CYOA General: Broken Dreams Version
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Here's a dropbox with a LOT of CYOA's:
Here's Beri's OC (genie cyoa+)
Here's Liminal Phrenic's blog with most of his cyoa stuff theouterworlds.blogspot.com
Here's Spadesy's wordpress with most of his cyoa stuff feathersnake.wordpress.com
List of Some Image Resources:
From Dropbox Anon:
Hello friends, I am the guy who owns the Dropbox linked up top. I added a notepad to the dropbox. If you are a CYOA author and wish to see your CYOA in the dropbox, the most expedient way would be emailing my new Yahoo! account "[email protected]' with the CYOA. Adding a name either in the subject or body attached to the email would be helpful.
Posting some incomplete cyoas. Perhaps the OC will see them and comment, or it'll inspire others, or we can collect the tears and do a toast.
Arena Master Anon (arena & heart of tg)
G (made the soaked, easily & eternally missed
Intermittent (secret agent & curosity alpha)
Jalm (myroid & monster dungeon)
Lord Bobby (bard & dungeon design)
VampiricRebirth Anon (vamp rebirth & werewolf)
Imaginos (strange coins & hygenic)
Greylore (toltiir and a ton of incomplete ones)
another incomplete one
This previous one does have like 5 pages or so
was this one every finished?
The author of this one said that anyone is free to take up and finish it. The second page was supposed to have most of the point-granting stuff, such as workplaces, different jobs to do in said workplaces, and some manner of perks or something.
Is this one coming along ok? Really want to see this one done as it's new too.
evil tease, hope it gets done...
This one is nice and finished.
Creator of this one just disappeared. Pretty much complete but images and a few other things were supposed to be added
Shall we resume the
civilized waifu discussions?
That's the point, you do not empower filthy neutrals by aknoweleging their existance, you act as if they just don't exists at all as it should be. It's the same as you don't call rebels as "rebels", you say "terrorists" or "criminals".
>purging filth together
>then cuddle on the ocean balcony
She's perfect, although I'm not sure about the Tantric fetish. Sounds demonic.
Rewards: Marriage, Countryside castle with Seraphim maids. Army of Heaven job with my wife.
Here's a Carrier I was making for my fighter pilot character, I scrapped it because I wasn't very happy with it and also because of the cost.
The only perverted girl is Esme, and maybe Ithuriel, if you don't consider clones a masturbation. The rest is extremely vanilla. Wing worship may look weird to you, but it's not worse than pure fetishes like teethbrushing.
How innocent are the Hell ladies?
>you're a slave
>cute, nice girl
>insecure femdom, but willing to switch
>be my slave
Aezureah is waifuable, the other girls are too scary and not pure at all. Angels > demons.
Whatever happened to that Anon who said they were going to make a mecha CYOA?
You're right, if I replace the slavery with marriage, they seem far more likeable. Except for Wrath and Gluttony, but that is a personal distaste. Even the Lucifer girl's offer Be My Husbando looks attractive.
Gonna have to go with Raven.
Sayama would be good if not for the fact that her family is over every single weekend, and she'll act like a cunt if I don't want to eat one of her meals.
Felicia just sounds like a pain in the ass to have to deal with, casual sex is not worth having a bunch of fucking people over all night.
Anya would be fine since she's a gamer, but her utter lack of desire to carry her own weight makes me have to say no, I don't need to live with a second version of myself.
Rhodesia is out right away due to her haughty and spoiled attitude, but the fact that she treats you as a servant and forces you do live with her via the fine print of her contract make her utter shit.
Sonja'd be alright if not for the fact that she expects me to conform to her values, which is something I'd have extreme reservations with in a committed relationship, let alone living with a roommate.
Raven takes care of the chores, is willing to listen to your problems and help you with them, plus if you ever decide to catch her in the act of sneaking up next to you I'd wager she'd be down to snuggle through the night. Plus she has the benefit of wanting to suck me blood, which for me is adorable to imagine, and would likely be very intimate. The only downside would be that whole thing about the complete darkness, but I'm sure I could just throw a tarp or two into a tent to surround my pc.
