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Discussion about the making or playing of Original English Language Visual Novels save for the ones from /ksg/.

Do you have a question about a Japanese visual novel or a translation of it?
/vn/ is ready to answer it.

>Getting Started:
http://pastebin.com/7LsCvtq3

>Recommended Reading:
https://vndb.org/v/all?q=;fil=olang-en.tagspoil-0;o=d;s=rating

For Developers. Huge collection of guides on everything:
http://meganelover.com/post/122965940223/visual-novel-creation-masterlist

Ren'Py Download:
http://www.renpy.org/

Previous thread: >>127180440

Remember to BUMP THE FUCKING THREAD every three hours please
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>jam game
>first time devving
>had to doctor sprites for CGs
Why is this guy charging for his game anyway?
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>>127616218
I didn't even see those legs in the last thread. Wow.
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>>127616914
What game is this?
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>>127617347
A wild catgirl appears. Come on man, keep up.
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Not only that but she's half the size of the lockers
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>>127617347
Highway Blossoms.
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>>127617429
I was hoping I just wasn't following along right.
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>>127616732
Why, according to the Steam charts, are people actually paying for it?
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>>127617654
Because the sprites are decent and it sounds like it could be a fun little game for three bucks. They know not the horror that awaits.
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>>127617954
Or they're like me who say OP pic and rushed to buy it
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>>127616218
This is comedy gold. Keep them coming.
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>>127617540
rude
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I like how the steam store page tags it with "Memes"
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http://www.siliconera.com/2016/01/04/feed-a-cute-demon-in-yuri-visual-novel-strawberry-vinegar/

ebihime should've rethought the ages in SV. Half the comments are people going "Nine year old yuri? No thanks"
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how long has salty tears been in development and why is it taking this long
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>>127619650
Their site says 2012-2015 so since 2012-ish?

But you think that's long, I started my project Freshman year of high school/late middle school. I'm in my last semester of college, gonna get my BS in Comp Science soon. I think I've done like 3 screens for GUI and doodled character designs, that's it. I mostly just pop in, smile when I see people actually doing work on their stuff, then pop back out. No real presence or anything.
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>>127619493
I think the yuri angle is weird in this case and yet they're using the word everywhere.
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>>127620180
do russian people ever get confused about yuri?
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>>127620180
>both previous games are yuri
>obviously the developer is suggesting yuri is the proper outcome in this one with copout a "well you don't have to"
>somehow people calling it a yuri game is weird
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>>127620279
there's the cap from milo in space or whatever that kid's show is where (based on Yuri Gagarin) they call cool stuff "yuri" like "that's so yuri" and all the weebs who saw it were laughing their asses off.
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>>127574124
if people followed your broken logic they'd have to gather up all the lesbians and lock them up for insisting that all men need to die/be put in jail/sterilized. none of this is even that bad even though it's dumb, I actually knew someone who knew a trans person who (bless their corrupt yet naive soul) that they could pick up more chicks if they were a lesbian.
>>127574679
you'd be surprised how often it's a couple of chucklefucks that complete change someone's opinion on a topic.

>>127620279
Russia's official policy on lesbians is that they need to disappear or be put in jail but they also had that lesbian pop group tatu for a while so it's safe to know they know about yuri
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>>127620616
>they also had that lesbian pop group tatu
You are now back in the early 2000s
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8mGBaXPlri8
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Wish I knew why SteamSpy consistently under-reports this particular game. The actual sales are well outside even the +- boundaries and have been for a while...
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>>127620828
completely unrelated, but they reminded me that dido was a thing.
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>>127622754
oh wow, the guy from bones is in the music video for white flag
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>>127620616
>>127620828

those two aren't really gay and were just playing up the fake lesbianism for show. That's why the Russians were A-OK with it. It's like a Russian version of the Class S stuff in Japan.
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>>127622519
>>you can say you are a woman but you aren;t
and what makes them not?
if you really want to get technical lots of women aren't women, theres a whole class of women who where born with y chromosomes and are immune to androgens. are they men?

what you keep failing to confront is that if people act like you, and kept a snapshot of the worst of the bunch in their minds for a group at all times, what do you think they would say about the tribes and peoples you belong to? how seriously do you take their claim? are lesbians just fucked up insane female supremacists? is that what we are to you as well?
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>>127622519
I used to believe men weren't evil but then I saw an anonymous poster on 4chan admit that all men secretly want to rape and murder, and that opened my eyes!
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>>127623335
yeah so? Most women have to be proactive and change their behavior because they inherently distrust men. Does that mean all men are evil and want to rape and murder? No of course not, but that doesn't stop women from acting a certain way in order to protect themselves. It's the same reasons why fathers and brothers get all protective and defensive when female family members are near male strangers.
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>>127623332
>but most transwomen aren't born intersex
[citation needed]
Intersex conditions are as common as red hair, and that's not even counting chromosomal chimerae. Most people don't know. It's generally not obvious.

You probably have no idea about all of your own genetic abnormalities, because they haven't impacted your quality of life.
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On tonight's Late Night With /evn/, things get personal.
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>>127623519
Wait, your argument is now that you agree it's perfectly reasonable to hate all men because of an anonymous post?
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whyyyyy are there so many trans/futa/gender issues discussions on /evn/????
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man, look at all this video games
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>>127623835
Because /evn/ is full of women.
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>>127623065
Different anon, I've always wondered something and never gotten a straight answer.
Everyone only has one frame of reference for what a human mind is like; their own. Given that, how would anyone figure out that their gender doesn't fit their sex?
I mean, personally I don't have any concept of gender to my mind. I'm male because my body is male, that's all there is to it for me.
The only thing I can think of is related to gender roles and norms but that doesn't seem quite right.
Help me understand this.
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>>127623835
Because people can't ignore trolls.
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>>127623696
>>everybody's intersex one way or another hyuk yuk
>also citation needed for your claim mate.

Not everyone has red hair, hun.

http://www.isna.org/faq/frequency is a start point, and there's a lot of disorders they aren't counting there.

For 'contains some cells whose chromosomes don't match the overall body, but no symptoms at all' there ARE no frequency stats because there just haven't been enough studies done.

Never said all transwomen are gorgeous ladies (plenty of cis women aren't)
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>>127616218

So... what this looks like is that the producer did not have enough budget to hire an artist for this, so he copy pasted the sprite (which has no legs), copy pasted a towel over the midsection, and drew... "legs" dangling from beneath, as well as the horrible figure up front?

Is that what happened here?
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>>127623835
Politically active evn devs.
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>>127624063
I don't totally get it either. I think a lot of it does have to do with gender role expectations, which is why you have a sect of radical feminists who hate transgirls because they feel like they're projecting a mockery of femininity by fixating on "girls like makeup and shopping!"

Humans are constantly bombarded with information on what's 'normal' for male and female behavior, we start that shit practically right out of the womb. So I can't blame someone who is constantly told that "these things are girly, only girls like them" for deciding that they must be a girl. But I don't think that's all of it, either. I assume there's also some identification issues, where you see female people / characters / whatever and think to yourself "That's what I want to be like" They may be reacting to their own idealised version of what A Woman is like, it's kind of hard to tell. But then, don't we all spend a lot of our time playing dress-up and attempting to present ourselves in a way that reflects how we feel about ourselves?
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>>127624369
As I said in the other thread, I really wonder how the sprite artist feels about this. It's one thing to have totally different sprite and CG artists, plenty of games do that. But taking bits of the sprite art and pasting them and doodling on them in ways that might suggest that the sprite artist did this (in a very half-assed way) seems like poor brand representation.
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>>127616218
I just realized the towel is placed so they didn't have to draw the other hand. Not angling it to hide it behind the back, they stretched out the towel in a way no towel would ever work so they didn't have to draw the hand. Amazing.
Fuck, I kind of want to hook up the tablet and draw over it.
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>>127625197
I've actually spoken with that artist before and asked them how they would feel about their art being modified and they said that was fine. Although my example was just regarding having someone else colour the lineart so I dunno if that would extend to something like this.
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>>127625649
Well, most people can tell that it's been done by someone else, so it's probably not a big deal I guess
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>>127625028
oh and cause I forgot, we, well, most of us, know that you don't want to go on a kill spree, the problem is you are saying we should treat a group of people based on a couple of nerds you saw on 4chan, and the same shit would logically apply that we do the same with lesbians, who also have a vocal minority that hate men.

over all its very common for people who are in a more dominant position to not have malice to the people they're denying and opposing. why shouldn't they be ambivalent rather than scornful? they're comfortably in their seat of power. things were just getting good? why do we suddenly have to change everything for the wierdos?
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>>127626880

I don't know what this is but I am suddenly reminded of Dumb and Dumber where they sell the kid a dead parakeet.

>>127626662

Haven't spoken with you yet, but wow, you are not really an intellectual and should stay away from the arguing thing.
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oh come the fuck on mods. If you're gonna delete my arguments, at least delete the other ones too. Both parties are off topic here on /evn/
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Threadly reminder to NAME AND SHAME (con)artists.
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>>127629075
Looks neet
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>>127627556

>sekai project promises to do more to promote their EVN partners
>twitter feed for launch day is almost entirely full of Root Double Hype
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>>127629383

It's almost like they're trying to burry the EVN stuff
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>>127629383
That's kind of fucked up. They couldn't wait one day?
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>>127628221
it happens. kind of shameful but i'm guessing its because they tend to just not like certain posters and take out their aggression on them. I mean look, they deleted the answers but left the question. all its going to take is more people responding to the question. you have to delete it if you're actually concerned about off topic.
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>>127629481
Doesn't it make you eager to sign away your beloved project to them so they can take a cut of the profits?
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Would it be possible for an evn to catch the nips' attention and get adapted into an anime?
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>>127629639

They just blindly delete shit that gets reported.
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>>127629637
Or they couldn't tell the dev she was launching on the day they were going to bury her with JVN news?
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>>127629896
>Would it be possible for an evn to catch the nips' attention

A handful of games have gotten some attention over there

>and get adapted into an anime?

... eh. not literally impossible, but highly unlikely. With the language barrier and lack of existing contacts, an english game would have to be VASTLY more popular than a corresponding japanese game to have any chance
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>>127630131
>A handful of games have gotten some attention over there
Which ones?
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>>127629952
The trading cards aren't even ready yet. Launching today makes no sense.
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>>127629896
Well, Sunrider will be available fully in Japanese both text and audio, so maybe it will be adopted by them. Anime highly unlikely though.
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>>127630202
katawa shoujo, analogue, long live the queen, and apparently bionic heart oddly enough. those are the ones I've heard about being discussed by some japanese players
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>>127630131
Is cute art enough to get the japs to play the game even if it isn't in japanese?
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>>127629639
>>127629931

eh, i doubt there's boogeymen SJW mods deleting posts they disagree with. It's just butthurt anons reporting them and the mods followed suit.
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>>127630581
Bionic heart really? Show proofs
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>>127630761
Probably. It's enough of a reason to get them to play their own games half the time.
Making said cute art in a way they'd appreciate is another matter.
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>>127631134
Yeah, though which evn has cute art that mostly resembles Jap games?
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>>127630852
sorry, i just remember jack talking about seeing it discussed on some japanese blogs or something, can't dig up a ref for you
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>>127631231
run the sakura game names through translate and see if you can get any hits in moon?
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>>127631590
Wait, which ones?
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>>127631695
Disregard this I'm a faggot.
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Post yfw sakura angels gets an ova
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>>127632461
if it's got animated sex i'll treat it like any other h-ova, skipping to the good bits and ignoring the plot
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>>127632730
Hey man, some of those are good. I don't remember the name but there was one I just wound up watching because the story was so darn cute, and I never do that.

Then they fucked while the girl 'erotically' ate pizza at the end and it kind of ruined it.
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>>127633340
I exaggerate slightly, some are watchable.

And even if I'm just looking for a hot scene to rabbit to, I appreciate the framing plot, it makes the sex scenes more interesting
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>>127633481
>rabbit to

gay
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>>127633512
Is it gay if I'm self-inserting as both halves of a het couple?
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>>127610176
hi kinjo
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>>127633821
nah its fine with me if you want to go FUCK YOURSELF BOOM YOU STEPPED RIGHT INTO IT
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> http://blog.fuwanovel.net/2016/01/looking-ahead-the-vns-of-2016/

Prepare for the flood
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Look at the sales the catgirl game is getting, even though it's shit.

Repeat to yourself: You don't need a publisher.
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>>127640597
How do people not feel ashamed asking for money for such shit?
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>>127640867
You need to overcome shame if you want to be in marketing.
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>>127640597
Catgirl is another meme game that people are buying "ironically". That's pretty much how steam goes these days. Lots of teenagers
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>>127644823
winter wolves i take it?
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What does the EVN market need right now?
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>>127651102
More memes, less serious stories.
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>>127651102
Men
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Please help, Looking for that VN about girls living in a nuclear fallout/apocalypse, anyone know about it? I remember anons saying it was a mod(not really sure) and that the picture was a girl wearing a gas mask with visual novel UI.
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I would like to write for an english visual novel.

