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Here's a dropbox with a LOT of CYOA's:
Here's Beri's OC (genie cyoa+)
Slut Life Anon's Folder
Here's Liminal Phrenic's blog with most of his cyoa stuff theouterworlds.blogspot.com
Here's Spadesy's wordpress with most of his cyoa stuff feathersnake.wordpress.com
List of Some Image Resources:
I'm getting paranoid about the CYOA I'm working on. In pic related is 2/8? pairs of characters done so far. If my boxes for future characters are placed vertically beneath each one, would it be annoying to the eyes seeing the same color scheme for the box and fonts over and over again?
colors look fine to me, though I think in Rei's box a few of the lines in the left-hand column get too close to the right hand column
generally however, I prefer the font color to be whatever is most readable, usually black or white.
Quick fan edit of cyoa posted in last thread.
To author - hope you don't mind. Love the writing but the pictures weren't doing it for me (and probably others as well).
Looking forward to page 2.
Alright, thanks. I can finally continue on it without changing the colors every few minutes to see if they fit.
Well shit, I want to include a reference to him now but whether that happens or not would be decided after the whole CYOA is done. I just can't create names, renaming a character already with a name seems weird but using their actual names may break their character at the same time
and here's the original for people who aren't dinguses.
You should alternate between two colors for the boxes
It breaks it up into conceptual chunks so it doesn't feel like
>wall of text
and at least for me eases eye strain.
Also makes the thumbnail image more recognizable.
But this is just perfectionism talking, it looks fine as is.
It makes sense that they would send the best pictures of themselves, not some blood soaked picture of themselves in rags.
The only old picture that I prefer is Wilhelmina's
Here's a small update, maybe should have waited at least 24 hours before a fan edit but it's nice to see someone cares enough to put the work in.
I obviously still prefer my ridiculous vampireboob pin-up version.
Some of it is also written around the pictures, found the art before I knew where I was going with each girl so there's some references to stuff in picture (Libbie's Vlad tattoo, Lilibeth's sexy nurse comments, etc.) that don't make a great deal of sense with different pictures. Also think tonally the whole thing is pretty frivolous so you might as well have tasteless erotic goosebumps style art.
Hey Anon, little question.
You still have the picture for the "multiplayer" option?
It won't go unrewarded! Post it with any one request for a picture you want to see out of a fantasy environment and I'll do my best to grab the closest thing from my folder or the web. (Oh, and no porn. Have some'a that, but rules are rules.)
I saved it when it was first posted! It's younger than, for example, the nine gods CYOA.
I mean that it appeals to a different mindset as far as the itch that it scratches.
No fidly number crunching, managing multiple currency types, puzzlelike mechanics, overly complicated world building, long descriptions, detailed customization, pages of companions, multi-layer graphic design, attempts to get people to writefag, or RP, or just appealing to the sexual fetishes.
It doesn't have to worry about the inherent pitfalls of all that because it predates all of those approaches.
anyone got others like this? yes ive seen the myroid one
literally all I had to do was snip the picture, save it and reverse image search. You could've done it faster than you could've posted a reply.
I'd like a vampire that doesn't have massive tits, that isn't a loli and is wearing a nice dress. Bonus points if she doesn't look like she hates life.
Nope. Look at the description of Multiplayer.
Shit simply gets weird when you mix together everything.
>Advancement for sure
>Love maybe, not sure how I feel about new people being created just for this
>Beauty maybe, really want to pick this one for everybody but the last part makes me nervous
>Urban Fantasy probably, might do more good than harm
I don't think immortality would be a good thing for everyone, especially people who don't want it. Magic adventure isn't a nice thing to force on everybody either, even if they are tricked into thinking it was always this way.
Affects Only Me
Cybernetic Augmentation. Going for a lot of upgrades.
And I guess I will grab a projector screen for the last silly point.
Life will be great, bud. Those intelligence services would probably be happy for someone like me.
I guess I mostly focused on what its not, let me elaborate on what I like about it.
Yes, that is a very apt description of it.
By making you answer which of the options you would choose it also lets you know something about yourself by making you realize why you prefer a particular option.
For me it also fills the niche of what I call "falling asleep CYOAs".
You can read it over once, and there aren't so many options that you can't keep them all straight in your head. So I like thinking about a choice game like that as I am dozing off.
I'm not trying to make it sound like a perfect choice game, but there are things that we could all learn from it. Yes it's wish fulfillment but in a way that is close enough to your current life for you to be able to imagine it clearly. Also it defines the powers you get by the limits of those abilities, a very good approach.
I also like how it uses a single after effect to make the images seem like they fit together conceptually.
If there is one thing I could change about it it's to make it from a choose one into a choose up to two CYOA. It's a very simple change that nevertheless significantly increases the number of possible builds.
Its biggest downside, that I think is unavoidable in this case, is that this really isn't well suited to posting builds and discussing other's choices.
But really, we don't actually do that anyway, right?
Immortality, malalhim, mirror mirror, protagonist
Love, beauty, advancement, magic adventure
I won't lie to you all. My first thought was ordering the guardian angel to do lewd things with me.
Wow someone thinks of themselves as some kind of connoisseur and a critic.
