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Good End Edition

ITT:
>We discuss Current, Finished and Upcoming CYOAs.
>Give advice on CYOAs
>Pitch ideas
>Get critique
>Trade art
>Shitpost

List of stories: http://anonpone.pineapplecomputing.com/

Read this advice first:
http://anonpone.pineapplecomputing.com/advice
http://www.tgchan.org/wiki/Advice

>What day is best?
http://strawpoll.me/5151810
>What time is best?
http://strawpoll.me/5151833
>What genre are you interested in?
http://strawpoll.me/5151994
>What if I cannot into art?
http://strawpoll.me/5207921
>What race would you play?
http://strawpoll.me/5498136

Remember: You can do the thing

Last thread: >>26082801
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>>26095905
First for all dead CYOAs. RIP in peace.
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>>26095905
You're an inspiration for birth control
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2nd for kitty burds
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Yeeeah baby, work that grill.
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>>26095928
get fucked
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Is it just me, or is Wander another Coltshan(tm) production?
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>>26095977
why a fucking squirrel?
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>>26095989
Why not?
Reminder
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>>26095989
Because Res
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>>26096003
A compelling reason indeed
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>>26095989
Because Res has a pet squirrel.
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>>26095989
Res got a squirrel in a desperate attempt to be less of a normie.
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>>26096031
I bet that only leads to even more normal fag contact
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>>26096063
>our first date
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>>26096063
I want to see the aftermath of propane exchange
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Pony ears on hippogriffs r dumb.
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>>26096096
*cute
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>>26096102
Being dumb can be cute, just not in this case.
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>>26096119
ur wrong
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>>26096130
No, you are
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Would you save him?
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>>26096144
I would wrap him in a burrito after
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>>26096141
No, you are
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>>26096157
Nu uh, you are
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>>26096144
For $17000.
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>>26096166
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>>26096169
GC pls
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>>26096178
He started it!
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>>26096156
Look at how happy you made the little guy
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>>26096188
>professional contacts
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>>26096144
i would hire prostitutes after for him
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>>26096144
I would jump in after him, but then pretend to drown myself so I could be the last thing he clings to before he sinks to a plastic demise.

But then I would save him.
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>>26096214
Who the fuck are you?
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>>26096193
no u did!
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>>26096236
A newfag who doesn't realize that the name field is optional.
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>>26096250
Hey, you're not me!
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>>26096214
Pen pls
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>>26096250
Nu uh, don't make me tell auntie cewestia!
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>>26096236
the one who will fuck your anus so badly that you will walk whit crutches for 4 months and when you poo you will not push anymore
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>>26096270
Cocни бoльшoй и тoлcтый.
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>>26096262
I am he as you are he as you are me
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Hey again Anon!

What are some of your favorite quests and for each, what's one thing you wish they would do better?
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>>26096325
Vampony
Coltquest

I dunno tbqh ponks
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>>26096325
Nips
To not run at 2 am
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>>26096325
M&M
That it ran longer
:(
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>>26096325
Super, 11-54, NE

uh...
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>>26096366
RIP M&M =(
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>>26096325
JAD
That it wasn't dead ;_;
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>>26096366
Yeah, shame that Hero's going to hang out with boats for the next 8 years, because the ending felt really rushed.
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>>26096325
Bless you for trying to keep discussion alive, ponk.

Long Name: post when the next update is going to be before disappearing for a day.

Dirty Work: outlaw all odd numbers

AirJAD: start existing already
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>>26096370
Come on Anon, surely they're not perfect.
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>>26096433
I don't know man, Super is pretty good and I've yet to see many complaints about it.
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>>26096433
I like them as is. Would be nice if they ran more.
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>>26096394
>2 elements in the same chest
>practically pushed into going to Canterlot
>all but 2 Medusa's conveniently locked up so we can just walk to the Grand Medusa.

yeah the end was Deffo rushed.

M&M was still good overall though.
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>>26096464
Well he'll disappear off the face of the planet on the 8th so I can see why.
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>>26096471
Did he go to Africa?
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>>26096479
He's joining the navy.
He won't have internet for a whole year.
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>>26096479
He is going to Mars
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>>26096489
In a boat.
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Trottingham died this morning, and I just arrived from a nice 11 hour long day at uni, so I'll start a new thread tomorrow. Still, thanks for the bumping effort guys, you gold.
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>>26096506
Fins that's lewd.
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>>26096464
There were a good few conversations I would have liked to have with party members and some more places I would have liked to visit, just unfortunate that real life happened.
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>>26096535
We could have done so much more.
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>>26096535
The obvious ones were the Carver and Flash bonding side activities.
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>>26096325
Across the Ocean
Heart attack warnings.
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>>26096535
I wanted to see Cloudsdale's bars with Gis
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Active threads

M&M Last Chance: >>26064761
ButtQuest: >>26080948
Threshold: >>26041486
Necroquest: >>26029016
Coltquest: >>26077971
Alchemy: >>25979911
Space: >>26073430
Galloping Steel: >>26043559
Vampony: >>26031454
11-54: >>25975103
Long Name: >>26031398
YRWYS: >>26041573
Wander Quest: >>26089797
SIM: >>26029095

I blame you for letting Super die.
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>>26096144
Dashcon CYOA?
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>>26096729
I've been wondering, how do you pick the order that you list the active threads in?

>>26096750
Nostalgia kek.
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>>26096799
Starting at the top of the catalog and going down.
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Amm, I'm a dumbass. How does the new report system work?
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>>26096729
>spoiler
I didn't mean to
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>>26096829
You're full of shit, anon. The truth is: you hated that bitch.
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>thread dies
Guess I'll make a new one in a bit.
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>>26097019
WEAK
FUCKING
SISTER
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>>26097047
Which thread died?
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>>26097071
all of them

CYOA'S are dead/
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I don't like being dead when I didn't mean to, let's fix that

>>26097257
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>last thread
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>>26097307
>fuck airship
wew
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>>26097307
even trying end super
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>>26097307
>Space rape
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>>26097307
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>>26097307
>Nips tiny part
so he /does/ have a very feminine penis
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>>26096144
Anyone got the dubs version of this?
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>Your CYOA-waifu becomes real
>but you're trapped together in a Coltshan-quest
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>>26097307
>anon love quests
>another cyoa?
>Changelings got Coltshan
>shit space
>gay shitposting ideas get fun people going
>Vampony anime
>edgy quest really wants something cool
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>>26097307
>perfect Urban special
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>>26097521
>The Urban Holiday Special
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>>26097475
This took me literally like thirty seconds. Enjoy anon.
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>>26097575
>not CHECK 'EM
Or does he want me to check electromagnetism?
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>>26097575
Not what I meant but I'm damn well saving it
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>>26097588
wew
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>>26097591
What did you mean?
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>>26097610
There was a thread that got caught in a tidal wave of dubs checking and someone made a pic of all the balls saying "dubs posters". It's incredibly stupid but I find it amusing
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>>26097644
Oh okay, I haven't seen that one, but maybe it would help if you checked those sweet double digits you're having there.
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>>26097341
Oh look, Punishment lives once again.
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So, who else finds themselves wanting to see their favorite MCs succeed in life?

