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Yuragi Yuuna 70

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Late again. Anyways.

[Side] Please look! .....aaaahhhh
70: Yuuna on Ice
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>>159594354
Ah tis the time
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[Right] The Yuragi Inn is surprsingly huge
"The lake behind the mountain is frozen over!"

"There was a lake?"
"I found it on the way back from the waterfall with Sagiri-san!"
"You're seriously going to the lake on such a cold morning...!"

"Hey hey! How frozen is it?"
"If we get on, would it break?"
"It looked like it would be okay"
"Huuuh!"

"Then maybe we can go skating!?"
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"Whoaaa, it really is frozen!"

"It looks like we can really skate!"

"But the center part looks pretty thin"
"So try not to stray away from the edge"
"Okay!"

"This is the first time I'll be skating!"
"Can you teach me how to do it?
"S...sure"

"Haauaugh!?"
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>>159594354
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Fixed a bad TL

"Sagiri-chaaan!?"

"S...sorry, Fuyuzora Kogarashi......!"
"N...no, well, I'm glad you're not hurt"
"To be honest... I was all about training in my childhood"
"So I'm inexperienced in fun things like skating and skiing...!"
"Oh is that so"

"Oh that's fine"
"This is my first time too!"

"Then then, maybe Hibari should try and glide too..."
"H-Hibari!? Be careful, okay!?"
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"Whoaaaa!?"

"Y...you're amazing, Hibari!"
"H-Hibari had someone take her skating every year!"

"Yes! Hibari....Hibari is now..."
"Beating Sagiri-chan!!"

"Kogarashi-kun, have you glided around before?"
"Show us!"
"Yeah, I can"
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>>159594983
>>159595178
>you will never get you face stuffed and throttled by Sagiri's pantyhose covered puss
It hurts to live sometimes.
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"Th...that's!"

"A camel spin!?"
"A triple toe loop!?"
"An Ina Bauer!?"
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"Wow woooow!"
"As usual, what the hell are you...!?"
"I was possessed by a prodigy figure skater some time ago..."
"Kogarashi-san, that was amazing!"
"S...so cool...!"

"I...I'll try skating too!"
"Sure! Come on, Yuuna!"
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"I..."
"I..."
"I...I can't mooove...!"
"Y-yeah, leave it to me!"

"There aren't any railings here, huh... hold my hands for a bit"
"Wha wha...?"
"Hand!?"
"But like..."

"Nothing to be embarrassed about!"
"That's how he first taught me too"
"I-is that so!"

"O...okay then"

"Pardon me..."
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"P...please go ahead"
"Okaay, so first you stand on top the ice!"
"Stick your heels down and spread your toes into a V-shape"

"Oh, you're stable now"
"Then try stepping"
"O...okay"

"I...I see!"
"If Hibari pretended that she couldn't skate, then she could have Kogarash...!"
"But now she can't say she can't skate anymooore!!"
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>>159595548
DON'T STOP US NOW
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>>159595548
Fabulous.
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"Teheheh... I slipped!"
"This is haarrd"

"Hey hey, Sagiri-chan!"
"Let's ask Hibari-chan how to skate together!"
"Uh... Hibari will teach Sagir...?"
"I... I guess"

"Hibari... can you?"

"Th...the... the day has finally come"
"For Hibari to teach Sagiri-chan something..."

"S...sure thing, Hibari'll teach you!"
"Just leave it to her, you two!" [TN: This whole third pronoun thing is annoying]
"Yaaaaay!"
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"...hm"
"This is kinda fun once you get the hang of it"

"Sagiri-chan, you're able to skate so quickly!"
"Now Sagiri-chan is..."

"Hibari-chan, I'm glad you taught us!"
"You're really good at skating!"

"Koyuzu-chan...!"
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Cheers, anon
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Sagiri in a chapter without Hibari WHEN?
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>>159597121
Never, he'll force Hibari even more now.
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>>159594354
>tfw the releases on BT are incomplete and in spanish
why lift
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"Hibari-chan, do you wanna be a professional skater?"
"O-ohhh"
"Hibari isn't that good"

"But she really idolizes figure skaters!"
"Hibari would like to skate around in a pretty dress"
"I get you, I so get you!"
"I saw it on TV yesterday!"

"Okay! I can imitate just the dress!"
"Ah... okay!"

"Wah...!"
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>>159598500
You're looking in the wrong place.
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>>159599164
please enlighten me
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"Wooow! Hibari-san, that's amazing!"
"Let's have you guys wear some too!"

"Kogarashi-saaan!"

"Am I actually skating now?"
"Yeeaah"
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>>159599330
Delicious Yunna armpit
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>>159595548
10/10
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"I know that this fabric is skin colored..."
"But when you look at it from a distance, doesn't it look like we're extremely naked...?"
"Ohh, you're worrying too much, Sagiri-chan!"
"It's amazing, Sagiri-san!"