I couldn't help but imagine you sipping tea and speaking in a British accent.
Do you also write long Yelp reviews?
I can finally go on to remake some my other cyoas with this done.
If you have any suggestions for things to add to this cyoa I'm all ears.
Final page. Just have fun mates.
...yeah. I'm. I'm kinda with >>44728968, sort of? On the one hand, they do look more, well, waifuable. I particularly like Libbie and Tertia's edits, since they seem like ones that would particarly break the norm of hwat vampires would look like.
On the other hand, for all my faults with the art style it is a VAMPIRE waifu CYOA so Drusa, Astrid and Wilhelmina's old versions seem more spot-on.
Otherwise...ideally I'd like New!Drusa's pic to represent Tertia; the art style does do the "ethereal waif" thing better for me since Tertia doesn't seem like the sort to take blood like wine.I do like New!Tertia's pic though; I just think that serious expression suits Lilibeth's slot more. On the other hand New!Magdalena just doesn't look anything like a savage proto-Yugoslavian and as much as I like New!Wilhelmina's pic, it just seems more appropriate to a separate and hypothetical Witch Waifu CYOA. New!Astrid and New!Vanessa just seem too un-vampiric though.
I'm pretty conflicted on Vanessa, mainly because the new pic triggers nice memories of Let the Right One In. Probably best to go with the old pic, though
The "____ only" for who their mother is implies that there would be daughters that could be the result of unions with multiple possible partners. No such daughters exist. I'd suggest you get rid of the word "only" and just leave the mother's name.
Flare is still counts as a skill.
There was daughters that could've came from the result of unions with multiple partners, had to cut back a lot in the cyoa. I should've removed the only though.
>5 pages of text
Also, you seriously gotta stop that shit with the player having to add up accumulative points. It was much worse in that "make your army of little girls", but still.
And clear up skills. Does sword master + one man army count as two, or one, skill? 'Cause I'm assuming phoenix + beast companion counts as one, same with diplomat+natural leader
Under Hagia, personally, I'd remove the "having sex" bit. Just feels out of place.
You say Praper rarely smiles, then it has a picture of her smiling.
Daughters can have more skills than you. How come?
>Beast companion: Phoenix 480
>Earth magic 475
>Lance master 470
>One man army 460
>Diplomat - natural leader 445 (8 companions)
I gotta say, can't put my finer on why, but none really appeal to me.
>Forests & plains 385
>Upper housing 350
>Trade hub 340
>Eternally fertile 320
Like 320 points worth of Knights and Paladins
So... what's up? is the New World trying to kill the Old? The other way around?
And why do I have so many points?
I agree. The art on the other one makes you think you're gonna get some dark, broody Gothic CYOA rather than the light hearted and tongue in cheek waifuquest you do in the original. Is better, looking forward to page 2 as well
For scientific purposes, where do vampire F cup pinup pics come from?
That's really nice, I already have a build planned out, but there's some point where you don't know if what you are picking is free or not.
In skills, I assume you have to pay for the 5 first skills, and add+10 each if you want more
Do you have to also pay for the daughter's skills ?
In Kingdom benefits, are the first 2 benefit free, or does it work like skills ? "Anymore will be 15 build points", does this mean you have to add+15 to the build point, or the build point becomes 15 ?
>Daughters can have more skills than you?
Those this need a valid response?
>Clear up skills
That is my bad. I seriously should've added everything below counts as a skill to it/cleared things up.
>Also, you seriously gotta stop that shit with the player having to add up accumulative points.
Everyone is entitled to do a cyoa the way they want mate.
>In skills, I assume you have to pay for the 5 first skills, and add+10 each if you want more.
>Do you have to pay for your daughter's skills?
You don't have to pay for them. Just pick them.
>In Kingdom benefits, are the first 2 benefit free, or does it work like skills ? "Anymore will be 15 build points", does this mean you have to add+15 to the build point, or the build point becomes 15 ?
First 2 benefits are free.
I'll just assume I can figure out the important stuff as I go and start with the basics. You need to work on your English, though. Proofread this shit.
Forgotten Spellbook (500 pts remaining)
Fire Magic (495)
Water Magic (490)
Earth Magic (485)
Wind Magic (480)
Light Magic (475)
Dark Magic (460)
Ultimate Speed (430)
Top Peak (415)
Greater Heal (365)
Forest Creation (340)
Darkness Teleport (325)
Summon Undead (305)
Lich Creation (270)
Life Absorb (245)
Mana Absorb (225)
Divine Strikes (195)
Floating Isles (115)
Mineral Bound (55)
Mana Overflow (45)
Elemental Knights (10)
One Man Army
>Those this need a valid response?
>Everyone is entitled to do a cyoa the way they want mate.
Sure. Having to count the cost when a fallen paladin costs a paladin who costs two knights who cost six squires who cost twelve commoners, is ridiculous.
Legendary Weapon: Diablo
Skills: (250 BP) Immortal, (5 BP) Sword Master, (5BP) Heal, (25BP) Greater Heal.