I would love to see Dandy rise in the Threshold rank and learn more of the secrets that the organization holds.

I would love to see Sharp pay off her debt and rise through the ranks of the syndicate until she runs the most organized organized crime ring ever.

I would love to see Baroness Etherbreeze become Viscountess Etherbreeze, then Countess Etherbreeze, then Marquis Etherbreeze, then Duchess Etherbreeze, and finally Princess Etherbreeze.
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>>26097816
But if she has no wings then how would she become a Princess? :^)
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>>26097816
Remember, there's always a chance of a bad end.
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>>26097816
I want to see Blit-
I want to see Octav-
I want to see Anong-
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>>26097575
>75 75
Unorthodox dubs, Gar
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>>26097843
>no wings
SHE HAS WINGS ON THE INSIDE!
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>>26097876
Why doesn't Hijacker just run Airship Quest?

He's already on his way to becoming Nips 2.
And with all his Innkeeper dicksucking, he might become No. 35 2
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>>26097816
I would love to see Chalk Dust fall to her demons and killing Red Glare, The Pink Laugh, and The Queen only to just take her place as the rightful ruler of the city.
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don't fuck quest when?

or a herding or studding quest would be nice.
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>>26097816

I wanted to see Aurora become a powerful warlock but idiots killed her.
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>>26097816
>princess Etherbreeze
Why stop there? I've always thought Equestria is too small, and "Empress Etherbreeze" has a nice ring to it.
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Two things Amm.

1: When switching from pastebin back to the posted image, the pic won't actually show up and will stay on the pastebin part.

2. There is a duplicate version Fruit and his sisters in the fanart section of SS.
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>>26098027
Overlord.
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>read first line
>read second line
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>>26098236
The conditioning works.
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>>26098236
what?
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>>26098027
>>26098069
Godness
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>>26098069
>>26098308
Yes, I can see it now. God Empress Etherbreeze Clearsky, who once she had conquered her own Equestria proceeded to invade all the other CYOAs and bend them to her will, uniting all of the multiverse into one colossal cross-dimensional empire.
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>>26098236
Wait a minute...
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>>26097905
Yeah, but Princesses need wings on the outside.

And if she became an alicorn would she just get a second horn, since she's already a pegasus?
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>>26098000
Now there's one more statue in Sombra's garden!
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>>26098454
>would she just get a second horn, since she's already a pegasus?
and here I thought I could hold onto my sides
not today, it seems
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>>26097910
you mean No. 70
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>>26098454
I CAN'T HEAR YOU! LA LA LA LA LA! SHE IS A PRETTY PEGASUS! SHE HAS BIG FLUFFY WINGS!
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>>26098236
What the hell is this, anyway?
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>>26097910
Because a couple reasons

>because someone else pitched the idea with the intent of running it, me doing the same would be in poor taste
>too many other quest ideas, wanna finish ONE first
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>>26097968
Anon you just want a lewd impregnation quest, don't you?
Just be honest

I was one of the folks gunning to knock up hope too, you don't have to be shy
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>>26098656
Why aren't you running Butts right now?
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>>26098717
He has to cook 7 dinners, walk 3 dogs, and rescue 5 groups of friends from bad neighborhoods first, Anon.
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>>26098236
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>>26098717
I'm at work
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>>26098877
How intellectually demanding is your work? Do you maybe need to run butts at the same time?
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>>26098678
Not that anon
But i would like a quest where you get to be the little mare in her first estrus
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>>26097910
How can you not suck perfection?
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>>26098408
Pretty sure she'd get wrecked by the memes
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>>26098911
With lots of lewds, a typical "go anywhere, fuck everything" quest or something more real, dealing with the strange new side of yourself, being insecure and entering a sort of dialog with your new self in the context of the world around you?
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>>26098911
The club was discussing a Butt-touch 2 and two of the possibilities were a: the fillies go into their first estrus and its a 'dont fuck quest'. or b: The fillies go into their first estrus and you play the colts in an episodic horror/comedy where one of the fillies is hunting each class colt.
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>>26097307
How is this done?
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>>26099049
http://www.wordle.net/create
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>>26099047
I really like the second idea, personally.
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>>26099038
I finally return from work.
Let's continue the Quest.
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>>26099047
All 'don't fuck' quests will immediately fall into getting fucked at the first or second opportunity. It's really hard to incentivize people against free lewd.

The second one could be fun though. Woe to the colt that gets Terminator dawn after him.
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>>26099007
Kind of a mixture of both
Like she was planning on something like this but is to shy to actually try anything
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>>26099101
>Soft Serve being hunted by Dawn
>Finally catches him
>informs her he's actually a filly
>"Don't care, bend over."
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>>26099056
>>26099200
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>>26099230
What exactly did you lose? I don't quite get it.
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>>26099243
a post he wrote on obviously

>>26099230
I feel you, man. The back button is my worst enemy
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>>26099243
His entire update
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>>26099230
This is exactly why you use Word to type out your posts.
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>>26099230
LIVING ON THE EDGE
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>>26099252
>>26099253
Wait, you mean there are still QMs who write their posts directly in the browser? Holy shit that sucks, but he seriously had it coming.
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>>26099282
Is this the new meme?
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>>26099285
Jacku does it
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>>26099230
lel who cares
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>>26099285
This shit has happened to me numerous times over the years and the consequences never stick for me for more than a few months.

People get lazy, man.
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>>26099302
no he doesnt.
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>>26099302
>constant streams showing that he writes his updates in word
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>>26099302
Nope.
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>>26099322
It happens to pretty much everyone, but the difference is that it usually happens to everyone only once or twice at most before they switch. Got nobody to blame but yourself otherwise.
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>>26099296
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7nqcL0mjMjw

> again and again and again

>>26099344
The switch is real mang, I have seen the light.
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>>26099361
Good man
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>>26099327
>>26099330
>>26099336
...huh
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>>26099230
>loses post
>presumably still unable to make word cloud despite browser restart.

too creul
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>>26099379
yep.
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>>26099379
I have since swapped to writing in word because I have lost far too many updates from shenanigans

[dpoiler]I still sometimes lose posts, too
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>>26099441
wew
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>>26099208
Wouldn't soft serve be in estrus to?
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>>26099457
Maybe, maybe not
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>>26099441
Either ctrl+s or get off mobile, scrub.
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>>26099463
Urban's up
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>>26099285
I know Hero typed all his updates directly into the browser.
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Sloth pls
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>>26099476
If I was able to get off mobile I'd be running
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>>26099514
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>>26099514
wot
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>>26099566
>Bats
>Mentally challenged
Redundant
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>>26099573
But without that how would you point out exceptionally dumb bats?
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>M&M's over
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>>26099056
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Reminder that chubby bats are cute
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>>26099566
Run the thing.

