Hey, writefag from a few threads. Here's a screencap of a story I'm working on w/ Madam Pe/aco/ck and a VIP with deep pockets and deeper connections. This could be her big break out of this simple brothel.
I'm going to post more throughout the day, if people are interested. It wouldn't hurt to say you're lurking, fam.
This shits kinda giving me motivation to write again so if you want an /aco/ themed adventure feel free to angrily shout ideas, people, tans, fetishes, at me. I like all the things we've made so far. Limits your imagination, nigga.
>>115425 Each rub of her clit sends a tiny jolt of pleasure through her nerves. She bites her lip to stifle any further moans while desperately trying to control her hips from pushing against his hand. This has gone on long enough. She pushes her fingers deep into his thick hair and grabs tight, pulling his head from her bosom and craning it back. The sudden jerk breaks his concentration, as well as his hold on The Madam. She loosens her vice grip on his head and gives his shoulders a moderate shove pushing him flat to the bed.
Already with a leg up on the bed, and the situation, The Madam straddles Cole slowly. She leans over his face striking a decidedly feline pose and begins kissing his neck while grinding against his body. Her warm lips gentle bites keep Cole in a state of bliss while her dexterous fingers quickly work away at his buttoned shirt. Within moments the shirt is but a memory as she's pressing the mounds of her breasts against his well-defined pecs. Reaching down, she can feel the bulge in Cole's pants struggling against its denim prison and gleefully teases it with her caress.
The desire for more snaps Cole from his stupor. He needs to see her heavenly body without this leotard between them. Wrapping his arms around her slender waist, he starts to untie her corset. His fingers aren't quite as nimble as Peacocks. As well, she's making it difficult distracting him with her wriggling body. The contemplative, near frustrated, expression on Cole's face as he fumbles with her laces is immensely satisfying to The Madam.
“Good boy,” she says, as he finally figures out the knot and begins unlacing her corset. When the last lace is untied, he eagerly grabs straight for her breasts. He can't get the whole leotard off since they are attached, but that doesn't stop him from scooping her breasts out of the now lax corset frame. Her nipples are hard as stone as he squeezes them firmly between his fingertips.
This is Pleasurepuss, a very old /co/ creation from more than 7 years ago (the pic is much newer than that though). I never had much luck with trying to discuss her in the /co/ creation threads.
I've been trying to come up with a new name for her.
You know how the female twi'leks in Star Wars are always being shown as "dance" slaves? Well her race is the alien race that gets bought and sold as sex slaves a lot.
Her backstory states that she was very skilled at the sex game and eventually found herself in an evil emperor's harem. During her time there the other harem girls taught her to read, write, and fight in exchange for teaching them her pleasuring techniques and secrets since they were afraid she'd make them all obsolete.
She saw a lot of really evil shit during her time here. One day an opposing armada showed up to fight this evil emperor and she herd their propaganda broadcasts about how life not enslaved by this guy is like.
She managed to kill the emperor, which threw his forces into chaos, which let this opposing armada defeat them and free her. Now freed, she picks up some new skills and tech while out and about the galaxy before crashing on Earth.
She has limited telepathy and a device that can project a force field around her, which also allows her to fly. She also has a probe stick that can tell her a lot of useful information about adversaries if she's able to probe them with it.
>>115430 His hands grope and massage her chest while her breathy sighs of pleasure fill his ears. Cole lets go of one boob and gently cups Peacock's chin. Guiding her mouth to his for a passionate kiss. The taste of the alcohol still lingering on her lips. His fingers run through her ebony tresses pulling her in tighter against his face. He wraps his other arm around her back yearning to feel the warm touch of her skin. The kiss only increases in intensity. The Madam reaches one hand behind Cole's head while continuing to grab at the throbbing bulge in his pants. His cock aches from its confinement but is lost in the fiery heat of the kiss.
Cole needs more. He boldly slips his tongue into The Madam's mouth. Shocked by the sudden intrusion The Madam pulls his mouth away and bites down on his bottom lip hard. He gasps from the combined pain and pleasure while The Madam smirks smugly. She pulls on it just a little and holds him there before kissing him back. The Madam loves a bold man but it's best to keep them on their toes. This time she seeks his tongue with hers, losing herself in the passionate exchange. She releases his bulge and instead claws her fingernails into his tanned skin. Even through her gloved hands Cole can feel the bite of her nails raking his chest. As well as her hard nipple poking him every time she rubs her massive breasts around.