Companions: Harken, Serios, Hama, Pledge
Size: Imperial Space (100BP)
Land Type: Plain
Home: Cottage (Free)
Benefits: Mana Overflow, Eternally Fertile
Forces: Dragons (50BP), Paladins (25BP), Death Knights (25 BP), Knights (10BP), Wyverns (10BP), Soldiers (5BP),
These are pretty much the same choices I'd take. My idea being that advancement should cancel out the loss of tech from magic adventure while still allowing magic to be prolific.
Fire Magic - 5
Water Magic - 10
Earth Magic - 15
Wind Magic - 20
Light Magic - 25
Fire Magic : Combustion - 50
Water Magic : Freezing - 70
Water Magic : Pure Water - 85
Light Magic : Divine Strikes - 115
Spellbook Master - 130
One Man Army - 150
Spouse : Hagia
Daughter : Praper
Dark Magic : Summon Undead
Dark Magic : Lich Creation
Companion : Vega
Companion : Hama
Companion : Serios
Kingdom : County - 170
Plain - 180
Home: Imperial - 230
Kingdom Benefit : Mana Overflow
Kingdom Benefit : Trade Hube
Kingdom Benefit : Eternally Fertile - 245
Kingdom Benefit : Great Walls - 260
Kingdom Benefit : Tournament - 275
Cleric - 280
Archer - 285
Witchs - 290
Wizards - 300
Squire - 302
Knights - 312
Elementals - 322
Assassins - 337
Paladins - 362
Skeletons - 364
Core build is finished, I'll add
Holy Lance - 414
Lance Master - 429
Infinite Weapon - 459
Light Magic : Holy Enchantment - 484
Diplomat - 499
Kingdom of the Magic Light King
Divided in two plane, the Imperial floating island hold the magic court and the Imperial family,
The lower plainland is a hub of trading, dealing in various magic item as a result of the Tournament, the grand battle royale held to recruit magician and fighters for the kingdom
Not interested in invasion, however the defenses are composed of shitton of magical missiles and summoned fodders
Is there a post some where with all the meta bullshit explained? I was there when this CYOA came out, but had to leave half way through the disecting due to uni reasons and I'm still kind of interested.
Fist of god
Top Peak (495)
God strength (445)
Fist master (440)
Wind Magic (435)
Ultimate Speed (415)
Greater heal (365)
Fire magic (90)
Hagia, Praper (Light magic, Holy enchantment, Earth magic, Forest creation, Dark magic, Darkness teleport, Beast companion, Sky whale)
Companions (3 left)
Villian and Lacine
Mana Overflow (45)
Death knights (20)
Plan of action:
Get Villian and Lacine into shape
Though 500 points might make us too strong for the new world,
As a side note I don't know why Fist Master can't lead into One Man Army.
Yeah, hence why I said bullshit
I'm still kind of interested to see how the weave unraveled, but "Ah, you figured out my master plan! But have you gotten this part yet!" Grew old in about three posts.
I has the most best defended kingdom in the whole land
legendary weapon life bow
skills thief, heal, elemental summon, second element, beast companion, pack, fire magic, flare, water magic, pure water, earth magic, crafting earth, wind magic, light magic, light source, dark magic, darkness teleportation, sword master, lance master, fist master, shield master, bow master, spellbook master,'top perk, mounted, diplomat, copy cat, elemental protectors, goblin, smoke screen, freezing, pressure, illusions, mana absorb, summon undead, one man army, airborne mount, natural leader, seduction, shadow sneak, ghost, chimera, pheinix, combustion, forest creation and tornado
kingdom city state
land desert and under sea
forces goblins, squires, mercenaries, skeleton, adventures, soldiers, clerics, archer, knights and monks kingdom benefits great walls, trade hub, great temples, tournament, eternaly fertle, mineral bound, mana overflow and colony
spouses carrot and hagia (allee)
daughters praper and tulia
companions harken and villian & lacine
Well keep in mind it's possible to be very smart but also incredibly stupid.
And speaking of incredibly stupid how would a Traveller text game work? Would they have to do that shit like Corruption of Champions, albeit much more complicated. I've been thinking about that as a concept and I think it's actually the ideal setting for it as a work rather then cyoa.
Like any identity survives during a CYOA. I just assume every time you post a build that character is born as another version of you in an alternate universe, doomed to live the choices you made for them.
Stardust's suffered from being posted and updates too many times, so I just wasn't that excited any more. I really enjoyed the Archdemon CYOA, however, and there have been a couple of other good ones recently.
Yes it did, that's why I feel the way I do. If you're going to put hints into a cyoa then either explain them at the very end or on a supplement page. People won't get the "full" experience out of your cyoa if they don't know where you're taking your inspiration from in these cases.
But it's not necessary for every reader to have the 'full experience'. Easter eggs and secrets are a mainstay of modern entertainment, even if a lot of the time they are done poorly.
I can't actually blame the maker on this one. He essentially created a meth cow, when he realized his creation style was Chucky cheese horrifying rather than cutesy like he was shooting for initially. If you've got a cow that makes meth your going to keep using that shit as long as people are paying for that sweet crystal.
Personally I think we need a personal forum or a blog or something. The weird shift between dull stagnancy to cyoa's getting so popular they need to be proxy threaded has always been a bit strange.
Everything, anon. I made everything.
No seriously, what could I possibly gain from answering that question?