Do you think I should just drop the idea and live peacefully?
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>>127652290
That depends. Are you an SJW?
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>>127653881
No but I am not a /pol/-tard either
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>>127654456
Follow your dreams
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The urge to give into temptation and sell out grows stronger every day, and this catgirl atrocity is like the final nail in the coffin. Convince me not to do it, /vg/.
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>>127657927
Do it.
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>>127640867
They probably look at the bills and think of the mortgage. That'll get rid of my shame.
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>>127657927
You might have one hit meme game, but then people move on and no one would ever take you seriously again.
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>>127657927
It's not like it's some wild runaway success, dude.
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>>127658026
Anon pls.
>>127658283
>no one would ever take you seriously again.
But I mean there are people who take sakura shit and huniepop seriously, right?
>>127658592
I know, its just a culmination after months of looking at successful kickstarter/indiegogo/paetron campaigns.
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>>127660859
What do you mean by take seriously? Unironically enjoy? Then yes.
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>>127660859
There are people who take their FANSERVICE seriously, but unless you want that to be what you're known for, and what people will expect from you, you're better off not doing it. And the Sakura series sales are declining with each new entry in the series, its started getting stale to more people.
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>>127642808
best artist in the current scene
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>>127662295
Too bad some people think she's tainted forever for having worked on a Sakura game.
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>>127652224
It's ded, Jim. Prison lolis also ded.
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>>127662338
At least the creepy sekai project guy didn't chain her down in his basement like Wanaca, she may yet redeem herself.
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>>127662295
Incorrect.
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>a dlsite game got to rank 1 of all time within 2 months
>tfw you make visual novels but can never be as good
>tfw you share the same birthday with him, but you are older

What have I been doing, /evn/?
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>>127663003
post work
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>>127663618
Why the hell did you think I meant I'm better than her? I meant I like wanaca more.
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>>127664015
What a deep...plot that game has.
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>>127664015
I think the other anon means you post the work of the artist you think is the best in evn.
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>>127664015
2generic4me, I like the other one's linework better
but at least you aren't very wrong
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>>127664015
>>127664496
actually nvm
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>>127662338
Isn't she doing the art for A Lily Princess?
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>>127665589
Read up the quote chain.
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What kind of studio logo is this?
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>>127666724
a retarded one
that said I still have no idea what to name mine
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>>127666724
A fantastic one.
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>>127666724
>>127666924
The actual game logo is great too! I personally can't wait to play Noonce bulyou!
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>>127667036
It's =No*ne=bul'you
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My artist is so moe with their broken english, they even awkwardly called me sir. I wonder if I should bother telling them I'm a woman.
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>>127665694
So she's not tainted?
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Are you willing to sell out to a publisher /evn/?
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>>127662338
>>127670285


No real creative professional who can release a project actually thinks like that. In the creative field it's understood that you usually work on some shitty projects just to make ends meet or to gain practical experience. JJ Abrams worked on "Nightbeast", my brothers who worked on special effects for "Jurassic World" and "Star Wars VII" worked on really shitty TV shows for years at the start of their careers. Adults in business just do not think like this.

>>127669858

Absolutely not, sir!
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>>127673465
So the lemmasoft artists who say they won't draw ero because they take their art seriously are full of shit?
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>>127673465

You also have to think from the perspective of your customers. If they see "from the artist that brought you sakura X" people are going to expect a titfest.
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>>127673646
Not necessarily. It's been talked about before how in Japan artists who do hentai have designed characters for children's shows.
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>>127672804
Possibly, but never to sekai project nor steam.
They've both single handedly killed the visual novel scene in the west.
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>>127674131

> not steam
> ignoring one of the biggest distribution platforms because muh art
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>>127674131
They really haven't.
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>>127674131
Steam is just a store. It's the people who make the quick cash-in games that have tainted the medium.
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>>127674207
>>127674215
They're pioneers of censorship, they can go fuck themselves. Do you have any idea how long I waited for the little busters ecstasy to come out, only for it to never be released in favor of paying for the all ages version because steam can't possibly handle the concept of sex? It makes me want to kill gabe newell.
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>>127674453

oh, you are one of THOSE people. Nevermind, then.
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>>127674592
One of the people who want to pay for the original product and not the castrated, think of the children version? Yeah.
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>>127674453
Payment processors view porn as high risk and charge ridiculous rates to stores that carry it. That's why Steam won't "officially" host porn games.

And before you mention Kindred Spirits, that doesn't show graphic sex. Though I believe there was a teacher/student relationship in that and really want to see the reactions.
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>>127674453
You know the version being localized has the content from Ecstasy excluding the sex, right? Surely you don't want those awfully drawn sex scenes?
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>>127674805

No, people who think Steam is the problem when literally nothing is stopping devs from releasing either a patch or the game through a different store.

Also, this is a jvn problem at most, not an evn one.
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>>127674453
just don't make actual porn and you're fine
most censorship happens in the translation/localization process, which won't happen for your OELVN
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>>127674932
>Surely you don't want those awfully drawn sex scenes?
Yes, I want to be able to fug my waifu. Sue me.
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>>127675549
You might not love her anymore after you see the things she can do with her body.
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>>127673639

Not full of shit, per se, because this is more about the quality of the project than the content in my opinion. Think about artists like Tosh-- he did a shit ton of hentai, no one holds it against him that I've seen.

Most of the best VN artists in Japan have worked on Ero. Coincidentally, of the top grossing and top rated VNs, around 70-80% have erotic/porn content.

>>127673646

Well you obviously do not use it as your lead/introduction. Art has an advantage in that you can just show pictures. But think about some of the other people who have been successful in the Japanese industry and what they have done in the past. Tanaka Romeo worked on Daughter Maker and Kuro no Toshokan-- but he would never put those in his tagline.

>>127674805

I think that Steam has not proven to be a major problem for evn releases. I plan to release a title on Steam and then release the Directors Cut (with sex scenes / other extras) on MG or another platform. Steam is vital for initial funding.

You have to keep in mind that this scene is not purely "business driven". Even though the best usage of time is to just work on steam appropriate content, many of us have artistic visions that include sexual content. If we get money/success through steam, we're going to go elsewhere as well with a more full version.

Steam is not unique in this regard. I published a Young Adult novel (it sold poorly). However, in order to get published I had to chop a sex scene and a scene for graphic violence. Had the work succeeded I would have released a directors cut. Steam is the same way.

Steam is not going to stop you from getting the releases you want.
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>>127674131
Say what you want, but things would have gotten a whole lot worse after the DysfunctionalSystems/Dischan fiasco if not for Sekai. That would have been the thing that set the EVN scene back a few years. But Sekai, whether you condone how they do business or not, has helped nurture and build up a market for EVN that pales in comparison to what it once was. They're taking risks on western devs and making it possible for some to make a living off of making VNs. Sure, maybe Mangagamer would be doing something similar if Sekai weren't around, but they don't have the visibility that SP does, and with SP western devs can siphon an audience from bigger name JVNs like Grisaia. I don't give a shit if you hate Sekai, but saying that they "killed" the VN scene in the west is just ignorant and uninformed.
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>>127675625
>after you see the things she can do with her body.
What, having the ability to sit on her back like a confused, embarrassed dead fish? I love her in spite of it.
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>>127675738
>Think about artists like Tosh-- he did a shit ton of hentai, no one holds it against him that I've seen.
Tosh ain't a great example because he's drawing sexy fanservice manga. It's barely a step down from his porn, which is why no one complains.
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>>127675868
Just to say I'm not saying you're wrong or anything, but that wasn't the best person to pick.
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>>127675868

I think my VN examples are better. Since most of the highly successful visual novels that are not through Key contain erotic content. It's direct to our industry.

I would say that if you want to do visual novel art and are afraid of doing erotic content-- that you are not a real artist or that you have chosen the wrong medium and are not taking art seriously.

More offensive than the artists who will not write erotic content are those that refuse to depict violence/etc and sex. This means all they are ever going to work on is fluff stories, moege, etc.
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so if you want to release on steam you have to cut out all sexual content, or just sex? There aren't any dicks involved if that helps any. Also can you get away with just taking the sexual CG's out and leaving the text description in, or do you have to go the whole shebang and have a fade to black with an ambiguous "we became one"?
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>>127676214

it's a really fuzzy line, but I think "no genitalia showing" is a good rule of thumb.
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>>127676112
>I would say that if you want to do visual novel art and are afraid of doing erotic content-- that you are not a real artist or that you have chosen the wrong medium and are not taking art seriously.
Oh, come on. Maybe they just don't want to draw porn and aren't "afraid" of it. That doesn't make them not a real artist. There are plenty of highly regarded VNs that don't have sex scenes.
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>>127676310
I think I'll just have it as text only then.
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>>127676310
It's more like no penetration, really.
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>>127676460
so 18+ yuri is good to go? I'll hold you to it if I make it through greenlight only to get removed like that seduce me otome did.
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>>127676214
M-rated games are allowed on Steam, so keeping it around that level should work. There can be sex, it just can't be graphic. You can have a patch like Sunrider and the upcoming Highway Blossoms.
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>>127676214
>>127676380
If you're not avoiding spoilers for Yurirei here's one of the CGs to show you how explicit it gets, and they don't have to cut it.
http://g.e-hentai.org/s/f15b841192/477216-62
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>>127676613
But can I show the V?
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>>127676797
Do you see a v in that picture?
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>>127675764
>has helped nurture and build up a market for EVN that pales in comparison to what it once was
They made kickstarter look so easy any moron thinks they can do one, even if they have no idea what they're doing, see exogenesis.

>with SP western devs can siphon an audience from bigger name JVNs like Grisaia
Most JVN players think evns suck and are just cheap imitations of JVNs. How can an under 10k evn even hope to compare to something the level of Grisaia? The audiences wouldn't likely be the same.

They didn't kill the vn scene, but they have seemingly no standards for what they publish. Yohjo Simulator is an example of this.
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>>127677047
>They made kickstarter look so easy any moron thinks they can do one, even if they have no idea what they're doing, see exogenesis.
Sekai didn't do that. Kickstarter did that. The potato salad guy is more to blame than Sekai.
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>>127676551
>make it through greenlight only to get removed like that seduce me otome did
When did this happen? I know it got put on Steam, but I didn't hear about it being removed.
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>>127676371

I think my views here are a bit extreme, but I think a lack of willingness to write/draw sex scenes is very limiting and I think most creatives worth their salt do not see sex as this taboo line in the sand that cannot be crossed.

Modern productions that are critically acclaimed and extremely popular contain sex scenes. Actors who cannot do sex scenes are also really limiting for projects. House of Cards, Game of Thrones, American Horror Story-- all of these works would have drastically different character without sex scenes.

This is a personal viewpoint as a writer-- I have disdain for those who cannot maturely approach sex scenes/sexual content.

Granted, I could be totally wrong and maybe audiences do not actually care about it. Maybe sex is not central to the visual novel medium and other artists/writers will take the medium in that direction and succeed with it. That is fine and that is their artistic license.

Still, I cannot imagine Michelangelo refusing to capture the naked form or Stephen King refusing to write a sex scene when plot demands it. Certain types of stories require that kind of content, so I would always see an artist that draws neither sex nor violence as "limited". There is also a difference between pornography (sex or violence as spectacle) and sex/violence as elements of story.
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>>127677390
I apologize for the shitkaku link, but:
http://kotaku.com/the-sex-games-that-steam-censors-1680718912
"In 2012, a sex game called Seduce Me was pulled from Steam Greenlight."
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>>127677047
Oh, silly me, I named exogenesis which launched before any of Sekai's vn kickstarters. The number of crappy cash grab vn kickstarters on KS really exploded after Sekai started having their successful kickstarters though. People treat it like it's practically a requirement now.
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>>127677570
That's a different game.
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>>127677823
Oh, well my bad.
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>>127677478
there's a big difference between refusing to write about sex and refusing to include actual porn in your vn, though, and most of it has to do with ratings

putting an explicit sex scene in an otherwise PG-13 movie for example is probably not logistically worth bumping it up to an R regardless of your views on the topic
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>>127677570
I thought you meant that free evn Seduce Me the Otome was removed. I read about the 2012 incident awhile back.
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>>127677478
>Michelangelo refusing to capture the naked form
What kind of retard equates drawing the naked body with illustrating the act of sex?
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>>127677478
The opposite could be said that you're limiting yourself by thinking everything needs sex to be good. I think a lot of artists say they won't do 18+ because they don't want to be asked to do hentai games, not because they won't draw nudity ever. I don't think they should be looked down upon for wanting to work in other genres that are closer to their interests.
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>>127678409
Also
>Maybe sex is not central to the visual novel medium and other artists/writers will take the medium in that direction and succeed with it.
This leads me to believe you're a newfag when it comes to VNs. How many have you read?
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So, I was reading VNsNow's review of WKNTD out of curiosity, and then one of this replies to a comment:

"All of this brings me to the True Ending which, for me, is definitive in why this story is not good. I'm sorry but I cannot disagree more because the True Ending eliminates choice. The only time anyone actually makes a choice to change loyalties is in the True Ending and it is only Jupiter, Venus and Neptune who are clearly offered that choice. After that choice is made, we have no way of knowing who willingly changed and who was forced into it. However, the game makes perfectly clear that three are not above subjugating or killing anyone that defies them. Jupiter flat out says she will make anyone who comes to fight back 'bad' in order to maintain the new social structure. Ergo, the question isn't whether or not people would be more happy 'shedding their former selves' and stop being good as defined by others. The question is whether or not the three protagonists have a right to force anyone to conform to the Godless society they construct at game's end and if they don't conform, kill them?

