RAWs are out!
http://imgur.com/a/ZU1Jp
Looks like Momo couldn't beat the cock
>>161850908
It's up to Lilia and Haru to beat the cock.
Okay, this is funny.
>>161850908
Well, she doesn't. Not at all.
>>161851091
Well, this is a situation that we will see very often. At least until they realize that threesome or some other-some is an option.
>>161851104
>The cock: ∞
>Everyone else: 0
Can it be stopped?
And to think that some non-ironically though that she would beat the cock.
You can't beat the cock. Nope.
>>161851064
lilia can't beat it if she never gets it
Momo :O
Yuuto :|
Other girls :/
>>161851248
Yeah, nobody can beat the cock.
>>161851192
Lumi looks sad as fuck, Misaki looks like she wishes she was getting it, Haru wants them to shut it.
I loved the part where Lilia realizes that they got dicked.
>>161851361
Don't.
>>161851064
>It's up to Lilia and Haru to beat the cock.
Dude, Lilia is already gone.
Momo's quite the vocalist. He should have drawn a frame of birds taking off from the trees.
>>161851361
>Yuuto
He is YOUTA. Dude don't forget letter 太 in protagonist's name is Okamoto's trademark.
>>161851380
David beat Goliath. Sometimes a slave can kill a king.
>>161851453
She must have really liked it. It is a shame she lost instantly.
>taking off her gloves
Pride comes before the fall.
>>161851362
Not the cock man
Is 18 translated?
>>161851696
yes, check the archives. The extra ch and the additional pages added to a previous ch from the tankoubon haven't been translated though, I think.
I want that girl that Youta supposedly loves to show up. Pussy means nothing to him so it is likely that he won't be such a wimp. I hope she is the type who doesn't mind him fucking many females.
>>161851808
>Only found the script
>Desuarchive search is broken 23 hours a day, 7 days a week
Thanks anyways.
>>161852121
Sorry, I meant the script.
>>161852075
>Stated to be similar to Lumi
>confirmed to have the same height.
>her body proportion are hidden for some reason
Why I have feeling that she will have even identical body proportion as Lumi and there will be some twist behind that.
>>161851091
I expected her to lose to pleasure but I didn't expect her to be a champion screamer. If they fucked in the city everyone would find out.
i want to see the script
>even when being "raped" Youta teases Momo
>>161851677
>>161850792
Jesus fuck, I bet Lyn's drawing pen has "Ugly Stick" written on it in chinese or something.
>>161854282
Please stop bullying Lyn, he just does his own thing.
Who goes yandere first?
>>161854085
Damn, this needs copy paste on this page, now!
I can't believe that Momo lost to the cock. I was rooting for her and thought she had a chance.
>>161854699
Is there a reason he purposely draws this bad? I mean we know he can draw non-shit sometimes, like that manga with the nympho-girl who couldn't get enough of her boyfriends dick. Or maybe that was actually drawn by one of his assistants? Is it just laziness?
>>161854767
The thing is, I don't think anyone is going yandere anytime soon. We just don't have enough evidence to conclude that yandere will happen.
Once he mates with girl, she ends up completely mushy and subservient to him.
Even in this chapter, everyone is at worst annoyed at them doing it right where everyone can hear them *and* while they're trying to sleep.
Even Lumi, who was slightly horrified at first when she realized he's not exclusively her, more or less gave up on monopolizing him when she started touching herself while peeping at him going at it with other girls.
>>161854767
Dude, at this rate even if some of them was yandere, she will not have a chance to go anything but deredere. Luckily given by traditional eroges, yanderes are usually most sweetest dere. So simply watch which girl is most lovey dovey and willing to share, but oversee that sharing. Then you probably found our hidden yandere.
>>161851064
>Lilia
The cock won´t be able to beat you if you never get it.
>>161852305
She's literally realworld Lumi
>>161854767
Misaki or Momo. Lumi seems intent on being an NTR queen.
>>161853826
Youta teasing the girls is great. I hope he gets more creative the more he gets to do it.
Calling it now, Lilia will die mid-fuck
>>161855675
Haru is also close to death.
>>161851091
>How to write a sex scene by Lynn
>have girl gush a torrent of vanilla milkshake from between their legs
>have their eyes go hazy
>have male present pens
>"I want to taste/feel this"
>have male insert penis
>close-up of face
>OMYGODWHATISTHISWHATISTHISOHMYGOD
>have girl make very pained O face
>guy nuts, girl passes out
Rinse and repeat. Honestly this is really boring. Both as a story and as porn.
