After you deposited your load in her belly, you decided to examine the mess you created. She understood quickly what you wanted, and spread her legs as wide as possible, leaving you astounded about her flexibility. Her vagina was shining in a cyan-green color, and was quite fleshy and moist inside. The spreading of her lips made a wet squishy sound as the fleshy delicate "membranes" were pulled apart. Excess sperm flowed in thick globs out of her twitching and contracting pussy as you tugged some more.
These were the after effects of her orgasms, you presumed. There was a weird weak bioluminescent glow on her exposed inner flesh, which intensified when you pressed it with your thumb, massaging it slightly. You would have more of these examinations later on, you promised yourself, as you pushed your thumb fullly into her moist hole, provoking a subdued moan from her...
Your Science unit had found this female specimen several weeks ago in the atlantic ocean and kept it in a specialized water tank since then. It was not capable of speech, but had a form of telepathy going on.
Like this you communicated with her for a while and it was agreed to free her after some additional tests and telepathic interviews. She (Her name was unpronouncable) took a special interest in you, a assistant lab technician. The discussions with her went increasingly in an erotic direction, and it turned out that she wished to "mate" with you. One evening, when all other employees and scientists went home, you stayed behind and said something about "additional work" you had to do.
She issued a telepathic signal to you which activated certain neurons in your brain resposible for intense lust. It all went very quickly then. As she came to the edge of the tank, you hoisted her down on the concrete floor and laid her down on her back. She attempted a smile, her pointy predatory teeth showing. When you spread her buttcheeks for better access to her vagina, you could see that her insides were of a greenish-cyan color, ready to receive your swollen dick. She was surprisingly warm inside and penetrating her was easy and fluid. Soon wet slurping noises were heard when you repeatedly plunged your dick into her weirdly colored flesh....You agreed on more "sessions" like these, as it seemed she had experienced something new and exciting. Her telepathic thoughts were full of details like "This immense size"..."I thought it would rip" and "You spent so much sperm. Is this still healthy for you..?"
Ink's tormenting of one doesn't stop at any particular point. You see, its very easy to instill the idea that you are scary in someones head, but she never wants her terror to grow stale.
You're trapped by this horrific creature who you've seen rape people for the shit of it and kill others for the fuck of it. She breaks people and tears their personalities right out of their heads, she tears apart what you once knew and replaces it with her own twisted, dark morals and desires. You've seen her beat, shot and stabbed and still she stands with that menacing grin, unwavering, even through heavy gunfire. The only thing you've ever seen stop her, is her getting what she wants.
The kind of beast that can break a mans spine with the flick of her wrist. Her gnashing teeth can split a rib-cage in half in an instant. Her writhing tentacles can crush your neck and constrict your limbs, leaving you utterly powerless. A living nightmare who stalks you in every thought and moment you have when you're in her mind. When a creature like that has you cornered, what she does next, you have absolutely no control over. The sheer terror that racks your brain as she mulls over what to do is paralyzing. You've tried running, you've tried fighting, you've tried everything in your power just to avoid this bastard, but once again, here you are.
She knows exactly what to do to turn you on, she knows how to make you tense up in pleasure and pain, she knows how to make you tetter on the very edge on climax and hold you there for what seems like an eternity. The constant threat of her keeps your adrenaline surging, at any moment, she could maul you to death, she could crush you, she could break you. Yet all she does, is hold you down... and watch you quiver...
>>476510 Repost because I'm a shameless whore. http://pastebin.com/jKYKb8Qf
>>476760 http://pastebin.com/86i9isrA ^Here's some of a writing exercise I've been doing. Idea was to write a small side-story within a much larger series of events, following some random footsoldier. I've been trying to get at least 500 words down per week, which is why it's broken up into short segments.
>>480331 I read it! It was fantastic and I was hoping something else like it was written. I want qt xenos with gigantic twitching dicks, leaking precum and threatening to burst from only a kiss! Human pussies overflowing with cum! Puazi fetish porn, where a female human dom sits on their face while another pulls orgasm after orgasm out of their poor throbbing dick!
And then a cute twink getting off to it with a human scented fleshlight!
>>476777 Alright, adding more to this. Dumping as I write.
It had been a week since Nate had first woken up on this desert planet, and it had been the best week of his life. Existence was simple here: wake up, wrestle with Ketri, get breakfast, fix trucks or move supply crates until noon, eat lunch and nap until it was cool enough to go outside again, finish the day’s work, eat dinner, then retreat to Ketri’s nest for “dessert”. There was a calming, almost meditative effect to it: you did your work and then you relaxed. There were few rules, and those that did exist made sense, for the most part. The Captain was a fair man, and never chewed out anyone who didn’t deserve it. The Xenos here were, with the exception of Drane, surprisingly friendly and accepting. One thing Nate had learned about the rebels was that the cause mattered more to them than any social divisions; as long as you opposed the Conglomerate, you were in good company. He had even begun to make friends with some of them, not just Ketri.
>>480977 >Whatever they REALLY look like, their psychic fuckery makes them seem similar to the beholder's race for maximum appeal. I hate the elitist sluts as much as the next man, but this is bullshit. It's from one conversation between some drunk guys in a bar, and you see still images of Asari in other places when there are none around, and they still look like that. That would be some pretty incredible mind manipulation to get someone to see a photo differently when lightyears away.
>>480987 The Sha'dee were the friendliest of the bunch, probably because their facial expressions and vocal inflection was similar enough to Humans to be easily understood. They were surprisingly outgoing, compared to his experiences in Conglomerate Space, where Sha'dee were quiet and meek, cowering and walking quickly with their heads down around Humans. Here, where they were free to speak their minds, they astounded him with their intelligence and helpfulness. Nate had never really thought too hard about what the Rebels were fighting for, or how Xenos were treated in his society. The more time he spent here, the more he realized he was growing as a person. Ketri had helped a lot with that. Her awkward, enthusiastic openness was so easy to just roll with. So easy to love. It was infectious. At first it had just been curiosity and physical attraction, but after a week living with her, he was in love in every sense of the word. Just the thought of holding her close was enough to make him smile. And gave him a stiffy.
Thankfully, his job today allowed him to hide the latter eventuality behind boxes of supplies, ammunition and food as he loaded them onto the bed of a truck. All three trucks were being loaded today. It would appear that something big was in the works, as there was more ammunition than usual.
"Naaaaaate..... Naaaaaaaaate...." He heard Ketri's lilting voice in his earpiece.
"What is it, 'Ri?" Nate asked absently, shoving the last box onto her truck and lowering the rear hatch.
"Come over to the Armory. Captain wants to talk to you!" She chirped. Nate straightened up and wiped the dust off his hands.
"On my way" He said, and started making tracks for the armory building.
It was a long, low-set building halfway buried in the sand, and clearly made of ferrocrete, not the adobe material with which the barracks and offices were constructed. Nate climbed down a set of steps and knocked on the door. His phone wasn't authorized to unlock this one.
>>480988 "Hey, it's Nate. I'm here to see the Captain." He said on the local open frequency. A few seconds latter he heard the whirr and clunk of electronic locks disengaging and the door opened, revealing his mate. Ketri gave him a quick hug, and a little nibble on his ear before grabbing his hand and leading him inside as the door locked behind them.
