ITT: Show with a great premise, but abysmal writing

>>158897482
Describe what you think good writing is.

>>158897506
A storyline that goes somewhere.
Newly introduced characters contribute something to the plot.
The MC is not an underdeveloped audience stand-in.

>>158897630
Sounds like you think Kamisama Dolls had good writing.

>>158897901
Elaborate.

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>Let's have a bladerunner type thing
>Let's have a underlying idea of a real ethical issue you should think about
>HURRD DE DURR LETS FOCUS ON A 18 YEAR OLD FUCKING A 9 YEAR OLD
>Let's forget about the tone set in the intense moments
>Let's rip off psychopass for an episode to have all dramatic tension ruined by a little kid

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>>158897630
Kamisama Dolls has that kinda stuff, its just the curse of Brains Base means you'll never see it animated.

>>158899577
At least it's fun to watch. I wish it were better, though.

>>158899577
I Second this 12 episodes that have gone exactly where?

-mamika is dead welp
-shinji 2.5 is retarded couldnt even mention meeting mamika to protect his friend while spouting off alot of other bs couldn't think of the one thing to stop the fight
-motivations are not fleshed for something like 95% of the characters
-its like everyone's retarded

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>>158899379
Weirdly enough Japan still loves it

>>158899975
wasn't this the opposite where the premise was kinda cliched

>>158899822
Ehhh, and the manga translation isso slow. Shame as I unironically liked the show, with the unique dolls hums and opening aesthetics

>>158897482
Re:Creators. Awesome premise but then you watch it. I see someone has already posted it.

>>158899975
Stop this meme.

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I thought it was allright but it could have been way better.

>>158899981
>Weirdly
It's a common fact that Japs have shit taste.

>>158900547
The writing could have been much better (maybe if the show was condensed into fewer episodes), but it's far from abysmal.