Evangelion Fanfic.

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Evangelion Fanfic. 2016-08-23 17:50:02 Post No. 146150805
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Evangelion Fanfic. Anonymous 2016-08-23 17:50:02 Post No. 146150805 [Report]

I want /a/ to critic my idea.
Synopsis.
>2025 Cmdr. Shinji Ikari of the Special Esoteric Response Assault Force. (SERAF) vs SELEE.
>The "feel" for SELEE is like the Brotherhood of Nod.
>Nobody ever talks about the FAR. (First Ancestral Race)
>FAR are human. With unlimited lifespan.
>We ruled the universe.
>However we know this universe will end.
>Try to jump dimensions.
>However Demons (Dimensional Energy Monsters.) Are energy beings that think human souls are tasty.
>War In Heaven begins.
>We lose. Create Seeds as last ditch attempt to survive.
>FFrd to now. Demons start to appear.
>SELEE's fuckery broke the Seal of Solomon. A cloak that hid our tasty self's.
>Demon "feel" think DOOM or the Chaos Gods.
>The Devoted are humans who worship Demons.
>Demons "gift" mutations/ AT field corruption.
>Shinji finds out he is a "berserker" (look up self replacing space craft.)
>So. He has to fight SELEE and Demons.

Anonymous 2016-08-23 17:52:38 Post No.146150889
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Anonymous 2016-08-23 17:52:38 Post No.146150889 [Report]

create the story, let the legend come back to life

Anonymous 2016-08-23 18:01:21 Post No.146151165
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Anonymous 2016-08-23 18:01:21 Post No.146151165 [Report]

>>146150805
Kill yourself, you fucking nigger.

Anonymous 2016-08-23 18:02:40 Post No.146151222
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Anonymous 2016-08-23 18:02:40 Post No.146151222 [Report]

>>146150805
Will it turn out that Shinji really is the demons and then he was a zombie?

Anonymous 2016-08-23 18:12:01 Post No.146151530
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>>146150805
This is how you do it, OP.

Anonymous 2016-08-23 18:38:52 Post No.146152444
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Anonymous 2016-08-23 18:38:52 Post No.146152444 [Report]

>>146151222
No. Just have super PTSD as he relives the WAR and becomes a god of war.

Anonymous 2016-08-23 18:40:17 Post No.146152503
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Anonymous 2016-08-23 18:40:17 Post No.146152503 [Report]

>>146150889
I need some help with it.

derp_commander (ID: !!SSXdvR3LCoa) 2016-08-23 19:05:37 Post No.146153463
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derp_commander (ID: !!SSXdvR3LCoa) 2016-08-23 19:05:37 Post No.146153463 [Report]

Where would one go looking for critique on a fanfic idea anyway? >>>/lit/ ? >>>/jp/ ?

Anonymous 2016-08-23 19:09:36 Post No.146153627
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Anonymous 2016-08-23 19:09:36 Post No.146153627 [Report]

>>146153463
>>>/b/

Anonymous 2016-08-23 19:10:40 Post No.146153669
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Anonymous 2016-08-23 19:10:40 Post No.146153669 [Report]

>>146153627
Pretty much.

Anonymous 2016-08-23 19:29:30 Post No.146154294
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Anonymous 2016-08-23 19:29:30 Post No.146154294 [Report]

>>146150805
I think it's pretty SILEE

Anonymous 2016-08-23 19:42:06 Post No.146154697
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Anonymous 2016-08-23 19:42:06 Post No.146154697 [Report]

>>146150805
Back to /m/ with you.

Anonymous 2016-08-23 19:50:44 Post No.146154988
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Anonymous 2016-08-23 19:50:44 Post No.146154988 [Report]

>>146151530
lol

Anonymous 2016-08-23 20:22:56 Post No.146156080
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Anonymous 2016-08-23 20:22:56 Post No.146156080 [Report]

all this dimensions bullshit reminds me of keitai

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