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/stg/- Slave Trainer General/Maledom general

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Cho is just getting that ice cream everywhere edition

Source= 4 houses there isn't a demo yet faggot

THIS GENERAL ISN'T JUST ABOUT SLAVE TRAINERS OTHER GENRES OF GAMES FIT HERE ALSO (Please read the next part for further clarification).

This is a general about slave trainer games and the creation of games where you play as a male and dominate women. Discussion about games not being created here is also acceptable as long as it's related to the topic at hand(i.e. playing a male and dominating women).

If you're working on a game and want to list a pastebin here speak up please.

WIP Projects (Korra Trainer, Four Elements Trainer, WT Silver, Tifa Trainer, Incredibles Trainer, Fairy tail trainer, Ben ten trainer, Momcest trainer, Carnal valley, etc):
http://pastebin.com/sfWvm8Bc

Links to other games:
http://pastebin.com/M4XCN5GH

Maverick wrote a guide for scripting. Shows how to write/structure scenes for coders. Good for idea-guys & script-writers:
http://pastebin.com/gRyrGgDt

Contact info for major contributors:
https://quip.com/I2f8AaPEEr0a
Some of these people are looking for writers and artists. If you're interested mention it.

Report & ignore shitposters, people that scream proxyfag/samefag/waifu/waifufag, people that post beast, and futa spammers
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https://mega.nz/#!mx9XmLCb!eQYk_hCpsMRDsQtRchjyjpS3_HWdJrMoSl7z4A0w_Lg

This is the new four elements if you missed it last thread

https://u.nya.is/hqtebo.7z

Heres the new urban X demons demo 1 that was just released

game_folder/renpy/common/00console.rpy

change the line that says
config.console = False
to
config.console = True

the capital "T" matters.

In game, press shift+o, then type fmoney = amount_you_want

for cheating in azulas part of four elements
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Hey artguy are you working on Astoria/Narcissa stuff or is rook?
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What is the source for this picture?
Will it be in a game at some point?
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>>1098135

whats new in 4 elements?
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Self-insert trainer
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>>1098135
>Start a new file because I can't progress
>Crashes getting introduced to the farm
Wish I could just cheat money in
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Slave Quest
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New supermom when
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>>1098221
just dont ask her any question, pick the last option
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>>1098224
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>https://www.lewdgamer.com/2016/12/19/the-digital-economy-bill-adult-games-in-the-new-age-of-uk-internet-censorship/

UK is fucked.
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>>1098249
late for the butthurt, already posted
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>>1098224
>dat midriff
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rolling
>0-4
Draw
>5-9
Code and Write Story
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>>1098135
>for cheating in azulas part of four elements
how do I cheat in other parts?
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Anyone got some good references to learn how to write lewds
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>>1098305
erotic literature exists since the dawn of time...
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>>1098316
Sure, but it's better to ask other people first who have filtered some of the garbage out there.
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I want to replay Witch Trainer. Only tried the "original" version long ago.
Which is your preferred variant of the game?
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>>1098325
original
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Summertime Saga is getting updated this month right?
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>>1098236
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Tropic are you still tinkering with endings and stuff or are you near release?
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What's all in Urban Demons right now?
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>>1098420
Not much
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>>1098230
what game?
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>>1098478
Legend of Goblin 4
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>>1098224
>>1098236
>>1098377

I wonder what happened to deareditor, her blog is gone too

http://deareditorart.tumblr.com/
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>>1098417
The complete radio silence from Tropic for the past four days is making me worried.
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>>1098520
http://deareditorr.tumblr.com/
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>>1098543
STOP IT, ANON! YOU'RE MAKING ME VERY UPSET!
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>>1098543
Oh
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please tell me there are more CoC clones with good transformatives besides TiTs, please
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>>1098218
Is there any WT mod where Luna has some more presence?
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>>1098559
There's Fall of Eden and Strive for Power but the former is not really about transformation and the latter has no sex scene writing.
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>>1098572
if totally amust to have them, I really don't want to replay CoC or start TiTs
>SoP
I mean transformatives for the playable character, not the girls
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>>1098586
Newest build has the option to transform your own character through the upgraded lab.
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>>1098562
Annoyingly, no.
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>>1098135
link to 4 elements down/doesn't work
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Is WT Silver buggy as hell?

I'm not getting costumes when I buy them, and I can't progress after W6 because the panty thief thing doesn't complete when I complete it
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>>1098730
see >>1098610
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Why did Tifaguy also turn into a pedo?

can one game maker stick to just adult women please
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>>1098818
he knows where the goods at
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>>1098820
benidicky Cucumberfach? in a wig?
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>>1098119
why does she have milk on her face
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>>1098818
go back to >>>y
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Anyone know if there's any content yet for Mai in four elements? She only tells me "not interested" repeatedly but there's no handy "in development" sign to steer me away.
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>>1098842
That's where the flat chested loli lovers hang out

I like boobs hence the interest in a Tifa game, not some little girl

>>1098858
the shop girl?

