She did nothing wrong and didn't deserve that ending.
>>156191865
Should have kept her mouth shut and watch as her lover rapes her best friend like a good girl.
>>156191865
Now we finally know what tomboys are good for.
>>156193282
that'd make her best girl
>>156191865
It's kind of fucked what how her ending went.
I think this girl is really cute every time I see her, but knowing what happens to her has put me off reading the manga.
>>156194317
Honestly, this manga is forgettable aside from her and being horribly edgy.
>>156194376
This. It's a pretty unpleasant experience even if you like a degree of edginess. There's just no real payoff.
>>156194461
the LNs were the NEET/loser MC goes into a fantasy world and becomes instantly alpha is not realistic.
but him suddenly becoming a homicidal edgelord is also unrealistic
>>156195054
>the LNs were the NEET/loser MC goes into a fantasy world and becomes instantly alpha is not realistic.
Not instantly, but I'd believe it more if it was like a growth.
Here's an alternate ending that could've been much better:
>he falls for the tomboy
>forgets about his obsession and focuses on becoming a better man
>he kills his "daughter' because he couldn't convince her to let go
>and he lives a better life as an award winning manga author with a tomboy wife
There. Did I make the manga better?
>>156196036
fuck yeah
but if you want to keep the deconstruction then just make the MC grow to stay the loser he was
or just leave the tomboy out all together, have him manipulate and marry the waitu only to have them both in a unhappy relationship. Probably end with the MC going back to set things right and put the characters back together again, he's still a loser but he's at least a better person
>>156191865
She deserved it completely for being a slut. If it triggers you that much, you should got back to your usual website, you cancerous crossie.
>>156196294
He's a loser because of the life choices he made the first time around. I made it so he made better choices and now his life is good.
>>156191865
>go back in time
>NTR bully from his future genki tomboy wife by indirectly murdering him
>make her like you so much she will literally get stabbed to save you and put you back on the right path
>SMASH HER FUCKING BRAINS IN WITH A WOOD PLANK
What a waste of a best girl.
>>156196502
What was so special about the girl he was obsessed with anyways when you got a pretty cute girl sucking your fucking dick?
>>156191865
Is this the "bonk, ded" meme that was posted in the tomochan threads?
>>156196612
Yeah it is.
>>156196975
but why
>>156191865
She was a retard and got a dog's death for it. I don't know why so many people got upset with her passing when she was just trash.
>>156198023
Don't ask. I have no clue why.
The second half felt like author completely gave up on writing and just wrapped up his shit in the most forced way
>>156191865
can't remember much
besides being edgy as fuck
Mujaki no Rakuen had a more "pure" approach
but at this point it's just a bother since there's pretty much no development
How do you fuck up this bad with second chance ? How the fuck do you allow to get bullied by fucking kids ?
BONK
>>156199997
She wasn't a dirty tomboy.
Tomboys are for faggots.
>>156202352
>Tomboys are for faggots.
And you lost me.
>>156202670
Just like how you've lost your manhood.