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>I thought about you for the rest of the day
>Catching my head turning to find you again
>I hated myself for it
>mother should I build the wall?
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>getting got by lyrics
Shut em down open up shop
Ohhh oh
Woah oh
Thats how Ruff Ryders roll
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all of for no one

lurking my ex's facebook, her getting dozens of likes, flirtatious comments from her interests of the moment, she's all dolled up in pictures obviously going out and enjoying life

while I sit and drink myself to death by myself, listening to sad songs friendless and on 4chan
>I don’t sleep, ‘cause when I do, all I dream are dreams of you.
>When I wake up, you are not around.
>In my best dreams I am dying.
>In my worst, you say you’re trying
>and in yours you say your teeth are falling out.
>give me one reason to live
>give me one single reason to live
>don't have to be good
>don't have to be good
>don't have to be good
>Ground Control to Major Tom
>Your circuit's dead,
>there's something wrong
>Can you hear me, Major Tom?
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>I tried to understand you, but I can't.
>I wish you could see yourself standing there now: so tall, so proud, and so bold.
>Do you recognize these footprints in the sand?
>They have always been your own.
>It was beautiful when I walked outside and realized that I could look straight through the sky and not be afraid.
>So what if I die everyday a little more inside, it's just another night to lie awake and wonder.
>I've written a thousand pages in her name and I just want to know does she ever wonder, does she remember, does she even care.
>It's been so long. Now my soul has shattered, left broken glass under her feet as she walks away.
>I still remember when we were beautiful, it was so beautiful.
>bruiser brigade bitch
>if you ain't pulling a nigga dick out and slapping yourself with it
>throwing this bitch in your mouth sucking dick with bubbles
>fucking all night and drinking protein shakes in the morning
>get the fuck outta here
All these threads are always filled with such gloomy lyrics

Can't you get got by some positivity every once in a while?

>It's so good to learn that from right here,
>the view goes on forever
>And you'll never want for comfort
>And you'll never be alone
>See the sunset turning red
>Let all be quiet in your head
>And look about
>All the stars are coming out

>But I know I had the best day
>With you

>if I were alone; I would cry
>but if I were with you; I'd be home and dry
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>I'm taking your morning warmth with me out into the day
>I don't care if nothing else goes my way all day
>If my younger self could see what I've become
>It would break his heart
>And he would say to me
>But someday, when I grow up
>I'll be somebody, you'll see
>And no one can take that from me
>So pass me the phone, I'll go it alone
>I'll whistle my way to Adelaide
>There's no time to cry, I'll be there tonight
>The trains and the boats and planes are on time

Picturing a young John Cale whistling his way to this place makes me a bit giddy.
>bitches on my dick
>bitches on my dick
>these bitches know i'm sick
>thats why these bitches on my dick
Maybe I just wanna fly
Want to live I don't wanna die
Maybe I just wanna breath
Maybe I just don't believe
Maybe you're the same as me
We see things they'll never see
You and I are gonna live forever
>what did you dream?
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un-related but I didn't want to make a whole thread about this, can someone give feedback on these lyrics I thought of? Would be much appreciated.

I desperately want to know the mindset of a person whos woken from a coma
twenty years having passed knowing they will never get those days back
because, in a way, I feel the same about these past two years
trapping myself inside, keeping myself away from all my fears
the irrationality I cant justify, a strong sense of humility
grown to become self loathing, and in my dreams I am floating
on this cloud of bliss, whatever I expected I didnt expect this
and if you know the only thing you desire is inacheviable,
both mentally and physically then what is the point of trying at anything else
because anything else isnt good enough or good at all
and I dont subscribe to a nihilist philosophy
I already know my meaning, my objective reality
but some heights cant be reached
Trying too hard/10
I literally thought of the lyrics while taking a shit, not joking. I personally dont think they come across as tryhard but okay, I respect your opinion
>curiosity killed the cat and taught the dog in him how to act
>burned his bridge to Jill so he tries to drown his guilt with a bottle of Jack
>curiosity killed the cat and taught the dog in him how to act
rip mikey
Idk man, maybe tryhard isn't the right way to describe it. Hard to really comment on it when I have no clue what sort of music you want to set it to, but it just seems more like a bunch of quasi-philosophical thoughts strung together than cohesive lyrics for a song. I don't think the underlying idea is necessarily bad (in fact I find the first line pretty engaging), but I'd try to "reduce" it more to what you're trying to express instead of just making a bunch of statements.
>my heart's never been owned, Im lonely, but everyone is lonely so I know at least Im not alone
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>so here it is, I'm finally coming out my shell
>all 19 years of my life have been in conflict with myself
>I'm insecure about every facet of my existence
>from my addictions to the condition I choose to live in
his lyrics hit twice as hard ever since he left
That was his first song I ever heard. Instantly hooked
>I'm dying
>is it blissful?
>It's like a dream.
>I want to dream.

