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CYOA General: Broken Dreams Version

Last Thread >>44571757
FAQ: http://pastebin.com/MhAQAJiw
IRC Chat Channel
https://client01.chat.mibbit.com/?url=irc%3A%2F%2Firc.rizon.net%2Fcyoa

Here's a dropbox with a LOT of CYOA's:
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/9ijwopa42ke49q1/AAA40vUS2BzstD9eHyyBLTr8a?dl=0
Here's Beri's OC (genie cyoa+)
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0Bxbrh3Q2CTiyfjM3SjU2TWNJQ3VpZ2pWYk0xRUJ4LVZYRkgyTTlwUTQwZjZhN0FNTTJ3LUE
Here's Liminal Phrenic's blog with most of his cyoa stuff theouterworlds.blogspot.com
Here's Spadesy's wordpress with most of his cyoa stuff feathersnake.wordpress.com

List of Some Image Resources:
http://game-icons.net
http://www.pixiv.net
http://drawcrowd.com
http://digital-art-gallery.com
https://www.artstation.com
http://coolvibe.com
http://www.zerochan.net
http://danbooru.donmai.us
http://gelbooru.com
http://www.deviantart.com
http://fantasygallery.net
http://grognard.booru.org
http://fantasy-art-engine.tumblr.com
https://www.pinterest.com
https://www.google.com/imghp


From Dropbox Anon:
Hello friends, I am the guy who owns the Dropbox linked up top. I added a notepad to the dropbox. If you are a CYOA author and wish to see your CYOA in the dropbox, the most expedient way would be emailing my new Yahoo! account "[email protected]' with the CYOA. Adding a name either in the subject or body attached to the email would be helpful.

Posting some incomplete cyoas. Perhaps the OC will see them and comment, or it'll inspire others, or we can collect the tears and do a toast.
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>>44582348
Arena Master Anon (arena & heart of tg)
G (made the soaked, easily & eternally missed
Intermittent (secret agent & curosity alpha)
Jalm (myroid & monster dungeon)
Lord Bobby (bard & dungeon design)
VampiricRebirth Anon (vamp rebirth & werewolf)
Imaginos (strange coins & hygenic)
Greylore (toltiir and a ton of incomplete ones)


another incomplete one
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believe this one is also unfinished
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>>44586175
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another..sadly there are a lot of these
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>>44586249
This previous one does have like 5 pages or so

was this one every finished?
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The author of this one said that anyone is free to take up and finish it. The second page was supposed to have most of the point-granting stuff, such as workplaces, different jobs to do in said workplaces, and some manner of perks or something.
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this one looked promising
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>>44586275
>The second page
Second part. I cannot words.
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Is this one coming along ok? Really want to see this one done as it's new too.
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evil tease, hope it gets done...

>>44586223
This one is nice and finished.
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Creator of this one just disappeared. Pretty much complete but images and a few other things were supposed to be added
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Shall we resume the civilized waifu discussions?
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>>44586488
Angels a shit, demons a best.
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>>44586488
>Shall we resume the civilized waifu discussions?
We could do that if you posted the superior Archdemon version.
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>>44586528
Heathen pls go and stay go.
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>>44586488
>Heaven and Hell
>magnum opus
>SDA literally mean Star Dust Anon
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>>44586488
I want to have sex with moomin
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>>44586488
>>44586528
>>44586538
>>44586540
Heaven or Hell! Duel One! Let's Rock!

http://strawpoll.me/6458980
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>>44586623
Wow, nice superpopular poll you have there.
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>>44586623
>No neutral
>Give me someone, I'm just lonely. :(
>Option
ONE. JOB.
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>>44586488

>Hell has more vanilla and pure ladies

Why must this be?
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>>44586214
Human
Gunslinger Hunter
New Monarchy

Hand Cannon
Fusion Rifle
Machine Gun
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>>44586693
That's the point, you do not empower filthy neutrals by aknoweleging their existance, you act as if they just don't exists at all as it should be. It's the same as you don't call rebels as "rebels", you say "terrorists" or "criminals".
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>>44586837
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>>44586853
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>>44586874
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>>44586886
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>>44586488
Azriel
>protective waifu
>purging filth together
>then cuddle on the ocean balcony
She's perfect, although I'm not sure about the Tantric fetish. Sounds demonic.
Rewards: Marriage, Countryside castle with Seraphim maids. Army of Heaven job with my wife.
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SDA

Post PNGs of the waifu CYOAs. For some reason the last time you posted the demon one it got saved as an 8.6MB JPG for me and I can't repost it.
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>>44586175
This sounds neat. Is there more to this? Are we meant to pick one of each archetype, or just one in general?
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Who here played PACYOA?
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>>44586734
Because that's some vile, degenerate shit, anon.
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>>44586249
Post more pages of this one please? If it has at least 5 pages the author's probably still working on it.
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>>44586979
Just as planned
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Here's a Carrier I was making for my fighter pilot character, I scrapped it because I wasn't very happy with it and also because of the cost.
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>>44586175
Pic seems familiar.
http://log-horizon.wikia.com/wiki/Classes
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>>44586979
Do you mean it expands in the process much like a cloud of star dust?
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>>44586916
Tantric is like the most intense sex you'll ever have. Nigga don't you want your souls to be one while you and your waifu make love?
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>>44587128
No, anon, a cloud can't be a penis.
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>>44586734
The only perverted girl is Esme, and maybe Ithuriel, if you don't consider clones a masturbation. The rest is extremely vanilla. Wing worship may look weird to you, but it's not worse than pure fetishes like teethbrushing.
How innocent are the Hell ladies?
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>>44587207

a bit more
>>44567633
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>>44586275
It's just the poor cousin of text-based Slut Life wearing shitty cosplay.
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>>44587207

>How innocent are the Hell ladies?

A lot more actually
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>>44586979
Same here.
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>>44587253
It's not a big difference. Even the most non-sexual one tells you to just fuck her while she's asleep or something.
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>>44587207
>Heaven is kinkier
>Hell is sluttier
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>>44587235
>you're a slave
>angry femdom
>femdom
>cute, nice girl
>lust slut
>femdom
>not-sure-if-consensual
>insecure femdom, but willing to switch
>femdom
>be my slave
Aezureah is waifuable, the other girls are too scary and not pure at all. Angels > demons.
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>>44587320
they're about equal in sluttiness

>>44587354
most of them are pretty pure, i think your issue is that you're a slave for a year, not the nature of the girls
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Whatever happened to that Anon who said they were going to make a mecha CYOA?
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>>44587354
>insecure femdom, but willing to switch