>>26099562
Easy pls
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>>26099562
That pony is hot.
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>>26099630
Tubby Tara a QT
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>>26099630
Steelie needs to provide the extra filling.
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>>26099662
sweet sweet custard
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>>26099486
Pure threesome incest when?
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>>26099662
>tara and steel have expressed mutual affection
>we probably won't be playing as them next time hijacked runs
AWKWARD FIRST DATE MISSION WHEN
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>>26099624
Another quest goes to Valhalla
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>>26099688
>conversation combat system
>mc must combo to avoid spilling spaghetti
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>>26099636
I'm busy getting a lot of images done for it, especially a map of the city. I'll likely be read at the end of January.
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>>26099719
Uhh.... Do nothing to save AP!
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>>26099725
Then run the other thing.
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>>26099733
>Steel says something
>Tara sits there for a minute staring at him
>sweatingguard.jpg
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>Its a Coltshan quest
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>>26099725
hype
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>>26099755
>she take a mango out of her bandanna and takes a bite
>Taunt
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>>26099755
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>>26099760
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>>26099755
Inflicted status on Steel Charge!
Enemy stunned!
Enemy addled!
Enemy feared!
Enemy silenced!
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>>26099760
I said so before. It HAS to be coltshan
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>>26099760
Where?
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>>26099760
Is Wander really coltshan? I just dropped it because the writing was an incoherent mess.
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>>26099768
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>>26099698
Thanks for reminding
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>>26099859
Space Vex should probably get one too.
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>>26099849
Back to not being dead, at least for some time.
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>>26099859
;_;7
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>>26099681
Treads is not for incest
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>>26099975
I think we need a treads edit of >>26099681 now
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>>26099975
Anon pls
She needs someone in her life and she has two loving brothers
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>>26100060
How did that family's parents fuck up so bad?

One who's delusional and drives tanks in a mental institute and two socially inept morons.
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>>26100060
But are they BIG brothers
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>>26100132
For her
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>>26099859
Where's The Nine Lands' (Chapter 1)?
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alright time to get started.
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PZ pls
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>You are Treads Softly
>Filly
>And most importantly
>The BEST tank commander!
“Rrrrrmmmmbbbmbmbmmmmll”

>And by your side was your BEST driver, Little Star!
“We’ll show ‘em today, Little Star!”
>His plush head droops slightly
“I know I say that all the time, but we really will today! I have a secret weapon!”

>You present the most powerful round your behemoth could ever fire
>It was FOUR PLY
>The Guard will HAVE to take you seriously now!
>Tanks ARE real!

>You traverse the yard in your unstoppable cardboard juggernaut

>You grind to a halt
“Eeeeeeee!”

>Your screeching brakes catch the attention of a pegasus guard immediately
>”Oh! Hello little filly! Quite the impressive armor you have today! Is that a new cannon?”

>You nod gleefully, ready to explain the robust composition of the new main cannon
>You got it from a post office!
“Sure is, Mister Sir! This one can fire a new round I made!”

>”Who’s this brat? Why is she boxed up like a present?”
“BRAT!?”
>”Oh, hey Siqueue! Did you want to see little Tread’s new heavy armor?”
>”…Her what?”

>”Her heavy armor? She calls it a tank!”
>”That’s completely rid-“

>Nopony calls you a BRAT!
>You load the 4 ply payload into your main cannon
“GUNNER, FIRE!”
>Siqueue cocks his head to the side
>”Huh?”
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>The round flies out at an alarming speed
*Thunk!*

>Siqueue remains nonplussed
>…For all of two seconds
>Mister Sir struggles to keep Siqueue from assaulting you
>”I’LL REND THAT LITTLE TWERP!”
>”EASY! IT WAS JUST A JOKE!”

>You ready another round for delivery when suddenly
>”HEY!”

>You look in the distance.
>There appears to be two heavily armored ponies walking towards the commotion
>Not like it matters
>Your armor was the HEAVIEST!
>Nothing will beat your tank!
>You squeeze Little Star totally not because they’re a bit scary.
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>>26100140
Of course
Anybody can be a big pone to her
But are they big to regular sized pones?
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>>26100170
K.

Super's up.
>>26100182
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>”Any particular reason you’re trying to assault a FILLY, Private Siqueue?”
>”The little ankle biter was disrespecting a Guard, sir. Completely uncalled for.”
>”And Siq’s salty he got rekt by a filly”
“That’s right! I’ll take you on any day! Gunner, load 4 ply!”
>Little Star droops in response

>Siqueue can only grumble as the blue unicorn approaches you

>”The name is Steel Charge.”
>His voice takes on a kinder tone as he speaks to you
>”So I heard you shot one of my ponies with something. I take it your ensemble is to blame?“

“It’s a tank! Its got heavy armor, and unmatched firepower! Kneel before the power of tanks!”

>”Unmatched firepower?”
“That’s right!”

>At first, he’s somewhat confused
>Then, a smile slides across his face and he chuckles
>”Show me.”
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>The shot rings out
>A hefty roll of booty wipe rockets out of the barrel
>And strikes Steel right in the face
>Time seems to slow as the plushy round squishes his muzzle a bit

>He topples backwards
>Steel’s armor clatters as he falls onto his back, and his two friends rush to his aid

>Siqueue sounds somewhat surprised
>”Sir?”
>Sir tacks on a much less caring, and more deadpan
>”Staff Sergeant. Please. It’s just toilet paper.”
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>You celebrate your victory in the duel
“WOOO! YAY! Another victory for us!”
>Little Star bounces and tumbles through the air

>Steel sits up and examines the spent round
>”Huh. Four ply?”
>He shakes his head and looks at you
>Before putting his hoof to his head
>”OH! OUCH! I’ve been bested! Farewell, cruel world!”

>He falls back down, defeated
>His two friends on the other hoof…

>”I don’t get it?”
>”It was JUST toilet paper!”

>HE MOCKS YOUR POWER?!
>You’ll show them!
“FIRE!”

>Another salvo of rounds find their marks, clunking off the helmets of the two remaining guards

>”Guys! Go down! Don’t make the filly sad!”
>Sir just simply nods after the hit
>And Siqueue looks awfully mad…
>But he won’t for long
>Tanks have never let you down!
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>”Oh! Arhg! I! Can’t! Stand! Any more! UHRGH!”
>Sir falls to the floor, tongue sticking out and legs pointed to the sky
>He holds the pose before rolling to his side with a heavy ‘whump.’

>You look at Siqueue
>He rolls his eyes and droops his head, just like Little Star
>Before falling unceremoniously onto his belly
>And quietly saying
>”It appears I have been defeated. Noooo.”

“That’s right!”

>You look around, and note the final armored guard
>Reinforcements?!

>You’ll show them!
>You’re out of high ply rounds though…

>Little Star shifts on your head slightly
>…
>What’s that?
>…
>Brilliant!
“Great idea Little Star! As the heaviest armor around, we can just ROLL over her! Let’s go!”

