You know (what) to do. >Boku no Hero Mode: You can't

Arthur from pbs but all the characters are loli versions of themselves.
Nothing else changes.

tom and jerry but they both have DBZ powers

I had written out something that I had a dream about the other day, but it was too edgy and cringey to post. I don't think I should write.

>>159444444

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An indie gamedev gets isekai'd into his own unfinished game. He knows majority of its inner workings, but everything past first chapter of plot is complete mystery to him, as it unfolds without his involvement. Still, mechanics don't change, they merely evolve, so he still knows more than any of that world's residents, including bugs he forgot to patch that he abuses to great extent.

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>>159444153
An archaeologist digging out in the desert discovers ancient alien ship filled with their technology, which allows him to build his own totalitarian nation in the world and using their technology allows him access to superpowers known as a Pulse.

As a child the archaeologist's daughter falls in love with a young boy who protects her from some mysterious monsters only she can see and makes a promise to marry him when she becomes older. Getting close to her 17th birthday, the girl plans on keeping her promise to the boy and taking her father's elite forces kidnaps him and his best friends from their school to her father's totalitarian nation filled with superpowered soldiers to shotgun wedding the him.

Now to escape the yandere love of his "wife", the MC must protect his friends, join a strange resistance group that is Anti-Alien, fight different superpowered soldiers, and discover the secret behind the totalitarian society as its revealed the girl who is in love the MC is a surviving child to the aliens, her father is the
leader of a space cult dedicated to the aliens, and on her 17th birthday they will be returning to the planet with the full powers of the Pulse.

Animated by Trigger or Gainax.

>>159444153
You get isekai'd with no special powers and shit. Then you be a merchant. After some wallstreet shit you become a rich motherfucker, have a good wife and die happily. The end.

You get isekaid into a violent fantasy world. Since you're overweight, have zero muscle mass, and zero applicable skills, you live your first few days in filth and terror of being found by the monsters and bandits that infest the land. Then you get killed by a stray goblin with one arm.

>>159445052
Sounds like it'd be fun as shit.

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>>159444153
Some autistic neckbeard browses /a/ 24/7 fishing for (you)'s
But the plottwist is, that there is no plottwist due to the simple fact that i have a horrible imagination.

>>159445109
>Now to escape the yandere love of his "wife"

You just ruined a very fun idea.

>>159444153
notes from the underground

>>159444153
A young necromancer, having just finished his apprenticeship, joins the inner circle of an immensely powerful, yet friendly undead lord that has been amassing an army in order to secure land and resources for the construction of an undead capital, a place where the restless may live out their semi-immortal lives in peace, safe from the nations of the living that have a policy of killing undead indiscriminately.
As he joins, he learns the advantages and responsibilities that come with raising the dead, especially when some corpses still have souls attached to them.

>>159445362
>You just ruined a very fun idea.
How so?

The MC and his best friends were kidnapped against their wills so the MC can marry the heroine of the story. To use "wife" is correct as the heroine sees herself as that while the MC is just trying to survive the plot of the story.

If you're talking about "yandere". MC got kidnapped by a woman he hasn't seen in a decade who was using supersoldiers to capture him and threatening him and his friends if he didn't go through with the marriage.

MC is an ordinary second year high school student except that he has no memories of before he was twelve due to a car accident. He has a close-knit group of friends; a male buddy, a female friend (romantic interest), a male class rep who is also his childhood friend. One day, him, his friends and his sister go to the amusement park and enter a haunted house only to exit and find themselves in another world.

In that world, the sky and sea are crimson red, the land is tainted and the forest they find themselves in is brown and withered. A dark elf finds them but when she sees the MC, she looks shocked. She says, "Master? Is that you?"

Turns out MC has been in that world before, when he was twelve and was the dark lord's magician who had casted the spell which unleashed the miasma upon the world. MC denies this saying he cannot remember and Class Rep becomes slightly distrustful of him. The party travels to the nearest town with the dark elf. When they reach there, the villagers tremble at the sight of the MC and dark elf. The MC can't deny that the story seems true and it torments him that he cannot remember his misdeeds. They somehow find an inn to stay at.

After a nightmare sequence, the MC wakes up and ask the dark elf why wasn't she with the dark lord. She said she left his service because MC is her only master. MC makes up his mind and tells the party that they are going to rid the world of the dark lord. Dark elf is stunned and says that is impossible. Class rep is equally shocked and says MC is insane. Before the latter is about to storm off, the innkeeper comes and says it is surprising to see the dark lord's magician rebelling against the dark lord after a three year disappearance. She reveals that she is part of the guild of rebellion, specifically their vice head of intelligence. MC does shit, get her trust, fight against the dark lord's minions whose master is now aware of MC's presence. Ultimate goal is overthrowing dark lord and returning home.

>>159445956
Because my penis disagrees with the path that story took.

>>159446031
That just the basic plot idea though Anon.
MC taps that yandere alien after the final fight..

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>>159444153
A man gets teleported to a fantasy world. There he meets several monstergirl lolis and starts a harem. The show is mostly about his day-to-day life with his wives, going on dates and cuddling.

>>159444153
Young female tourist in Greece finds entrance to a cave.
Inside she finds a naked man tied with chains to the rock. He bargains with her to set him free in exchange for endless loyalty. Freaked out, but willing, she sets him free just before a giant eagle comes crashing in.

After killing it, the young man reveals his name: Prometheus.

Having been freed after ten thousand years, for the crime of setting man free from the powers of Gods, he finds that the Gods are still in control of the world through various secret organizations and corporations.

He decides to finish what he's started and make use of this new and confusing world that the humans have built from his stolen flame, to fight for the one thing he always has. To free the humans from their final chains and bring them back to being the Titans that once ruled the Earth.

This should sell on /pol/.

>>159446233
You saved the day. Is it consensual?

>>159444153
male MC brutally rapes his female friend after he got a mental breakdown. sentenced to 20 years in jail, he comes to terms with the fact that he got what he deserved and accepts his fate.

4 years into his sentence, his country goes at war with a much stronger country. desperate, the government decides to recruit prisoners, including the MC. our "hero" discovers that he's a good marksman and feels like this could be a new beginning for him. then he discovers that his former friend, the girl he attacked, is on the same unit as him.

does the girl forgive him? does she try to assassinate him? will they win the war despite the odds? haven't thought of the answers yet

7 heroes face off against the demon king, but they job pretty bad and half of them die. Nevertheless, the demon king is vanquished and the world returns to peace.
But then 6 years later, the demon king returns, having possessed one of the dead heroes (a shota mage). Seeking revenge he attacks the remaining heroes, but they manage to hold him off.
The rest of the series is about the heroes chasing the demon king to the ends of the earth where a final battle occurs that the demon king wins. He then genocides all life in the realm.
Also everyone is elves.

>>159446560
He and his unit rape her since she's the only woman they've been around for months.

>>159446560
>this could be a new beginning for him.

Make it so that he betrays his unit and sells his country for personal profit.

The last scene of the anime should have him walking into a dark room with the female MC in it tied and crying on a bed.

>>159446469
>This should sell on /pol/.

nu-/pol/ has gone born again on the religious aspect, so I doubt that. Neat concept though.

>>159446469
>he finds that the Gods are still in control of the world through various secret organizations and corporations.

This sounds cool, do you have any specific gods in mind?

>>159444153
Isekai but ALL of the characters have OP bullshit and the protag's is kind of crap in comparison, protag has to actually use his brain to win fights.

>>159444153
Journey of Ego

A giant hole has appeared in the sky and has been there for an undisclosed amount of time. In ancient books in the world this described the end of the world as the hole will unravel the fabric of reality.

As reality slowly becomes undone many strange things that should appear or happen, beings to place in the world. People across the world however, are not in a panic. They continue on with their daily lives as the world could end at anytime, ignoring the hole in the sky.

The Main Character, Ego is someone who notices the hole in the sky and threat of the world ending while others around them try to live the hedonistic life.

The story is episodic as Ego tries to solve the problems going around his home city with things that aren't suppose to exist and thinks about his place in the world. Being a catalyst to the events Ego finds himself in is Id, who finds the undoing of the world to be fun and is taking pleasure in it, she acts on the first thought that appears in her mind.

Then there is Shadow, Id's sidekick who often provokes Ego as they find the destruction that Id creates to be the answer to why they exist and thinks the undoing of the world is something that shouldn't be questioned and is completely irrelevant.

The main antagonist is Superego who is the God of the world who wanted to test the world. Creating Ego and Id (Ego: Order & Searching for Purpose, Id: Chaos & Acting on Instinct + Selfishness) to see which one of them would have a bigger effect on the world and its people. Shadow was created by Id to help her cheat on the test (Shadow: Nihilism & Hedonism being the opposite of Ego)

>>159447658
>that should appear or happen, beings to place in the world
that should not appear or happen, begin to take place in the world

>>159444153
Mech Hitler and Mecha Stalin fight in Downtown Paris for the fate of Europe

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Anime documenting the October Revolution directed by Trigger.

>>159447820
Sound like something Miyazaki would do

>>159447788
I'd preorder that

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>>159447788
>Yfw Mecha Roosevelt and Truman fuse together

>>159447788
The Brits get Oswald Mosely.

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>>159444153
The local blacksmith tomboy gets a boyfriend who is well known adventurer.

Cute romantic things unfold as she tries her best to remain number 1 in his heart when compared to the heal slut (Who is a total bitch), the tomboy dark skin cat girl amazon, the Elf who isn't trying to be lewd, princess of the country, older sister witch, and other women her boyfriend knows + trying to fight off the advances of the local merchant guild boy who wants her as his bride.

You know vanilla stuff.
>Blacksmith girlfriend fixes of his armor and goes on about how each dent the monsters or people he fights, brings her joy as the armor she fixes up is protecting him and via transfer she is protecting him.
>Adventurer boyfriend takes her into the city and feels embarrassed and does her best to avoid dropping her spaghetti when wearing a womanly dress rather than her work gloves + trying to avoid how much of a sword autist she is once they pass the city's blacksmith district/shops.
>Blacksmith girlfriend tagging along with her adventurer boyfriend as he explores a dungeon to kill some creatures in it and she learns his way of work and how dangerous it can be. Then the next day, she tutors him on proper equipment care and how she forges swords.

All that stuff. Turn it into 12 episodes.

>>159448362
Cute.

>>159448362
>a blacksmith making that variety of gear

Historical inaccuracies piss me off.

World Destroyer
The MC is part of an organization that seeks to remove (eliminate) (kill) those who have been transported to other worlds.
The main draw includes isekai shitters getting shit on like they deserve, and either really dumb or really smart ways in which those isekai shitters get btfo.
Lots of worlds to explore, cast of applicable bro and waifu characters, MC isn't a teenager, etc

I'm pretty sure somebody else has had this idea, I wouldn't doubt some LN making this into a thing. tfw not a nip so even if I do something with this it will go nowhere ;_;7

>>159448450
Anon its fiction and not trying to be historically accurate at any form.

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It's a literal harem anime taking place in a fantasy Arabian-esque country.

A young prince has just inherited the throne. As per custom the noble families have each sent him a daughter, who will all live with him until he chooses one as a wife. He can't have sex with any of them because that would count as marriage and upset a delicate political balance.

Despite what you might expect, none of the girls are actively lusting after him. The prince is just happy finally to have actual friends that aren't seeking to use him.

So it's actually more slice of life as they experience life in the royal palace, mixed with political intrigue as the prince has to deal with his new responsibilities as royalty.

>>159444153
Priest robot tasks crusader robots to kill robot demons

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Main charachter is a teenager from Europe,
One day he gets abducted by the ship of an intergalatic biological research coporations.

Cute Lizard like alien girl examining him.
Mc i chad an he ecentually fucks her.

Story is about him getting power and estabilishing himself as intergalactic warlord, with his own planets and shit.