And hell even if that won't work I'll probably be too busy fondling a bat to do much online anyways.
More or less, to be honest. And if you want a magic-flavored slut-life thing, then you can play the exalted remake DLC version, which even has nearly the same premise as this one.
Boy, do I have a surprise for you
in like, three plus months probably. Stupid exams.
Cool. I was talking about more modern dance clubs with electronic-esc music and dancing styles. I doubt the normal girls would have those but the angels might so I am just going to assume that.
>Not into Anal
>Truly this is Hell
Like hell she's not into butt stuff. It doesn't say anything about her not being into that. It just means she'll have to be gently teased into trying it, on the days when she's feeling subby.
Treating Mhyrienne badly
Not telling her how stunningly perfect she is in her true form as you teasingly worship her
Not teaching her to love anal with all sorts of toys and inventions of hers
Not enslaving her as your perfect, beloved pet for eternity
Why would anyone fail that hard?
I'd say demons, if it wasn't for a certain angel...
>tfw I was right
And this is why I stopped reading pdf's and actually plan to keep it that way.
See it is broad enough it can be both. But none of the Angels really match that. Closest could be Esme but that is if you want to. Its not her kink besides being Temperance and withholding pleasure is a part of that.
>tfw she restrains you at her lab so you can't move while she works
>tfw she just comes up to you to lick your penis once every 5 minutes
>tfw you endure this for hours until you cum
multiple times throughout the day
You know, I don't like Destiny, but always concede that Bungie knows how to do art direction. This reminded me that they also know how to do flavor text. Destiny item descriptions were awesome.
>yfw you enslave her and make her wear a vibe while at work
>yfw every 5 minutes you turn it on to the point when she is just about to peak and then shut it off
>yfw she endures it for hours until after work where you penetate her rear end and she learns to cum from her ass
The game is definitely hit and miss, but one of the big hits is the art. They did a good job of bringing Space Fantasy with Guns! to life.
Some of the Warlock armor is just great.
How does Laurette fetish works? She wants herself to get mindbroken or is she waiting the right time to mindbreak someone with her Asunder power?
>yfw she tries to hide her blushing
>yfw she tries to muffle her little moans
>yfw she tries to turn away in time so you can't see all the lewd faces age makes when she's about to peak
>yfw she tries to keep from arching her back or splaying out her toes when the vibe hits her just eight
>yfw she fails at all those things
This is an excellent question. The former is horrifying (why would I want my sweet loving waifu to get mindbroken?) while the latter is equally so (why would I want to get mindbroken by my sweet loving waifu?).
Mindbreak doesn't have to be permanent. Maybe she just wants you to
force her to cum over and over until she's limp and drooling on the floor, gently twitching from aftershocks and staring into space.
Why did it take until now for me to realize that Big D explicitly gives you the option of enslaving your chosen archdemon _and_ continuing to live and work with them without having to pick any of the given careers?
All those inventions to examine, all those toys to examine her body with... all the while hopefully avoiding having any of the ones I wouldn't like being used on me.
And considering what I usually do in my free time (which probably wouldn't change much), there wouldn't really be anything for her to spy or eavesdrop on, nor anyone other than her for me to ogle.
>Enslave, forgo the separate estate&career
Keep on doing more-or-less what I did during that year, with the added benefit of being able to look like whatever I want.
Most importantly, I'd make myself look attractive enough that I could consider having actual sex with her, or just cuddle naked in bed or something. Maybe make myself look like a more grown-up version her, with a pair of tits large enough for her to use as pillows.
>Must I absolutely be a girl
>Fine. But I'll be a cute girl, then
>Why are you doing this
I'm bored as fuck, and your misery entertains me.
>Please God, can't I be a 7/10? I'd even settle for a 9/10?
Nope. You need to deal with everyone lusting over you
>You're a dick
>168 cm, because why not
>Will I at least know how to walk with these?
You sure you don't want the other one? It'll give you more points
>So I get points for not having a dick? Finally something good
>And I won't ever have to learn to shave?
>Free: Sportswear, lingerie, jewelry, sex toys
>I just don't want to have to buy a vibrator...
