>tfw don't even watch the show
>tfw just look at the porn
is it any good?
Never really noticed how often that gets fucked up...
There you go literally everything i have
I want some choice Chantelle's ass.
sorry for taking so long. i whipped this up for you.
I was thinking each touching each other, but this indeed is cute.
Marco and Jackie engaging in sloppy sex like in this Royal Koyanagi page
oh yeah you're completely right. Though I'm not sure any of these are accurate, ya know, cause she doesn't really take big dick in any available hole.
it's porn man, there's some artistic license
I don't know if you do Transformation fetishes or twinning, but could you draw a pic of Marco gradually transforming into a copy of Star while she fucks him due to magic hijinx?
can you help me to find the complete pic?
Found the pic at his Deviant Art. Seems like it's all of it.
Checked his Pixiv. Nothing.
Checked Paheal. Nothing.
And checked his Tumblr. Nothing.
One I found recently
Dumpan all the stuff in my collection which hasn't already been posted.
How do you guys feel about fanfics? I know the weekend Star thread on /co/ usually has a link to a variety of them, erotic and otherwise. I ask because I recently finished the second chapter of a Star piece I'm working on and I didn't really get much of a response on it. It might be people are still recovering from Thanksgiving and weekends with relatives but I'm a little starved for feedback, be it positive or negative.
Here's the link if anyone is interested: http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094848
Beyond that, anyone know or got any good Star fanfics?
Oh, that was your's? Well I for one enjoyed it alot! :D Both chapters especially, though there was something more erotic overall with the first one. Maybe the fact there was more sex?
Part of me almost wished that Janna did fall for Marco's ruse, just to get it to a more typical "Oh no, I invited 3 girls to the same dance! What do!?" but in a way I commend you for going a different direction with it. I have to ask though, since I realized there were quite a few characters with names beginning in J, any chance for Jeremy Birnaum from entering the story? :P Not trying to dictate what you're planning, but I've had this weird hankering for Marco X Jeremy for some reason, so I thought I'd ask.
But I gotta say, you're one of the better erotic fiction writers I've read on AdultFanFiction. I read through your Ben10 ones as well, and they were pretty good too, though I feel this Star story works a bit better in terms of erotica. I might be a bit of a pervert, but I kind of demand some proper sex acts each chapter, in one form or other :P
Any particular schedule for updates, or is it simply "It's done when it's done"?
And for the thread: a Star x Marco commission from Brainsickskull.
Yep, I'm GrayNeko and I appreciate your kind words. When I was working on this chapter I had a couple different ideas for how she'd react but since I also wanted her to blackmail Marco this seemed the best way to go with it. As for Marco X Jeremy, it's not really in my wheelhouse but I might do a nightmare scene for comedic purposes involving those two.
Unfortunately I'm terrible at keeping to any kind of a schedule so yeah it's done when it's done. I'm currently alternating between this Star piece and my Ben 10 piece and if time is kind to me I'll have the latest chapter for that done before the new year.
It's just kind of nice to actually get to communicate with a fanfiction author. I've used AdultFanfiction for years but never made an account so that I could leave reviews and discuss in the forums, so this was neat.
Care to share what those other ideas were, or might it spoil later parts of the story? I'm always curious about the thinking process for these things.
And don't feel obliged about adding any Marco X Jeremy if it's not your cup of tea. I think I just like the idea of Marco maybe getting back at him through some sweet, sweet lovin' :P Just thought I'd ask is all ^^
Speaking of asking: any idea how long this work will be? Your Charmed Life series is currently at a whooping 14 chapters, can we expect a similar length?
And one last question: Is the story 'canon' in the sense that these scenes 'could' be taking place inbetween episodes and the like? Obviously all cartoon characters are chaste :P but sometimes I've seen writers try to add it during the blank spots while still keeping within the show's continuity.
Yeah, I'm trying to keep this more 'canon' than less, with these scenes happening between episodes for now. The next chapter will actually be set after Interdimensional Field Trip.
On of the other ideas involved her falling for the ruse and admitting that she's always loved Marco and him realizing that she's in the same situation with him as he is with Jackie and feeling like a real bastard for using her. Another scene I had started but just couldn't commit to was the part where she asked him not to use a condom. She was going to make a flippant remark about dealing with any unfortunate results and Marco was going to lose his shit over the idea that she would just abort a potential pregnancy, like genuinely scare her over how upset it made him.
As for length, I have no idea how long it will, I don't plan that sort of thing out which might make me an oddball in terms of writers, I just sort of let the story be what it needs to be.
Neat, I look forward to that :D And then it's proceeding the way I predicted, since the whole thing with the cat pictures that Janna mentions made me think of that Field Trip episode as well, which is why I asked.
Oh man, I'm glad you chose what you did. Regardless of what one's stand on that is it's not really what I want in my Star erotica :O On a personal note, I tend to dislike when fanfics get a little too melodramatic compared to the source material. It's fan work, so they can do what they want but I feel it just doesn't suit the tone :/
Haha, I think most fanfic writers just start :P It's why there's so many that don't get finished. Looking forward to you hopefully finishing it with a big finale. Can one hope of a huge harem orgy with Marco and all the ladies he has undoubtedly banged during the story's journey? :D
And to show my appreciation for your really sexy story, here's a little something that I whipped up for you ;)
Oh my god that is so awesome, thank you so much! I lack the appropriate reaction image to show just how floored I am about this because it's a little dream come true.
I can't promise there won't be melodrama later since it's all about Marco and Star discovering how they really feel about each other. Thanks again.
There were some things in the original that were bugging me so I fixed them, then I got in the mood for coloring, and well, here we are :P And I'm glad you liked it ^^ Write more and I might get more inspired by the other chapters ;)
>I can't promise there won't be melodrama later since it's all about Marco and Star discovering how they really feel about each other.
See, that's GOOD melodrama there. I think what will make this work too is the fact there is no actual cheating as of yet. Technically Marco could bone everyone and their mother before meeting up with Jackie without it being an issue, but it wouldn't surprise me if Star maybe tries to sabotage some of the Jackie dates just to keep Marco for herself without admitting that's what she wants :P
One other question though: The condoms are a neat idea, but will they be used as a count down of sorts in relation to the story? Like, one condom per major chapter, and then being a big deal with the final one in terms of who he will use the last condom on? Sorry if you haven't thought this far ahead or want it to be a surprise, but I'm genuinely invested in this story ^^
Yeah, that was kinda the idea with the condoms, though they might not always be used for sex between Star and Marco. I figure at least five major encounters like that should make for a good body of work. Also great job on the coloring.
This could probably happen
Found this from Incognitymous. Is he foreshadowing the ending to your story? :P
I don't think Incognitymous colored this one, but still, nice with some colors.