So /b, im doing creative writing in uni (with english lit) and this was the start of a much longer piece by a student in my class. Honestly, I haven't a clue where to start with editing - can someone tell me what the fuck it means beyond some desperate attempt at edginess?
cheers my nigs
Denizens defiantly defined as creatures resident to a definite dominion display terrifying dismay at a subject imposing on their land; despite desperate hope from the destroyed world of ancestors long forgotten, residents take residence in the residue of irrelevant civilisations to comprehend why it was burnt to the sand.
Immediate acknowledgment of an ecosystem providing a wholly balanced destruction of the world that surrounds, truly describes the fluent depravation of the plague that deformed a nation.
Definitive discussions displaying the genocide of a countries citizens directly downplays the victims of the newest duchy stationed.
Hieron in the house of deities, defying the natural law disputed by no singular entity due to the nature of his victory expresses this ultimately,
16th century war feats are replicated by those 3 centuries later for the wholesale of millions transported as cattle for less worth and value, unfortunately.
That dude sure loves d's. Seriously tho, reading this makes my brain hurt, how is this uni level writing material
Okay sorry for the samefagging here but I'm just reading this over and over trying to wrap my mind around what the fuck is going through that douchemonkey's head. You seriously have to edit this? You're thoroughly screwed mate
>>723502324
it was meant to be for some poetry thing that i didnt turn up to and we had to edit peoples pieces (workshopping them) and send it back to them; idk what classes as uni level writing material (you should see some of the class' work)
Is this shit true?
>>723500331
sounds too good to be true,i guess google is your friend.but then again who is credible anymore.
>>723500331
Are you fucking retarded? Yes, you are. You didn't even deserve this reply fucking faggot
Economist here. I can confirm that is correct.
Snapchat/Kik Dickpicer Thread
>give me username of a person on snapchat
>I'll send a pic of dick to them
>post response if any
Pic unrelated.
not singles
Kik: Mackaien
rerolling
I supported Trump
But this marijuana crackdown is taking it too far.
What say you /b/?
>>723500588
This also pushed me over. I am no longer on the trump train....I am on the revolution train... fuck the government.
Time for a revolution!
>>723500588
Heard about this
What's going on?
It's always this way with conservatives: if you want to slam the people they don't like anyway, they wave the "State's Rights!" banner. If you want to do something the Nanny State doesn't approve of, then they wave the "Law and Order!" banner.
Hypocrites.
It's too late for me...
Why
>>723501816
Bye Bye Man
La La Land
Don't say it don't spray it
nuffin to do really, show me your penises i guess? i'll give em ratings
>Waits
>>723501938
Tits or gtfo.
You know the rules. Tits or gtfo
Do you want her!?
I shouted "Go Indians!" That made her turn look and smile
So instead of going up to her to talk and invite her back at your place, or a starbucks bathroom, for a good dicking session, you continued to be fucking wierd and take pics from a distance, then post to your frenz on 4chin.....
Thanks for the half a second of amusement, hut you blew it
Moar. Super cute
Like, hey there /b/ I'm going to show you something cool. See, these here are singles.
>>723500326
But there here are super singles. Like, doubles you could say.
>>723500326
Go on. If you do this....
>>723500463
Ohh. Never mind. You fucked up. This is how you do it newfag
Pics you want to spread
>pic very much related
Hey /b/, I have a spare domain I have no use for. Anybody who rolls trips can tell me what they want me to do with it. I'll leave it up for a month. No cp.
>implying you have any skills
>>723501031
>implying you know anything about me
>>723500324
Bumpd
ITT post your favorite murderer
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Join up, faggots
>>723500152
Add bdickons
>>723500152
STOP SPAMMING THIS GARBAGE YOU FUCKING PIECE OF SHIT
>>>/soc/
Add JcoZzee to be the group cum rag. She will take requests for groups
The Tiebreaker
>Ready, set, roll!
Dark green!
>>723501205
C O S B Y
O
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B
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>>723501205
Gold comes back from the dead in the bottom left corner
>tell parents you have a gf
>bring home Anzu
what does your dad say?
Its not happening anytime soon
>>723501930
who is anzu?
>>723502046
it's not who, it's WHAT
Your age:
Number of women you've fucked:
>NO TROLLING EDITION
>>723500009
16
3
Be honest.
>>723500720
Honest as hell man