>Sexy Cosplay +9
>Hey, I like girls in cosplay, I'm sure I can find someone who'd enjoy it as well.
>Raise, tg +3
>I swear, I'm just doing this to make the transition easier on me
>New identity -1
>I don't know a good girl name, where will I even live?
>Hey God? C'mon, help me out a little here.
but really, anon will probably tell me to leave if I write anything down, so it'll have to stay in my head. Even when it isn't /d/ stuff.
>Azriel really, really loves strawberries
I don't understand that reference. Is she into sensual feeding? Does she like "berries" that aren't berries? Or is it some secretly lewd lingo? Am I too autistic for her?
She dosen't know what sex is so i guess it means she will enjoy you showing it to her which means it's mindbreaking her what the fetish is talking about.
>not marrying Laurette
>not using Asunder on each other to live out eternity loving each other unconditionally
the fuck is wrong with you
That must be on of the most fun CYOAs I've seen; balancing evil against selfishness is just great.
* Specialty specialization
Greed lvl1-2 (sloth + gluttony)
Sloth 1-2 (greed)
With lvl2 sloth I can become a guest in anyone's home and have them give me everything they own (using very broad terms) to me using lvl2 greed, and once I got a decent amount of money and 'aspects' I can get people into lots of HIGH stakes bets that will will end to my advantage most of the time since I got lvl1 envy.
Gotta find other pictures for the classes that have pictures with wings. Probably another girl, or some that aren't wearing face armour.
Or change the description for Dragonlord, since it mentions magical wings.
>tfw anon tells you not to make high magic CYOA but doesn't offer an alternative
have written classes, armours, half the weapons, an admittedly bad reason why you can only get one of each item class have yet to write sidearms (if I do that), skills (for more options) and the quests (already have so many ideas, just gotta write)
It'll be big, and I'm scared.
making some waifu thing to get better at photoshop in the meantime.
Can I make a pendant with the line "it fills you with determination" ?
I bought it yesterday on sale, but I haven't started playing it yet.
You're still more than welcome to write out your unique ideas.
>Operator: MAL +2str +2rec
>Features: System shock
>Body Type: Byped +1end +1str
>Piloting System: "MAN"ual +2str +1end
>Weapons: AC Machine Gun(R) +2spd +1str, >Plasma Blade(L) +2spd +1rec
>Wing Men: Minica Rea, Cassey Gern
I noticed this coya is based around 5th gen ACs. One NEXT could kill doezens of the little buggers
Hello everyone I'm the person who made that cyoa author cyoa. I haven't really been here much over the past year for various reasons but I'm thinking I'll update it for valentines day this year cause some people on irc had been asking me about it. If you have any requests/demands/insults/questions for me I'd like to hear them.
Laurette, Ithuriel, and Irinael are explicitly described as up for anything once she opens up to you, extremely adventurous, and up for nearly anything, respectively. Their fetishes are just the specific things they know they like. So any of those three are heavenly choices if you want a pervert.
thanks, figured I missed something obvious.
Pretty much just those and some other shitty ms paint ones like kfc cyoa but I never liked any of them very much.
iirc I actually considered him for the first time around but couldn't think of 3 more to put in that row I'll make sure to get him this time.
also if this anon is still around you can easily reach me on #cyoa on rizon
Repeat all you want. Muscle Wizard anon never came up wtih a name to call him by. Muscle Wizard anon would probably be fine though. Lots of people built for Highlander when it came out. If you don't like it that has no bearing on the CYOA Waifu anon making another cyoa.
Go piss somewhere else.
>> Orc (-5)
>> Huge (-2)
>> Ripped (-2)
>> Flat Chest
>> Masculine Hips (-2)
>> Muscular Ass (-2)
>> Handsome Face (-2)
>> White Skin
>> Brown Hair
>> Extra Semen Production (-3)
>> Potent Pheromones (+5)
>> Pierced Nipples (+1)
>> Rut (+3)
>> Mind Wipe (+10)
>> Enhanced Libido (+3)
>> Presumably Sub-Optimal Living Conditions
Ugh, really hard to choose. Azriel seems like the most fun to shadow, as long as the rules of Heaven work similar to Hell, but Isda seems like the most fun to spend time with (and has the best power), and Ithuriel's the sexiest. Might just go for Irinael - she's probably the best all-rounder.
