Posting a comic I wrote and drew in which a teenage mutant with sexually-based powers rapes and enslaves the most beautiful women in the Marvel Universe.
I posted part of this here before but didn't get to finish.
Any and all feedback welcome. Let me know what you think!
Starting with the Asgardian goddess of love and desire... The mighty Enchantress.
working on it now. it'll feature Zatanna and Black Canary
Mera is a great suggestion I'll try to get her in
well yeah i have to finish the darkseid story there are probably 2-3 more chapters there
what was the first you saw? do you remember? that pretty much describes all my work lol
ah well Emma's the best place to start, obviously. if i remember correctly he slaps her around a little bit to show her her place.
i like to think the main character is whoever's reading it
It's a huge time commitment, which is why I usually only color my covers.
Moving on with Miss Mary Jane Watson
And now, Felicia Hardy, the Black Cat.
Keep those comments comin!
thanks, any particular likes or dislikes?
no finished chapters, no. currently plotting out the next chapter, which will be the last in the series
Your comics are awesome. Thanks for putting in so much work.
You've asked for comments in the thread so I'll give you my humble opinion on things that stood out for me.
My favorite part is the hairpulling and having them swallowing enormous amounts of cum.
The way he is playing with tits also gets of off hard.
She is probably the most delicious woman you have drawn for my taste. She has also an especially great facial expression in the topmost panel.
My favorite facial expression in your comics is in this image. In the panel where she cries out "IUUUUUU".
Please keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to having many more great faps.
actually... you know what. I don't care. Even if he did 'steal art' he added something to it that made it even better so I don't mind if he traced or whatever it is you people are accusing him of.
Real nice art Op, your anatomy is pretty sound an you've exaggerated features nicely without them looking gross
Pursuing art really ruined my ability to fap to drawings but I can really get behind this. Would love to see more position variation
Maybe some of the girls on top?
I remember reading the original on the Grey Archive, back in the day.
Is this the same story, or modified? Have you edited out the incest sub-plot? Will the running theme with Redheads be prevalent?
It's a modified version of the original story. I've edited out the incest subplot, yes. And since I haven't yet drawn the Jean Grey chapter, the running redhead theme is somewhat lacking right now too.
Next chapter: Black Widow & She-Hulk
>didn't even keep the domino mask on
Clearly you missed the greater theme of her being publicly unmasked and her identity destroyed and crushed.
and that's great and all, but you still failed to make her recognizable among any of the other characters you've done visually
like I said you didn't even play on the cat theme which would have been pretty simple to do with even an ear band or buttplug. Hell, even pawprint pasties.
In your OP you wanted to know what we thought, and I'm just saying that one had a few missed opportunities.
Fair enough. You could be right. Perhaps when I ink it I'll add her eyemask.
What about that page in particular appeals to you?
And that's the end of that chapter, as Black Widow surrenders her free will and accepts her new life as a fuckslave for her young Master, and She-Hulk enters a life of depraved abuse as the drug-addled slut of a group of street thugs.
Hey what's up dude? I was just thinking about this comic while watching Jessica Jones and wishing there was quality Killgrave mindrape porn. Good stuff, glad to see you're still doing it. Haven't read this in like three years so idk what you've added but only thing I really wish you did was show the Jubilee scene.
Holy shit, man. Are you so starved for attention? You could at least pretend that you are just some random schmuck who just happens to like this garbage. When you are the only one who ever posts this crap then maybe it's just bad, you know?
the outstandingly insufferable MC, samebody/face all the "marvel" woman have (making them unidentifiable) and the shotty writing in a story driven narrative really hamper what could otherwise be a pretty enjoyable thing.
Shit, if I'd done all this, I'd be sharing it and trying to get feedback too. And I don't see why he should have to hide the fact that it's him.
>When you are the only one who ever posts this crap then maybe it's just bad, you know?
I think it's pretty hot. I do feel like it's a bit predictable / repetitive and wish that he'd kill just one of the women to ratchet up the tension (and not some minor character who was obviously just there for that purpose), but then I'm very cognizant of boundaries and things tend to feel hemmed in and contrived to me when I see a niche that something won't go beyond. Still, I can't expect everybody to share my eccentricities, and overall it does hit pretty close to my sweet spot.
I like your stuff. The scenes are believable in a rapey sort of way, so the dialog doesn't detract from the story. I still want to hit the guy over the head with a brick, but hey that's just a testament to the writing.
Keep up the good work.
who cares? it's not about the art man. so long as it's up to a certain standard, the content is all that matters. Which is why I first found this guy on story sites where there WEREN'T any pics to go with them.
>it's not about the art man.