The answer to that question is NO."

That actually made it vaguely interesting to me. I wonder if there's any chance the author meant to show that people seem to just swing like a pendulum and the oppressed end up just wanting to oppress anyone who disagrees with them. At least, that's what I get from his explanation, I've not played the VN.

I mean, I was thinking of situations like McCarthyism and how people were treated for being "commies" and how now, at least in the US (it's worth pointing out that to some of us in Europe the left in the US just doesn't look like our idea of left) people who might have identified with those commies would very much like to silence anyone who isn't on their side.

Could it be that the True Ending in WKNTD is exploring that kind of idea?Has anyone played it? There was a Dr Who episode that had similar concepts supposedly.
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>>127678558

About 60.

Of the top titles on VNDB let's take a look at sexual content. 75% have sexual content. 25% do not.

So I think it's safe to say that sexual content is central to the VN medium (at least for successful Visual Novels). We could look more on a sales numbers approach if you like, but that was the easiest data to pull into excel.
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>>127680723
what the fuck are you on, clannad has sex
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>>127680912

Are you sure? I don't really remember it. I found the VN sort of insufferable because of the translation quality, but I do not remember sex as part of it.
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>>127681105
oh wait nevermind, it was the clannad spin off that had sex
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>>127680723
Go back and count how many of those titles have all ages improved versions.
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>>127678497

Perhaps so, but I think my commentary is not that things "need sex" it's that it should be on the table if it suits the logic of the story.

I think artists should be looked down on for what they are unable or unwilling to do. Is someone a real artist if all they can draw is female characters aged 12-19? I actually see a lot of people on DeviantArt who can do that amazingly well... but they actually cannot draw men, backgrounds, furniture, or anything other than little girls with fairly similar body types.

There are sprite artists who will only draw young women.

Of course they are still artists-- but as a writer or a project lead, you would have to accept that you're going to need another artist for BGs and your story had better have only little girls unless you want yet another artist to take care of all the male characters.

The worst run-in I had with this is that I needed sprites for 5 characters, 3 female, 2 male. Artist started with concept art for the female lead, which makes sense. Then she skipped the male lead and delivered all of the rest of the female characters concept sketches.

And then I never heard from her again.

Luckily, this was not far enough into the engagement that I felt like I lost anything. I wouldn't call her a scammer, she did deliver work equal to what I paid, but it's pretty clear that she could not draw men. So when I see an artist has limits of any kind, I start to get worried about their capabilities. Art for VNs is art as props, art as tools to tell a story. The more limited the artist, the more limited the story.

My stories tend to feature adult romance, action, and horror elements. So for me when I see "no violence" or "no nudity" or things of that nature, it basically makes them unsuitable to perform work on spec. Which makes them less valuable in my eyes.
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>>127680723
I don't dislike ero in vns, but it sometimes feels out of place in story titles. It can mess up the pacing or feel shoehorned in out of nowhere. Releasing all-ages and adult versions for story titles is the best method, since people have the choice of the version they want to play.
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>>127681674
Realta Nua created plot issues in Fate/stay night.
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>>127682098
And?
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>>127682098
little busters ex turned riki into a rapist
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>>127681674

But they weren't successful because of the All-Ages Improved Versions. That is not what generated their initial revenue, funding, and success. The All-Ages versions are created to capitalize on established success, not to make it in the first place (except in the case of Key, where the reverse was done after the release of Kanon).

What makes a VN successful initially is what matters. Would Fate have become as big of a deal without the sex scenes? Or Tsukihime for that matter? Would they have actually sold and moved copies initially, to become the monoliths today? We won't ever have an answer to that, but my thoughts are "nope". The part that I found refreshing about Tsukihime and Fate and one of the key things that differentiated them from other stories with romance/harem elements and super powers is the overwhelming conclusive nature of the romance plots (i.e. rather than the infinite blue balls of stories like Bleach, if romance was featured, it was resolved, graphically and irrevocably resolved).

I think that sex is highly central to visual novels. When it isn't, it is often substituted for violence and horror instead (Attorney series is all about murders, Zero Escape series is about death situations, Higurashi/Umineko is all about murders. I am not going to run the numbers but I am betting that 90% of the most successful VNs have plots with either murder/sex as central elements. Probably 60% have both. Those are guesses but the titles are there and you can go down the list and think about it yourself. I am pretty sure I am right on this one.
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>>127682213
It cut the sex scenes, but the sex was tied to the plot, so it created issues with what they replaced the scenes with. Rin lost her powers, but at the end was still going to study magic. Sakura became a vampire. These are just some examples.

>>127682346
That's not an improvement because?
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>>127682436
I remember watching a youtube interview with some head of a jvn company explaining the state of the current market, in that its so over saturated they only way they can stay alive is by relying on loyal obsessive otaku fans to buy multiple copies upon release, and that when they released their first all ages titles it very well nearly bankrupted them to the point where they had to stop trading for a while.
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>>127682436
>Would Fate have become as big of a deal without the sex scenes? Or Tsukihime for that matter?
You must be joking. People hate Nasu's sex scenes. They're only good for comedic value.

The second highest rated VN ever has no erotic material. Sex is not the most important part of VNs. It's in a lot of them, but do you need it to succeed? The answer is 100% "no."
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>>127683012
The Rin/Saber scene was good. It was the highlight of the anime adaptation for me.
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>>127683012

You have no idea how the Japanese market works if you think this is true. Porn is absolutely critical for most VN devs in the Japanese market. All ages stuff is only starting to become really viable over there.
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>>127683180
I had no idea we were developing games for the Japanese market.
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>>127683318
Sakura Samurai in Bikinis will launch with English and Japanese dialog.
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>>127683519
>Sakura samurai
you got me there you cheeky cunt
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>>127684687
If you're the Winged Cloud developer, make more yuri games. I can overlook how crappily they're written if it's yuri. That's the real reason so many people said that Sakura Fantasy was better than the other games.
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>>127683318

You were talking about Fate and how it got popular?
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>>127687303
Among English readers. And even in Japan, Nasu's sex scenes are viewed as a joke.
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>>127688043
>And even in Japan, Nasu's sex scenes are viewed as a joke.

[citation needed]
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How does /evn/ feel about character busts that face one another as opposed to facing the viewer?
My MC isn't a self-insert role and has poses and expressions to show, so I feel like it's a good idea, but asymmetrical characters are either going to double my workload or bother my OCD by flipping them
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>>127688607
Surely they are only critiquing the poignancy and importance of the scenes by constantly making fun of them.
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>>127681789
Did that artist have samples of male sprites in their portfolio? Just curious what made you choose them. I think you're looking in the wrong place, choosing the wrong artists, or your budget is limited to artists who don't have a wide range of skills. There are artists who will do violence and nudity. Is your complaint that there aren't enough who will, or you can't find them?
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>>127688819

I think they are actually a great thing, but they have the flaw that you mentioned already. That is, unless you make it so that certain characters always appear on one side, which could be awkward for dialog scenes, since all would need to be framed with that limitation in mind.


>>127689058

Well, people like to front on the internet and fit in with the culture. People are not going to admit that they were jack-hammering or oiling their gates or what-have-you.

On a more productive topic, I am going to do a market analysis of English Visual Novels and see if I can get any interesting data. I am using this to create something that will sell in the west.

My biggest worry is that one thing is already prominent-- the most successful titles in the west have game elements. And I do not particularly want to make a visual novel with game elements, or rather, my skills are not up to the task so this would involve either hiring talent, getting a partner, or making something mediocre.
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>>127675764
>They're taking risks on western devs and making it possible for some to make a living off of making VNs.

There were already western devs making a living off VNs.

With the possible exception of HRP which Sekai is apparently giving some funding too, pretty much everyone else who's released a game via Sekai could have done it themselves and gotten more money.

>I don't give a shit if you hate Sekai, but saying that they "killed" the VN scene in the west is just ignorant and uninformed.

Well, you're right about that, they didn't kill anything. They're just not saving anything either.
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>>127690412
>I am going to do a market analysis of English Visual Novels and see if I can get any interesting data. I am using this to create something that will sell in the west.
Clearly what you need to do is make a game that combines Long Live The Queen and HuniePop.
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>>127690834
We've actually given funding to many projects besides my own. It's up to the developers whether or not they want to share who they are - I'm not going to.
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>>127689947

I think my frustration was born from trying to find the right combination. A style I like, character designs/ideas I like, the ability to draw many things, the ability to execute on a schedule, and a willingness to do nudity and violence if a story demands it. I would hate to find someone amazing, have them do work, and then be surprised when I ask for something they said they could do and then I get deafening silence.

It seems like there are a lot of artists who can check a few boxes of what I would require but not all of the boxes. This problem was something I fixed by finding an artist in my circle of friends who is actually extremely talented. But searching for one to hire I kept running into problems in one area or another. The "flighty" artist is a stereotype based in truth. Not because all artists are flighty, but because the ones available on most websites are not professionals but amateurs. I do not mean that their skills are lacking, but I mean that they tend to do art on a hobby schedule or as something out of passion, with a desire to do it for money, but without the work ethic to make that an actual reality.

From what I have seen this does not apply to just artists but rather everyone in this field, take this guy >127568648 it's writers and everyone else too. Flakiness is sort of par for the course.
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>>127691209
Okay, fair enough. Sorry.
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Should a first time kickstarter goal around $8,000? The game's already done, but I want to promote it more and get my investment back.
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>>127696541
I think you misunderstand the concept of Kickstarter.
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>>127696671
As long as KS gets their share they don't give a crap about what I do as long as I deliver what I promise.

Kickstarter is supposed to be not for profit, but companies sell the games they fund through it. And Root Double is basically done, otherwise how could an over 50 hour long vn be ready by March when it just launched?
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>>127696541
Seems reasonable, but won't the rewards be a lot of extra work?
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>>127697881
We have a local print shop that does high school merchandise. I can get a decent rate on small orders of physical items.
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>>127697379

Not you, but people WILL care. And in such a niche, getting a bad rep will hunt you for a while.
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>>127697379
>Kickstarter is supposed to be not for profit, but companies sell the games they fund through it.
Yeah, you've really misunderstood.
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>>127700221
My vn only cost $3k to make and my KS goal was twice that. I made enough to make my next vn without the first vn having even launched yet.
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I'm going to kickstart a vn and delay it so I can work on another vn. Who am I?
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Now for something completely different, Black Closet is a finalist for Excellence in Narrative in the IGF.
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>>127701827
What is IGF?
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>>127701967
Indie games festival

http://igf.com/2016/01/2016_independent_games_festiva_1.html
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>>127701967
Intergalactic Federation
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>>127701470
I went to go check the spreadsheet for games that fit your description for fun.
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>>127702462
Have you figured out which one it is yet?
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>>127702462
To give you another hint, my exact goal was $6,500.
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>>127702714
There are two that are $6000 and are currently unreleased and one $6500.

