Chapter 24 is ready. Chapters 22 and 25 in the works.
>>156902980
Quality check is appreciated and all.
>>156902980
How long until Japan starts making Mitty blankets?
>>156903465
Holy fuck.
>>156903825
And there.
Feel free to cry, check mistakes, and wait for a new mitting of Nanachi and Bondrewd in volume 4.
>>156903344
>all that cute plush on her deathbed
It still hurts.
>>156903269
What a pure robot.
>>156904163
These wound will never heal, anon
Fuwa fuwa will help us forgive, but never forget
>>156903816
Yeah, this manga gets pretty heavy at times. The way all the tragedy factors into the storyline and comes about as a result of the abyss curse, arguably the most prominent focal point of the whole narrative, keeps it from being contrived or forced. It's just fucking heartbreaking, what happens to the people unlucky enough to catch the worst end of it.
>>156904872
They will never explore Abyss together.
Why did it come to this.
Thanks, anon! Made me tear up reading this chapter again. It looks good to me, no obvious mistakes.
>>156904961
To prevent it from becoming a harem. Riko and Nanachi are already in love, Prushka would've fallen for his boyish bravery and unbreakable will to protect the girls in no time at all, Maruruk already had the hots for him just from their brief stay and would've probably spread his pussy(boi) for Reg before any of the other girls could because traps are devious little sluts like that, and the genki Mitty would've thought he was just the cutest thing ever and would keep him more or less constantly erect with her frequent hugs and snuggles, squishing her big loli boobs on his chest and face all the time and keeping his dick painfully hard.
The really sad thing here though is that we're likely never going to get any more lolis now that we're down in the fifth layer and everyone's something out of a Salvador Dali painting.
>>156905736
Now that's real horror
>>156903743
Pretty decent font you chose for the wailing, did you happen to try out any others?
thank you veru much!!!
>>156907090
What do you think you're doing
>>156906929
Tried Mouthbreather, Janitor and Deathrattle, but they seemed a bit too clean for the occasion.
>>156903078
>"This's worse than what I made!"
"This is worse than what I made!" Don't use "this's" as a contraction.
>>156903974
>"accompmlished"
"accomplished"
>>156905736
>Riko
>in love
eh, it's more Reg than Riko.
>>156908379
It only seems that way because Riko's ultimate purpose, her raison d'etre is to conquer the abyss and make it alive to the bottom, even if Reg died she would have no choice but to go on. But Reg's one purpose above all else he's dedicated to is protecting her and ensuring she achieves her dream. If she were to die he would be at a complete loss. That's just the nature of things, Reg's role is in effect to be a tool, a shield, a weapon and a beast of burden, and if he gets broken they'll have no choice but to throw him away. That's what it means to be a relic that happens to have a soul, but I'd say they love him about as much as anyone could love a machine.
>>156902980
>until what hour are you planning to doze off
Needs a question mark.
It also might fit in the bubble nicer if you use "how long are you planning to doze off?" instead.
>>156903131
>I'll properly take action
"I'll take proper action" may be better here.
>>156903183
>Mitty, you know,
I'd switch this around so it sounds less like she is addressing Reg as Mitty.
>>156903232
>...is something I can't accept
>she cannot even scream
It's minor, but I think switching the use of "can't" and "cannot" here would better fit each sentence.
>an opportunity this convenient
Could use moving down the bubble slightly
>>156903576
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>>156903743
;_;
>>156903030
>"are the internal organs the ones before this...?"
This doesn't make much sense to me. Should it be something like "do I remove the internal organs first...?"
Maybe it's fine and you could leave it, but this is a small suggestion.
>>156909043
We don't know that yet. Reg's original reason for going was the question of his past and origins; it just seems like his sole purpose is protecting Riko because the manga's been somewhat hinting at it for a while but there hasn't been anything explicit. Making protecting Riko his #1 priority is something he decided for himself.
And yeah of course Riko likes the robot, but it's not that prominent. It's much more obvious with Nanachi.
>>156909328
It's more obvious with her because she started off practically hating him, finding him annoying and always calling him trash, but fast forward where we are now and her crush is painfully obvious. Riko always liked him and treated him more or less the same now as she did when they first met, so it doesn't feel like there's been much core development in their relationship specifically. Then again they're still just kids, their love for eachother is about as pure as can be, or at least as pure as it can be when she's already played with his penis a couple times.
>>156902980
Where?
Are these the LQ or HQ typeset chapters? Regardless thanks guys.
>>156910900
What do you think, anon? Do these look HQ to you?
>>156910626
They're 12, that's when kids start becoming aware of sexuality. It's pretty much what goes on between Reg and Nanachi even.
And you're exaggerating with how she hated him or whatever. Most of their early interactions are purely practical due to the situation, and the only time she calls him annoying it's not really because she found him annoying but because she can't deal with the physical constant (that's been there since the first chapter she showed up).
>>156911219
>constant
contact*
>>156911219
She seemed like she was being pretty harsh most of the time, I mean she called him a piece of junk more than once, she seemed pretty proud of herself for finding him easy to emotionally manipulate, put Riko's life at risk for dinner ingredients without regarding his feelings on the matter and just seemed to get her jabs in whenever she could. Not that I expected her to be a jubilant ray of sunshine considering the circumstances but there's no way she liked him when they first met. She may not have hated him but she certainly didn't like him, not until she finally started seeing him as a human being and not a useless toaster. But that's the whole point of character development, isn't it?
Was this ever translated?
>>156914213
What we know for sure is that there's something about her being super fluffy, super good-smelling, super cute and that he wants to penetrate the bunny cunny. I think it also mentions her hands are so soft that she can't hurt you no matter how hard she tries.
Where do you upload these chapters to?
Anywhere?
>>156903974
Bondrewd is one terrifying motherfucker.
>>156915110
Made all the worse by the fact that tearing you to pieces is actually one of the less gruesome things he could do to you.Remember, the people in the canisters are still alive.
>>156902980
where does one find the other chapters I can only find chapters 1-16
>>156915816
in the archive