"I'm super excited!" She chirped, squeezing his hand. "The Captain has a surprise for you and it's gonna be kick-ass!"
Nate chuckled and picked up his pace to keep up with her. They made their way down a hallway and through another set of doors into the main cage. He had never been in here before (not for lack of curiosity) and he looked around eagerly, taking it in. Two thirds of the room were caged off, with a desk dividing the caged area from the section they had entered, which was full of cleaning and maintenance equipment. Behind the cage were racks and racks of rifles, launchers, machineguns and stacks of ammunition from smart rounds to solid slugs. It was a motley collection, with no apparent standard. They had guns that were clearly captured from PMCs, mixed with civilian weapons and ancient military guns dredged up from god knew where. There was armor too, though it was all "dumb" armor, with the exception of his own suit. Which was lying on a table in front of the cage along with his rifle and sidearm, with the Captain standing next to it.
"Mr. Beardfurt!" The Captain called, waving them over. "You've been doing very well here. I'm surprised how quickly you've managed to adjust."
"Thank you sir. I've enjoyed it myself."
"I'm glad to hear that. Anyway, you're probably wondering why I brought you here. I've come to a decision; I don't think you're a threat to us. In fact, I think you'd make an excellent asset. I'm prepared to let you have your armor and weapons back, and Ketri here has convinced me to make you her co-driver when she goes on supply runs." The Captain explained, lighting a sajhat cigarillo.
>>480990 Nate turned to Ketri, who was grinning from ear to ear. He couldn't help smiling too, then took the Captain's hand and shook it enthusiastically.
"Thank you SIR! I-i don't know what to say..."
"If you defend her and her cargo as enthusiastically as you fuck her, that's good enough for me." The Captain chirped. Before, someone being this forward would have shocked Nate, but he had learned that this was just the way Sha'dee were. It wasn't just Ketri, her entire species didn't seem to treat sex and intimacy with the same... touchiness that Humans did. According to Ketri, the only reason every Sha'dee on the base didn't sleep in the same nest was because of differences in rank.
"You can count on that from me, Sir." Nate said, saluting. The Captain chittered, then turned to Ketri.
"Alright, little one, you got what you want, now don't let us down. I'm sending all six crews from both hangers out to resupply one of our forward operating bases. Co-ordinates should be in your system already. It's a bit of a trek, should be about two days if the sandstorms don't get too bad. Keep to the canyons once you get closer to the front, I don't want you getting spotted by drones." The older Sha'dee explained the situation. "Mr. Beardfurt, you're going to be her lookout and gunner. Your armor has better optics and data aggregation than any system we have. It's one of the reasons I'm trusting you with this. Now, both of you get moving. I want you suited up, packed up and ready to leave with the others in 3 hours."
Nate and Ketri both saluted, then began loading Nate's armor, weapons and magazines of 8mm railslugs for them into a cart as the Captain turned and left, exiting the room. Trundling the car back to Ketri's quarters, they layed the equipment out on the bed and started to strip down.
>>481004 "Isn't this gonna be great!" Ketri chirped happily, tossing aside her cap and unbuckling her gunbelt. "I'm not going to have to leave you alone in the daytime anymore!"
"Hell yeah!" Nate grinned at her as he pulled off his cap and shirt and started to drop his pants. "How did you convince him to agree to this?"
"It was surprisingly easy, actually!" She chittered, pulling off her shirt. She wasn't wearing a bra today, and her plump, perky tits seemed bigger than usual. "I think he respects you. And he's a male Sha'dee. Protect and defend is his basic mental wiring. He knows you'll be extra protective of me, because you're my mate."
Nate nodded, still unable to take his eyes off her bare chest as he fumbled with his shorts and underwear. He was already hard, and Ketri was well aware of it, licking her lips and quickly divesting herself of her own shorts. She walked over to the dresser on the north side of the room, broad, full hips swaying hypnotically. She was wearing her favorite purple panties today, with the special hole for her tail. Nate swallowed and subconsciously grabbed himself as his Sha'dee bent over and began rooting around in one of the drawers. She was holding her tail high, presenting her rear end towards him in a manner that could not be accidental. He walked closer, drinking her in with his eyes. The perfect curve of her hips, her round, shapely butt with the tail flowing organically from the center of it, and nestled carefully in the gap between her thighs, the perfect, enticing little bulge of her sex. Everything about her pose screamed "mount me", and Nate could hardly resist doing so.
"Nate, honey, could you help me with my panties? I'm trying to find my driving pants." She crooned, wiggling her backside suggestively. He approached, knelt and ran his hands across her hips and butt, finding the sides of her panties and pulling them down. He grasped the base of her tail, and started to thread it out of the garment.
>>481022 Ketri purred as he squeezed and manipulated her tail, getting the entire length extracted before pulling down her panties. She stepped daintily out of them, as Nate went back to fondling and admiring her rear. She was already wet, he noticed as he squeezed her rump, producing a soft whimper. Really wet. Her skin seemed sensitive too, she was even more vocal than usual, purring and releasing little moans with each touch. He started to play with her lines, tickling and rubbing them, causing her to stop digging in the drawer and grab the top of the dresser to keep herself upright.
"You know..." Nate whispered seductively. "We've got a couple hours before muster time..."
"Oh just shut up and mount me!" Ketri interrupted him, lifting her tail even higher and licking her lips. "I don't need convincing!"
"Damn you're eager today!" He laughed, standing up and grasping his member to guide it in.
"Mmmmm-hmmmmmm!" She whimpered, grasping one of her breasts tightly as his tip tickled her opening. "I'm really, really, really horny! I wanna be full of Human right now!"
"I think that can be arranged." Nate joked, grasping her hips firmly and preparing to dive into her well-lubicated hole.
"N-no! Wait!" His lover gasped. "Don't use my h-hips! p-PULL MY TAIL! GRAB IT TIGHTLY AND USE IT TO PULL YOURSELF INTO ME!"
The end of her appendage wrapped tightly around his chest, and she wiggled the bit of it between them insistently.
"Really?" He asked as he turned his left hand and grabbed the root of her tail with his thumb pointing upwards. It was soooo soft and warm. "You want me to pull your tail? Won't that hurt you?"
"A-a little bit! But it feels so good to have someone pulling you onto them by your tail! Especially a big thick Human like you!" Ketri groaned as he tightened his grip. "YES! Just like that!"
Nate wrapped his right hand around her right hip, and slowly started to pull himself into her, his already dripping head straining against her tight lips.
>>481032 Ketri squealed as her walls parted around him. He barely had to pull on her tail, she was eagerly thrusting herself onto him. A brief tension, then suddenly he was deep, deep inside of her. She was hotter inside than he had ever felt, and her tunnel seemed to suck him in, churning and flexing around him. He began to thrust faster, burying himself into her again and again as she moaned with each stroke. Every time he entered her, she clenched hard, then seemed to expel him as she released, driving his pace faster and faster. He leaned farther over her, angling his head into her ridge and reaching around her leg to rub her mound, pushing it against himself through her skin. Ketri's breathing was ragged, her chest heaving against the dresser as she gasped and shrieked.