The whole end of Dream House fucking kills me.
>Then we rested in a desert
>Where the bones were white as teeth sunk
>And we saw St. Elmo's fire
>Splitting ions in the ether

>You thought you'd never live to find
>All the thing inside, what about truth?
>It's something you don't often find
>Well, don't forget the sky
>Fools, if you're waiting on some paradise
>Don't forget your lives
get get get get got got got go
Oh okay man, I can see what you're saying. Guess I've been listening to too much Milo
even shadows have shadows is by far my favorite of his, shame its not on any studio album.
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All my
Sad songs
Have been used up, they’ve had enough
Of my heartsick, thrown-up bull-shit
Em I need this
>oh, and love is just an institution based on human frailty
>what's your paradise gotta do with Adam and Eve?
>maybe love is just an economy based on resource scarcity
>what I fail to see is what that's gotta do with you and me

Shit hit me deep famalam.
>Stuck on you
>My mind is reeling
>Fold onto the floor
>The walls are peeling
>Sneer at sleep
>Up to the ceiling
>Immerse myself
>Into reverie
>Stuck on you
>Dream consuming
>No time to unwind
>Sleep will not soothe me
>Whiskey'd be my dying bed
>Tell me where to lay my head
>Not with me is all she said
>Early in the morning
>And I will keep calling you to see
>If you're sleeping are you dreaming
>If you're dreaming are you dreaming of me
>I can't believe
>You actually picked
>There's one thing I want to say, so I'll be brave
>You were what I wanted
>I gave what I gave
>I'm not sorry I met you
>I'm not sorry it's over
>I'm not sorry there's nothing to say
>I'm not sorry there's nothing to say...
this song's to commemorate my glorious return to feeling like shit. so fuck you beautiful, fuck you sexy, what are you so fucking happy about? fuck off
>Won't you tell me what you're thinking of
>Would you be an outlaw for my love
>If it's so, well, let me know
>If it's no, well, I can go
>I won't make you
>I love you
>My salvation it came, quite suddenly
>When Justin spoke very plainly
>He said "Of course it's your decision,
>But just so you know,
>If you decide to leave,
>Soon I will follow"
>Cynicism isn't wisdom, it's a lazy way to say that you've been burned.
>It seems if anything you'd be less certain after everything you ever learned.
Today is the greatest
Day I've ever known
Can't live for tomorrow,
Tomorrow's much too long
I'll burn my eyes out
Before I get out
>there's nothing true and nothing's real
>but i remember one clear feel
>warm beneath your gentle company

>while i lay dying upon some bed
>i hope that you remember this
>the only one i want to see is you
>tfw I post lyrics to songs I haven't written yet in these threads and if people respond to them I know they're good
Give some examples?

I'd be interested to hear.
I'm interested as well
>With a right left, right left you toothless
When I die put my bones in an empty street to remind me of how it used to be
Don't write my name on a stone bring a Coleman lantern and a radio
Cleveland game and two fishing poles and watch with me from the shore
Ghostly steel and iron ore ships coming home
Mein nigger
>Oh, if the trip and the plan come apart in your hand
>You look contorted on yourself your ridiculous prop
>You forgot what you meant when you read what you said
>And you always knew you were tired, but then
>Where are your friends tonight?
>Where are your friends tonight?
>Where are your friends tonight?
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>I just hope up when you fuck a nigga when you finished
>He can say that he love ya
>Now do you feel better bout yourself?
>Do you feel better by yourself?
>Did you feel better when I left?
>Mark my words ima ball without you
>I came home last night to a ménage
Got my dick sucked I was thinking about you
>I was fucking on a slut and I was thinking about you
>When you're fucking another nigga hope you're thinking about me
>When you laying with that nigga are you thinking about me
>Cause I'm thinking about you
>Go on, fuck that nigga, get it over with
>Go on, fuck that nigga, get it over with
>I watched it for a little while
>I love, to watch things on tv
High on amphetamines
The moon is a light bulb breaking
It'll go around with anyone
But it won't come down for anyone
>>not "sattelite going up in the sky"
>>"things like that drive me out of my mind"
Oh now I feel bad, but alright

>Well it's Chinese fucking new year
>all across the galaxy
>The stars and the rocks of the heavens
>and baby, they're all cheering for me
>it's been 230 days since I was left on this god damn planet
>and I've gotta say that I don't care anymore
>a box of whisky and a batch of galactic hope
>by God I'm setting straight the score

For reference, the song is supposed to be about a man who's been stranded on a desert planet for 230 days, and is now celebrating New Year's on his own and is also kinda batshit
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>Well, they burned my barn, they stole my horse
>I can't save a dime
>I got to be careful, I don't want to be forced
>Into a life of continual crime
>Somebody once told me
>the world was gonna roll me
>I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed
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>Mikael and Bryan broke up today
>But we're not like them, no, we're nothing like them.
>Frankie and Ava broke up today
>But we're not like them, no, nothing like them.

