In all seriousness, what went wrong?

You cared about it.

The ending was too much. I liked it up until the point where she got pregnant. Then the doujin entered uncanny vally.

She was a dumb bitch who got lured by a chad.

>>146911750

When sage got hidden.

>>146911750
Not enough lewd content of her looking like that. That one page of her masturbating at the end is not nearly enough

>>146911750
>shindol

You already answered your question but didn't notice

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>>146911750
Did people actually masturbate to this?

It got too depressing at the end. Couldn't even fap to it because I pissed at the homeless bums fucking her. Also why the fuck did the kids beat her up and then fuck her?

>>146911968
I fapped almost all the time until last chapter. That shit was brutal

>>146911750
She was way too fucking stupid and naïve.

It bugs me despite all the shit she's got, she always had heart shaped pupils whenever she funked.

Where's the colored version? Or is it just a few pages?

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>>146911750
She never should've gotten her hands on that nuke

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Do these sort of doujins ever get reasonably budgeted anime adaptions of any kind?

>>146912676

Nope.

>>146911786
>>146911940
>>146911946
>>146911968
>>146912083

Fucking vanillafags.

>>>/kikebook/
>>>/leddit/
>>>/mal/
>>>/out/

>>146911750
She decided to discard her glasses.
Bad things happen to scum who abandon their glasses.

>>146912751
Are you sure you got it all out of your system?

>>146911946
Where do you think you are?

The ending was too ambiguous so people (read: retards) think she had a happy ending.

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>>146912761
did she die in the end?

>>146912576
I wish Big Boss would turn me into his cumdump phantom.

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>>146912830
We all do

Do drugs actually do this /a/

Do they make sex supah good

Should I do drugs

>>146912751
>scat, ntr and furryfag

Kill yourself.

>>146912862
It's useless since you won't be having sex in your lifetime anyway

>>146912852
>Ocelot can doublethink himself into believing both Venom and Naked are Big Boss simultaneously and can get double teamed by them while believing it completely
Sign me the fuck up for FOXHOUND, I want to learn some doublethink shit from the master.

she died and went to sex and drug heaven didn't she?

>>146912871
Fuck you, there is literally nothing wrong with scat.

>>146912761
damn true

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>>146912970
>you'll never get spit roasted by Venom and BB
Why are we still here?

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>>146913038
Just to suffer?

>>146912994
It's literally shit

>>146912994
Trolling used to require dedication.

>>146913038
Why are you so gay?
Just die of aids already jeez

>>146913102
Yes, and?
>>146913105
>Trolling
Whatever helps you cope with it, anon.

>>146913172
Literal shit taste

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>>146913172
Do you eat your own shit?

>>146913205
Better than a metaphorical shit taste.
>>146913213
No.

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>>146913075
BB is for fucking, but Venom is for loving. And Solid is for marriage and tackling all of life's hardships head on together with.

So I'm confused,

Did she actually live and birth a healthy baby or was that like her final trip before she died?

I'm dumb

>>146911946
I tried to masturbate every time she had sex but I gave up after her dad

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>>146913239
>no

Then why like shit when you don't eat it?

>>146913239
>no

0/10, not a true patrician

Might be the only hentai I ever read completely because the story was depressing yet engrossing.

>>146913239
>Better than a metaphorical shit taste
Having literally shit taste puts you in the "shit taste on all levels" category.

>>146911946
Yes but eventually I started feeling sorry for her. I'm glad she got over it all and had a happy life with her baby

It went wrong from the moment she was born and then it started going downhill.

>>146912676
Hentai adaptations

>>146911750
She believed that human beings are inherently good.

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In all seriousness, you'd fuck this thicc girl anyway

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>>146913320

She doesn't have a happy life with a baby, that was her drug induced hallucination, in reality her and the baby died during an overdose.

I guess you can she went to high heaven.

If she gave birth, would her baby survive?

>>146913320
Oh, you poor thing.

>>146913369
since everyone at school is doing it, why wouldn't I?
Literally everyone lost their virginity to her

>>146911750
Her parents stopped caring.

>>146913310
I bet you have boring fetishes.

>>146913369
All that bad karma was just compensation for being blessed with the hips of a sex goddess.

>>146913464

If only you knew how miserable your life is having an std.

>>146913484
I'd say the problem is that her father cared too much

>>146913251
The latter and my condolences.

>>146913504
>Vanilla
>Boring
Get out, degenerate

I'm ashamed for knowing who the girl in the thumbnail is tbqh.