>>127703015
I guess it's A Beautiful World then.
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is tyrano builder worth it?
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>>127703169

Man, I hope it is because it would be hilarious for the dev to be a scammer besides being a dick.
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>>127704319
Are you a retarded twelve year old that's too lazy to learn rudimentary python?
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>>127704412
Yes
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>>127704550
Then tyranobuilder is the product for you!
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>>127704412
Yes
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>>127704362
Remember to screencap any negative Steam reviews and forum comments, because they're bound to disappear.
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>>127704612
With some stability patches and added customization it could rival ren'py.
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>>127704863
>If it wasn't bad, it could be good
Yes, that's how things usually work.
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>>127705664
>If it wasn't bad, it could be good
This is how I feel about incomplete episodic games.
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>>127704362
Fuck you. That article was meant to assassinate my kickstarter without giving it a chance. The author should've tried to contact me about the demo not working instead of writing that poorly researched article.
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>>127706419
> make a shitty KS campaign
> despite the fact that they are dozens of examples of how to do it right
> get angry when someone points it out

stay mad
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>>127706617
Whatever happened to beauty in simplicity? Those other examples looked bloated and gaudy.
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>>127706784
There weren't even screenshots.
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>>127706617
>responding to an obvious troll
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>>127706890
The art is being reworked. And it's the same as giving out spoilers.
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>>127706617
I went back and reread those comments. They're still hilarious.
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>>127706906
Given what the cliquist comments looked like, can you really be sure?
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I think I'm doing too many CGs. Is there such a thing?
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>>127706419
>assassinate my kickstarter

not sure if troll.
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>>127708408
If you don't have a limit on your time/money budget, there is no such thing.
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>>127709037
Not trying to be pedantic, genuinely curious: Do you think a VN that's just a shit ton of CG's, and no sprites at all, would be any good? It'd be like a picture book with music, I guess.
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so huniepop now shows on my profile and I have two coworkers added on steam

I'm not going to hear the end of this
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>>127701827
Too bad it's not actually an EVN.
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>>127709327
Say you bought it by accident or it was a gift.
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>>127709710
Hanako is known for vns/dating sims though, so I think it's relevant anyway.
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>>127696541
That's a reasonable goal, but make sure you're adding things that wouldn't otherwise exist, or people will feel cheated.

If you have cool physical rewards on some of the tiers and things that you wouldn't normally be able to distribute with the game, it's not really cheating.

(Heck, even if you take the funds raised and add a single bonus CG to the game it's not REALLY cheating, but interesting limited-edition rewards make the whole thing feel more special.)
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>>127709194
You've basically described *eden.
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>>127709194
eden* was mostly CGs and it worked fine.
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>>127709841
I paid all of the 3 dollars and had a grand old time

I'm not at all a VN fan but it was good cheesy fun and a decent fap session to boot

I you think it's shit then I'm open to suggestions
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>>127709194
There's always a place for it as long as you are willing to put in the images.
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So it's now 2016. Have you guys made anything in 2015 or you have been mopping around?
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>>127709194
you described the early littlewitch VN's
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>>127662295
Eh, it's okay tier
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>>127710831
>sweep the floor
>mop the floor
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>>127662295
Her faces have downs
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>>127709194

It can work fine. Most people don't do it because it's prohibitively expensive. It can be weird to sit on a static image for a long time with no changes at all if you're doing it ADV style though, so you'll definitely want to keep either camera moves/cropping (N+C games do this to hide the fact that most of their CGs have maybe three variants tops) and variations (particularly for facial expressions) in mind.
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>>127709194

An example to >>127710864 would be Quartett, which I'm currently playing. The entire VN is presented in a graphic novel type fashion. Combined with music and the ability to move pictures around as well as make them appear and disappear makes an entirely unique experience.

It must be really expensive/taxing to do though, as a lot of scenes and CG has to be drawn.
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A wild catgirl appears has the "horror" tag on steam
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>>127715487
I fucking hated quartett for the sole reason that all of the female side characters are infinitely more interesting and engaging than the actual 3 heroines. I was so sad when I found out they only got routes in a compilation fandisc which will never be translated. Pic related best girl.
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>>127715678
Lots of things get stupid joke tags, hit the Report flag
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>>127715871
This is how I feel about a lot of the VNs I read.
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>>127715678
FUC did someone cap that review by the "not like meh steins:gate" person? I can't find it now
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I just played the Blackgate demo and... that was so much better than I expected. My only complain is that the quality of the bgs, compared to everything else, is very distracting.

Those sex scenes though, 10/10 would read again.
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>>127719884
I guess I should finally get around to playing that. I hope the soundtrack is as good as that one guy said.
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>>127720842

It's decent. Not horrible and it suits the game, but it could be better.
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>download game
>look through assets
>never actually play it
I've got to stop doing this.
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I want to make it so that after you click 'start' you get taken to a scenario select screen which have corresponding buttons and when you hover over them the heroines respective sprite shows up on the left side of the screen. I've never coded shit in my life, how would I accomplish this? I've dicked around in renpy/tyrano and I'm still no wiser. Pic related is my shitty ms paint example.
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>>127722315
I would imagine same way you'd do the hover in any gui? What makes this special? Does the sprite have to stay until another is hovered over?
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>>127722315
This thread might help you.
http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=8&t=32215
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>>127723160
>Does the sprite have to stay until another is hovered over?
That was the idea. Does that complicate things?
>>127723326
Thank you!
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>>127725903
Generic.
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>>127725903
pink looks off somehow
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>>127725903
>2 blondies but no qt black haired asian queen
it's shit.

also the sprites look a lot better in general.
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>>127726221

it's the tits.
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>>127726679
It's not that good.
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>Japan setting
>Japan names
>Three blond girls
>Two of blonds have light eyes
>One is a redhead with blue eyes


Don't do this.
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>>127727248
If Naruto can do it, so can I.
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>>127727374
This. Japan has already accepted that their homogeneity is boring.
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>>127727248
Anime hair color is not meant to be taken literally.
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>>127727719
Who knew HRP dev was from Japan? :^)
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>>127727248
>American setting
>Western names
>Having anything other than blonde girls with blue eyes

Don't do this.
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>>127728172
>complaining about authenticity to the setting when the country themselves don't give a shit
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>>127726187
Pretty much
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>>127616218
>want to write a character who can sing
>realize I would likely need to get them an actual VA for that

what do /evn/
just don't worry and describe their singing?
grab some royalty-free songs?
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>>127729658
Gross. Is it the main character? If it's not just have the characters around them remark on how nice it is.
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is there a recommended resolution for a VN?
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>>127729658
Eh, unless you're voicing the rest of the characters why would anyone expect to hear the character sing?

for that matter amnesia had a route talk a lot about the protagonist's singing voice and we never got to hear her
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>>127730286
800x600
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>>127730434
im reading that 1366x768 is the new rage
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>>127729996
It'll have to do.

>>127730374
I don't know. I guess I got paralyzed because I definitely want her to sing a couple of times but wasn't sure if that sort of character trait would 'have' to wait for a voiced production. Now all I need to do is figure out how all this 'music' stuff works.
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>>127720842
I didn't notice anything special about the soundtrack. I just tried it a second ago and I can hardly remember it.
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I randomly lost one of my scenes and it's driving me crazy. I didn't think I'd need it and now I do
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>>127727719
Play Innocent Grey games and you can't tell half of the heroines apart, because they all look so similar.
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>>127730286
720p should be the minimum at this point.
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>>127731486
Especially if you're missing the voice acting.
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>>127722315
Setting yourself down a predetermined character route right off the bat, linear or not, is pretty boring. Players should have the time to get to know about the characters and make their choices accordingly. Just my two cents.
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>>127732109
Trust me when I say its a necessary format.
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>>127726221
The shoulders are elevated and the head and neck are shifted backwards. It's hard to say if it's genuinely wrong with that turtleneck in the way, but it is a very awkward position to hold and conflicts with the otherwise relaxed pose.
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>>127727719
>If such two persons do Love, the would will change how?
Japs are adorable.

Also, what does the Tina option do?
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>>127732763
It Tinas.
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Yeah. Looks like this to me, but maybe she's trying to stick her tits out more
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>>127725903
They're all so cute and nice looking!

But god dammit what's with pink's tits? Haven't we been over this? Letting gravity affect them a little isn't going to ruin them.

Also destroy boob pockets. Haven't we been over this?

... Am I getting myself all worked up over something that isn't even finalized/official?
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Is stargazers a free game?
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>>127725903

You guys are all picking on pink's boobs but look at the chick in the black shirt. It's like she has her shirt tucked under her bra and her boobs are deflated and sitting too high.
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>>127739592
Fuck. Now I can't stop noticing HER boobs.

Both of these would improve a good bit if the artist stopped doing "folds" or whatever those lines are supposed to be under the breasts.
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>>127739592
but what do they look like naked? that's the real question. are they as jarring and malformed as they are with clothes?
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>>127739825
people will never stop doing nonsensical vacuum-sealed breasts, unfortunately.
Especially in knits/sweaters where it would especially be impossible for the folds to look like that.
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>no sketch this week from artist

That feel. well at least they sent a message.
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>>127744548
>tfw I am my own artist
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Convince me not to include epic wubs in the soundtrack.
Please.
Please ;_;
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Live please
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>>127710831
2 VNs.
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>>127710831
i made mistakes
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people who can't tell the difference between a character's opinion and the author's opinion
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>>127755184
people who use their characters as mouthpieces and make them preach nonsense in weird OOC moments
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>>127662379
Damn.
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>>127710831
I was busy working for other people. I hope I can release something of my own this year.
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>>127710831
One VN, did work in a lot of other people's. Going to try writing and making music for at least one more this year.
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>>127738365
It was originally part of the yuri jam, so it was supposed to be, not sure if their plans changed since then though.
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>>127741009
So you're saying people should draw all of their characters naked first, then draw clothes on another layer over them? Brilliant!
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Wake up and post progress.
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Are Strawberry Vinegar and The Sad Story of Emmeline Burns any good? In particular SV because it's $9.99.
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>>127725903
>overlaying a plaid pattern over Yellow's skirt
>it doesn't follow the form at all
they do it in annimeys because obviously it's going to be animated and thus saves time, no excuse to do this with a static sprite. Come on, even Sakura shitters have enough sense to at least warp the stock patterns they find on the google images.
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>>127767216
well, yeah, how else will you get different outfits on them? doesn't even need to be lewd naked, just so you can see the form underneath
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>>127725903
wait where is tall orange's other foot?
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>>127774231
Then why do some boobs turn out so weird?
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>>127774327
It's because she's stepping forward, so it's out of sight. You can see it in just the isolated sprite that they posted.
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>>127774371
because they don't know how to draw boobs, i don't know? it's easier to see mistakes without clothes than with.
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>>127774459
oh i see now. thanks.
i hate how they update a little bit in every single place and it's never together. put it on the blog you fucks.
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>>127773684
You could just wait and pirate :^) SV and buy it if you like it.
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>>127775257
I heard that now windows 10's out pirating is a thing of the past.
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>>127775257
Steam reviews have created another gem.

>I wouldn't call this a game so much as a story. There are no puzzles, no choices, no fights.

>I played this game for probably about 45 minutesjust WAITING for something to happen but it was just reading a lot of text. The writing was okay; it was basically the ramblings of a thirteen-year-old and her friend. I had assumed that if I played through the backstory it'd get to an interesting part of the game, but I realized after playing long enough that that WAS the game.
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>>127775405
Why would you upgrade to Win10? Nanami is the superior waifu.

Besides, pirating renpy games is as easy as uploading the zip.
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Have you voted for diversity today?
http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582257961

>Complex and realistic characters. Ominous and surreal atmosphere. Definitely a unique kind of visual novel worth checking out.

>An amazing visual novel that really understands what it is trying to go for. I wish I had this when I was younger so that I could take heed to its story. I suggest to all who know nothing about this game is to simply play it blind until you get the 4 endings and pay attention to the weaving of the narrative. Highly recommended on Date Nighto and hope it can garner a new audience here.

>This is one of the most intense experiences I've had in a game, and the drive to complete the whole game was driven by emotional connection rather than the usual completionism. Would love love LOVE to see it on Steam.

>Absolutely one of the best games of 2015. It builds a sense of inescapable dread that ends in unexpected horrors, centered around uniquely real characters who you'll want to protect. The writing, art, and music are all powerful and evocative. The story stays with you long after you finish playing. There is a rude teen who wears a t-shirt with his own face on it.
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http://vnsnow.com/2016/01/the-worst-evns-of-2015/

vn snow has his worst evns out. looks like a furry game won, or lost depending on your point of view.
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>>127778530
>http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582257961
Make Steam Great Again With Diversity
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>>127778709
All the upvotes are diversity shills, right?
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>>127778550
Want to hear a terrible thing? I'm getting used to JayPee because there is no other evn reviewer who updates more frequently than once a year.
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>>127781504
I want to read a review of No One But You, because I still have no idea what the f**k that game's about. Is it a drama SoL, or does it have supernatural elements?
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>>127781727
>f**k
What are you doing here?
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>>127781852
I self censor, just like vns on Steam have to.

Fight the power! Demand change!
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>>127775257
It's hard for me to pirate as a dev. I try youtube lets play and see if you like the game, but giving hits to pirate websites for VN will just encourage them.
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>>127782690
You don't make a difference.
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>>127781727
It's a nakige
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>>127782821
> a comedic first half with a heart-warming romantic middle followed by a tragic separation and finally an emotional reunion formed what is known as a "crying game". The main purpose of such a game is to make the player feel for the characters and make them cry due to emotional scenarios which serves to leave a bigger impact on the player after the game is over.