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>United Student Academy for Girls (USA) faces off with its new rival, United Socialist School Repository (USSR) for Girls
>cute girls, all around highschool age
>USSR claims to be the greatest school and says it's going to space
>all the clubs pitch in to beat the USSR
>math club does calculations
>robotics does engineering
>sports clubs train the astronauts
>central intelligence club spies on the other school
>science club builds the rocket
>etc.
>The anime itself follows the director of the program as she coordinates the clubs
>Its a slice of sports anime but follows the events of the space race
>all the historical figures are now anime girls

Think of the zero-g anime tiddies and/or actual drama about the space race.

Dimension Road

An immortal biker travels the Dimension Road, an endless highway which passes through all of time and connects all parallel worlds. His companions are his telepathic dog, who he isn't really sure is telepathic, and a smartphone who can't admit she is in love with him. Unable to turn back, the three are looking for a place to call home. But mostly they end up fixing other people's problems before they move on.

>>159450722
Gold. Unironically liking it.

>>159449401
>aren't seeking to use him.
They should be forcing themselves on him because sex literally means becoming royalty. He should find a nice peasant girl that the other girls(and there families) try to plot against.

>>159450722
I've soon worse.
This got potential though.

>>159450722
Heh, got a good chuckle out of me anon.

>>159450922
*seen
Fuck autocorrect.

>>159450722
Underrated/10. Always count on /a/ to make the shittiest plot, yet somehow better than all of the plot in this thread.

>>159444153
Basic premise that a long time ago, there was this samurai who did a crapload of badass stuff with his equally awesome band of fellow heroes until one day, he was forced to be sealed with a terrible demon to hold it at bay forever.

Skip forward to present, and the samurai has reincarnated as a skilled, albeit unremarkable young man returning to his home town when he starts running into people from his previous life (who have all survived the ages one way or another), and they all beckon him to remember.

Especially because they want to know: if he's there, where is the demon he was supposed to be fighting?!

Cue the demon revealing himself to be possessing our hero's previous body and now wreaking havoc on Japan once again, albeit recovering his strength and using assorted schemes.

With his ancient cohorts, a mere fraction of his old skills and memories, the samurai's reincarnation proceeds to go on adventures throughout the town to finish the ages old battle as well as confront many other unfinished quests of his past life.

>>159450722
Pretty good.

>>159449401
I kind of like this but maybe for some conflict for the political intrigue to happen you should try: >>159450882

>>159450722
I like this, but you should probably add some premise to that to make it more interesting.
Just my two cent.

>>159450722
This is what I call a literal 10/10.

>>159448362
I like this, problem is, I feel like the best stuff wouldn't fit into just twelve episodes. Maybe two seasons?

I would love to see a sub-arc where the blacksmith girl starts adventuring with her adventurer boyfriend, not just to get closer to him, but also so she can find rarer materials to work with and get a better idea of what an adventurer needs in their gear.

Nice samefagging 3+ threads in a row

>>159450722
Golden anon, just golden.

>>159450722
Eh, could be better.

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>>159449401
The twist on it should be that hes a homo and the only people he can be around who listen and understand him are the women who are supposed to be his sex slaves

>The world is filled with Superpowers
>MC can't develop a power, and gives up.
>One day he developes a rare special power.
>Military wants him dead
>He gets saved by the evil organization "Anonymous".

The funny thing it already exists:
http://www.novelupdates.com/series/ototsukai-wa-shi-to-odoru/

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>>159450722
I would like to see this real.

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>>159444153
A private investigator in NYC in the 1940s takes up a case to investigate a wealthy woman's husband for a potential affair and gets caught in a web of intrigue and deception leading him to the secretive and world affecting machinations of the loli illuminati

Its a regular harem but in the end, instead of the boy choosing one girl, he decides to marry all of the girls. Due to the fact that polygamy is illegal in their nation, the boy fights against the state in a court of law. The case goes on for years, costing the main character and his many wives a lot of money leaving them in a lot of debt. The anime then follows the lives of the main characters as they fight for their love with only each other for support through the hard times ahead.

>>159451748
So its China Town + loli's?

>>159445129
are you suggesting an anime cross over between the wolf of wall street and spy kids????

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Trainspotting but all the characters are replaced by Kancolle shipgrills.

Our setting takes place in a different world, in which most of the world is covered in deadly noxious fumes, with only higher elevations being completely safe to breathe. Not only that, but the world is tidally locked, meaning only one side of the world gets light whilst the other is stuck in eternal darkness, rendering the area in-between darkness and light, stuck in perpetual late evening the only place on the planet that isn't a scorching hellhole or a frozen wasteland. The geography and land is identical to the surface of our moon, and is littered with strange fungus and animals.

People do live on this world, however they are largely nomadic tribes and clans who stick together in small, tight knit groups ranging between 15 to 50 people. People are able to travel through the otherwise deadly fumes via carrying torches and protecting themselves with multiple layers of animal skins. Clans need to traverse solely because vegetation, water, and animals to hunt are sparse, and staying in one area for too long attracts other clans competing for supplies to last the occasional fume/sandstorms.

Our MC is an inquisitive little girl in the middle of a migration with her small clan of twenty people. Due to the low light, she easily spots what appears to be a burst of light beyond the fumes and with torch in hand, she slips away from her clan to investigate. She comes across a strangely garbed boy with advanced technology claiming to be from another world the stars. She brings him back to her clan, who are quick to be wary of him and his strange, clumsy ways that almost get them all killed numerous times, and it's up to her to teach this boy how to accustom himself to her clan's culture and to survive on this harsh world. Both of them slowly put together how he came here in the first place, and learn some actual truths of the origins of humanity on this world. The boy warns that this world will suffer the same fate as his home planet, Earth.

>>159451867
Actually, it's more of the first part of China Town transitioning into the second part of The Illuminatus Trilogy; but yes, with lolis.

>>159451948
another world in the stars*

>>159444153
a bunch of men in their mid 20's are browsing a degenerate site that is looked down upon by the rest of the world and finds a thread in an anime board asking for people to write anime plots. The main character reads through the posts and writes one of his own only to realize hes late for work. He rushes out of his apartment so focused on getting to work on time that he doesnt notice the bus barreling down the street hes currently crossing. Three months later the main character wakes up in a hospital only to discover that the seasonal anime he missed while he was in a coma turned out to be the posts in that thread with his own post being the most popular anime of the season. The main character then fights the production company of his anime in a long grueling court case over the rights to the anime

>>159445911
wait... is this a moe, necrophilia, harem set in the land of the dead?

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>>159451939
With the kongou sisters as the main chars

>>159446521
hell no. Theres no consent in space (they fuck in space btw)

>>159446469
>he decides to finish what he's started
but prometheus gave humanity fire, he didnt kill the gods.

>>159446728
kek im going to hell

>>159447362
would it be a comedy where the protag is always being shown up by the other characters after doing something mildly impressive?

>>159451243
>>159451593
you're probably right. I was trying to be as nonstandard with the harem as possible, but my idea was kinda boring

>>159447788
mecha stalin starts losing to mecha hitler but right before it ends, mecha lenin rises from the ground and grabs mecha hitlers leg forcing him to trip. The two begin to decimate mecha hitler and piss on his corpse when its all over.
Oh also this all needs to be a wwe cage match

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>>159452406
No I liked it, but if you want to subvert tropes this is just another way to do just that

>>159450218
>all the historical figures are now anime girls
Loli gorbachev?????

>>159445986
>ordinary second year high school student

Stopped reading there.

>>159452168
Literally saving anime.

A television editor gets transporter into a fantasy world and he starts rising up the ranks and stirring up shit because he wants to raise ratings and make the most of this world. Oh, the elves and dwarves don't want to go to war? Too bad, I think it would look cool.

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>>159452406
Add to it, his harem become assassins to protect his secret, because if he loses power so do they.

Everyone wins. Loli Assassins, fujobait, polictial intrigue, and dope character designs

>>159444153
A harem show were the MC isn't the one with the harem but rather the obligatory best friend in one

>>159444153
A tragedy.

In a kingdom, magic use to be the dominant thing and people who could use it + magical creatures use to bully humans who couldn't. Then humans came up with technology and used it to rage war against magic users and make them the minority in the kingdom.

The main character is the prime minister to the country who has been left with the duty by the Queen (his unrequited childhood love) to take care of her daughter (Princess) and kingdom after her and the king pass away.

The magical creatures begin to get uppity as the protagonist (A self-declared Hero of the People) rolls into town and the Prime Minister attempts to quietly genocide them to protect the majority of technology users.

This leads to the plot as the protagonist opposes the Prime Minister and gets the Princess on their side and the quiet genocide to create peace leads to large scale war as the Prime Minister Ideal of Peace (Genociding one side of the two opposing forces, then establishing peace until another problem rises up and genocoding one side again in an eternal loop), vs., Protagonist's Ideal of Peace (By having both sides come to an understanding through their shared suffering, which will then create a shaky peace that will eventually break, but the suffering from the break either leads to the Minister's Ideal or recreates a shaky peace)

Prime Minister in order to bring happiness to the kingdom follows through the Protagonist ideal, by turning himself into a tyrant in the kingdom and the most hated person by magical creatures and technology users. Then dies a slow death thinking about the Queen after a final fight against the Protagonist.

>>159451846
That actually sounds like it could be a really interesting anime.

Concept: Drama
>Man is in the third grade but is held back for years.
>He is 17 and still in the third grade and because of this everyone in his class thinks hes a loser.
>one year he is the only boy in his class
>one loli is super cute and he has a massive crush on her
>loli thinks mc is gross and wants nothing to do with him
>mc and loli are paired up as lab partners and overtime they learn to like eachother
>loli and mc begin dating
>big school dance is coming up and right before it mc and loli have a big fight and break up
>skip to the night of the dance
>mc gets the loli back by running up on the stage, taking the mic from the band playing at the dance, and singing oingo boingo's "little girls"
>When he finishes he runs to loli and they have an intimate kiss
>they go back the mc's house and fuck
>the next day theyre in class when the police break down the door and drag mc away for statutory rape

>>159450722
Underrated.

>>159452927
Does it count as a loli if she's actually young? I thought it was only if they looked young

>>159451948
Sounds a lot like Gargantia with a different setting. If the monsters and setting provided a lot of risk and danger instead of it being a boring SOL, that could be a really cool show.

>>159452810
A harem but the MC is one of the girls battling for attention?

>>159452969
Loli is a body type, not an age. A loli can be 8 or 300.

Slice of life about four girls traveling around the world to obscure places like Nunavut or Bhutan.

How would one deconstruct the deconstruction genre? Is that possible? What do most deconstruction have in common that we could reverse?

>>159453298
>How would one deconstruct the deconstruction genre?
Make the most cliched show with the most overdone plot and fill it to the brim with tropes and make everything predictable.

>>159453044
nah, most harems leads have one guy friend that hangs around before getting shooed off to the sidelines.
This (proposed) series follows the guy that's on the sidelines from his point of view whether it be him being ignored, getting roped in to something against his will, throwing an odd monkey wrench now and then, and mainly just sitting down and having a good long laugh at the overall levels of incompetence in the harem.

>>159453242
Why not just have a crew of girls trying to find the north pole in the 1900's?

>>159453353
But then would it still count as a deconstruction? That's more of just doing the opposite.

>>159453353
kek

>>159453353
But anon, that's most anime.

>>159444153

Get this:

Mecha shit.

BUT!

It's actually decent for a change. That's the big twist.

>>159453503
What even was the last decent mecha? There were so many shit shows for so many years that I don't even pick them up anymore.

Movie Brat:
MC is an Otaku but not for anime, manga, video games etc. Quiet frankly he could be best described as a movie otaku, you could probably name any movie and he's probably seen it.

>>159453592
Any particular type of movie? (I.e. Westerns, comic book, thriller, etc.)

>>159453391
>anime about a crew of cute moeblob girls trying to find the north pole in the 1900s
>sets it up to be "cute girls doing cute things in the snow"
>turns into darkness and despair as they're woefully unprepared and have to deal with the harsh realities of the arctic like losing limbs, snowblindness, frostbite, wildlife, getting disoriented, falling through the ice, unpredictable natives

>>159444153
A normal villager in a fantasy world was run over by a horse drawn cart.

He is reincarnated into our world in the middle east. Thanks to his cheats, among them the ability to talk directly with God, he is hailed the Messiah and sets out to build the Kingdom of Heaven.