"MORE! MORE! HARDER! OH YEEEEEESSSSS! MMMMMMMM.... THAT'S IT! THAT'S IT! POUND ME! STIR UP MY INSIDES!" She squealed, clenching her teeth and digging her fingers into the dresser until they turned pale pink. Her tail constricted even tighter around his chest, he could feel her pulse pounding through it. Nate started to gasp and groan as well, feeling the heat boiling between his legs and trying to slow down, but Ketri was having none of it. She pulled him deeper, as her moans became cries, and cries became song. He pushed as far into her hot, squirming tunnel as he could and finally tasted sweet release, emptying himself deep inside her. She clamped down on him like a vise and he felt her juices gush out around his shaft as her song reached its peak and her entire body spasmed, stomach muscles flexing wildly and kneeding his rod.
Ketri slumped against the dresser and let him go. Nate staggered back, feeling the blood rush to his head as he slid out of her. He leaned against the wall to her left and gasped for breath, the waves of his orgasm slowly fading. Beads of sweat ran down his face, but he couldn't be bothered to wipe them away.
>>482373 He pushed himself off the wall, and looked over at Ketri, who had straightened up and was approaching him with her round face flushed and beaming. Before Nate could speak, she pounced on him, tightening her thighs around his waist and pressing her breasts into his chest as she clutched his shoulders in her dainty, four-fingered hands. He could feel her heart fluttering against him as she kissed him voraciously, devouring his face and thrusting her long tongue into every corner of his mouth. He responded in kind, probing the inside of her soft mouth. Their lips parted and she kissed him again and again on his neck and cheeks.
"Damn Ketri..." Nate gasped, wrapping his big mitts around her flanks under her arms and squeezing her lines. "I don't think I've ever seen you this eager before! Even the first time!"
She pouted coyly, and stroked the side of his jaw with one hand.
"Awwwww... I can't help it Natey... I'm in heat." Ketri purred, and nuzzled her face into his shoulder. "It happens for a few days every month. When I'm fertile, my body goes crazy. My skin gets sooooooo sensitive, I get wet at the slightest thought, and I neeeeeeeed to be full of something..."
"You Sha'dee girls just get better and better the more I learn." Nate chuckled, kissing the tip of her delicate ear. "I don't think I can ever go back to Human chicks now, if I could even settle for anyone but you in the first place."
"Awwwwwwwwwwwww..." She crooned. "It turns me on soooo much when you get cute like that!"
She started to slowly rub her mound against his groin, flexing her hips and pressing her hot, sweaty thighs against his sides, purring deeper and harder. Nate groaned, and leaned back against the wall, carrying the wiggling Sha'dee girl with him.
"I want you again!" She chirped. "I neeeeeeeed you to pump my insides full to bursting with more of that hot, thick Human cum..."
>>480323 >>480331 So Puazis are a thing in the alien fucking community? So I guess it'd be absolutely sweet to have a an alien race that's cute and or beautiful and due to hormones and biological shit.
So how it'd be if we ever make contact with such an alien race like the Puazi? Easily and willingly have sex with humans because of bilogical pheremons shit.
>>483035 >>483033 that is if the nids don't eat the entire planet/species first, orks destroy them, chaos consumes them, the tau force them onto their side for the greater good, dark eldar turn the whole species into sex/torture slaves, etc
>>482951 >>483033 >there'll be no use for the Puazi in the Impereium of Man. >implying there wont be any horny deviants in the empire who'd love to fuck skinny goat people >implying said race of goat people who'll be willing be to have kinky sex due to biological crap >implying there wont be any negotiations where imperial citizens get to satisfy the needs and urges of puazi in exchange to loyalty
Imperial Guardsman: "AWWW YEAH! Can't wait to get some goat person action!"
>>483056 Keeping the good men of the Impereium focused and satiated in service to the Emperor. I can think of no better use for a mindless xeno. Could finnagle the books to get them listed as "sub-human" like Ogren and squats... The God-Emperor's work right there.
>>483980 >stop liking what you like and adhere to my standard of this fetish It was pretty generic aside from having brightly colored human sluts. The setting was also boring too. I care more about what can of horror their home planet is like for humans more than anything.
>>484001 >>484003 That's what I just said: It isn't a super fetishistic xeno comic, it's a sofcore one. It's a good place to start if you are curious about xeno porn.
Just like BDSM fags do start by going directly to leather suits and whips, not all xenofags start by fapping to a tyranid or a anatomically correct insectiod.
Altough 003 makes a good point: The Puazi homeworld sounds like a very interesting place for humans.
>All animas want to hump you/be mounted by you >Insects swarm towards you >You have to use heacy duty anti-fungus soap and shampoo because the spores love your sweat >Even plants react, growing bigger and prettier when raised by a human gardner
Maybe we should ask incase to do a few pics with puazi on their homeworld so we can see what it looks like.
Yeah, I have to agree. Not really a turn on. Honestly, that just raises so many red flags that I would legit refuse sex from them outright. Maybe I'm just too much of a romantic. On the other hand, I don't have goddamn space AIDS.
>>484088 >Honestly, that just raises so many red flags that I would legit refuse sex from them outright. >Maybe I'm just too much of a romantic.
You and me both. Like, a girl who's sexually active but in control of herself is hot. A female Kirk, so to speak.That's fucking sexy. But when she's just naturally a massive whore in a way she can't help, it does nothing for me.
See, sexually aggressive sangheili or yautja are a turn-on for that reason. You figure that these are females who know what they want and aren't shy about getting it. Going from coffee to fucking in 20 minutes in that scenario is way more positive than "Oops I bumped into you on the subway better suck your dick before I go crazy."
>>484124 Exactly. Confident and aggressive about what they want (though not to the point of sadism or being a massive bossy cunt) is very attractive. I like it as a character trait too, being straightforward and honest are virtues, as opposed to being manipulative, passive, and playing games.
Plus, when the Ayy discriminates and picks the main character (i.e. your self-insert) that makes it more special. To a Puazi, Humans are interchangeable; who the character is doesn't matter, they're just an object to provide relief, like a bottle of Tylenol. Although I'm sure that turns some people on.
>>484154 Honestly, the part I like most about them (besides them looking hot) is the fact that they're turned on by humans. Not that they can't control themselves, which raises all kinds of issues outside a porn scenario, but the fact that they're the closest thing to an alien race with a huge human fetish. Its 2qt to think about reluctant but consensual xeno smut featuring them, especially when you bring orientation into it. Maybe if the pheromone thing only worked at full strength when they were already about to fuck?
There's a lot of potential for frustration play and orgasm denial, too. I would definitely read about a smart and completely professional puazi who goes on a date with a human, gets invited inside, and the moment things turn sexual he's a twitching horny mess. Or one who orders a bottle of human pheromones, practically coats himself with it because it isn't doing anything, and the moment he goes to jerk off he can barely move from how turned on he is.
>>482433 "Geez Ketri, already?! I... I need a minute before I can get hard again..." Nate's eye widened at the proposal. Ketri scowled playfully at him, then suddenly thrust her head forward and sunk her fangs deep into his neck.