I'll pass.
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>>127783252
k
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>We are in the first week of a brand new year. Already we are seeing long-awaited releases and brand new EVNs step up to the plate to welcome us to a year of new chances and opportunities!

I didn't know JP wanted to play A Wild Catgirl appears that much.

>WC announced in the development of this title that it would feature lesbian relationships. Because of that, yuri fans actually came out of the woodwork and tried to defend this game to me NOT because they thought it could be good, but because it at least had yuri and would therefore spread acceptance of a subgenre they wanted to see more of in the West. It was an unmitigated disaster for that particular fandom as any romantic scene in Sakura Fantasy was turned into a dream sequence in the name of male-driven otaku wank material. So hopefully a lesson was learned there, but who knows?

I doubt anything was learned. They'll just hope that if WC does any more chapters of Fantasy that they'll make the scenes real.
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>>127690412
>Market analysis

Have you considered running a cluster analysis?
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>>127784967
So sf cant be yuri because it has sexy scenes? Also I thought it was generally accepted the writing in sf was pretty good.
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>>127785274
How did you get "not yuri because of sex scenes" from "there's no actual romance, just dream sequences"?
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>>127785274
Any romance took place in dream sequences, so there wasn't any real romance developing between the characters. And IIRC Winged Cloud has no idea how they'd continue the series, so don't be surprised if it never gets continued, just like Sakura Spirit.
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>>127785648
Because that's what it implies...?
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>>127786012
No it doesn't.
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>>127785274
It had frequently repeating and bland dialogue that people overlooked because the game was yuri. The line "because it's important" was repeated so much that it was obvious they had no idea where the story was actually going.
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>>127786012
>It was an unmitigated disaster for that particular fandom as any romantic scene in Sakura Fantasy was turned into a dream sequence
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>>127785662
One character is completely aware in the dream and initiates the sex. It's heavily implied the other characters know it's happening. The main characters powers are her dreams so its not some total asspull that dreams are brought up.
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>>127786554
>making excuses
The fact of the matter is it's advertised as a yuri game yet intimacy takes place in dreams and you have to use the words 'heavily implied.'
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>>127786554
The other characters thought they were having a wet dream and the MC doesn't even remember the events happening.
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>>127786787
So earlier strawberry vinegar gets a pass for marketing as yuri as it has one ending barely implying it, but a cast of several characters who are dtf is making excuses.
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>>127787298
>strawberry vinegar gets a pass
From who? Also the dev has a history of making yuri games and you're obviously supposed to root for them romantically but there's copout endings to make the sale to people feel weird about hoping 9 year olds fug.
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>>127787298
Neither gets a free pass. People didn't want to play a "yuri" game starring a 9-year-old.

I'm not saying the cast of SF wasn't lesbians, but the scenes only included the rapist slime monster and dream sequences, with the majority of the cast thinking they're not real and Raelin unable to remember them. The series won't even likely be continued, so any chance for actual relationship developments is kill.
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>>127787640
I only ship underage yuri characters with adult characters, preferably their teachers.
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>>127787640
It was in the previous thread someone defended the dev marketing it as yuri after she was stating it had no romance focus, which is what some of the above anons seem to take issue with. Obviously it's not a hivemind here but it should shed some light on how ridiculous that comment was.
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I'm pretty sure ebihime is a lolicon. I mean, there was no reason to set this game in Japan, but because she did she could get art of the little demon girl in a gym outfit and school uniform. She's got quite a fixation on suspiciously young looking girls.
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>>127789092

cute not pedo
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>>127789092
lolis are cute, just like how baby animals are cute
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>>127789092

You know ebihime isn't the artist right?
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>>127790025
>because she did she could get art
Yes.
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>>127789092
Girls cant be lolicons.
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>>127787804
>People didn't want to play a "yuri" game starring a 9-year-old
would it be okay if it's just a side route? or am I going to have to rewrite that part in my notes?
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>>127789092
who the fuck on this god's green earth would not want to see a cute little demon girl in a gym uniform and a seifuku?
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>>127791071
Just say she's at least 18 and you're golden.
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>>127774845
I don't know if I'd trust a breast tutorial drawn by somebody who doesn't know how to do torsos. A fair amount of those look like liefeld's "organs what are those" style.
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>>127787640
>the dev has a history of making yuri games
Well, Emmeline Burns yes, but Asphyxia was all surprise! you can't date ANY of these girls. also you slept with a boy in the past.
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>>127788825
You and several others are going to be terribly disappointed that I'm not letting you pair the 14 yo and the 50 yo.
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>>127795448
>implying we won't draw/write it instead
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>>127794274
it's okay they're actually 600 year old loli demons
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>>127795848
Oh THAT's fine, I'm just not officially putting it in the game.

>tfw not enough people make filthy fanfic of your games
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Is anyone here actually offended by fanwork of their characters? I admit I was a little weirded out by the fic making one of them a nazi spokeswoman, but thankfully, only about three people ever saw that.
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>>127797086
I had a webcomic years ago that someone did a re-write for with really nonsensical edits like goof troop and sonic the hedgehog sprites interacting as heads of my characters. None of the dialog made any sense. Funny since it was the second troll rewrite of the comic i'd seen (the first was killing a character with a giant chicken)

I wasn't offended it was more of a uh what reaction
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>>127657927
Christine Loves proves you can make an art game with fun shit but with character and a solid plot and still sell. (I just replayed the digital saga, even the bad 2027 game, and its so many feels. man the future was shit).
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>>127674453
Unless you will hand walk thousands of dollars in cash to each /evn/ maker, I will post a list of articles you fucking retard.

http://motherboard.vice.com/read/the-secret-censorship-of-online-porn

http://www.forbes.com/2003/05/01/cz_sl_0501porn.html

I post this last one as a big reason why they are afraid
http://flfamily.org/clean-credit-card-processing/ shit like this

and here is an academic article.

so tl;dr you are a fucking retard who does not understand the economic realities of porn because you are an idiot.

https://books.google.com/books?id=tpNhCQAAQBAJ&pg=PT103&lpg=PT103&dq=credit+card+processors+pornorgraphy+news&source=bl&ots=BK3LIv4tKj&sig=SC15XfkRgxoAilcldM_kKEOKvqM&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwiqgYPKzJjKAhXGbD4KHWhBCLkQ6AEIWDAF#v=onepage&q=credit%20card%20processors%20pornorgraphy%20news&f=false

so go jump into a river and die.
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>>127677478
uh actually about game of thrones, one of the main actresses actually uses CGI and a body double because she is tired of the sex scenes lol
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>>127795848
>>127796512
I'm afraid of putting sibling characters in my games in fear of all the disgusting incest shipping.
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>>127801056
>http://motherboard.vice.com/read/the-secret-censorship-of-online-porn
>that "super hot period porn" description
madokavomit.jpg
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>>127802087
>not embracing the purest form of love
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>>127802757
That's not the type of love I'm going for.
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>>127802995
Death of the creator and all that. They're gonna fuck and there's nothing you can do about it.
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>>127803101
>Death of the creator and all that.
What? Someone's characters cannot fuck unless the creator specifically states that they did, everything else is fanfiction.
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>>127803271
All writing is fanfiction.
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>>127803271
No man, it's the true canon.
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>>127803610
It's headcanon. Which I guess it's alright to have since deep down you know it'll never be canon. :^)
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>>127803101
>Death of the creator

Only idiots who want to validate their headcanon believe this.
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>>127804150
You don't get to say what's canon. The people who know what's best for you do.
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>>127804316
Holy shit you're retarded kek
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>>127804316
Got it. Because I know what's best for you I say that all of your characters are STD ridden prostitutes who fuck fat guys for free.
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>>127806068
I can't tell if nobody here understands the concept or if we're all just talking shit to bump the thread.
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>>127806145
Everything has a purpose, except for your game, which is probably going to be shit.
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>>127806145
There is no concept though. The death of the creator thing is just retarded.

Also, it does help bump the thread so that's a plus.
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>>127806340
Depends on which death of the creator thing. Authors put a lot of concepts into stories that they did not consciously intend, and it's reasonable to analyse what they've written and look for patterns that go beyond what they meant to say. Whether the author wanted that to be the message isn't necessarily relevant to whether that IS the message.

In the case of incestuous non-couples, there are a lot of cases in fiction, particularly in live-action, where the general consensus is that the pairing was written too couple-y and gives the impression of subtext that probably wasn't meant to be there. Obviously mileage varies.
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>>127807360
Sure, but it still doesn't mean that your characters are fucking when you didn't intend for them to. This goes for everything, not just incest.
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This is visual novels. If you don't get the option to fuck everything, what's the point?
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>>127807360
People will find a way to find romantic subtext in EVERYTHING. Put two inanimate objects next to each other and you can be assured someone will think they're fucking each other.
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>>127808330
>>127807360
To be quite honest I think you two are fucking eachother right now.
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>>127807928
You just haven't realized it yet. You know it already in your heart.
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>>127808330
True, but sometimes it's more obvious than others.

"Isn't it a little odd to lounge around on your brother's bed in your skimpy lingerie?"

"I don't think my brother ever gave me a massage..."

"Do siblings actually bathe together after the age of seven in your country?"

"I've never seen two brothers cuddle that much before..."
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>>127808330
>Put two inanimate objects next to each other and you can be assured someone will think they're fucking each other.

> that episode of turning girls where the fujoshi ships a hot water cup with a cold water cup.
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>>127808815
>sometimes it's more obvious than others
No it fucking isn't, you are literally assuming things when there is nothing there.
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>>127808815
There's also a thing that happens sometimes where writers decided to combine characters that were separate in the original draft, so the friend/sibling inherits the plot and the dialogue of the love interest, just with the kissing cut out. Which isn't quite enough to stop people from noticing.
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>>127808815
Well, when you put it like that sure, they were probably written to have incestuous undertones.

However, when you put two normal siblings that, for example, already have a boyfriend/girlfriend or have a crush on someone else, there's no reason to believe they're incestuous. Same goes for boy/girl friendships with no intended romantic undertones.
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>>127809132
Men and women can't be friends.
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>>127809132
I agree, some people are desperate to ship pairings that have no actual evidence. For that matter, some people start writing the shipping fic as soon as the actors or character designs are announced. Who needs plot? They LOOK hot together.
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>>127809132
>already have a boyfriend/girlfriend or have a crush on someone else, there's no reason to believe they're incestuous.
I don't think you really quite understand what incest is, it's generally like fuckbuddies, not legit girlfriend/boyfriend, I don't think that even comes into consideration.
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>>127809205
Bisexual master race reporting in - it's not just men and women that can't be friends.
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>>127809370
You're really desperate aren't you? Most siblings aren't incestuous and never will be, the thought of fucking each other is disgusting for the majority. Stop thinking everything is a fucking eroge.
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>>127809478
The only way a bisexual can be master race is if they're female, it's still gay for guys.
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>>127808815
"Isn't it a little odd to lounge around on your father's bed in your skimpy lingerie?"

"I don't think my father ever gave me a massage..."

"Do fathers and children actually bathe together after the age of seven in your country?"

"I've never seen a father cuddle that much with his child before..."

FTFY
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>>127809370
>it's generally like fuckbuddies, not legit girlfriend/boyfriend, I don't think that even comes into consideration.
In japanese media it certainly does.

"Let's run away to another town where no one realises we're related so we can pretend to be married!" - ending plot of at least two animes and some dating sim plotlines
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>>127809478
Bisexuals aren't real. You're either a gay man lying to himself or a woman who breaks the hearts of pure lesbians and will settle down with a man in the end.
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>>127809542
Are we talking about the same thing? I'm talking about writer undertones and contextual clues in stories, not about your underlying secret fantasy of fucking your sister IRL. This has nothing to do with real life.
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>>127809565
I'm Southern, you were supposed to give your virginity promise to your father to hold and dance romantically with him.
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>>127809702
>woman who breaks the hearts of pure lesbians and will settle down with a man in the end
I can confirm this is real ;_;
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>>127809743
>implying I have a sister
We're talking about the same thing. If I don't want incestuous or romantic (in the case of boy/girl friendships) undertones then there are none, plain and simple. You're trying to argue that there absolutely has to be other undertones in everything when that just isn't true.
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>>127809849

You are projecting. It's not romantic, it's basically "I give my father the management of my virginity because lmao trusting a woman with her own body"
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>>127809934
A-are you single?
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>>127810137
I don't think anyone's seriously arguing that there absolutely have to be undertones, just teasing the touchy writer about the prospect of crazy people shipping the characters anyway.

Sometimes undertones exist even when not intended, though.
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>>127810153
I know, but it still comes across as pretty weird to people from different cultures.

