service.
Remember how Barton and Selvig were after they were turned in the Avengers? Evil but still themselves? That's kind of what I'm thinking of, here.
Probably overthinking things. And I've seen this before, so I know Rouge has a good Southern accent.
>>604098423
How can he have sex with her without dying?
art is good but the story is awful but i guess no one cares about that
>>604099021
Plot is full of holes
>>604099021
how is it awful?
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he can turn off other mutants' powers>>604099214
>>604099214
Haha full of holes get it
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haha
>>604097962
Whatever one I responded to.
As I skim the rest, I wonder if they're all just him bringing the next conquest to him and dominating? Might need some variety. If I were truly to control these women, I'd make them do some far more interesting things. Public acts with villians, sex acts only a super-hero could do with their powers, etc.
If the intent is an immature boy with a ring, then you're getting it and that's cool. But I'd want something more... Or perhaps he works his way into it?
For example, if he's really immature, the first encounter would be fine - but should be *less* intelligent. More shocked at how, "Holy shit!! It works!" and then develops sophistication, eventually turning "evil" as suggested, but in this case evil just means really kinky in the head...basically, turning him into a /b/ro.
By the end, he's a super-sex-villain who conducts massive depraved orgies like an orchestra.
Could I request a link to your albums?
These are amazing.
Mind control via sex is totally my thing.
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benchleyfan01.imgur.com
>>604099236
the dialogues are silly, not much better then that caption porn nonsense
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>>604099633
Ty, keep this up :)
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thank you for all the constructive feedback.
fyi, the heroines work in his whorehouse once they're converted
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As easily as any other woman, Rogue falls, her mind bending, her soul now addicted to the cum of the man who has tamed her. Her hero's spirit, a thing of the past, replaced by the identity of a whore.
Shall I post more? Any thoughts?
>>604100540
Lovely.
I already have MJ and White Queen. Any others besides those?
I'm done for now but thx op, do you have a link to your other stuff?
>>604100540
I feel like if you ever do the female villains of these worlds, it'd be interesting to do a vigilante who fucks morality into them - basically sort of the opposite of the corruption going on here.
I don't know how that would work, but it might be interesting. Like some strange holy warrior reeling in 'loose' women and turning them into housewives or something.
>>604100120
Na, to small time. He not only has power over their bodies, but power over their actions. He could take over the world with this. Obviously, still sexually, but a whorehouse? Small potatoes...
You could actually add some plot with a 'real' villain trying to steal the ring from him and using his whores to defend himself.
Or perhaps there is one way to lose the ring? Like if he chooses not to conquer one woman, his resolve is doubted by the ring and it starts to lose power until he truly dominates her?
Or the ring loses power unless he can come up with more and more depraved acts? In order to continue conquering, he needs to go from blowjob to anal to throatfucking to torture to... Oh god, I've been on /b/ too long.
But, seriously, mind-control leads to that...
>>604100992
... I would love this. So much.
OP, a little more girl on girl would also be good
>>604100540
And final thought - does everyone have huge tits? I always thought of Rogue as slimmer... I honestly don't see a difference between these three conquests. I assume anyone really into the Marvel Universe would want some differentiation between each character's body and actions and reactions..
>>604099633
>No albums were found.
>>604090915
How come I never channeled my 15 year old hornyness into something more productive
>>604100540
Please post morea a
it's whatever floats your boat, since they're your stories, but I feel your scenes are very patterned
kind of like how most porn has a pattern of BJ's -> eating box -> missionary -> cum outside
>>604101636
http://benchleyfan01.imgur.com/
>>604101759
Agreed. Most of the stories follow the same general progression of sexual acts. Sometimes scrambled, but not much.
I'm a big fan of your work OP. Have you thought about a story where a guy's sperm increases superheroine's powers, so they have to all have sex with him to beat a powerful bad guy?
You really do have talent, I just hope you do other comics besides porn.
That being said it gave me a boner.
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It takes a while to load
Anyone archived this yet incase of a 404
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benchleyfan01.imgur.com
>>604102432
yeah it's good now thanks
>>604090915
Love your stuff, wish you'd do another chapter with Starfire, maybe throw Raven in the mix.
>>604102634
Thanks /b/ro
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Np
Does OP have more content to share?