Looking into the updated Ordion from last thread, kinda disappointed in the companion options, comparable to the first one. Kinda makes me wanna go independent and go it alone, honestly. One skeleton against the world.
Catholic theology. So Wrath, for example, is considered to be love of justice perverted, while Patience is faith in the justice of God.
There's also a bit more to it. Lust, for example, isn't just acting on sexual urges, but a general lack of self-control. That's why, in the Divine Comedy, their punishment was to be blown about by winds.
Saw this in the other thread and saved it.
Found out what happened to Traveler guys. Highlander had his laptop stolen.
More like an unfortunate truth, he lives in a shiet neighborhood in a shiet town. And the idiot left his laptop at home when he went out, suffice to say he also left the door open.
He'll start up everything eventually but for now he needs to get over his lost manuscripts, he wrote a fuckload of shit and wants to hang himself at the moment. I'm giving him a month before he brings in his piece of shit, goes back through the archives and starts all over again.
As I said he'll get over it, the cunt's gotten over much worse, I mean he wrote Traveler on a laptop that's screen was half dead, and despite eating like one meal a day he's doing pretty well. Traveler will be back, and the homosuck thing he was working on with it, that's also going to be a thing, maybe some other stuff.
He'll be fine, give the cunt till mid febuary and we'll get it.
The original is better.
So, Ea can make magic bondage equipment, copy herself, swap bodies with you, and is a wellspring of creativity? Man, girl's wasted on just wanting it in the butt. Imagine how much fun she could be if she was as open as Ithuriel.
Features: Blonde Hair, Dat Ass, Pleasant Period, Toned, No Body Hair
Breast Size: D cup (~82 cm)
Ass Size: Apple
Sex Factor: 17
Social Factor: 10
Science Factor: 1
Academic Factor: 6
Applied Skill: 4
Talents: Skilled Humanities
Hobbies: Cafe Job, Shooting, Martial Arts
Comp. & Vices: Nil
Other: Average House
It's been a while since I did this, so I pretty much just went with what appealed to me instead of what would be most ideal. But the gist of it is that I'm pretty well-liked and apparently considered very attractive despite (personality-wise) also being /k/ as a cute tomboy.
What do you find disappointing about the companion options? The drop in numbers from 10 to 5? I found a lot of people were disappointed in that.
I may make a 2.1 adding new companions and changing the Dominion's quests a bit to be less sneaky.
I'd go with Kyleth and presuming we got along alright I'd probably just keep living with her and working for her. I kind of want to see what kind of powers I'll develop and I think I'd prefer to stay a roadie than any of the other jobs I could get.
If we didn't get along, I guess I'd live in the Hellish Castle because it's bad ass, get some balrog maids because I chose to live in a really shitty neighborhood, and get a job at the Colosseum because fuck those other jobs.
The problem with Muscle wizard is that it is very niche, it's a good Cyoa, but every end product will be very similar as you are ultimatly a brawny wizard. Traveler offers infinite freedom if your willing to read through it and could just be a book cyoa. Slut life is /d/ before the futa menace encumbered it.
Let them bitch, long cyoa are fine as long as the individual behind them puts effort into them and nothing new is under the sun.
What's so weird about that? She seems like a pretty cool person, I've always wanted to learn how to play an instrument, and I'm a sucker for a girl with musical talent. Also she has the coolest house.
No, it's more like you should try to make it niche just because you want it to cater to you and you alone. You're pushing your own desires at the expense of the quality of the CYOA.
I've never seen anyone else take her.
It's more like "Make the CYOA you want because this is your spare time and your hobby and you're doing this shit for free and owe absolutely nothing to the pathetic bitches in this thread."
Nigga a CYOA doesn't have to do anything, a creator doesn't have to make it with any target audience in mind, they could make it for their own conceit for all it mattered, though that in of itself would usually not create good quality.
