Hey /b/, posting a superheroine porn comic I wrote and drew,

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>>547921657

It sucks

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>>547921514
When does the porn come?

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>>547921741
Thanks for teh feedback

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>>547922047
Stay tuned. Soon.

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>>547922105
monitoring this thread. good work OP fuck the haters

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>>547922306
gracias

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>>547922883

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>>547922656
>only darkseid

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>>547923212

Hahly shieet this is good. Great art style, interesting story and acceptable dialog. One thing though, I'd prefer it without the porn angle. Don't get me wrong, I love good fapping material but your skill would be put to better use writing actual COMICS. That's just my opinion anyways, but I still love it.

>9/10

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>>547923128
I don't get it what's funny

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>>547923385
Thanks. It's not everyday I'm told my porn would be better as not porn

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>>547923589

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>>547923860

"mmmbbllblbl"?

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>>547923860

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>>547923967
>mmmbbllblbl
mmmbbllblblmmmbbllblbl

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>>547924157
>mmmbbllblblmmmbbllblbl

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>>547924351
And that's the beginning of a new life for Wonder Woman.

Moving right along to the follow-up, starring Power Girl.

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>>547921514
This is quality work right here

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Totally monitoring this excellent fucking thread.

OP is a fucking hero.

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>>547925368

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>>547925451
Thanks

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>>547921514
I like your style, definitely fapworthy

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>>547927157

"shlorp" Your sound words man, I just find them so damn funny at times.

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Jesus Christ, OP, you are a fuckin' genius.

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>>547927393

maybe try not giving all your women cowtits

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>>547927512
A genius? thanks!

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>>547927904
And now Power Girl is a slave. Rolling right along to the Starfire chapter.

>>547927825
Hey OP, can't you just Zip this for us? It's really good and if colored would be even better. But saving each image at a time is tedious. So is posting each image.

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>>547928048

holy shit color this and sell it man

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>>547928169
Yeah but I have fun

You can see all my work at benchleyfan01.imgur.com

Keep going OP, you're work is better then most of the new 52

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>>547928326
>you're
God I'm an idiot

>>547928314
>benchleyfan01.imgur.com
Thanks! I have fun posting~

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>>547928326
Thanks!

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>>547929568

dude please post a mediafire or something

>>547929418
Some real critique, learn2anatomy. It doesn't take much to understand how to people in numerous poses, from several angles. Including this is basic facial features as well. You have talent, but don't settle for what you can do- try and get better. As an artist myself, seeing lacking or poor anatomy is pretty cringe worthy but I'm sure you can manage in future works.

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>>547929735
Good advice thanks

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>>547929896
Take this for example, it is pretty atrocious. But the face is amazing. Something that pisses me off is Riot game's excuse for poor anatomy, they say they don't worry about it and just try to make the art look "cool". Anatomy is cool, it makes this believable and look generally better. Any image you think is "cool" can be made better with proper anatomical proportions. There is no debating it. Anatomy is important as fuck. When I see your pictures I see natural talent and an amazing head start. Gotta keep working like I said.

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>>547921514
I can't even fap, I'm too enthralled by the story.
Wouldn't the flash be faster than the Omega beams? Or did the shock of seeing diana like that make him slow?
Also, Superman can bleed out?

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>>547930595
Agreed. Gotta keep working

>>547930595
Also excuse rambling and grammar, drunk and its late. If you approach your art with a more tactical mindset about "what is needed to make this image work" you will immediately see the difference. I hate to say it but your anatomy is almost Rob Liefeld tier. You don't want to be that ego driven asshole going your whole career not being able to draw feet because you are uncomfortable doing so.

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>>547930646
Thanks!

The idea is that Flash is already exhausted from running around the world trying to save people in the cities, and then is distracted by seeing Diana naked blowing Darkseid when he gets close.

Superman was pierced by Diana's magic blade, which would affect him just as a regular sword would affect us. So yes, he bleeds out.

>>547930646
I think he was stabbed by Diana's blade, magic=fucked. Also I'd imagine Flash was in shock, but part of Darkseid's Omega Beam is it doesn't miss.

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>>547931026
No, but I like drawing feet. But I get where you're coming from.

>>547921514

As has had been said, OP, the anatomy could use some work. A few poses just look... off, but this is definitely one of the best erotic super-heroine comics I've seen.

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>>547931069

>>547931212
But the flash can outrun death. Since he is at his core imbued with the speed force, he's pretty goddamn invincible.

>>547931339

Also, any chance of a mega.com zip of it?

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>>547931339
Thanks much. Appreciate the honesty

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>>547931523
Nah your best bet is benchleyfan01.imgur.com

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The dude just traces other Hentai and comics, that's why anatomy feels so iffy

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This is easily the best thing I've seen on /b/ this year. Well fucking done, OP.

>>547931924
It's still pretty fucking good.
Also, where's doomsday?

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>>547931517
Yes, but Darkseid has extra special super powers on his side this time around

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>>547931924
Nothing is traced, sorry pal

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>>547932206
OK, moving to another universe. Now, in Marvel: Psylocke

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>>547932115
That's true I guess.
The anti-life equation was always poorly explained.
Like the kingdom hearts storyline.

There are so many problems here. The art, the story, the awful dialogue, and dear god what kinds of problems with women do you have OP. But I do have a question. Who circumcised Darkseid?

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>>547932420

I like your art style! Very good comic. Can you do color maybe?

>>547932428
Obviously darkseid is jewish.

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>>547932698
Who the fuck is the guy?
Or am I missing something obvious?

Speaking of. I'm looking for critique and suggestions as well:

http://www.timedwatcher.blogspot.ca/

http://i.imgur.com/YuL2M7i.png

http://www.sendspace.com/file/75ah5i

http://www.sendspace.com/file/nmphom

It's a CYOA story.

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>>547932564
Some day my friend. Thanks for reading

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>>547932795
He's an original character of my own creation -- a young mutant with sexually-based mutant powers that can make any woman his slave.

>>547932428

That's my real grip with superheroine erotica: it's all about rape and coercion. Still, there aren't a lot of people writing/drawing quality stuff, so have to I put up with it (sh porn fetish).

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>>547933110
Very good then. Carry on.

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>>547933497
Thank you

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>>547932030

Guess you can't expect people only looking for a fap to have standards. My fault.

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>>547934000
who cares, OP's traces are better. nice trips btw

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>>547934501
Moving on to Rogue.

>>547934000
Oh shit, you got trips? I guess OP really does suck.
Sorry OP.

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>>547935890
anyone still reading?

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>>547936063
yeah man

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>>547936147

hire a writer

Keep em cumming :)

This faggot's been spamming his shitty dojin for months, and you retards keep lapping it up.

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>>547936213