Also Girls und Panzer / AK thread.
first for loaders
Thank god, I was waiting for a thread to pop up...
Let us see...
1. Not soon, but soon
2. Yukari best girl
3. All tanks best tanks
I got Groundless done, I guess that's a good thing. Dumped it on /k/, but fuck it, I'll dump it here too.
Classical music is so good when pumping these out...
Almost done, few more pages of extras.
>we solved dacia's food shortage and prevented any riots
This has some tense shifting issues, but I think you should change the whole thing to be future-tense.
"we solve dacia's food shortage problem and prevent any riots"
It's stylistically encouraged that you always spell out single-digit numbers like this when you can. There might be space constraint issues here, but it just looks and reads better.
"farmland" is sort of an uncountable. "farmland" would be better here, just singular. Also, "farms" would be fine.
>then you all are to use
"you all" would be more natural as just "you" This seems like it comes up with a lot of languages that have words which specifically refer to a group of people that the subject is in. They translate literally to "you all" or "all of you" or something, but really any native English speaker would generally just say "you." "you all" sounds wacky.
"liberation citizens' "
This makes it sound like the speaker is saying that the riot will start at the location of the food stores, when it's apparent he intends to say that the riots will occur because of the empty food stores. "riots over the empty food stores" Generally you have a riot "over" or "about" something, not "from" something.
>_no_ reward and
This would read a little better with a comma after "reward,"
This is sort of a run-on sentence. A period where this comma is would really make it read better.
"liberation citizens' " I assume that the group is called "the liberation citizens," plural. Naming their group "the liberation citizen" singular doesn't really make sense, but that's what's implied by this apostrophe placement.
>i hope you would
"i hope you will"
>other member's race
"other members' races" or
"other members' ethnicities"
Damn, you are quick. I love that.
I'll get on fixing this ASAP, and post it up on Batoto when it's all finished.
This is sort of a complicated subject, but I'd recommend "resumés" at least.
>being popular, maybe?
Kinda weird. "you're popular, maybe?" is less so.
>only ones that are
"only ones who are"
>isn't that it?
I see this a lot in translated material, if you want it to sound more natural then i'd recommend "isn't that right?"
This should really be a period.
>mainlanders can blend
The tense shifts later on, this should be "mainlanders could blend"
>blend in with locals or not
Should be a comma after "locals,"
>or not bother to display
"bother" is weird. "or try not to display" makes more sense.
Her mouth is so fucking weird in this first panel.
>we have things we want to do and had plans with our lives!
A couple problems here, mostly tense shifting.
"we had things we wanted to do, and plans for our lives!" OR
"we have things we want to do, and plans for our lives!"
>just by her right?
Needs a comma. "just by her, right?"
>is your interest eating out widows?
well, now it is...
>shut up scum!
"shut up, scum!"
I want to princess carry Yuzuha.
>to that point...
I don't really know what this means. To what point? They're good how?
>our jobs are no longer
This whole thing would work better singular. "our job is no longer"
>be simple walk
"be a simple walk"
>there was reason
"there was a reason"
Crawl in there with her, you chump.
That horse has like the dumbest haircut.
Never mind, then.
Great work, you earned a Darjeeling.
I'm going to take a quick break (a few days or so), then I'll be back in the saddle.
>this is the third grain area
This has been referred to as the "third grain silo area" and the "third granary region." Calling it the "third grain area" here seems weird. I'd recommend "third granary area" at least.
>reclaim the third grain area...
>the liberation army vastly outnumbering the detachment lies in wait
"the liberation army, who vastly outnumbers the detachment, lies in wait"
>why do you need it so
"why do you need them so"
Okay, sounds good. Thanks again!
>to that point...
I don't really know what this means. To what point? They're good how?
He means they are to the point of being "good" friends, not lovers or more.
Aw, the poor romantic, unable to gather his courage to meet his lover...
In that case I'd recommend changing "they're good" to "they're close." Or something. I can tell you that just saying "they're good" like that is really confusing.
Right, I'll do that.