she's nude in the games art, but i don't recall any art showing undressing
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Hey, never really come in this thread but I've got an itch for playing a h-game, I've only played Princess and Witch trainers, is there any more that's actually worth playing just now or are they all just WIP just now?
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>>1098878
Library story is fun for a bit, so is 4 elements, but neither are finished

Akaburs new game star channel 34 is bollocks don't try it
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>>1098895
Probably next year will have 2 CGs total.
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>>1097569
Reposting 'cause I want some (You)s
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>>1098902
It doesn't even have most of Jasmine's costumes and he's already drawn them

Next update will probably have a horrible grind just to see Lara Croft blow a goat

I'm genuinely triggered by how bad it is and what a waste of his time and art it was.
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>>1098934
He still insists in drawing everything in real paper, while commendable in any other learning scenario, taking an entire year to release SC34 in that state while most of it is recycled content (there are blurred sprites that were lifted from PT and WT) ends being really annoying...
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>>1096892
Yup

>>1094530
>>1095284
Noice, that was my preferred alternative as well.

>>1096889
Dammit, you got me. I was too embarrased to admit that I fried my hardwarenutted by accidentally nutting all over it to sweet loli dickgirls and am now forced to work on an oscilloscope and a modified toaster.

Well, I managed to re-do what was lost, so here you go.
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>>1098999
And the other series as a reminder
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>>1098999
Aaah, bollocks. Those are the old version jeans shorts in the leftmost image. new ones look like the ones in the image
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Hey, I'm back. Going to be tidying up the show my your ass favour today. Is there anything else people want done/added?
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>>1099028
fix these?
>>1098753

what else can you add? you're not an artist are you?
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>>1099028
I'd love to see a new hairstyle that's crazy long and doubles as an outfit. Like the Birth of Venus or something, but lewd and embarrassing.
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>>1098753

Yeah it's buggy as fuck, don't use old saves if you're playing a new version.
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Stop trying to make this a thing
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>>1099028
>Going to be tidying up the show my your ass favour today.

Somehow I've read that as "Going to be adding tickling up the ass show favor today"
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>>1099102
?
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>>1099098
don't worry anon
I got you
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>>1099038
>>1098753
>fix these?
I'm almost certain that that person is playing a fairly outdated version of the game.
Costumes work fine at the moment and the panty thief has been a public shaming favour for a while now.

I can add written content to the game that utilises all of the many drawn assets people have made. Make suggestions based around that.
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Posting this here for any lads that are interested.
Basically picture related is Jasmine's mother in game.

>>1099116
This is some brilliant work mate, certainly hope you'll be adding some of those above costumes
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>>1099103
i'm going to be tidying up to show my ass to favour you today
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>>1099116
Is there a place where I can look at all the drawn assets?
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>>1098249
What did people expect when Theresa 'privacy is a meme' May became PM AND the country voted away the power of the EU Courts which have been the only thing blocking shit like this for decades.
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>>1099098
What is she going to do with a gun? Does Genie get the gun?
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>>1099150

Why would a genie need a gun?
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>>1099121
Oh nice. You haven't posted here in a while
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>>1099154
idk, I'm not the one that keeps suggesting that one gets added.
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>>1099121
You have a really good fucking artist. This is Jasmines mother? Weird.
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>>1099116
You could do something with the bunnysuit I complemented a while ago. Maybe add another public shaming thing where she has to go out as a playboybunny to... collect money for MRM at early levels, support the pensioners fund for the professors later, and... Put on a proper show (with hands on approach if public path open) for fatigued students and faculty at final levels? Idunno, you'll probably figure something out.
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>>1099121
She's pretty hot.
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>>1099121
LOLI WHEN MASQUERADE
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>>1099116
make her a masked vigilante
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>>1099121
Thanks man. If you're taking about the plaid stuff then I'm in contact with the guy who's making them.
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>>1098417
What kind of fucking music goes into lewd scenes

Is it Jazz?

Most famous lewd games have absolutely weird lewd sound tracks
Where it's either heavy rock or electronic which doesn't fit at all anywhere

Is it slow piano?
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>>1099191
I'd go smooth jazz. But most sex music sounds really cheesy. No music would be ok too maybe?
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>>1099121
So you can fuck jasmine,the mother of jasmine and the daughter of jasmine?

That's fucking nice dude
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>>1099191
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XsxStnV6tsA
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>>1099191
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bBoDjxLpAzY
There you go. Here's what I would use. Not to blatant but smooth.
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>>1099215
This is awesome if that's the case.
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>>1099191
Heavy rock or even extreme metal can fit hardcore BDSM/rape scene, I guess.