I can only handle for many "why doesn't this have waifus/immortality/little girl option" and other fuckwits
SDA posting is always cool.
Why be evasive about this? There would be zero long-term consequences of saying a CYOA you made. Unless you're worried about wounding your pride on 4chan or something, which is pretty dumb. If you'd said nothing and not replied I might have thought you weren't being a tool, but you went and specifically showed us that you are.
Waifus in CYOAs are not an issue, and the meme has been around for years.
because fuck you that's why.
I'm not going to invite more twats to shit over what I make.
oh noes, you think im a tool. oh noes, what will I ever do oh no wait im anonymous.
If the objective is pleasure, Master is the best option for me. Besides the ability to have sex with a copy of anyone at any age, I can make porn and run a high profile brothel for extra lust points. Now to stock up on a lot of bullets so I can headshot myself into a new me whenever I want. (Might want to invest in acid and a plastic tub in case the former bodies cannot be destroyed or absorbed with the power)
Had a bad experience? Most CYOA makers have. A lot give up after their first effort is met tepidly, because you've put a lot of time into something and it doesn't get as popular as you were expecting. But, you have to stop worrying about whether it will be popular, and just make CYOAs that are fun for you.
Hmm nothing really socialist realist style that I can think of offhand, though there are probably a few decent artists who do that style on DA.
Never heard gommie as an art term. Can you explain please?
As to some nice sexy women pinup style artists.
Flick the Thief http://flick-the-thief.deviantart.com/ (Cartoony)
Papaninja http://papaninja.deviantart.com/ (more stylized realism)
Balsamique http://balsamique.deviantart.com/ (massive boobs on da & very explicit stuff on hentaifoundry)
Elias Chatzoudis http://elias-chatzoudis.deviantart.com/ (catoony pinups)
simon bisley (grungy pinups like fakk chick - great stuff) Do a google search for sites with his art.
Alex Pascenko http://alexpascenko.deviantart.com/ (legend of cryptids style art)
Systembleed http://systembleed.deviantart.com/ (2d/3d mesh of art)
Ed van der Linden http://edvanderlinden.deviantart.com/ (cartoony pinups & charactures)
RedreeveGeorge http://redreevgeorge.deviantart.com/ (nice and some busty gals)
Yuni http://yuni.deviantart.com/ (does a lot of prettyboy contortionist art but her girls are amazing)
Daniel Vendrell Oduber http://vandrell.deviantart.com/ (amazing art some busty gals)
the late Pat Carlucci http://patcarlucci.deviantart.com/ (cartoonesque style but good stuff)
Eudia Chae http://serenity2200.deviantart.com/ (cryptid style gorgeous art)
http://anotherwanderer.deviantart.com/ (cryptid style gorgeous art)
Izumi Uchida http://graphicdream.deviantart.com/ (more realistic pinup types)
Chris Bourassa http://cribs.deviantart.com/ (variety of stuff with different styles)
http://hellstern.deviantart.com/ (pathfinder cover style art)
These are just a few you may enjoy.
>Anyways when may we see the next part?
Honestly no idea. Not even sure how many things are going to be in the next part, I mean there's a few sections I want to get in but I'm not sure how I'll do for space so it may be just a two parter if I can fit everything in to another long page. At a guess I'd say the bride portion probably has more text than other sections are going to so it's going to be as much about finding pictures as anything else.
Is that so bad? I made a CYOA called Titans of the Sky a long time ago, and in fairness it wasn't well designed. The graphics were mediocre and the mechanics were byzantine. But in the process of making it I learned a lot about the topic, found a lot of neat images, and had fun in six or seven hours where I would otherwise have been procrastinating on youtube. Making CYOAs made me feel productive.
Aha, nah, I'm just bad at finding good words to say.
I forgot to say, it never received much attention or staying power, and I haven't even looked at it in maybe a year and a half.
You made that? Cool beans. You should do a revised version, I really liked the concept but I had some trouble understanding the mechanics of the original.
Yeah, it was pretty shoddy. The cell-system was a bad idea. If I were to do it now I couldn't help but draw a lot from Stardust, though, so I doubt it would end up very original.
>Satellite - military
After I set her loose on the rest of the world, she can call me insect with that mechanic stutter of hers all day.
Prepare to serve your new goddess!
Being like stardust isn't necessarily a bad thing, but I can see why you'd want to try to chart a more unique course with it. Maybe shift the setting back in time a bit further, and make it less of a "Grand Project of Nationalism" and more "Some crazy inventor in their garage"-type thing? I'm happy to bounce ideas back and forth on this.
If my interest in the topic comes back I'll post in the threads and let people know, but really it would be a bad idea for me to start a new CYOA right now. I didn't actually mean to go on /tg/ today- I planned just to study- but I decided to google a definition and opened /tg/ out of habit, then replied to someone about whether it's worth making CYOAs and got 'committed to the thread'.
You can white knight for me if you want, anon.
Assuming we can only choose one from each column, I'd choose Love + Mirror Mirror.
Although since it's unclear, if we can choose more, Beauty and Advancement are both solid choices. I would choose Protagonist, but I'm worried that my "supporting characters" might not have as much plot armor as I do.