The Madam needs to get a little more control on what is quickly becoming a frenzied ordeal. But her cock craving is near insatiable already. With one last tongue tussle she breaks away from the lips and instead kisses his cheek before moving on down his neck. Her graceful body moves slowly yet steadily down Cole's planting light kisses as she goes. When she reaches the crook of his neck she bites his tasty flesh. Not too hard, but not too soft. Cole groans in pleasure. The Madame kisses it again before moving on to his chest.
>>115798 No. Madame Pe/aco/ck, J/aco/lyn, and /Aco/rn are the names of his different onaholes.
Remember anon, he's a wizard because he's a 30 year old virgin and he hates Japan because it turns out their myth was true. Except he can't use his powers to get laid and so he draws and writes OC DONUT STEEL waifu stories and pretends his different flavors of onaholes are the pussies of his donut steels.
>>115438 I have no idea what Gormengast is but it sounds interesting. Sounds more like a novel then a short smut story though.
>>115490 >>115593 I'm not 100% on these yet. It's a bit of bias w/ the lack of hair and the 2nd set of appendages. I like the alien angle, though. Since her race is sold as sex slaves do they have anything sex related that is unique about them? Or are they slaves mainly because they are a dominated race?
>>115735 I'm sure people still have work, school, or a life, seeing as it is Friday after all. It's early Friday, at that, and it's a weekend thread. Not a flash thread just today that has a set time where we all jump in and jack up the replies. Plus drawing, writing, 3d modeling, whatever, take time.
Find an idea or a picture somewhere that you find interesting and post it like >>115490. Discuss shit, give feedback, contribute in general. >>115820 Boom right on time before I hit post.
>>115835 She's meant to be childish, the whole character came from something that happened in a chat while watching a drawfag draw something. Somehow the word nakiebutts came up right when someone said Nova and it just snowballed from there.
Since the time when we came up with her, Poppy O'possum has come into existence, so if you're familiar with Mary Moonshine, I guess she'd be like that, only less actively trouble making.
>>115891 The guy who originally made that said he was changing it to 30 because it made sense as to why he was a wizard and hated the east. I don't think he ever got around to it though, seeing as how that's a 4chan filename and that info is like 2 weeks old at this point.
>>115904 You don't want any of the mess that the board-tan threads on /toy/ are.
They'll go through an entire thread of shit flinging, come up with something most agree on, then completely forget all about anything they talked about or why they decided what they ended up with by the time the next /toy/-tan thread comes around.
It's completely awful and further compounded by /toy/'s lack of an archive.
Actually wanting that kind of toxicness for /aco/-tan discussions is a terrible thing.
>>115908 The /aco/ wizard is our main -tan. He's the one that interacts with the other board-tans like /Co/nrad. J/aco/lyn, Pe/aco/ck, and /Aco/rn are all sub characters of that -tan but are not the official board representative. And it's already been agreed upon that the three girls are just his OCDONUTSTEEL characters.
First, he is a wizard (virgin) Second, He can summon waifus Third, He loves porn and got his own fetish standard. Fourth: He actually feel like He come from modern times. Fifth: He can go on different magical and sexy adventures.
>>115923 Stop saying he is, only popularity in the amount of art by different drawfags determines who is board-tan. You can like something but if no one draws it, no one is going to know its board-tan. Only time and drawfags will tell who is tan
New hair shader with textures rather than flat color.
Bigger thighs and calves
Pulled the hose upwards like the original peacock design
Can I get some opinions on the new hair ? Is it too detailed to go against the simple style of the rest of the model ? Also black hair makes her look old, can we get some alternative hait colors for Madame Peacock ? Also bigger legs or slimmer legs ?
