Submission Agenda

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>>220948

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>>220948
Hey, it's Self Insert Mind Control Rape Guy again! How ya doin', Self Insert Mind Control Rape Guy?

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>>220961

when's the next darkseid part and who will it be

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>>220963
great, how are you?

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>>220970

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>>220968
working on it now. it'll feature Zatanna and Black Canary

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>>220979
Nice
Would love to see Stargirl and Mera

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>>220984
Mera is a great suggestion I'll try to get her in

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>>220990

Any plans for more submission agenda
Maybe with the new ms marvel

>>220997
I need to finish the Jean Grey chapter, and then make a final chapter finishing the whole story off. The Ms Marvel chapter will stay as is, most likely.

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>>221000
After that will darkseid become you main project or will you do something new

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>>221010
well yeah i have to finish the darkseid story there are probably 2-3 more chapters there

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>>221010
sounds like you're pretty familiar with my work. any favorite chapters? pages? moments?

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>>221019

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>>221019
Been a big fan since i first saw, i love anytime the women are dragged down like the whores they are

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>>221030

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>>221032
what was the first you saw? do you remember? that pretty much describes all my work lol

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>>221039
Emma
Get a little more violent, i like seeing superhero women hurt

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>>221046
ah well Emma's the best place to start, obviously. if i remember correctly he slaps her around a little bit to show her her place.

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>>221051
next up: the scarlet witch

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>>221059

AWESOME
it's obvious the main character is you...but AWESOME

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>>221084
i like to think the main character is whoever's reading it

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>>221084
any particular likes or dislikes?

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>>221150
Thank you.

>>220948
You're going to love that new Jessica Jones show, huh?

>>220948
when you gonna do Kristen Ritter lookin Jessica Jones m8?

>>220948
Make more bimbofication art please

>>220948
how much harder would it be to have the pages colored? It's really hard for me to get into black and white porn for some reason.

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>>221325
It's a huge time commitment, which is why I usually only color my covers.

Moving on with Miss Mary Jane Watson

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>>221250
>250▶
It's actually a really really good show

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>>221263
don't hold your breath. though she is lovely

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>>221391

Read these a while ago, cool to see you're still making more.

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>>221393
And now, Felicia Hardy, the Black Cat.

Keep those comments comin!

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>>221395
thanks, any particular likes or dislikes?

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>>221403
It appeals to my fetishes and it's got characters I fap to so no complaints.
Last one I remember was the Mockingbird one, you finish any other ones since then?

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>>221411
no finished chapters, no. currently plotting out the next chapter, which will be the last in the series

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>>221416
Alright. Keep up the good work, man.
That Enchantress one was some good shit.

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>>221421
thanks. any favorite panels or pages?

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>>221424
Probably these.
>>220990
>>220996
The Rogue one's also up there for me.

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>>221440
nice, thanks

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>>221457

Nigga, didn't you learn yo lesson the last time you dragged yo raggedy ass shit comic in here?

You ain't here for no actual criticism, don't bullshit us boy.

The drawing's pretty good, if a bit sketchy.
The words however, should be a bit better lined up and spaced.

Haven't started reading the story yet, will toss in on that once I have

>>221625
Thanks, let me know! Will post more when I have time.

http://benchleyfan01.imgur.com

http://mcstories.com/Authors/Pegasus.html

http://writer-pegasus.livejournal.com/

http://pegasus.wwoec.com/

[email protected]

draw your self insert getting pegged and dominated by Wonder Woman pls and thanks

You willingly avoided checking yourself.

Now you're getting a shreking.

Congrats buddy, you're a rockstar.

I've read some of your stuff before and I was thinking about it throughout the Jessica Jones netflix show whenever Kilgrave used his powers on women lel

>>221625
>The drawing's pretty good, if a bit sketchy.
Because it's fucking traced from hentai. How new is everyone in this thread? This faggot is infamous for swiping shit.

Damn nice. Hot stuff OP love that Blck Cat cover image

>>220948
nice work
is there also a thread with your previous comics?