All a CYOA 'needs' is a choice to present to the reader. Nothing more or less and this can be as simple or complex, niche or as open as the creator wishes, as long as their is some decent writing and a good idea behind it I'd give it a read
Unless we enter vore tier fetish stuff mang.
Also can I say how fucking weird it is that we're as niche a community as we are.
Seriously. Where's the rest of the CYOA on the fucking internet? Reddit is an endless repost of native shit, Tumblr has no cyoa last I checked outside of artists doing MSPA style quest stuff, it's sad as hell. How the fuck hasn't CYOA caught onto other websites?
And if he agrees with me then that's his will too. Same to you, buddy.
Again, this is in regards to suggestions, not what the CYOA "has" to do or whatever the fuck you're going on about.
An anon suggested something retarded. I disagreed. That's what discussion is for. I'm trying to be helpful, meanwhile you're just shitposting.
If you don't like it you can leave.
>> Name: Catherine
>> Height: 5'5
>> Race: Caucasian
>> Attractiveness: Gorgeous (-4)
>> Features: Dat Ass (-2); High Metabolism (-3); Long Legs (-2); Dreamy Eyes (-2); No Body Hair (-3); Freckles (Free); Daisy Dukes (Free); Blonde Hair (-1); Very Short Hair (Free); Stud (Whatever it is, it's Free)
>> Breast Size: 82cm D (-3)
>> Ass Size: Bubble (Free)
>> Sex Factor: 26/20
>> Social Factor 2/20
>> Science Factor: 5/20
>> Academic Factor: 7/20
>> Applied Skill: 8/20
>> Sexuality: Bisexual (-1)
>> Talents: Singing, Freddie (-8); Mechanical 1 (Free); Housework (Free)
>> Hobbies: Cafe Job (+2); Shooting (Free)
>> Comp. & Vices: Sex (+1), Minor Mental Issues (+2); Pushy Parents (+3); Drinking (+1)
>> Group: Loner
>> Other: Rural Home (0);
You're not too tired, are you anon?
Well I tried to be at the start. I suppose it's my weakness that I don't just ignore it when people start shitposting at me and lower myself down to the same level.
>how they're evil for not appealing to you
I have zero clues about what you're talking about.
Eyyy its me he mechafag
Im actually working on a sort of test CYOA involving owning a fantasy Inn. By doing it I was wanting to get some experience before I start my dream cyoa so it won't be total shit. And progress for both are going pretty slow.
I could actually use some help finding cool pictures of characters and some more sci fi shit if you can tell me where to look
deviantart should sadly be your first choice.
Reddit's imaginary locations might get you somewhere too.
Searching around on Imgur might do you wonders.
I mean, I just googled "tavern art" and came up with half a bajillion good images, so it shouldn't be too hard to find pictures.
Divine Speed (30)
Divine Engineer (10)
Godly Mind (0)
Defender of the Innocent (25)
Ancient Mysteries (50)
Living Nightmare (40)
Expertise x2 (Mathematics, Physics) (30)
Divine Memory (20)
God's Eyes (10)
Sixth Sense (0)
Make things to not only help humanity but to help me find more cube pieces. With the higher intellect and mechanical expertise I think that the beasts guarding some of the cubes won't be an issue. Using robots and other creations to fight or distract the beasts along with sixth sense and divine speed I could take the cubes and run the hell away quickly. Shouldn't take long to sintonise with the cubes as well.
Afterwards start using points gained for stuff like ascended, more expertise, some divine strength, martial prowess and unflinching courage would all be nice too. But firstly the goal is to gather cubes while making machines. Afterwards I would work to spread humanity out among the stars.
So that I can have a planet all to myself so no one will bother me!
There's an Older CYOA i'm trying to track down. It's got a mix of quirky almost-magical objects and allies (including a golem lady of some sort, a recording of static that makes all audio recordings of it only hear static, a locket that lets you look like someone else) .
It also has a bunch of creepy antagonists, one of which was called "The Court" I think?
Well... there's always Accidental Magical Girl CYOA. Has it's own thread, has had it for a while, and the creator is around, even if they never post in this thread. Of course, I guess it has the same issue that >>44599213 has with Muscle Wizard CYOA in that's it's fairly niche.