I'd think about a type of scene, first.
An experienced seductress, street whore and young virgin scenes will all have different mood and should have different music to set the tone.
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>>1099215
Unless you can fuck Jasmine's father or pet tiger, I'm not interested.
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>>1099238
kill yourself
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>>1099121
Wow fantastic art. Always good to hear from you. Looking forward to going to Agrabah.
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>>1099116
step 1: invite slitherin girl (if only there were one)
step 2: also invite H.
step 3: make her wear slitherin cheerleader outfit, and cheer at you while having fun with the slitherin girl.
no profit. :(
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Can someone link me to the newest WT Silver?
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>>1099306
The pastebin in the pastebin is the one mo himself updates use the download from that one
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What's the ending point in the new 4 elements build? I've gotten the footjob off Azula and got Ty Lee to flash for me
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>>1099191
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OA0uQ2UeAkE
best part
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>>1099318
azula anal
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Was there only the one "Tactics" scene in Four Elements?
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>>1099322
Cool I thought it was that but I wasn't sure and didn't want to waste my time, Thanks
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>>1098127
where is this from/wat artist?
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>>1099346
see
>>1099121
Fairy tale adentures, it's not in the game yet so give it some time
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>>1099346
Masquerade's game.
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>>1099191

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GauhWG340dI
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>>1098135
Game doesn't work after changing that line?
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>>1099416
You fucked up somehow or erased the spaces or didn't use a capital T, because I followed those instructions to the letter and it worked for me.
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>>1099416
http://www.uploadmb.com/dw.php?id=1483413051

Here is mine after I edited it. Just throw it into the folder and replace yours
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>>1098225
Oh. What's this from?
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>>1098187

Dat's da Captain's work.

Really wish he had found the time to finish the rest of the poses he was sketching out... would have loved to have done versions of the existing clothing for each.
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How do you unlock/find Kitty ???
been ages since i played Rougue-Like
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>>1099489
After a week or so visit the quad/square to run into her.
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>>1099489
What version do you have?

https://p.fuwafuwa.moe/sxchrp.rar

Heres a new version of cohabition 0.29.1
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>>1099495
thanks bro
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>>1099431
Thanks
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so is zelda guy dead? I knew he is the typical cuck "making game is easy look I can art!" type
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>>1099528
You mean cypress? I don't think he is.
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Heres artifact .04
https://u.nya.is/xrikfz.7z

If you get a internal sever error, close out the tab and open it in a new one.
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>>1099540
what? No, zelda trainer guy, the one who did like 3 images and call it a game

Cypress is other kind of cuck
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>>1099489
what game/link?
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Threadly reminder that Oni needs to work on the actual game before taking on more cookie cutter characters in Rogue-like. Like actual events or variety in animation.
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>>1099116
would you know were I could find a download link to this?
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>>1099559
http://pastebin.com/KY3RGQei
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>>1099553
Links in the op under other games, game is called rogue like
just ctrl f rogue

https://u.nya.is/vqhotv.rar

Gates the opening game

You play an English teacher at a school, the walk through is worthless just ignore it
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What are the snow daze best scenes for jane and noelle day 2? I know for sure I have them for kira and sarah, I think I might for jane, and I have no clue for the mom.
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>>1099618
Honestly there really isn't any sex in it yet, I'm waiting for day 3 or 4.
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https://u.nya.is/bmjiva.rar

Here is some game where you play as Author and get trained by merlin who is a woman.
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>>1099322
How do you get to that point? I'm stuck to where she's mad and wont talk. Tried buying gifts but don't have a way to give them to her. Also, she keeps telling me I'm a general when I go fight.
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>>1098124
Wow, Snape was right, that's really just a boys butt. F-!
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>>1098562
She shows up a little in Silver, IIRC.
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any games besides 4 elements have footjob scenes?
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>>1099966
Don't make me sick.
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>>1099967
feet are great, fuck you
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>>1099975
cuck
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>>1099976
Bitch faggot nigger mega kike
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how do you progress past the footjob scene in four elements? Azula is just always pissed now.
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>>1099674
What on earth is this?
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>>1099996
>Here is some game where you play as Author and get trained by merlin who is a woman.
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>>1098562
WE NEED MORE LUNA
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>>1099991
Go to the tower it's either at the day or not to progress the story
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>>1100016
It just says that nothing is there. I've won a ton of fights as general, have tons of money, 35 pregnant cows. Ty Lee flashes whatever. i'm just going in circles.
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>>1100018
Day and night? You must have fucked up somewhere and have a quest, check the ally or something.
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>>1099558
Show him the way you lazy fuck
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>>1100019
Are you not supposed to use an old save?
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>>1100027
Yeah if you're using an old save that's probably it. Every version breaks with those.
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>>1099999
I already hat that information thanks m8
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>>1100038
Then why did you ask
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>>1100009

damn checkd
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>>1100224
you really are a one trick pony
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>>1100253
It's the only joy I have in my life
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>>1100224
You know. I wanted this to happen.
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>>1099766
Go to the tower during the day, Don't forget to visit the palace aswell
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>>1098486
got link?
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>>1100329
God is dead
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hey,the link to the latest 4 elements doesn't work anymore,does anyone have another one ?
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>>1100329
That is genuinely awful. Thank you for sharing.
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>>1099121
nice!
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Did that game that the guy working with Akabur come out? I forget the name.
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>>1100506
3 Cucks 4 Women and a Star Bull by Chanel or something like that
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>>1100506
Iris Quest?
Library Story?
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>>1100512

Iris Quest.
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>>1100513
No, there's only a shitty demo
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>>1100506
Broken Hearth Bordello?
there's still months to it
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>>1100583
>>1100512

