More chapters of silly love stuff. My proofreader is gone for the week so it'll be great if you guys could point out grammatic errors.
>>156139922
Ooh. I haven't read this one before. Lemme go read up the rest of it.
End of Chapter 4.
And end of Chapter 5(ich). As I've said, please look over the grammar if possible, thank you.
Thanks.
>>156140100
Splendidly Found Out sound off.
thanks
>>156140436
I can't really think of an alternative.
>>156140100
Typical asian girl, had a girl like this before fucking hypocrite just because she shy infront of her friend. Hurt everytime i remember it.
Thank you for introducing me to this series!
>>156140010
Maybe this could be phrased like:
>... Well, I know how you feel, but "just an acquaintance" still hurts.
>>156140065
"The girl of destruction" is a bit odd; I'm having a little trouble pondering upon the phrase the more I think about it.
>>156141080
Thank you.
>The girl of destruction
The original is 修羅場作りガール which literally translates to "Girl who creates scene of carnage/fight/problem", I've no idea how to shorten that properly.
>>156140160
>kaiju
Just use giant monster you weeb
>>156141311
It saves space.
>>156141199
I couldn't come up with anything very short and effective; "Homewrecker" and "Mischief maker" are too dramatic. Maybe something like a "stir-up girl" or "Problem causing girl" would work.
>>156141369
>Problem causing girl
I'll use that then, thank you very much.
>>156139963
So she's just a small town girl?
>>156141676
He does look like a city boy, doesn't he?
>>156140160
Thank you.
When will they fuck?
>>156140100
Is their relationship even legal?
>>156140160
Thanks.
>>156143967
Why would it be illegal? It's not uncommon to see high school girls with university boyfriends.
>>156144318
Statutory rape.