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How do we fix Monster Musume?

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How do we fix Monster Musume?
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>>158442828
Make it just about a bunch of cute monster girls instead of a self-insert fantasy where the MC is perfect in every way and everyone falls in love with him immediately and all other men in the world are pathetic jerks without any redeeming qualities because god forbid there's any competition for the MC in getting dry-humped by his harem of pure kissless virgin pure-hearted pure girls.

Harem anime is shit.
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Remove the harem aspect. Either just have Miia as the sole romantic focus, or present the series like Crab's original one-shots, with different identical brothers for each girl.
Give the girls more depth than just one single played out character archetype each.
Put more focus into portraying the cultural and physical differences and challenges the MGs have to overcome, and how they adapt to living in a changing human society.
Stop drawing them like twigs with balloons on their chest. This goes double for Tio. She's a big strong oni, at least give her some slight muscle definition.

It's just what I think I'd like to see, personally.
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>>158443117
>just have Miia as the sole romantic focus
This is correct.
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>>158442828
First step: we kill Mero
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By getting a translation of chapter 52 which was released literally 9 years ago.
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>>158442828
Kill it with fire.
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>>158443166
Seconded
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>>158443117
>>158443166
>>158443223
There's some good advice in this thread.
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>>158443099
Darling is an amazing harem mc compared to the competition.

>all other men in the world are pathetic jerks without any redeeming qualities
What the fuck are you even talking about? Bike Cop, the chief, the racist guy, the orcs, the fishmen, vampire dad, scummy director, and Cathyl's boyfriend are the only other guys we've seen decent amounts of. Most of the background guys are portrayed as typically nice, but easily influenced by lewdness.
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>>158442828
Make it a lesbian sitcom about the misadventures of Papi and Suu
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>>158442828
Personally as I see it since Miia stayed with MC the longest she should get him. That and if Papi and Centorea never showed up when that marriage thing between human and extraspecies thing was forced upon MC then we wouldn't have to deal with this shit. Speaking of which aren't there a bunch of human x extraspecies couples already. There are many plot holes in this setting.
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>>158442828
Remove the monster of the month formula, add one more main girl (holstaur) and focus on the main girls.
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>>158442828
Put in monster boys for each girls ie Snakeboy, birdboy, horseboy, smileboy, spiderboy, fishboy.
Darling then got out of babysitting job and fucks Ms Smith.
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>>158442828
Make it weekly or biweekly. Spending months not seeing your favorite girl is really annoying, especially when Crabman randomly takes breaks.
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>>158445805
It only makes it worse when it takes forever for them to get translated when they finally do get released.
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>>158442828
wow, i totally forgot this garbage even existed
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>>158443117
>present the series like Crab's original one-shots, with different identical brothers for each girl

That's perfect. I loved those shorts and it's just silly enough for this series too.
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>>158443099
You're really vocal about your disdain for wish fulfillment recently.
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More monster girls.
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>>158442828
You cancel it.
It's a god awful trash heap.
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More screentime for best girl.
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>>158442828
Stop doing year long story arcs, especially when you can't actually write.
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>>158443223
Wouldn't that be
Tragic
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http://www.strawpoll.me/12153778
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>>158448941
>Mero or Cerea on top
>Suu and Rachnera at the end
This got to be shitposting
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>>158449124
Retard
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Give Suu more development. It feels like she's just there, mainly providing humor.
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>>158449124
Shitposting meets copypasta
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>>158448941
>>158449124
Remember that time when the horsefuckers rigged that one strawpoll and horsepussy got over 1,000 votes?
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>>158448288
Or actually release all the chapters in your storyarc sequentially instead of spinning the hiatus/delay wheel each month.
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>>158443117
This anon knows.
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>>158443099
This, I fucking hate MC. Especially his white eye face, make me wanna punch
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>>158449192
It's hard to develop a character if there are eight on the same level.
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Reverse NTR is a must. Add sexy female human at the back of the neighborhood.
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>>158449576
>Especially his white eye face, make me wanna punch
Glad I'm not the only one who thinks this. I hate those white dumb looking eyes of his. It shows up way more than his "real" eyes
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>>158449606
But Suu gets shafted so hard after her intro. Every other girls get "second arcs" so to speak.
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>>158449636
Don't get me wrong, I love Suu and I think she's a great comic relief, but... that's it. There are too many characters already, developing her would hurt the work even more.

In fact, to be honest, I'd rather see most of them put on a bus. Restrict to three main girls, but DEVELOP THEM PROPERLY.

Alternatively: give the manga an ending and start again another story on the same universe.
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>Less fan service
>More character study episodes
>Lighting transitions
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>>158449192
You can't develop a retard
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More Cerea.
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introduce a new MC and ditch the current guy, marry him to a girl of his harem, kill him, just get rid of him and introduce a new dude or girl completely different from the first guy. with it comes new monster girls and new plotlines.

we need delinquents and monster girls
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>>158449917
>more shit garbage
No
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>>158449964
More best girl.
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>>158442828
Better moderation over thread content
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>tfw chapter 53 will be released before chapter 52 is even translated
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Doppel is the Superior Girl
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>>158443117
The problem is that's a great idea, it would never sell. If it isn't like every other anime out there it'll be different and people won't like it.
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>>158442828
bumsex
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>>158443117
That wont sell.
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