"OW!" Nate gasped, more out of shock than pain. He felt her straining at his neck, her face muscles bulging as she squeezed as much venom from her glands into him as possible. The high was much quicker than before, filling his entire body with heat and soft, buzzing pleasure. He also felt his member start to harden and stand upright again, to his extreme surprise. Ketri withdrew her needles from his neck, and leaned back with a shit-eating grin, staring pointedly down at his now fully erect shaft.
"Sha'dee venom increases blood pressure and flow in large doses." She explained with a sly smirk, lifting herself up and reaching down to grasp his cock and guide him back into her.
"Why didn't you tell me about this before?" Nate grinned, baring his own teeth.
"You would have left me too sore to walk!" Ketri pouted. "But right now I don't care..."
He tightened his grip on her flanks and pulled her down onto him. He slid in much easier this time, eliciting a shriek as she clenched on him. Nate turned around and pressed her against the wall, pinning her and thrusting up inside her with increasing speed and force. He felt her tail lashing between his legs, thumping against the wall in time with their moans and gasps. She wasn't as dexterous this time, but he didn't care, the effects of the venom combined with the sensation of being inside of her had reduced his mind to a fog of desire and pleasure. He needed to be in her, needed to feel her heat and her softness. Ketri started to moan and scream faster, her breasts bouncing and jiggling as he pounded her. He leaned in and started to kiss her, feeling her spasm and shudder in ecstasy with each plunge into her hole.
As a lab assistant you also had to document your work via photographs, and so you made a couple of pics of her in the darkened lab at night. Her body was still wet from the tank she emerged from, making her boobs and body glisten, giving her an almost unreal shiny look. She notices your fascination, and sends more lusty glances and kinky erotic thoughts to you telephathically like: "Do you want to touch me again down there?" She attempted a grin again, but it was more like a predator fixating her prey...
Sex with Quarians is such a hassle as you have to get fucking scanned for diseases, have to buy a crap-ton of antibiotics and medication and that "Quarian Sex Suit" tech has to be expensive as fuck. I'll take my chances with Asari or any other ayy lmaos.
>>485277 >they are literally sick and have alien-space-cancer crap with them, or at the least they have shit-tier bodily immune systems They just have terrible immune systems. The quarians are clean as fuck, so you yourself have nothing to worry about.
When Shepard has sex with Tali, she just takes some immuno-boosters or whatever. That's enough to allow her to fuck his brains out outside her suit without any serious danger.
Sex with the suit on is as safe as it can get. No need for weird preparations, other than an upgrade or two that'll allow her to feel things properly through the suit. >tfw have a suit fetish I'd totally still fuck a quarian.
>>485241 That would depend on at least two things:
Are there a lot of puazi living among humans? And are puazi even compatible with humans?
The latter seems extremely unlikey since they're a different species. And an alien one, no less. But even if they somehow are compatible, the spike wouldn't be so huge if there aren't a lot of puazi around to make those hybrids.
Also, I guess I don't know much about hybrid breeding, but why would the two different pairings make different hybrids? They're both human-puazi halfbreeds.
I'm thinking of writing a story about the toxic ayys from the last thread. And our mc has been edating one for a while now, as they live on a mining facility together. The ayys in question are so naturally poisonous, that they are housed seperately from the humans and can only meet when both wearing containment suits in a sterile vacuum. Our internet lovers want to make it work because they're both khv losers, and their first date is on the surface of the asteroid they're mining, the suits restrict almost all tactile sensation between them and they can only speak over suit-to-suit radio signals.
So essentially I can do whatever I want with it. A first contact thing could be neat. The comic mentions that they're "guests on Earth", and they're working for Humans, which seems to imply that Humanity was the more advanced race.
>>484153 >but before you were a xenophile you were a normie You merely adopted the xeno I was born in it Moulded by it I didn't see a human vagina until I was already a man and by then it was nothing to me but about as attainable as xeno puss so might as well go for what's more hypothetically interesting/likely to kill you while fucking.
>>486322 >>486027 This Not being a normie is what made me a xenophile. I became disenfranchised with human pussy, and repulsed by dick, I turned to xenos. It still fit the female and sentient requirements I had.
Hey, I just want to say thank you for continuing this story, I'm really enjoying it. I especially enjoyed that non smut one you linked in the other thread. I also wanted to say that you've inspired me to do something with that Humaboo idea I had and I'm here to present this thread with the fruits of my few days of labor.
http://pastebin.com/1xnnNcvv (TL:DR if you just want the sex with no context search for Switch 2, fag)
It's a Female Xeno - Male Human story. Mainly vanilla with some partially consensual hand holding. The universe is something that I just made up off the top of my head in the past couple of days so it's not really set in any universe. I kind of took some inspiration from Humanity Fuck Yeah stories but for the most part it's completely self contained.
*Disclaimers* I haven't written anything in a really long time, and it hasn't been edited so expect misspellings, run on sentences, etc. I also have never written smut before, so just be aware. It's also quite long, so if you just want the sex with no context, search for Switch 2 and read from there. Please critique, even if it's only to call me a fag.
>>486448 Thanks. I'll probably be updating that other one's pastebin every thursday since I have to write them anyway for school. It's the same universe, I'm sure you can figure out the equivalent terms. And this is really fucking good brah. Seriously, top-notch job. You should write more, if you continue this I'd read it.
The smut is very well done for a first effort, and I enjoyed the build up a lot as well, the characters have potential. I've always been a fan of the "walking the earth" setup for a character, and I like the contrast between the naive, semi-NEET Ayy and the worldly, experienced Human traveler.
The only problems I see with it are minor syntax, punctuation and grammar issues, and you'll probably catch those in editing.
>>484184 "AHHH! AAAHHHH! YESYESYESYESYESYES!!!! MORE! MORE! FILL ME! FIIIIILLLLL MEEEEEEE!" Ketri cried, pinching her nipples and biting her lip as her big, soft eyes watered. Nate couldn't speak, he was reduced to animalistic grunts between pants as he plumbed her depths, feeling each clench, spasm and tremor as she caressed him inside. He knew he was tired on some level, but his body didn't care, he was addicted to her insides, addicted to the feeling of tightness, of warmth, of... life. He could feel her blood pumping through her, her stomach churning, her muscles tensing and relaxing.
"I'M COMING! I'M COMING AGAIN! KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!" Ketri screamed like a wild beast and then began to sing as she clenched on him. He couldn't stop, he had to keep pounding, keep thrusting as she came, squirting hot lubricant all over his stomach and thighs.
"K-KEEP GOING! I CAN COME AGAIN! I'M GONNA COME AGAIN!" She whimpered, tongue hanging completely out of her mouth, eyes rolled up into the back of her skull. "I NEED YOU TO COME INSIDE!"
Nate planted his hands on her shoulders and pushing her harder into the wall, muffling her sounds with his lips as he sucked her tongue into his mouth and shoved his between her lips. She suckled hard on his tongue, wrapping her own around it to squeeze and tug. Saliva ran sloppily down their chins as Ketri's internal juices tickled down their legs, mixing with sweat and dripping onto the hard concrete floor. He felt as though there was an active volcano between his legs, heat and pressure surging up with a force beyond his control or comprehension. She was hot too, her pussy felt like a furnace and was still shaking from the last orgasm. He couldn't take it anymore, and broke contact with her mouth to seize her by her flanks and yank her down onto him, ramming as much of his shaft into her as he could possibly fit, then finally released as they came together.
