I'm gonna be honest, you can't write for shit. You're prose is as purple as your own ass, you go on for paragraphs and paragraphs about the most mundane and boring details, and all your characters are shallow archetypes with dialogue that sounds like it was written by a computer.
The publishers will eat up whatever you give them because you're royalty, and everyone and their dog will buy it, again because you're royalty, but nobody will like it. I'm sorry.
All trademarks and copyrights on this page are owned by their respective parties. Images uploaded are the responsibility of the Poster. Comments are owned by the Poster.
This is a 4chan archive - all of the shown content originated from that site. This means that 4Archive shows their content, archived. If you need information for a Poster - contact them.
If a post contains personal/copyrighted/illegal content, then use the post's [Report] link! If a post is not removed within 24h contact me at email@example.com with the post's information.