You say that like she's not clearly the best choice. That sort of thing is adorable.
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>>44587367
You're right, if I replace the slavery with marriage, they seem far more likeable. Except for Wrath and Gluttony, but that is a personal distaste. Even the Lucifer girl's offer Be My Husbando looks attractive.
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>>44580258
Gonna have to go with Raven.
Sayama would be good if not for the fact that her family is over every single weekend, and she'll act like a cunt if I don't want to eat one of her meals.
Felicia just sounds like a pain in the ass to have to deal with, casual sex is not worth having a bunch of fucking people over all night.
Anya would be fine since she's a gamer, but her utter lack of desire to carry her own weight makes me have to say no, I don't need to live with a second version of myself.
Rhodesia is out right away due to her haughty and spoiled attitude, but the fact that she treats you as a servant and forces you do live with her via the fine print of her contract make her utter shit.
Sonja'd be alright if not for the fact that she expects me to conform to her values, which is something I'd have extreme reservations with in a committed relationship, let alone living with a roommate.
Raven takes care of the chores, is willing to listen to your problems and help you with them, plus if you ever decide to catch her in the act of sneaking up next to you I'd wager she'd be down to snuggle through the night. Plus she has the benefit of wanting to suck me blood, which for me is adorable to imagine, and would likely be very intimate. The only downside would be that whole thing about the complete darkness, but I'm sure I could just throw a tarp or two into a tent to surround my pc.
And hell even if that won't work I'll probably be too busy fondling a bat to do much online anyways.
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>>44586275
>>44587248

More or less, to be honest. And if you want a magic-flavored slut-life thing, then you can play the exalted remake DLC version, which even has nearly the same premise as this one.
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>>44586190
>G
Boy, do I have a surprise for you in like, three plus months probably. Stupid exams.
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>>44587743
dragonlord
fire
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>>44586488
I recall a few thread ago there was mention that one of the angels was into chastity play, but I'm not seeing which except for guessing which kinks might just include it.
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>>44586488
Can you post Demon and Michelle/Big D?

I tried to save on my phone but couldn't.
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>>44582407

Cool. I was talking about more modern dance clubs with electronic-esc music and dancing styles. I doubt the normal girls would have those but the angels might so I am just going to assume that.
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Mhyrienne
>Dat Ass
>Not into Anal
>Truly this is Hell
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>>44588180
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>>44588180

>enslave her
>can't say no

Ohohohoho

You enslave her and treat her badly though and I WILL cut you
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>>44588180
Like hell she's not into butt stuff. It doesn't say anything about her not being into that. It just means she'll have to be gently teased into trying it, on the days when she's feeling subby.
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>>44588221
Treating Mhyrienne badly
Not telling her how stunningly perfect she is in her true form as you teasingly worship her
Not teaching her to love anal with all sorts of toys and inventions of hers
Not enslaving her as your perfect, beloved pet for eternity
Why would anyone fail that hard?
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>>44588180
Cute!
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>>44588325

Look around 4chan. Shitters. Shitters everywhere.
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>>44588206
got Michelle?
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>>44586623
I'd say demons, if it wasn't for a certain angel...
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>>44588365
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>>44588365
Afraid I missed whoever that is.
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>>44586350
>tfw I was right
And this is why I stopped reading pdf's and actually plan to keep it that way.
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>>44588325
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>>44587971
What would that even consist of?
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>>44588455

Not sure what he is talking about as I never saw it mentioned but it could be like Mhyrienne's orgasm denial fetish. Edging and then no reward.
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>>44587801
....
wanker
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>>44588455
Cum denial is probablly what he means
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>>44588180
it's tiny. All lordosis, no meat.
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>>44588493
I choose to interpret Mhyrienne's fetish as edging, followed by eventual payoff after a long, slow build-up. Because that's hot, whereas not getting to cum is just frustrating.
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>>44588601
Yes, and? Small, round butt on tiny petite girls are extra nice.
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>>44588629
>>Dat Ass
>has no ass
Doesn't add up, senpai
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>>44588602

See it is broad enough it can be both. But none of the Angels really match that. Closest could be Esme but that is if you want to. Its not her kink besides being Temperance and withholding pleasure is a part of that.
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>>44588650
I see an ass. I see a cute, tight little ass. It's an ass that I like very much.

Where am I losing you, Anon?
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>>44588561
>>44588602
Esme would for sure be into that.
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>>44588602
>tfw she restrains you at her lab so you can't move while she works
>tfw she just comes up to you to lick your penis once every 5 minutes
>tfw you endure this for hours until you cum multiple times throughout the day
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>>44588718
>tfw it gets to the point where all she has to do is wink at you to make you cum
Big D have mercy
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>>44588693
the part where "dat ass" refers to something tiny, not something bubbly you can rest your head on without feeling bone.
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>>44588718
Anon, I'm in public. Don't do this to me when people can see me getting hot and bothered.
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>>44588718
That's some Pavlovian shit going on.
Lovely.
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>>44586214
You know, I don't like Destiny, but always concede that Bungie knows how to do art direction. This reminded me that they also know how to do flavor text. Destiny item descriptions were awesome.
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>>44588379
Thank you!
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>>44588718

>yfw you enslave her and make her wear a vibe while at work
>yfw every 5 minutes you turn it on to the point when she is just about to peak and then shut it off
>yfw she endures it for hours until after work where you penetate her rear end and she learns to cum from her ass
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>>44588856
The game is definitely hit and miss, but one of the big hits is the art. They did a good job of bringing Space Fantasy with Guns! to life.

Some of the Warlock armor is just great.
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>>44586488

How does Laurette fetish works? She wants herself to get mindbroken or is she waiting the right time to mindbreak someone with her Asunder power?
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>>44588947
>yfw she tries to hide her blushing
>yfw she tries to muffle her little moans
>yfw she tries to turn away in time so you can't see all the lewd faces age makes when she's about to peak
>yfw she tries to keep from arching her back or splaying out her toes when the vibe hits her just eight

>yfw she fails at all those things
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Pls stop talking about those cyoas

No more waifu-fetish shit, it's been five threads
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>>44589272

>stop talking about CYOAs
>in a CYOA thread

k
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On the topic of Angels
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>>44588947
>yfw you let her control the intensity of the vibrator
>the higher the setting the more you reward her when you're alone
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>>44589110
This is an excellent question. The former is horrifying (why would I want my sweet loving waifu to get mindbroken?) while the latter is equally so (why would I want to get mindbroken by my sweet loving waifu?).
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>>44589227

>yfw you make her think you don't notice she is hiding it
>yfw she is just about to climax
>yfw you turn it off and she lets out a scream of frustration
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>>44589373
Mindbreak doesn't have to be permanent. Maybe she just wants you to force her to cum over and over until she's limp and drooling on the floor, gently twitching from aftershocks and staring into space.
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>>44588180
Why did it take until now for me to realize that Big D explicitly gives you the option of enslaving your chosen archdemon _and_ continuing to live and work with them without having to pick any of the given careers?