I'm glad you liked it. I wasn't entirely sure if I was going to continue it or not, but since I know at least one person will read it I'll start on a new installment soon. I'm glad you're going to be continuing your stuff as well, I look forward to reading it.
Also, damn, I wish I could drawfag. Maybe I'll give it a shot.
>>486828 I think you could make something really good out of it with a longer run.
Literally the only way to get good at art is to suck at it for years. The more you draw, the better you'll get, I still suck as far as I'm concerned, but I'm improving. If you give me some more description and maybe image references for Tash I might have a go at a sketch.
>>480906 ...shit I'm straight, but damn. There's something really appealing about that story. It's a feeling I haven't felt since I used to read fanfiction in high school. It's a feeling of wanting to live in that world. Also I guess i'm into xenos.
>>485241 >you'd think with them being so rampantly horny with humans, there'd be an alarming rise of human-puazi hybrid kids? They probably aren't cross fertile. In fact didn't the original comic have the MC mention she can't get pregnant from humans?
>>486695 Her song lasted for almost half a minute this time, chest and throat vibrating and shuddering with pleasure as his hot seed filled her to the brim. He lifted her off the wall and carried her limp, sweat-soaked form over to her nest and found a place not covered in equipment to lay her down. He slid slowly out of her, his now-flaccid shaft slick and shinny with her sex fluids, and collapsed next to her. She clenched her puss and rubbed her ever-so-slightly swollen belly with a huge grin as he gathered her up in his arms and cuddled her close, nuzzling his face against hers.
"MMMMMMmmmmmmmmmmmm..." She purred, smacking her lips and coiling her tail around their legs. "You came sooooooo much, baby... Unf, I'm sooooo full... And you made me cum three whole times!"
"Holy shit..." Nate gasped, kissing her forehead and reaching down to fondle one of her breasts. He cupped the soft, fleshy orb, then stopped as he felt something wet on his palm. He lifted the hand away and licked it absently. It was... sweet? Creamy, too. He looked down at his mate's chest, and noticed a trickle of something white running down the breast she had been squeezing earlier. She was watching him with a giant smile, still rubbing her full belly.
"I see you've discovered the... other thing that happens when I'm in heat." She chirped shyly, running the fingers of her free hand through his damp hair as she slid the other lower and began absently stroking her slit. "C-could you help me with something?"
"When I'm in heat, my hormones go nuts." She explained. "And one of the side effects is that my poor tits get all big and swollen with milk. Sha'dee don't really have nuclear families like Humans, we raise our young communally, so it's helpful to have a 3rd of your female population ready to nurse the children at any given time. But out here there's no little ones for me to nurse, so I get all backed up and achy. My titties won't fit in any of my bras, and it hurts to try anyway..."
>>487012 "Awwwwww, you poor thing... You want me to...?" Nate asked tentatively.
"Drink me? I-if you're OK with it. I understand if Humans think it's gross or something, but it would feel reeeaaaaaallly good, and my breasts reeeeeeeaaaaaaalllly hurt, and I know how much you like my big chest..." She trailed off with a questioning smile. Nate grinned, climbed on top of her and pecked her on the nose, then gently kissed his way down her neck and onto her chest. He carefully wrapped his hands around her big, firm mounds and began to slowly massage them. Her little nipples were stiff with anticipation, they and her areola were soft as velvet and the color of red wine against the crimson of her striped breast. He squeezed and teased her nipples gently between thumb and forefinger, causing Ketri to whimper and purr. Running his tongue across her skin, he worked his way up the round slope of her left tit, tracing her stripes with the tip of his tongue until he arrived at the nipple. He tentatively prodded it with his tip, pushing it around and letting it pop back into place before he wrapped his lips around it and began to suckle.
"MMMMmmmmmmmmmm.... Yes! Thank you! That feels sooo nice..." She crooned, cradling his head in her arms and biting her lip as his mouth tugged at her breast. After a few seconds of suckling, he felt her nipple swell and release, filling his mouth with a sudden spurt of warm, sweet, creamy Sha'dee milk.
"Mmmph myou're delicishous..." He mumbled, nipple still in his mouth. She gave that sweet little chittering laugh of hers, and reached down to wipe up a stray drop that had escaped his lips with her index finger. She popped the finger in her mouth and smacked her lips.
"You really like my milk?" Ketri asked as he swallowed a mouthful.
"It's amazing! It's so sweet, it's like honey but creamy!" He chuckled, wiping his mouth and leaning back down for another go.
>>487101 "Awwwwww... I'm glad you like it! It feels realllly good when you suckle tooo... Your lips are so strong, and you're really good with that big wide Human tongue of yours..." She purred. "MMmmmmm... suck harder! Suck my big titties dry! Fill your belly with my hot Sha'dee milk!"
He obliged, suckling harder at her breast and massaging both of them. She arched her back and purred harder. He felt her tail moving under him, squirming between their legs and plunging into Ketri's pussy. She started to moan softly as her tail explored her hole and her mate pushed his face deeper into her plump breast. At first her milk flowed rapidly, almost squirting into his mouth as she puffed up her chest, but after a few minutes of sucking it had slowed to a trickle. Her breast had shrunken back to its normal (although still quite large) size. He squeezed it firmly until the last drop leaked out, then tilted his head and went to work on the other one.
"Mmhmmm... yes... just like that! Mmmmm... Guzzle all that thick, creamy milk you big dirty Human..." Ketri whimpered, burying her tail deeper inside of her and clenching her warm thighs around his waist. In a few minutes, her other breast was empty too, and her tail had her singing again. Her body thrashed and bucked under him, freshly emptied breasts bouncing into his face as she came for the fourth time. He rolled off of her, wiping traces of milk from his mustache and the scraggly beard he had begun growing over the past week.
"Thank you SOOOOOO much!" Ketri said earnestly, rubbing her breasts. "Ahhhhh... They don't ache anymore!"
"Oh, my pleasure Little One." Nate smiled, and tousled her hair before curling up next to her and wrapping her up tight in his arms and legs. They lay like that for almost half an hour, silently, before Nate remembered.
>>487117 I was wondering how much magical realm I could inject here before I cross the line. Apparently lactation is not that line.
>>487140 "HOLY SHIT! We can't just lie here, we gotta get ready!" He smacked himself on the forehead and sat up suddenly. Ketri blinked, then her eyes widened as she caught on.
"OH SHIT!" She gasped, clapping a hand over her mouth. The next few minutes were a frenzied struggle as they got up, showered together and then hurriedly dressed. Nate still remembered how to put on his armor, somehow, and was able to get kitted up with little challenge. Ketri had it easier: she just needed to find her road pants and jacket. Once she was ready, she helped him, snapping on hard-to-reach plates and loading his chest rig with magazines. Nate guided the rifle into the quick release system on the left side of his backpack, pushing it up until it clicked. If he needed it, he could grab its forend with his left hand, thumb the release and have it on his right shoulder and ready to fire in just over a second.