>You engage the engine and lock the turret
“Grrrummbblrblrrrrr”
>And you speed forward towards your target

>All shall fall before Treads and Little Star!
>The best tank team in EQUESTRIA!
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>She stands completely still
>Appearing to be in her own little world
>Soon she’ll be UNDER the world!
>Because you’ll run her over
>With a tank.
>…
>Yes.

>You speed up to her
“Brace, Little Star!”
*Thump*

>Your advance is halted!
>The target appears to be heavier than she looks
>You growl menacingly

>And she winces
>Probably in pain!
>You’ll get her yet

“Reverse, Little Star!”
>If at first you don’t succeed..!
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>You strike her again
>And again!
>Each time she winces and looks around, begging for help!

>Beads to sweat trail down her face, and she swallows hard
>With a final push, you scrape her armor with the side of the box and put some distance between you two
>Surely that will have done it!

>She stands still
>Looking quite confused and flustered
>Before clattering to her side, legs extended and erect.

>She pauses a moment when on the floor
>Then she suddenly opens her mouth
>”Oh no. I am hit.”

>Aweso-
>”I am bleeding out. Oh no. Mother. Save me. I don’t want to die. It is over. Now I am dead. Bleh.”

>…
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>You turn to speak to Little Star privately
“Did- Did we go overboard?”

>You look around at the carnage around you
>Four ponies lay on the floor
>Rounds scattered about
>And scuff on the fourth’s armor reveals your relentless brutality

>You hold up Little Star again.
“Nopony will know we did these war crimes, oka-“

>”Not bad, little filly!”
>Huh?
>”You were really great at driving that thing!”
>I WAS?!

>”Your armored construct there really showed us!”

>IT DID?!

>”Might be the best weapon I;ve ever seen, too!
>IT IS!?
>”Makes me want to get a… what was it, tank? Yeah! One of those!”

“EEEEEEEEE”

>You did it!
>Now they HAVE to take you seriously!
>Tanks exist!
>For realzsies!

>You squeak in excitement and hug Little Star close.
>It’s everything you ever wanted!
>You got to shoot ponies AND run one over!
>And now they love tanks too!
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>You throw Little Star into the air and yell
“WOO HOO!”

>He tumbles lazily
>…
“You said it Little Star!”

>Victory is yours!
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*Whump*
>”Annoying filly.”

>…
>You’ll get him back so hard for this.
>And you’ll use FIVE, no SIX ply next time!
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months in the making
and I didnt even color it
ho hum

>>26100186
>>26100198
>>26100207
>>26100220
>>26100233
>>26100242
>>26100256
>>26100270
>>26100286
>>26100299
>>26100311


Full Size:
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>>26100311
He's just salty he's not a main character.
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>>26100321
>http://files.catbox.moe/f9c2b7.png

cute story.
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>>26100328
Yeah, we haven't even seen those guards in ages.
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>>26100321
It's cute.
Good job.
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>>26100402
you can tell how long ago this was started
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>>26100321
Haha, time for color
Does Siqueue have a color scheme?
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>>26100311
RIP treads
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>>26100449
He's a coltquest guard
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>>26100449
I don't think it's ever been said.
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>>26100198
>Mister Sir
Muh heart
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>>26100449
How in the living hell do you pronounce Siqueue?
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>>26100570
Somewhat like Skew, I'd imagine
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>>26100570
See queue
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>>26100570
Either Seek or See-cue
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>>26100592
>See queue
>CQ
SON of A BITCH
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>>26100604
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>>26100604
He's going to become Emerald's husbando and rekt his boypussy every night lovingly. This is canon.
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>>26100636
Probably not since he serves his step parents. However if one was to draw fan art or write about that...
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>>26100570
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0kjighPMrB6
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Where were you when Shade went fucking insane over his waifu?
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>>26100685
right here calling him a cuck.
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>>26100681
alrighty then
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What's a fun, simple quest idea that can be completed within a couple of threads?

I want to practice running something small and disposable before I try a bigger quest.
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>>26100734
Going on a sub expedition :^)
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>>26100734
Slice of life would work well for that, I imagine.
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>>26100734
squid pone has her way with a lost sailor
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>>26100734

Shoplifting Quest. Be a little filly who must smuggle as much stuff as possible out of a store without being caught.
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>>26100734
You are a pone and you want to go the moon.
Find a way there.
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>>26100782
Oh no, not this again. We are not blowing up another supermarket with propane tanks to escape
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>>26100782
Oh, that's easy, we just put the things in a place where nopony will look~
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>>26100734
You're a pony named Semen Demon who has to be impregnated by Chrysalis, then go to the Equestrian Space Station, take over with our changeling army, then nuke Chrysalis' hive.

Then we fuck Death and die.
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>>26100836
Hey, at least Inept will finally get laid
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>>26100856
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>>26100734
Pick a single task with a definite end. Even a trivial errand could work. Get to the other side of the everfree. Contribute to winter wrap up. Go on a donut run during the middle of the summer sun celebration.
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>>26100769
____
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>>26100892
I miss Shanty.
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>>26100892
Muh child
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>>26100892
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>>26100892
Man, I forgot how badly BD got fucked up during that quest.
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>>26100734
Trying to make the perfect sandwich
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>>26100928
>>
https://picarto.tv/TheBathWaterHero
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>>26100892
I love the art style of subquest, I hope Nips uses it again someday.
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>>26100892
>>26100921
I loved gradual descent from "happy sub adventures" to "oh god what the fuck."
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>>26100967
My favourite kind of quest.
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>>26100913
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>>26100950
What kind of style?
Colored lines?
Soft colors?
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>>26100942
Goddamn it, stop spoilering that shit. Some of us are on mobile and don't want to accidentally open links.
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>>26100734
don't fuck quest. considering where we are, it won't last long.
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>>26101000
Incest when?
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>>26101065
Maybe you should stop being a fag and git gud.
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>>26101074
You're really pushing hard for that quest, huh?
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>>26101074

I rather have the filly shoplifter quest. Could be cute and funny. Save the lewd for the big budget quests.
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>>26101074
Make it yourself.
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>>26101111
Quads demand he JUST
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>>26101022
Both, combined with the simpler shapes and smaller image size / resolution.
It's cartoony and fun. I also expect that it's a little faster to draw than Nips other styles, which is a huge bonus.
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Colt Quest now!