Damn, how many games is this guy doing?
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Ya know what I think might be kind of interesting? A jojo/STAND based game. Like your STAND causes others to not use their STANDS on you or around you or something, and you can rent away the Stand Users you've captured to either use their Stands or get fucked. Maybe just R63 the Users from Parts 3-8
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>>1099134
Well there's always https://stregac.github.io/trainers_image_library/
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>>1099996
I think it's this: https://www.patreon.com/shadow_portal

actual safe download (maybe) https://mega.nz/#!qh1mnKAK!sjo40uacTCQpl0B4EYtubRk7Phy_JqOQDyXMr_kd10A
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I thought tropic was waiting to get help from his programmer? Has there been any progress?
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>>1100638
I bet trainerfan will put his demo out before tropic does. Shit it has been a while since they've been at each others throat.
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>>1099996

It's garbage is what it is.
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>>1100642
christmas wasn't too too long ago tho
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>>1100658
Fair. hahahe!
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>>1100658
To bad /weg/ isn't going apeshit about Jean anymore it was funny while it lasted tho.
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>>1099498
>version 0.97 moded
i unlocked her but i can only kiss
but i have see capturesof her naked
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>>1100665
Don't worry they'll be pissed if the next one Oni puts in the game isn't what they want.
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>>1100009
9 off
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Did we get the changelog or the new build of 4 elements?
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>>1100885
Personally I'm just going to wait until each book is finished and bugfixed before checking it out
Combat needs to be way faster before I sing Book 2's praises
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>>1100635
Anyone have the bonus codes?
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Is there a link for the latest milfcontrol?
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>>1101038
somewhere
to bad i still cant get the game to run with WINE
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Anyone want the script so far for 4e?
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>>1101038
https://mega.nz/#!sJJAWZKK!S5lDAtAMVOu5_Z4SDmZncgIuvWxn3xw5mMIHmE1vkGQ
here you go
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>>1101158
Thanks anon
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>>1098878
4 elements has a load of content. Book 1 (of 4) finished and Book 2 like half way?
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>>1098122
T-this is good
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>>1098217
>In game, press shift+o, then type fmoney = amount_you_want
azula footjob, boobjob, assjob, anal
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>>1100611
The problem with that is Araki Jojo girls aren't that attractive

Lisa Lisa is probably the epitome of how well Araki can draw a feminine charcter

So while the concept in of itself is interesting the people involved in it don't work well for this sort of genre
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>>1101304
Just 69 all the machos with some pleasant artstyle.
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>>1101304
gaem wen trapic
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>>1101304
I would have a lot more respect for you if you weren't such a worthless weeaboo lmao
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>>1101352
I mean, I watch a lot of western shows too but there really isn't much to discuss on that topic since a lot of western shows tend to take a more safe route in their stylistic approaches and a lot of times creativity is often punished and alienated for the sake of ratings which is something you don't often see in a median like anime where you can see directors sacrificing potential viewers all for the sake of telling their story

I very much enjoy twin peaks but in reality twin peaks did bad in ratings and the network wanted to cancel it despite it being held as a classic of the genre

Although I don't want to imply that anime has the same sort of problem, 1 recent example of that is Re:zero which had an amazing 15th episode and should have ended there but continued on for the sake of ratings and money

But such occurrences are less common in the japanese market then the western one which is plagued with mind-numbing trash that ruins what a show is or was as a concept in favor for more seasons and more cash
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What games are complete that are worth downloading besides the Akabur games?
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>>1101385
>complete
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>>1101388

I got invested in Something Unlimited or whatever the fuck it's called and it isn't complete and has like 3 scenes despite having a great premise. Fucking blue balls over here man. Don't want to spend time in a game that isn't finished.
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>>1101369
>implying re:zero wasn't bullcrap
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>>1101369
Oh hey did you manage to get the writing/programming/testing done on supermom?
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>>1101394
Mercy has a handjob and blowjob

Harley has a blowjob

routlette has a handjob and blowjob

blue villian girl can't think of her name right now has a blowjob and sex scene

Lois has a blowjob and handjob

But honestly there really isn't any other complete ones.
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>>1101397
No it was hot garbage but that music with the credit rolls on 15 was one of the best things i've seen in a while because of how out of place it was in this piece of shit
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>>1101369
Fair enough
Now make a good game
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>>1101369
but the story had to get to WHO?
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>>1101345
>>1101398

Trapic is ignoring us.


Trapic why you ignore us.


Trapic answer plz.
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>>1101448
Not to be an asshat but shouldn't Azula be slimmer than she is here?
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>>1101455
No one wants skellies anon. No one wants a whale either.

Also idk just stealing resources.
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>>1101455
She should.
As well as Ty Lee.
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>>1101448
Are you a 4e dev?
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>>1101473
You forgot Mei.
She should be somewhat lithe, from what I remember.

But who cares?
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>>1101448
I hate the way they draw belly buttons
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>>1101448
ultra dyke needs to get dicked
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>>1101474
Nope, dev namefags as (what a surprise!) MITY.
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>>1101474
see >>1101468
Just stealing resources
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>>1101448
Can anyone explain to me why those titties are so fucking underwhelming?
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>>1101528
Copypaste nipples
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>>1101528
The fact the characters are underage in the source material?
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>>1101538
Yes, they look all the same. Bolt on, boring, goofball boobies.