"Yuuna-chan can skate pretty well!"
"You can skate on your own about now, right?"
"Really!?"

"Hm...?"

"H...hey!"
"If you go too far deep..."

"The ice...!!"
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>>159595548
Kogarashi was born to make history.
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"You guys! Get back quickly!!"

"O-okay!"
"Ukyaaah!?"
"Come on, Hibari!"
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"Huh...?"

"W...watch out!!"
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Double spread
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>>159600514
HIBARI
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"Ukyaaah!?"
"Why the hell does this happeeeeen!?"
"I-I'm sorry! I just panicked!"
"I-it's so cooold!"
"T-turn them back to normal now, Koyuzu!!"
[Side] Does this even happen!?
You should have fun skating in a properly maintained rink.
That's one piece of common sense that Koyuzu learned today.
[Bottom] Next issue, that person is to Kogarashi's place from Kyoto...!?
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>New resident intensifies
Anyways colors
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>>159600420
>>159600514
>Oh no! Someone might get hurt by the skates, better remove all their clothing!

I don't know what's going on, but i'm in.
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>>159595548
10/10 would be in his harem
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>>159600640
>[Bottom] Next issue, that person is to Kogarashi's place from Kyoto...!?
Finally.
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Now we wait for TS anon again.
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>>159601778
Thank you.
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>>159594354
hardcore porn like this should be banned from a childrens magazine
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>>159601778
I've been working on it. Are you sure you want glide instead of skate here?

>>159595178
>>159595204

I know they used different words for skate and glide in the japanese, but it sounds a bit odd in english.
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>>159602137
Let's just go with skate for consistency.
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>>159602208
Alright.
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>>159601380
>Powerthrusting his face into her vagina
wew lad
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>>159601358
Pantyhose are the best.
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>>159600640
>[Bottom] Next issue, that person is to Kogarashi's place from Kyoto...!?

So, Karura or Matora visiting or moving in? I wouldn't think that Karura would move in this quickly as they're getting close to the end of the school year and between school years would be the best time for that.

On the other hand, she had a decent reception at the inn with only Sagiri holding an obvious grudge, and moving now would ensure she'd be at the inn for White Day without her being blatant about fishing for chocolate from Kogarashi.
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>>159594354
nice meaty thighs
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Is there any place that has the uncensored draws now that bzland is down?
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>>159601778
thanks
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>>159600627
H I B A R I
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I'll go ahead and start posting what I've done so far for checking.
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>>159608488
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>>159608524
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>>159608585
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>>159608618
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>>159608675
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>>159608699
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>>159608736
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>>159608761
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>>159608807
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>>159608828
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>>159608860
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>>159608916
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>>159608942
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>>159608982
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>>159595851
Talking about oneself in 3rd person sounds really fucking weird in English.
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>>159608488
Sorry just got back. I'll check it now
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>>159608524
pan 1 bub 1: The lake behind the mountain got frozen!
pan 2 bub 3: You're actually going to the waterfall on such a cold morning...!
pan 4 bub 1: Then can we go skating!?

>>159608585
pan 4 bub 1: This is my first time skating!
pan 4 bub 2: Can you teach me how to do it, Sagiri-san?

>>159608675
pan 3 bub 3: To be honest... all I did was train as a child,
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>>159596588
>"Now Sagiri-chan is..."
That makes close to no sense.

Try:
>That's one thing about Sagiri-chan that I really...

>"Hibari-chan, I'm glad you taught us!"
yokatta can mean good in addition to glad, like in the case here. See http://www.weblio.jp/content/%E3%82%88%E3%81%8B%E3%81%A3%E3%81%9F
>It's thanks to Hibari-chan's awesome teaching!
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>>159608828
pan 1 (SFX bubble) (optional): Squeeze
pan 1 bub 3: Stick your heels down and spread your toes wide, so they look like V's.
pan 3 bub 3: But now it's too late to say she can't skaaate!!

>>159608860
pan 3 bub 2: Let's both get Hibari-chan to teach us to skate!

>>159609403
Oh hey, you're late. Might as well help me proofread this thing as you TLC.
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>>159598572
>"But she really idolizes figure skaters!"
Please don't use pronouns when Hibari talks about herself. It's really awkward.
>"Hibari would like to skate around in a pretty dress"
Hibari would like to trying skating in a pretty dress too...
>"Okay! I can imitate just the dress!"
I know! If it's just the dress, I can help!

>>159599330
>"Am I actually skating now?"
Am I skating properly?
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>>159600112
>"Yuuna-chan can skate pretty well!"
Yuuna-chan can skate pretty well too now!

>"You can skate on your own about now, right?"
You should be able to skate on you own by now too, right?
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>>159608916
>>159609584
1) I agree that has to change.
2) I would go with "You're a really good teacher, Hibari-chan" there.