Despite the wording implying "one or more things that affect everyone, and only one thing that affects you", author has confirmed that it is in fact "one or more" for both categories.
it literally says "pick at least one"
here, added a word.
haven't made a cyoa about helping me with my pain, yet.
gotta make a "alcoholism cyoa2, gerat idea friendster
It's funny, but I like the Malakhim here a lot better than any of the SDA archangel waifus.
I like your CYOA but your writing is still impressively shit, do you even do any proofreading? It's like, it seems normal, but you make mistakes in the worst places, almost like some kind of strategic effort to confuse the reader.
Nah, I like it. It actually gives more freedom because it makes me feel better about taking only the stuff that I want. Because minmaxing is pointless and the CYOA actually drives that home.
god is so tired of your shit, he just wants you to stop crying about immortality and shit.
>says there are mistakes
>doesn't point out mistakes
c'mon, m8. be a good boy and help god out here, dawg.
I put it into word, but that's just for wrod-mistakes, not how words make sense in sentences
also, it stops those niggas that want immortality for free from just picking immoratality, and ignoring everything else.
god is happy you're happy.
god is oka with that if you're happy with that. Gdo is also making DLC to shut up the litel girl posters
no seriously, I'm happy you get the point.
Don't minmax, pick whatever you like. god just wants you to be happy.
you can call Guido whatever you wanna call Guido, so long as you'r happy.
God the kinda nigga to show up at your house with a carton of milk when you run it, yo.
nigga that's being a girl, that's not being the anime girl yo. Gotta get these niggas to stop posting about wantin to get dicked by their big brother.
coolbeans. have fun!
anon last thread wanted that shit. alredy made four choices, wrote down headlines for like, 6-10 or something
ya know, he's goy you there bruh
no, go put your finger where the sun don't shine
SDA, I promise , I'll try and find a redhead that is wearing a christmas dress and is somewhat slutty
yeah dawg, I ogt here ysesterday. that's why I made a christmas cyoa. Because I got here oon the eleventh of january.
i mean, do you like think about the shit you post? I don't , but whtat's not important right now.
Made a small fix update on this one. Just nabbed more spelling mistakes, nothing else changed.
And I might as well as post this one.
Thanks for all those mate
Sadly there's little glorious socialist art and most is of poor quality. Alas.
Gommie was just joke as in islamig gommunism like Spurdo would say. Thanks for the sexy grills though >>44732081
Cheers for the reply
I hope to see a second part the first wad really enjoyable. I liked it because despite bejng yet another waifu CYOA it was also funny and didn't take itself too seriously. Also it doesn't have nearly as many obnoxious animu tropes for Normies like me who hate Laotian ink paintings
Setting myself up for a comfy life in a comfy dragon valley with a comfy dragon wife.
Weapon - Fits of God
Wind Magic - 500-5
^Pressure - 495-10
^Ultimate speed - 485-20
Fist master - 465-10
^One man army - 455-10
Top peak - 445-20
diplomat - 425-15
Immortal - 410-260
Villian and Lacine
Upper housing - 150-35
Tournament - 115-10
Mineral bound - 105-10
Eternally fertile - 95-10
Adventurers - 90-5
Soldiers - 85-5
Clerics - 80-5
Archers - 75-5
Drakes - 70-20
Dragons - 50-50 = nuffin
Turns out that I chose pretty much the same skills as mittens so that was an easy choice.
I was actually going to recolour the eyes so they're both blue but I forgot to do that in the finished product.
Oh well, they're demons. They're allowed to be edgy special snowflakes.
>author chooses some pulpy, tounge in cheeck pictures because he has a sense of humor and doesn't take cyoa too seriously
>some autist takes it upon himself to replace all the pictures because of "muh waifus"
>picks a bunch of mediocre art that has nothing to do with the original cyoa
Wew lad. This is some top tier faggotry
>tfw no cute demon boys
>most of the demon girls are abusive rapists
>cutest girl isn't even a demon
Erelyra seems like the least terrible girl, although I'm afraid she will keep me locked in her timeless pocket dimension for much longer than a year.
If I survived, I'd become slave of the Big D, keep Erelyra as a slave, bully Mhrienne with my flying fortress and have cute changeling maidboys.
I wish Slut Life felt like it had more spirit to it. As it is, it feels much more dull than the original Sissy Life CYOAs, with images and real choices. This is just picking out fetishes and getting a points total.
No, but it's overused (especially in animu), especially by edgy special snowflakes. Plenty of people naturally have kind-of-cool-looking scars, too, but that doesn't make it any less of a stereotypical Mary Sue trait.
>Fists of God (Free)
>Heal -> Greater Heal (5+25 Points)
>Elemental Summon (Wind) -> Second Element (Earth) (5+5 Points)
>Wind Magic -> Pressure + Ultimate Speed (5+10+10+20+10 Points)
>Fist master -> One Man Army (5+10+10+10 Points)
>Top Peak -> God Strength (5+10+50+10 Points)
>Diplomat (5+10 Points)
>Immortal (150+10 Points)
Basically, I am extremely fast and punch as hard as the CYOA allows. I also am persuasive can heal.
None! Either I'll outlive them, or I wouldn't want to fuck them!
I take none! Hah! Once again, you have been tricked!