>>26077971
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>>26101065
>not changing the settings in the app to stop spoilers
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Colt Quest now!
>>26077971
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>>26100892
Sub was a good quest. Too bad Nips' other quest aren't too exciting.
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>>26101153
You can do that? How?
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>>26101166
>Subquest
>good
>exciting
Literally nothing happened in Subquest.
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>>26101205
You can get it at the meme store
Also
>needing and app
Just close the tab its not that hard I do it all the time
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>>26101065
Amen. I thought I was the only one triggered by that shit.
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>>26101166
You're telling me. It was my first quest, mang.
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>>26101229
I meant when compared to other Nips quest. Sub was comfy as fuck.
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>>26101261
triggered.gif
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>>26101285
Got me into CYOAs too.
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>>26101260

butts live
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Reminder that S.S. Tinypone is best airship there is.
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>>26101438
poor tiny horse. she looks like she could use a hug
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>>26101472
We should tie some more tiny pones on to keep her company.
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>>26101496
kinky!
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Would Pot dissolve if he got caught outside in the rain?
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>>26101667
He's not even green, almost satan.
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Villains in CYOA, which have been the most memorable/effective and why?

Hard Mode: Muh Child does not count
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>>26101755
Take a guess
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>>26101755
Arit was memorable, but for the wrong reasons.

I can't think of any that were really well done though.
Well, I think I wrote mine well, but I'm not gonna be a faggot and put them in here.
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>>26101755
I like it when there is not "the one big bad endboss" kind of "villain".
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>>26101769
STANDING HERE, I REALIZE.
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>>26101834
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>>26101823
Running edgequest
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>>26100769
>>26100836
I don't want to do anything inspired by an existing quest, because it'll probably just end up as an inferior copy.

>>26100772
Slice of Life is a little vague and directionless. I was hoping for something with a definitive ending.

>>26100773
>>26101074
Sorry guys, but I'm a pure maiden; I don't want to do anything lewd.
Besides, my art is so shit that it wouldn't be hot anyway.

>>26100807
That sounds a little too lolsorandom for my taste.

>>26100928
>>26100874
>>26100782
A simple, relatively mundane task like shoplifting seems to be the most promising suggestions, but I'm not convinced we couldn't come up with something better.

I'm sorry if I sound overly picky or pretentious. I don't want to start a quest unless I'm actually passionate or interested in the themes and subject matter.
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>>26101866
I wanna see more of Raiden.
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Do you ever feel like the NPCs in a quest are being played by someone else and to them you're a NPC?
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>>26101920

well there is a lewd quest idea with changelings and a pregnant mare I could suggest to you.
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>>26101937

The Amulet from Colt Quest.
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>>26101937
That's because they're being played by the GM.
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>>26101937
I thought that's what JAD is all about.
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>>26101790
Arit is almost like two people. Back when he wasnt whole, he was like, "Kill everything. Nothing get's in the way of our goal" etc etc.
Now he's like
"No killing. Everyone should live kumbaya and all that"
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>>26101937
Now I kind of want to see a quest with 2 MCs. One of the characters is played by anons on 4chan and another is played by anons on some other site.
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>>26101976
No
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>>26101974
It was a bluff anon. His goal was to cause enough havock and be scary enough that the mortals all fled.
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>>26102024
Yeah, but he was like that in the privacy of the mountain too.
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>>26101976
one is played here, one is played on /tg/. species are changed so that they dont make the mlp connection.
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>>26102035
Yes.
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>>26102035
>when they find out
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>>26102035
Which ones?
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>>26102035
Make everything different, title, name of the QM, and OP pic.
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>>26101920
the whole point of don't fuck quest is that there isn't any lewds.
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>>26102050
>"Fucking /mlp/ played this stupid-ass character? No wonder he's so retarded!"
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>>26102237

"Fucking /tg/ playing this boring-ass character? No wonder he's so bland!"
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>>26102228
But the climax of the story has to end on lewd, or else of the build up will have no pay off.
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>>26102331
not if her estrus ends before she gets fucked.
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>>26102228
not getting raped is the point of the combat in foal quest too, how'd that work out?
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>>26100186
Can we vote on a color scheme for Siqueue? If he comes from CQ god damnit , I'd rather we did it here. I'm not fond of ficfic's colors.
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>>26102458
Chartreuse
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So I just woke up. Don't ask. I'm sure that the Threshold and FiT crowds are already asleep.
But... What about the tiny pone crowd...?
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>>26102340
Good tension like a balloon being inflated; it slowly builds and builds until it reaches a breaking point and explodes.
Bad tension is like inflating a balloon and then letting the air out.
You need a climax, an explosion of sound and colour, not a gentle wiz of air leaving the metaphorical nozzle.
If there's no payoff then there's no catharsis.
If I do end up running the Don't Fuck quest, then I'll keep going until the players fail and get fucked. Otherwise, what's the point?

The problem is that my art is horrible. You can't fap to mspaint drawings. Perhaps I could forgo the art, but I don't think pure-text lewd quests have ever been very successful.
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>>26102489
Feather Dust?
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>>26102489
Horse Fly
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>>26102489
Dust Mite
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>>26102491
>You can't fap to mspaint drawings.
Not with that attitude. Just work on the basics a bit and then try to get the important parts right. I doubt /mlp/ is as choosy as you think.
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I told the folks in my thread already, but I wanted to pass the info along to here as well. Imma be out of town for the rest of the week and won't be able to make any updates till I get back. It's been a cool month so far, and thanks again to those of you who've played so far!

>>26101105
I like the idea of a filly shoplifter quest too. I see a lot of potential for cute shenanigans. I hope somebody picks that one up.
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>>26102523
are you running threshfold tomorrow?
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>>26102529
Looking forward to it dawg. Have fun out of town.
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>>26102591
Yup. Like I said, I just woke up, so I'd be happy to run one of my games NOW. But most people are asleep. And by the time they're awake, I'll be ready to sleep again.
Life is suffering.
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>>26102489
>thinks I sleep
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>>26102489
>>26102624

>>26102634
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>>26102489
Small Horse
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>>26102529

Bad Mint, stealing is wrong. Especially for foals.
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>>26102502
I like this.
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>>26102634
Are you a bad enough dude to be the only player for a quest?
It's really nice.
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>>26102672
I always feel uncomfortable when I have a one on one session with a QM.

Feel like I'm going to fuck it up for other people playing.
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>>26102672
>>26102634
I could make two
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>>26096808
Press the triangle next to the post. Hit report. Just like on 4chan.
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>>26102683
>>26102672
Having 2-5 players in a thread is the best.

>you're not alone, so there can still be discussions between updates
>you blend in as Anon and don't stand out, as opposed to when there's 2-3 players and you can keep track of the same Anon across multiple updates
>few enough people that your one vote is important and can drastically change the course of the story
>not enough players for rampant shitposting or drama
It's so comfy.
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>>26102738

I can vouch for the truth of this.
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>>26102738
Totally.
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>>26102738
Pretty much. It also tends to end debates before they escalate. People just seem to compromise more when they're a larger part of the playerbase.
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>>26102458
Word of god is bronze.
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>>26102738
I think 7-10 is the true number since it has all that, but also allows for a faster consensus to be reached.
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>>26102502
>>26102669
We've got a name!
How's she look? Is there anything you'd like to change about her?
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>>26103030
Nope, looks good to me.
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>>26102683
If I ever have a one on one session with a QM I bully them. I attempt to set up situations where they don't know what I'm setting up.
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>>26103030
Her colors are dumb.
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>>26103036
We need more players like you.