The show is about him defeating the corrupted temporal powers who have kept the region war-torn for nearly a century; Saudi Arabia, Iran and Israel, etc.

>>159453674
But it still keeps an air of cuteness at points, kind of like Gakkougurashi

>>159453703
This is like the anti-Tanya

MC with personality best described as "bored" in a world with behind-the-scenes magic and fantasy. However, the MC is unaware of and unaffected by magic nonsense. His friends are part of the underground fantasy land and need his magic nullification to fight the big bad, but MC just thinks they want him to LARP with them.

The main character is cute fairy girl who's a rookie to her new job. Her job being? To run over promising-looking teenage Japanese boys in her truck and whisking them off to various universes in need of heroes.

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A previously unknown knight rapidly rises through the ranks, gaining a reputation as the kingdom's strongest monster slayer.

The problem is that he's actually a hardcore pacifist who hates the thought of having to kill anything, and only obtained the reputation through dumb luck and hijinks.

He has to somehow find a way to reconcile his desire to avoid violence with the apparent fact that violence might be the only way to protect the kingdom. At the same time he has to avoid being found out as a fraud.

>>159453811
But if the MC is unaware, how would we see much of the magic and cool stuff? If we just don't follow him, is he really the MC? Otherwise how could it be fit in?

>>159453876
Isn't that Trigun?

>>159453935
shit

>>159444153
Isekai

The MC has his life together by having a job, a girlfriend, and two best friends. He's somewhat of a spineless coward though.

One of his best friends is a bachelor who sleeps with a different woman every night and the other is a trap who promotes the purity of 2d waifus and is an otaku. The MC's girlfriend is a dominating/manipulative woman who pushes him around while he works hard to provide for her and wants him to marry her, though he is indecisive in making that choice. At his job the MC has some senior workers there that are asses which puts a lot of stress on him as he has to complete his work on time and do OT without pay. Working under him is a female junior who is usually shy around the MC.

One day on his way home from getting drunk with his two best friends, the MC is hit by a truck and he awakes in a Mesopotamia land found and healed by a woman named Ishtar.

In order for him to return to his the MC must now begin a long journey with Ishtar that takes him from the surface world down to the gates of the underworld. Along the way he confront mystical beasts, different trials of the heart, and a manipulative goddess that wants to have the MC under her control. He also encounters and befriends people like Gilgamesh, Enkidu, and others who offer him words of advice.

At the end of his journey and coming to fall in love with Ishtar, the MC refuses to return to his nromal world and stay in the fantasy world with Ishtar and his new friends.

Its revealed in the epilogiue that the MCs entire journey was a figment of his imagination created from stress. Gilgamesh is his bachelor friend, Enkidu is his trap friend, Ishtar is his shy co-worker who found him passed out in the middle of the street, and the Monsters he fought were his bosses and so on.

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An anime about planing competitions

A Togi (m 17) is a exchange student for a year at the renowned Miss Feline's School for Cat Girls, a high shool of only cat girls. We see Togi struggle to deal with 6 different sexually repressed cat girls, in hilarious situations.

At the end of ep 6, Togi disappears.

A year later Togi's sister Agiro, disguised as a boy, is selected as a transfer student, and enters the school determined to find out what really happened to her brother. She goes through a similar set of circumstances (extra humor as she tries to hide her gender), before discovering the cat girls are actually nazis from ww2 disguised as cat girls ritually sacrificing male transfer students to maintain their catgirl forms, and are plotting to resurrect hitler as a cat girl and take over the world. It's up to Agiro to save the world from the Nazis.

Dude get's isekai'd, but not in a midieval setting, in a tribal or caveman setting, on a gigantic jungle world.

>>159453811
wait so would it be like borderlands 2's "Tiny Tina's assault on dragon keep" dlc where it is actually just larping but we see it as fantasy or would it be like real magic but animated as actual larping?

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>>159453703
Does he blow shit up?

>>159454043
Neko Nazis? Sign me the fuck up

>>159453838
Is this a prequel to konosuba?

>>159453985
>Mesopotamia land
is this a made up place called mesopotamia land as a joke or is it actually ancient mesopotamia and youre just making yourself look like a jack ass?

>>159447820
only if they make admiral Kolchak a woman leading the Oppai guards (white army)

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>>159444153

>MC gets a harem.
>He never wanted this.
>Tries to get best girl out of the bunch.
>Everybody wins (Friendship End).
>MC marries best girl.
>Somebody still gets BTFO when the shipping gets wronged.

>>159448450
>Confusing history with fantasy

Son.

>>159454111
neko nazis or neko neo-nazis? Basically neko-/pol/

>>159454264
If it's Hitler related I'd call them nazis straight up

Nice to see you're all still up and at it. Suppose I'll resume my regular duties for a bit.

>>159445052
You have a premise for a setting and perhaps some logistical conflicts, but there's no human element to your conflict—not yet, at any rate. To start with, try fleshing out your protagonist. A strong, motivating desire is the bare minimum you should be able to present; the more striking the desire, the better.

>>159445109
This is fairly convoluted, and your telling of it is part of the reason why. If the archeologist isn't your protagonist, don't lead with him. Lead with the boy, and then introduce your worldbuilding elements as they become relevant, if at all. And what else is your protagonist into aside from fighting aliens? Any old YA protagonist would do all the same stuff you've listed him as doing in his situation, which tells me jack nothing about who he is, other than that he's a bog-standard YA protagonist. What've you got to offer that only you're offering?

>>159445129
Pretty shallow narrative arc. It's fine to have a happy ending, but how'd you earn it?

>>159445267
You're not even the first person to suggest this "twist" on the contemporary isekai formula.

>>159445911
It's a very low bar, but this is thus far the most interesting of the lot. You have a protagonist with an intriguing motivation and some suggestion of a personal conflict that he'll face, as well as external conflicts. The next step is simply to expand on your points, namely the "advantages and responsibilities".

>>159445986
I'm sure you're well aware, but this is about as trite as it gets.

>>159446469
Reasonably novel premise, but you seem to have written your female protagonist out of the story by the second paragraph.

>>159446727
This is inchoate and inane.

>>159447658
Far too heavy on the allegory, I think, and not very subtle about it. If I wanted to read a Jungian psychology tract, I could always just read Jung.

>>159448362
It's cute, but [CONTINUED]

An anime about a group of high school girls who try out new hobbies, but they always become overly competitive at it and turn into tryhards, so by the end of the episode it isn't fun anymore and they move on to something else

>>159454288
/pol/ seems to like hitler and theyre neo-nazis.
I get what youre saying, either way theyre still nazis but what im trying to understand is are they 1940's nazis with mp40's n shit or are they neo-nazis with pepe the frog and richard spencers dented face?

>>159454309
>You're not even the first person to suggest this "twist" on the contemporary isekai formula.

No shit Sherlock. You must have spent an hour realizing that one.

>>159453634
depends on what type of character you want him to be,
>If you want him to have a traditional Japanese taste: Kurosawa fag
>Slightly touched in the head and is usually descried "weird" or "creepy": Horror fan
>Anything from the west during the 70s, 80s, and 90s: westaboo
>Tries to be cool and moody but fails completely: Film Noir fag

Could probably come up with some more example but I might need to think for a bit.
Though the MC might have a mix of favorite type of movies so not to use the same old jokes/references every damn time

>>159454326
>>159454309
OOH OOH RATE MY ANIME IDEAS!!!

The anime follows a Chinese driver who's inexplicably in Japan and his hijinks as he accidentally runs over thousands of little boys and unknowingly dooms them all into spending the rest of their days in generic dragon quest fantasy haremland.

All of the collisions are ridiculously gory but it's played out comically.

>>159454417
I mean if we can request I want that shit too, I still haven't seen any response to mine

>>159454264
No like following world war 2, the nazis occult research discovered a way to keep people young for ever as cat girls by sacrificing teenage boys, so it's like goebbels and himmler and ww2 nazis in cat girl bodies

>>159454094
He glasses Jerusalem, turning it into a radioactive wasteland that no one can live on, echoing the judgement of Solomon on the baby with two mothers, only this time no one compromises and they call his bluff.

>>159454043
ffing perfect

>>159450722
I like this.

>>159454417
>>159454458
Not that anon, but show me which are yours and I'll give them a read and a comment. I also won't be a judgy asshole as much as that guy.

>>159454417
Uhh why did you quote me? I barely entered this thread

>>159452748
This one I'd like you to look at, thanks

Title: Ze Hat

A series based/inspired heavily by old Jackie Chan films and other Hong Kong action flicks

MC's name is Jun Ree (named after martial artist Jhoon Goo Rhee) which does sound a little bit like a girls name in retrospect which could be a small running joke
in the series. As for martial arts he's quiet capable, but the thing is he looks and somewhat acts like a good damn idiot while fighting (hence the Jackie Chan part)
so everyone initially underestimates him. Other than that the only other thing set in stone about him is that he wears a blue baseball type hat which is how we get the tittle of the series (if it sounds like a stupid reason, that's the point).

The main story centers around Jun Ree doing odd jobs around the city/slums of Not Hong Kong each bring its own 2-3 episode mini arc, some are original and some are heavily borrowing the plot from old Hong Kong movies with the connection between them is the hat wearing sorry excuse for a main character is involved in some way be it major or minor whether it be because of a job in order to make a quick buck, roped in against his will, or just plain bad luck.

The first arc would be mainly be a introductory arc borrowing a little from the first Police Story movie in where Jun is hired (threatened) by a old friend in the police (who's name would either by Chan Ka-Kui or Kevin Chan) to look after the soon to be main heroine who plans to testify in court about about a crime lords illegal activities on a hunch that there are moles in the force that are seeking to undermine the take down a said crime lord.

The hammers test

Our MC is a catgirl who is interested in making friends in her new class. She is very energetic, careless and also flat-chested. As a result, she often ends up breaking people's cherished possessions.

She stores damaged objects all throughout her home. These pieces of damaged furniture and other items scare her, emitting a strange aura due to their damages. She can see this aura due to the teachings of of her grandparents. They taught her that each piece of furniture and houseware should be respected.
One day the spirits guide her to an old magazine that features her grandparenents repair shop,now she desires to repair these items to honor her grandparents. she has no skills or tools.

then, she hears a loud hammering and the whirring of power tools coming from her neighbor's backyard. When she goes to look, she sees her classmates cutting wood and building furniture. Inspired by their skills (and big boobs) she asks the other girls if they could give her guidance in the art of furniture repair.

Every day she learns the ins and outs of DIY construction and repair, and uses these skills to restore her possessions, healing the objects' auras, and as her skills grow so too does her chest.

>>159454820
So how important is her bust size throughout the series? Is it a major plot driver, or does it just sort of happen?

StarStripes girls
>the american bill of rights as represented by a group of magical girls,they fight monster laws and people that endanger american freedom and burgers.
thier personas are similar to the laws they represent
I. Foul-mouthed, yankee girl constantly challenging authority
II. /k/ tier gun-nut who thinks more firepower is the answer to any problem
III. Soft-spoken healing type who doesn't like violence
IV. Hikkineet conspiracy theorist who just wants to be left alone to her imageboards
V. Honorable, chivalrous knight-type who takes her code very seriously
VI. Speedster scouting type who enjoys keeping an eye on everything
VII. Ojou who views the world entirely based on money
VIII. Two-faced sadist who puts on a kind and caring outward face while secretly enjoy the torment of others
IX. Caring onee-san who believes protecting others is the most important thing in the world
X. Very average, everyday high school girl still just getting used to her magical girl powers

Together, they manifest the American destiny
Their adventures involves:
>Smuggling and helping counter-revolutionaries/contras and religious extremist
>Waging proxy war on asian country through agents and religious fanatic pawns
>
>NSA robots trying to take lewd pictures of them at the beach
>D.A.R.P.A spending on white elephants
Their enemies include:
>Chinese magical girl that copies herself powered by collectivism and the spirit of state capitalism
>gun control bill is an actual troll summoned to grab guns
>civil fortfechure & budget gremlins stealing money
>Domestic spying see nsa robots
>antifa stand user type powering hate speech law with human sacrifices
>ATF dogmen shooting people during raids

>>159452748
Wait, raise the ratings of what? Does the world have TV, or does he have some connection to the old world along with a camera crew or something?

