hey /v/, I just concepted this LoL champ a while back and was wondering what you think of it?
League forums are.. pretty bad at feedback so I came here out of desperation
Anon, after I read the description for this character, I had to really calm down so as not to offend you. I'm going to try and say this politely.
Your idea is unoriginal, anime trash, and almost a novelty grab bag of stuff. Little girl, ghost, bad past, all sorts of power, grim dark edgy as shit
This is the creative equivalent of unflavoured wheat paste.
I don't know who those characters are, but basically if you brought a character like this out in front of serious tabletop RPG fans they'd laugh you out of the room. Be honest, are you 14 OP?
acrually it's pretty not copied off any other character
I'm from the west and it's not even in the style of anime
>novelty grab bag
which things are you talking about
Name another ghost? there isnt any
whats wrong with that
uncalled for, she's suffered
want to elaborate me as to what is actually wrong with my champion or are you just going to complain that she's female
No I'm saying the idea is really shit. Young sacrificed girl becomes revenge ghost is a trope by now. I don't care about LoL so abandon that idea, your concept is crap it doesn't matter how it interfaces with the game.
I'll start again. Sacrificed child becomes vengeance ghost - done to death
Benevolent weird guy keeps her in ethereal life - basically a manga romance.
Father is established character - let me just ram my fan fiction into established canon
I've honestly seen this character a dozen times in ye olde weeaboo fan forums, this is a 14 year olds idea of tortured.