>>146911750
>What went wrong
Shindol going full EDGE shock value instead of trying to write a coherent plot

The point where the mom threw her out of the house was where I realized he wasn't actually trying to teach a lesson or make the plot convey a moral, but rather just make a story with shock twist to shock twist to get people to keep buying the magazine

>>146913281
>why don't you eat your manga pages if you really like it

>>146913515
std doesn't exist in 2d

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Unrelated but anyone have this one post that describes most doujins and it ends with
"And let's add in the fattest"
>No
"UGLIEST"
>NO
"SMELLIEST SON OF A BITCH"

>>146913591
We don't fetishize the actual pieces of paper, though.

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>>146913591
>/a/ liking things

Is this bizzaro /a/?

>>146913637
Speak for yourself, vanillafag.

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>>146913586
>The point where the mom threw her out of the house
There was a panel in between her mother beating the shit out of her and her packing up and leaving that implied that they she was the one that wanted to run away. Sure the mother told her to get out of the house out of anger but I'm sure she didn't mean it.
They pleaded with her to not run away.

>>146913779
>/a/ doesn't like anime & manga
This /v/ meme needs to go.

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>>146913821
Sorry about your paper cut-dick, anon.

>>146913515
>implying anyone she fucked actually got one
considering my luck, I'm surprised I wasn't born with aids

>>146913894
I was born without a dick hole so it was gonna happen sooner or later anyway.

ITT: babby's first ShindoL

>>146913586
Yeah, I can't fap either if there's not a lesson or moral involved.

>>146914024
It could be worse, he could've started with that cringe worthy story about the cows that was also comedic edge at its best.

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>>146911769
Op and the like cares so much about it because it went so wrong with her. Otherwise it'll just be another ShindoL manga. It just got to the point where people would tune in to check if ShindoL could top the previous chapter, pretty morbid huh?
>>146911786
>up until the point where she got pregnant
Pretty sure she got impregnated in the very first chapter by that gyaru dude.
>>146911796
This. She had all the cards to be one of the successful ones in the adult society (so long as she stayed away from chads and her own dad, drowned her social urges and just kept up the good girl life). Instead she threw it all away in order to socially bloom, did so too quick it got into her head, didn't know about the real world dangers outside of school and her parents probably never warned her about chads, it all went spiraling down hill from there and how she kept believing that every single one of her problems could be fixed with her genitalia.
>>146911856
Plain with braids and glasses "library girl" look. That's the stuff.
>>146912125
Like straight out of the village into the city.
Reminds me of https://exhentai.org/g/953477/98f41a95ad/
>>146912265
Most of ShindoL stuff has that by default.
>>146912676
If it ever gets an hentai adaptation, they probably will snip some parts of the story and make it more bland then the source, which would be a shame.
Then again...
>Directed by Teruaki "Rave Party" Murakami
>>146912761
She put her glasses back on again in the end.
>It was too late...
>>146913357
Huge and frequent beginners mistake.
>>146913388
Juan Carlos Santamaria de la Virgen Lupita!
>>146913484
The father cared the shit out of her, the mom as well when she found out how much the father did
>>146913586
ShindoL probably believed that the audience was counting on him to see how far his "EDGE" could go. That part with the mother, how she refused to listen to her daughter after being the one who relied her up into changing looks.

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Can we agree slut whore manga is best manga? Drama is too overrated. Plot is for babbys anyway.

She was born in the part of Japan with nonpolife officers, logic, or social services.

Also, apparently everyone in her town and family are selfish sociopaths. It's basically a false reality.

>>146914132
There's such a thing as too much autism.

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>>146914159
Amen

Why did no one else in the manga seem to suffer ill effects from drugs?

This is what happens when you try too hard to be a riajuu

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>>146914193
You know, right.

>>146914257

Didn't you know, anon? Men are immune to drugs.

>>146911946
Only the first four chapters, then she got a shitty tan and all that other degenerate shit so I couldn't get hard anymore.

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>>146911750
What actually went right?

>>146914362
yeah I couldn't fap to her when she looked like a hooker

>>146914426
>when she looked like a hooker
That was the highest point of the series

shit taste desu

>>146914389
you wish

>>146914389
sequel when

>>146914389
She died, famicom.
When you're depressed (and/or drugged) you tend to have delusions/hallucinations.

>>146914183
Isn't that the entirety of modern Japan?

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>>146914426
>I couldn't fap to her when she looked like a hooker

You have a long way to go

>>146914357
and the Patriarchy wins again !

>>146911750
She never went nuclear