my friend just released his first music video and I was wond

If your boy is supa hot boi then he needs no criticism. BOY SPIT THAT SUPA HOT FIRE!!!!!

>>598023706
i cant believe i watched most of that lmao

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>>598024557
ayy lmao

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>Leaders of the Lost Generation
hahahahaa

>>598025413
It's a deep undertone of the implications of expectations from the birth of new infants in the world of today and how we are viewed as followers to the tech of past souls.

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>>598023706
you dont even have the perfect loop gif, so no

>>598025950
Or it just means he is king nigger.

>>598025950
>It's a deep undertone of the implications of expectations from the birth of new infants in the world of today and how we are viewed as followers to the tech of past souls.
>Proceeds to follow the shitty style of all other rappers.

>>598023706
That's a really good music video.
Like, fuck, whoever did the video has serious talent for this sort of thing.
Music is awful though.

>>598023706
Hook is garbage. Verses are garbage. Ya boy is delusional if he thinks this is any good. Pretty decent video though.

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>>598026193
>king nigger

>>598027246
>calls /pol/ cancer
>implying /b/ isn't
HA

>>598023706
0/10

Holy shit that is terrible

>>598023706
theres already too many niggers in the world. why to white people keep trying to be niggers too

With how much he moves his hands he must be a fap champion.
Denzel would slap the shit outta this guy.

>>598023706
Personalarmyrequest/10

ya boy is fuckin garbage and he knows hes garbage

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>>598028002
Lurk more.

Thourally annoying and not worthy of mentioning to anyone

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>>598027987
>i count six shots
samuel jackson
>i count two guns
jamie foxx
>denzel shit
denzel washington
>kayne shit
kayne west

why

>>598023706
Sounds like he just went to rhymezone.com and typed near rhymes for "cash"

Pathetic rappers. It's like acoustic singer-songwriters who sing prepositions on the beat.

Yes, I am a music producer. It's good that music can be made by anyone these days, but holy shit leave it to the professionals please.

>>598023706
Absolute garbage, subhuman level of art, i hope you all die...

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>>598026193
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>>598029861
thanks for the constructive criticism. ill show him to this tomorrow at the studio.

good idea >>598029861
ill see if he could incorporate that

>>598023706
Was infinitely better without sound.

>>598023706
He should roll his hands and point at nothing more.

>>598030513
If you're being serious though, the mix needs work and mastering too. I have some nice monitors and literally got no bass out of this track. i would suggest looking up vocal mastering in particular on youtube and shit because his rapping is what he is trying to advertise.

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>>598023706
needs more niggers walking around

OP here. does his freestyle give him any hope?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VwyvUA5ZUos

>>598032339
>"d to the i to the c to the k"
no.

really though, there is potential but he really should study meter, some english and poetry (no tipping here being srs).