Can beat Azure.
Best bro, least likely to abuse her ownership over you.
I get to help her company succeed as thanks for not raping me.
Laurette is cute, but annoying if I have to spend eternity with her unable to talk to people and Esme, while ludicrously hot, will lose her appeal when she drops the act.
>They aren't really sluttier than the demons.
Their descriptions and bullet points are more focused on sex than most of the demons.
>What are your fetishes?
Weird stuff, and a lot of stuff focused around looks more than acts. It's not all important they be met, but it's a point against them when they're so focused on sex.
>What do you think a personality is?
They just seem rather one note. Part of it is that none of them have any interests outside their job except Ea. Putting her aside for a moment, there's just nothing I have in common with them because as far as I know, all they do is work and now that I'm here, fuck.
Tabletop? Nobody in the angel CYOA likes these.
Reading? Outside of Ea, nobody likes this in the CYOA.
Videogames? Only Ithuriel, and I hate her fetish because it involves other people fucking her (clone =/= myself, you don't even feel anything from your clones)
Pretty much the only girl with hobbies is Ea, but I'm not picking her because she's SDA and that's weird. Also low-rank loser.
I think I'm mostly put off because I remember when it was posted and someone, possibly the author, was insulting those who didn't make a build.
So now t just has a sour taste in my mouth. The same thing is happening to Traveller: it only gets posted when someone is annoyed at a long CYOA, and if you don't want to read a hundred pages?
Well, then you're just an illiterate fucking retard.
I THINK that the magic clones don't follow the logic of normal clones.
I remember SDA saying in another thread that the intetion was to be "having sex many times, just faster", or something along those lines.
Sounds like some Naruto shit. But really, my point is just that what SDA said is vague enough that the specifics of how the clones operate isn't really stated, and while that's normal and probably desired for most of the stuff in the CYOA, it matters a lot to me personally when it comes to things like clone gangbangs and such on whether I can like/tolerate it. So I'm cautious.
"Close, but no cigar. By "two" people. Because she has duplicating powers. And do you know what the common hang up on orgies is? It's the extra partners. People you may not know that well or don't want to connect with in such a fashion. Ithuriel's thing is basically the same as having sex several times, just faster."
I'm unsure what the correct interpretation of the whole clone thing would be, but I'm inclined to belive that SDA wasn't thinking of the usual scientific clones when he wrote that.
I know it's a terrible reference but... you know in that cartoon Naruto when the main character make copies of himself? I guess it would be more something in this lines.
But this is just my guess based on what SDA wrote in that thread and in the CYOA, I may be completely wrong.
Considering how SDA responded to "what would a more potent version of Esmé's power be" with "probably shapeshifting" and "use your imagination", I'd guess it was left vague so you could basically interpret it in the way that you like the most, within reason.
In other words, there is no real wrong answer, only multiple correct ones.
Yeah, I see several ways to interpret it, but it just makes me uncomfortable. Even if I'm free to think of it a certain way, without hard rules there's just that nagging feeling. For me. I'm sure most people can simply be happy with their interpretation and like her. Personal problem and all that.
I'm a little aware of Naruto so we can probably use examples from that to talk about this some.
Like, regular clones? Hate. I wouldn't like this at all.
Shadow clones? Tolerate. They're separate beings until they poof away, at which point their memories and experiences become yours. It'd make me a little uncomfortable at first, but I'd probably get over it.
Wood clones? These are in a hive mind with you, they're never truly separate. You're constantly linked to them mentally and experiencing everything they do. This is the only interpretation I'd outright like, because with this you pretty much are just experiencing sex multiple times all at once because of the hive mind.
You touched on a subject I myself have been trying to quantify: the use of multiple bodies under one consciousness. I'd assume the ideal would be grasping multiple perspectives at the same time, like how you can see through your left and right eye.
If you could feel the sensations of your other selves, at what point does everything just blend into each other?
I think "Ithuriel's thing is basically the same as having sex several times, just faster" makes the most sense in the Wood Clones analogy.