>Mhyrienne
All those inventions to examine, all those toys to examine her body with... all the while hopefully avoiding having any of the ones I wouldn't like being used on me.
And considering what I usually do in my free time (which probably wouldn't change much), there wouldn't really be anything for her to spy or eavesdrop on, nor anyone other than her for me to ogle.
>Enslave, forgo the separate estate&career
Keep on doing more-or-less what I did during that year, with the added benefit of being able to look like whatever I want. Most importantly, I'd make myself look attractive enough that I could consider having actual sex with her, or just cuddle naked in bed or something. Maybe make myself look like a more grown-up version her, with a pair of tits large enough for her to use as pillows.
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>>44587207
BDSM: Isda
(Rough sex, depending on how rough): Azriel
Mind break: Laurette
Group Sex: Ithuriel
Slave Play: Esme
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>>44589493
It's like you already knew what perfection sounded like.
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I can't think a sexy use for Irinael power, help me you perverts.
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>>44589272
Back to Reddit. Seriously, I know you like shitting up our threads, but you fuckers make it hard to stay here.
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>>44589305
>Must I absolutely be a girl
yes
>Fine. But I'll be a cute girl, then
Okay
>Fine
Fine
>Fine! God
Yes?
>Why are you doing this
I'm bored as fuck, and your misery entertains me.

>Model 3
>Please God, can't I be a 7/10? I'd even settle for a 9/10?
Nope. You need to deal with everyone lusting over you
>You're a dick
Yep
>168 cm, because why not
>Medium +5
>Will I at least know how to walk with these?
Nope.
>Agile +5
You sure you don't want the other one? It'll give you more points
>Prick...
>Vagina +7
>None +9
>So I get points for not having a dick? Finally something good
>Depilation +10
>And I won't ever have to learn to shave?
>Free: Sportswear, lingerie, jewelry, sex toys
>I just don't want to have to buy a vibrator...
Sure.
>Sexy Cosplay +9
>Hey, I like girls in cosplay, I'm sure I can find someone who'd enjoy it as well.
Sure.
>Free: Nurse
>Raise, tg +3
>Penthouse -2
>Fem -1
>I swear, I'm just doing this to make the transition easier on me
Sure
>Student -3
>New identity -1
>Mastermind 0
>Ninja 0

>I don't know a good girl name, where will I even live?
>Hey God? C'mon, help me out a little here.
but really, anon will probably tell me to leave if I write anything down, so it'll have to stay in my head. Even when it isn't /d/ stuff.
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>>44586249
>Using Papyrus
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>>44586488
>Azriel really, really loves strawberries
I don't understand that reference. Is she into sensual feeding? Does she like "berries" that aren't berries? Or is it some secretly lewd lingo? Am I too autistic for her?
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>>44589915
I'm just glad there aren't any shoe-horned Undertale references.
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>>44589373
>>44589110
She dosen't know what sex is so i guess it means she will enjoy you showing it to her which means it's mindbreaking her what the fetish is talking about.

>not marrying Laurette
>not using Asunder on each other to live out eternity loving each other unconditionally
the fuck is wrong with you
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Esme fapfiction, when?
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>>44587743
Nice to see you're still making them G. Good luck on your exams.
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>>44590455

A couple of threads ago when I went on how our relationship would work.
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>>44588419
That must be on of the most fun CYOAs I've seen; balancing evil against selfishness is just great.

Curses:
*Weak power

Boon:
* Specialty specialization

Envy lvl1
Greed lvl1-2 (sloth + gluttony)
Sloth 1-2 (greed)

With lvl2 sloth I can become a guest in anyone's home and have them give me everything they own (using very broad terms) to me using lvl2 greed, and once I got a decent amount of money and 'aspects' I can get people into lots of HIGH stakes bets that will will end to my advantage most of the time since I got lvl1 envy.
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>>44589864
Heh someone's a designfag. Papyrus works for that kind of cyoa though, even if everyone supposedly hates it as a "bad" font. Just wish that guy would finish and post the cyoa.
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>>44590486
thx m8
Gotta find other pictures for the classes that have pictures with wings. Probably another girl, or some that aren't wearing face armour.
Or change the description for Dragonlord, since it mentions magical wings.
>tfw anon tells you not to make high magic CYOA but doesn't offer an alternative
have written classes, armours, half the weapons, an admittedly bad reason why you can only get one of each item class
have yet to write sidearms (if I do that), skills (for more options) and the quests (already have so many ideas, just gotta write)
It'll be big, and I'm scared. making some waifu thing to get better at photoshop in the meantime.
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>>44589915
Yeah, I didn't get that one either.

>>44590455
This is the part where I wish I was a more competent writer.
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>>44590753
i will enjoy playing your cyoa for all of one or two days before the next high fantasy one comes out
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>>44586623
wow, I broke a tie when I voted. (and I was voter 69)
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>>44591100
>Voted demons
TRAITOR
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>>44589982
Can I make a pendant with the line "it fills you with determination" ?
I bought it yesterday on sale, but I haven't started playing it yet.
>>44590966
thx m8
You're still more than welcome to write out your unique ideas.
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>>44587380
>>44587400
>Pow:[][][]
>Rec:[][][][]
>End:[][][][][]
>Spe:[][][][][][]
>Str:[][][][][][][][][]

>Operator: MAL +2str +2rec
>Features: System shock
>Body Type: Byped +1end +1str
>Piloting System: "MAN"ual +2str +1end
>Weapons: AC Machine Gun(R) +2spd +1str, >Plasma Blade(L) +2spd +1rec
>Wing Men: Minica Rea, Cassey Gern

I noticed this coya is based around 5th gen ACs. One NEXT could kill doezens of the little buggers
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Hello everyone I'm the person who made that cyoa author cyoa. I haven't really been here much over the past year for various reasons but I'm thinking I'll update it for valentines day this year cause some people on irc had been asking me about it. If you have any requests/demands/insults/questions for me I'd like to hear them.
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>>44587207
Laurette, Ithuriel, and Irinael are explicitly described as up for anything once she opens up to you, extremely adventurous, and up for nearly anything, respectively. Their fetishes are just the specific things they know they like. So any of those three are heavenly choices if you want a pervert.
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>>44588371
but the demons have Mhyrienne...
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>>44591954
See these 2 posts...

>>44586190
>>44582348
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>>44591954
What did you make beyond that, Sissy Life and KFC CYOA?
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>>44592120
Sorry anon, I'm not a pedophile.
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>>44591954
Quicksilver needs a spot.
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>>44592128
And I'll repeat that Muscle Wizard hasn't gotten even five builds posted, and that both Highlander and Slut life are for a very small group of people.
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>>44592128
thanks, figured I missed something obvious.

>>44592142
Pretty much just those and some other shitty ms paint ones like kfc cyoa but I never liked any of them very much.


>>44592181
iirc I actually considered him for the first time around but couldn't think of 3 more to put in that row I'll make sure to get him this time.

>>44582246
also if this anon is still around you can easily reach me on #cyoa on rizon
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>>44592190
Repeat all you want. Muscle Wizard anon never came up wtih a name to call him by. Muscle Wizard anon would probably be fine though. Lots of people built for Highlander when it came out. If you don't like it that has no bearing on the CYOA Waifu anon making another cyoa.