I'm going to quickly abandon this and start wandering around aimlessly forever, punching whatever gets in my way. I may even give away my weapon to the new king, since God Strength kinda makes it irrelevant.
...are you even reading anything I'm writing?
The link's right in the OP. Here, I'll copy-paste it again if that satisfies you.
Some of this stuff is fucking gold, but holy shit they must have been high when they put all of this together.
> Target becomes an elf Supremacist
> A gerbil pops out of the Caster's ass
> Caster uncontrollably orgasms in the presence of candles
> Caster vomits for 96 times in two minutes
> Eyeball develops on Caster's cockhead, it can perform a yes/no question once per day
> The next time the Caster Defecates, the Defecation animates and attempts to murder the Caster
>options that affect everyone
>options that affect only you
>no options that affect whoever you like, even if that includes you or everyone but you, or just a handful of people you care about
whining about creations to stay in tune with the cyoa
Really would be kinda cool to limit immortality to myself with others I choose though, it'll be hell otherwise. Shapeshifting via mirror mirror too.
Affects everyone: Everything
Affects only you: Malakhim and Mirror, mirror
Welcome to my Hell.
That's one definition of the term, but plenty of people use it to mean characters with typical clichéd Mary Sue traits, or characters that are always good at everything they do, or characters that just completely lack character flaws, or simply "ORIGINAL CHARACTER DO NOT STEAL"s... there isn't one absolute, agreed-upon definition of what constitutes a Mary Sue and what doesn't.
Greater Heal 
Lance Master 
Top Peak 
One Man Army 
Great Strength 
Villian & Lacine
Middle Housing 
Great Temples 
Eternally Fertile 
I think I was a bit too humble, will try again later.
Also don't mind the japaniizu miss spelling in the picture.
The defining aspect is that they're a self insert. A poor self insert with idealized and perfect traits. That's what the word was invented for. Hell if we want to get REALLY particular, it was coined to refer to fan fiction characters exclusively.
15 Luxurious bedroom
10 Luxurious toilet
10 Luxurious bathroom
30 Cooked food
15 Video games
2 air conditioning
>150 middle class demon
I think I can handle this
Does anyone have a cyoa that will make me feel like pic related?
> Word means nothing.
I have to disagree, it's still a very potent term in my mind, both as an insult and as a character. But, that's just my opinion as a creator, to someone who say, is frequently beheld to arguments over such a term it would naturally lose weight creating different understanding and value.
Friend we're on 4chan, I can say that I haven't been able to get off in three years despite attempts and I don't have to worry about it.
Well. How am i supposed to say something about that part of the CYOA then?
i actually laughed out loud.
Well the thing is that it's not really fleshed out. You have half a dozen different ways to get with a futa, but this here... I mean i personally for example don't even like the *using* part of it all. But it is nonetheless hella fluffy. And embarrassing. And you can't really walk normally with that. So like parts about multiple layers, or wearing in public could be options, to not just go with the shit part all the time. Also why wouldn't buttplugs/dildo pants be possible? Ever heard of something called a tunnel buttplug?
It does exactly what it sounds like.
Well just because that fetish is underrepresented. I have a lot of other fetishes, and no shit is actually not even really a fetish of mine.
Jesus see this is why i didn't want to bring this up.
Sounds like you have the material for a CYOA of your own. Make it. Even if you can't do the graphics, someone else might. /d/ has plenty of pics, even if some mean it can't be directly posted on /tg/.
>Was your rival.
>You didn't give a shit what he did.
>Tried to out do you in everything.
>Invited you to watch him bang his waifu in front of everybody.
>You kicked his ass at the end of the world.
>He and his waifu got to come back to life, and needs to serve you.
Trick question? What happens when you put together a emo and a yandere cause my yandere is one of them
rolled a 3 on the age chart which means she's five years younger than me
magical features 5, 4
Also, did you have to use the absolute worst picture of a penis possible in the nsfw version?>>44737160
>not wanting cute traps in diapers
There are no traps on /d/ only females. And that's horrible.
Well a trap for me is something androgynous.
If it's literally just a girl with a penis instead of a vagina, that arguably is still a trap, but i'd rather qualify that as transgender.
Woe is me, it's true! It's all true. I get off on shit. In fact i can only achieve orgasm thinking about tons and tons of shit. Shit, shit, and MORE SHIT! That is where my hopes and dreams for the future lie.
I only hope that in the stinky brown future there is only shit.
I have some problems with the descriptions for Astrid and Libbie. While moving faster than the human eyes can see and being able to lift cars like they're nothing is an absolutely fine power for a vampire to have it leaves the problem of their durability having to be increased as so that don't literally tear themselves apart. Now I'm sure realistically Astrid's durability wouldn't be on the level of being completely bulletproof or anything but even still it makes me think that Libbie's durability should be either better defined or increased as so that she can be more balanced comparatively. Not to in anyway discredit how powerful a shark bite can actually be since that's what we have to go off of in terms of her ability to be pierced. It seems limp in comparison.
Just my thoughts.
I like my traps to be males.
And that's fine, but why not let others be cue sissy traps.
Cuz that's the discussion we're having.