Ketri stuck her pistol into its holster and grabbed a PDW carbine off the rack in her closet. She cracked it open to check the solenoid mechanism, slapped a magazine into it and slung it across her back, clipping a set of kydex pouches with six more mags to her belt and straightening her hat. Nate pulled on his helmet, secured it to his collar and popped the faceplate up. He gave Ketri a kiss, then grabbed her duffle bag and followed her out the door.
They sprinted over to the hanger at a brisk pace, as Nate savored the newfound comfort of his armor's climate control. They arrived just in time, slipping into the hanger and making a beeline for Ketri's truck. Nate tossed her duffle onto the back seat while Ketri hopped into her command chair and hit the button to slide it forward. He got into the passenger seat and copied her, locking the chair into place while Ketri pulled a set of AR goggles out of the dash and strapped them on. Nate didn't need goggles; he had retinal implants that performed the same task, he just needed to sync them with the truck's systems.
>>487191 The massive vehicle hummed to life as Ketri's nimble hands flew across the dash, flicking switches and bringing systems online. The blast shield retracted, and they could see out the windshield as the hanger doors rumbled open and the others rolled out, joining up with the three already waiting outside. Ketri grasped the steering wheel and guided their vehicle out as well. The sun was just past its apex, and would start setting soon. This was a good thing, the rebels preferred to travel at night. An overlay with a topographical map appeared in their vision. It looked like the windshield was holographic, but it was an augmented reality illusion: Ketri's goggles were tracing the image onto her eyes, while Nate's implants fed the data directly to his optic nerve.
Ketri look at him and beamed with excitement. He smiled back, reached across the center console and took her hand. She squeezed it, glanced at the map, then slammed on the accelerator. The truck surged forward, gigantic tires plowing through the sand with ease as they set off in the direction of the setting sun.
-Chap. 3 fin-
Alright, that's it for tonight. More kinky backseat alien sex coming tomorrow.
Suggestions? Criticisms? Should our protagonists remain monogamous, or should I bring someone else to the party? I was thinking maybe an older, taller, sort of MILFy Sha'dee they meet near the Front who thinks they're adorable together and wants to play.
>>487217 I vote for monogamous. Maybe I'm just boring but I feel the relationship becomes less... genuine the more people you add to it.
I've also been working on a better description of the Kai'ani and I would love to take you up on an offer for a sketch. I'll get some more reference materials together. I don't know what the proper term might be, but the inverted knees I was talking about are like what the Draenei or the Sangheilli have. I'll try posting what I got some time tomorrow. Thanks again, bro.
>>487232 >Maybe I'm just boring but I feel the relationship becomes less... genuine the more people you add to it. That's why I'm on the fence about it. Canonically the race that I'm calling Sha'dee for this fic aren't all that monogamous, since they're natural communists who share pretty much everything with their family/friend unit. But a lot of Human culture has rubbed off on them, and I'm not sure if I want to make this fic more cute, or more sexy.
>I've also been working on a better description of the Kai'ani and I would love to take you up on an offer for a sketch. I'll probably be able to do that tomorrow. I'm about three shots into a bottle of Jameson right now, so it's not happening tonight :^)
>I'll get some more reference materials together If you can find some images with poses and features you like, that helps. I'm pretty good at taking elements from various images and mashing them together freehand.
>I don't know what the proper term might be, but the inverted knees I was talking about are like what the Draenei or the Sangheilli have If there is a proper term, I don't know it. But I knew what you meant.
>Thanks again, bro. No worries. There's so little good Xeno content out there, it's pretty much my duty to encourage as much of it as I can.
>>487217 I second >>487232. Stay monogamous. I've often thought about 'if a girl ACTUALLY wanted to share me with other girls, would I be honestly okay with it?'
And surprisingly, the answer is...probably not. I'd feel uncomfortable at the least, guilty at the worst. Like, I'd be down for a no-strings attached threeway, but having multiple girlfriends? Not my bag.
>>487217 The sun had been down for an hour or so, but the trucks plowed on like ships sailing through the ocean of sand. They had split into groups of three, two gun-armed trucks escorting each comns truck. Nate was seated in the turret of Ketri's vehicle, his helmet's optics scanning the horizon. The trip had been uneventful so far, they had had a bit of a scare when their comns truck detected a drone, but they had ducked into a canyon and powered up their active camouflage until it left. Ketri was in high spirits, even more so once night had fallen and her nocturnal intincts had come alive. They had been listening to music to pass the time, with Ketri singing along. Her ability to mimic was uncanny, her powerful voicebox could produce almost any sound. This was why nobody used voiceprint locks anymore: a Sha'dee could ape almost any voice with enough accuracy to fool one.
Her music taste was interesting to say the least. Most songs these days were electronic, a genre that had been called EDM centuries ago, but now was just "music". Ketri didn't like it at all; she said it was too clean, too perfect. She preferred ancient Human music from before the rise of the Conglomerate, back when people still used physical instruments and unaltered voices. Particularly, the instrument she called a "guitar", and a genre known as "rock". It was a bizarre name for music, Nate thought, but he found he liked it. There was something about the aggressive, fast-paced sound and the fact that it was made by real Human hands on a real instrument that was fascinating. He could feel the emotion and passion in the notes as they coursed through his chest. The English the singers spoke was archaic and peppered with slang centuries out of date, but you didn't really need to understand it to get the message of the song.
>>487777 "Carry on my wayward sooooooon, there'll be peace when you are doooooooone! Lay your weary head to reeeeeest, don't you cry no more!" The little alien belted, aping the singer's tones perfectly, but in her own inflection. The instruments rose as the voice dropped off, and the guitar took over. Ketri had shown him a video of one, and the knowledge of how much skill it required to play added something to the music, made it more impressive and beautiful. Nate looked down between his legs into the cockpit, and chuckled quietly to himself at the sight. Ketri was bobbing her head back and forth, holding the steering wheel on course with her tail and making rapid, frantic hand motions as though playing an invisible guitar. Her foot thumped against the floor in time with the beat. It was ridiculous, but adorable.
Her performance was interrupted by an insistent beeping and a flashing icon in their AR vision.
"Sandstorm approaching." Ketri commented, muting the music and putting her hands back on the wheel. She tapped her headset and spoke across the net to the other trucks. "Hey guys, this is Red Rover 3. I'm reading sandstorm, copy? Over."
"Red Rover 1 here, we're getting it too, over."
"Red Rover 2, affirmative, over."
"Alright, this is Red Rover 3, I say we pull over and dig in for the night. We're almost due for a satellite pass as well. Over." Ketri suggested, glancing at the timer that indicated the next time a Conglomerate satellite would be in position to detect them.
"Red Rover 2, roger that. Over."
"Red Rover 1, ditto, over."
"Alright boys, heading for those dunes at 18 degrees North. Over and out." Ketri hauled on the steering wheel, pulling the truck onto a new course as Nate clambered out of the turret and down into the cab, slamming the hatch behind him.
Okay, so I had this idea for a slow-burning xenofic earlier and I could use some help developing it.
So far all I've got is that the majority of the cast are xenos, wishing to start on some sort of adventure. As they're recruiting people, they end up catching the attention of a human. This guy is a considerable rarity where they are, imagine finding a samurai in Republic Rome, and you've got a pretty good idea of what it's like.