Go piss somewhere else.
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>>44592318
I'm the only one, but I'd like to see the Femdom worlds guy added.
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>>44592608
>Femdom
a shit
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Why does Lamas Krone have 10/10 penis?
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>>44592744
He bought a full party pack?
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>>44592549
I'm so sorry for not agreeing with you Anon. I'll be sure not to do it in the future, okay :)
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>>44590753
Wings are the best.
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>>44592744
Well 10/10 is 1, and I have 1 penis. Really anything lower than 10 just wouldn't make sense.
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>>44588180
Isn't that orgasm denial thing a new addition?
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>>44593019

No? Its been there the whole time.
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>>44593039
Ah. That's a shame.
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>>44593064

It does not say who's being denied anon.
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>>44589915
You're too autistic to understand that it's not meant to be sexual. Not all the traits are. It's just meant to be cute that she loves something girly.
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>>44593121
It's bad either way.
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>>44593178

Why? You can still get yours.
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>>44589574
Resolve a lover's quarrel and then spy on them when they have makeup sex.
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>>44586488
Is it bad I can't figure out witch virtue each angel representsl?

It is literally driving me crazy, can anyone help with telling my retarded head which is which.
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>>44593710
Look at their placement compared to the demon cyoa, that should tell you everything.
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>>44586275

>> Male
>> Orc (-5)
>> Huge (-2)
>> Ripped (-2)
>> Flat Chest
>> Masculine Hips (-2)
>> Muscular Ass (-2)
>> Handsome Face (-2)
>> White Skin
>> Brown Hair
>> Extra Semen Production (-3)

>> Potent Pheromones (+5)
>> Pierced Nipples (+1)
>> Rut (+3)
>> Mind Wipe (+10)
>> Enhanced Libido (+3)

>> Nude
>> Presumably Sub-Optimal Living Conditions
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>>44594444
You forgot you get strong body free
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>>44586190
I'm working on it, anon. I promise I'll finish it.

One day.
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>>44586271
>Red Economy adds to both Trade and Military
Dafuq
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>>44593710
>Azriel: Patience
>Isda: Humility
>Kristel: Diligence
>Laurette: Chastity
>Ithuriel: Charity
>Esme: Temperance
>Irinael: Kindness
>Ea: Anal
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>>44595359
But Anal is Lyleth's sin. How can something be a virtue and a sin?
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>>44595724
I don't make the rules, pal.
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>>44595724
Anal is neither a sin or virtue. Anal is beyond existence and eternity itself.

Only SDA has unlocked its secrets. May we strive to follow in his path.
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>>44595724
The vices and virtues are linked. So you have:

Patience/Wrath
Humility/Pride
Diligence/Sloth
Chastity/Lust
Charity/Greed
Temperance/Gluttony
Kindness/Envy
Anal/Anal
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>>44596459
That's interesting. Where are they linked?
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>>44586488
Ugh, really hard to choose. Azriel seems like the most fun to shadow, as long as the rules of Heaven work similar to Hell, but Isda seems like the most fun to spend time with (and has the best power), and Ithuriel's the sexiest. Might just go for Irinael - she's probably the best all-rounder.
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>>44596486
Anon, look at the places of each girl on both pages.
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Looking into the updated Ordion from last thread, kinda disappointed in the companion options, comparable to the first one. Kinda makes me wanna go independent and go it alone, honestly. One skeleton against the world.
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>>44596486
Catholic theology. So Wrath, for example, is considered to be love of justice perverted, while Patience is faith in the justice of God.

There's also a bit more to it. Lust, for example, isn't just acting on sexual urges, but a general lack of self-control. That's why, in the Divine Comedy, their punishment was to be blown about by winds.
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>>44596545
Isda is underrated. Isda a cute, and she is a bodypillow. Plus she'll help you make a name for yourself while never taking credit.
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>>44596555
No, I'm asking where they're linked.
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>>44596614
I meant the CYOA.
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>>44596677
Google it. Each of the 7 virtues is an opposite to one of the 7 deadly sins.
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>>44596696
They're linked in concept only. They're not actually linked to each other in any real way, it's simply that the virtue/sin they represent is linked in Christian theology.
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>>44596677
>>44596696
What are you asking that hasn't already been answered?
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>>44596459
>>44596614
>>44596706
Honestly the envy/kindness duality is the weakest.
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>>44596696
The CYOAs use the virtues and vices
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>>44596773
I'm asking where they are linked in the CYOA. According to another anon they're not.
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>>44596961

Saw this in the other thread and saved it.
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>>44597031
I mean IN the CYOA. What's hard to understand about this? I just thought there was something I missed in there.
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>>44597078
If you are look for a direct quote from the CYOA saying "these are all linked to virtues" then you will be looking for quite a while.
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>>44597078
There's nothing in the CYOA that links them. This is all background.
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>>44597078

The only one that mentions it directly in the CYOAs are Pride and Charity.
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>>44588180
You'd think the representation of gluttony wouldn't get hangovers.
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>>44597153
Eh, she does get them but also doesn't seem to care and just drinks her way through them.
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Found out what happened to Traveler guys. Highlander had his laptop stolen.
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>>44597458
lies
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>>44597474
More like an unfortunate truth, he lives in a shiet neighborhood in a shiet town. And the idiot left his laptop at home when he went out, suffice to say he also left the door open.

He'll start up everything eventually but for now he needs to get over his lost manuscripts, he wrote a fuckload of shit and wants to hang himself at the moment. I'm giving him a month before he brings in his piece of shit, goes back through the archives and starts all over again.
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>>44597529
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>>44596459
Pride>Envy=Sloth>Wrath>Lust>Anal>Greed>Gluttony

Patience>Everyone else.
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>>44597474
>>44597529
If this is true, then 2016 has been ruined. Might as well go back to sleep and hope 2017 has something better to offer.

Good luck with the reconstruction Highlander
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>>44597575
As I said he'll get over it, the cunt's gotten over much worse, I mean he wrote Traveler on a laptop that's screen was half dead, and despite eating like one meal a day he's doing pretty well. Traveler will be back, and the homosuck thing he was working on with it, that's also going to be a thing, maybe some other stuff.

>>44597609
He'll be fine, give the cunt till mid febuary and we'll get it.
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>>44597609
I'm betting it'll be a shitty rushjob.
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>>44597643
We'll see, he did write a novel over the last few months.
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>>44588419

The original is better.
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>>44586488
So, Ea can make magic bondage equipment, copy herself, swap bodies with you, and is a wellspring of creativity? Man, girl's wasted on just wanting it in the butt. Imagine how much fun she could be if she was as open as Ithuriel.
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>>44598054
She has a main kink. That doesn't mean you can't prompt her to use her powers during sex. Have some imagination.
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>>44597481
Erika

Height: 5.5ft
Race: Caucasian
Attractiveness: Cute
Features: Blonde Hair, Dat Ass, Pleasant Period, Toned, No Body Hair
Breast Size: D cup (~82 cm)
Ass Size: Apple

Sex Factor: 17
Social Factor: 10
Science Factor: 1
Academic Factor: 6
Applied Skill: 4

Sexuality: Bi
Talents: Skilled Humanities
Hobbies: Cafe Job, Shooting, Martial Arts
Comp. & Vices: Nil
Group: Jocks
Other: Average House


It's been a while since I did this, so I pretty much just went with what appealed to me instead of what would be most ideal. But the gist of it is that I'm pretty well-liked and apparently considered very attractive despite (personality-wise) also being /k/ as a cute tomboy.
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>>44596557
What do you find disappointing about the companion options? The drop in numbers from 10 to 5? I found a lot of people were disappointed in that.

