Merry xmas! Usual stuff today, then I dunno if we have an issue next week. Probably not.
44: The mermaid Princess and Yuuna-san
[Left] Will the conclusion of the sad love between the mermaid princes and the prince be a tragedy, or will it be...!!?
[Right] Yuuna-san's performance as the mermaid princess has begun!!
"Long ago in the depths of the sea, there was a castle belonging to mermaids"
"The mermaid king and his 6 daughters lived there"
"And today was the birthday of the youngest princess, Marine"
"She swam looking up to the top of the sea"
"How're they making her float...!?"
There isn't supposed to be an issue next week, but the print version might leak anyways. Though I'd say go ahead and wait for the digital raws. There's going to be a week without a chapter in the next couple of weeks either way, so might as well not rush and wait on the better raws.
"Could that actually be.... Yuuna-chan!??"
[Boxes] Tights all over her body
"Sway around like a fish....!'
"When I heard you were gonna put Yuuna on the stage, I was wondering what you were gonna do, but... I see now"
"And thanks to her, we got a good hook!"
"But Yuuna-san's truly climactic rol will be the last part!"
"The scene where mermaid princess's love will be ruined, and she'll throw her body into the sea out of despair"
"Turning into foam and ascending into the heavens!"
"Yuuna-san will fall slowly into the shiny blue sea... then we'll have her dematerialize"
"When she does, her costume will glow together with the silver confetti which we'll disperse via electric fan to represent the waves, and she'll soar up and disappear as that happens..."
"It'll probably be a heartrending and beautiful scene...!"
"There's a lotta stuff in it"
"I I was so nervous...!"
"Good work, Yuuna-chan!"
"Now it's your turn... Do your best Hibari!"
"O..okay! Watch me, Kogarashi-kun!"
"Marine was drawn to the lights on the surface, and she fell in love with a prince on board a ship in first sight"
"Wow! What a wonderful prince he is!"
"Whoa... Hibari's here!"
"Doesn't this mermaid princess's chest seem somehow smaller than the one who was swimming awhile ago...?"
"Leave me alone!"
"Oh no! Are you alright!?"
"Ah! It's Chisaki-chan!"
"Oh thank you, my beautiful lady...!"
"...so Marine was the one who saved the prince from inevitable death when the boat capsized in a storm, but when the prince woke up, he thought he was saved by the human princess Ellis"
"The prince married the human princess!?"
"That's how the story goes"
"She has to be together with the prince or the mermaid princess will die, right!?"
"Kids are so pure..."
"I guess so... for adults, this is a very famous story with a very obvious ending"
"The audience's reaction... isn't very good"
"N..no! The last scene will definitely...!"
"Marine! When the sun comes up, you'll turn into foam and disappear...! Before then you have to kill the prince with this dagger!"
"Then the witch's curse will be lifted and you'll be saved!"
"O onee-sama! That's too terrible for me...!"
"Good job Ameno! The next scene's gonna be the highlight!"
"Whoa.. don't push me! This costume is hard to walk in..."
"Hibari!? Hibari...!? Oh crap... she's out cold"
"I... is there someone who can play the main role!?"
"I didn't remember anybody else's lines"
"Oh.. got it!"
"Yuuna-san said she remembered the whole script, right!? She's a spirit so can't she possess Hibari-chan or something...!?"
"There was a big clatter back there..."
"Did something happen?"
"If I murder the prince... I'll end this without disappearing into foam...!"
"My prince... why, why didn't you chose me!?"
"If only you had chosen me...!!"
"This is... Yuuna-san speaking...!"
"I didn't think she'd actually possess her..."
"Sh... she's putting on a very convincing act"
"...I'm so sorry, onee-sama. I... really"
"Can't kill the prince...!"
"If I just disappear... the prince can live happily"
"Together with Ellis-sama...!"
"Kogarashi-san... will go out with Hibari-san...!?"
"I I'm just hypothetically speaking, okay?"
"...if, if that does happen..."
"I'll wish... my blessings on them! Of course!"
[Board says same thing as first sentence minus ellipsis]
"...and you're okay with that? I mean, Yuuna-san..."
"look up to the mermaid princess"
"She's troubled over the fact she's a mermaid"
"She had fell head over heels in love with the prince..."
"Then in the end she chose the prince's happiness over her own life...!"
"I want to be like that myself"
"It's most important... for the human princess and the prince"
"To be tied together...!"
"If only I could just disappear...!"
"The next scene is the finale of the mermaid princess disappearing!"
"Everyone, get ready..."
O-ooh-ohh my god!? What am I even doing!?
...but it's too late now...
It's too late now, so I'll just roll with it...!!
"You won't.. disappear!"
"Marine! I don't really understand your situation..."
"But if you disappear, I'll... be lonely!!"
"E... Ellis-sama, I... am actually a mermaid!"
"Due to a witch's curse which gave me human legs,"
"I have to kill the prince... when the sun rises'
"I'll turn into foam and disappear! It is my destiny!"
"I'm making myself a sacrifice for the prince so he can survive..."
"It's the only thing I can do...!!"
"Don't give up on yourself on your own like that...!"
"There's still time before the sun comes up!"
"I'll smack the prince up too, so..."
"Together, we'll think of some way"
"How to save you!"
"Thank goodness... you woke up!"
