Do VNs not have editors? I'm sure someone would have realised how dumb it sounds if another person looked at it
>>153036296
>hating on the cautionary tale of what happens when you don't give your sister the dick
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AJVhCJrcf54
>>153036296
What do you expect from an amateur translation?
Kiko is considered Urobuchi's best written VN, it's very well polished.