I may make a 2.1 adding new companions and changing the Dominion's quests a bit to be less sneaky.
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>>44598497
More companions = more choice = more good.
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>>44598575
And more good = more fun things = more fun.
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>>44588180
I'd go with Kyleth and presuming we got along alright I'd probably just keep living with her and working for her. I kind of want to see what kind of powers I'll develop and I think I'd prefer to stay a roadie than any of the other jobs I could get.

If we didn't get along, I guess I'd live in the Hellish Castle because it's bad ass, get some balrog maids because I chose to live in a really shitty neighborhood, and get a job at the Colosseum because fuck those other jobs.
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>>44599111
>>44598575
but too much things = lots of things get lost in the tl;dr crowd = less good = less fun

>>44599148
>someone chose kyeleth
woah
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>>44599160
Only retards whine about there being too much to read. If you don't have an attention span then go play your shooty bangs.
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>>44592190
The problem with Muscle wizard is that it is very niche, it's a good Cyoa, but every end product will be very similar as you are ultimatly a brawny wizard. Traveler offers infinite freedom if your willing to read through it and could just be a book cyoa. Slut life is /d/ before the futa menace encumbered it.

>>44599174
Let them bitch, long cyoa are fine as long as the individual behind them puts effort into them and nothing new is under the sun.
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>>44599174
>>44599213
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>>44599228
Yep, I read that and enjoyed it. I love Liminal Phrenic.
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>>44599238
You're in a minority. A new CYOA should strive to accommodate everyone.
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>>44599160
>woah
What's so weird about that? She seems like a pretty cool person, I've always wanted to learn how to play an instrument, and I'm a sucker for a girl with musical talent. Also she has the coolest house.
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>>44599261
Not every cyoa has to be a slut.
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>>44599261
>Muh appeal to the lowest common denominator
CALL OF DUTY CYOA WHEN
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>>44599267
You're the only one. Everyone else wrote her off as a bitch.
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>>44599323
No, it's more like you should try to make it niche just because you want it to cater to you and you alone. You're pushing your own desires at the expense of the quality of the CYOA.

>>44599267
I've never seen anyone else take her.
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>>44599354
It's more like "Make the CYOA you want because this is your spare time and your hobby and you're doing this shit for free and owe absolutely nothing to the pathetic bitches in this thread."
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>>44599380
No, that would be fine. You were suggesting things to the author though, not telling him to just go with what he wants.
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>>44599407
And if the author complies that's his will. Doesn't matter what your sorry ass says because you're lazy and can't be assed to read.
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>>44599261
Nigga a CYOA doesn't have to do anything, a creator doesn't have to make it with any target audience in mind, they could make it for their own conceit for all it mattered, though that in of itself would usually not create good quality.
All a CYOA 'needs' is a choice to present to the reader. Nothing more or less and this can be as simple or complex, niche or as open as the creator wishes, as long as their is some decent writing and a good idea behind it I'd give it a read Unless we enter vore tier fetish stuff mang.

Also can I say how fucking weird it is that we're as niche a community as we are.

Seriously. Where's the rest of the CYOA on the fucking internet? Reddit is an endless repost of native shit, Tumblr has no cyoa last I checked outside of artists doing MSPA style quest stuff, it's sad as hell. How the fuck hasn't CYOA caught onto other websites?
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>>44599423
And if he agrees with me then that's his will too. Same to you, buddy.

>>44599435
Again, this is in regards to suggestions, not what the CYOA "has" to do or whatever the fuck you're going on about.

An anon suggested something retarded. I disagreed. That's what discussion is for. I'm trying to be helpful, meanwhile you're just shitposting.

If you don't like it you can leave.
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>>44599475
And they called you a retard. That's the circle, you're just higher up your ass. Very arrogant to call other people 'shitposters' for their opinions.
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>>44599492
It's not arrogant when their opinion isn't actually regarding anything constructive and is instead just whining about conversation. It's accurate.
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>>44599526
You're not constructive. You're bitching that everyone else is a shitposter and how they're evil for not appealing to you. You're whining.
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>>44599475
> I'm the one shitposting
> As I commit shifting goalpost Fallacy and infantile dismissal

I chuckled I will admit. Keep shining sunshine.
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>> Name: Catherine
>> Height: 5'5
>> Race: Caucasian
>> Attractiveness: Gorgeous (-4)
>> Features: Dat Ass (-2); High Metabolism (-3); Long Legs (-2); Dreamy Eyes (-2); No Body Hair (-3); Freckles (Free); Daisy Dukes (Free); Blonde Hair (-1); Very Short Hair (Free); Stud (Whatever it is, it's Free)
>> Breast Size: 82cm D (-3)
>> Ass Size: Bubble (Free)
>> Sex Factor: 26/20
>> Social Factor 2/20
>> Science Factor: 5/20
>> Academic Factor: 7/20
>> Applied Skill: 8/20
>> Sexuality: Bisexual (-1)
>> Talents: Singing, Freddie (-8); Mechanical 1 (Free); Housework (Free)
>> Hobbies: Cafe Job (+2); Shooting (Free)
>> Comp. & Vices: Sex (+1), Minor Mental Issues (+2); Pushy Parents (+3); Drinking (+1)
>> Group: Loner
>> Other: Rural Home (0);

You're not too tired, are you anon?
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>>44599540
Well I tried to be at the start. I suppose it's my weakness that I don't just ignore it when people start shitposting at me and lower myself down to the same level.

>how they're evil for not appealing to you
I have zero clues about what you're talking about.
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>>44587380
Eyyy its me he mechafag

Im actually working on a sort of test CYOA involving owning a fantasy Inn. By doing it I was wanting to get some experience before I start my dream cyoa so it won't be total shit. And progress for both are going pretty slow.

I could actually use some help finding cool pictures of characters and some more sci fi shit if you can tell me where to look
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>>44599335
She's arrogant, but she doesn't seem mean enough to be a bitch. To each their own I suppose.

Of course, now that you mention it, I've always found pride the sexiest vice.
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>>44595960
>Anal is neither a sin or virtue.
No, pretty sure in the context of classical christian virtues it's a sin. Sodomy is the term you're looking for.
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>>44599687
You could always lurk around a lineart thread on /m/
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>>44599687

deviantart should sadly be your first choice.

Reddit's imaginary locations might get you somewhere too.

Searching around on Imgur might do you wonders.

I mean, I just googled "tavern art" and came up with half a bajillion good images, so it shouldn't be too hard to find pictures.