>>220948
I like when the protagonist grabs the women's hair. I like this particular series because I prefer "fucked into submission" scenarii to more violent ones.

Your comics are awesome. Thanks for putting in so much work.
You've asked for comments in the thread so I'll give you my humble opinion on things that stood out for me.

>>221148
My favorite part is the hairpulling and having them swallowing enormous amounts of cum.

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>>221045
The way he is playing with tits also gets of off hard.

>>220980
She is probably the most delicious woman you have drawn for my taste. She has also an especially great facial expression in the topmost panel.

>>221125
My favorite facial expression in your comics is in this image. In the panel where she cries out "IUUUUUU".

Please keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to having many more great faps.

>>222713
This, but have him wear a dress as well.

>>223305
well, new enough to only ever hear you asshats whinging about his dastardly ways. Proof or fuck off.

>>223890
actually... you know what. I don't care. Even if he did 'steal art' he added something to it that made it even better so I don't mind if he traced or whatever it is you people are accusing him of.

>>223776
Wow. These are great, specific comments. More like this please

>>220948
What I think? Your drawings are bullshit

Real inspired stuff though is here:
>>223691

Real nice art Op, your anatomy is pretty sound an you've exaggerated features nicely without them looking gross
Pursuing art really ruined my ability to fap to drawings but I can really get behind this. Would love to see more position variation
Maybe some of the girls on top?

>all this boo hoo I can't do art so I'll get mad at people who can
Post some fucking proof of tracing or fuck off

>>223894
Nice samefag OP

Is this him posting though? It could be, but the Scarlet Witch and Black Cat files have Imgur filenames, so anyone could have posted them here from Imgur.

This shit is so disgusting.

I remember reading the original on the Grey Archive, back in the day.

Is this the same story, or modified? Have you edited out the incest sub-plot? Will the running theme with Redheads be prevalent?

Tits are too big.

Try drawing them more accurate to their comic proportions

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>>225628
It's a modified version of the original story. I've edited out the incest subplot, yes. And since I haven't yet drawn the Jean Grey chapter, the running redhead theme is somewhat lacking right now too.

Next chapter: Black Widow & She-Hulk

>>221459
Femanon here. I came so hard to these. Mmm thanks

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>>225848
>>225851

Really? which pages/panels did it for you?

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>>225885

>>221400
>no cat themes
>didn't even keep the domino mask on
>looks like generic girl #382165
You fucked up sandpie

>>225848
> edited out the incest subplot
and again

If you ever do Tigra, I vote for making her a cum crazed public use kitty let loose on the streets.

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>>225906
>didn't even keep the domino mask on

Clearly you missed the greater theme of her being publicly unmasked and her identity destroyed and crushed.

>>225939
and that's great and all, but you still failed to make her recognizable among any of the other characters you've done visually

like I said you didn't even play on the cat theme which would have been pretty simple to do with even an ear band or buttplug. Hell, even pawprint pasties.

In your OP you wanted to know what we thought, and I'm just saying that one had a few missed opportunities.

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>>225950
Fair enough. You could be right. Perhaps when I ink it I'll add her eyemask.

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>>225906
>Tigra
I want it so damn bad; she already has a sexdrive on par with She-Hulk plus some.

>>221434
Good page

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>>226014
What about that page in particular appeals to you?

your she-hulk doesn't even look close to she-hulk mate
rest of the stuff is ok though and your writing has improved a bit

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In what way has my writing improved, would you say?

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>>226072
And that's the end of that chapter, as Black Widow surrenders her free will and accepts her new life as a fuckslave for her young Master, and She-Hulk enters a life of depraved abuse as the drug-addled slut of a group of street thugs.

Thoughts?

>>225848

How about Scarlet Witch and the black spider tattoo? Unless it was mentioned in an earlier chapter, that plot seems to have gone, too

Hey what's up dude? I was just thinking about this comic while watching Jessica Jones and wishing there was quality Killgrave mindrape porn. Good stuff, glad to see you're still doing it. Haven't read this in like three years so idk what you've added but only thing I really wish you did was show the Jubilee scene.