You should see all of the changes on Batoto and the Wiki archives within the hour. (Batoto might be longer, but that's due to moderation.)
Alright, sucessful thread was successful.
You all have a great night/day/whatever, I'm off to bed. As I've said a couple of hundred times by now: Chapter 4 work will begin in a few days (mini-break for me), with it coming out near the 21st or so, give or take a few days.
I feel like a shill trying to promote this...
Shill away. And have a good one.
You're welcome. Too bad it's so dead on weekends.
What is Bonple's school carrier?
Why is Nogami such a lazy fuck?
This one sure is nice, I don't know if it was translated yet but... well, there you go.
Heartful <3 Boko
Miho: Fwahh, it's a big Boko <3.
Boko: Yoo! I'm Boko!!
Yukari (small): Nishizumi-dono?!
Miho: Yayy! So soft! <3
Boko: Let go! It's embarrassing, right!!
Miho: Thank you, Boko <3
Miho: I love you <3
Boko: Sure! Come again!!
SFX: Take off
Miho delusion 1: I love you Boko! <3
2: ...I love you <3
3: I love you Onee-chan! <3
LA2 chapter 8... no clue when, tired, busy, tired tired.
How many incisors do Jakja have?
Jakja needs dental plan
Am I a stupid person or is the download for LA 2 on the /ak/ wiki down?
I actually forgot to post this one
Not sure how I missed this.
Oops. I just noticed I made a serious typesetting mistake in pages 4, 6, 7 and 8. Only the bubbles where they're talking over the phone should be in smallcaps. V2 incoming.
DL link as soon as Proofreader-san gives it a look-over
Duce! Duce! Duce!
also you sure you don't wanna use the 'same' spread from vol. 2 to properly clean all the Japanese text?
>Poland actually have worst teeth in Europe, so it's fitting.
If there is any nation in the world that visibly has worse teeth that the others, it actually are the Japanese.
How buttblasted will people be when Ribbon rekts Oarai?
>Oarai cant even into tankathlon
Ribbon fights Oarai's Volleyball team in ch 9
>they dont have the tanks for it
True, but they managed somehow
Also, in their ways, Duck Team is as crazy and unpredictable as Shizuka.
Get out of here with that propaganda
This made my heart melt for some reason
Did you read the raws or am I missing a translated chapter?
also I wonder if Shizuka will get any character development. She enjoys tankathlon and cares about her comrade so it seemingly rules out the most generic routes. Since it's a gag manga, she won't snap and get obssesed about revenge after losing hard to an enemy either.
Some sloppy math to follow:
To move a 10.2kg projectile traveling 773m/s from an 8.8cm KwK 36 .5m up in a space of .5m:
Going to ignore gravity here; it's the least of his problems.
He also needs to accelerate it to 773m/s in .6468 seconds.
That's an acceleration of 1195.1144 m/s^2, meaning a force of around 12,190 newtons, or around 2,740.5 pounds.
This guy can bench press a small car one-handed.
More Katyusha is good
Oh, I didn't notice >>134708874 was you. I'll head to the archive since I actually remember you did that and even thanked you but was too busy to read it then.
1. But this defines her whole character and like I said, her approach to tankathlon is more complex than Miporin's "I needed friends to realise I really like Sensha-do" and her sister's opposite "NO FUN ALLOWED ONLY ABSOLUTE VICTORY" so it won't be easy to logically change it. Besides, she's an adreanaline junkie beyond salvation.
2. not happening, ribbon_warrior_is_a_gag_manga.jpg
I feel kinda bad for more blogposting, but I just wanted to say I recently marathoned GuP and I loved it. It's the occasional lurking of /ak/ threads that made me do it.
Top-to-bottom and left-to-right,
1: Grossed out (confirmed hetero)
2: Embarrashed (unknown)
3: Grossed out (confirmed hetero)
4: Wetting herself (confiremd lesbian)
5: Embarrashed (unknown)
6: Embarrashed (unknown)
7: Liking it quite a bit (maybe)
No, THAT is actually smug. Note the similarities between that expression and this one.