Here's one.
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>>44586223
Immortality (50)
Divine Speed (30)
Divine Engineer (10)
Godly Mind (0)

Defender of the Innocent (25)
Ancient Mysteries (50)

Living Nightmare (40)
Expertise x2 (Mathematics, Physics) (30)
Divine Memory (20)
God's Eyes (10)
Sixth Sense (0)

Make things to not only help humanity but to help me find more cube pieces. With the higher intellect and mechanical expertise I think that the beasts guarding some of the cubes won't be an issue. Using robots and other creations to fight or distract the beasts along with sixth sense and divine speed I could take the cubes and run the hell away quickly. Shouldn't take long to sintonise with the cubes as well.

Afterwards start using points gained for stuff like ascended, more expertise, some divine strength, martial prowess and unflinching courage would all be nice too. But firstly the goal is to gather cubes while making machines. Afterwards I would work to spread humanity out among the stars.
So that I can have a planet all to myself so no one will bother me!
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There's an Older CYOA i'm trying to track down. It's got a mix of quirky almost-magical objects and allies (including a golem lady of some sort, a recording of static that makes all audio recordings of it only hear static, a locket that lets you look like someone else) .

It also has a bunch of creepy antagonists, one of which was called "The Court" I think?
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>>44586916
Actually its like meditation ....but with sex. Heals you mind and body and you feel like you are cuming buckets. Literally best choice.
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>>44586488
Laurette
Extended partnership

I wouldn't have to do a thing but love a demon. I could do that easily. And I'd take her to work and pick her up for as long as she asked too.
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>>44600233
Sounds like one of the many Island CYOAs.
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>>44600408
definitely NOT an Island, it was themed around modern USA, maybe 1980s-2000s? Most of the antagonists were creepy group factions or collectives.
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>>44600392
Would you marry her immediately after the first year, sometime after you develop your powers, or never?
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>>44591954
>>44592190
Well... there's always Accidental Magical Girl CYOA. Has it's own thread, has had it for a while, and the creator is around, even if they never post in this thread. Of course, I guess it has the same issue that >>44599213 has with Muscle Wizard CYOA in that's it's fairly niche.
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>>44600430
Probably would. Means I don't have to spend eternity alone.

It sucks now but forever would be terrible.
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>>44600669
So would you marry her immediately after the first year (and thus get a stronger version of her powers), or sometime later (thus developing your own powers)?
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>>44600780
Later. I want my own set of powers. But I will love her none the less and make my intentions of marriage known.
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>>44599261
>You're in a minority.
I will never get people who hate his CYOAs.
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>>44600307
>>44587143
I've read something about it now and think it's hedonistic and un-Abrahamic. Azriel is one bad angel and I like her.
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>>44601065
Some people don't like the odd eldritch tone and setting, and that's fine. The problem is people who whine that other people like it.
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>>44601152
How's it hedonistic?
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>>44597009
>zero responses
I'm a horrible, horrible person, but I always chuckle a bit when i see it posted.
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>>44586623
>there are people who like the demons better
How shit can your taste be?
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>>44601229

While I side with Esme she is just about equal to Mhyrienne for me. Its really hard to choose because they are both so top tier.
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>>44601241
Esmé is shit tier. Mhyrienne is only not the worst girl because Felira, Kyleth, Lynneth, and Erelyra are even worse.
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>>44601229
The angels are too slutty and none of them share my fetishes. They also lack personalities.
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>>44601216
I keep intending to make a build because I like it, but I'm lazy.
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>>44601277
>too slutty
They aren't really sluttier than the demons.

>none of them share my fetishes
What are your fetishes?

>lack personalities
What do you think a personality is?
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>>44601229
Can beat Azure.
Best bro, least likely to abuse her ownership over you.
I get to help her company succeed as thanks for not raping me.
Laurette is cute, but annoying if I have to spend eternity with her unable to talk to people and Esme, while ludicrously hot, will lose her appeal when she drops the act.
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>>44601305
>They aren't really sluttier than the demons.
Their descriptions and bullet points are more focused on sex than most of the demons.

>What are your fetishes?
Weird stuff, and a lot of stuff focused around looks more than acts. It's not all important they be met, but it's a point against them when they're so focused on sex.

>What do you think a personality is?
They just seem rather one note. Part of it is that none of them have any interests outside their job except Ea. Putting her aside for a moment, there's just nothing I have in common with them because as far as I know, all they do is work and now that I'm here, fuck.

Tabletop? Nobody in the angel CYOA likes these.
Reading? Outside of Ea, nobody likes this in the CYOA.
Videogames? Only Ithuriel, and I hate her fetish because it involves other people fucking her (clone =/= myself, you don't even feel anything from your clones)

Pretty much the only girl with hobbies is Ea, but I'm not picking her because she's SDA and that's weird. Also low-rank loser.
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>>44601284
I think I'm mostly put off because I remember when it was posted and someone, possibly the author, was insulting those who didn't make a build.
So now t just has a sour taste in my mouth. The same thing is happening to Traveller: it only gets posted when someone is annoyed at a long CYOA, and if you don't want to read a hundred pages?
Well, then you're just an illiterate fucking retard.
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>>44601319
>Esme, while ludicrously hot, will lose her appeal when she drops the act
She only does that if you want her to.
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>>44601353
Big G damnit, guess I'm not done with that CYOA yet.
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>>44601338
I THINK that the magic clones don't follow the logic of normal clones.
I remember SDA saying in another thread that the intetion was to be "having sex many times, just faster", or something along those lines.
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>>44601409
Meh, that statement is too vague to draw anything from, you know?
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>>44601431
Not that anon, but I'm guessing it basically means that once the clones disappear, their experience gets integrated into yours, or something like that.
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>>44601445
Sounds like some Naruto shit. But really, my point is just that what SDA said is vague enough that the specifics of how the clones operate isn't really stated, and while that's normal and probably desired for most of the stuff in the CYOA, it matters a lot to me personally when it comes to things like clone gangbangs and such on whether I can like/tolerate it. So I'm cautious.
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>>44601431
>>44539725

"Close, but no cigar. By "two" people. Because she has duplicating powers. And do you know what the common hang up on orgies is? It's the extra partners. People you may not know that well or don't want to connect with in such a fashion. Ithuriel's thing is basically the same as having sex several times, just faster."

I'm unsure what the correct interpretation of the whole clone thing would be, but I'm inclined to belive that SDA wasn't thinking of the usual scientific clones when he wrote that.

I know it's a terrible reference but... you know in that cartoon Naruto when the main character make copies of himself? I guess it would be more something in this lines.

But this is just my guess based on what SDA wrote in that thread and in the CYOA, I may be completely wrong.
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>>44601453
>>44601480
Considering how SDA responded to "what would a more potent version of Esmé's power be" with "probably shapeshifting" and "use your imagination", I'd guess it was left vague so you could basically interpret it in the way that you like the most, within reason.

In other words, there is no real wrong answer, only multiple correct ones.
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>>44601480
It's not a terrible reference just because the writing was bad. It's popular and easily understood, which means it works perfectly fine.
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>>44601480
>>44601503
Yeah, I see several ways to interpret it, but it just makes me uncomfortable. Even if I'm free to think of it a certain way, without hard rules there's just that nagging feeling. For me. I'm sure most people can simply be happy with their interpretation and like her. Personal problem and all that.