>>224099
Can't remember this moonspeak gobbldygook, but I remember the name Senshin being presented last time.

>>220948
Holy shit, man. Are you so starved for attention? You could at least pretend that you are just some random schmuck who just happens to like this garbage. When you are the only one who ever posts this crap then maybe it's just bad, you know?

>>226393
Seconded. Get over yourself OP.

the outstandingly insufferable MC, samebody/face all the "marvel" woman have (making them unidentifiable) and the shotty writing in a story driven narrative really hamper what could otherwise be a pretty enjoyable thing.

>>220948
the guyb with this power is doing right

is there anymore of these comics somewhere?
they are great.

>>227925
ok nvm i checked the links upthere

>>226393
Shit, if I'd done all this, I'd be sharing it and trying to get feedback too. And I don't see why he should have to hide the fact that it's him.

>When you are the only one who ever posts this crap then maybe it's just bad, you know?
I think it's pretty hot. I do feel like it's a bit predictable / repetitive and wish that he'd kill just one of the women to ratchet up the tension (and not some minor character who was obviously just there for that purpose), but then I'm very cognizant of boundaries and things tend to feel hemmed in and contrived to me when I see a niche that something won't go beyond. Still, I can't expect everybody to share my eccentricities, and overall it does hit pretty close to my sweet spot.

>>227959
Only time you ever see this shit it's shilled by the author himself. He did it on /b/, he did it on /co/ and god knows where else. It's just stinks of utter desperation.

I like your stuff. The scenes are believable in a rapey sort of way, so the dialog doesn't detract from the story. I still want to hit the guy over the head with a brick, but hey that's just a testament to the writing.

Keep up the good work.

>>220948

Cool Izayoi Seishin traces, brah. Almost as good at tracing like The Pitt.

>>228691
Pit traces? Where the fuck did he found hentai with so shitty anatomy?

>>228591
Thanks! What makes you dislike the peotagonist?

I've always loved these. Some great fapbait. Enchantress is my favorite one.

Nice to see you're still working on them. Keep up the good work!

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Oh hey it's this guy.

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These are just a coincidence

>>229296
*Shrug* I don't care. The comics are hot regardless of whether they're traced or whatever. You don't need to be Michelangelo to wake something hot.

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Not really traces if you look closely, but still borrowing pretty heavily. This explains why She-hulk looks nothing like She-hulk. He should really develop his own style with Izayoi as a base. And learn how to draw cocks and vaginas.

>>230587
He won't learn shit if he won't stop tracing.

>>230883
who cares? it's not about the art man. so long as it's up to a certain standard, the content is all that matters. Which is why I first found this guy on story sites where there WEREN'T any pics to go with them.

>>230956
The guy who wrote the story and one who draws it are two different people Which is kind of funny given how the main character is quite obviously a self-insert.

>>230959
>The guy who wrote the story and one who draws it are two different people.
Wait, really?

>>230956
>it's not about the art man.
It's a comic. Comics are a visual medium. Therefore, yes, the art actually is pretty important.

>so long as it's up to a certain standard, the content is all that matters.
Too bad the content is kinda shit as well.

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>>220948
Are you 13?

>>230972
Yup. Fact that the guy couldn't came up with this shitty plot himself but needed to base it on some old, bloated fanfic tells you everything you need to know about him.

>>231350
Huh, I always figured it was the same guy, merely now moving from written stories to drawn ones.

>>231350
I was disagreeing with you guys up until the black widow thing. How he detained her just pissed me off.

Art is fappable.
Story and dialogue is shit-tier power fantasy.
Waste of a decent art imo.

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>Everybody in here shitting on this mentally prepubescent page-tracing hack of an OP's awful comic.

Warms my heart.

>>231276
>Not liking rape and humiliation

Reeeeeeeeeeeere

>>231350
So what? What have you done lately, artistically speaking? You don't need to create some literary masterpiece to validate your existence. Most of us do very little in our lives that is really exceptional, but that doesn't make us pathetic. Maybe your standards are too high.

