WSJD - Amalgam of Distortion

>>148675640
>truly begins
Can it even get shittier than first chapter? It set the shit bar quite high.

>>148675819
Wrong manga?

>>148675852
but....

you'll have to wait for my dumbass TO ACTUALLY DUMP THE RIGHT CHAPTER HOLY SHIT

That's...red sprite.

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>>148675640
LET'S TRY THAT AGAIN

>>148675975
hahaah everyone makes mistakes...thanks OP

>>148676080
Who is her?

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>>148676080
here we fucking go

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>>148676127
Remember the love interest from chapter 1?

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>>148676160
the art is really bad, I find

Look at not!Kanda's body there

>>148676080
fap...

>>148676144
fap aborted

>>148676160
So he can no longer call upon the power of boners? RIP

>>148676160
It's not the love interest. She has different hair than her

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oh actually nevermind the sameface threw me right off

This isn't the love interest it's just some lass.

I withdraw my previous comments. If it was the love interest I would've completely fucking lost it.

>>148676227
>>148676247
whoops nvm then

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that said, this still really sucks...

>>148676160
No, she is not. The love interest had short red hair. This is some random no-name girl introduced for the sake of edge.

This would've been more interesting if this wasn't just some random girl.

So this is basically discount Tokyo Ghoul, right?

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>>148676341
if it was the love interest, I wouldn't even dump chapter 3; that would've been so blatantly edgy

>>148676379
It reminds me more of D Gray Man. It's not "serious" like TG and it's making its battle manga intentions immediately known.

You know, you've got to hand it to the author. Managing to make something worse than Tokyo Ghoul it resembles so much is quite a feat.

>>148676414
I don't mean the love interest, just some actual named character. As it is, it just feels cheap.

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>>148676482
How can you not feel bad for whatsherface?

>>148676247
>rokurokubi
wtf I hate author now

I know it's totally edgy, but I'm kinda liking it. As long as you don't try to take it seriously it's actually kinda nice.

>>148675640
>>148676505
NEW series: Spring Weapon No. 01 >>148676554

>>148676540
I just think it's lame, the actions messy, and it's just bad. Not awful, but it's just bad man

>>148676414
Alas,he was too edgy for her.

>>148675640
>>148676531
oh yeah

DDL: http://www56.zippyshare.com/v/zHDse3Ue/file.html

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>this whole thing

>>148675640
But will he regrow the dick

>>148676505
So can he get his dick back?

>>148676505
Just read this, hooray for the dick

I like the bone powers

as long as MC doesn't turn edgy like samuraiman this could be decent

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>>148676144
This isn't my beautiful Rokurokubi!

>>148676144
>nope.avi

>>148676044
>the zero department

Every time.

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Not even 2 chapters in and faggot MC has already giving a lecture on morality, fucking cried because some literally who died, and was spared but someone who was supposed to kill him.
D R O P P E D
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>>148676260
Ok just now we went full on retard.

>>148676195
If you think this art is bad then you haven't read much manga. Not to mention it's chapter 2, every series looks off at the beginning

>>148676379
Tokyo Ghoul: Re already has the "discount tokyo ghoul" spot covered, don't worry.

>>148679951
No I have.

Are you really excusing the messy action and lousy anatomy? Some of the monster designs are interesting but that's one aspect. This isn't the artist's first work, and his art is bad, period.

I am not going to be gentle about it.

>>148676144
too long

>>148679158
>MC is a moralfag because he has empathy
>he can't feel fucking bad about a girl that went through the SAME thing he did and is crying because she lost her family forever

Your post is just fucking retarded, not simply because you're basically saying he should agree to kill anyone but also because you can't realize that their situation is the same which is why he feels for her.

>>148676195
>all this exposition to some dude who will be killed next
I wonder if other manga I read were always this awkward. And I just never noticed.

>>148676260
are you shitting me

Can anyone link chapter 1?

>>148680065
Yeah, you don't know what is good art.

>this isn't his first work
Because he published a 20 chapter manga before, wow.

Look at Bleach, it looked like garbage at the beginning and it took a couple years for Kubo to get good.

One Piece looked even worse back then too.

>>148675640
Thanks anon this had an amazing chapter 1, so I'll definetely keep following it. Been waiting for chapter 2

>>148680267
How about using the archive?

>>148680268
>>Yeah, you don't know what is good art.
What?

Listen to yourself, you moron. You're admitting that it looks like shit, and that I should be lenient since it's the start.

That's fucking stupid. Why should I? If it's shit it's shit. When it gets better, how about I change my tune then? Not every artist begins their career looking like this guy or Kubo or whatever.

>>148680348
>I'm admitting it looks like shit
Except I never said that you retarded faggot. The art looks good, which is why I mentioned Bleach and One Piece that looked like trash, if you want to see bad art then read one piece.

This looks good, and if it keeps running it will look even better.

>>148680451
It doesn't look good you blind, fuck.

Look at an anatomy book, or get some taste.

>>148680348
He's right you know, if you think this art is bad then you haven't read much manga.

The art is detailed and fits the tone of the series, the panel composition is fucking great, the emotions are good too.

>>148676716
does someone have the one for chapter 1?

>>148680488
>The anatomy is not perfect therefore it's trash!
Kill yourself retard, this is manga not some painting.

>>148680583
>He's right you know, if you think this art is bad then you haven't read much manga.
Or I just am not kind to bad art?

What kind of nonsensical response is, "if you don't like it you haven't read much"? If I've read more, shouldn't I be more inclined to be judgmental?

I read manga from Oshikiri Rensuke. His art is fucking terrible, don't really care though.

But if it looks bad, story's bad, characters are unremarkable, I'm definitely not gonna be nice about it. And this looks bad. Trying to follow the action is a pain in the ass, the faces are inconsistent, the bodies even worse, and overly detailed monster designs aren't about to make me ignore the other faults.

>>148680632
>>148680345

>>148680675
The anatomy is far from perfect, therefore it's trash.

Don't be a cocksucker just because you have low standards.

>>148676260
Not one but TWO sword together?

>>148675975
how the fuck do you get from found deformed mummies -> developing human weapons?
What the fuck?

>>148676414
>>148676354
HAHAHA

>>148680583
doesn't seem detailed so much as that it's just crosshatched to an excessive degree

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>>148680707
>bad anatomy = bad art

Take your 4th rate criticism elsewhere, you'd be kicked out of art school on the first day.

>>148679158
But it would be even more edgy if he just stabbed her on sight before ninjaman got a chance to think about it. Besides, he's got no idea what's going on with his body, so why wouldn't he empathise with something that's out of her mind?

>>148680959
Sure, but I don't think this author was exactly trying to intentionally twist the human form here for an actual purpose.

Kimetsu No Yaiba looked way rougher than this on release.

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>>148680959
Considering consistency is a strong point in art unless you're HEAVILY stylized like a Dowman Sayman or an Araki, having inconsistent anatomy is indeed a damning fault for your art.

This isn't like Ookubo Atsushi or Horikoshi either, there isn't deliberately wildly out of the ordinary art shifts for action, it instead looks like the artist just plain fucked up and regularly. How is that good?

>>148681006
Kimetsu no Yaiba still kinda looks bad in spots.

He has a good handled on weird, artsy stuff though.

>>148681097
the characters are so stumpy and cartoony that a lot of the action shots just seem awkward