Ones that go out and do shit the QM doesn't expect.
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>>26103030
She's fine.
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>>26103063
That only works with GMs/QMs that play to win.
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>>26103096
I just like it when players force me off my rails.
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>>26103103
> Having rails
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>>26103030
I like her.
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>>26103108
I just like it when players do things that I hadn't planned for.

Happy?
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>>26103121
>being happy
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ok
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>>26103138
Reading is hard.
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>>26101973
was*
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>>26103138
I know that feel, you read through a cyoa and you miss a single detail.
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>>26103062
Your face is dumb.

>>26103035
>>26103080
>>26103110
Okay, where would you like to begin your quest? And would you like to start off as small or really small?
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>>26103225
REALLY small
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>>26103225
Depends. Are those inches, feet, or what on the left?
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>>26103253
Fuck it. I don't have the patience to make an informed decision. I'll vote really small too.
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>>26103253
It's to scale to the size of your monitor.
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Was Mendacity titled as such because the lie was that it would ever be continued?
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>>26103272
But Anon, there aren't enough posts left to justify a thread, so it's better to leave it in limbo for months.

:^)
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>>26103253
It's a yardstick, so feet. Feather Dust is about 2'2", or 65 cm for metric users.
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>>26103225
Small. Let's start in the bedroom.
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>>26103281
Oh no, we need to go much smaller than that.
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>>26102529
I'll be waiting and looking forward to when the adventure begins again. I also want to know what the hell is in that bottle. There's adventure in there I can feel it!
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>>26103291
Agreed. We need "Honey I Shrunk The Kids" levels of small.
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I want her smaller than either option. Ant-sized.
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>>26103232
If anyone claims players aren't dumb...
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>>26103225

I like coin-sized tony pone
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>>26103332
Anybody can misread something.
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>>26103332
>>26103138
Proving your point I see
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>>26103225
I kinda like 'realistic' size tiny pone, but it seems I'm outvoted.
It's hard to fuck a pony THAT small, all I'm sayin
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>>26103405
You just gotta get small too...

OR maybe she's REALLY REALLY elastic
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>>26103241
>>26103268
>>26103291
>>26103297
>>26103306
>>26103339

Really small it is! Final question before we get started:

Is being really small a tragic accident that Feather Dust must seek to cure herself of? Or is she somehow normally a very tiny pone facing the challenges of everyday life in a colossal pone world?

Your answer will determine where we begin and the overall tone of the quest.
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>>26103419
Hard!
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>>26103419
Pic related.
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>>26103419
Easy pleasy
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>>26103419

Normally tiny pone trying to make it in a big pony world.
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>>26103419
easy
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>>26103419
Magic related accident. Twilight had been drinking that day.

>>26103405
>too small to fuck
She climbs inside another pone's ear canal, takes control of their brain, and has sex using a surrogate body.
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>>26102634
I stay up all night as well
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>>26103419
Easy mode, no fall damage
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>>26103559
>no fall damage
Like that will save us in an Inept quest.
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>>26103432
>>26103433
>>26103436
>>26103438

Easy it is! Let the game begin! Also I'm going to try a new writing style; if it sucks, let me know and I'll go back to the narrative one.

>Hi, I'm Feather Dust.
>And I'm the littlest mare in Equestria.
>No, not little as in 'a bit short.'
>Little as in I sleep in a dollhouse.
>Yeah, I guess my mom learned the hard way that you shouldn't come in contact with poison joke while you're pregnant.
>Not that I mind.
>Being the tiniest pony around comes with a lot of perks.
>Like never having to worry about winding up on the street since we can just put a sign outside.
>"See the world's tiniest mare for ten bits!"
>When you eat as little as me, ten bits goes a long way.
>Of course, I don't just hang around at home all day.
>That'd be boring.
>There's plenty of jobs that a tiny mare can do.
>Pest control.
>Precision cake decorating.
>Making the world's most detailed horn cozies.
>Yeah, you'd be surprised how many doors are open for me that big ponies can't fit through.
>I wonder which doors will open for me today...?
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>>26103650
We'll have to go outside to find out.
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Also, if you think this should get its own thread, let me know and I'll do that instead. I don't know how long this game will be.
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>>26103650
This begs an interesting question.
What effect does poison joke have on us?
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>>26103650
Bust out of there and see what the weathers light.
Hopefully no wind.
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>>26103650
Explore your house.
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>Masturbate
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>>26103741
None of that now. And no looking for dropped bits either. They're bigger than we are.
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>>26103741
Only if visitors pay a extra 40 bits.
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>>26103650

Let us eat a hearty, tiny breakfast. Then maybe relax with a tiny book. Then have a look out our tiny door to see what awaits us outside today.
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>>26103664
>>26103705

>Well, no sense laying in bed all day.
>I should go do something.
>It's not like there's much to do in a dollhouse anyway...
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0hInk6v04IG
>Oh Celestia what is that?
>The roaring of a dragon?
>The snort of an angry Ursa Major?
>Wait, no.
>It's my roommate's snoring.
>Yeah, I have a roommate.
>Dollhouses aren't weatherproof, you know.
>I guess he isn't awake yet.
>He's kind of a lazy butt like that.
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>>26103859
What's the basket for?
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>>26103859
Take basket upwards.
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>>26103859

Basket looks like some kinda lift or elevator. Let's take it up!
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>>26103866
>>26103884
>>26103894

>This is my airship.
>Well, okay, it's a balloon with a bottlecap tied to it.
>But it gets me up onto the dressers and the bed more easily than climbing.
>...Well, okay, it just goes straight up to the ceiling.
>I haven't gotten around to figuring out how to steer it yet.
>Which means I need to jump out.
>...Maybe I should set aside some time to work on that.
>Oh well. Anchors away!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eLWUtHEoGlY
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We ded. Oh well, at least tinypone is a thing now.

I guess I'll continue later when there's more activity. If anyone else wants to take over for me, go ahead. I've really got nothing planned yet so you'd kind of be helping me out. If not, I'll just keep going once I get a better idea than >tinepone doing tinepone things
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Lets run this drunk!
>>26103993
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>>26104014

I'm just glad she's still alive.
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>>26104475
>tongue
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Give me a song fitting to be your favorite CYOA's theme.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qN1Pja-BKHI
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>Jacku banned for three days
TOP WEW
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>>26104776
Ayy lmao
What'd he do?
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>>26104790
post lewds
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>>26104790

see
>>26104374
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>>26104793
>>26104800
amazing
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Good thing it happened after the pause

Could have been AWKWARD
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>>26104800
I don't really know what he expected.
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>>26104940
He's done the shitty censoring before and got away with it. Just not in an obviously watched thread.
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>>26099859
>>26100160
Good question.
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>>26104800
Wew
RIP Hijij
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>>26105284

He died the way he lived.