Besides, it's not like we mock movies that are based on books for being unoriginal. And sure, the drawings do seem to be based on the images shown in this thread, which maybe means the guy isn't greatest, most original artist in the world, but the comic is still pretty hot, and he's done a good job of repurposing stuff. Artists often use models to get their proportions right, and if you lack that option, you might have to rely on other art. Also, hip hop blatantly steals portions of other songs and most people don't have a problem with that, so what's the difference here? Your band doesn't have to be as talented as Pink Floyd or as groundbreaking as the Beatles to have merit.

>>231941
Dude. You take this shitty rape comic quite personal.

>>231941
>Your band doesn't have to be as talented as Pink Floyd or as groundbreaking as The Beatles to have merit.

You're right. But now imagine somebody covering Dark Side of the Moon, note for note instrumentally, and then changing all the lyrics to a shitty superheroine rape fantasy. That has little merit.

Art great less sound effect dialogue

>>231965
I'm bothered by a general trend that discounts the artistic contributions of the vast majority of the population because they aren't as good as the best professional-quality stuff. I really don't feel that kind of thinking is good for the human condition. I'd be really fucking pleased with myself if I made this "shitty rape comic" and I suspect that most of the people mocking it have never done anything artistic as ambitious as it is. It takes a lot of effort to do shit.

>>231941
No, I don't suppose people do get mad about those things, because even the ERAGON movie wasn't just made up of scenes blatantly ripped from LoTR, with Eragon himself absent/dead and instead having the story lead by some overpowered literally nobody who spent the runtime being invincible and banging elves or whatever.

Sampling of a song in another son is usually just to accent or compliment the piece. If these fucking things shared particular stylistic choices like the shape of faces or background style, that would be one thing. But this is literally building all of his shit by tracing Iyazoi.

Nigga noooo, don't defend this shit.

>>232014
I haven't seen Eragon, but I'm lead to believe that the book is a mashup of Star Wars and LotR. Regardless, you're comparing a one hundred million dollar movie with thousands of people involved to fap pictures some dude drew.

>>232010
Probably has something to do with the fact that:

-this is self insert self masturbatory bullshit

-it's rape, which is one of two or three fetishes it is objectively awful to have

-this guy lifts frames from established artists who honed their crafts and drew their stuff with a singular vision that often was not rape based, and changes them to rape.

Nobody gets upset at the guy drawing glorified stick figures because he sucks at drawing, because at least that motherfucker is giving it his whole effort.

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To both elaborate and condense, this guy is stealing artists' work, which will never ever go over well, but he probably wouldn't be getting this much flak if it wasn't rape MC shit. But I have a hard time finding sympathy for rape fetishists, so I'll join in the bashing too.

Rape fetish is nice but the art theft ruins it.

>>232005
So its a parody then? Because those are common and I don't see people go 'Oh Rucka you're such a terrible person copying all the music'. He may not be an artist but he does present the content (even if it is repetitive as fuck) in a more visual way, which seeing as most people here can't read books helps them fap to their shitty superhero mind control porn.

>>232807
Perhaps I should say releasing that rape based cover/remake as a completely original release with no credit to the people who wrote the music, even going as far as actively trying to pass it off as your own original content.

I Just realized that this comic makes for some top level bait. I sure as hell got butt bothered by it.

Not that I don't think this current OP is being completely unironic, but for future reference, it bears remembering.

>>223890
It's quite obviously traced. I've seen these styles before in hentai, he uses pencil of all things, and you can't see any faint character frames and shit you would expect of someone drawing the human form from scratch.

>>233494
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>>221095
I personally like my boobs of a more realistic size. The ones you drew aren't bad, but are too big for my taste.

This is odd. I can usually get off to mindcontrol and rape fetish porn, but mixing that with a selfinsert just makes it disgusting to me. And then there's the tracing.