This guy is quiet, brusque, and a very long way from home. He decides to come with them.
Something I wanted to focus on is the whole "Human through alien eyes" trope, so we can see this guy from the other side of the mirror, as it were. Presumably there could be opportunities for smut, stress relief and all that, but I would like to make him seem pretty weird from their point of view.
>>488341 Well, this guy has to be something special in order to get so very far away from home without dying. That's going to be a big question in the minds of everyone talking with him, how did this guy get here in the first place.
So, tenacious, creative, adapable; are certainties. He's bound to have picked up a lot of useful skills as well.
I suppose in order to get a good contrast going we'll have to figure out what the "aliens" (considering that he's the foreign one) are like as well. I'm pretty sure that I want to keep as far away from the rubber-forehead alien trope as possible, so let's start with that.
The only idea I've got at the moment is for an aquatic alien who has to use a robot exoskeleton to get around in areas where there's gravity/no water. One of the Ceph from crysis, basically.
>>488389 Basically make him a tough, tenacious, adaptable sonofabitch? Solid, solid. Personally I like the concept of aliens being surprised (and a little scared) by just how much punishment a Human can take and keep moving, much like how animals on Earth will die of shock from wounds a Human would be able to fight through. Ties in with our evolution as pursuit predators; we're basically the Termintors of prehistory.
You can have humaniods without going full Star Trek-tier rubber forehead. The principle of convergent evolution would suggest that the bipedal form wouldn't be uncommon; we evolved it for a reason, so it's not unreasonable to expect a large number of intelligent, technology-using Ayys to fit this basic form. It's also useful in a narrative context.
How hard do you want to go with this? i.e. how realistic do you want to go with biology?
>>487241 Here is what I was able to scrape together for a sketch of Tash. I tried drawing more than just legs and hands, but it was so bad that I had to stop. Almost makes me wish I hadn't dropped those art classes in school for mechanical engineering. Just because you can draft, does not mean you can draw.
I've got ideas bouncing around for the next part of the Tash/John story, still need a name for that as well. Anyways, expect to read about the quirks of interspecies relationships, xenophobia, more consensual hand holding and adventure. I got a light work schedule this week, so I should be able to get some good progress on it. Would you guys prefer periodic small update posts or just a big one at the end?
>>488858 Huh, nothing I didn't already know, I suppose, but thanks for putting it together for me.
I'm trying to draw on the scattered knowledge of biology I've gathered over the years (few that they are) and work out how I could scale them up into forms that would allow development of human-like intelligence. It's maddening, and this pain in my legs isn't helping either.
>>488784 Alright, I'll have a go at this. Lewds or no?
>Would you guys prefer periodic small update posts or just a big one at the end?
Personally I'm a fan of the post every 2000 characters method. It keeps the thread alive without being a pointless bump, and allows people to catch things that need critiquing before you've gotten too far ahead.
>>488928 >That's a bit less likely. I do it in my work because I'm a vanillafag, but if you want as hard of sci-fi as possible, it's unlikely. That's what I'm afraid of. Trying to make something out of that is going require imagination, something that I struggle with at the very best of times.
>>488940 Well, you can make some general assumptions based on Terran animals.
If the species bears live young, the female is generally going to be smaller and weaker, while males will be bigger, stronger and more combat oriented. That's because evolutionary females are far more valuable, since one female can only be pregnant with a limited number of young at a time, while a male can impregnate a near unlimited number of females. You'll see similar themes in culture and behavior as well. The biggest problem with social sciences is they assume social constructs and culture are independent of biology, which isn't the case: culture and social constructs are evolved, they exist because they usually confer some survival advantage to the culture using them. You can develop a lot of the culture by extrapolating from biology. Define the species' homeworld and biology, then develop their culture from there.
For egg-laying species, the female might be larger as is the case with some birds.
>>488960 >Well, you can make some general assumptions based on Terran animals. >If the species bears live young, the female is generally going to be smaller and weaker, while males will be bigger, stronger and more combat oriented. That's because evolutionary females are far more valuable, since one female can only be pregnant with a limited number of young at a time, while a male can impregnate a near unlimited number of females. You'll see similar themes in culture and behavior as well. The biggest problem with social sciences is they assume social constructs and culture are independent of biology, which isn't the case: culture and social constructs are evolved, they exist because they usually confer some survival advantage to the culture using them. You can develop a lot of the culture by extrapolating from biology. Define the species' homeworld and biology, then develop their culture from there. >For egg-laying species, the female might be larger as is the case with some birds. Okay, that aught to help. Only problem I see with going at it from that angle is that I might end up with the aliens all being pretty similar, with a few minor differences. Something that I want to avoid, you dig?
Are there any (not sure what the right word is) styles of higher organism (mammal, reptile, bird, Cephalopoda, etc) that do not possess the characteristics that would allow them to reach human-level intelligence?
>>488966 That's why I said "generally". Hyenas come to mind, but they're just fucking weird in general.
>>488972 >Only problem I see with going at it from that angle is that I might end up with the aliens all being pretty similar, with a few minor differences. Something that I want to avoid, you dig?
That's convergent evolution for ya. And also why designing the homeworld is so important, it allows you to set up conditions which make diverging trait advantageous within that context.
>Are there any (not sure what the right word is) styles of higher organism (mammal, reptile, bird, Cephalopoda, etc) that do not possess the characteristics that would allow them to reach human-level intelligence?
Well, a purely aquatic creature probably won't, just because the environment is too constricting. Dolphins are about the upper limit.
Basically, it needs to be able to use tools and have the vocalization capability to develop advanced language. Telepathy is... scientifically sketchy to say the least, but it would theoretically allow for the same thing. Sapience isn't an evolutionary advantage that would be preserved if the species can't take advantage of it.
And of course, there's genetic engineering and uplift by more advanced spacefaring species.
>>489035 I don't think tool use is the best yard stick for intelligence considering dolphins aren't even physiologically capable of tool use. Heres a better one. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Encephalization_quotient
>>489181 Shit man, I love it. Thank you so much. Only thing that I'm curious about would be what she would look like with a slightly smaller chest size and maybe her head just a little taller so her facial features were a little more spread, but not much. It's fucking fantastic though. Especially the legs.
I'll definitely try that post an update every 2000 words thing, I'm just worries about spamming the thread. And I'll throw my stuff on the titan pad when I get a chance. Thanks again man.
>>489268 No worries. It forced me to figure out how to draw digitigrade legs, which will be useful in the future.
>what she would look like with a slightly smaller chest size Upper torso overall, or just the tiddies?
>maybe her head just a little taller so her facial features were a little more spread, but not much Yeah, I would, but I'm worried I'll fuck it up beyond repair. Took me plenty of careful erasing to get the head where it is now.
>It's fucking fantastic though. Especially the legs. Thanks brah. tbqh that was the bit I was least satisfied with, so I'm glad that's just the Dunning-Krueger effect acting up.
>I'm just worries about spamming the thread It's not spam if it's on topic :^)
>>489044 Hey anon I'm tend to be a bit of a savant when it comes to world building and creature design (but virtually retarded when it comes to actual stories which is why i don't writefag). If you find you're having trouble coming up with xenos and just want some to populate the world or something I'd be more than happy to lend a hand.