>>115936 >>115927 I honestly think that you guys don't realise the purpose of a board-tan as a whole relating to 4chan. It's ONE CHARACTER to act as a representative to the other boards on here. It isn't the most drawn or most popular character, it's the one that makes sense to send out and interact with the other tans. Think of them as living in the same house together, but each with their own room, which is typically how board-tan interactions are depicted as. Are you honestly going to tell me that you can see any of the three girls doing what they do out of a single house?
Board OC isn't the same as the board-tan. Please understand this.
>>115955 Anon, the design that's come out of these threads that's been posted on boards other than /aco/ the most is J/aco/lyn. As far as /co/ and /qa/ are aware, the J/aco/lyn is /aco/-tan. You can dislike this all you want, but that's what I've seen happen over there.
I have no way to make this sound "nice" in a way that you won't think that I'm "attacking" you're waifu. That's just what I've seen on the other boards.
>>115951 And you hate her because that one anon spammed her, and I dislike Pe/aco/k because anons who like her are always being rude to me when I'm not even talking about any of the possible /aco/-tans.
So there you go, that's all the /aco/-tan discussion in an nutshell. Everyone's butthurt and stubborn and no one wins.
That's the status quo. I've been trying my damnedest to change it, but somehow someone always posts something that brings us right back to that.
So if you want to reply to this post, reply with an OC and maybe we'll actually have a decent thread.
>>115895 I've never much cared for the pheromone part of her since aliens should have physiology that makes it so alien pheromones have either vastly different effects than what they have on their own species or no effect at all.
>>115955 >It isn't the most drawn or most popular character, it's the one that makes sense to send out and interact with the other tans.
Good for you you for having good taste, BUT do you really think causal lurkers and anons from other boards are going to read into all the fluff to determine who is tan or just pick one they like? no, there going to see a butch of art of one tan on the board and say, "yup I guess that's it."
>>115961 >And you hate her because that one anon spammed her, and I dislike Pe/aco/k because anons who like her are always being rude to me when I'm not even talking about any of the possible /aco/-tans.
Every tan fandom have their fair share of assholes, not just Pe/aco/ck. Lurk longer
I'm some guy who JUST started following whatever the fuck is going on here in the thread before last thread and you seem to think I'm someone who goes around making threads and posting requests on other boards.
It's ridiculous and shows that you're paranoid.
Has this whole /aco/-tan really become so important to you that you're able to jump to these conclusions?
>>116102 What pleasure do you get from shitposting and complaining in every thread you're in??? You never provide any insight or oc. What is it that drives you to be so annoying on the internet?
He's in the /co/ drawthread wailing about someone requesting something he doesn't like. And I know it's him because he uses the exact same rotation of pictures and uses the same broken English. In fact, im pretty sure he's the main one samefagging the /aco/-tan threads.
What part of not yelling at each other about tans wasn't understood? Holy shit the salt and autism is off the charts. Some of this is blatant trolling and you're just taking it hook line and sinker. Just. Stop. Replying. It's all tans tans tans tans tans tans muh feelings muh waifu and it's pointless.
>>116222 But we did not make this thread to argue about tans here.
>>116299 I was on mobile for 4 hours watching shit go down but couldn't post. The built up butthurt/salt kinda got to me.
>>116311 Question, is there anyway the waist could be just a little bigger? I know it's a cartoon drawing, but at the same time it seems almost a bit to unrealistic, you know? Like it's looks like its almost just her spine. Or not I'm just spitballing. Feel free to keep it the way it be.
>>116661 Okay, I said "a few", but it's actually only three. 1. A slutty 40's style female detective (spun out of my ideas for Ms. Peacock). She comes off as intelligent, but actually fucks her way through solving crimes. 2. An alien princess that's like a cross between Kim Kardashian and Princess Jasmine. She has really big lips and she sneaks out of the palace at night using her body and blowjobs to stop crimes. Her species invaded the Earth so she's really the princess of Earth now, and her father is the king. 3. Not as NSFW, but the idea was for a nerdy and horny black girl with a huge ass that's secretly a magical girl. She lives in a world full of tit men and as a result she's deemed most ugly, and most girls, including her bullies have really big breasts.
I'm surprise that most people ITT, and the past ones don't get that. I'd chuck it to this being a new board, but the the /aco/ version of "How's your Webcomic" have been pretty ok. But there's been like two of those.