Girls with penises in that CYOA
It's not going to be possible to switch gender convincingly until humans can switch bodies. Chromosomes don't change, and even excepting that, they can't change your bone structure or give you fake genitals that actually work.
Well, I'd argue that depending on what exactly Anon prioritizes the resources and what particular characteristics of being a girl they most desire, the resources definitely exist to achieve that.
It's a pretty clear-cut case of "results may vary," though.
>they can't change your bone structure
they're working on that.
>or give you fake genitals that actually work.
Well no you cannot yet actually give birth to a baby.
However i was talking about "within our lifetime" full body transplants will most likely be a thing within our lifetime.
eeh google it
Also in general, the singularity in AI research is expected to arrive within a few decades, and any problem after that will be relativized.
Plus while you can't give birth yet, you can have a feeling vagina.
Not YET. Within our lifetime. (or at least the actually usable part of it after which even brain transplants would be problematic) is the next 50 years.
Plus with the advancement of neural interfaces brain uploads seem increasingly less like sci-fi.
No, no they do not. They cannot make a functional vagina. They cannot change anon's bone structure. Unless anon is already hormone deficient to the point of never developing a male bone structure, anon will never get what they want.
>they're working on that.
They won't achieve it any time.
I mean one that actually functions for sex. They can't make one that produces lube. They can't even make one of the proper length because of the structure of the male pelvis.
>Full body transplants in our lifetime
You and I wish. It's not happening.
Also cryonics. Within a few decades we will be able to actually have working cryonics and thus any problem of an invention not coming soon enough will be solved.
They can already alter the shape of bones in your face.
>You and I wish. It's not happening.
It is happening. They've achieved connection from a neuron to a chip and back. And healing neurons is literally the only thing that makes this difficult.
the problem is that the only thing coming up is some russian guy getting a full body transplant in 2017 which is most likely not going to actually work.
The other way of course is stemcells. It's literally a fucking miracle cure, and if you managed to alter stemcells (destroy the Y chromosome or some other shennanigans) and applied them to the correct part of your body they would literally make the organs there drow according to the setup determined by the remaining X chromosome.
I am positively surprised. One of the best waifu CYOAs in the past few months.
Thoguh I hope the last few typos (missing word in a place or two and similar) will be corrected and the options expanded - I don't need new characters as much as some variation/modification of little tidbits (traits of character, pros/cons, kinks) of "main" characters and maids for some customization, as well as possibly expanding descriptions to what each character could accept and what they would hate when it comes to lewds and regular relationship stuff.
Though if you plan to expand it further in general, I don't mind.
Either way, solid piece of writing. Though in general when I look at this thread, waifu CYOAs seemed to have increased in quality as of late. I approve.
More on cryonics. Mice can already be revived.
But their hearts also start beating again if they have been shut down for 2 hours and are then defibbed. So they're not quite like us, but they are pretty damn close.
Because Anon didn't post it.
>Someone made an actual flying car.
And yet they're not flying through the streets. How much consolation will it be when years later you learn that someone somewhere did manage to get to become a girl?
Also on mice and cryonics. One f the problems is that an asystolic heart in a mouse restarts electrical activity if it gets atp and oxygen again. And then it's in fibrillation. A human heart, does not do that on its own which is why the research team in the experimental surgery institute i've been an intern at was working on heart transplant medication to make the hearts retain this ability to function.
However, the result is simply that one has to restart cells that won't restart themselves... a clear and precise problem.
Stem cells is not a myth.
go to 2012
THAT ABOVE is really the most likely field to help you out.
>How much consolation will it be when years later you learn that someone somewhere did manage to get to become a girl?
It will probably enough that they themselves will try to do it.
Why would you need t reshape your frikkin pelvis. There are women with not super wide hips. The only thing you can't do at this point is have children, but there are fucking surrogate mothers for that and there's technology in the making that will allow two guys to have bilogical children at some point in about 1-2 decades.
And this is not some bogus blog either:
If you really mourn the inabilty to be literally pregnant and give birth, then fuck you.
That's not the same thing though.
There are things that just need time to be made into a usable mass consumption thing.
Stem cells offer so much that this is the case.
Flying cars are really just fuel inefficient and totally impractical. Flying is more dangerous than driving if you do it yourself, fuel prices are at an all time high, and you are not that much faster with a flying thing than with a train or car in most cases.
Plus choppers have been around for fucking ages, and the rich use them all the time.
There's an uber service for them in dubai.
Why only the rich?
Because the amount of upkeep is far worse than on a car, and you can get everywhere with a car, not so much with a chopper.
So in other words becoming a woman in all aspects but the things related to being able to have children is already possible.
You will be able to have biologial children with guys in a while.
And within our lifetime stem cell research will have advanced to the point where even a complete change/rejuvenation etc will be possible. (the best part being that telomers actually get lengthened in stemcells.)
So you can be the girl, sometime in the future a mother, and maybe sometime later also the LITTLE girl, anon.
The thing i was saying is that i don't fucking care about this, because i like traps. Boys. Androgynous guys.
So i will not go to /d/.
And now i'd love it if some of my ideas about the Slut Life CYOA could be adddressed.