Drawing dicks.
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>>26105354
Face fucking discord is quite a way to go.
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>M&M finished
>Hijacker banned

CYOA's are dead for real this time.
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>>26105418
All hopes on Coltquest and JAD Oh wait
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>>26105434
Its Airship JAD now
JAD isn't over yet guys, right?
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>>26105418
Why was hijacker banned?
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>>26105471
>>26104800
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>>26105481
The reference is gone
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>>26105487
Hmmm
If only there was some way you could see everything that was ever posted to /mlp/.
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>>26105487
Learn how to use the archive, newfriend.
It was a shitty pic of Discord sucking a minimally pixelated cock with his hands tied behind his back, which doesn't make a whole lot of sense.
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>>26105492
Don't deleted posts not show up though?
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>>26105496
> Using cock instead of sammich
He clearly deserved the ban
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>>26105496
Now that you mention it....
https://derpiboo.ru/1066383#comments?scope=scpe621fa7047673fc439c4ec22419fd28b9bbc2feb4
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>>26105498
Deleted posts don't not show up.
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>>26105498
Are you retarded or just new?
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>>26105509
Just new, unfortunately.
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>>26105518
>admitting you're new
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>>26105418
Still got Urban :^)
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>>26105554
For now
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>>26105518
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>>26105564
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>tfw Vincent vanished.
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>>26105518
I've got you beat. Not only am I new (three months and counting), but I'm also on mobile.

To prove my newfaggotry, I will now attempt to triforce.


▲▲
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GOOD. Fucking good.
All CYOAs have become a uniform mass, some better, some worse, but overall this has gone way too long. We need a time of recess so old and new QMs can come up with fresh ideas and recharge their creative batteries. CYOAs have become cookie-cutter stories. This has been long overdue.
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>>26105747
Really? You think that about ALL of them? Surely there's at least one or two that stand out to you.
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>>26105760
Inept's quests may be an exception, but I never really got into them, so I'm not playing them. There are always exceptions, but there are not many of those.
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>>26105747
What do you mean by 'cookie cutter'? What trends/clichés do most CYOAs follow now? What would putting a break on the CYOA train do?
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>>26105771
Fair enough, but then why decry all CYOAs in general? If you think the mainstream CYOAs have lost their individuality, why not jump ship to the less well known ones? Long Name has been gathering a fairly dedicated fanbase lately, for example.
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>>26104800
Come on dude, you gotta censor better than that.
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>>26105789
Then he wouldn't be able to complain and generalize.
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>>26105804
Even if I don't necessarily agree with him, I do understand what he is getting at. I can certainly sympathize with feeling like it's been a while since we've seen anything new. I just don't think the solution is a general shutdown of all CYOAs. Find ones that are still interesting.

Dirty Work is another good example. The MC is a complete neurotic mess who is in way over her head, and it is refreshing to play someone at such a social and mental disadvantage. Plus she's straight, which is a rarity in of itself.
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>>26105856
>Plus she's straight, which is a rarity in of itself.
That was overturned. She's probably gonna be bi like every other quest MC now.
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If your CYOA looks like this, there is a high probability you're an uninspired hack and/or your quest might suck.
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>>26105872
Personally, I'm still rooting for deep in the closet.
Either about being gay, or about being straight.
Either one works.
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>>26105891
I vote she's deep in the closet about being straight.
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>>26105886
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>>26105886
Sorry, I don't speak swahili.
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>>26105900
>Being straight is socially frowned upon in Equestria.
>Being bi is the norm.
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>>26105900
That would be funny as hell.
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>>26105908
Man.. you really told me. Hold on, I'll update my profile status to "told". I'll write it in all-caps to emphasize the severity of the being-toldness.

>>26105915
lorem ipsum? Never heard of that before?
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>>26105939
>never heard of that before?
He was probably being facetious, given how far off his language guess was. I think pretty much everyone has heard of Lorem Ipsum.

What part of the image are you objecting to, anyway? The format? The length? The genericness of the text indicated by the use of lorem?
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>>26106003
Probably length and greentext. As we as "What do you do next?"
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>>26105939
So, which quests are the worst offenders?

Surely you haven't read every quest, but which ones have you read to make you think that all quests are cookie cutters?

Or do you just see greentext and assume it's the same?
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>>26105886
I wouldn't say that they're all shit, but I personally like stuff like Neuro's quests more than interactive fanfics or "text wall > what do? > text wall".
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>>26105518
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>>26106085
I hope he doesn't just assume all greentext is the same, since I've seen it used in a bunch of different ways. In pic related, for example, green is used for internal monologue, and white for the parts that everyone can hear.

>>26106091
I think wall of text can still be enjoyable if it is a GOOD wall of text. Like almost anything else, it can be done well or done poorly.
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>>26105926
It all makes sense now
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>>26106091
>Neuro's Quest
But his is literally just "Draw picture, add a short paragraph with lel no grammar" >what do "Draw picture, add a short paragraph with lel no grammar"
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>>26106091
> but I personally like stuff like Neuro's quests
So you like shit that never makes it past the 1st thread?
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>>26106185
Yes, and it was so enticing and adorable. I don't think that an elaborate paragraph of text would have made it better.
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Dark souls cyoa when?
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>>26106236
never
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>>26106236
Some fag tried to make one a few months back. It started terrible and edgy and died. Fucking no more superdark'n'edgy quests please, shit sucks 9/10 times.
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>>26106236
When you start it.
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>>26106214
Neuro was okay, but serious there's literally like 20 quests exactly like it. They've sort of died out recently and walls of text have reigned supreme yes, but it's nothing special tbqh family.
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>>26106253
Something about a cauldron right?
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>>26106271
Yes, a cauldron and some skellerman we decided to carry around.
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Should I start pitching ideas as I come up with them? I'm not planning on doing anything for a few more months I believe.
Thought it'd be better for others to get some use out of my shit ideas, or at least come to understand where they may seem to be lacking/uninteresting in all.
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>>26106253
I like edgy quests.
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>>26106253
What are some good Dark'n'Edge quests then?
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>>26106091
So you like a certain style of quests. That doesn't make anything that doesn't fit that shit. Quests with short posts like that are actually harder to do well than more in depth quest because they need to be immediately engaging and it's not really about the quality of writing. It's cute/funny/etc and needs to keep innovating to not become stale.

You're not going to get more of those by quests dying. They're made by their particular flavour of QMs. They're not discouraged here either.
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>>26106278
This is a discussion thread. Ideas are always welcome.
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>>26106253
Then don't make it edgy
>tfw i can't git gud and start a quest
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>>26106278
If you want to pitch ideas then pitch ideas. No one's about to stop you. Someone might pic it up or it might inspire someone to have their own idea and do it.
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>>26106279
There's entertainingly edgy, which is fun for a thread or two and there is the kind of edgy that feels like staring at a rusty piece of plate metal in a dimly lit room for an hour.