>>117873 It looks like plenty of them are still here, pitch a script.
Personally I'd love to see Brokenlynx21 draw a The Developing Adventures of Golden Girl comic strip, but that's just not feasible since the character isn't for direct lewdness as it would ruin the joke.
>>117891 >Brokenlynx21 For all the flaunt he gets, most people don't know what he does. He's a full-time storyboard artist, and he's been trying to get in more work of his personal projects. Dude's not committing to anything like that. He's one type of drawfriend, the type to pop-in and out.
That's why projects like this >>117847 and Lovely Ladybug started with people with time, that then they committed themselves to a specific /co/ originated project.
>>117913 I already said I knew it wasn't feasible.
I want to see something like the Tasmanian Devil as an /aco/ character. She's making a big twister ripping the clothes off of everyone and J/aco/lyn has to lasso the twister like in one of those tall tales.
It'd also serve my purpose of stopping the slander against /d/-tan I saw. That just ain't right since the new /d/-tan content right before /aco/ was made was of her as a doting parent. Deelette would probably kick someone in the shin for this, but that might be a break of character.
>>117965 >pitching ideas >where you can pitch ideas for characters I'm not really saying this is necessary true of you, anon, but so far most of this just reads like "draw my porn oc that I came up on the spot". Sure, new board and all, but that's just what I'm seeing here. Bit of the ol' drawthread behavior.
>>117971 Oh come on. Have you really never been in a /co/ creations thread?
That's just how it works. You have a character, you come up with a situation for the character and just spit ball it. Sometimes you make new characters for the sake of the plot. That's what I'm doing here.
I'm building on the wild west setting that the /aco/verse is set in.
>>117979 I have. They're at that pace and last what they last, for a reason. Same reason why they aren't shit anymore. The drawthread behavior I mention, was part of why they were move to weekends only.
>>117985 Are you just shooting me down because you don't want me to even try to make OC in a thread where the OP says that it is a thread made specifically for the creation of OC?
As far as I'm concerned, I'm still working with an /aco/verse where there's some town out in the wild west with it's most prominent feature being the brothel known as the /aco/rral run by Pe/aco/ck, a nearby monster ranch that J/aco/lyn and /aco/rn manage, and one of those other ones is the sheriff.
The whole town has all kinds of weird sexy things happening to it, either bandits, or strange clients of the brothel's, or wild monsters and everyone who lives there has to deal with them.
All I'm proposing is a twister comes through town, ripping off everyone's clothes, and J/aco/lyn lassos the thing since a monstergirl or whatever is the cause of it.
If you don't like my idea that's fine, tell me your ideas, but don't just kill thought lines because you've been in too many of these threads.
>>117986 I'm not even asking for this to be drawn. I'm just trying to come up with a story that I think would be neat.
I do not understand the attitude of this thread. I know why it was made, I know what it's for, I don't get why no one wants to participate in some world building.
>The wizard is god of the western world >Cape is wizard sister. >Peacock is the owner of a whore-house (cartoons or rejected tans). >Cow-girl and Indian hunted /d/eviants/blob-tan and pay the debt of peacock loan or something.
>>117995 Something solid? There's too many things that clash, and I get the feeling everyone still harping on it, just wants to see their fan-favorite. I mean, the three most prominent artists said the whole thing left a bad taste,a now they're just content to either not touch the concept, or just fuck around with them with no real purpose. I don't know, mang. I'm feeling pretty disenchanted about that whole -tan side of things.
>>117998 Yes, anon. I am just shooting your idea-man approach. Calm down, dude.
>>118061 Okay, cuz I've been doing a lot of universe expanding for my friends comics and I want to try and help out but if this shit happens like a few times i cant really get a grip on it, im not saying im super good at it but Im not a fuckin retard...
>>118056 >>118061 I figured every weekend for people to do shit in a group setting whether it be new or fine tuning stuff from before. If you're so inclined, though, you can easily take a specific idea and make a thread about throughout the week.
Like how there were standalone peacock and jacolyn threads.