>>127809934
I can't find a pure lesbian to break in the first place, I'm stuck with girly boys and walls covered with pinup photos.
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>>127810153
It is romantic you fucktard, the father looks after the daughter and protects her from men who would be willing to manipulate/use her for sex.

God you're fucking retarded.
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What's the best evn otome game? Is there one with good art?
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>>127810253
>Sometimes undertones exist even when not intended, though.
No, they don't. I'm sorry your headcanon isn't true, stop spouting bullshit.
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>>127810609
>Is there one with good art?
Is Backstage Pass's art good to you?

Pyrite Heart has okay art but you should not pay for it under any circumstances.
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>>127810660
One day you'll wake up and realize you've been lying to yourself.
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>>127810660
WTF is it with you and this 'headcanon' nonsense, I'm talking about analysing works of literature as a whole, not about my personal desire to see Elsa and Anna scissoring.

It is a simple fact that sometimes authors have written characters more romantically than they intended to. They openly admit this. In ongoing media, they often try to fix it later.
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>>127810745
They have okay art, but I really don't want to pay for those games at all. Also, stat raising games are tedious as fuck.
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>>127810609

The 7KPP has fantastic writing, I recommend it if you can stand the terrible art.
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>>127809934
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>when your narrator starts to wax lyrical on her own mother's "voluptuous hips" and "cantaloupe-sized breasts", something has gone very wrong.
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>>127811018
>stat raising games are fun*
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>>127811028
Holy fucking shit, that art.

But I guess I'll give it a try if it has good writing.
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>>127810940
Not that anon, but you're probably right. Although some fans go full batshit and start seeing things that plain aren't there. Going on the incest examples and Japanese media, take the kids show Yu-Gi-Oh for instance. In this current season there's this guy that's looking for his kidnapped sister, and just because of this people automatically assume he wants to fuck her. That's just ridiculous.
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>>127811248
if they are done right, no one likes to see a retarded chibi drawing and a jingle and "your floor mopping skill has increased! Congratufuckinglations!" and exactly like that for every stupid dumbshit skill for THE WHOLE GAME FUCK THINGS LIKE THAT
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>>127812229
Why else would he be looking for her? He's missing out on that prime imouto pussy.
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>>127812323
I don't mind the chibis as long as they get out of the way quickly, and there are actual events happening regularly.

Most people's obejctions to the sunrider game seem to be months on end of grinding with nothing happening?
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>>127812598
Maybe because she's his FAMILY?
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>>127812629
You also lose stats when you sleep.
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>>127812684
And she's got a vagina, so...
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>>127812947
No, she's actually a trans girl.
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>>127813023
Boypussy, then. Really, it's all the same.
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>>127810156
No.

I converted to 2D girls, at least they won't hurt me
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>>127812775
uggh, I hate that.

It's funny, because princess maker which everyone cribs from had you lose stats under some circumstances, and yet it was somehow not as OBNOXIOUS as it tends to be in most english games with stat-raising.

Once you figure out how to use items in Lucky Rabbit Reflex it's not so terrible but it really sucks at the beginning. And fuck Shira Oka.
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>>127810609
My nostalgia faves are Re: Alistair++ (just got an update for the newest version of renpy), (P)lanets (not actually a great game IIRC), and Knife of the Traitor.
More recent EVN otomes that are in my "good" folder are April Was a Fool, the lovely little thieves demo, and romance is dead.

No idea about art, maybe backstage pass.
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>>127814517
>lovely little thieves
How did it get delayed so many times?
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>>127815102
People who aren't working on games fulltime have other shit to do
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>>127787804
>People didn't want to play a "yuri" game starring a 9-year-old.
Strawberry Vinegar would've been a resounding success if it were lewd.
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>>127816426
Is anyone actually playing it?

I hear it's mostly just about food
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>>127796046
Hi Tao.
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>>127811213
Or very right.
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>>127815102
Dunno, hopefully because of bug fixes. I'd rather have an overdue game that runs well than an on time one that crashes.
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>>127816989
Erotic eating evn when?
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>>127818047
second worst fetish after gokkun
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>>127820245
>gokkun
do i want to know?
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>>127801056
>http://flfamily.org/clean-credit-card-processing/
Why do people like this still exist.
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Whatever happened to Chocolate Cock?
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>>127825063
To protect America from Anti-Christian, Anti-family people like all of you sin loving devils.
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>>127825832
I'm not anti-family, I love my family.

... Yes. Like that.
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>>127802087
But that's the best kind of ship
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>>127825135
Whatever happened to those hands?
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>>127825832
I love my family. I love them very, very much indeed.
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>>127828515
too slow
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>>127822683
>it's a "I'm afraid to taint my search history" post
sperm drinking
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>>127830917

lmao, the MC's face. She ain't buying that.
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>>127831080
I have vague memories of bathing with a female friend when we were about seven, but we weren't strangers.
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>>127831080
MC: "Mom you're a filthy lolicon."
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Well I got a set of sprites back from the other artist today (I'd already told them I decided to go with another artist, they wanted to finish them anyway) and whilst their art is good, I can say I'm happy I went with the other artist. It just feels like they adapted my original ms paint designs with 100% accuracy.
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>>127834759

I like the second style better, but it has lots of anatomy and pose issues.
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>>127834759
Do you mind sharing who the second artist is? I like their stuff and wanna consider them for something I'm working on.
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>>127834759

I think you made the right choice. The first artist has a much stronger grasp of anatomy.
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Hey, do artists/creative people in general get depressed all the time? I've read another case of "I can't do the commission, I'm depressed"
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>>127835465
Most artists I know are NEETs or hikkis.
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>>127835465
I remember getting depressed, then the bills came.
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>>127838089
Bills. Better than Prozac.
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>>127834759
Did the first artist finish the sprites? Might be interesting to compare their finished vs sketches. I've seen some artists who draw really nice sketches but then fell flat when it came to rendering.
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>>127834759

I like them both. Great artists to choose from. Good job. I like the first set more overall, but I absolutely love the third design of the second set, really great work.
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>>127835013
>I wanna poach your artist! please!
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>>127839502
They already said they're not working with that artist.

Try harder.
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>>127839230
Third design of the second set looks like a touhou knockoff to me.
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>>127834949
>>127834759
Eh. I'd say the 2nd artists anatomy and pose are on point except the last one.

If it were me, I think I'd choose the 2nd because it's cleaned up, they can draw in different poses, they draw nice hair, and the hands look like hands (except the right hand of the last one). The 2nd pose looks hot.

The first artist, I couldn't even see the hands. Granted it's a sketch and I'm only going with the image here, but that's usually a red flag that an artist can't draw hands well.

They're both good nonetheless.
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>>127840161
The more dynamic poses was something I liked about the second pone as well, but I do see a number of small issues with the anatomy. The first artist could end up having similar problems though for all I know considering they only drew the exact same static sketchy pose for each sprite.
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>>127841116
>pone
What the fuck is that. Should be artist.
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>>127841116
The first artist has a bunch of problems with anatomy that you can't really notice because they are all such static poses. The first character drawn does not have her wrists reach crotch-level, all the hands even in a static pose have no variety, and all the forward facing feet are drawn like flippers.
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>>127825135
ded ;_;
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Im making a very basic VN for a college project. I have everything show up but i cant add transparency to my pictures for the life of me. can anyone help?
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>>127845025
Are you saving them as .png?
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>>127845025
Oui vey .png that shit.
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>>127845025
>college project
Why?
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>>127845272
>>127845434
Yes. They are saved as PNG, the original image was a JPG but then i whited out all the compression and saved as a PNG. usually that would make it transparent. And if i just copy and paste the selection into another page that is black it does show up as transparent
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>>127845667
because its an intro to programming type class and we are learning java and the assignment is to try out another language cause why not, and i decided on python through the ren'py engine
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>>127845725

Doesn't work like that, to have a transparency you need to cut out the BG in something like Gimp/Clip Studio/Photoshop. If you have the white and grey checkered BG instead of white then you have transparency.
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>>127845995
ahhh danke, looks like im re-downloading gimp. tysm
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>>127845858
Why don't you just make a calculator or something
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>>127845667

Now I feel bad for having a dating-sim as my undergrad thesis.
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>>127846194
He could have a moe romance-able calculator.

Hey anon! Make that an option for your college project!
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>>127831293
My friend and I tried on my mom's makeup when we were little (5-7?) once so there's a picture of us in the bathtub with Evanescence style mascara smears down our cheeks and bright blue eyeshadow and red lips. kills me every time we flip through the album
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>>127846194
because I already had ren'py on my computer, and ive seen the tutorials and they basically hold your hand through it, it seemed like the easiest option as its not about quality but rather its about it being done.

>>127846635
How? Wouldn't it be better to make a Moe romance-able math tutoring program where it randomizes values and makes you add them or something and every time you get it right you get a waifu and wrong you get something else?
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>>127846356
Don't, im sure making a dating-sim isn't incredibly easy. especially those match three dating sims (aka huniepop)
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>>127846635
A calculator where teh buttons are pressed against the flesh of a loli, who wiggles ticklishly when you poke them
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>>127847201
Thanks anon, I released a demo last March but had to pull it down since it wasn't polished.
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Wild catgirl isnt selling as well as you think. It was sold in a groupees bundle and the steam keys are just now being given out. This is why I hate steamspy.
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>>127825135
Did someone summon me?
Been on a huge art block for months. Just went back to the project two days ago and I'm coloring the CGs.
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>>127850713
I'm not basing on steamspy, I'm basing on the position in the top-sellers list on the visual novel tag category. It got a burst of sales on launch and continued to do much better than, say, strawberry vinegar.

It's not making tons of money, because it's cheap. But it sold copies.
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is this what undertale has wrought?
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>>127850713
Where does one acquire this steam key??
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>>127855375
If you have to ask, you probably did not buy the bundle it was part of.
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>>127855461
Its the first ive ever heard of Wild Catgirl. i don't frequent /evn/ too often. Talk of Liberation Day is not allowed on /vn/ and I came here to see what was said about it.
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>>127855595
Then you don't get a steam key because you didn't buy it.
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>>127855703
Ah shit i misread your post. sorry for wasting your time anon. I didn't read the "just now" part.
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>>127854454
god I fucking hope so. I want nothing more than skeleton boys to fuck.
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>>127856571
You can't fuck a skeleton.
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>>127856678
fukken watch me
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>>127856757
Not only a skeleton fucker but an exhibitionist too. You need God.
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>>127857032
I'll do it in front of him too, he's the one who invented them.
Can't cry over fucked skeletons when you orchestrated it, fucko.
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>>127853001
>say, strawberry vinegar.
Sekai did bury that under news about the Root Double Kickstarter hours after it released.
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>>127858504
But they're totally a good and supportive publisher.
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steamspy says asphyxia sold like 20k units

how is that bad? i would be ecstatic if i sold that much
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>>127859752
What is humble bundle.
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>>127859841
And? that's still a ton of sales, even if it's only at a dollar each
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>>127859925

But it wasn't a dollar each. It was pennies. It was a $2 bundle with 5-6 games in it.
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>>127859925
It was probably more like .10c a copy.
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>>127860256
>>127860192
that's still enough to buy a bagel. not bad imho
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"I slaved away on this video game and all I got was a bagel!"
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>>127860298

Well, there is not yet a really clear definition for what we would call a successful EVN, especially because our production costs and opportunity costs vary wildly.

Someone from San Francisco and someone from Ohio would have to move vastly different numbers of copies to consider their game a success.
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bum
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> http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=594692617

What a clusterfuck
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>>127876974
Is that the Huniepop artist for the sprites? Somehow it looks worse than what he did on that game.
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>>127876974
Bleargh, who did the interface and CGs?
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>>127877830
>Is that the Huniepop artist for the sprites?

I don't think so.
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>bg artist getting fatigued as development goes on
>work turns to crap
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>>127880474
Poor guy
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>>127881637
Yeah, he shouldn't overwork his bg artist.

nah
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>>127876974
This POS again? They must be trying to cash in on meme game bux.
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>>127882001
Who is it? I only know that hilarious CG of the kneeling guy getting stabbed.
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>>127882835
Moonsttar's Sekaiju Yggrasil. Read JP's review for more info.
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>>127876974
>http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=594692617

If this shit gets Greenlight... holy fuck.
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And remind me to stop playing KanColle and get moving.
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>>127876974
every damn time
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>>127884915

the guy cracks me up everytime, he looks so bummed about being stabbed.

> oh shit, not again!
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>>127885482

The sad fate of an immortal, 300+ years of getting stabbed by random fuckers, he looks so done with being stabbed.
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>>127883170
Forgot link.
http://vnsnow.com/2015/03/you-asked-for-it-sekaiju-yggdrasil/

The game was actually made as a joke, but they decided to turn it into an actual vn.
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What already released, poorly regarded evn will pop up on Steam Greenlight next? Cast your votes and contempt.
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Is Millia -The ending- any good?

