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oh kind people of pee, i offer unto you a photoset so you have

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oh kind people of pee, i offer unto you a photoset so you have the means to tear me a new one.

>all c&c appreciated

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in retrospect, i think most of these snaps were overcooked and mostly too grey. and maybe three of them shouldn't have made it thru.
>lolmorelikenoneofthemshould'vemadeitthruamirite
c&c still appreciated nonetheless

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>people in a neat alignements
gets boring after the 3rd time

>>2741904
for once someone had an excuse to shoot with the golden ratio in mind, and you blew it.
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>>2741912
im a one trick pony.
im sorry to disappoint desu

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>>2741937
its actually been the first time i got this critique, so i'll be sure to try something new.
today's set was supposed to be based off past critiques

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these are awesome

you're a genius
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>>2741886
Don't wanna bring you down, but those aren't overly good. I get what you were going for in some of them, but they're still not interesting, plus they're not perfect, technically speaking. Just taking photos of people isn't street- or people-photography. As you say yourself, they're snaps, they're not exciting, there's nothing much worth looking at, nothing that catches the eye, nothing that tells a story.
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>>2741917
Having the people in these photos definitely improves them but it doesn't instantly make it an interesting photo.
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>>2742056
such kind words anon
>>2742083
>>2742074
i honestly didnt like these that much but thought some were passable esp the ones that adhered to the goals i set yesterday. im still working on more interesting subject matter/story in my snaps but im not going to kid myself, snaps is all i'll probably take, not art. what's would you say is wrong with them technically so i can work on it next time?

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>>2742221
>esp the ones that adhered to the goals i set yesterday
I hope those goals included 'one point perspective' and 'symmetry', because that covers most of these shots hah.
Otherwise, you know you can be much more creative than this. Get some diagonal lines, look up and down, left and right instead of just directly down the path you're walking on.

Yes, your black and white images are too grey. Black and white shots tend to be higher contrast to avoid this, but personally I would avoid converting digital shots to b&w unless you know what you're doing (you should know for sure that it will be black and white before you've even taken the picture). But maybe that's just me.

>>2741904
This is the only one that really stands out to me as having potential. It could be improved in post (see my quick edit), but that wouldn't fix the framing. The vertical line on the right should be where the edge of the frame is. Also you probably should have aimed a bit higher or lower (your choice).
If you're interested in what I did in the edit:
Increased overall contrast (only relevant because b&w)
Reduced contrast of the puffy coat to give more attention to the kids
Brightened the slab at the bottom to make the spiral look more dank

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>>2742444
it was more like pay more attention to composition and distracting elements. also better use of lines and making sure they dont lead away from the subject.

i did plan on a bw set except for the top two i knew i wanted color.

i'll tweak the contrast for the ones i want to keep later. it's been over half a year since i shot so i forgot my general process but i generally try to keep my photos mid-low contrast cuz it hurts me eyes.

Really appreciate the detailed comments. I cropped that image down a bit, so I should have some lateral freedom to re-crop it as per your suggestion. I'll give it a second go when i get home.

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So you DO have content! Would follow, like, fave etc.

top picks:

>>2741886
>>2741893
>>2741902
>>2741911

re: being a one-trick pony, I do encourage you to expand your boundaries and shoot people's fronts and stuff more than their backs. Rich coming from me, I know.
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ITT: pictures of peoples backs
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>>2742470
you mustve missed my shitpost thread >>2740510
next outing ill avoid shooting straight down anything (probably still will, but wont post it then)
>>2742472
here's a face for both of you. maybe ill post more current faces later

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I'm aware that Imgur.com will stop allowing adult images since 15th of May. I'm taking actions to backup as much data as possible.
Read more on this topic here - https://archived.moe/talk/thread/1694/


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