>>118092 It's like you weren't on those 12plus threads. The first ones were great, but having them one after the other didn't work. This all reads like championing for more theads, only because you're really jonesing for free art, anon. Still, I could be wrong. I agree on that last part, though. People will still make threads if they want to. That's how those last ones happened.
>>118097 I know there was going to be a character with the same name in that webcomic at some point (I think it was going to be a male stripper though), but I know myself and another were the ones who came up with the name and that's what lead to it.
I have an original idea for a character I'd like to see an anon or two draw.
The idea is that she's like a fusion of April and Irma: a reporter type who is kind of shy and reserved, but has an insanely voluptuous body that she can't hide through sweaters or what have you. She's also embarrassed but also curious about trying lewd things, which other female friends and coworkers would be happy to show her.
In typical cartoon reporters fashion, she also tends to be kidnapped and tied up in bondage-type situations on a regular basis (but she kind of likes it).
>>118306 >>118312 That seemed way funnier then I think it should of been. I just imagine them all cheering loudly going apeshit and it's just blobtan jiggling. Cut to Peacock and Jacolyn staring disgusted at them.
>>121059 Yo, I'm lurking. My presence has been a lot more lax then I planned but a ton of shit happened. I'm still finishing a story that's now 2 days overdue and I had another idea I liked I wouldn't mind putting to paper but I'm listening.
>>121699 Well the other I posted isn't really a character at all so I don't know why you'd talk about her popularity. But she's a dominatrix and looks like one so I wanna see it. Why not just make a request for something similar with Peacock if you want it so much.
>>122010 Why would sex be anything more than a job to Peacock? I'm not suggesting that she doesn't like this job but I highly doubt that she will go for it with religious fervor. Remember she is a whore.
Holy fuck. I jump in to say I like Pea and answer a question and the only two posts since are two people (I'm actually guessing they're one anon) who seem to take issue with that fact.
I guess that's why this thread has so little OC or conversation going on. The mean-spirited cowgirl fags just won't fucking let up when anyone talks about anything else.
A shame. I really enjoyed the last Peacock thread.
>why would sex be anything more than a job?
Really? Because I like the fucking character? I don't think she has to be just a whore.... I enjoyed the idea of Pea as a woman who was utterly devoted to spreading the joy of eroticism across the world. A holy figure for serial masturbators.
Sorry for whining and making such an autistic post but I've had a whole bunch of fun over the last week seeing the drawfags working and the fucksmithers writing. You've all done stellar stuff and I've really enjoyed seeing that 3D model develop.
But this attitude of 'someone likes a different waifu - must contradict' just seems to be killing these threads. Fine. You win. No more Peacock (she's just a whore after all). I'll stop posting. Enjoy your cowgirl or whoever the fuck you think has more character and 'energy'.
>>122072 >A shame. I really enjoyed the last peacock thread You realize this thread is not only about peacock right? Also they weren't being mean to you at all, they literally said their own opinions and what the character is to them. What gave you the idea that they're both the same people?
I feel idiots like you have to resort to saying
"It has to be the same person! No more then one person can dislike the thing I like!" Cause you can't except the fact more then one person dislikes or prefers another design.
>Really? Because I like the fucking character How is that a reason that contradicts what he said? Your being as much as a waifu fag as he is. (which I don't see how they are maybe the first guy the second guy not really.)
As for the whole whore shill for what it seems to me yeah I can agree she does seem like a whore hell she runs a dam brothel if anything she just holds herself at a higher standard which doesn't change anything, I mean why wouldn't she be other then the fact you want to make her a >A holy figure for serial masturbation. If that isn't being a waifu fag I don't know what is.
Might I also add in no way, shape, or form did they call or mention that you were >Whining and making an autistic post. Maybe you see yourself in that light but neither of them said so. Do you have a self hate problem?
Nevertheless you can leave, in fact no one will really be able to tell you left anyway.
>>122217 >said their own opinions All they argued was that P. had less 'energy' and was a whore who did what she did for the money. That's a pretty good way to be dismissive of a character people have been enjoying - what with the backstory and stuff. It's shooting down enthusiasm for anything that isn't specific to their tastes.