>>26106284
I can't remember any. Said 9/10 just in case someone actually remembers a good one.
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>>26106296
What are you talking about? I said I liked Neuro's quests for example. I also liked RGS. I never said that all text quests are shit.
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>>26106315
Renne Quest was pretty dark.
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>>26106329
Dark, but not edgy. At least as far as I can recall it. I only read the first one and it's been a while.
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>>26106253
I'm fine with dark n' edgy as long as it's not stupid or just terribly written. It's just hard to come across one.
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>>26106327
>rgs
That quest was magnitized train rail simulator 2014
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>>26106327
>RGS
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>>26106337
I have never heard anyone complain about railroading in RGS.
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>>26106327
So you liked 'text wall > what do?/roll > text wall'. In fact, aside from rolls RGS fits pretty nicely into >>26105886
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>>26106336
Yeah, it's not impossible, but very rare.
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>>26106358
That quest was unwinable
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>>26106327
I misread part of the conversation and assumed you were the 'generic post' guy. My bad.
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>>26106358
Really?
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>>26106384
The objective was "don't die" not "win the war"
I think we won it fair and square.
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>>26106384
yeah, here was no way to win that quest
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>>26106399
This.

>>26106384
>>26106400
unwinable ≠ railroading
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>>26106304
>>26106313
Well, okay. I typed this up before asking, just what came to mind as I went over them in my head.

1. You are a young colt; one out of 8 siblings, to be exact. Each of you carrying a an apparent aptitude that has yet to culminate in the earning of your cutie mark. But you all aren't so concerned about that, as it's not the problem. The problem is making it through each day without getting into trouble. You or your siblings.

Thankfully, you all have each other's backs through thick and thin. But will that be enough to keep you from getting grounded? Or worse, separated?


2. You're a teenage mare, and one morning you wake up. You turn over in your bed to coddle with your very special... wait. Something's wrong. Your hooves throw the sheets as your eyes dart rapidly over the empty spot beside you. Where could it be? Who would-

A loud explosion from inside your house leaves far less to question. That little brat. He took your hammer. Your warhammer. But it's not just any old hammer. It's a hammer of ancient power that was passed down to your from your kickass grandma. According to her, striking it against any surface yields different effects depending on very specific commands. She admitted to teaching you very few, but they got the job done.

And now it's in the possession of your sticky-fingered little brother. You should probably get it back before he can cause any more damage. Or before something else does so in his stead.


3. The wood surrounding your jail cart jingles with each trot of your captors. Or, in your own words: Your escorts were making the ride a bit too bumpy for comfort. You consider just hoofing it.

You've been charged with destruction of public property. Again. Your name is Red Nose, and you're known locally as little more than a boop bully.


I know I said I probably wouldn't be using these myself, input is still greatly appreciated.
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>>26106400
When the quest is unwinnable you decide on a condition that you can win.
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>>26106399
The ending was stupid imo
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>>26106423
stupid ending ≠ railroading
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New thrad wen
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>>26106434
Stupid face ≠ batpony
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>>26106399
actually I think the majority of people playing that were just stupid as shit. you could have done a lot of damage. You just didn't because "oh our enemies are humans? Well we better not fight them even though they want to kill all of us."
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>>26106439
It's over, anon.
Cyoa's are dead
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>>26106434
>Save someone
>'Lel no, doesn't matter at all'
>Make sure someone survives and encounter
>'Nope, I'm gonna come up with multiple bullshit rolls for no reason because they have to die!"
>Do a thing smartly
>'Nope, you're gonna fail anyway, even if the rolls are in your favour'

Oh boy, there sure was no railroading at all in that quest :^)
And that's only based on the things that are memed about in this thread.
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>>26106457
Don't blame Lurker, the gods decided that Caravan had to be incapacitated permanently.
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>>26106434
wew ≠ lad
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>>26106457
War is hell
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>>26106445
Yeah, how dare people have self-preservation and not jump into every encounter.
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>>26106467
>wew doesnt equal lad
what kind of sorcery is this
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>>26106477
It's not about jumping into every encounter, it's about fucking up and making stupid decisions in the encounters we did have.
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>>26106464
So railroading then. Okay familia.

>>26106474
>war is hell means it wasn't railroading, just grittyness

Wew lad.
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I hate every single one of you.
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>>26106491
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>>26106464
>numbers mean the quest has to be railroaded
Ok lurker
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>>26106508
Really? I thought we did a lot better this thread. There was actual discussion and everything.
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>>26106491
>if you save someone once, they're forevers safe!!
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>>26106528
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>>26106508
Y-you too
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>>26106528
>It doesn't matter if you fail or succeed in a sequence, because certain characters will die at the end no matter what you do

Okay Lurker.
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>>26106547
>NO U XXXXD
:^)
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>>26106561
But he didn't die
>>
Lurker pls
I want to go temple exploring
Pls
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>>26106570
he pretty much did.
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>Lurker didn't release the RGS New Years green
I hate you fags
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>>26106562
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>>26106584
>I'm just batposting lel you fell for my ruse xD
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>>26106593
>not liking bat posting
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>>26106593
Have you noticed that the bats always come out in full force as soon as we pass 500?
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>CURRENT YEAR
>still arguing about Lurker's Human Domination Simulator
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RITS, please come back.
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>>26106593
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>>26106605
Big feather, or small pone?
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>>26106616
wash your mouth out with soap for saying such a thing
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>>26106625
Dude, I have nothing against bats, but could you at least post CYOA bats? We're not mlpg.

>>26106626
Both.
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>>26106626
smol
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>>26106616
I want RITS to come back as well
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>>26106636
Ok
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>>26106636
Kay
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>>26106636
Alicorn shade when?
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>>26106626
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>>26106637
>Smol steelie
muh heart
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>>26106678
>Giant sex driven malicious bat and small steelie
This can't end well
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>>26106678
more like Steelie's stupid adventure.
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>>26106695
ʲᵘˢᵗᶦᶜᵉ!
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>>26106695
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>>26106727
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>>26106695
>macro bat fetishists

Absolutely disgusting.
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>>26106756
If only they were gay as well.
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>>26106727
Don't you mean Steelie's adventure in stupid?
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The Golden age of CYOAs is over.
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>>26106756
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>>26106776
>Steel is stupid
>Tara is stupid
>macro is stupid

the whole thing is stupid anon
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>>26106790
Ast is the true waifu

Nightlightfags pls leave.
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>>26106788
>golden age
rofl lmao
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>>26106547
>>26106584
>>26106625
>>26106646
>>26106653
>>26106667
>>26106678
>Batfags going into full autism mode
>Again
CYOA is ded. Batfags have swarmed this general.
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>>26106788
I can't argue with hose digits
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>>26106824
>batfags, false-flag batfags, anti-batfags and false flag anti-batfags
ftfy shiny
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>>26106824
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New!
>>26106961
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>>26106805
>Being forced to accept multiculturalism and cuckoldry just to get into her snatch
Nightlight is objectively superior even if she is a dumb bat.
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>>26106824
Their leader has been banned, they are running wild at the moment.
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