>>489282 I was originally thinking chest size overall, but maybe just slightly smaller breasts would do it. With the head I can understand being reluctant about it, so don't worry. I'm really just happy I have a picture now. The legs really are perfect. Exactly how I imagined they would look. I guess I never really thought about it before but maybe I'm a leg man, but only for digitigrade legs.
>>489331 Narrowing the shoulders might help as well. I gleaned from the text that they have less muscle mass than humans, so I could try to go for a more willowy look overall.
I'll update it tomorrow, I want to crank out some more of this chapter tonight, and maybe refine Ketri's design a bit. She looks like all the other striped Sha'dee I've drawn at the moment, and I want her to be more distinct.
Since you like the robosuit cephalopod idea I'll use that as a base to give you an idea of how my autist mind works.
Homeworld 80% water land masses centered in the tropics with very little surface area. Evolved from something similar to a cross from an octopus and cuttlefish but main body is either boney or cartilagenis (think shark). They'd be amphibious to an extent having evolved in the more furtile shallows of their homeworld and have rougher and thicker skin than you would see on real world cephalopods. They'd either have and air bladder similar to lung fish or have a lung gill hybrid system that would allow them to breath air (I'm going to assume their world has a similar atmosphere to ours but has a lot more suffused h2o in it). The robo-cephs are fairly huge compared to our cephs weighing anywhere from 200-300 lbs. (91-136 kilos for the rest of the world) at earth norm gravity. Other domensions such as length, height, and what not can vary and isn't as important. They possess four stiffened "walking" limbs that they use for terrestrial movement and six octopus like arms they use for manipulation. the four stiff arms protrude from the the sides of the main body while the other six are positioned at the front near the mouth. Their eyes are positioned at the top of the main body off to the sides and more forward than center. Their at the end of short stalks and are fixed in place, to change focus the stalks themselves move and can move independantly of each other. They have higher sensitivity to the lower band wavelengths and can see into the infrared but struggle with high band EM wavelengths. Basically they see more shades of red than we do but struggle the closer to purple you get. The also have excelent night vision and tend to be nocturnal. Robo-cephs are cold blooded but tend to have a high temp when compared to other cold blood creatures due to their size and they tend to over heat easily.
The suits are not necessarily there to help them breath (though being out of wather for too long would be like one of us being on a mountain peak for too long) the suits are there to help keep them moist and cool. Most other climates are too warm and dry for them that includes Earth. The suits Have four mechanical legs positioned at the bottom. They fit rather snuggly to the body and have just a few milimeters worth of water between the occupant and the suits inner surface circulating through a filtration and cooling system. The occupant is positioned in the suit with their legs folded in the relaxed possition under the body and four of the manipulator arms jutting out from the front incased in a flexible insulating material. the other two arms are used to work the mechanical legs on the suit and the eyes are in a domed section where they can freely rotate to observe the world.
Alright that was just a stream of consciousness so if there is anything that doesn't make sense please let me know. I can either flesh this out more or make another one in the morning. Your call.
>>489458 >>489454 That's awesome, a great start. Your spelling's a bit dodgy, but that's an easy fix. Everything else is brilliant, just what I was looking for. Don't think it needs anymore fleshing out.
>>489463 Yeah I ain't no writefag so I apologize for the grammar and spelling, like I said it was a stream of consciousness thing. Is there anything aspect you want to see in the next one? I work well when I have a general theme.
>>489883 >>489474 Well I was gonna wait for a new thread but I'll go ahead and post this here. If you miss it anon I'll repost in the next one.
Kangaroo-cheetah-lizard-bird thing (be forewarned I'm terrible with names)
Homeworld is slightly larger than Earth with much less water and larger land masses. This race devloped in the wide plains of the largest continent and developed speed and intelligence as their mainstay for survival. They switch from being bipedal to quadrupedal depending on situation, Bipedal for walking and manipulation and quadrupedal for sprinting andlong distance running. Instead of having digitigrade feet their knees actually hinge reversed (think like a grasshoppers hind legs) with forward facing feet in a plantigrade position. the legs themselves act like springs and are very powerful (a donkey kick from even a small one is capable of completely collapsing a grown man's chest). To sprint they enter a quarduped position and run much like a cat would with the arms hitting first and swinging their legs around to make contact and push off. long distance running is done similarly to that of kangaroos but with more involvement of the arms. They have a long tail strong tail that can switch from a whip like flexibility to a ridgid stance that they use while moving for balance. walking for them looks like someone walking on those spring stilts as they have a bounce to their stepadn have excellent balance while moving but when standing still need to plant their tails to the ground in a tripod configuration to keep themselves still. Arms are much like humans maybe a bit longer propotionally aswell as the rest of the common biped appearance with their heads at the top of their shoulders and what not.
These things are semicold blooded being able to generate their own heat but being poor at retaining it due to a lack of substantial fat deposits and ar fairly light by human standards. Females stand anywhere from 4'9" (1.45m) to 5'10" (1.78m) but only weigh in the range of 90lbs to 140lbs (40.8kg-63.5kg). Males tend to be much bigger heavier and slower than females standing from five and a half feet to well over seven feet tall and on average weigh over 170 to 250 pounds. While the males are larger and on average stronger than females they are also much more docile due to the females being predominately the hunters while male were the gatherers and nest watchers while evovling but more on society later. Both sexes have rough leathery skin that is fairly tight to the body with chitinous or keritinous plates over the bony protrusions of the body such as the elbows and knees. The lack hair but have patches of silky feather like things taking the place of hair. I was picturing it topping their heads and running down the back of their necks to the upper midback. they have fairly flat faces with no nose possessing nostrils in what we would consider their cheeks and a mix of sharp cutting teeth and flat grinding teeth due to being omnivorous and have larger foward facing eyes that have a semi clear protective lense that comes over when they run as well as traditional eyelds. Their ears are long (pointed or rounded doesn't really matter to me) but are rigdedly fit in place in a swept back position and aren't used for expression.
Back to their social behaviors (all this stuff is just off of my head and your welcome to change any of it if you'd like). Like I said the females are were the hunters so they tend to be the ones with the spatial skills and quick analytical skills while the males have higher multitasking ability and are the more nurturing of the two. Though the females are smaller they are faster and on their world speed is king so they developed into the hurter instead. Young are born in double fist sized eggs two eggs to a clutch and are born "premature" still requiring sustance from adults and take years to become sexualy viable and fully mature. as newly hatched infants the get sustance from both parents (though more often than not the father) through a milk like substance secreted from glands in the back of mouth (think kiss feeding). Both sexes possess these glands and are capable of nuturing but the duty often falles to the males who tend to have larger glands which take the appearance of a dewlap. They tend to be polygamist with a female to male ratio of around three or four to one and several females will have one "husband" to watch over the home and children while they work together to bring down prey/work. (I had a few ideas about intelligence, again if you don't like it feel free to cut it out/change what ever you want anon) While they are deffinately intelligent and sapient they tend to be on the dimmer side of things and are a bit slower to learn, however they have keen memories and very clear recall. I was going with the idea that they were uplifted by another xeno race before their brains had gotten quite to point where ours are but they were maybe a couple thousnd years of evolution away from that.
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