I'm a little aware of Naruto so we can probably use examples from that to talk about this some.

Like, regular clones? Hate. I wouldn't like this at all.

Shadow clones? Tolerate. They're separate beings until they poof away, at which point their memories and experiences become yours. It'd make me a little uncomfortable at first, but I'd probably get over it.

Wood clones? These are in a hive mind with you, they're never truly separate. You're constantly linked to them mentally and experiencing everything they do. This is the only interpretation I'd outright like, because with this you pretty much are just experiencing sex multiple times all at once because of the hive mind.
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>>44601503
What about Laurette? How can "make anyone fall completely in love with you" get stronger?
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>>44601533
Make EVERYONE fall completely in love with you. At once.
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>>44601480
You touched on a subject I myself have been trying to quantify: the use of multiple bodies under one consciousness. I'd assume the ideal would be grasping multiple perspectives at the same time, like how you can see through your left and right eye.

If you could feel the sensations of your other selves, at what point does everything just blend into each other?
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>>44601551
Near orgasm. That'd probably be the best part.
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>>44601521
I think "Ithuriel's thing is basically the same as having sex several times, just faster" makes the most sense in the Wood Clones analogy.
Also, I don't remember anyone having other preference (or at least, posting about it) about the interpretation of Ithuriel powers that wasn't this one. So I'm also inclined to think that IF there was a precise confirmation of Ithuriel's powers, it would be this.

But I don't think there will be, and I understand your problem with the lack of a precise description, and the feeling of disconfort that comes with it. I'm sorry about it, but as I said, I belive that everything indicates that in this case the most normal (and perharps, the most canonical) interpreation of said powers is your favorite one.
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>>44601539
Or have more control over the specific emotion created, or maybe let you have people fall in love with someone else if you so will.
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>>44601539
....
Even Big G?
>>44601619
Oh Azriel and Michelle, I have a wonderful surprise for you!
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>>44601644
Big G loves everyone already anon.
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>>44601619
I'd use the power to find fedora neckbeards and make them love the Big G.
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>>44601649
surely she must love someone more than others?
>>44601662
that's a great idea. I'll ask if I can go down to Earth for a bit, show Laurette around corrupting everyone to loving Big G unconditionally
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>>44601338
>Weird stuff, and a lot of stuff focused around looks more than acts. It's not all important they be met, but it's a point against them when they're so focused on sex.
So, just ask them to indulge your fetishes, and make it clear that you're willing to indulge their desires to a certain extent even if you don't quite share those desires. Compromises and doing things for your partner every now and then are part of a relationship.

>They just seem rather one note. Part of it is that none of them have any interests outside their job except Ea.
I think the personalities of the angels come across decently in the tone of their writeups. Not everything needs to be explicitly stated, after all. Both angles and demons understandably seem somewhat one-note because a short-ish writeup can't possibly include all the nuance and complexity of anyone's personality, but neither group seem really lacking in personality to me.
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>>44601644
>Azriel and Michelle
>not Luci and Michelle
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>>44601675
Yeah, Mary.
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>>44601675
I will, of course, also go down to Hell.
Azure will come along almost willingly since my maids will take care of her
Mhyrienne will come along when I let her know Esme absolutely loves her toys
Felira will come along because she and Azriel can duke it out and hatefuck the straight out of eachother on the battlefield
Daeliph will bro it out with Kristel, and both will help Laurette break out of her shell
Best End ? Azure in heaven with me, everyone important partnered up?
An eternity of snuggling and sometimes working?
>>44601680
didn't mean I'd partner Azriel up with Michelle. Of course, if I can, I'd get Big D together with Mickie again.
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>>44601615
Yeah, it or the shadow one probably has the best backing.

>>44601678
Well like I said, part of it is that I just don't have any idea what being with them will involve outside of the sex and the job. What are we going to spend free time doing? Most of the demons have something like that mentioned, while the angels don't as a rule.
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>>44601680
Michelle seems like she'd ONLY be happy in a relationship with Lucifer. Even all these years later, at the prospect of a relationship with you, she's still blabbing about Lucifer. Probably thinking about her when you have sex too.
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>>44601615
I could see the appeal of the "parallel" clone approach (each does their own thing without any feedback from the others, then they pool their data into the "home" body later) if you wanted to experiment more narrowly.
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>>44601615
Misconception. It wasn't me who said that, and I'm SDA.

>>44601503
Pretty much this. I can only write some 400 words for each character so I tried to be blunt as possible. That meant that all characters may seem more forward than I intended, but I assure you they're all loyal to you, even the demons. This CYOA was meant to be heartwarming in every approach.

I will admit, I didn't even much thought into 'mechanics' like how Ithy's clones work. But, that was intentional. I want you to interpret these to mean something positive for yourself. Or, for you to interpret complexity in their personalities. Because, like one Anon said, I can't flesh out a personality that easily in such few words with this level of creative freedom.

Unless you just want 30 bullet points, but that's exactly what I wanted to avoid.

I'm thinking of writing some non canon short stories to flesh out some of the characters better.

Also Ea and Lyneth was not meant to be a self insert, I have no idea where you people are getting this from. I mean, the only thing they have in common with me is the anal kink, except I'm on the giving end. Also, I like redheads, and Ea having white hair was coincidental because I jusy really liked her art. I even considered colouring her hair like I did with Felira, but it didn't look right.
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>>44602035
that's the scenario I was thinking of
You know, just sitting there having dinner with Ithuriel, and this creepy smile starts forming on her face.
Two seconds later, you're both lying on the floor, quaking and soaked, because your bodies are feeling instantly what her clones have done to your clones all day.
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>>44602146
I personally don't favor these kinds of short stories, they taint the characters some in my opinion,and people will treat them as canon even if you say otherwise.
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>>44602146

>I'm thinking of writing some non canon short stories to flesh out some of the characters better.

Please. Especially for Mhyrienne as she is just adorable.
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>>44602146
Now that you're here, I'd like to note that in the Extended Partnership option, the "continue to serve her" (as opposed to something like "continue working with her") seems a bit out of place considering the tone of the rest of the CYOA.
Also, did you intentionally leave out the possibility of basically keeping your status, but not choosing a separate estate/workplace, like what Big D offers in the other CYOA (second to last paragraph in the "One year later..." bit)?
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>>44602146
Also, what do you guys think of a CYOA Author Roommate CYOA? I'm likely gonna collaborate with Llamas (the CYOA Author CYOA guy) and maybe kitsuneanon on this one.

We won't limit it to 8 characters. Instead, we'll try to fit in as many as we can. I want to try and capture the same personalities in the original CYOA but using the second-person monologue like in the other Roommate CYOAs. Except, writing myself would be weird. I'm probably gonna leave myself out to not hog any space.

>>44602208
Double edged sword, I know. But that's why I'd really try to be careful when writing them. I really wanna capture their personalities, and I don't think it's going to follow the traditional narrative that you're thinking of.