Also, I don't remember anyone having other preference (or at least, posting about it) about the interpretation of Ithuriel powers that wasn't this one. So I'm also inclined to think that IF there was a precise confirmation of Ithuriel's powers, it would be this.
But I don't think there will be, and I understand your problem with the lack of a precise description, and the feeling of disconfort that comes with it. I'm sorry about it, but as I said, I belive that everything indicates that in this case the most normal (and perharps, the most canonical) interpreation of said powers is your favorite one.
surely she must love someone more than others?
that's a great idea. I'll ask if I can go down to Earth for a bit, show Laurette around
corrupting everyone to loving Big G unconditionally
>Weird stuff, and a lot of stuff focused around looks more than acts. It's not all important they be met, but it's a point against them when they're so focused on sex.
So, just ask them to indulge your fetishes, and make it clear that you're willing to indulge their desires to a certain extent even if you don't quite share those desires. Compromises and doing things for your partner every now and then are part of a relationship.
>They just seem rather one note. Part of it is that none of them have any interests outside their job except Ea.
I think the personalities of the angels come across decently in the tone of their writeups. Not everything needs to be explicitly stated, after all. Both angles and demons understandably seem somewhat one-note because a short-ish writeup can't possibly include all the nuance and complexity of anyone's personality, but neither group seem really lacking in personality to me.
I will, of course, also go down to Hell.
Azure will come along almost willingly since my maids will take care of her
Mhyrienne will come along when I let her know Esme absolutely loves her toys
Felira will come along because she and Azriel can duke it out
and hatefuck the straight out of eachother on the battlefield
Daeliph will bro it out with Kristel, and both will help Laurette break out of her shell
Best End ? Azure in heaven with me, everyone important partnered up?
An eternity of snuggling and sometimes working?
didn't mean I'd partner Azriel up with Michelle. Of course, if I can, I'd get Big D together with Mickie again.
Yeah, it or the shadow one probably has the best backing.
Well like I said, part of it is that I just don't have any idea what being with them will involve outside of the sex and the job. What are we going to spend free time doing? Most of the demons have something like that mentioned, while the angels don't as a rule.
Michelle seems like she'd ONLY be happy in a relationship with Lucifer. Even all these years later, at the prospect of a relationship with you, she's still blabbing about Lucifer. Probably thinking about her when you have sex too.
I could see the appeal of the "parallel" clone approach (each does their own thing without any feedback from the others, then they pool their data into the "home" body later) if you wanted to experiment more narrowly.
Misconception. It wasn't me who said that, and I'm SDA.
Pretty much this. I can only write some 400 words for each character so I tried to be blunt as possible. That meant that all characters may seem more forward than I intended, but I assure you they're all loyal to you, even the demons. This CYOA was meant to be heartwarming in every approach.
I will admit, I didn't even much thought into 'mechanics' like how Ithy's clones work. But, that was intentional. I want you to interpret these to mean something positive for yourself. Or, for you to interpret complexity in their personalities. Because, like one Anon said, I can't flesh out a personality that easily in such few words with this level of creative freedom.
Unless you just want 30 bullet points, but that's exactly what I wanted to avoid.
I'm thinking of writing some
non canonshort stories to flesh out some of the characters better.
Also Ea and Lyneth was not meant to be a self insert, I have no idea where you people are getting this from. I mean, the only thing they have in common with me is the anal kink, except I'm on the giving end. Also, I like redheads, and Ea having white hair was coincidental because I jusy really liked her art. I even considered colouring her hair
like I did with Felira,but it didn't look right.
that's the scenario I was thinking of
You know, just sitting there having dinner with Ithuriel, and this creepy smile starts forming on her face.
Two seconds later, you're both lying on the floor, quaking and soaked, because your bodies are feeling instantly what her clones have done to your clones all day.
Now that you're here, I'd like to note that in the Extended Partnership option, the "continue to serve her" (as opposed to something like "continue working with her") seems a bit out of place considering the tone of the rest of the CYOA.
Also, did you intentionally leave out the possibility of basically keeping your status, but not choosing a separate estate/workplace, like what Big D offers in the other CYOA (second to last paragraph in the "One year later..." bit)?