>Felice and Lanky broke up today
>But we're not like them, no, we're nothing like them.
>John and Yoko separated for a year
>But we're not like them, no, nothing like them.

>The Beatles broke up today
>But we're not like them, no, we're nothing like them
>Paul said "I just started doubting everything I did."
>...But you're not like him, no, nothing like him
sounds pretty interesting. good job anon.
Tired of lying in the sunshine staying home to watch the rain
You are young and life is long and there is time to kill today
And then one day you find ten years have got behind you
No one told you when to run, you missed the starting gun

And you run and you run to catch up with the sun but it's sinking
Racing around to come up behind you again
The sun is the same in a relative way, but you're older
Shorter of breath and one day closer to death
>Mother weep the years I'm missing
>All our time can't be given
>Shut my mouth and strike the demons
>That cursed you and your reasons
>Out of hand and out of season
>Out of love and out of feeling
>So bad
>I was sleeping, gently napping, when I heard the phone
>who was on the other end talking? Am I even home?
>you said no matter how many candles i light in a black mass
>it will never change everything that i still lack

>but im still waiting for pieces of your ear in the mail
>and i'm still carving I AM MY OWN GOD, deeper into my forearm every day

>so, what the fuck has changed?
Fuck. Gomen for trip, forgot to take it off in this tab.
>I read the news today, oh boy
>About a lucky man who made the grade
>And though the news was rather sad
>Well I just had to laugh
I saw the photograph.
>Don stepped outside.
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>Dont you wonder sometimes about sound and vision?
>Blue, blue, electric blue, that's the color, of my room
>where I will live
>Blue, blue
>Pale blinds, drawn all day
>Nothing to do, nothing to say
>Blue, blue
>I will sit right down, waiting for the gift of sound and vision
>Drifting into my solitude, over my head
>Don't you wonder sometimes, about sound and vision?
I've always thought that one went
>and you'll never want for comfort
>and you'll never be in love

Not sure which i like better
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Your sentences drag on way too long. Usually in music, you'd want to communicate with feelings, which don't require a huge setup. Just a few fine details and a good delivery.

Instead of
>I desperately want to know the mindset of a person who's woken from a coma
>Twenty years having passed knowing they will never get those days back
>because, in a way, I feel the same about these past two years
>trapping myself inside, keeping myself away from all my fears
Try something like
>It's like twenty years in a hospital bed
>I woke up one day, but my arms were tied
>Legs were frail, and my circuits fried
>I couldn't speak cause there was nothing to say
>Two years of my life, and not another day; You could say,
>That I was scared, that I was hiding from the light
>A dark cave, a coma, it was fright or flight
>Well here I am, alive today
>to tell you that I'm secretly gay
In all seriousness, though, you get what I mean. You're being to vague; you can do a lot more with more concrete details. You can convey the same ideas with shorter lines, and shorter lines resonate better with both your flow and the feelings you're trying to convey.
>I tried to hold your hand but you'd rather hold your grudge
>Do you miss the blend of colors she left in your black and white field?
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>There's blood on that blade
>Fuck me I'm falling apart
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>It’s a wicked life
>Isn’t it?
>That’s how you really feel
>Isn’t it?
>You’d like a different life?
>Wouldn’t you?
>Everything in place
>It’s a wicked life
>Isn’t it
>Filled with good and bad
>Hats in hand
>I don’t blame you, William
>Flesh and bone
>Just like everyone
>How could you have known?
>Just like everyone
>It’s wicked life
>Isn’t it?
>But the scales were tipped long before you
>Shoulders weren’t meant to hold
>Shoulders weren’t meant to hold
>You were made to be crushed
>Made to believe in love
>You were built to break
>An army of imperfect animals
>All teeth, no hope

too bad he needed his brother to give the song the rendition it deserves, the difference between the delivery by Afterlives and HANL is fucking night and day, I wouldn't be surprised if Dan fucking wrote the song
>also kind of bullshit

>I can't be
>what you want me to be
>I am
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