I've finally managed to finish chapter 11. Man this took a while. Anyway, as usual, if you spot a fuck up, point it out so I can fix it.
That was the last page, forgot to mention that
>>146810990
Ok. I'll take a look thanks
I love the MC suffering in this one. Tokufags deserve to suffer.
>>146810234
I take that back.
1) Sniff is supposed to be next to Nakamura on panel 2.
2) From there move one panel back. [ie. 'Allies sure are nice' is supposed to e first bubble in panel 3]
3) Split the 'I have two... you need one?' sentences. The first sentence is in the upper part, the second below
>>146810697
Panel 1
The 'in the end' and 'i left you alone' both go in the first bubble. There's an 'ahhhhhhh' in the second one
>>146810744
The 'show us' in panel 1 is actually outside the bubble but on the left side of it
Yeah you're good OP