THIS, on the other hand, is a rapeface!
gb2 dead, Johnnie Cochran.
It's not really an important page anyway.
Maybe after I get all of this done before the 6th Volume, I'll go back and fix any of those mistakes. Also, I'm going to put those funny extras at the end of each volume, just because they are something I think about afterwards.
Heh, one chapter and got 40 more follows. Ah, the power of the purse...
No thread yesterday. Posting today instead, then live work
2 confirmed hetero and /u/ still wants to do it?
meant to quote
live work from here onwards
>n to be
Breaking "Nekonyaa-sa-n" they way it is seems undesirable. It could just as easily be:
>san to be
>no like this.
Again, I read this wrong at first because of the way "do-no" was broken.
having to take a break before the last two pages
>08th MS Team
Worth watching for this one fight alone, even without it its pretty good too.
Pic related is quite suited for you
I don't know what to make of this
I think it is better not to ask questions Anon, I am not too sure myself.
I forgot that there was Katyusha cosplay
Even on a rewatch, the song is still creepy.
>and properly caught up with raburabu!
Almost. You still got the "Neko Mako" extra and pic related left.
You guys can have the fat slut
No, not too late.
It was only two pages, anyway
Aren't short people better at operating tanks, anyway?
Damn, inserted wrong file and forgot to write comment.
Next LA2 chapter is totally a Hitomi chapter.
>mfw I could be a tanker in a draft
I like how they use the panels during battles in this manga
so which school do want to see get their own spinoff next? I'm holding out for Bonple high and some awesome bear artillery action.
Maginot for Submarine and Based French Uniforms
That or a spinoff about Naval Division of Oorai
speaking of tanks, who here Metal Max/Saga?
[ST. GLORIANA INTENSIFIES]
Anyone else like to imagine the damage models as the GuPs?
War is hell.
I'd consider fighting for Italia though if they called their descendants back home.
If you guys want to help me make a new /ak/-recommended image, put your thoughts here:
I'll be working on this over the next day or so, then I'll begin work on Groundless Ch. 4.
Hot. Maginot is a fantastic character and I am saddened she has nowhere near the amount of fan work she deserves.
According to the latest GuP blog, Girls und Panzer der Film earned ¥539,435,450 at the Japan box office so far.
Girls und Panzer der Film down to #8 from #7 in the movie rankings this weekend(December 12-13, 2015).
AFAIK, Free movie earned ¥95,546,400 (about US$774,000) on its 1st weekend(December 5-6, 2015). I don't know yet for this 2nd weekend(December 12-13, 2015). It first ranked #5 in the 1st weekend then it's down to #9 this 2nd weekend.
Now all they need is a lesson in strategy.
last one. i can't find a full resoloution version of this image. i hope someone will find a better version or make their own edits.
fuck you hiroshima you fucking gook let me post
Why won't rori post drawthread suff on his pixiv?
his yukari art is amazing.
>tfw my younger brother found Hime in a shitty Android game
Is the ribbon another samurai gimmick?
Reminder that Italian school is full of sluts, lushes, and gluttons.
What caused the spike? Apparently they're introducing Film Strips now to boost it as well. 1 Billion is a stretch goal at this point but it doesn't seem entirely undoable under the right conditions. I remember the film strip ultimately put Love Live past Madoka.
>Remember "pedophilic pantyshot garbage"?
That's just by the usual suspects though.
Why is Mörser Karl allowed? Open-top vehicles can not be allowed in Sensha-do regulation. Are the crews safe?
She is no relation to Erika. Her name is Alice Shimada. She's a college student and this milf's daughter.
Sensha-do Federation don’t want to overturn the decision.
In other words need Ooarai defeat.
So I was given permission to college team.
But it was the result to give a powerful union to Miho.
Considering everyone rides around unbuttened with rounds flying all over the place, I think "safety" is BS here, and the shells have magic nerf dart technology when they hit a person.
It took me a minute to realise what this was but this looks kawaii as fuck
Hey guys, I made this a few hours ago, just as an update to /ak/-related stuffs.