"Wh... wha? Hibari was just at the stairs..."
"How did the play turn out...??"
"Ah... uhhh, you see..."
"Good work out there!"
"Hibari! I heard you tripped on the stairs... are you okay!?"
"The play was so passionate!"
"I never thought they'd lift the curse like thaaat, yeaah"
"So like, they went and begged the witch, seee"
"And they gave up their own treasures and valuable possessions for the mermaid princess's sake... twas admirable"
"So you were here"
"I'm just thinking about a few things..."
"... the director got mad, but he said it wasn't bad"
"Th-then that's good..."
"So we got these!"
"Looks like it's the video of the play!"
"Look, I don't have a smartphone and stuff"
"So a guy from the computer club went all out to give us a DVD"
"Two disks? Was it a really long play?"
"One's for you, Yuuna"
"...is it alright? I'm a spirit..."
"But it's like I'm... I'm"
"Just a normal classmate here...!"
"When I think hard about it, I haven't paid any tuition or anything..."
"Ugh... when you tell me that... "
"Let's think about that for another time"
Is it alright... for a spirit to fall in love...?
"How do I put this..."
"It might not matter whether you're a spirit or not"
[Left] Her true feelings that she has suppressed, and has come to realize...
"You're just here right now... Yuuna"
Is it alright for me... to ask if I can be together with the one I love...?
If I could just get permission,
This chapter confirms one thing : even though nobody would read this if the manga didn't have ecchi, the best chapters are the ones who have barely any lewd or not at all.
Also, Yuuna is probably the only girl I actually care about at this point. All the others girls are so boring and cliche I can only see them as fap material.
Man I like Yuuna but I do wish they didn't make it so one sided. Though she isn't my favorite girl she still a nice heroine.
Funnily enough, besides Yuuna, Hibari is easily the most developed.
Well, I liked her a lot at first but I lost interest when they started to joke about her breast size, when her chest isn't even small. She had some decent development though so she is still second best.
>Well, I liked her a lot at first but I lost interest when they started to joke about her breast size, when her chest isn't even small. She had some decent development though so she is still second best.
Hibari actually wants to win the MC and tries to remedy ANY possible weakness against the competition.
God she is cute.
>The laws of nature maybe?
What law of nature prevent a ghost to love a living man?
>If the world will allow me
That sounds more romantic, but still why wouldn't the world allow her?
Only the "Till Death Do Us Part" on weddings does as far as i know.
>you will never see Yuuna beg one of the girls to let her possess them so she can experience the Fuyuzora D
>"Together, we'll think of some way"
>"How to save you!"
Is this supposed to be one sentence or two? It doesn't work as one sentence, but it doesn't quite work as two sentences either.
Chisaki. She's a close friend of Yuuna's, is interested in the supernatural stuff, but doesn't bring any supernatural baggage of her own, or have an ulterior motive of wanting Kogarashi's powerlevel. She's tried to do things for Kogarashi, rather than just ask his help from time to time.
I'm almost done, so I'm going to go ahead and start dumping. Let me know if you spot any errors.
Okay, I'll fix them at the end.
>If I could just get permission,
How about "If that's permitted"? Or perhaps "If the world permits it" similar to >>151432189
Last panel: "Hibari! I heard you fell down the stairs... are you okay!?"
Also change Oboro's line same panel to 'It was admirable'
Change last panel to: "So a guy from the computer club worked really hard to give us some DVDs."
And fixed. If nothing else needs fixing, I'll go ahead and post a zip and call it a night.
Colors will have to wait until I get some sleep. Fortunately I'm off tomorrow so it shouldn't take as long this week.
Okay. In that case, here's the zip of the chapter:
Sagiri set to co-star in Yuragi first doujin at C91
>>What law of nature prevent a ghost to love a living man?
>geez. i dunno. maybe humans and ghosts can't make babies.
>>you will never see Yuuna beg one of the girls to let her possess them so she can experience the Fuyuzora D
So would she have to posess a girl for the duration of pregnancy to reproduce?
Or could he maybe fuck and impregnate her directly.
>So would she have to posess a girl for the duration of pregnancy to reproduce?
>Or could he maybe fuck and impregnate her directly.
y'know what? this could be easily solved with a harem end. say Yuuna agrees to share Kogarashi with a normal girl like Chisaki. They have a threesome, Chisaki will carry the baby. They live as a normal Husband/Wife/Ghost Wife family = good end.
>Ghostits is getting doujins already
Nah. If that was needed for some reason, Chisaki would probably come up with the idea and suggest to Yuuna that she use her body. Oboro would be falling over herself to demand Yuuna use her body, and Hibari would get embarrassed but try to insist Yuuna use her body. Sagiri would find the idea scandalous but secretly wish Yuuna would use her body, and would Agree if Yuuna asked.
I wonder if we're done with the school festival or if the author plans another chapter or two with it. He could probably get another date chapter out of it if he wanted, but that last scene seems a good place to end it as well.
Easy enough to make a fixed version available.
I'll post a zip link for the color version when I finish dumping it.
I'll try that if it complains about any of the others.
Chisaki is the best girl by far.
-Always down to help Ghost no matter what
-No crush on MC, instead she helps Ghost
Also the scene where she uses the app to make Ghost look cute in the picture was the sweetest thing.
And here's the zip for the color chapter: