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>>23324044
thought the first guy was you, thought it was kinda chill. then you started jabberin'. your voice sound gay and strained. you are unintelligent, I can tell by the lyrics.
>drugs n shit's cool
do ayahuasca in the amazon and rap about your adventure with the spirits.

There's already a music thread here: >>23309165

>>23324044
Still a lot of work to go. Need to work on your flow more, mate. I think there's potential but your lyrics are a bit too on the nose / pretentious.

Try less pseudo-intellectual babble and focus more on the actual sound of your music.

Unless you want to be an underground rapper or some shit. Then keep working on lyrics + flow.

>>23324286
>do ayahuasca in the amazon and rap about your adventure with the spirits.
This guy knows what's up.
Take advice OP

>>23324044
You have a good flow.
The lyrics suck ass, wayy too pretentious
The beat is one of the most boring Ive ever heard
Use your beautiful rapping voice for good rapanon!!!