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I feel sorry for the anon who's been trying to design a game character for over 2 years and still hasn't finalized her clothing. Let's design his character for him so we can finally put this matter to rest.

Here are the bullet-points we need to hit:

1. The character is an outcast otaku NEET girl who obtains superpowers and starts fighting crime.

2. The character loves dark and edgy shit, so she dresses up like she's imitating her favorite grim-dark edge-lord anti-heroes.

3. The game is supposed to have a No More Heroes vibe / attitude.

4. Her weapon is a sci-fi scythe that can transform and change its shape. Apparently, this is non-negotiable, so leave if you can't stand scythes.

Ideaguys welcome, drawfriends even more welcome.
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5. She needs to have a very unhealthy weight, making the issue of what her gender is moot.

6. She needs to have ideas for video games but zero knowledge and ambition for programming, networking, and fund raising.

7. Call it Depression Quest 2
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>>276277583
here
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>>276278256
She should be black
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Come on, guys, I know we can do this.
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The concept and design is cringeworthy
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>>276277583

Definitely give her costume a mask, even if it doesn't cover the whole face.
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>implying the design matters when his gameplay ideas are generic as shit
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>>276278572

>generic is synonymous for bad now
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>>276277583
> I'm totally not this guy who has the worst taste on the planet let's help him guys
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>>276278667
It is when we have enough generic to fill an ocean.
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How original.
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>>276277583

And you think /v/'s edgelords can design a good character????
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>>276277583
I'm going to be straight with you op, all I'm seeing and hearing here is shit. Dev anon needs to get less terrible taste.

We know it's you faggot
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What was the name of this again? The title was almost as stupid as the character.
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>>276279017
>edglord
>????
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>>276277583
no need to thank me
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>>276278389
I like this one a lot, aside from the scythe. I think it should look more bulky.
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Unrelated to OP but I'm making a space rpg that will play sorta like NIER, trying to figure out some alien races, so far have three eye humanoid one, faceless octopus things that use masks as faces, four armed reptilian race, and one turtle like one, any other ideas?
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>>276280552
continue ripping off Star control 2
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>>276278389

I just wasted my time redesigning that shit. Tried to be faithful to the game dev's punk idea.
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>NEET
>everyone designs a punk chick
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>>276277583
What are her powers?
It's not just "having a scythe", right?
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>>276278256
Hair needs rainbow highlights. And about 20 spiderbites. And scars just barely visible under the thigh-highs.
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>>276280810
never actually seen anything star control related but will look at it and change shit so i'm not making some huge ripoff accidentally
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>>276278139
>Little red riding hood helps her father out on the farm

Not saying it looks bad, it's very good, but its just that I'm imagining red gutting the wolf, not the woodsman if you know what I mean.
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>>276281654
that's actually a character from some rooster teeth series
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>>276281485
It's ok Mass Effect is literally a Star Control 2 ripoff as well and it did fine
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>>276281485
dude, a fellow designer here! it's really easy to make something that has been made in today's world. sometimes i design a character or a name and later realize it's already been done and my work would look like a ripoff. and sometimes the subliminal mind copies ideas without you knowing. happens a lot. i wish it was the 20's so I could pioneer fucking everything...
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>>276281485
Good luck coming up with a race that hasn't been done before in the sea of space fiction.
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>>276281485
no, don't make the mistake Mass Effect made. They only ripped off about half of Star Control 2 and all the stuff they didn't rip off was garbage

you need to go whole hog and rip off the whole thing
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>>276281178

Game dev with poor taste in character design here.

Her powers are typical "hack and slash game protagonist" powers. The ability to survive gunshots, the ability to double-jump, becoming invincible for a moment when dodge-rolling, etc.
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>The character is an outcast otaku NEET girl
I don't know who the dev is trying to fool. Just say it's punk girl being wacky.
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She needs sharper shoes.
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>>276281896
how did she get her powers? have you actually studied story and character design? they teach this stuff even in the "make your own super hero" articles. Your game currently is going to be marked 'shallow' because all you seem to go for is aesthetic. So as a helpful advice make your character have an actual back story and think about what kind of personality she has. This is important because that determines how her alter ego is going to dress as well. would a character like tomoko from watamote dress in lingerie if she had super powers? would a neckbeard go shirtless if he got a magical sword? (maybe) make your character have an actual personality. make her real. So that this isnt completely bashful, your game engine looked great, what I saw in the other thread. Your animation needs work too though. Looked pretty clunky.
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Reposting best scythe girl
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>>276282549
Game dev with poor taste should copy this? Why post it? That character design is certainly good, but she looks more like a goddess of death than a neet teenage girl turned superhuman.
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>>276277583
>removing the mech

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>>276278139
I was wondering when someone would post this.
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>>276282379

I've written dozens of paragraphs about her backstory / personality. I just don't post about it in the threads, because the threads are about her appearance.

She dresses the way she does because she's trying to imitate her favorite game protagonists, and you know how female game characters dress.

The animations in the January demo were just temporary placeholders.
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>>276283081
>I've written dozens of paragraphs about her backstory / personality
Sure.
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>this thread again
she doesn't look NEET
she doesn't look grim-dark edge-lord anti-hero
she looks like something out of scott pilgrim or sunset overdrive
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>>276283124

What do you want me to do, post it and spoil all of my game's plot twists?
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>>276283283
>and spoil all of my game's plot twists
Are they as predictable and generic as your designs?
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>>276283271

I love the aesthetics of Scott Pilgrim and sunset overdrive. Although I'm going for more NMH.
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OP

I TOLD YOU

FUCKING STOP
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>>276283283
>implying the twists are good
>implying you'll ever finish this
just stop, dude
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>>276283373

I wish I could meet you in real life and find out how you speak to people in person.
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>>276283081
Yeah, I get the animations were not final.

Sorry, I did not get this aspect of her in the previous thread. So she is influenced by a typical game female character... You should make it look like it then. Also, stop those cool kid poses even in the art. She should be enjoying every moment of her powertrip, not posing around. Think about Tomoko who is very much influenced by games. Im sorry if you dont know the anime/manga. Make your character partly fail in imitating a game female hero. Add more comedy. It might work then.
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>>276283492
And I wish I could meet you in real life to see if your writing is as bad as your character designing.
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>>276282549
>No posting actual best scythe girl
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>>276277583
She needs a mech.
You can't have a power armor without a mech.
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>>276283283
Telling your fucking CHARACTER DESIGNERS(everyone on /v/) the character's backstory is critical. How about asking how your sister should dress? Without telling anything about what kind of person she is. And you having or not having a sister doesnt matter.
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>>276283271
>she doesn't look NEET
Is there any art of her regular form? I agree that the OP does a poor job of showing that.
>she doesn't look grim-dark edge-lord anti-hero
Yeah, it's more grungey/punky than chuuni.
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>>276283723
>Himecut
I'd fuck her soooo hard
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>>276283723
Ha ha, I really like this design, mind if I save it?
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>>276283723
yeah because a goth lolita is so original. look at all that character she has. also, what's with the awkward pose?
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>>276284065
stop shitposting, dev.
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>>276283835

The characters in that anime are chuunis who have grim-dark edge-lord anti-heroes, but they look like normal people when they're not going full autist.
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>>276284101
i'd take it over op's "old-man idea of punk" girl with highlights personally
you know a character is flawed on a fundamental level when the creator's inspiration for her design is imitating generic female designs from videogames
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>>276284217
>top row
>resembling a NEET anything
That's just "punk girl"
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