It's a comic. Comics are a visual medium. Therefore, yes, the art actually is pretty important.
>so long as it's up to a certain standard, the content is all that matters.
Too bad the content is kinda shit as well.
>Everybody in here shitting on this mentally prepubescent page-tracing hack of an OP's awful comic.
Warms my heart.
So what? What have you done lately, artistically speaking? You don't need to create some literary masterpiece to validate your existence. Most of us do very little in our lives that is really exceptional, but that doesn't make us pathetic. Maybe your standards are too high.
Besides, it's not like we mock movies that are based on books for being unoriginal. And sure, the drawings do seem to be based on the images shown in this thread, which maybe means the guy isn't greatest, most original artist in the world, but the comic is still pretty hot, and he's done a good job of repurposing stuff. Artists often use models to get their proportions right, and if you lack that option, you might have to rely on other art. Also, hip hop blatantly steals portions of other songs and most people don't have a problem with that, so what's the difference here? Your band doesn't have to be as talented as Pink Floyd or as groundbreaking as the Beatles to have merit.
>Your band doesn't have to be as talented as Pink Floyd or as groundbreaking as The Beatles to have merit.
You're right. But now imagine somebody covering Dark Side of the Moon, note for note instrumentally, and then changing all the lyrics to a shitty superheroine rape fantasy. That has little merit.
I'm bothered by a general trend that discounts the artistic contributions of the vast majority of the population because they aren't as good as the best professional-quality stuff. I really don't feel that kind of thinking is good for the human condition. I'd be really fucking pleased with myself if I made this "shitty rape comic" and I suspect that most of the people mocking it have never done anything artistic as ambitious as it is. It takes a lot of effort to do shit.
No, I don't suppose people do get mad about those things, because even the ERAGON movie wasn't just made up of scenes blatantly ripped from LoTR, with Eragon himself absent/dead and instead having the story lead by some overpowered literally nobody who spent the runtime being invincible and banging elves or whatever.
Sampling of a song in another son is usually just to accent or compliment the piece. If these fucking things shared particular stylistic choices like the shape of faces or background style, that would be one thing. But this is literally building all of his shit by tracing Iyazoi.
Nigga noooo, don't defend this shit.
I haven't seen Eragon, but I'm lead to believe that the book is a mashup of Star Wars and LotR. Regardless, you're comparing a one hundred million dollar movie with thousands of people involved to fap pictures some dude drew.
Probably has something to do with the fact that:
-this is self insert self masturbatory bullshit
-it's rape, which is one of two or three fetishes it is objectively awful to have
-this guy lifts frames from established artists who honed their crafts and drew their stuff with a singular vision that often was not rape based, and changes them to rape.
Nobody gets upset at the guy drawing glorified stick figures because he sucks at drawing, because at least that motherfucker is giving it his whole effort.
So its a parody then? Because those are common and I don't see people go 'Oh Rucka you're such a terrible person copying all the music'. He may not be an artist but he does present the content (even if it is repetitive as fuck) in a more visual way, which seeing as most people here can't read books helps them fap to their shitty superhero mind control porn.
Perhaps I should say releasing that rape based cover/remake as a completely original release with no credit to the people who wrote the music, even going as far as actively trying to pass it off as your own original content.
I Just realized that this comic makes for some top level bait. I sure as hell got butt bothered by it.
Not that I don't think this current OP is being completely unironic, but for future reference, it bears remembering.
It's quite obviously traced. I've seen these styles before in hentai, he uses pencil of all things, and you can't see any faint character frames and shit you would expect of someone drawing the human form from scratch.
The fuck are you talking about you fucking faggot?
A lot of 4chan knows how to fucking draw AND I MEAN ACTUALLY KNOWS, actually studies and actually practices form, lighting and composition unlike this fucking kek faggot.
Just look at draw threads, even worst contributors there understand form better than that guy.
That being said I am personally offended that you dare to compare this faggot to me and any other fucking artist on this website that actually bothers to put work into his work.
This is a fucking fapfic traced shit, it might be hot, it might not, that is a personal preference, BUT SAYING THAT IT HOLDS ANY ARTISTIC VALUE is fucking bullshit.
Pic related some random unfinished WIP, I am nowhere near to some great guys on here, but at least I am trying unlike this fuck and it takes no artistic "ambition" to do what he did.
You're kidding, right? He's an insufferably smug Marty Stu who has no weakness whatsoever and even somehow gets more powerful with each passing comic. It's ridiculous, there's no risk of him failing. I mean he somehow was able to turn off She-Hulk's powers through Black Widow's mind, never mind how dumb that sounds you basically remove the big draw for Shulkie. She's big, she's tough and she actually is very sexual as is.