It just launched, but was originally supposed to launch June 2015 according to its KS page.

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1803299001/millia-the-ending-visual-novel/updates
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>>127889392
>grammatical errors on the steam screenshot

Take a guess
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>>127886574
Not much of a joke when you're asking for £10,000 of peoples money to fund it. Needless to say the kickstarter failed with only £100 raised.
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>>127890542
>The story of Yggdrasil started as an insomnia play and joke about displaying different anime scenes in Unity. A friend said he likes it and I should turn it in to a real VN.

>Yes, you read that right. The plot of this game started as an in-joke about different anime
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People were just waiting for the holidays to be over to launch their VNs, weren't they? That would explain why so many VNs seem to be launching so close together.
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>>127894998
Yes. People didn't want to compete with steam sales or AAA releases.
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>>127895379
>AAA releases
I don't think it's the same audience.
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>>127895461
Most players are bound to want at least one AAA game - and those are 50 bucks they won't be spending on your "less urgent" game.
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>>127895653
Q1 this year is going to be packed then.
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>tfw finishing your project is the only thing keeping you alive
I can't want to finish it and die having accomplished something.
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http://store.steampowered.com/app/431540/
>no one will ever put a fanfic VN of your game on Steam
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>>127898298
tfw when you're finished and released multiple projects and think you've achieved what you want to do in life so why don't you just die...
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>>127898298
>>127898870
This thread just took a really dark turn. Think happy thoughts and seek professional help.
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>>127898298
what if someone secretly stalks your project and it's eventual release is the only thing keeping them alive? And if you kill yourself, there will obviously be no sequels, so that guy has no choice but to kill himself too (unless your game has somehow improved his situation).
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>>127898460
They better not, or I'm sending them a DMCA.
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>>127899057
Playing Sakura Spirit temporarily robbed me of my will to continue living. Once I finished the game I got better.
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>>127898995
But when one of my friends forced me to go see a therapist I just sat there and cried and couldn't say anything um
And then the therapist just told me to leave and said I didn't need to pay them cause they'd feel too guilty taking my money

This was a while ago though
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>>127899137
Wow, what a bully.
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>>127899620
Sounds like you probably should just go ahead and end it.
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>>127898995
Thing is, /evn/ is made of darkness. We're hateful, bitter people who don't often accomplish things and when we do, we still feel underwhelmed and go on to the next one.

You can try and climb up the hole, sure, but I think it's easier to just dig further down.
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>>127899789
You're Omniknight? You have no right to make money off of someone else's IP. It would have to be approved, because I don't want some idiot making some moronic spinoff too my game and people thinking I'm behind it.
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>>127899945
You do know it's a crime to try to convince someone to kill themselves, right? It's like screaming "Jump!" to someone standing on a tall building. They'll get your IP from 4chan and you'll be screwed.
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>>127900105
No, I'm joking.
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>>127900274
Devil's Advocate time!

>You do know it's a crime to try to convince someone to kill themselves, right?
You're assuming it's illegal where that poster lives. Not everyone here is 'murrican.

Also, if people were actively looking into 4chan, you'd think CP posters and neonazis would go first.
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>>127900274
>taking it seriously
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>>127900626
Given the people who work on evns it would hardly be surprising. Emotional breakingdown leading to a sex change ring any bells?
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>>127900775
being an ugly female is even worse than being a loser male tbcauhwy familia
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>>127900775
>Emotional breakingdown leading to a sex change ring any bells?
That's not saying much, most sex change surgeries are a byproduct of emotional instability and people who go through them are very likely to kill themselves regardless afterwards.
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>>127901241
Opposite kind of sex change iirc.
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Is anyone planning to launch their game soon?
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>>127904419
Hopefully me
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>>127904419
Quite soon. Two of them, actually. Currently fixing up some of the GUI bugs.
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Has anyone heard about The Next World from Illuminated Games before? It"s supposed to launch on Steam soon, and I've never heard of them.
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>>127884142
Why wouldn't it? It's not like people do research before blindly clicking
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>>127834759
Interesting picture. The first artist respects unique faces, but probably will have problems drawing the standard 3/4 VN angle and trying different poses.

The second artist has problems as mentioned before but they're trying hard. The poses could be fixed, but they've probably drawn these same faces all their life.
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>>127899945
Sounds like you should shut the fuck up.
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Does this sort of thing count as a VN?
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>>127913838
No. I want this "narrative heavy games with choices are VNs" meme to end.
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>>127914221
So what is a VN, then?
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>>127915275

if you can remove the gameplay and game is pretty much the same, it's a VN.

If you can't do the above, it's not a VN.

It's why Winterwolves games count as VN despite algo being rpg/other hybrids, because he can easily release "vn modes".
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>>127915543
I'm still trying to find out if >>127913838 has any gameplay. The videos are all talking-and-choices.
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>>127922037
I enjoyed the original, and I still think the remake was unnecessary, especially as they gave what was supposed to be an angel elf ears.
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>>127923597
Welp just checked the lemna thread, and the remake has been scrapped entirely.
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>>127918831
That is the gameplay. You walk around, interact with objects, and choose what to do with them. It's basically like a Telltale game but instead of picking actions you pick dialogue that results in actions.
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>>127924556
So if 'choice' is all you do, wouldn't that fall into the category of
>you can remove the gameplay and game is pretty much the same
?
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Got my first background for the game, but that's going to be the only one for a while since it will be a few paychecks before I can afford more.
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>>127924902
No. It's not a visual novel, please stop trying to jump through hoops to call it one.
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>>127926257

Looks great. Now pick a better font.
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>>127927054
I have zero investment in calling this particular game, which I have not even played, a VN. However, I would like to get some actual rules that can be applied to tell games apart.
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>>127928686
You can start by eliminating any game that can't even meet the "novel" criteria.
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>>127929557
inb4 some smartass brings up word count
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>>127924902
It's a walking simulator, so not a vn.
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>"Oh hey, it's been a while since I browsed /evn/"
>*click*
>All generic girl-game shit and otome, artists are scum, etc.
>Anything remotely different gets buried
>KS is great
>Tranny drama
>mfw
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>>127934526
> anything remotely different

Stop it, your adventure game is not a vn.
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>>127934770
Adventure games have puzzles.
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>>127934526
>Tranny drama
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>>127934770
>Stop it, your adventure game is not a vn.

>implying I have I horse in this race
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>>127935483
So you are acting like an enourmous faggot for no reason. Ok, then.
>>
hello,
jp
tao
raith
sekai project
collateral damage studios
uncle mugen
chris t
>>
One takbir for /pol/ shitposters.
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>>127935649
no u
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>>127935649
They're still right
>>
> http://www.idhasstudios.com/?p=739

Order of ataxia is looking for a writer. Bonus if you complete the writing in a week.
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Add unreleased game to vndb?
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>>127926257
Who did you hire for the background?
Looks familiar, but the guy that I have in mind seems to be MIA for quite some time.
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>>127935905
Why does he want us to call him uncle?
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>>127944000
Do you want people to rate it 3 without playing it because they hate OELVNs?
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What kind of boys would an otome need to have to make it to your top ten? I'm talking physical features, cliches, personalities, events, what kind of guys strike your fancy?
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>>127959302
Physically:
Older guys, around the 40's mark.
Guys with glasses.
Tan skin with white hair.

Personality:
Losers that are full of themselves. Either chuuni or more starscream-like.
Super manly guys that have a cute, softer side (bonus if they are embarassed about it.)
Flirty guys that turn out to be gentlemanly.
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>>127959302
Slutty guys of any physique though you can't go wrong with a pretty boy. And I don't mean slutty as in manwhore, but just a good old slut like the brown guy here.
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>>127960940
I'm trying to look at brown boy but I can't stop looking at those ab(?) things
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>>127960940
whose hand is that?
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>>127961040
Have another one free of distractions.

>>127961268
It's a mystery.
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>>127959302
physical features:
- at least one guy with glasses
- characters that aren't in high school
- guys that don't look like poorly defined noodly blobs (they don't all have to be ripped, but some sense of definition/body type is always a plus)
- variety in the cast (I hate it when they all look the fucking same with slightly different hair/clothes)
- skankier clothes pls

personality:
- tsundere
- kuudere
- doM types
- pretends-to-be-S-but-is-actually-M types (I guess that could qualify as a type of tsundere?)

I'm personally tired of the chara and doS types since they've been done to death and rarely well.
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>>127959302
I'll kick in my favorites as well I guess.

Physical
>tall and gangly
>short and cute
>opposite skin tone/hair (dark skin and light hair or pale and dark hair)
>golden eyes
>red hair w/ green eyes
>horns
>big thick eyebrows
>big dark eyebags
and my absolute favorite
>always looks like he just got back from getting his ass freshly kicked

Personality
>clingy
>shy
>deredere
>masochist
>yandere
>asshole to everyone except you (like a strict teacher who you're secretly dating)

Other
>teacher/cop/priest/other position of authority
>older brother
>childhood friend
>delinquent
>gigantic dork (can also be childhood friend)
>your arch-rival/archenemy
>demon/ghost/vampire/other paranormal dude
>the asshole of the school who turns out to have some sort of shameful secret so you can blackmail him

I have a lot of favorites, I must be easy or something.
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>>127964441
>red hair w/ green eyes
You almost had supreme taste but you got it backwards.
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>>127965047
One of my first crushes was on Ron Weasley, let me live. And then later on his older brother that got made Prefect. Percy I think? I wanted to get banged by Percy in the Prefect's bathroom.
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>>127965205
Uh, okay.
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>>127966048
Basically what I'm saying is Harry Potter eroge otome where you sleep your way through the Weasley boys to get closer to the boy who lived. You start off with the lesser known brothers, then the twins, then Ron, and then finally Harry Potter trusts you enough to be dtf.
New game plus after banging Harry Potter, you can also play the hidden Malfoy route.
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>>127964441
>the asshole of the school who turns out to have some sort of shameful secret so you can blackmail him

Second.
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>>127966303
Sorting hat route or no one will play it
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What was your first evn?
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Yes please take 25% of my revenue for nothing
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>>127961443
Those are some fine looking pecs on that girl.
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>>127972298
I'm not sure why they bother.

It seems fair to me for them to get a part of the revenues, since they have to pay for hosting and maintenance (though I don't know if 25% is fair or not), but there's already itch.io if you just want your VN hosted somewhere and Steam Greenlight has become a whore in terms of how easy it is to get in nowadays.

I'm guessing they at least don't demand exclusivity, since they have Orion over there, but I really don't see the point of putting your VN over there - if your VN doesn't have enough appeal to go on Greenlight, itch.io already has enough of a userbase to give it a bit of exposure, while if it's appealing enough you're going to be better off on Steam.
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>>127976809
>orion

Was that one of the games that basically gave itself away for actual pennies on a bundle?
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>>127971564
Moonlight Walks
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>>127926257
The girl really needs to have her shoulder repositioned. In general, her pose looks really uncomfortable. Also, one of her arms was considerably shorter, particularly considering that the shoulder is lowered, it's not possible for the wrist to be only a bit lower down than on the arm with a raised shoulder and bent elbow.
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>>127979709
What the fuck did you do to her face? That looks awful
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>>127980206
I think they both look quite uncanny.
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>>127979709
>left: anime trying to be realism and failing
>right: realism trying to anime and failing
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I like the orig sprite. I think it's a dynamic pose and the style is suited to his obvious sci-fi setting.

>>127979709
Just realized you repainted. Best to use your talents elsewhere because that doesn't look good.
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>>127942923
550 bucks is nice, but I'm not sure I could stomach writing 5 hours of fanservice a day for the rest of the week
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>>127942923
I'd do it if I wasn't doing commissions yet. Fanservice is fun, no actual sex is even better.
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>>127986472
>Best to use your talents elsewhere because that doesn't look good.
I think that's more a result of them attempting to match the original artwork which, in my opinion, also doesn't look good.
>I think it's a dynamic pose
While the sprite leaning back may have that dynamic element to it, it also looks awkward, uncomfortable, and like she's about to fall over.
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> https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/cccn/quantum-suicide-friendship-courtship-hardship-spac/posts/1462164

Think they'll do better this time around? Though their plans to focus on the japanese translation and the vita are worrying. Even sekai cant get JVN titles on vita after years of trying.