>>1101541
No, that's not it.
But seriously, that guy needs to learn how to draw a nice boob already. This is not very errrotisch. :(
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>>1101528
I'm not sure if that flat version of katara is even meant to be seen. You get to customize between 3 sizes that all get pasted over that base image.
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>>1101546
What do you expect? He's putting out a lot of content for a monthly release. Something's gotta suffer.
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>>1101548
>that fucking goofball again
Oh god, nooooo....

>>1101550
Boobies are important, man. I can't fap to this!
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>>1101548
It's a pity, I really like flat Katara.
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>>1101553
>>that fucking goofball again
>Oh god, nooooo....
I have no idea what you're talking about. I first played this game yesterday.
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>>1101553
I know dog....I know *sobs*
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>>1101562
Katana ate Bara Bara no Mi?
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>>1101448
anybody know if there's a way to get past money flashes for ty lee, get started atall with mai, if you get anything more than naked dyke, what to do after you get anal & are general, & if there's anything more with the slave girl? in the current version of this game?

Also who's that shadow character
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>>1101598
Don't think anymore of ty lee stuff is enabled right now.

All there is so far.

Either the builder, elder with glasses or someone who never appears outside of that scene. Take your pick.
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>>1101632
There may be no content at all for Mai on the slave route.
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>>1101637
There'll probably only be minimal content in the slave route. Considering we'll be playing as Zuko in the love route, I'm pretty sure we'll bang the shit outta Mai.
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>>1101642
Incest romance ehhh.....I'm in. It'll be interesting to get Azula from that angle.
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>>1101642
Just going off what is in the files.

Really wanna know why Mity didn't do everyone like he did Ty Lee.
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>>1101666
Not sure. Still though I wonder how they'll work it into the plot. Zuko is supposed to be dating Mai, how the hell is he gonna romance Azula?
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>>1101682
They're very close and she is socially awkward if you go off her interaction with Chad. Zuko cares about Azula and she him in a "twisted" kinda of way. I feel it would be natural if he was just as sheltered as Azula was that they would end up together.

Also pretty sure Mai and him didn't get together until after he went and helped Aang. Thought it was just brought up when they were little by Azula that they liked each other.

My thing is how he is gonna get together with Ty Lee considering they didn't have any real interaction in the show.

Also will the girl that liked him in the earth kingdom come up in his route or not?
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I would appreciate if in four elements, the snake thing that fucks with your mind and goes hissssssss would be a frog thing that went reeeee instead. That would probably push off the existential dread for a couple of hours.
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>>1101723
It would be interesting to see Azula be super jealous of other women in Zuko's life. I'd like to see the proud princess be brought down low because of jealousy.
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>>1101742
>>1101723
Yeah this makes sense Azula does have a special place set out for Zuko. Especially since she calls him Zuzu.
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>>1101723
Oh yeah Mai got with him at the end of the show. Makes sense there is a window for Azula to swoop in (or for Zuko to shift his attentions). It'll be fun to see Mai's reaction haha!
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>>1101448
The pear body type is really shitty. Its too late now but they really should've lowered the hips and just went with the hourglass shape. Don't get why the girls are built like the grinch
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>>1101742
I feel she would be confident in her place unless/till he put others before her or made them a priority OR made her show respect and kindness to others. If it ever seemed like he would leave her I think she would have a major breakdown though considering her issues.

In progress TM

>>1101775
I feel that if Zuko stayed on the path of trying to destroy Aang that he and Azula would have naturally ended up together and Mai would be the face of Zuko lover if Azula didn't want the public to know she was fucking her brother.

>>1101792
I feel like her reaction will be to treat him how she does the player now but maybe with more emotion. Especially if he ends up acting like Azula.
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How much content is there with Lia in Four Elements right now? Whats the purpose of morality?
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>>1101891
Yeah the Zuko route will be interesting for sure.
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>>1101923
Meh. It would truly be interesting if our actions had consequences.
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>>1101931
Let's hope they do. I'm optimistic until they let me down (which I hope MITY doesn't).
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>>1101956
Until I can ask him why he made it how he has I will always be let down.
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I think something is wrong with MITYs boobs, but I can't say what exactly...
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Is there any way to force scenes to trigger in four elements? I have gotten both of the ingredients that azula asked for but now I am stuck with them as every option is not yet avalible except speaking to the prisoner..
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Did you go to the farm? Are you playing a recent release?
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>>1102009
I'm playing the one in the pastebin, the farm also said not availible
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>>1102011
Congrats, wrong release.
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>>1102019
well, atleast i know now haha thanks for the help
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>>1102006
>something is wrong with MITYs boobs
Something? They're all wrong, and all the same. It's pretty much Prosopagnosia Summer Saga all over again, but with boobies. Shitty balloon boobies that defy gravity.