Dude, it's for fapping, nobody minds if the script is weak. Also, it will probably end with a twist plot where the main character dies, and I hope it's done by the hands of Deadpool, cause why the hell not.
Anyhow, wich I find rightfull to critizice is the lack of style variation. All his models look the same, no mind wich character they're based off. I understand he gets hard by big breast and booty, but not all the heroines are like that.
OP here. Well this thread has really gone some interesting places that I didn't quite expect. On one hand I am irritated with the constant self-righteous taunts of "tracing durr!", especially when I never trace –– only reference. The pages worth of intellectualizing by a bunch of porn addicts for whom I'm producing FREE CONTENT is especially rich. On the other hand, it has passed into the realm of sheer entertainment at this point, because so many posters here are so butthurt over so small a transgression that I can't do anything but sit back and laugh.
Thanks to anyone who actually offered constructive feedback.
Here's the last chapter I've completed of Submission Agenda (so far). Enjoy. And let me know what you think!
yes it's certainly more logical to engage in a thread and try to start a flame war than to simply ignore it and find some other weird fetish shit on this thread to jack off to. There's nothing wrong with you at all.
Well, you post your shit and you wait for feedback. If you can't deal with the fact that 4chan out of all places isn't your personal hugbox maybe you should rethink what the fuck are you even doing?
Pretty crazy that you call drawing exactly the same shit from somebody with original content "reference" as if it's respectable.
>which I'm producing FOR FREE
You really don't have to keep doing it.
Some referencing of other people's work is perfectly fine, even a bit of phototracing can be justified and produce good results. But straight up lifting composition, poses, anatomy and facial expressions from someone else's artwork without crediting them is just despicable.
Plagiarism is plagiarism, doesn't matter if you do it for money or not. Stop fooling yourself and start drawing your own, original stuff if you don't want to be torn apart every time you post here.
Also, stop being such a whiny cunt.
Well, consider this: The guy is not doing a very nice job with the plot, and it's not worth the reading if you're looking for a deep story. It's ok, even though he tries to convince it's not that bad, we can clearly think otherwise. Does this mean people shouldn't valorate the art too? When you criticize a movie, you considere screenplay and plotting, and then come to a shared score. I can give the plot a 3,5, maybe a 4, and the art is like a 7 overall (his colouring is not great, and like I said his characters look all the same). Since just taking it for a quick fap, I don't even read the talk, just go for the pics, and also can pretty much ignore OP. Serves it's purpose.
Now, let's go for a 9/10 overall. Take a look at Incase's Alfie. First time I saw it, I was going for a fap since the art was great, but ended reading it up without finishing cause it was interesting. There you've something worth the reading. Not even close to this one, same as Emanuelle is far beyond most random porn videos on the internet, and you fap to the last ones.
OP, if you're reading this and wanna take what I'm saying with constructive critics for your later jobs, the "Unlimitted Power" plot it's disliked, give the main character some fight before he wins. Also, don't get too much obsesed with that bimbo body style, smaller tits are also beautiful and are related to the original characters.
I tend to agree with most of what's said here. Personally it's mildly annoying when I'm set to fap and an actual story comes along to distract :P but hey, what am I bitching about? It's usually a pretty great story.
The unlimited power thing isn't bad for me. In these kinds of stories I tend to gloss over it cuz that power does some interesting things to the women involved. Now the Submission Agenda plot does have some pretty dark aspects to it, stuff that I don't personally appreciate.
Beating up spiderman and making him watch his wife do porn in front of him kinda straddles that line of 'too much'. (I did read some of the other stuff at some point but that was way long ago and this is fresh) On the one hand, you have the hotness of a committed woman going against that commitment to do something really nasty and sexual which is hot as hell, and on the other you have Spiderman (one of my favorite heroes) getting his heart broken and his face shoved in that fact. Plus the added squick of a truly loving and relationship being broken up by a complete douchebag.
so yeah, that bit is leaning towards too much for me, but that is just one of a few bits in an overall well done mind control storyline.
Now the more recent stuff where he bimboizes and actually physically transforms heroines??? Truly hawt. Want more of that!
Op here. I really appreciate the feedback. I can certainly understand what you mean when you say something like the spider man scene is over the line. For my own part, I would probably not argue that plot is necessarily the strong suit of my work. The readers enjoyment should come from the themes of degradation and submission and perversion that the heroines go through. The entire story is VERY dark and based on the theme of rape and a rapist winning throughout. The stuff these women are put through before submitting is never pleasant. But those who enjoy it I think get a thrill out of that dark material and the subversion of the usual hero wins villain loses formula. What happens to Peter is the ultimate extension of that theme.