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God tier novel writing here (only real novels for mature and smart people, no cheap LNshit allowed.)
I'll start.
>Not even while being a machine girl can she be left with wet clothes. As a change of clothes was necessary, she lay a bathrobe around her supposedly perfect body and headed for the bathroom. It had been a while since anyone other than Oscar regularly used it, so in a lapse of memory, he entered it without knocking and ended up seeing her while she was had not changed yet.
>“Ah, I’m sor… ry… eh?”
>He swallowed his breath due to perplexity.
>“EEEH?!”
>What was reflected in Oscar’s eyes was a sight more bewitchingly beautiful than any naked woman. Dripping golden hair. Beautiful blue orbs of a dimension that would not soften even within a painting. The finely-shaped lips just below them. A flesh body with a slender neck, an outstanding collarbone, plump breasts, and feminine curves.
>Her artificial arms consisted of metal rings from the shoulders to the fingertips. But it was only them. Despite the many scratches, other than the arms, the rest was surprisingly real skin. With that delicate body, she did not seem at all like a mechanical doll, but a relatively normal human being.
>With everything he had believed in until then being mantled over by the shocking revelation, Oscar tried to confirm what he was seeing many times.
>“Master.” Violet called with a voice that seemed to be judging him as he continued to ogle in astonishment.
>“UAAAAAAH! UAAAAAH! UAAAAAHAAAAAH!”
>Part of the outcome of that incident was Oscar’s screaming. The other was him half-crying while going beet-red, after having yelled on top of his lungs, frantically inquiring, “Are you human, after all?!”
>Wrapping a towel around herself, Violet plainly commented, “Master is, truly, a troublesome person.” Her cheeks were rose-dusted as she muttered, her face a little lowered.
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>>161261344
Agree, god tier writing. Author trapped reader in false premise and misdirection, along with Oscan himself. Intentionally telling false premise, just to reveal that it was false later - however it was actually not fully false and what you believe true will be overturned as false later.
The first chapter, the except from which OP posted, was pretty great - i have doubts KyoAni could adapt it properly though. Too soul crushing, to make it justice most of the episode would have been dedicated not to violet but portraying Oscars past.
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>>161262029
Episode 1 is already completely different from the novel, as usual with Kyoani adaptations. Brace for anime original characters and plot.
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>>161261344
>"EEEH?!"
>"UAAAAAAAH!"
>no cheap LNshit allowed
ok
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>>161262369
Episode 1 is from novel, except it shown the later parts of the novel. Either they decided to make episode 0 as a teaser introducing Violet showing her circumstances in past, or they want to adapt it chronologically (which i doubt very much). So Ep 1 probably should follow the order novel is written.
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>>161261344
Come on this is literally a single fanservice fragment in entire novel (at least in 9 chaps translated so far). When will you faggots stop forcing it?
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>>161262369
Nice try, retard. Episode 1 is completely from the novel.
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>>161264656
Don't use sage at /a/.
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>>161261344
I want to eat your pancreas
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>>161261344
That's some professional quality translation right there.
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>>161262993
It's a typical /lit/ tactic, just ignore it.
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