So whats /a/ think about Komi's new one shot? http://b

>>149260832
it was decent

>>149260832
It's shit.

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Komi is still great at reaction faces

>>149260832
It was unexpectedly decent.

The fucktard is still using double arts pallette, what the fuck

>>149260832
God that hair-clip shit is fucking stupid.

The twist actually got me, but I don't get why he'd be allowed to go to school in a situation like that.

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>>149260832
Is it Keit-ai?

It really seems like something Jun Maeda would write.

>>149261253
He was gonna die either way and it was his waifu's show.
He had to go.

I liked it.

>>149260832

I admit, didn't see it coming. Pretty nice, though all the other feelings were overshadowed by the relief that it wouldn't start another serialization.

>>149260832
How does he even come up with this garbage?

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>>149260832
>bato.to

>>149260832
Still a happier ending than Nisekoi.

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>>149261386
Poor guy couldn't even kiss his waifu before he went. And there's no way she died a virgin at 21 with that huge smile on her face.

Fuck I'm just making myself feel worse for him

>>149260832
I will only appreciate Komi when his MCs don't look like shit.

Somewhat ok, though soured by the cheapish magical disease premise. The limited heatbeat setup feels overt manipulative to generate feels. It also got me wondering why Komi has this urge to give hie male mcs retarded hair gimmicks.

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>>149261767

>>149261767
>And there's no way she died a virgin at 21 with that huge smile on her face.
What kind of person even thinks of this shit, seriously

>>149260832

So bad at character design he just fused Raku and Shu, and made a Chitoge clone.

Nice

>>149260832
Decent, the girl was pretty cute.

>>149260832
Wasn't half bad, to be totally honest. I mean, the twist near the end was pretty predictable, but he made it work. At least this is a self-contained story so we won't have to go through another 200 chapters of convoluted bullshit.

I'm sure I've heard about a similar disease in other fiction. Not necessarily something Japanese, but I'm sure I've heard about it.

>>149260832
Pretty good. Decent twist.
Nisekoi's oneshot was way better, though and yet it turned so shit when it was serialized.
If this ever becomes series, then there will be harem of girls with same disaease.
One question, when they went to beach, where was his device? Is it because it was 'expensive' one, that it was smaller, possibly inside his body?

>>149263367
>If this ever becomes series, then there will be harem of girls with same disaease.
Add the obligatory childhood friend without the disease that loves and cares about the MC and doesnt want him to increase his heart rate and die. She obviously loses because some shit about destined lovers or something.

How do we serialize?
>MC(not ill) has best-girl genki childhood-friend that forces him to do crazy things.
>MC finds main girl´s dissease, but decide to don´t care because it´s too much.
>Childhood friend reveals her illness and dies.
>MC decides to focus into main girl because guilty feelings.
Cheap Seo drama + 200 chapters of filler = Money.

>>149260832
I DIDN`T WANTED THESE FEELS FUCKING OP.

>>149260832
how very Harold and Maud

Are there any series which use the terminal/incurable disease thing to good effect? This was kinda meh.

>>149260832
This story actually explained the life span in death note.

Komi must've had this story building up in his head for years while he was being forced to do nisekoi. The product of his pure, undistilled loathing for the otaku who kill his serious stories but then ate his purposefully awful harem up with a spoon.

>she only has 5 years to live
>he only has 5 minutes to live

>>149265065
Sounds a bit like double arts, where MC has to hold hands with the girl to stop her from dying.
Do people here even remember this anymore? That manga is probably the whole reason why Nisekoi even got any hype.

>>149260970
now put a red anger template over it

>>149263702
>as little kids they were friends but they don't remember
>there was some accident that caused them all to get that disease and get memory wipe during some trip
>the one going around as childhood friend simply didn't go on trip

>>149265121
>Do people here even remember this anymore?
I do.

>That manga is probably the whole reason why Nisekoi even got any hype.
Nisekoi had oneshot for years and it had positive feedback.

>>149263367
> Is it because it was 'expensive' one, that it was smaller, possibly inside his body?
Probably so. He got an internal device so we didn't see it in the beach scene.