>>159455008
That's just some dumb wording on my part I guess. What I mean is that since he's hard wired to try and make things appeal to audiences and things and he has no political knowledge whatsoever, he only does things that he thinks would go over well on television.

>>159454655
now im all nervous... im a grower not a show-er...

anyway heres the ones i wrote
>>159452927
>>159451846
>>159452051

>>159454687
oops my bad

>>159455160
So he tries to manipulate the new world into what he thinks would be a wildly popular and interesting TV show? I like the idea of an amoral cunt like that being the protagonist, it could be really interesting.

>>159455323
Yeah. Best part is that since the whole point is it's supposed to be a good tv show, you have no excuse not to make it a good tv show.

>>159445052
Going off of what >>159454309 said, it could be cool to have the unfinished parts of the game sort of fill themselves in as the story progresses, then show how the dev reacts to them, whether positively, negatively, etc.

>>159452927
I feel like that would come off as more of a comedy than a drama, and would do better as one as well, because it's funny as fuck.

>>159451846
I was >>159452890, but I can elaborate a bit; I actually think that this type of harem anime would benefit by having incredibly archetypical characters, then subvert the usual cliches they embody by making them go through actual trials and hardships. Would MC have a favorite girl?

>>159452051
>Bus-kun, please be gentle, it's my first time

Would he actually have any legal basis to defend that post? Not only would it be difficult to prove he wrote that post to begin with, but as far as I know, freely sharing your ideas online in a thread like this makes them pretty much fair game.

a cute girl who is obsessed with guns but cant own them in her moon country takes a trip to america so she can shoot all the guns she wants but it turns out shes a gunmaster which is sorta like quirks in hero academia like special power but shes a gunslinger and only few people have those powers so then her freind comes along with her they participate in a national 3 gun match and come out 1st place in tac limited and her friend does 3rd in open and they have sex with each other and get shit on by texas people sent by the atf to kill their dog since their illegal moon people smuggled in during ww2

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>>159444153
Somewhat historically-minded cop gets isekai'd to a 16th-century Europe esque fantasy world with nothing but his pistol and a few rounds. A LOGH type story unfolds with him slowly rising through the ranks of the world's hierarchy through a mixture of ingenuity, historical hindsight, and clever use of his limited resources. For added immersion, he can slowly start to affect the world around him more through his introduction and implementation of contextually advanced ideas/inventions (anything from Enlightened thinking, to muskets that don't blow).
Also pic related I guess

>>159454903
not really important ,I just thought breast enlargement could be funny or used to balance her out compared to the other craftsgirls .you could easily get rid of it .

>>159444153
A reverse harem where the tomboy girl accidentally steals beta harem mcs from their harems.

>>159455669
I don't know, that was actually the part I felt the most interested in. No offense, the rest was cool too, but I felt a connection with her skill correlating with her breast size

>>159455648
I have become diamonds the destroyer of fap!

>>159455729
So she's the best girl of multiple harems and has trouble dealing with her subsequent harem?

>>159455730
thanks that you liked it.

>>159455827
Anytime

>>159450620
That sounds pretty comfy mang

>>159454309
My browser just ate the rest of this much-too-long post, so I'll just summarize.

>>159448362
Would work best as 4-koma. Not enough linear material as presented for TV format.

>>159449401
Good for slice of life. I suggest elaborating on plot.

>>159448631
Some else has had that idea. Seems like a one-joke comedy.

>>159450620
Weirdly intriguing.

>>159451091
The narrative equivalent of unseasoned rice. Competent, but bland.

>>159451948
Sounds good. I like it.

>>159452748
Try The Dark Lord of Derkholm.

>>159452816
Messy, but you have the right components here, namely motivations and character arcs. Keep working on this. Aim for clarity on next draft.

>>159453592
Add plot to character sketch.

>>159453703
Jokey backstory might harm potential for genuine drama.

>>159453811
>>159453876
Your one joke is funny, but can't stand alone forever.

>>159453985
"It was all a dream!" is a very bad twist.

>>159454359
There's always someone who legitimately thinks their "mature deconstruction" of isekai is novel stuff. If letting them know helps them move on to better material, I'm happy to try.

>>159454326
Could work at Teekyu-length.

>>159454728
Always good to see you around.

>>159455186
I think you know what's wrong with #1.

#2 has a good joke, but probably couldn't sustain itself as a drama over the long-term.

#3 I took for a joke post. If you're serious, you'll need to come up with a more compelling sequence of events.

>>159455655
You have your plot, but could add more of protagonist's personality.

>>159450722
I know all of those replies are probably samefag, but I kinda like this one.

>>159455827
i'll keep the skilled=stacked mechanic.

>>159450722
pretty intriguing

>>159455873
>There's always someone who legitimately thinks their "mature deconstruction" of isekai is novel stuff

I made that up in twenty seconds in my underwear, I didn't think it was anything other than a throwaway comment. You take this way too seriously.

>>159450722
so is it a normal world seen from the mc's distorted view or has she been "Nisekai" trucked into A precolonial fantasy Africa?

>>159456117
it's a digitally construct isekai world made by white amerifat to imprint new world order to the society.
I'm not that anon who made the plot though, just thought it got some potential.

MC is your seemingly average highschool boy who just happens to lead a life frought with inexplicable hijinx due to outside forces. One day he finds a light novel left behind on his desk and decides to take it with him and give it a read. To his surprise, he finds himself relating so very much with the main character and goes out to get the rest of the series to see where things go.

He enjoys the relatively new novels at first since they help him come to terms with similar events in his past but by the 3rd book he can't help but find it unnerving just how much of the story overlaps with his life. it then gets absolutely disturbing when he gets to a particular scene in the book after that is basically a line for line biography of a very private moment he had just only last year.

He looks further into the books and notices that the 4th book came out just a few months after the event happened to him and that online sources has it that the author is allegedly still in highschool. He figures that one of his classmates must be using him
as their inspiration and goes about trying to lure out who that may be. Naturally he causes a stir with his suspiscions and antics but by the end of the week he difinitively concludes it's not one of his classmates.

That's when he gets called to the teacher's room to answer for the nuisances he's caused. He gets there only to find it's just him and his maths teacher in the room. She cooly tells him to have a seat and he expects her to grill him on his outburst earlier during the day in class but instead she apologizes for the confusion and admits to being the author.

He's taken aback by this, especially since he has a a thing for her, and is even more taken aback by it when she offers to have relations with him stating her awareness of how he feels about her. The catch is that he must wait till after he graduates and she finishes up her novel series.

I call this one "I'm A Light Novel Protagonist And My Author Is My Stalker!?"

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>>159451915
I wanna fuck the thumb person

>>159456257
I expected this to go all meta and have it be an anime based on a light novel in-universe, but you took it in a different direction and I like that

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>>159444153
The Main Character is a Mobalch, a mobile alchemist who travels in a wagon creating potions for ailments and crops to sell to different town and cities in which they come in-contact with.

2 years prior to the start of the story. The Main Character worked as the Grand Alchemist (The highest ranking alchemist in the kingdom and who is a member of the Mage Guild Board) apprentice. After their master passes away however, they are given their personal memoirs as part of their will, where the Grand Alchemist reveals to have had an affair with the now deceased King in the past, and asks their last apprentice to find the daughter they had with them and convince them to become an Alchemist and be the child's master (Which the Main Character agrees to do in honor of their Master).

First half is episodic establishing the lore of the world, showing off magic and alchemy, looking for the Grand Alchemist child and the effects of the previous war with the court going to crap. The second half after finding the Grand Alchemist child. The second half deals with the Main Character tutoring the child in Alchemist and other forces of the kingdom trying to kidnap the MC's apprentice and use them to usurp the current ruler to restart the lost war.

>>159456054
>You take this way too seriously.
You're probably right. There was once more earnest work being done in these threads, and a number of anons actually moving forward in producing their ideas, but it hasn't seemed that way of late.

>>159450722
Simple, direct, no convoluted tryhard plot, and no tropes.
How can this is not popular is beyond me.

>>159456257
sounds unique i would give it a watch ,

>>159456376
Cry me a river. I actually did write a big ass post detailing a story I had in a dream, but it was too edgy and violent so I deleted it. My throwaway comment was probably better overall, even if you don't think so.

>>159450722
Sounds pretty nice. I dig it.

You know last year there were 2 CGDCT with bicycles shows .why not a
>Milfs with motorcycles show?

>>159456467
You probably could make a decent short story out of your throwaway, with a bit of work. Someone likely has already.

>>159456708
I mean, I like writing, but I always end up writing overly violent edgy shit because I am a violent and aggressive person at my core. And I doubt anyone wants to read my violent wanking, so I figured something mildly funny would be a better contribution.

>>159450722
It's good, but it need more exposition.

Okay, completely spitballing here, might be shit, who knows. Fantasy steampunk world with a pantheon of interesting gods. I will describe them now.
God of war: main good god, righteous, just and vengeful. He's the type of God you don't want on your bad side. He's usually worshipped by the zealots and average citizens.
God of Agriculture: surprisingly enough, he's the bad one. This god wants to take back the fertile lands and so is employing those who used to work as farmers before the toxic drought (btw that happened and this guys blaming it on God of war) to fight in his renegade army.
God of commerce: this one is a trickster and rules his own city and takes the form of a human to do so. He's not a major god but is important for the story.
Those are the three main gods for the plot. A small group of vagabonds, all from different walks of life, are hired by god of commerce to protect his city. They all have committed separate criminal acts and he decides to let them go if they do this since all of their acts showed them to be masters of their crafts. There's an asocial pilot, a homely demolitions expert, a quiet sharpshooter and a bubbly mechanic. Of course they're not the only ones hired to do this, but we focus on them.
For some reason they have to fight on the fore front, but become rebels and decide to fight against the gods and free humans from their judgement.
That's all I've got, feedback or ideas?

>>159455873
>>159448631
I don't remember if that guy intended it to be comedic but my emphasis on "these instabilities need to die" has a bit more in a series of questions the characters face:
1) who is facilitating all of these isekaid people, if by magic then who taught the magic to do this?
2) if another organization is pulling the strings, what do they stand to gain from doing this?
3) what is so important that our own organization has to keep things undercover even as we conspicuously remove important people?
4) if their materials are unstable anomalies, why is the organization keeping and using the confiscated magic/technology instead of destroying it?
I'd describe it as closer to a spy thing than a comedy, really.

Fan service: The anime!

Its an anime all about and filled with fan service.
The end
id watch it

>>159444153

Life Under the Red Sun

It takes place in 2003 in an alternate history Japan were they used African slaves in the past and thus have a large black population
It has no main character and multiple intersecting story lines. The main back drop for the story is a 15 year old Japanese school girl who gets brutally raped and beaten into a coma by 3 black teens who are then shot execution style in their cells by 3 Japanese police officers. This triggers large scale riots and protests. It follows black protesters/rioters classes with police, black and asian gangs clashing, a girl and her family just trying to get back to a normal life, and everyone caught in between.