>inb4 MITY has never had a real pair of boobies in his face
poor mitty...
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how far can you go with kitty in .971?
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>>1102058
Kiss
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>>1099571
That one is .971, do you have .977?
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>>1099489
>Rougue
kek
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>>1101448
That's a cute penis she's holding there.
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>>1102117
She is crushing it.
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>>1098135
what the flying fuck happend to Jay-Marvel doing the art?
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>>1102117
agreed.
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>>1102128
seriously what the fuck happened?
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>>1102133
is hard to recover from a stroke
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>>1102128
Reality?

Could also be that wootch decided to be a little bitch and ask him not to
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>>1100321
the ones in the pastebin dont work
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>>1099191
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WWpZC1bKfX8
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>>1102133
does it still have that annoying minigame?
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>>1102128
Jay marvel couldn't do the full game and the animator he had pussied out because he doesn't like shota. So he went to glass fish to replace them.
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>>1102289
No
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A Zombie's Life 0.6 - delayed - Friday 13th
Hey guys - just to let you know the 0.6 build of A Zombie's Life will be delayed until Friday the 13th. Just acquiring some extra artwork for the build.
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>>1102128
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>>1102499
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>>1102528
WHERE ARE YOU ILIKECARTOONS
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Do people really think this looks good?
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>>1102555
In prison i hope for his shit taste
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>>1102570
It looks cute and hot
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>>1102584
I had to stop when the art literally made her look like an 8 year old.
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>>1102591
You're not gonna like book 3 then...
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>>1102608
>>1102611
quit samefagging
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>>1102570
do better fag
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Moving on with the pics, got this done.
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>>1102675
And the same situation with the other shirt. not new, but figured I could post it again
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>>1102679
well, apparently the attachment fell off while I did the captcha. good stuff.
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Talking about hermione what's the name of the dude who is making a 3d hermione game with the emma watson face
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what was the name of that text based game,the one where you control and breed slaves as the owner of a mansion in a medieval fantasy based setting ?
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>>1102682
Give her a latex catsuit when you're done with this. I need Samus Hermione.
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All the games of akabur hsve cuck shit
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>>1102715
Strive for Power?
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I can't believe akajew never thought about a potion/spell to change hermione into loli,neko or change her skin tone it's just the small things that make a normal game into something better
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>>1102729

That takes work and new art.
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>>1102741
The fire bird took work and new art and look what happend
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>>1102749
it never got finished
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Still waiting for Tropic and/or Trainerfan to release an update.
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Anyone else think the shadow girl in book one was just the spirit woman trying to corrupt the avatar even more?
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>>1102820
I just don't understand why I have to wait for tropic's game
He got his end of the month patreon money already and he's shown he has all the writing and art
So where the fuck is the game
>>
tl;wr: any non grindy trainers?

Only trainer I've played to the end is Princess Trainer, a long time ago. Part of me liked it, but at the same time I found the grinding unappealing. You need to make this number bigger, so click click click and click again and then you can buy a bit more lewd text. I understand it's there to make the game last longer than 10 minutes but I don't enjoy it mechanically.

I played a bit of of Hermione but it seemed to be even grindier.

I see a lot has happened since then. I was wondering if you could recommend any trainers that are mechanically fun. Basically: if you took out the erotica, it would still be enjoyable.
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>>1102570
Kinda put off by the fact that he so blatantly ripped Akabur off, right up to the UI design. The art isn't terrible but he should try to be more original.
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>>1102868
I'll say nothing.

>>1102875
Try to do it yourself then anon. I'm pretty sure the UI is the standard for renpy.
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>>1102875

Only the fucking Ui design? Nigga half of the dialogue with katara is a mix of jasmine/hermione
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>>1102868
And what is considered mechanically fun?
I genuinely don't know.

There's people who complain about the lack of gameplay, others say there's too much gameplay, and some say is not about the amount of gameplay but the kind of gameplay (point and click? rpg combat? fetch quests? just management? action combat?).

If you ask me, I really can tell what is the perfect gameplay for a porn game.
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>>1102875
>>1102890
>>1102634
>>1102652

God damn, akajew, we get it. Quit blatantly samefag crossposting. No one cares who came first, they care who came best. 4e does a great job, and produced more content in a month than you did in the fucking year it took you to reuse assets for shit cucker 34. Get over it.

Besides, book 2 seems like a solid deviation.
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>>1102907
Thank you. I wouldn't have said anything if he wasn't complaining across multiple threads. Come on man take it easy. MITY is working fast and is producing good shit.
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Anyone come across Katara talking about some girl mother eating her daughter pussy to help her get a icicle removed?
>>
i pooped my pants
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>>1101295
>not a foot guy
>not an anal guy
>boobjob meh

gr8, at least we don't have to wait long for more with these guys
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>>1102955
also blowjob
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>>1102907
Hey only >>1102652 → # it's me other anon just copy my comment and post it here
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What the hell happened to Appa and Momo?
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>>1101315
Honestly what I figured. Just change them all to women, it works for other things, why not this?
>>
I'm just refreshing Tropic's patreon every couple hours to see if the game is out, since according to what he posted there's like one bug to fix and that's it, game is ready.
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>>1103160
he also said it'd be done 2016 so you know. take it with some salt
he'll probably post a link here anyway
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>>1103160
Interesting. It'll be weird if Tropic's game is actually good (slim chance but hey it's there).
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Got the combat working mostly, just a couple more bugs to work out.