>>149261389
I've called the police.

>>149265415
How expensive are we talking here? I know nothing about subject/their costs, but wouldn't it better to try waiting for heart transplant if they had money?

>UMI DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

EVERY FUCKING TIME

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>>149260832
Fug. Got spoiled by you fags but still got hit. Timed diseases suck.

What a shit twist.

>>149263072
>At least this is a self-contained story so we won't have to go through another 200 chapters of convoluted bullshit.
Don't be so sure.

I can already see it. In the serialization he will have a harem, and he will be constantly running away from the women as they'll be shortening his life with their ecchi antics.

Isn't there another manga already with this premise?

>>149266969
>Isn't there another manga already with this premise?
I recall something similiar. I think it's about some martial arts and MC spend years training in mountains his self-control. It might be that he will die if he gets boner or something.

>So you found out
>I only have 15 minutes to spare
Sounds like a battle shonen.

>>149266969
Nah, I see it as terminally ill MC gains a harem that all have terminal illnesses too, and each time he picks one they croak. Series ends when he finally finds a healthy girl and then he dies.

>>149260832
It was fucking retarded.

please author-san don't serialize this manga. I could take it 200 chapters of happiness before dead.

I personally had a good time with it

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you are now Komi and Jump approached you:

>Hey Komi this one shot is pretty good, wanna make this a series?
wat do

>>149263367
>harem of girls with same disaease
Not same disease, but basically a manga about Katawa Shoujo?

>>149260832
DAT FUCKING TWIST

>>149260832
And then I cried bitch tears

Don't care what he's putting out if it's not fantasy.

>>149260832
I chucked.

>>149269718
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UJOjTNuuEVw

Translator's engilsh is awful.

>>149260832
What is it with putting retarded things in the male character's hair?

>>149260832
Nice plot twist at the end

Komi should stop regurgitating Chitoge and Raku though

>>149260832
Damn, it was actually good

>>149262446
Welcome to /a/
Hope you enjoy your time here

>>149263072
Don't forget Nisekoi was a self contained one shot to bub.

>We will never have a sad but comfy SoL story about a guy helping out a terminally ill girl live out her life to the fullest.
>We will never have a nice sidecast with side OTPs, who get a lots of focus and development with no love triangle bullshit.
I know it sounds unrealistic amd hard to pull of, but I want to believe.

>>149265121
>double arts
I tried to read it some time back, but I didn't really like it.
I only read untill we meet the MCs ex girlfriend the one that fights with a hula hoop.

I liked it, but, damn, he really should've kissed her. What's with Komi and the couples not kissing?

>>149260832
This is the discarded Nisekoi end, right?

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Why does all his male main characters look like reverse traps?
Is it the eyes?
I think it's the eyes.
The pants-on-head-retarded hair clips probably don't help either

>>149262446
That's the first fucking thing came into my mind, and I'm not even the anon post that

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>>149262446
He should have told her when he about a weeks worth of beats so he can guilt her into letting him plow. either the last day or that same day and pipe like bunnys and probably die mid sex.
>>149260832
I kinda hate the ending. Like how you gonna let yourself die on the roof of school at least lie in bed at home or something and I didn't like how she was ready to go wild and start doing a bunch of shit. She could've done that from the beginining and been the popular girl type with a tragic story ie Marika.
Also is this shit a real kind of disease? That's some vodoo magic we have if we can predict how many heart beats we have left. Either way it's a 6.5/10

>>149269718
>since when were you under the impression that I am Komi.jpg

I don't get it. These two young, perfectly functional, normal looking human beings are so terminally ill that they have a matter of minutes or years left to live?

My suspension of disbelief is too great here. I cannot take this seriously. It's Another all over again. Unintentional comedy except nowhere near as good as Another did it.

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I miss his older oneshots, which were about more than just romance.

>>149283708
That windmill is fucking retarded.

So Komi can do stuff that isn't complete garbage?

What happened with Nisekoi?

>>149260832
It's ok.