I enjoyed it. Nothing wrong with actually adding content to the action scenes. Really, what you're feeling is nothing to compared to the wait for the Boros arc to even start, and I was reading this manga since the beginning.
Ever since Boon translated it.
At least by now we've already gotten quite a few good action scenes.
aw, no serious side hops this week, and steel 2 to 4 more weeks before King appears again looking for his PSP and Fubuki thinking if she could also join saitama's circle.
>quick rough doodle
has any other mangaka been capable of drawing proper afterimages? This is the best one I've scene.
>it's digital though
still the best one I've seen other that those 'kagebunshin"-like afterimages
Going through the chapters
>5th Punch - 6th Punch: Original Set
>7th Punch - 11th Punch, 15th Punch - 16th Punch, 29th Punch - 32nd Punch, 34th Punch, 36th Punch: Replacement Set
Less details than his first set of arms. Possibly just a stop-gap measure until Dr. Stench gives him a proper set?
>17th Punch: Sparring Set
>18th Punch, 21st Punch - 24th Punch, 28th Punch: New Set 1
>21st Punch: Suitcase Set 1
>25th Punch - 27th Punch: Suitcase Set 2
Since Genos was carrying a suitcase, I assumed it was another set of arms. Differentiated it from the first suitcase set since it had a different shape.
>37th Punch: New Set 2
>41st Punch - Current: New Set 3 (Current)
This and the set Genos used during his sparring session with Saitama are the only arm sets he's had that transform.
So he's gone through 8 sets of arms since his first appearance.
Yes. I went through the manga just for you ever since you first mentioned this.
Sonic only just dodged Genos' chain punch attack. Genos was struck down in the page you're quoting by Saitama, not Sonic.
>Sonic only just dodged Genos' chain punch attack.
That is to say, Sonic had yet to even damage Genos.
Did you think that was blood behind Genos? I thought so too the first time I saw it, but then I realized that was a tree. And, also, remembered that Genos doesn't bleed.
>no side hops
fucking Murata, you fucking cocktease
anyway, I'm sketching some Tatsumaki
What do you guys think so far?
I think Saitama's head needs to sidehop out of that picture.
And also that you should add pearls to that picture. Naked women wearing pearls and lounging on a couch is my fetish.
Other than that, I'd say it looks nice. The perspective on the couch seems like it could use some adjustment, though.
Movie the head a bit to the top left, doesn't looks right here. Also, Tatsumaki has got way more hairs than that, make them wider. Thights and legs and thin as fuck, makes me think of Midna but longer, you should fix that too.
I'll all the eyes and overall face looks a bit weird. Add more eyelashes maybe.
> Also means one more chapter to wait before we get the Fubuki story, with both her and Tatsumaki in it
At least give her the usual stone face while keeping the sweat, then add the king's engine, work better.
As expected, it's good but just can't compare to how hilariously drawn the original panel is.
Yeah, quite often Murata forgets that Saitama is suppose to be drawn simple for maximal comedic effect
As far as i can remember, Murata only did it right TWICE
once in the first chapter, the first time he appeared
and the second time during this glorious moment
Yeah, OP's is still done quite "well", just looking at the lines make it obvious, compared to your pic and chapter 1's who are just done in 2 minutes with a bigger marker and anatomy totally out of place. Would have been far enough.
no, but there should definitely be more variety between very simple(like my example) and normal simple like murata does. For example the panel in question i replied to should have been one of those extreme simple ones, while in murata it was merely "very simple"
Excellent fetish anon
Thanks for the helpful post
I guess I'll work more on it later, any thoughts so far?
I'll have to disagree on that. The style in which Murata drew that panel was a pretty good copy at ONE's later style. It's slightly assymetrical and the outline is rougher, so I find it to be quite the improvement over Murata's previous attempts at drawing Saitama "simply" like in the panel you posted here
The shadowing is still a bit too neat, but otherwise, it's a nice approximation of ONE's style.
Or are you talking about the extra ornamentation, such as the zipper and the buttons on his cape?
Damn. I even tried to compensate for the fact that this series updates bi-monthly and still ended up confused.
>it's just like in the original.
No, I know you're talking about Sonic. What do you mean he was going for angry Sonic than it's just like in the original? Sonic was also angry at Genos underestimating him, then he got cocky again after using his super technique.