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Extra chapter 61.5. Needs proofreading.
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What does it say near her head in the 2nd panel?
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What does the small bubble form panel 5 say?
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From chapter 64, what does it say near her head in the 2nd to last panel? I guess it's something like "shit" or "fuck".
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Same thing here with the bottom right panel.
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And for the broken English part here, how should I write it?
I'd write it like "ai lof iu", but I know English speakers would not get it since their pronunciation rules are stupid. Maybe one of these would fit better:
ay lov yuh
eye lov yuh
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>>154858550
Since he's speaking English in the translation, you might try broken Japanese as an equivalence. It doesn't make much sense for him to be speaking perfect English and then suddenly be talking with the deftness of a 4-year-old.
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>>154858893
But then readers would not understand what he said.
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>>154858354
I think that's just the sound effect for the ice moving in the cup

>>154858407
Sound effect for shock.
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Patiently waiting for a proofreader.
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>>154857631
sfx for grinning

>>154857760
Pretty sure its a groan of some kind. The kana just says rafu. so its either that or just saying "rough"

>>154858354
>>154858407
What this guy said
>>154859347
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>>154859347
>>154861643
>grinning has a sfx
>being shocked has a sfx
Yeah, I'll pass.
I'll translate the little bubble from >>154857760 as "grr". Would that make sense?
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Mami is best girl.
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>Anzu still using the Yoshifumi Stick MAX

Nitta and Anzu confirmed being tied for best girl status.
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>>154857526
Oh I missed it
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>>154861970
Yeah it would. Sorry for being late. Just noticed it now
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Still need editing or you're good?
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>>154866365
Nothing needs to be edited as far as I know. I think we're missing some extras, but we don't have the raws.
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>>154866541
No I checked the batoto uploads. I think it's relatively fine. There's no more extras either
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>>154866592
Then I guess the only thing that needs editing is the HQ version of chapter 61.
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>>154866694
You have them?
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>>154866916
www.mediafire.com/file/6r0c1z380zdedm3/2016-11_small_rip%2C_my_bad.zip
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>>154866987
Oh ok. Sorry about being late again. Today's one of the few days of the week I'm swamped with projects
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>>154867397
But anon, that's already translated, it "only" needs cleaning, redrawing and typesetting. Editing in other words. If you're swamped with projects, why offer yourself to edit this?
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>>154867520
Oh. Wait what're we talking about? I was talking about showing up late today to proofread the chapter. Since I don't have a TLC or a PR, I just proofread things myself.
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>>154867638
Only the extra posted in this thread needs proofreading, but if you're >>154866592, then I guess we're good. Chapter 64 (the latest) was proofread yesterday, and I think it was done by you.
If you have the time and find anything wrong with this extra or chapter 64, leave a comment here.
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>>154867780
I think its okay for the most part.

>>154858550
This can be changed to "Ai" "Rabu" "Yuu" if you wish

>>154858407
Bottom right panel is shocked expression so it can be like 'Baaam'

>>154858354
It's something clicking or gleaming. So maybe 'Ting'

>>154857760
pan 5 it says 'ugh'
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>>154857631
If you want meme style, pan 2 can be 'smug' sfx
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>>154857729
pan 1 bub 1: I am Shinjou Mami of the Teihen Academy's Psychic Phenomenon Association.
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Is all. Everything else should be fine.
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>>154868246
Thank you, anon.
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