Continuing with the writing and the artwork, still got a few placeholder art pieces in there and have yet to get a lot of the cg's done but we're definitely getting there.

Trying to find a second artist is proving slightly harder than expected unless I start commissioning a bunch with the small amount sheckles I have, but at least we've got something to show for our hard work so far.

Hopefully if we'll be ready for a demo release soon, in the next few weeks if we're lucky and everything works out.
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>>1103265
I'll look forward to it man. You guys still post over at lemmasoft?
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>>1103265
fag
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>>1103291
that's not very nice anon
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>>1103284
Yeah a bit, mainly just trying to get a bunch of different things working ready for release from all angles so that it works, and allows us to make a shitload more additions after the demo.

Uploaded a proper video now of the battle test to show that we have actually been busy over the holidays.

youtu.be/iPG5vIJMCc8

>>1103291
Lo tropic.
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>>1103331
Nice. Keep it up dog.
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Is Brothel content allowed? Like you run a brothel and sell access to your slaves and you have to manage your brothels finances and expand and get higher quality slaves and all that?

If it's allowed, what games do this and what games are good? I know about Slavemaker.
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>>1103352
I tried SimBro lately and it's suprisingly legit, it even has some corruption content (incomplete at this time)
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>>1103359
I can't get past the shit art
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Can't wait for book 4 in 4E. It will be amazing to have Katara force you to fuck her old lady pussy.
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>>1103375
The biggest dissapointment in 4E is that you're training Katara as Aang and not Sokka.
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>>1103409
>as Aang

No interest in the game. It only works when a villain does it.
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>>1103413
He's kind of a villain in the slave route, you basically start from where the whole series begins and you can immediately cast yourself as a complete asshole.
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>>1103331
That is genuinely terrible. I'm saying that as constructive criticism. There is no need to add such a rudimentary battle style.
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Best girl for yet another year

Are the other devs even trying?
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Do we have any news from "lewd house" ?
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>>1103555
dead
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>>1103566
aw man, too bad; was promising
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>>1103574
if you never get your hopes up, you'll never be disappointed
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>>1103409
There are tons of reasons and that isn't one of them.
1. Sokka can't bend so that would raise her suspicions of what the fuck is going on and 2. Aang would be there to cockblock you.
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>>1103265
neat
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>>1103428
I want the Sengoku Rance audience. Also its clearly unfinished, but thanks for your input. I'm sure others might like it, even if you don't.

>>1103624
Thanks.
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>>1103265
Good you're still working on it. Good luck
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>>1103655
Thanks. Once we get more of the art and animations sorted it will resemble a ww2 style sengoku rance, but very very story heavy.
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>>1103663
How do you feel about the UK bill that fucks up porn devs in the UK?
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>>1103673
I give no shits.

I mean, yeah its pretty shit, but it hasn't passed yet I don't think. However, in terms of what we are creating; we are creating an adult game featuring a historical viewpoint of the second world war from alternative timelines with strong mature themes throughout.

Its not porn if its art. Or some shit like that.

Pic very much related.
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>>1103678
>Its not porn if its art. Or some shit like that.
you are more stupid than I thought
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>>1103713
There's no law in the UK stopping this at the moment. It's not being stupid, its being honest. No one is going to arrest me any time soon now, unless I do something truly stupid.
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>>1103741
I mean that you are retarded with the idea that your game has any ressemblance to art, not that you will or not be arrested
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>>1103663
Rance shit yeah. The MC's personality won't be hard locked though right? I don't want to play a a mega-douche the entire time.
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>>1103803
But most Rance type games almost force the MC to be an ultra-douche.
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>>1103803
Nah the MC is nothing like Rance, but you have a shit load of options if you really want to go down that route. Its more of a VN than a trainer, but it will have trainer elements if you look for them.
>>
Tropic releasing his shit when?
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>>1103160
>there's like one bug to fix and that's it, game is ready

https://desuarchive.org/aco/thread/854840/#856800
>Fri 16 Sep 2016
>I was going to release it at end of august but then I got sent https://itch.io/jam/lewd-jam-2016
and realized
>what if I make BB actually a good full game and win a billion trillion dollars and be famous forever
>So now i'm taking the time to make it good and bug free

https://desuarchive.org/aco/thread/886926/#891025
> Fri 30 Sep 2016
>Renpy did a major update on the 17th, I had to start my gui over from scratch and remake the game
You remember that major update that caused every renpy dev to have to start their over from scratch, right?
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>>1103841
So you can choose not to make everyone's lives miserable? Fantastic.
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>>1103945
t. cuck
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>>1103955
Yeah I agree with this guy. Most protagonists are douche cucks case in point seeds of chaos.
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>>1103959
Poor choice by the seeds of chaos dev. His game has good artwork.
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>>1103959
Really I liked that game. It has forced ntr? Fuck.
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>>1103902
So Tropic's not going to release an update today?
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>>1103974
I'm not saying he won't, I'm saying his track record is... less than promising.

