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Hey /p/, there's really not that many filmmakers on /tv/. So it would be awesome if I got some critiques on this music video I did for a local punk band. It was shot at a house party, two cameras, mostly unrehearsed, minus the obvious portrait shots and ham stunts.

Enjoy!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JpHuPPmPA1Q
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Here's something that I did a couple of months ago with no money.

It's shit.

https://vimeo.com/131327757
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>>2749264

It's not bad. The opening conversation is just boring. You could have added some more intresting angles like the first shot, to mix it up and keep the dull dialogue alive?
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>>2749285
I changed the script completely since my actors wanted it to be more accessible and to reach a broader audience.
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>>2749285
Like the way it is now, doesn't reflect what I originally had written before.
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>>2749263
well made but oh man suburb punks..
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