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>>232010
The fuck are you talking about you fucking faggot?
A lot of 4chan knows how to fucking draw AND I MEAN ACTUALLY KNOWS, actually studies and actually practices form, lighting and composition unlike this fucking kek faggot.
Just look at draw threads, even worst contributors there understand form better than that guy.
That being said I am personally offended that you dare to compare this faggot to me and any other fucking artist on this website that actually bothers to put work into his work.

This is a fucking fapfic traced shit, it might be hot, it might not, that is a personal preference, BUT SAYING THAT IT HOLDS ANY ARTISTIC VALUE is fucking bullshit.
Pic related some random unfinished WIP, I am nowhere near to some great guys on here, but at least I am trying unlike this fuck and it takes no artistic "ambition" to do what he did.

>>221050
You left out the best ending shot...pissing on her

>>220955
The way you draw this make her look like a giant. I know she's tall, but still...

>>220948
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>>237029
He is just a manlet for some reason. Why wouldn't he make his self-insert some cool-ass supervillain with epic abs or something?

I fucking love your work, keep it up.

>>238376
Because the artist is a little manlet. Why wouldn't his self insert Mary sue be one too.

>>239949
Because you want your self-insert to be an idealised version of you? He might as well had small dick and acne.

>>228996
You're kidding, right? He's an insufferably smug Marty Stu who has no weakness whatsoever and even somehow gets more powerful with each passing comic. It's ridiculous, there's no risk of him failing. I mean he somehow was able to turn off She-Hulk's powers through Black Widow's mind, never mind how dumb that sounds you basically remove the big draw for Shulkie. She's big, she's tough and she actually is very sexual as is.

>>228710
If he does it's likely just for the comics that John Person's has him do. Can't blame him, I'd go into Lazy Mode for that bullshit too.

>>240098
Dude, it's for fapping, nobody minds if the script is weak. Also, it will probably end with a twist plot where the main character dies, and I hope it's done by the hands of Deadpool, cause why the hell not.
Anyhow, wich I find rightfull to critizice is the lack of style variation. All his models look the same, no mind wich character they're based off. I understand he gets hard by big breast and booty, but not all the heroines are like that.

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OP here. Well this thread has really gone some interesting places that I didn't quite expect. On one hand I am irritated with the constant self-righteous taunts of "tracing durr!", especially when I never trace –– only reference. The pages worth of intellectualizing by a bunch of porn addicts for whom I'm producing FREE CONTENT is especially rich. On the other hand, it has passed into the realm of sheer entertainment at this point, because so many posters here are so butthurt over so small a transgression that I can't do anything but sit back and laugh.

Thanks to anyone who actually offered constructive feedback.

Here's the last chapter I've completed of Submission Agenda (so far). Enjoy. And let me know what you think!

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>>240207
>'m producing FREE CONTENT is especially rich
So? No one is asking you to do so. If you started to throw your feces at me i would ask you to stop even if you did "do it for free".

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>>240267
yes it's certainly more logical to engage in a thread and try to start a flame war than to simply ignore it and find some other weird fetish shit on this thread to jack off to. There's nothing wrong with you at all.

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>>240277
Well, you post your shit and you wait for feedback. If you can't deal with the fact that 4chan out of all places isn't your personal hugbox maybe you should rethink what the fuck are you even doing?

I enjoy this shit, you sick fuck. If you ever switched roles and have a kinky as fuck rapist woman in charge though, my dick would never stop being hard.

>>240207
>only reference
Pretty crazy that you call drawing exactly the same shit from somebody with original content "reference" as if it's respectable.

>which I'm producing FOR FREE
You really don't have to keep doing it.

>>240207

Some referencing of other people's work is perfectly fine, even a bit of phototracing can be justified and produce good results. But straight up lifting composition, poses, anatomy and facial expressions from someone else's artwork without crediting them is just despicable.

Plagiarism is plagiarism, doesn't matter if you do it for money or not. Stop fooling yourself and start drawing your own, original stuff if you don't want to be torn apart every time you post here.

Also, stop being such a whiny cunt.