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just had a idea for some OC, and lets nake this a general writefaggotry thread (also some feedback on my wrinting would be nice)

here's the OC:

The sun has risen. My girlfriend is gone. I get out of the bed, slowly.

First I go to the bathroom, into the shower and let cool water run over my skin. I look at the place where the bathroom mirror once was.
"Right", i thought to myself, "I smashed that thing." I just couldn't look me in the eyes anymore.

I walk my way over to the kitchen and peek inside the fridge. It's still full. I'm not sure what I should eat, if I should eat, if I can eat. Fuck the fridge.

"Let's look out the window, shall we." Everything's still the same. All the cars nicely parked on the street in a nice big clusterfuck of a traffic jam.
Although I think the traffic lights on the intersection down the road switched to green. Yesterday they were still red I think. But it could be my imagination.
It's been so long. I don't remember how many days I haven't been out there. The calmness is almost terrifying.

The hours pass, as I just watch the outside world, sipping on the bourbon in my cereal bowl. It's getting dark again. In my head I hear her scream.

I should've just let her go. Let her be happy. Yes it would have been with someone else, but she would've been happy.