>>159457288
Is there a reason it's set in Japan and not America, considering the whole African slave thing we had going on? Interesting concept, but I want to know how that would culturally impact it

>veteran from America is isekai'd to a violent high fantasy world
>Summoned by the alliance of elves, dwarves, and humans to be their champion against the war for survival they face
>the complex ritual, which involved a dozen sacrifices of various sapient species, imbues him with incredible martial ability, but does little to change his true form
>in essence, he becomes a glass cannon that the alliance hopes to use to keep the demihumans and interdimensional monsters at bay while they figure out how to stop the invasion
>currently the alliance are united against the demihumans to the south
>the demihumans are trying to flee monsters pouring out of portals at the south pole, but the alliance refuses to allow them in in hopes that the demihumans can buy them some time to find a solution
>although militaristically the demihumans are stronger, they are fighting a two front war and are in danger of extinction
>the "hero" sees this, and decides to go to the demihumans to parley without the alliance's knowledge
>although initially hostile, an ample display of force gets the "hero" an audience with the empress of the demihumans
>to their surprise, he offers his aid in fighting through the demons so that their court magicians can preform whatever magic they need to close the portal and end the threat to the world
>in return, he wishes them to aid him in conquering the planet
>the veteran, after seeing so much unnecessary death and destruction both on Earth and in this new world, is wearied and wishes for a true peace that can only come through the total domination of the planet

1/2

>>159457395
>"Si vis pacem, para bellum; if you want peace, then prepare for war"
>the empress, after seeing the "hero's" abilities is wary of both the man and his Faustian bargain, but also realizes that he is the best hope to save her people, and agrees in the end
>the story encompasses two major parts: a shorter first one of piercing through the Eldritch horrors pouring through the portals to another dimension, and a longer one of both defending against the remaining interdimensional monsters and conquering the world, one nation at a time, for the sake of peace

>>159456708
This is based off another dream I had, hopefully it's not too bad.

>>159453353
That would only work if it was super engaging and fun to watch. Deconstruction is essentially the creator explaining through the show why they don't like certain tropes, or think that they wont work, or what not. To deconstruct the deconstruction genre, it would have to show that all these cliches are there for a reason, and when used appropriately, work really really well

>>159457434
Nice story, I'd definitely watch it.

>>159457472
I think you could go the complete opposite way, deconstructing tropes like harems and shounen but in the end the deconstruction means absolutely nothing, showing how deconstruction shows always try to make some kind of point with their deconstruction.

>>159457479
Thanks. Most of the stories I've thought of/written down are based off my dreams since I tend to have abnormally vivid and detailed dreams/nightmares every night. Do you think I'd be any good at writing an actual story?

>>159457700
Depends on your writing style. As long as you keep it hectic and the action brief I think you probably could though.

Ordinary kid gets transfered to the school where all "mysterious transfer student" cliches actually go to school. Hilarity ensues as he uses common sense and ordinary methods to solve problems around their school.

Examples include:
Having the two rival martial arts heirs actually sit down and talk to each other instead of only dueling to the death.

Puts a mousetrap with cheese in it to kill the evil demon mouse that's been eating through the sacred scrolls in the school.

Beating the half merman swimming team captain because he uses the fundamentals and rides the surf created by the captain's water attacks.

Finishing the exam of the soul-snatching teacher because he doesn't have a massive ki to drain energy from.

>>159456323
>>159456427
To elaborate further:

MC - Basically a Kamachi protag. Teacher's pet name for him is LN protagonist.
Teacher - A Kuudere Nisioisin character. Christmas cake, says outrageous and embarassing things with a straight face and schemes to pair up the "Heroine" with MC. Master of various stalking skills including disguises.
Heroine - Resident nice girl. Absolutely platonic friendship with MC but gets dragged into romcom situations with him.
Teacher's sister - Student Council president. Assists with her sister's research and is also her illustrator. Secret fujoshi.

The novels in the story themselves hints at secret sides to various other characters around school too that may or may not be exaggerated and the teacher won't make that clear for him. E.g. the school nurse is secretly a yakuza princess using the school to launder money in the books but seems like an angel in reality. Also, the teacher paints her counterpart as an unintentional tease fairly different from her actual self since she claims it'd shameful to blatantly write yourself into your story. It embarrasses MC to tears whenever he sees hints of his crush make it to the book.

>>159457858
Any more than 10 minute episodes and the plots might go on too long (unless it's 2 stories an ep).

ok so i have a request
I dont really watch well written anime, i usually just watch moe loli fanservice pantyshot anime.
So basically what im asking is, come up with a concept for an anime about cute girls doing cute things and ill let you know if id watch it

>>159457766
>As long as you keep it hectic and the action brief

What do you mean?

>MC is an undercover cop trying to take down a huge gang from the inside in Chicago
>As he climb up the ranks he learns that he's really good at gang banging and starts making his own moves
>Even starts stealing money and selling guns/explosives to the local gun shop owner on the downlow
>A gang member gets suspicious and puts a bounty on him
>While selling some guns at the gun shop, the owner distracts him and while he's distracted, she pulls a gun on him
>The owner is Rally from GSC and shes about to turn the MC's for his bounty
>Its a spinoff of Gunsmith Cats, but instead of being gun/car porn, its CQC/motorcycle porn

>>159457566
very true. It could also critique the sensationalism of deconstruction in anime, used as just a way to get people to watch an otherwise subpar show

>>159457981
Since the story is about war and Faustian agreements and shit I think keeping the writing kind of sporadic would help set that kind of mood. And the brief part is just a reminder that fights usually don't last too long, unless it's trenches or something most battles are decided pretty quickly, so don't write too many large action sequences. Those are just my opinions on how it would be written though, do what you will with them

>>159457936
It's definitely a 2 1/2 stories per episode sort of show. The half being a sort-of side gag with the other characters or the MC giving a simple explanation to something his classmates think is something supernatural.

>>159457969
Cute girls do gambling. It starts with fun little bets, then poker (maybe some strip poker for fan service), then they open a mini casino. Cute girls doing cute gambling and it's not intense or anything, except sometimes in a moe comedic way

Anti-harem anime.
MC draws in all the bitches with his personality and the bitches assume they have to vye for his affections when, in fact, he has a girlfriend. She's not even technically a main character; you see her in the background a lot and she's always either ending/beginning a conversation/interaction with the MC.

You find out in the final episode that the reason why he doesn't fuck around with the harem girls is that he has a girlfriend and he assumed they knew and were just being cunts.

>>159455801
Exactly

>>159458292
The amount of keeping track I would have to do for that show actually entices me even more. I think it would have a very dedicated small following who have waifus of their husbandos and multiple OTPs.

>>159458075
Well, I was thinking the empress and the "hero" would come into a kind of partnership. The man offers short term sacrifice for long term gain, while the empress gets short term salvation for long term cost in blood of her people for his goals of domination. But at the end of the day, the empress sold herself and her people to the "hero" for that salvation, and that will come with many costs. I won't have them rest on their laurels, there will usually be a purpose to whatever was happening. Not sure if that's what you meant by hectic or not.

I see what you mean about the action. The longest action sequence would most likely be the initial fight to get to the portal and stop the Eldritch horrors from invading since that's pretty much the battle to save the planet. After that it would be relatively brief combat between their forces and monsters, or them and smaller nations, though past the south pole on the other side of the planet, the other people there weren't as resilient as the demihuman empire, so about a quarter of the planet is no man's land with the monsters infesting it. It wouldn't be until they went farther north that I'd have another large battle against another empire. I always have gotten annoyed when book series have a battle take up a hundred or more pages multiple times, so I'd try to make them brutal and fast usually.

I've been thinking about writing for years, just never had the confidence I guess.

>>159458408
By hectic I mean that I think there's a lot going on in the story, and so the writing should reflect that sometimes. When a lot is happening, it should appear maybe jumbled or not all quite so together. I'm just figuring out I don't entirely know what I mean either.
Also, writing can be hard to get into, but practice makes perfect. I'd recommend writing a lot of flash fiction and coming back to older works if there are any and rewriting them, trying to find flaws and fix them. If you don't have many older works just edit the stuff you're working on repeatedly, constantly making it better. That'll hopefully make you more confident in your abilities. You've definitely got some cool ideas

>>159455873
>>159456054
honestly? I kind of like that this guy takes the time to try to give everyone a little attention.

A lot of threads like these are people pitching their own ideas and never looking at anyone else's or pitching one meme idea everyone responds to with more memes.

>>159458649
I think I get that. So, maybe instead of focusing heavily on one point of view, instead cut to different points of view with some regularity to give more perspective on what's happening?

I'm guessing flash fiction is just vomiting something down for practice? That makes sense, I'll try that. I don't have anything older that I've kept since I'd always come back and hate it and delete it, but I'll try editing them from now on instead. Thanks, I appreciate the critiques.

>>159458649
>>159458903
Well, I guess I'm a fucking tsundere because I kind of like it too.

>>159459209
Yeah, I think that's it. Anyways, good luck.

The MC awakes in a public restroom, exiting to find himself in an airport terminal that is also a mall food court, except all the stalls sell baby food exlusively, and every attendee is a middle aged man dressed in ill-fitting clothing who are all hooked up to IVs, and they are all being escorted to a locked corner by men in hazmat suits. The corner contains 3 things, colorful blocks, picture books and a urinal shaped device with vacuum tubes much like that used at a bank. The MC witnesses a hazmat suit grip a man by the base of his skull and firmly plant his head in the device, where he witnesses the man being drained of all fluids as well as his brain, unravelling in the tube like a kind of grey-pink noodle mush. Upon trying to escape he finds that he is now in a white room with a convienence store shelf before him, lined solely with magazines despite being refridgerated. He passes out from mental anguish and awakes next to his mother, a toy in his right hand, and he notices his mother is dead but also has no face. He then witnesses his own birth outside of his window and, being unable to grasp the situation as he is only 3, begins to cry, before being ripped up by a hazmat suit and dragged to a closet. He is forced to sit in the closet as a camera records him crying, before he is viciously beaten with Cricket Mallets. He wakes up once more and finds that he has no legs and is forced to watch as surgery is performed on him.

>>159458147
hmmm i think id watch the first episode and continue depending on whether there is a qt made of the finest waifu material doing clumsy but cute things like laying on the poker table and trying to nap or knocking over poker chips by accident because theyre complaining about doing work. (i really like lazy, slothish cute girls)

>>159450722
This sounds interesting.

I've posted here before so I'm just going to post a Google link to what I have planned out for season 1, and if anyone's interested in more I'd be willing to post it. Feedback is welcome and appreciated
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qQdZivNBADdv5zEuB8mU4JnLokFZ9oqumqSF4Pa74sI/edit
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FMGFg7Z8Qkqa698Z3yzUeg1Zju4GUyY3bxpAzt0Nc34/edit
Pls don't bully

>>159445052
Sounds cool, but not interesting enough for me to say WOW this is what Isekai should aim to be. Also curious about the tone, is it drama,comedy, Action?

>>159445109
It seems like a great concept. that would struggle with a lot of plot threads, and the audience viewing situations how you intend them to. Seems like it would work best as a light hearted action/comedy with LORE

>>159445911
Seems like a fun show that would struggle with implications, and most importantly pushing some message. Like what would the takeaway from a show like this be "Be nicer to your friendly neighborhood zombie" Good premise, but i'm not so sure about the whole corpse equality thing

>>159446276
Of all the ideas in this thread, your's is the most likely to get greenlit

>>159446469
Sounds really interesting, but just a tad bit too much like Wonder Woman

>>159446560
It's going to be really hard to center a story around a convicted rapist, but if successful could be one of the most interesting narratives in modern fiction

>>159446727
Not going to lie the premise seems like it could get stale very quickly, and the bad guy winning, in the end, is an awful idea.

>>159447658
Sounds really good, but there's no shame in subtlety

>>159448362
The only problem with this is that the fantasy setting seems like a complete plot device, when in reality most of this could be told with real world substitutions. As such the characters are at risk of becoming 1D Archetypes instead of multidimensional characters that make shows like this work

>>159444153
A warrior and a mage were tired of death. They came up with the idea to kill the deadman. They somehow succeded and one of them became the Deadman. Since this Deadman wasnt powerful he could die and did so out of weakness or old age. This created a tournament for becoming the new Deadman.

Our MC is a lonely, ruthless and agressive guy. He is master of sneaking even vanishing in plain sight without using magic. He hears about this tournament and wants to rob all contestants. He meets a warrior princess which wants to become the Deadman to bring glory for her people, a "chad" hero guy and a mage child who got dragged accidentally into this tournament.

He steals an old scroll from a group of necromages. Which is a plan to revive the two heros who killed the Deadman to destroy the world. To stop that he starts hunting and kiling the necromages until the current Deadman dies which forces him to either become the Deadman or find someone to do it.

Its just a rough outline of the story. Any improvments?