This is, what, the 5th time the game is "basically finished"?
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>>1103982
Dammit.
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>>1103902
Could he not have reverted to a previous version and finished it?
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>>1104065
he could have
he didn't
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>>1104065
He literally had to go out of his way to "have to start over from scratch".
That is the point.
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>>1104081
the point is not that tropic is retarded?
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>>1104095
I'm pretty sure he's not retarded, but afraid of success. That nigga's never gonna release.
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>>1104103
Or he is a lazy lying fuck.
His folder properties screenshot might have been taken from a folder with his personal collection of fag porn.
No real reason to believe him.
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>>1104290
>Or he is a lazy lying fuck.
I mean, that part is implied in ether case.
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>>1102591
>I had to stop when the art literally made her look like an 8 year old.
Pssh, she's clearly 12 there. Your pedo-meter needs adjusting.
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>>1104303
Ergo, Trapik is a fag.
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>>1102570
Yes fuck off
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>>1102591
I can't wait for loli toph
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>>1104341
Book 3 is gonna be for you.
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>>1104103
>afraid of success
>implying this isn't retarded
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>>1104290
But he was posting cg all the time as it came in
so something has to exist anon
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>>1104363
Dammit tropic.... I believed.
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Hey /aco/. I've posted on here a couple of times about this Midna game I'm working on, and I'd like to field some opinions on the writing of the lewd scenes. For example, this is the first major one that happens, so it is a lot less sexual than some of the stuff that comes after. If you think it sucks that's fine, but some constructive criticism would be nice.

"Midna holds up a hand, signaling your silence. She gets up from her loveseat, walking over to her bedside table."
"Rifling through its top drawer, she procures a piece of paper and a quill."
"As Midna turns to face you, the pen drops from her fingers. It clatters against the flagstones, coming to a stop a little under her bed."
"Midna makes a little noise of frustration, before getting down on her hands and knees to retrieve the pen."
"And try as you might, your eyes keep swiveling back to her prostate form."

"Resting on her knees, Midna lowers her head to the ground so she can get a good view of the quill."
"Midna arches her back, accentuating her already impressive features, allowing you to clearly see the shape of her curvy backside"
"While Midna's clothing has no problems containing her slim waist, it cannot do the same for her behind."
"Below her waist the flesh bulges outwards, a raw display of health and fertility."
"Each of her broad hips is graced with a perfect asscheek; two crown jewels demanding of worship."
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(cont.)


"As Midna tries in vain to reach for the quill, her struggles cause her butt to quiver and strain."
"Oblivious, Midna continues to present herself to you, her conservative dress failing miserably."
"Speaking of dresses, the cut of her robes does not seem to have been designed to be viewed from this angle."
"The hem of her robes has hitched itself just a little above her knees, giving you a tease of the soft swelling of her thighs."
"You catch yourself thinking about how easy it would be to spread those thighs, to catch a glimpse of the sweet treasure between them."
"You become aware of a dull pressure, and looking down, realize that your ample cock is currently pressing upon your belt, eager to be free."
"You shake your head in a valiant attempt to regain your senses. However, your attempt is foiled by what happens next."

"On the floor Midna grunts, straining to reach the quill. With a huff of exasperation, she lowers her torso so she can reach farther."
"This of course causes her to raise her ass, pushing the robes further up her backside."
"As of right now, your full attention is focused on the unintentional show Midna is giving you."
"On the other hand, you recognize that continuing to lust after someone that would jail you for advancing on them is probably not a good idea."

That's the first chunk of it anyway. After this the path diverges depending on user choice.
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>>1104452
>>1104453
I like it but why do you say its instead of her?

Just seems weird to me.
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>>1104470
and if you are referring to the table why not use the instead?
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>>1104452
Looks good, don't fill the game with femdom shit and you will do fine
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>>1104453
>>1104452
What are you going to do about an artist? Are we playing link? Has potential so far.
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>>1104452
>>1104453
Honestly criticism that is constructive for writing is hard to come by, usually people don't have much to say unless something really stands out as bad. If people don't say much then that means it's fine.
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>>1104452
I really look forward to this
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>>1104363
Yeah.
But he posted around 10? 20? cg, while claiming that he had 300+ unique CG.
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Anyone got the new build of Fairy Tale Adventure?
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>>1104452
Sure, I'll just cite the lines I think could be improved, followed by how I would change it.

>"Midna holds up a hand, signaling your silence...
Midna holds up a hand, signalling you to silence...

>"Each of her broad hips is graced with a perfect asscheek; two crown jewels demanding of worship."
This is just too much, in my opinion.

>"Oblivious, Midna continues to present herself to you, her conservative dress failing miserably."
[...]her dress failing completely to cover her up.

>"As of right now, your full attention is focused on the unintentional show Midna is giving you."
As of right since the scene started, really...

It's generally fine, though I think it gets a bit too flowery in places - too many adjectives repeating the same information. Yeah, she's slim-waisted with a great big butt, oki doki.
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>>1104764
i think he just isn't a native speaker
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>>1104764
>Midna holds up a hand, signalling you to silence...
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>>1104862
>>1104862
>>1104862
new thread
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>>1099028

spreading her ass or fucking it if she's slutty enough
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