>>161852121
Link to the script? I only found the raw chapter.
>>161855866
You completely left out the part where Youta bullies them/makes cheeky remarks during the sex. That's the fun bit.
>>161855866
You have right only in one thing. It really needs start to have bigger variety in action. So far we really getting just either Youta performing cunnilingus on girls, or instant vaginal insertion. It's simply reverse extreme to traditional borderlines, where you get anything besides insertion. Here you get insertion but, mostly nothing else. The Golden exception is Lilia's blowjob/deepthroad which I slowly starting see as the hottest thing in entire manga so far. Hopefully now after having most of the girls deflowered, they start being little more carry out experiments. For long time I dreamed about Okamoto drawing paizuri action. Time to grant my dream.
>>161852305
She is Lumi, she will wear her serial killer outfit and kill one of the girls after they become to possessive of the cock.
>>161855866
>>161856568
The sex is plot mandated. In addition Youta needs to breed them before they pass out from pleasure and become completely limp. Emphasis on the BREEDING part, since he said from the very beginning that he had no choice but to cum inside.
The purpose of the act is to grant the girls protection from sudden death, and to procreate.
He even says during his first time with Lumi that he can't give her too much foreplay, or else they'll both pass out.
>>161857395
Actually, everything is just about characters' inexperience. For example, Lilia was able to cum without passing out. I believe that girls' reactions will be radically different when their second time comes.
>>161857395
>Emphasis on the BREEDING part
Your reaction once some of girls start unexpectedly vomiting?
>>161850792
Do you think he's fucked them toon soon? It kinda feels like there's less to look forward to if he fucks all the heroines so early
>>161850792
>chapter resume
>>161860599
I thought the exact same thing. That's funny.
Oh, don't be such a big baby! Misaki took the dick inside of her OK, and she's tiny!
>>161854767
Lumi might snap
>>161857395
>The sex is plot mandated
The sex plot is dumb and Lynn is not the artist that can write an arousing scene. No matter what story contrivances mandate the sex scenes, that's no excuse for having Zero imagination and the inability to make the scene look good.
You have hentai artists like Oohari Sunset that always follow the same format (Girl sucks dick > titjob > vaginal > doggystyle/reverse cowgirl > pass out) but he knows how to frame that setup each way to make the feel distinct from the others. Lynn can only draw one sex scene and it's the exact same one from Kimi wa.
>>161860838
>Oohari Sunset
You forgot anal
>>161850792
I just came into this thread and manga.
I've a question.
Does he fuck that party of 4 girls in his way to the castle?
Also, I've yet to read it but what other manga would you classify as similar to this one?
>>161860838
>a hentai artist that has been around for more than a decade thinks more and has more experience with drawing and setting up sex scenes than a traditional mangaka
Please. That artist used to do one page shorts and evolved to do books with only paizuri that wasn't set up well. He learned well.
>>161861156
>Does he fuck that party of 4 girls in his way to the castle?
Simply said. three from five introduced heroines are not virgins anymore.
>>161861649
Which one is still?
How long til the next booty-kall?
>>161860588
I think it's obvious that fucking the main girls is something to get out of the way before continuing the story.
>>161861999
Kalls are bros. They don't touch your bitches.
>people unironically thought she could beat the cock
>>161852305
Haven't you figured out yet that Youta is trapped in one of his dad's H-Games (VR edition)?
>>161861518
Lynn has been around for just as long and tried to interject sex into his work so constantly he does not get that excuse. And if you're going to bank part of your series Appeal on having sex scenes maybe you should rethink that if you yourself are on able to draw good sex scenes.
VR-game? really?
>>161863004
And Lilia, but she already had blowjob and cunnilingus.
>>161862234
>>161862528
Are you imply that this will turn out to be manga version of Westworld?
>>161863116
In the first chapter some classmate asks Youta about his dad's job and he says that he's programming games.
His father forced him to go through with kedno for 10/10 sword technique.
The whole world in which Youta is trapped is as stupid as a H-Game with stupid sex inserted every now and then and a race of faceless bald guys that rape all cuties. Furthermore the cuties will only live when raped by Youta, and die when defiled by the baldies.
What else could it be?
>>161863223
Well... actual isekai. Don't think too much about it.
>>161863401
Well he was abducted however there was a certain Goddess that welcomed him
>>161862182
This. Kall did nothing wrong.
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