>>159449401
Sounds Fascinating
>>159449970
Cool, where does the power fantasy end, and the story begin?
>>159450218
Not the first History but with cute girls story, but still seems well off enough if that's your thing
>>159450620
Now this concept has legs but works on the names. Dimension road does not jump out at me
>>159451091
Would have a lot if trouble separating itself from the multitude of other Samurai in a different era fiction
>>159451846
Good but simple twist on harem genre.
>>159451939
I'm sorry, but the gripping realities of heroin addiction and Moe should stay far away from each other
>>159451948
Great stuff with a lot of potentials. Get to work. I expect more by the next thread
>>159452748
Love the concept of an MC doing the opposite of what the typical protagonist would do, because RATINGS. But yeah, iron out the details and the execution and it could be some good shit

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>Daily life of a Japanese truck driver.
>he gets trampled to death by a crown of people

A mentally ill girl becomes a vessel for a Inanna. Seeing her when no one else does, Inanna is particularly weak have people worshiping him anymore. She fights crime in her name relying entirely on things like guns and knives since no real powers until later on. The main antagonistic force are undead, which Inanna claims are commanded by her sister, the ruler of an underworld. It turns out by the end that this is actually because of Inanna screwed up the balance when she tried to bring some of her followers to life. The girl eventually becomes aware of this and tries to quit, only to be found dead the next morning from an apparent suicide. Inanna stands over her body, flickering in and out of having a physical body, claiming that she isn't fun any more.

>>159452816
Like it seems like there is a lot of potential for parallels that make for an engaging story. Work on fleshing out the lore
>>159453242
I have a soft spot for shit like this, as long as it has plenty of Araki level exposition I'll back it
>>159453592
Okay, but why tho?
>>159453811
Sounds like a really fun gag manga if not a bit too similar to OPM
>>159453838
Sounds like fun, but needs more to be an actual show
>>159453985
I like it because it's Isekai but with a point and actual characters
>>159454326
Describes my friend group perfectly, but it might work better with a mixed cast.
>>159454728
Could work for a little while as a tribute to old films, but needs to have something that takes it beyond simple fanboying
>>159455729
If her reverse harem is filled with boring dudes from other harems, where does the intrigue come from? Seems more like a mary sue reverse cuck fantasy
>>159456257
I like the decision to keep it realistic. I;m curious as to where it would go after he finds out his teacher is a stalker?
>>159457288
Why Japan and not America. Also how? Japanese was a feudal society until Commodore Matthew Perry. and even if we retcon that what would inspire them to sail to Africa?
>>159457858
This show is a great example of a show that would benefit from gradually developing plot arcs, an ensemble cast, and LORE

Ok, here me out. Boku no Hero, but the protagonist is a Fantasy "muh chosen one" Hero from a Fantasy world who was isekai'd into a superhero world.

An young boy is a massive fan of a toy commercial anime that has all the typical cliches like fire and goggles for the hero, "collect them all plot", fanservice that goes over his head, massive power creep and lots of stock footage. He watches all the episodes live, has a massive collection of the merch, has all issues of manga adaptation, reads the magazine articles about it. He styles himself after the main hero but breaks character often. His mom indulges him because he behaves well and studies hard for the promise of more toys. His next door neighbor two patterns himself after the mysterious rival character from the show. It mostly would be a slice of life comedy parodying children show cliches by intersecting them with "real life". Show would end with the MC growing just out of the target demographic as the sequel series comes out and losing interest in it in favor of baseball or something.

>>159450722
I'm interested

>>159460993
>the bad guy winning, in the end, is an awful idea

Not that anon, but that's a ridiculous statement. You don't always need the hero to win. Having the hero lose is a criminally underused storytelling method.

>>159450722
Why is this the only one with upmost potential?
What in the fuck?

>>159463054
>Why is this the only one with upmost potential

You have shit tastes and skipped half the posts, that's why.

>>159460993
But the demon king watched himself around elves. He deserves that win.

Lilium is one of the smallest countries in the world.
It is also almost exclusively female.
The Lilum government starts a work exchange scheme to encourage (male) foreigners to settle in the alpine hermit state and help modernise it.
Meanwhile in Japan MC's parents are hassling him to find a girl but he's more interested in being an otaku.
Reluctantly he agrees to be part of the exchange scheme to broaden his horizons.
When he arrives in Lilium he finds the local women intimidating and overbearing (and the internet slow and unreliable)
MC begins to regret his decision,
He's not used to all this attention and hides out in his rented apartment with only a 56k modem for company.
However remarkably he manages inds a cute girl he has a lot in common with unfortunately that's becuase she's a boy.

Four high school girls chatting in recess about their experiences doing enjo kosai.

>>159463060
You're just jealous that anon got so many replies where you got none.

>>159464069
Not in the slightest.

>>159450722
I would pay to see this.

>>159450722
Eh, I see what you're trying to do.

Truck-kun no Monogatari

Earth suddenly entered Aquarion belt, changing the basic rules of the world. Meme and abstract jokes randomly gain sentienity.

The story evolves around Truck-kun, who trying his best to not accidently killed people anymore.

The antagonist is Japanese Cold. Truck-kun trying his best to show his goodwill by going against Japanese Cold mayhem.

>human vs demon war is still continued for centuries
>human and demon were born from the same ancestor
>the branch between human and demon started when ancestor of those two chose different sides
>human chose to side with god while demon chose to side with lucifer

>>159444153
Stainless: PKAM Walking Tank Unit

MC is the captain of the 2012nd "Mad Dog" company, a combined-arms unit conducting peacekeeping in a country mired in civil war. Down with the sand and the grit, he commands one of several euphemistically named "Peacekeeper" Kinematic Armored Machines (AKA: PKAMs). Faced with the demands of an unreasonable command from a disinterested and decadent homeland, the MC holds his unit to a high standard fighting for the people of the war-torn nation.

Meanwhile, the homeland has sent teenagers and children in highly powerful prototype mecha known as SAVIORs to subjugate rebels and bring an end to the conflict by force. They complicate the MC's mission as they range from inexperienced to sadistic, a danger to their allies and deadly to enemies and bystanders alike.

The twist is when the MC rescues an injured SAVIOR pilot, who reveals that not only are SAVIOR pilots are intentionally twisted and drugged murderers, but their mission and role has been since their inception to destroy the whole country so it can be used to stage a larger war against another world power. The whole "Mad Dog" company goes rogue along with the MC, with their 12 PKAMs and "appropriated" SAVIOR the only thing standing between the country, the imperialistic homeland and their insane prototypes (and pilots) and itself.

Big focus on tactics, experience, trickery and tenacity beating out new technology; also focused on the ethics of conflict and war, the dehumanization of the enemy by politics and things like drone warfare.

Dante Must Die Mode: It's literally an anti-mecha show, both in critique the military industrial complex and how they're basically taking down protagonist mecha every episode.

A lich alchemist and his angel apprentice wander around the world as they collect ingredients for the elixir of life.
Along the way, they stumble across comfy adventures in a strange world.

>>159450722
This is actually sounds interesting.

>>159450722
Could be good if you can play your card right.

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>Want to post OC plot
>thread already dies
EVERYTIME

>>159450722
This is the only good one in this thread though. I wonder why.

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Romcom that has all the tropes of a modern garbage romcom.

But the MC is a normal logical reasonable human being that acts like a real world human being.
Evrione else acts like a romcom character.

>>159465802
Nows your opportunity, anonymoose.

>>159465912
I'll try thanks anoon.

>>159453838
She is in danger of losing her driver license. Or is this a car/truck show in disguise and every episode she's wrecking havoc in diffrent trucks and countries?!

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>>159454011
>filthy gaijin plane

Two ideas, both share elements and potentially universes
Idea one: Deals with concept of immortal enemy
> two OP mages defeat apocalyptic beast; seal its power
>when everyone is celebrating, one of the 2 mages kills the other and absorbs his power and the apocalyptic beast's essence, becoming nigh-divine in power in the process
> declared himself God-Emperor, and says he is doing this because conflict alllowed the apocalyptic beast to escape its previous confinement, so by being civilization's immortal enemy, he will reduce the amount of conflict
>this is BS of course
>although civilization of the world is unified, two main factions emerge: those who want to accept the God-Emeperor's rule, and those who want to fight him
>among the 'war with God-Emperor faction' there is tension over who is responsible for the current situation
>eventually, as conflict with God-Emperor goes on, tension among factions reaches a breaking point; there is now a civil war between them
>Due to finally having some time to introspect and be alone God-Emperor calms down, becomes depressed and horrified at previous and current actions and what they have lead to
> Through introspection, God-Emperor's past is revealed; it is quite messed up, but I have not thought of the details yet
>God-Emperor struggles with trying to lead faction of civilization accepts his rule, clashes with destructive personality
> Eventually GE becomes so overwhelmed by situation and depressed that when he becomes aware of plot to assassinate him via poison, does not do anything to stop it
> final episode has him eating poisoned food, ambiguous wheather he lives or dies

>>159465854
The show would be over pretty quick senpai

>>159450722
Noice.

>>159461185
What's exactly the deadman? After the second sentence I thought they were quite literally going to kill dead people to revive them, is the deadman something like the god of death?

how about an anime set during Yugoslav wars in the 90's that has kebab removing cute girls doing cute ethnic violence.

A fighting shonen world of demons and spiritual powers. MC has a hidden source of power of very dark origins, he abuses it to kill the villain but in the process becomes an even bigger villain. His friends realize the dark power was a big ruse from the real villain, a demon who implanted the dark power on the MC basically as a means of reproduction. All of this happens relatively early in the series, the rest of the story is the supporting cast trying to somehow beat the overpowered evil MC or trying to make him regain his senses.

MC's villanous activities correlate mostly to his lust for fighting and his desire to protect his friends. He goes from town to town, killing everybody but a single child, to motivate them to grow up and take revenge, he organizes death games, forcing strong warriors to fight among themselves with their loved ones' lives in line, shit like that. He also is obsessed with kidnapping his love interest, because she's the only person he can't absolutely hurt (a psychological barrier he can't overcome). His other friends try to hide her because they all realized she's their only chance to either beat him or heal him. She eventually jumps off a cliff and kills the evil MC while he rushes to rescue her, and both die.

Also, main rival has a forbidden mortal technique, and using it is a source of much angst. His ancestors beat a demon, and made it their slave, but it turns out that every time they summon the demon it kills them. Anyone from their bloodline can summon him, but they die. He did it on purpose to eliminate their bloodline, since knowing they have an instant win button at their hands most of them can't even resist. The rival uses his technique at least against evil MC, only for MC to effortlessly eat the demon and render it null.

>>159450722
10/10, sounds intriguing.

1. In a world where super-humans (whilst making up a small fraction of the world population) are treated like celebrities, ranging from D-list wanna-be's to A-list super-heroes and villains.

2. In this setting super-humans fight in skermish battles similar to fake-wrestling, all for the sake of the cameras, putting on whatever persona and costume that works in order to get the best merchandise deals, movie rights, book deals, etc.

3. The A-Narrative follows a crisis for these super-humans as seemingly unrelated events trigger the deaths, disgraces, and downfalls of big-name heroes and villains; this includes losing scandals, losing their powers, and similar ill-fates. Soon a civil-war like scenario begins as the fake skermishes steadily become real fights to the death.

>B-Narrative: This civil war is instigated by a super-power-less secret network of 4-8 civilians who have each had their lives ruined at the hands of a super-human(s), and have each undergone a Breaking-Bad style change from ordinary civilian to sophisticated super-human assassins, de-famers, disgracers, etc.

5. Essentially a network of normal people instigate god-like super-humans into a civil war to exact revenge and to remove super-humans from existence one and for all.

>>159461949
>>>159456257
>I like the decision to keep it realistic. I;m curious as to where it would go after he finds out his teacher is a stalker?
The teacher gets him to go along with it and he'll be exposed to hidden sides of his life hinted at in the novels. He'll gradually gets put off by it until her "plot direction" consultations with him actually do help him resolve an important personal issue he'd been avoiding.

After that, they'll get involved with the side characters and resolve their subplots under the pretext of making the novel stories even better making him and their relationship grow. They'll confide in each other and be more frank as time goes on but the solitary guarded front she rarely puts down will frustrate him.