>you can't except more than one person I put that I was 'guessing' - considering the amount of samefaggotry that has been going on in past threads it wouldn't surprise me... Especially when this thread has so little traffic at the moment.
>How is that a reason that contradicts what he said? I need a reason to contradict the fact that she's just 'a whore' and 'has no energy'? Don't tell me those statements aren't specifically designed to depict the character as no-fun and a pointless secondary character. It's unnecessarily derisive for a thread hoping for creative content.
>she just holds herself to a higher standard which doesn't change anything There we go again... writing that she 'just' insinuates a lack of value - whereas plenty of people have been coming up with big grand ideas for her - fighting evil / Gormengast sex politics... that Totally Spies Guy... Lots of anons have been thinking about fun ways her character can expand that uses her whoreing for good.
>If that's not being a waifu fag I don't know what is I never said I wasn't. But there's a big difference between talking about why you like your character and shitting on other peoples.
>in no way... did they call you a whiner or autistic No... I never said they did. I did. Look at us. This is whining and autism at its maximum levels. I was apologising for the fact that I was being so bothered by what I saw as an anon (sorry - maybe two) being derisive about an expression of interest in a character.
>You realize this thread is not just about Peacock? Yeah. I do. That thread was fun.
>you can leave, in fact no one will really be able to tell you left Hot plan. Bye.
>>122273 You didn't reply to the anon asking the question though did you? You chose to act dismissively to someone else sharing their interest in a character. Don't call someone out on their opinion and then complain when they argue back.
>>122326 I like Jacobi but thinking about it now, her design is waaay too similar to Acorn and Jacolyn. To the point where she feels like a recolor, making her fairly unmemorable. I would like for her to be a saloon singer or something like that. I'm willing to do a redesign if that's okay.
>>122902 As far as color palette, I agree. I'm a total sucker for contrast. If she's in a different time period, then I would argue that her clothes should be modernized accordingly, but I still feel as though her clothing should be more unique than it is right now.
>>123099 >As far as color palette, I agree. I'm a total sucker for contrast. I like the cowprint chaps and jackets. And her hair is very 80's. >If she's in a different time period What time period should we go with? What should we do with Jacobi?
>>123121 No, your actually the new fag, J/aco/lyn came well before the jacobi design literally 3-6 threads or more I don't have the patience to look through all the threads not to mention the mod did deleted some of them too.
So stop, your making yourself look stupid alright?.
>>123224 Ah, you see this seems like a case of not making your point clear enough It seemed you were refuting that J/aco/lyn came before Jacobi. As for the whole >Turing J/aco/lyn into Jacobi No I in fact don't remember since in the most likely case I wasn't there for that thread, but the majority of them I was.
Regardless my bad then sorry for the misunderstanding anon, probably should have made your point more clear.
Hi. I'm the guy that wrote >>122026 and apparently some guy didn't get what I was saying.
Peacock is the head of a brothel or as some would call it, a whorehouse. You usually don't run a brothel unless you have already been a working as a prostitute or a whore. Madam probably doesn't open her legs for anyone unless the price is right and I doubt she will be that into it.
That is unless she felt that she had a rep to protect.
Not sure if this goes here but I'll post this just to keep the thread going. I have a character named Lucy (after that female Australophitecus skeleton) She's a cavegirl and lesbian. Pretty old concept and old drawings. I have an idea for a short comic but on the other hand I'd love to do a erotic one as well. Looking at this old drawings makes me want to go back and improve the character.
>>123973 Exactly: I don't want the idea to be related to The Flintstones. There's some visual influence because Hanna Barbera is one of my biggest inspirations, but I want a more real stone age. Something more hunter-gather, as you said, and "primitive" (?)
>>124044 Wow. Sounds perfect. I've never think about that issue, now that you mention it. One short story I had in mind back then was about her pet dinosaur Rocky getting sick and she has to go to some valley to collect some medicinal plant/herb to cure him, but there's these giant dinosaurs and I've never came up with something else to continue with the story. I'll see what comes out of that. I can make it fit into the story outline above somehow. Maybe scrapping the dinosaur pet since I don't have a good purpose for him.
>>124030 I remember I tried her to look tanned and black as well but I liked this skin color for her.
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