Also, what do you guys think of a CYOA Author Roommate CYOA? I'm likely gonna collaborate with Llamas (the CYOA Author CYOA guy) and maybe kitsuneanon on this one.
We won't limit it to 8 characters. Instead, we'll try to fit in as many as we can. I want to try and capture the same personalities in the original CYOA but using the second-person monologue like in the other Roommate CYOAs. Except, writing myself would be weird. I'm probably gonna leave myself out to not hog any space.
Double edged sword, I know. But that's why I'd really try to be careful when writing them. I really wanna capture their personalities, and I don't think it's going to follow the traditional narrative that you're thinking of.
I'm thinking really brief slices from their lives. Imagine a story that's kind of just a summary of 12 different days in the life of Ea. Could be the day you meet her. Another day could maybe a month later. One a few years later, another right after the time Heaven stops receiving people.
I kind of want to highlight how marrying them keeps your love eternal. And believe me, I want to emphasize the eternal part.
I need something better to do these mornings than lament on CYOAs.
I meant for it to sound like that. I kinda rushed all these descriptions.
I had in mind that you cod keep your status and not have to choose an estate or work. Problem is, you won't get paid.
I have no ideas what bills they have in heaven for you to pay, though.
You can just think of it as an extension to what I've already written about them in the CYOA.
>ou can just think of it as an extension to what I've already written about them in the CYOA.
That'll further restrict what I have the freedom to interpret, though, is my point. It might also bring to light details I do not like about the girls.
If someone wants to write me, sure. But I just can't write myself. It's one of those things I draw blanks on.
JPG is the way to go, especially for larger and kore colourful CYOAs. I'd love to use PNGs whenever I can but PNG compression is usually tighter on file size. Both Roommate CYOAs were too large to post here in PNG form.
Also, PDFs usually use JPG compression.
I mean shit like this, or the Choice Of series, or 80 Days.
>>44602410 has it.
Simple solution: don't associate your story with your name. Write it under a pseudonym if you must.
Now that the topic of clones has reached this point, I remember a story I've been working on. The CYOA format might help me contemplate a long-term plot with it.
The general idea is that you'd wake up one day with a clone of yourself, under one of three settings: independent, parallel, and synchronous.
-An independent clone is a completely separate copy of you. They are their own person from that point on.
-A parallel clone is a copy of you whose perspective can be shared with you on command. One works and the other plays, after which they can link up and think they did both.
-A synchronous clone is an extension of you. Like seeing through both your left and right eye, "you" can live through both your own body and the extension.
At least your career part seems true in the CYOAA
I want to get married, but I have my doubts about the eternal part. I can't even imagine what the people that stay together for fifty or seventy years have to do to not let the romance die. How do I keep my Azrielfu entertained and happy forever?
It's based on the same format as all the island ones were and looks just the same.
I kinda wanted 'Marriage' (or 'Slavery' in the case of the demons) to mean neither of you will ever get sick of it. Think of it as capturing your love in the moment your bond is sealed, forever.
Besides, Azriel is patience. If anyone can endure eternity, it's her.
Then spend a few centuries together and if you can handle that, get married then. It's not like the Demons where it's a one time thing, you can get married later in the angel one.
>and maybe kitsuneanon on this one.
whait hold on what?
You think I'd be good enough to do that? There's a certain quality one expects from your CYOA's...
I mean, I'm really flattered, but I don't know... I had fun doing the Christmas waifu CYOA, and I did that whole thing in 6 hours, which is great time for me, but dang...
Doing something with you, that's a lot of responsibility.
And you should know, I can't write The Scientist, unless you want it to be
>she is literally the best at everything, and she wants all the babies
God bless you, anon. It's always nice to find a slutty sodomy option in a waifu harem cyoa.
Slave play + force gender change her. Oh boy
Micky understands how much fun this is.
Golem castle girls
Might as well take a jumpstart on the celestial ladder with Micky
Depends on what sci-fi pics you are looking for. I use gelbooru and pixiv sometimes for sci-fi stuff and add the "no_humans" tag to it. Pic related found on gelbooru.
Fuck the NEXT's. Normal AC's a best.