>>159609584
Don't get me started on those pronouns. But consistency must stay consistent, even if it's awkward as fuck
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>>159609909
Still working on the last page.
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>>159594354
>Yuuna will never sit on your face
Why live?
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>>159594609
Wondering why 池 was translated to lake instead of pond?
Also, this is 滝行: https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%BB%9D%E8%A1%8C Remember how Yuuna was training under the waterfall to get a better grasp of her esp?
Therefore:
>"I found it on the way back from the waterfall with Sagiri-san!"
Sagiri-san and I noticed it on our way back from meditating under the waterfall.
"I'm amazed you'd go to the waterfall on such a cold morning...!
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>>159594958
>"So try not to stray away from the edge"
"stay" "away" seems redundant.
- So try not to stray too far from the shore.

>>159595178
>"To be honest... I was all about training in my childhood"
>"So I'm inexperienced in fun things like skating and skiing...!"
To be honest... I've trained day in and day out since childhood.
And I don't have experience with leisure activities like skating or skiing...
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>>159595204
>"Kogarashi-kun, have you glided around before?"
You've skated before right, Kogarashi-kun?
>"Yeah, I can"
Sure.
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>>159595851
>"Okaay, so first you stand on top the ice!"
Alright, let's start with standing on the ice!
>"Then try stepping"
Then let's try taking a step.
>"But now she can't say she can't skate anymooore!!"
But it's too late for Hibari to say she can't skate!!
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>>159596298
>"Uh... Hibari will teach Sagir...?"
Uh... Hibari teaching Sagiri-chan...?
>"Th...the... the day has finally come"
>"For Hibari to teach Sagiri-chan something..."
C-can't believe the day would come...
where Hibari would be teaching Sagiri-chan...
>"Hibari... can you?"
Hibari... Would you mind?
>"Just leave it to her, you two!" [TN: This whole third pronoun thing is annoying]
Just replace pronoun with her name whenever possible... Consistency means sticking to doing it poorly.
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>>159609025
>It's amazing, Sagiri-san! <-- the vague pronoun sounds kinda weird in English...
You look amazing, Sagiri-san!
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>>159600640
>""Why the hell does this happeeeeen!?"
Just why does this keep happening!?
>"T-turn them back to normal now, Koyuzu!!"
Hurry and turn as back to normal, Koyuzu!!

>You should have fun skating in a properly maintained rink.
Skating should be enjoyed in a properly maintained ring.

>[Bottom] Next issue, that person is to Kogarashi's place from Kyoto...!?
Next issue, that person comes to Kogarashi's place from Kyoto...!?
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>>159608524
Fixed?
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>>159608585
Fixed?
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>>159608675
Fixed?
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>>159608699
Fixed?
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>>159610936
Yeah uh, I'll wait til you finish before I check everything again.
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>>159608828
Fixed?
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>>159608860
Fixed.
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>>159609661
>2) I would go with "You're a really good teacher, Hibari-chan" there.

Where exactly does this go?
>>
>>159611465
pan 4 bub 1
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>>159608916
Fixed?
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>>159608942
Fixed?
>>
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>>159608982
Fixed?
>>
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>>159609025
Fixed?
>>
>>159611648
pan 4 bub 2: And you're really good at skating!
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>>159609942
And final pages
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>>159611718
pan 2 bub 1: Yuuna-chan can skate pretty well now too!
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>>159611778
Actually
>Yuuna-chan can skate pretty well now!
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>>159611750
Fixed.
>>
>>159611770
pan 3 bub 2: Why does this keep happening!?
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>>159611778
>>159611791
Fixed
>>
>>159611365
pan 3 bub 2: Let's get Hibari-chan to teach us how to skate!
pan 5 bub 1: I can't believe the day has come...
pan 5 bub 2: When Hibari would be teaching Sagiri-chan...
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>>159611797
fixed.
>>
>>159611836
>pan 5 bub 1: I can't believe the day has come...
>pan 5 bub 2: When Hibari would be teaching Sagiri-chan...

Seeing as this is Hibari thinking, how about:

Hibari can't believe the day has come...
When she would be teaching Sagiri-chan...
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>>159611793
pan 3 bub 2: That's the one thing about Sagiri-chan I really...
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>>159611896
Yeah that works, thanks for catching that consistency mistake

>>159611904
Revision then
>That's the one thing about Sagiri-chan that really...
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>>159611926
>>159611836
Alright.
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>>159611904
>>159611926
fixed.
>>
>>159612027
That's actually it. Zip away then head to bed.
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>>159612105
Okay.

http://www24.zippyshare.com/v/gfcgi0nJ/file.html

Then with that, good night.
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>>159612202
Thanks anon, have a nice nap
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