It's not all of them, just a few to get the idea going. Camo might be different per image.
Shouldn't an anime be more focused on the weapons element to be considered /ak/? There's certainly gunplay in Cowboy Bebop, but it just doesn't strike me as very /k/.
Also not having GuP on there offends me sexually.
/k/ isn't just weapons, it has a whole theme behind it. Operating, tactics, etc.
But the comments will be taken into consideration for the final list.
And I did say it was a tester. GuP is on the list, but I couldn't fit all of them on one image. I'll make a new image soon, but I think I'm bored enough on this "break" to just start Chapter 4 of Groundless now.
Here are the "late-night" anime movies that have made more. GuP will hit 750mil easy. 1 bil might be a long shot though. Then again, no one thought it would sell 36K discs so I wouldn't be surprised.
¥5,260,000,000 Evangelion Shin Gekijouban: Q [You Can (Not) Redo] 2012/11/17
¥4,000,000,000 Evangelion Shin Gekijouban: Ha [You Can (Not) Advance]
¥2,800,000,000 Love Live! The School Idol Movie
¥2,080,000,000 Mahou Shoujo Madoka Magica the Movie 3: Hangyaku no Monogatari
¥2,000,000,000 Evangelion Shin Gekijouban: Jo [You Are (Not) Alone]
¥1,900,000,000 K-ON! Movie
¥1,040,000,000 Ano Hi Mita Hana no Namae wo Bokutachi wa Mada Shiranai Movie
¥860,000,000 Kidou Senshi Gundam 00 The Movie: A Wakening of the Trailblazer
¥850,000,000 Suzumiya Haruhi no Shoushitsu
¥850,000,000 Psycho-Pass Movie
¥772,973,700 The [email protected] Movie: Kagayaki no Mukougawa e!
¥743,000,000 Tiger & Bunny: The Rising
¥700,000,000 Macross Frontier: Sayonara no Tsubasa
¥645,000,000 Macross Frontier: Itsuwari no Utahime
¥590,000,000 Hagane no Renkinjutsushi: Milos no Seinaru Hoshi
¥570,000,000 Mahou Shoujo Madoka Magica the Movie 1: Hajimari no Monogatari
¥560,000,000 Steins;Gate Fuka Ryouiki no Déjà vu
¥560,000,000 Ao no Exorcist Movie
¥550,000,000 Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha The MOVIE 2nd A's
Been wondering the same.
Why would you read this? I didn't read it and I'm happy with my decision. My Yukari is still safe and sound and happy.
I was told Yukari was built for bullying.
NO SHES NOT ANON. SHE DIED IN MIHOS ARMS AND IM GOING TO MAKE YOU LOOK AND ACCEPT IT ANON
Not that anon, but it's strangely well done. The feeling of desperation is captivating, and despite of being a doujin manages to be more interesting than probably every seasonal anime.
You have to read it.
Seriously fuck this shit
The Yukari part wasn't even the worst of it between
the student council getting burned alive in their tankor Miho and Maho touring a concentration camp (and I mean with all the works) during their days together at Kururomarineor Maho having Erika administer cyanide to her followed by Erika blowing her brains out with a Luger.
At least it has kind of a happy end though right
after Miho passes away as a lonely broken women from old age at 77. Only to finally be reunited with her friends again in the afterlife and they finally do the victory cheer they always do in the show
I read parts of it. The guy is obviously good at the shock porn stuff, there are odds and ends that I liked, like pic related (which I think was the only chapter I read). That being said, it didn't seem to add up to any significant whole. Just sort of a series of excuses to butcher and mind-break the characters. Which I understand is the point, but I couldn't enjoy it. If you don't get some kind of thrill from the sadism, then the appeal is a more gritty and realistic story with these characters. It's got the gritty and realistic part down, but the story is lackluster, and the weird mind-break rape is just gratuitous and out of place (if that's not what you're into obviously).
Seriously, not clickin' thanks tho
This isn’t cute at all
Post cute things
For those who care, the U.S. release of girls und panzer is the second best selling series after fate/stay night over at right stuf at the moment.