Dumping the story of a cute butcher.
So this is Usagi Chopped huh?
>>161321505
>Getting caught
If you want to kill people, you should really have a plan.
it's a 9/10 in my edgymeter. I'll keep reading it.
Didn't someone dump this already?
I mean, like last week.
>>161322063
>>161322022
Really? Wasn't me, though.
Please tell me there are gonna be more chapters.
>>161322283
Considering the ending, doubtful, it's pretty much a closed short story.
>>161322008
She will get chopped up wont she?
>>161322562
I'm really hoping not.
>>161322441
The ending was too.......Cheesy, there is no way in hell that she wouldn't resent him, also it was too convenient for her to just happen to see a picture from him.Oh well, it was a good, short read. I need more stories like this.
>>161322562
>>161322779
Well someone got chopped up so im satisfied.
>>161322870
Thanks for sharing.
>>161322710Not in any way related to Zanuff, but if you enjoyed this sort of short story you should read the Akai Mi Hajiketa anthology, it's 2 volumes of very nice short stories of 20-40 pages. The art is very well done too
>>161322870
>liquids
she must have enjoyed it
>>161322965Thank you, anon. I will check it out, I have been going through a drought of good series to read. Cheers!
Hurry the fuck up, OP.
>>161322681
NANI??
>>161323184
There is death penalty?
>>161323494
>completely white hair at 48
>>161323437
y tho
>>161323563
Maybe the stress got to him over those years.
>>161323563
You are a murderer and feel like you ruined the life of the kid you love.
Stress does a huge impact on you.
You should see what happened to Mexico Minister of defense in 2 years.
>>161323607
>inb4 she becomes a murderer just like him
>>161323691
He seems pretty at peace with himself though. If anything, seeing the girl again one day into his execution is probably more stress that he's had in years.
>>161323819
Thanks for sharing this anon
arigatou for the dump
it was cute
>>161323819
thanks anon. It was a little edgy for me but it was pretty good.
>>161323691
How do you go from this.
>>161323819
I liked it.
>>161323930
To this?
>>161323930
TO THIS?
>>161323819
Thanks OP.
>>161323930
>>161323976
PRI coming back to power does wonders.
>>161322824
I hate torture so much, yet why do I feel that this is totally ok in her case?
>>161323976
drugs
>>161324030
Because she's only presented to you as a near-heartless abusive parent with an especially cute daughter.
>>161323494
I don't know how death penalty works but do prisoners really wait 10 whole fucking years before they die?
Kind of lame, actually. No real pay off. 5/10
>>161322681
Literally manga version of that wikihow pic.
>>161324158
shitty laws are shitty. that, or they want to torment them before they kick the bucket
>>161324158
If you take it to the court of appeals, it can easily stretch that long. He might have done things like that to buy time if he was trying to make a better picture for her.
>>161324194
I sort of agree. Would of worked wonderfully as a one volume kind of deal though.
>tfw when you need a paper thin happy ending to salvage the rest of your happy day
>>161324375
For sure, you would have gotten more attached to the characters. The little girl would have been a character, instead of just a plot device. We could have seen the mom's side of the story. It could have been a masterpiece. The potential was there.
>>161323819
Today OP was a pretty good guy, thanks!
>>161324141
What kind of an asshole one should be to torture own innocent child?
>>161323079
>>161323819
I REALLY like this touch
>>161321446
the whole thing reminds of a short story about a pyscho killer that somehow, ends living in the house of his last victims and taking care of the kid they had, the girl is completly aware the guy killed her parents and the guy wants to kill her but never does.
>>161323819
Well this was nice, I really liked that he turn himself, usually this kind of story go all edgy and the guy just run away with the girl to be "happy" somewhere else, while clearly going crazy.
At least the mother deserved part of what happen to her.
>>161321664
Yes, daughter time!
>>161322710
>no way in hell that she wouldn't resent him
Well kids can resent too, she probably hated her mother at that point, and even if the guy kill her mother, he probably was the first person to truly take care of her on a good way, I bet that at first she resent him, but as that time passed (10 years after all) she came find her peace with the inccident, and actually grateful for saving her back then, either from dying from cold, suicide intentions or the most cynic possibility, freeing her from her mother.