It's good that they are fixing the demo.
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I'll laugh super hard if people find any waifus in my story.
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I just started playing Loren the amazon princess. Is it worth reading? vndb says that it's all ages so I dunno ;_;
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>>127989531
what's your story? I can make a waifu out of anything
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>>127972298

That site looks like shit, but most storefronts take a cut (that's less than Steam's take). Not sure what you're expecting.
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>>127991706
You're comparing some opportunistic vulture to one of the largest online portals for games? Are you just looking to argue?
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>>127992309

No? That particular site looks like a fucking joke, but all platforms are going to ask for a cut "for nothing"
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>>127944000
Post it the same day it launches, so people have some info to go on.
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>>127971564
I can't remember. It was free though.

Now that I think about it, it was probably Sugar's Delight.
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It seems new visual novels are popping up on Steam daily now, even though not all of them are good.

Here's the newest addition.
http://store.steampowered.com/app/429300/
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>>127996326

> visual novels are the new 8bit retro trash
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>>127996326
>A visual novel about a memory that a boy named Mark tries very hard to forget, and a girl named Myra who unearths it.
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>>127996326
>mixed reviews on a F2P

That's sad. It's also sad this evn trash is being exposed to a lot of people, rather than something more competent.
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>>127980430
left is cute, right is terrifying
also the pose on the right is stiffer and more boring
bringing the values down a notch was a good idea though
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>>127997067
By the time HRP comes out, the visual novel medium might have already lost its chance at going mainstream.

Remember, the world doesn't need to see your poorly cobbled together game jam project. Steam should be for professional VNs.
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>>127996890
Amnesia/repressed memory vns are becoming too common imo.
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>>127997067
Most of the negative reviews are jokes, but one some of the positive reviews don't list things that are positives to me.
-Praise use of photo real backgrounds
-Think self insert protagonist is a good thing
-Illusion of choice
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>>128007209
>-Think self insert protagonist is a good thing
It's not a bad thing.
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>>128010918
In a dating sim it's fine, but it gets old when every single protag is a blank slate or a Mary Sue/Gary Stu.
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>>127942923

My main issue is that I would have to really handicap myself to write in a style that matches the original author. I don't know whether it's because of the authors skill or because he is writing for the medium, but nearly all sentences are very simple sentences, there is no good figurative language, etc.

It also looks like this project has been delayed a lot and is not really keeping faith with the KS funders.
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>>128015487
>It also looks like this project has been delayed a lot and is not really keeping faith with the KS funders.
This is why it's important to commission the right people. The new writer will be in a bind because of this.
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If 3 out of the 10 girls in my story are lolis, is that past the threshold of ruining the mass appeal?
1 is acceptable standard token loli levels, and 2 is still pretty common if they come in a pair, but I feel like 3 is pushing into "only pedos are gonna play this vn" territory
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>>127729658

Either axe her or leave her unvoiced.

She is not as important as you think she is and most people do not give a fuck about your singing voice. If you're writing a singing-centric VN than you are an idiot for doing that unvoiced.

If you aren't, she is not essential. Cut. Chop. Remove. Or wait, give her some other talent that is not singing. It's not functionally all that unique.

How about piano, painting, writing-- anything but singing?
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>>128015950
As long as you have the busty bimbos and more average body types, then you should be okay.
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>>128015487
I'm glad I'm not the only person who thought this
I didn't want to post it because it's the kind of thing you can't say without coming off as an asshole, but I felt the same way

playing through the demo, the writing isn't bad, it's just really plain and the characters tend to speak impersonally or in cocky ways, it's something I would feel really uncomfortable trying to emulate as much as I would like to apply
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>>128016678
We're all anon here. You don't have to worry about saying what you really think.

Here let me exemplify. I'm sick of people using the VN medium for garbage cash grab games and My First VN charging money. Also, people acting like shitty games are good because of "muh diversity" are cancer. Don't whine about nobody buying your episodic VN until it's done.

It felt good to get all of that out.
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>>128016230
I hope so, I'm worried about trying to balance the main story that I want to have general appeal and the waifus that have a less than general appeal
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>>128019495

Currently I think you have a few too many girls. Is 10 really necessary? Don't you think the scope has expanded a bit too far? I think that unless I was writing a 50hr+ franchise I would not try to include that many girls. In a small amount of time it will add clutter rather than variety.
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>>128020617
they're not all routes, only 6 are
that said, I already have shrunken my scope on this project, is that really that big? I can't really judge reading time, but I have maybe a good 50 pages worth of story outlined per route girl and I feel the story is sufficiently long enough for them all to get time
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>>128021670
>50 page outline per girl
>is that really that big?
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>>128021670
Anon, you aren't Nasu. No one is going to spend 100+ hours romancing your waifus.
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>>128022226
>is that really that big?
I was talking about the scope
that amount feels like a fairly tight scope delineated between 6 routes and a common route

>>128022494
>100+ hours
do you realize how short 50 pages of dialogue is in a VN setting? it's like 2-3 hours at best
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>>127989972
"all ages" is a stupid term, especially since loren is very obviously not. along with the violence there's some softcore sex, a couple of nipples, and a lot of fanservice. NONE of which has ANYTHING to do with the question of 'is it worth reading'
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>>128015950
All but one of the routes in my game are lolis, but it's yuri so it's okay!
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>>128022747
Well shit. No I did not.
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>>128023226
Unless they are 9 year olds, apparently.
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>>128024451
12-14's fine though.
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>>128022747
Who even knows what a pagecount is? What are pages? Text continues endlessly! Why are you printing out your outline?
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>>128027679
wordcount is better
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I've been doing a bit of writing for a science fiction story that can be expediently described as War of the Worlds meets Starship Troopers, and it occurred to me that there are a lot of visual elements that might be enhanced by the VN experience, even though such a final product would essentially be an illustrated book rather than have the routes and gameplay of the normal VN.

I'll pastebin a writing sample of a scene which I think would be enhanced by the visual and audio effects of the VN, the drop of the power armored soldiers, if anyone is interested.
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>>128033526
>even though such a final product would essentially be an illustrated book rather than have the routes and gameplay of the normal VN.

soo... a kinetic novel?
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>>128033625
I suppose so; I'm not super-familiar with the terminology
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>>128033887
Are you planning to put your kinetic novel on Steam?
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>>128034076
I haven't thought that far ahead, though monetizing this project would certainly not be unwelcome.

This began as a seed of an idea a few months ago to write a novel. However, since recently I've started writing, I've noticed that I've been lavishing description on the Martian landscape and things of that nature.
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Bump. Please don't die yet.
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>>128036732
It's my party and I'll die if I want to.
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Anyone buy any music lately? If so I'd love to hear some!
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Are the majority of people in this thread writers or artists or readers? What are your roles on your team?
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>>128039841
writing, management
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>>128039841
I'm a reader.
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>>127959302
Physique:
>at least one guy with longer hair
>black hair+dark skin+luminescent blue eyes
>body types should be different but not too bara
>one shota (or at least 5yrs younger than protag)

Personality:
>shota a do-S
>a childhood best friend type
>a big bro type
>but not too stereotypical
>no shy MC, but not the bitter cynical type either, just sth normal (like Lucky Rabbit Reflex or East Tower)


Events:
>wall slamming
>sex (doesn't have to be super graphic, but not fade to black)
>some mystery
>seduction and slow burn
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as an existent company and longtime weeb, i'm going to be extending business to compete with Sekai Project soon

not here to name the business and shill, just wanted to let everyone know that the fat asian guy over at SP isn't gonna be running everything in the west forever
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>>128041168
>shota a do-S
You are the reason we can't have nice things.
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>>128042312
Praise be to our new overlord.
I need someone to shill for me but I hate SP.
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>>127959302

A long-haired fashionable type who is flirtatious and popular but has an 'unusual' interest that he shares with the MC, so he's not just hooking up with her over his fanclub because of her natural innocent appeal because fuck that.

A dark-haired, sharp featured guy in glasses who is very intelligent and a bit socially withdrawn, too focused on his ruthless business endeavors to know how to people, who tries to intimidate the MC and is very confused when it doesn't work out as he expected

A punk loner with a bad reputation because of his troubled family history, but it isn't really his fault and he's a sweetheart once you get past his defenses, but you get drawn into a huge mess of drama because of people related to him

a leading man with a Cause and a thirst for justice, who is fearless about pursuing his dangerous goals, but completely clueless and flustered in the face of romance. you join his crusade because of some specialist skill of yours (NOT just your Pure Innocent Heart) and he gets all confused between his need for your help and his chivalry

No shotas.
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>>128042393
Always happy to be of service. :^)
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>>128042312
>running everything
Already isn't.

You're only boosting their power by pretending that they are.
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>>128042835
>all of this
Seconded.
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>>128042835
>No shotas.
Okay well now you're even worse than >>128043069
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>>128043521
I don't actually care if one exists as long as there's something for me, but they're really not my taste. 16 to her 18, fine, but I don't see why I should be dating a 12 year old boy, I have enough trouble with awkward 12 year old boys randomly hitting on me online anyway.
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There have been 6 games tagged visual novel that have launched on Steam so far this year, how many do you think there will be by the end of the month?
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>>128044721
Probably around 50, with only 10 or so being worth it.
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>>128045136
>only 10 or so being worth it
You're way more optimistic than I am. I'm thinking that 2-3 max will be any good.
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>>128039841
I do everything
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>>128043896
You can't equate it to real life. It's more a body type than anything. Even the most childish lolis and shotas are still far from realistic.
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>>128046205
You might want to shop in a declining chart.
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>>128047031
Oddly, that's how I feel about loli characters (when not in games that are obviously designed to appeal to pedos) but it doesn't always apply to shotas in my head.

There's an LP going on of a game with a 700 year old loli in it and most of the forum is freaking out about how 'creepy' that is and I just don't see the issue. She's not a kid, she's just small.

However, dating Peter Pan as an immortal shota feels weird to me. I suppose I could handle a shota devil though.
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>>128047495
SA, right?
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>>128047074

> the joke

> your head
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>>128015487
Not keeping faith? He's admitted every problem and did everything possible to fix them. What do you think he should have done?
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>>128042683
we've setup an anonymous email if you (or anyone else) needs a publisher and doesn't want SP
[email protected]
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>>128049052
You're hilarious.
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>>128049052
Are you offering any money, or are you just trying to suck off other people's hard work?

There are other publishers than SP already in existence. And you don't NEED a publisher. Surely if nothing else the flood of games coming out on Steam now demonstrates that.
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>>128039841
Music, occasionally writing.
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>>128049447
Steam keeps getting flooded with crappy vns, so Steam decides to ban vns.
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>>128050048
Steam is flooded with all kinds of crappy shit in the past year, their response is to try and improve automated sorting and discovery. You don't want me to show off other kinds of terrible games flooding in lately.
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>>128050356
Only 3 games tagged RPGMaker have come out so far in 2016!
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>>128050356
There's the rather vocal portion of Steam's userbase that doesn't think that vns are games, and don't want them on Steam. Plus, there's the issue of adult content that comes with vns. Steam could make it easier on themselves just to ban vns. It's not like most vns sell more than 10k copies nowadays anyway.
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>>128050551
There is literally nothing wrong with RPGMaker and other game maker games.
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>>128050696
>If they're free
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>>128050618
There's a huge vocal portion of Steam that doesn't think Gone Home and Dear Esther and their ilk aren't games and they don't give a shit.
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>>128050696
There is literally nothing wrong with visual novels either, but many people are freaked out by a large number of them being released on Steam, I'm just drawing the comparison.
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>>128050821
If they're good there's no problem with them being commercial either.
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>>128050893
Those games don't have lolis bathing with "onii-chan".
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>>128050618
There's a lot of Steam's userbase that would like to ban all indie games, and/or anything that isn't 3d, from cluttering up their precious Steam. And then there's people's opinions on movies being sold on Steam... They whine, Valve ignores them.
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>>128051082
They're reusing assets. It's considered a cash grab.
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>>128051105
Hence why they are shit.
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>>128051423
>They're reusing assets.
Not always.
>It's considered a cash grab.
Not really. I've never seen anyone say LISA is a cash grab.
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>>128051771
Do you consider Pregnancy and Depression Quest visual novels?
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>>128039841
I do just about everything except compose music and do backgrounds.
Though as they say, I'm a practitioner of all but a master of none. I'm a hack artist, a hack writer, a hack programmer, and a hack UI designer.
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>>128051423
On the other hand a lot of indie RPG maker games have far, far longer gameplay than anything we put out. If they're a little bit cheap on the art end but put all their time into the story and gameplay, I don't have a problem with them charging for it.

Charging for a short game with stock assets is a bit of a tacky cash grab, yes.
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I want someone to make a new thread and I am too shy to make it myself, please someone do this because I live in fear that everyone will tell me my OP is shit.
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>>128052987
Today's the day you overcome your fear.
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>>128052987
I'll do it once we hit page 10.

It will be "Steam is Being Flooded Edition".
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>>128039841

I just like to entertain the idea of making things but have no follow-through.
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