She'll hurt him by publishing a critical and sensitive moment differently from what actually happened in a way that he strongly opposes. It creates a rift between them but this leads to him getting to see her at a low vulnerable point. They don't quite get over it but do try to put it behind them in the short term and this spurs character growth for the teacher as he begins doing stuff to help her with her issues the way she helped him.

Eventually she stops using MC's life story as a crutch and the novels diverge from it so she can write a more "pleasing" finale instead of tracing out the mature low key resolutions his reality has been taking. She actually does it to avoid hurting him but he pushes her to give it their best even if he though he knows it'll open cans of worms for him.

The series finishes on a bittersweet but highly rated note and their relationship and public interactions go cold due to how bad things look for them. They don't really talk to each other anymore until his graduation where the teacher goes to meet with him for one last consultation. She almost loses it at the prospect of letting yet another person walk away from her but he revises the bad end and insists on working together on their after story.

>>159444153

The main character, seeing a young boy about to hit a semi-truck in an intersection, tries to push the truck to safety but is run over and dies. He wakes up, and to his surprise realizes that he has been reborn as a truck. A pop-up menu informs him that he is a torakku-gami, and is now part of a meta-physical bureaucracy tasked with running over Japanese people in order to send them to parallel universes. Each episode he receives a request for a hero needed in another world, and he must find and run over a suitable candidate. When he does he gains experience and when he levels up he can distribute stat points into abilities such as being able to sense nearby otaku, mask his presence to launch sneak attacks, and attract balls towards intersections.

>>159446521
How did he save her from the monsters if only she could see the monsters. Also why would he tap after going through all the effort not to marry her.

Protagonist-kun is a noble scion in a dwindling magic pre-industrial setting. His family's status is based on their knowledge of a technique for sealing people in stasis, something for which he has almost completed his training. When he was young, there was an incident in which cultists assaulted the family's keep in order to set free one of the most ancient prisoners kept there. That prisoner is a youth who was born as part of a ritual which can bind evil intention to an individual, thus his entrance into stasis would represent a way to keep evil from circulating in the cycle of incarnation. However, when the nobles and their servants arrive at the chamber where the sealed youth is kept, they find him sitting amidst the carnage of those who freed him and he asks to be sealed once more. Protagonist-kun is struck by his strange, non-wicked attitude and questions the youth while arguing that he might be allowed to remain free. Everyone argues against him, including the youth who admits to being an evil being, and the seal is restored. Now, ten years later, the keep is under siege and about to fall. Soldiers and servants move through the prison chambers killing criminals and others sealed there so that they cannot be freed, but Protagonist-kun is resolved to keep the evil one "alive." To do this, he must free the youth and strike a bargain that he be allowed to return to his eternal slumber if the two escape to the manse of another lineage capable of the sealing technique.

So, the two must traverse a country which Protagonist-kun never realized was so decayed while being pursued by a cult whose leader's goal is to mate with the youth in order to combine her own ritually manifest evil with his. Naive seigi no mikata and nihilistic sociopath chased by a sadistic yandere across a country where all sorts of situations arise to challenge Protagonist-kun's perception of good and evil.

>>159450722
Sound good on paper.
Dunno how it would works on screen.

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>>159444153
Pinky and the Brain but with Kid Vegeta and Bad Toupee Nappa from Bardock: Father of Goku.

>>159445438
This

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>>159461612

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>>159461612
Fuck off.

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>>159461612
inb4 404

A winner (Playboy, loaded with dosh, popular with the ladies) gets Isekai'd into a fantasy setting.
However it's a grim fantasy setting like WHFB old world. You follow his misfortunes as he tries to survive and prospere while having to work as dung collector or rat catcher. Will he be able to become rich again? Will he become a King? Or will he just die in some ditch without a proper burial?

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>>159461612
I give it the official 4chan seal of approval.

>>159450722
Masterpiece.

>>159444153
The MC is a scientist/engineer that lives on a planet that was colonized 40 years ago. It was more than enough to create sprawling, large cities that also served as traveling hubs between each other.

He's a guy in his late 20's, has a nice job and a peaceful life...until that one incident. A terrorist attack from anti-genetic movements on the main lab the MC usually works (he wasn't there since he had a day off) results in a mutagenic virus to spread. It's not a normal virus since the mutations that follow are also causing evolution and adaptation. Most humans managed to not change, but they are all now hunted down by mutant flora and fauna, as well as those humans that did mutate into abominable predators.

MC's peaceful life turned into a every-day survival. Not only does he have to fight mutants, but also other people that turned into scavengers and bandits. He has the following goals: 1) Find anyone who can join him and who he can trust, 2) find a way to signal the Earth military and 3) survive long enough to get off the planet.

MC doesn't rely purely on weapons to get the job. As both engineer and scientist he researches the mutants and builds stuff fitted to counter them.

>>159450722
I don't get it.

A tourney to decide the edgiest character in Japanese media

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SnK, only Eren stays dead and is replaced by Jean

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An orc chef running a tavern selling exotic meats with his apprentice (cute elf chick for easy appeal). The first two episodes are meant for character and world building, as we see their day to day routine and the people they interact with. A great catastrophe strikes however, and many a monsterslayer is forced to hang up/lose their blades, which removes the chef's main source of revenue and clientele. Now he and his apprentice have to become suppliers themselves and go out into the world hunting the monsters they previously only cooked to various results. To add to the cast would be some various friends, specifically the retired orc's mentor and another would-be monsterslayer.

An adventure/comedy series, twelve episodes with some life lessons as it involves treating nature with respect yadayada and overcoming adversity in the face of things you'd rather turn a blind eye to.

The orc originally intended to be a monsterslayer in his youth but was badly traumatized by his first experience, some parts would be dedicated to both him and the elf overcoming the sudden gravity of their new situation while also leaving room to keep it light-hearted with easier prey.

>>159457288
The setting would work better if the background was about Tokugawa Japan got balls deep into African colonization and had a sizable colony in east africa. Set the story in that colony. More realistically, colonization by Zheng He's fleets would be the better background. Makes for great allegorical material for Imperial Japan colonization as well as current chinese colonization of Africa.

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The setting is science fiction with space travel. The MC's family is involved in psionic powers research and he gets kidnapped by a terrorist organization so his sister cooperates with them. Things go wrong and the protagonist gets killed while resisting, when he dies his latent psionic power releases a Shade - a psionic entity in his image and containing his recent memories but far surpassing a human, set to disappear after enough time passes or the dying person's last wish is fulfilled. He embarks on a journey to save his sister from Organization X.

He travels from planet to planet following their tracks and meeting supporting cast, which at first don't accept him as a human being but rather an automaton to accomplish an already dead person's target. As the story continues some of them though get closer to him, especially AI with which the MC shares mutual bond. The protagonist still can't accept the fact that he isn't an actual person due to his memories.

At the end he manages to find the Organization X's headquarters and rescues his sister. She quickly realizes what he is and thanks him as a Shade for help. The MC unexpectedly doesn't disappear due to the bonds made with his travel companions. She lectures him that a Shade with time will deteriorate straying further and further away from the original personality and start becoming a danger due to its power. She aims a gun and tells him that the real [protagonist's name] wouldn't kill his sister to live. He remarks that it's up to him to decide and cuts her down, after that he escapes in a space ship with his friends.

>>159458408
>>159459209
I concur with the other anon; this is much better than you were making it out to be, and I think you've a good sense for what your story needs. Keeping the action scenes short, for instance, and
not letting the story rest on its laurels.

Flash fiction is usually a term for very short stories, usually capping out at a page in length. It can be a good tool for practice, but I think if you're starting out, the two most important things are to write frequently and read a lot while keeping an eye on the author's techniques. Read as though it were your own work you were assessing.

Writing can be intimidating, but it's never too late to start, and as a consumer of narrative media, you already know most of the fundamentals behind the craft, even if you don't know them by name. A good book for starting out would be Screenplay by Syd Field or Save the Cat by Blake Snyder. Both were originally written for the film industry, but when you take a closer look, novels and films follow the same basic structural patterns. Best of luck!

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>Boku no hero academia
>deconstructing tropes

>>159456920
This would work well for a DnD adventure, where the players provide the motivations and character arcs, but if you mean to tell it as a story, you'll need to work on those areas first. Just about any sort of world-building can be made to work, provided your characters are done well enough, but the reverse isn't true. Therefore, I suggest starting by realizing your characters.

>>159457044
That's much more interesting. Do you have answers to those questions?

>>159457288
It sounds like you're trying to tell an essentially American story about American slavery, American racial tensions, American police violence, American gangs, etc. but with Japan pasted on top of it all. Aside from the fact that slavery was banned in Japan circa 1590 and that during the era of colonial slavery the Jesuits were actually dealing in Japanese slaves instead, a hypothetical Afro-Japanese community wouldn't likely resemble the African American community much. You'd need to write a new history from the ground up for everyone involved, which you don't seem to have done.

>>159457858
This would work as a 4-koma or the like. Each gag is amusing, but likely couldn't sustain itself for very long.

>>159458013
If that's what you want to see, you've put together a competent vehicle for it.

>>159459632
It'd make a great music video, maybe for a Cuushe song. Ever watched Airy Me?

>>159461185
A bit disjointed. It's a tournament story, but the tournament's irrelevant because he's actually going out to assassinate necromancers?

>>159461437
>>159461949
Thanks for pitching in, anon!

>>159461586
Let's hear more about your protagonist.

>>159463045
Not that anon either, but while a "fall of the hero" ending can be incredibly powerful when done well, it doesn't suit every story and usually requires a very compelling tragic force. I don't see such a tragic force in that pitch, mostly because none of the characters are given any sort of personality.

>>159465179
I love it.

>>159465210
You've given us a still picture with an interesting ambience; care to add a little motion to it? Who are these people? Why will I care about them?

>>159468097
Interesting tragedy. "Due to finally having some time to introspect and be alone God-Emperor calms down, becomes depressed and horrified at previous and current actions and what they have lead to" is a mighty heavy line, though; it's your turning point. I'd love to hear more about that, since I feel your pitch would live or die by how well that development is executed.

>>159469278
I guess that's an interesting origin story for a hilariously cliche mustache-twirling villain. I don't know how compelling it'd be as its own story, though. It just sounds like a long sequence of one chap being an asshole.

>>159469768
Sort of interesting, but although you seem to be pitching it as a superhero "deconstruction" or what have you, it seems to ultimately loop back around to a straightforward superhero story. Also, no characters.

>>159471672
Hey, it's a fully developed pitch! And a very good one too. You have all your fundamentals here and you take us right up to the first turning point, which is exactly as far as I think a good pitch should usually go. Great work; I'd watch it for sure.

>>159477357
Could be good for a video game or action movie.

>>159482016
Pretty good, and definitely on the more unique side of things. I like, and would watch it.

>>159484177
The ending is a bit out of nowhere, isn't it?

sol/romance drama

The story takes place in China and the mc is a 16 year old whose parents are tried of his out of control behavior and poor school performance. He actually has above average grades and isn't really out of control just some social drinking/marijuana use and staying out past 10pm but you know how bat shit crazy chink parents are. They send him off to go live with his father's uncle that he only met once. He lives on a farm in the middle of of nowhere.

When he gets there his uncle is polite and friendly but also strict and sets him off to work on the farm right away. It also seems like his uncle doesn't want him there and he has to sleep in a small shack near the house. He is really bummed about having to be there but is a bit cheered up when he meets a 17 year old girl named Ming that lives there. After a 2-3 weeks he begins to notice something is off and finds out that the whole place in a big clandestine ketamine lab. He finds out his uncle and Ming's father are higher ups overseeing the production. MC is sent to work in the lab after his uncle realizes the kid is very knowledgeable for chemistry

Overtime he becomes closer to his uncle and Ming. One night him and Ming trip together while laying in the field under the stars with some product they swiped from the lab. On the come down they both open up and spill their guts to each other and fall in love. MC even gets approval from Ming's father.

After 6 months MC's parents send a letter offering to let him come home but he write back saying he is happy where he is and is staying.