I'm thinking really brief slices from their lives. Imagine a story that's kind of just a summary of 12 different days in the life of Ea. Could be the day you meet her. Another day could maybe a month later. One a few years later, another right after the time Heaven stops receiving people.

I kind of want to highlight how marrying them keeps your love eternal. And believe me, I want to emphasize the eternal part.

I need something better to do these mornings than lament on CYOAs.
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>>44602271
Well like you said, you want us to interpret them. I want to be free to do so without further canon preventing it.
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>>44602283

And he said non-canon very clearly.
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>>44602289
The author's interpretation of the characters will still be seen as canon by many.
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>>44602271
>Except, writing myself would be weird.
But obligatory.

Are you at work SDA?
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>>44602256
I meant for it to sound like that. I kinda rushed all these descriptions.

I had in mind that you cod keep your status and not have to choose an estate or work. Problem is, you won't get paid.

I have no ideas what bills they have in heaven for you to pay, though.

>>44602283
You can just think of it as an extension to what I've already written about them in the CYOA.
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>>44591533
Well, no. Decide for yourself after you've played the game, eh?
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>>44602298
On my way to, why?
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>>44602296

So the ones who want it can't because some people can't read?
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>>44602306
>ou can just think of it as an extension to what I've already written about them in the CYOA.
That'll further restrict what I have the freedom to interpret, though, is my point. It might also bring to light details I do not like about the girls.
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>>44602325
I wanted to be able to tell you to stop slacking and get back to saving the world.
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>>44602271
CYOA Author Roommate CYOA sounds fun, if you leave yourself out in the writing I assume you are letting others write you?

I just want to r-room with you, SDA.
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Can I ask about actual, non-jpeg, Fighting Fantasy style CYOAs here?
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>>44602306
>Problem is, you won't get paid.
Considering that my choice of angel is Esmé, money doesn't seem like much of a problem.
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>>44602334

So don't read the post? SDA maybe you can put in big caps NON-CANON NON-CANON NON-CANON at the start of your post so this one anon can ignore the post.
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>>44602346
what
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>>44602346
I'll have you know I've made png and pdf CYOAs as well.
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>>44602343
If someone wants to write me, sure. But I just can't write myself. It's one of those things I draw blanks on.

>>44602346
JPG is the way to go, especially for larger and kore colourful CYOAs. I'd love to use PNGs whenever I can but PNG compression is usually tighter on file size. Both Roommate CYOAs were too large to post here in PNG form.

Also, PDFs usually use JPG compression.
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>>44602389
I can write you if you want. Might be fun.
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>>44602377
>>44602388
>>44602389
Pretty sure they meant CYOA in the traditional sense, i.e. "If you choose action X, go to page A. If action Y, page B." and such.
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>>44602410
shoo
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>>44602377
>>44602388
>>44602389
I mean shit like this, or the Choice Of series, or 80 Days.
>>44602410 has it.
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>>44602423
>>44602410
Isn't it essentially a visual novel, sans the visuals?
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>>44602296
Simple solution: don't associate your story with your name. Write it under a pseudonym if you must.

Now that the topic of clones has reached this point, I remember a story I've been working on. The CYOA format might help me contemplate a long-term plot with it.

The general idea is that you'd wake up one day with a clone of yourself, under one of three settings: independent, parallel, and synchronous.
-An independent clone is a completely separate copy of you. They are their own person from that point on.
-A parallel clone is a copy of you whose perspective can be shared with you on command. One works and the other plays, after which they can link up and think they did both.
-A synchronous clone is an extension of you. Like seeing through both your left and right eye, "you" can live through both your own body and the extension.
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>>44602389
At least your career part seems true in the CYOAA
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>>44602457
Kind of, but visual novels often contain a lot less choice in them (often to the point of being linear stories). The lack of visuals means you can essentially do what you like.
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>>44602271
> I want to emphasize the eternal part
Are you saying what I think you're saying?
That our lovelife would be eternally blissed (you can't resist)?
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>>44602490
what
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>>44602271
>eternal
Eternity is a long time. How does the whole 'Till Death Do Us Part' thing work in afterlife?
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>>44602606
If you don't want a forever marriage don't marry them, it's not required.
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>>44602606
So that when trillions of years pass after the eventual heat death of the universe, Esme will still be your tsundere cock-hungry slave, voluntarily.
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>>44602626
I want to get married, but I have my doubts about the eternal part. I can't even imagine what the people that stay together for fifty or seventy years have to do to not let the romance die. How do I keep my Azrielfu entertained and happy forever?
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>>44600427
It's based on the same format as all the island ones were and looks just the same.
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>>44602691
Then you're not marriage material. Don't marry them.
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>>44602691
marriage isn't just romance, at least it ends a lot better when it isn't. there should be love- not the exciting kind of love but the steady kind.
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>>44602691
See >>44602664

I kinda wanted 'Marriage' (or 'Slavery' in the case of the demons) to mean neither of you will ever get sick of it. Think of it as capturing your love in the moment your bond is sealed, forever.

Besides, Azriel is patience. If anyone can endure eternity, it's her.
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>>44602664
>>44602691
>>44602752
That's only possible if you use Laurette's Asunder on each other.
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>>44602866
>Telling SDA what's possible in his CYOA.
Also angel marriage literally binds your souls.
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>>44602691
Then spend a few centuries together and if you can handle that, get married then. It's not like the Demons where it's a one time thing, you can get married later in the angel one.
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>>44602271
>and maybe kitsuneanon on this one.
whait hold on what?
Why?
You think I'd be good enough to do that? There's a certain quality one expects from your CYOA's...
I mean, I'm really flattered, but I don't know... I had fun doing the Christmas waifu CYOA, and I did that whole thing in 6 hours, which is great time for me, but dang...
Doing something with you, that's a lot of responsibility.
And you should know, I can't write The Scientist, unless you want it to be
>she is literally the best at everything, and she wants all the babies
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>>44602928
Actually it's because you did the Christmas thing. You don't have to worry about really doing anything though other than throwing suggestions.
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>>44602951
ohtahnkschristus. I can't fuck suggestions up too bad.
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>>44602951
you really think it was that good?
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>>44602878
>>44602752
Oh i see
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Are there any guides in making backgrounds and borders?
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>>44586488
God bless you, anon. It's always nice to find a slutty sodomy option in a waifu harem cyoa.

So,
>Esme
Slave play + force gender change her. Oh boy
>Countryside castle
Micky understands how much fun this is.
>Golems
Golem castle girls
>Shadow me
Might as well take a jumpstart on the celestial ladder with Micky
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>>44599687
Depends on what sci-fi pics you are looking for. I use gelbooru and pixiv sometimes for sci-fi stuff and add the "no_humans" tag to it. Pic related found on gelbooru.

>>44591737
Fuck the NEXT's. Normal AC's a best.
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>>44604460
2nd Gen best Gen
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>>44605071
What a slut.
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>>44603142
>>44605071
Isn't anal play more pleasurable for guys than girls?
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