>and there's technology in the making that will allow two guys to have bilogical children
Closet trans here. Unless this is some deep Freudian shit and you really are tg (huehuehue), no you probably won't. It's pretty hard just to get hormones without a shitty "traditional" ("Do you watch shemale porn anon?" Not my personally experience, but it's hardly unbelievable.) psychiatric evaluation, let alone getting a sex change.
I'm not hoping for stem cells in any short amount of time. desu augmentation technology probably has more potential in the short term. I'm not even talking about artificial wombs. I would rather have synthetic genitals that still have sensory capacity rather than mutilating my current ones.
desu I sometimes have maternal instincts, so "fuck you" is a little harsh. Not facing reality is stupid though.
My point was just that this pelvis shape is what allows vaginas to be as deep as they are. In men there is a limit, so if you want to have sex with someone who has more than a 3-4 inch dick, your pelvis shape would have to change.
two male mice already had baby mice.
they can make (mostly) pluripotent stemcells out of grown human cells already.
I meant that completely from a womans point of view.
pregnancy is a fucking bitch.
vat grown humans when.
That will only be possible with brain in a jar virtual reality anon. But that's also not inconceivable and since stemcell research is taking off in our generation you may yet live to experience that.
Yes and people regularly take x-rays of other people to determine if they're male or female.
It's not visible from the outside even if naked. Especially with more than 0% body fat.
And if you're worried about what Dr Bones will think when she find out that your skellington is actually male, then boy do i wish i had your worries.
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I like the current art, and I'm dying for part 2 over here. Hopefully we'll get to learn more about Batfolk, the Church of Blood, and why everyone is so afraid of us pulling a Vlad.
>They're definitely working on that.
Are they tho? When i said they're working on bone restructuring i meant it, because stemcell research into artificial limbs includes this.
Well judging from that slut life cyoa... where you have the baby bot that kicks you to orgasm....
it is also a fetish.
but you wouldn't lose your memories like in your cyoas.
the worst thing
I only brought up tg vs traps because i personally like traps more and there's no reason for tgs to feel left out in this day and age.
So can we please get back to
a) making the diaper fetish not a stub
b) making the penis in the nsfw version not the most disgusting thing ever
Yeah it pretty much is, but I guess a part of me wants to endure it and not just cheep out with a supposed artificial womb. As in, I want my child to come from my own work as a labor (hue) of love.
I can completely understand people hating it, and I am still not sure whether I would do it naturally or get vat grown.
On a related note: https://aeon.co/essays/why-pregnancy-is-a-biological-war-between-mother-and-baby
It's pretty clearly biased, but fuck if humankind didn't get the short end of the stick when it comes to reproduction.
Don't. Lying to a psychiatrist so you can get drugs is fucking illegal.
If you are this fucking concerned about it, either you are tg or you really need to start fapping to gay porn.
>If you are this fucking concerned about it, either you are tg
then it's not lying, so my plan can go ahead.
>or you really need to start fapping to gay porn.
can't get off unless I can project myself as a girl.
Oh okay then. I must say, how do you view yourself in your normal, everyday life. Do you really associate with being a male in any way, or have you just taken the fact at face value?
-get rid of the "can't be taken with dildopants" and instead say that the rear dildo/plug will be a hollow one
-another option to pay credits (half the amount you get with the dildopants) to have a valve on this also bount the the universal remotecontrol.
-separate suboption to remove toilets from your apartment
-separate option to gain credits for wearing obscene amounts of diapers always enough to show under the type of clothing you wear
And now for completely different fetishes:
-Gags are not detailed enough. There should be a separate option to be gagged for feeding (funnel and feeding gag thing)
-Include an option to have a chance that the water capsule bed thing will malfunction and not release you.
-more options for the cohabitant if it's another contestant. dom/sub/switch should be possible with them
Literally, and i do mean literally any other yaoi/shota pic anywhere.
We're still talking about MY penis, in a SISSY CYOA. The thought of how i look, combined with seeing that image is not a pleasant one.
Make it as cute as the other vagina pics.
>Pretending to be a baby
Only happens if you take other options like the Couple owner, and there's more options for pretending to be/being treated like a pet than a baby.
>and shitting yourself.
Completely avoidable with >>44739067
Obviously the pretending to be a baby thing.
Seriously though, for me using them is sortof repulsive but the diapers themselves are fucking amazing.
some of these are already included.
So you have no actual personal obligation to being a male, is that right? Another question. Would you prefer to be treated by society as if you were gender neutral (As in, no male or female social obligations. You can even have your own special snowflake pronouns and no one would thing you weird at all.), or would you rather stay as a "man".
Honestly, I might go to /lgbt/ and ask on the trans help threads some. I'm definitely not an expert in this, considering I am in the closet myself.
SlutLife anon pls notice me senpai.
>implying that slutlife is not actually "choose your own fapfic"
I'm only suggesting this because the other categories include more detailed options.
Plus it's only like 3 new suboptions.
>>implying that slutlife is not actually "choose your own fapfic"
That's what I mean. I used to do it, but now I just think, scrap the points, I can make my own list of fetishes with a paragraph about how I suffer each one while locked in some futuristic tv show.
I'd rather have yours included than that one personally.
Highlander said there wouldn't be any major updates beside the image version.
Then his laptop with all of his work on it was stolen, so who knows when that update will come?