1 1/2 years after mc arrived to the farm the place gets raided. Uncle tells them the kids had no idea what was going on and were 100% innocent. Ming and MC were let go but uncle and Ming's father got the death penalty.

The last scene shows MC and Ming in Thailand walking into a fancy restaurant shaking the hand of a sharply dressed man who says "I'm looking forward to going into business with you 2.

>>159486636
I honestly plan on showing the character development of the God-Emperor through flashbacks, sequences where we delve into the GE's mind and see his thoughts which are intertwined with the flashbacks, and episodes where the GE disguises himself as a commoner and goes out among the populace
Of course, since I am a fan of the GITS 1995 movie, we are occasionally going to have a 3-5 minute sequence where the GE just stares at something and thinks while the OST plays
I am also debating with myself over wheather or not to include episodes where the GE acquires even more power, but at a price. Yay or nay?

>>159461949
>Could work for a little while as a tribute to old films, but needs to have something that takes it beyond simple fanboying
Yeah that's one issue I've been facing since every time I try to come up with something it almost always end being a over done trope

For instance one of the ideas I thought about the most would be that Jun is referred to as having "weak fists" in a figurative sense since as one or two side characters would put it"he who fights fights for nothing, not even for the sake of fighting will have no weight behind their strikes", or something like that which while not a complex one the basic, bare bones arc would go something like:
>Jun at first denies it which starts to lead to him hitting walls he can't overcome, and not just in the sense of losing fights, could be a variety of other stuff.
>He after while he finally accepts that flaw but has no clue on what he should be fighting for.
>starts trying to find a reason through a variety of ordeals through jobs or other actions he normally would never do.
>finally finds a reason and leads to some character growth

The only issue is trying to figure out what the reason is, because if its something stupid like "muh friends" no matter how much effort you put into it, it'll just end up shit.

>>159444153
This sounds dumb at first but hear me out. World is set up as terrible and cruel place, violent monsters everywhere with mysterious origins. They invade a lil village and kill everyone there, except one kid who becomes the main protagonist. He escapes or whatever and gets to a safer city where he trains in their military. The military feels enough time has passed that they are now strong enough to fight the monsters when the monsters end up invading them.

The monsters completely stomp their way through the humans and the protagonist goes to fight them, backed up by his friends who we have gotten to know over training. He is then stomped on and killed by the monsters without managing to kill a single one.

The rest of the story follows the main protagonist friends and their fight for survival as they try to figure out a way to stop the monsters. All the setting and tools would be medieval and what not, none of that dumb future stuff or gun shit. Also the monsters should look creepy as fuck, and the kid they eat would be a very big oh shit moment people don't expect. He'll be a very stereotypical "Mary Sue" up till that point.

>>159486191
The main character would be a stereotypical "ill person" who wears mostly white clothing with bandages on her head and black disheveled hair. Lives in some sort of public housing or mental hospital. Ambiguous disorder that involves hallucinations and really strange decision making, so cannot live as a person on her own. There is a conflict between directions of "I am your caretaker, so I will help you get better and integrate into society" and the many people who don't exist that she sees. Because of this, she is more suspect-able to Inanna's influences.

When "hero"ing, wears a really goofy costume that looks like a low-quality magical girl cosplay. Lots of pouches for tools.

>>159450722
Got me a chuckle.

a first person harem where all the characters talk to the audience as though they are the MC of the harem

There is a world that is flat, and the world powers (shadow gov't) have the entire population under a mind control spell that makes them believe they are one a round ball planet floating in infinite nothing, when in reality they exist in Earth Realm, a closed flat plain system. The world gov't is being headed by a group of trans dimensional creatures known as the Reptilians, that survive off of negative energy. They keep the population under this mind control in order harvest them of their energy via an energy extraction matrix

>>159454309
t. faggot who took a creative writing class in community college

The MC plays one of the less casual VMMORPGs on the market. He is currently at the level cap but being cut off from the endgame content due to playing the Gunsword class whose entire point is being an all rounder with high adaptability and speed, which makes it useless for the traditional roles required in the endgame boss raids .due to low DPS and inability to protect comrades from the monsters, only yourself.

The story follows the MC as he starts becoming more interested in PvP due to his predicament. As he ranks up in the official arena he becomes better and better at it due to his class finally being able to show its strong points and not many people knowing how to counter it due to being the least popular class thanks to its lack of PvE power. As he is clinging up the ranks of unitary gear arena and meeting new friends he becomes interested in the much more popular arena with own gear everyone is playing.

He gets his ass kicked due to having mediocre gear. He is soon after contacted by one of his friends from the previous arena that offers him to join her guild to get some good gear. He does as instructed and becomes surprised as the guild in fact didn't go raiding but rather ambushed several players coming from a raid and plundered their loot. Confused at first he becomes slowly used to his new gameplay style and begins climbing both the arena ranks and the player killer notoriety rankings.

The story follows his guild's daily adventures as they are under constant attacks from the server's bigger guilds while trying to get some gear and fame for themselves. Also awkward school moments when he realizes he has been PKing the girl he has crush on and it keeps happening.

>World is going to shit
>No explanation
>No Great plot
>No plot twists
>Only a MC
>Surviving one day at a time
>You can put a villain of the week if you want, idgaf
>No harem
>No ecchi
>Only Manlyness

>>159493903
dark souls the anime?

>>159493953
I was thinking more of a Riki-Oh.
But sure, Dark Souls would work great

>>159450722
This is what I call a literal 10/10.

>>159451948
Amazing

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>>159444153
A young autistic boy flies off the handle and kills his mother in a fit of rage he is then transported to a magical world where everyone is just as retarded as he is then he kills himself the end.

I call it Boku no Sperg Rage

>>159496769
>Boku no Sperg Rage
I shouldn't have laughed

>>159444153
>you can't use any normal tropes unless you attempt to deconstruct them

Is Boku no Hero really a deconstruction? It's just normal anime tropes but with superpowers instead of other sorts of superpowers.

>>159493903
what is fist of the north star

>>159486191
>>159457044
>That's much more interesting. Do you have answers to those questions?
Yes and no.
1) An enemy organization. The MC's side is using technology to do it, although the other side is either significantly more technologically advanced, or is using actual magic (this distinction is not determined for the MC)
2) It is clear that for the people who do get sent to other worlds, doing so is highly positive, likely as it is for whoever brought them over, eg court wizard / etc, but for the world itself, it is destabilizing. Isekaid people present an instability to the world, the benefit must outweigh the costs of say, decimating enemy nations or rampant revolution of technology.
3) This was a shitty question, nevermind.
4) Either the ends justify the means, or the higher-ups aren't telling the whole story.


The organization and the enemy were once a single group, hence why they have the same dimension-traveling tech
The leader of the MC's group was in some way affected by the things that lead up to the organization's creation and then its schism
The enemy is looking to amass enough people with resources drawn from the other worlds for utopic preservation, at the cost of destroying every defective world that self-destructs from the apparent instability (roughly half of them)
The MC's world is one of the defectives

An isekai based of all the lies that is lingered in the world.
Where the MC's a blackman and the big bad is a fat white american.

The title is Nisekai.

>>159499042
Looks better.

>159450722
>159499042
Looking to get blown the fuck out again so soon?

>>159499042
So, just like real life?

>>159493224
Majored in creative writing, with a focus on editing genre fiction. This makes for enjoyable practice, and it's a delight to see writers developing their ideas.

>>159487975
There's a good premise here, but it currently doesn't seem as though your protagonist has full agency, particularly at the climax (the raid). Generally the climax is where your protagonist should make their most meaningful decisions, rather than passively watch events unfold.

>>159488791
If that's your intent, you could do worse than adapting the narrative structure of A Christmas Carol. It has the dramatic beats your story needs; just switch it for a tragic ending.

>>159489510
See >>159481220

>>159489709
What is it that she wants most?

>>159493760
Hinges on the viewer being able to get deeply invested in imaginary game mechanics. That said, there are obviously tons of people out there who meet that description, and I'm sure they'd enjoy this.

>>159499016
I like the spoilered bit; it'd make for a very strong conflict with some good thematic depth. Are the isekai scenarios they're dealing with as trite as they usually are in anime, such as most of them being high school boys, etc.?

>>159499042
It's intriguing, I liked it.

>>159499167
Eh, pretty much.

>>159499042
What are you trying to here, if I may ask?

>>159497012
It's a japanese take on american comic book heroes.
I don't know what the fuck OP meant with that.

>>159499042
Good premise here, would be better if you complete it more.

>>159499342
Post the same shit in every thread and then samefag a million replies for no apparent reason besides autism.

A loli gets addicted to working out and goes full kenshiro mode. After wandering through a back ally one day, she finds herself thrown into the world of loli deathsports, where lolis compete against each other with their lives on the line.
Battles include minefield soccer, grenade baseball and kerosene water fights etc.
Everyone who competes is miraculously impossible to kill, surviving ridiculous situations (i.e. being torn to pieces by a tiger or falling in lava) with relatively little explanation.

>>159499342
Writing an anime plot.
See OP's post.

>>159499425
Not my fault people interested in my plot.
I don't have time to samefag anyway, that's boring.

>>159499425
Been years in here and visited plot thread, this is the first time I see the post desu.
unironiccaly interesting actually

>>159499042
gold, would pay to see.

>>159499173
>such as most of them being high school boys, etc.?
Some are, others are salarymen, girls even, whatever, mainly this is for taking the piss out of "popular" trends.
A little bid of sadism in that being abducted to another world with no way of returning, no way to contact your loved ones, is stressing shit even before factoring in the assassins.
Part of the world instability is due to isekaid people largely not being people who would actually be competent in that kind of situation, although a few that are would also be introduced as a bigger challenge later on.
The settings of those worlds are kind of an afterthought, maybe a few reminiscent of places in Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle?

>>159499736
I'm obligated to recommend reading The Dark Lord of Derkholm. It's about a fantasy world that's been conquered by a corporation from the real world and forced to stage isekai adventures for tourists. The protagonist is a family-man wizard who ends up elected as the season's Dark Lord for the overthrowing, but becomes entangled in a plot to overthrow the CEO of the corporation that's enslaved them instead.

Reposting from a previous thread:
>The story takes place in a city where pretty much everyone has superpowers due to some meteor shower sprending supernatural shit through the world or whatever bullshit excuse for a mass empowerement event you want to come up with. These supernatural powers are related to your personality, you only get your power once your personality is defined enough for the power to manifest in a clear way and it can evolve or even change depending on how your personality changes with time.
>Due to everyone getting powers, crime is on the rise so the government creates an agency to deal with the superpowered criminals.
>The members of a particular branch of the Agency that is located in that city are the MCs (with each arc giving the spotlight to certain members), though if you want a single protagonist then that role would be given to the one in charge of that branch, an ex-police officer who used to use his powers to fight crime till he had a run-in with a criminal organization that caused him to lose his partner (and lover) and also grow afraid of using his own powers.
>Initially, the story doesn't follow an overall plot but rather is separated into independent arcs in which the Agency deals with a different case and a "villain of the week", though people from previous arcs show up and even have relevant roles in the current arc from time to time. Eventually, though, it's revealed that pretty much all the villains of previous arcs are connected to a crime lord. Said crime lord is also the guy who killed MC's partner/lover, his powers allow him to manipulate other's people brains, meaning he can change or erase someone's personality (and thus his powers), erase memories, etc.
Even with the crime lord shit, the idea would be for the story to focus on relatively small scale events instead of having the MCs end up facing the ultimate superpowered villain, saving the world, finding the truth behind the meteor shower or shit like that.

>>159499042
Interesting, at least from all the post in this thread this is the best. just my 2 cent.

The story takes place in a steampunk world where, with the evolution of architecture and engineering, humanity now lives in the top of the buildings. Humanity has forgotten how was the surface.

The main character is a man who wishes to become a explorer to discover the secrets of the surface.

After his female best friend's brother receives threats from a group of delinquents, they are thrown off the buildings and land safely on the surface, where they discover that lives strange creatures and a group of humans who wishes to destroy those who live in the top of the buildings since they abandoned who is still in the surface.